2012考研英语高分作文

第一篇：2012考研英语高分作文

小作文复习指导

考研英语小作文考察的多是辞职信、感谢信、道歉信等20多种类型的应用文文体，着重考察考生的逻辑思维能力和语言应用能力。万学海文提示2012年的广大考生小作文具有如下特点:重格式，不轻内容;轻思想，重交际;字数少，易得分;重套路，难发挥。2012年的考生应着重依照这四个特点来进行复习。

背格式：

小作文重格式的特点要求考生们在格式上不能犯错，必须注意熟悉一些应用文的格式和英文中应用文的表达习惯。万学海文提示考生：格式无误是小作文得高分的第一步。

举2011年小作文题目为例：

Write a letter to a friend of yours to

1)recommend one of your favorite movies and

2)give reasons for your recommendation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.(10points)

参考范文：(万学海文：《2012考研英语历年真题权威解析》)

Dear Tom，I am writing, without hesitation, to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you, which is not only conducive to your study, but also beneficial to your life.For one thing, the beautiful language in this original English movie may contribute to your study of English in listening, speaking, reading and writing.For another thing, the profound cultural elements implicit in the scene will equip you with foreign cultural background and, above all, enrich your daily life.Would you like to see this movie after my recommendation? Remember to tell me your opinion about the movie.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Ming

一、称呼格式 1.用于对陌生的组织或团体负责人的称谓：Dear Madam or Dear Sir

2.用于对认识但是关系很正式的个人、组织或团体负责人的称谓：Dear Ms....or Dear Mr....3.用于对关系亲密的人的称谓：Dear Tom/Lucy(or any other name)

二、正文格式

缩进式: 段落之间无空行，每段开头空四个字母。

三、落款格式

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“...”instead.落款时可以使用下列万能格式：

Yours, Li Ming

背范文：

背诵是考生积极备战、快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径。考生应严格按照真题的要求独立写作，对比真题解析中的范文，发掘范文中的亮点和得分点，找出自己文章中格式、语法和逻辑上的错误。背诵一些历年真题解析中的优秀范文和优秀的小作文写作模板来提高小作文得分。

技巧锦囊：掌握固定格式，准确用词，注意不同类型的要点。

布局：

小作文的布局上一般可以分为三段展开。第一段：开门见山，直接点明主题。第二段：摆出内容，陈述原因，罗列建议。第三段：回应首段，再次感谢，期待回复。

语言：

用词准确：用词准确是最基础的要求之一。

语法正确：语法错误是考试的失分点所在，在小作文的写作中应尽量少用缩略语和口语。

句型多变：例如既有并列句，也有复合句，还有从句。

小作文的考查要求中会体现出文章的背景场合和写作目的，考生应针对不同情境选择不同表达。不同的应用文有不同的用语，万学海文英语辅导老师们建议2012年的考生对某些应用文的格式和习惯用语加以熟悉和背诵，以便运用自如。

注意： 虽说小作文的字数不多，但考生们最好还是不要忙于动笔，仔细审题后，先理清思路，认真列个提纲再下笔。写作时，万学海文英语考研辅导专家们建议2012年的考生们应注意下几个方面的问题：第一，交代清楚目的;第二，注意关联词或衔接词的运用，以便阅卷老师明了篇章结构;第三，有必要时对个人观点进行适当阐述;第四，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，行文切忌复杂。最后，完成作文以后，应该检查、修改，以免需要表达清楚的细节和要点被遗漏。

2012年考研英语图画作文备考建议

一、图画作文概括

图画作文不仅需要考生描述图画中所给出的基本信息，更要求考生对图画进行更深层次的理解，即要求考生能够读出图画中所隐含的深层含义，即寓意。即文章所给出的主题是什么？这需要我们认真研读图画给我们提供的信息。

首先，我们来看看这几年考研图画作文考查的主题：

年份 主题 捕鱼 爱心是一美国女孩

温室的花朵

终点也是

父母赡养

偶像

自信

取长

网络

文化

“旅2000 2001 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 2007 2008 2009 2010 2011

崇拜 的重补短，的远

与近

火锅 程”之

余 盏灯 与中国文化

起点 问题 要性 合作

互助

从以上表格的我们可以看出，考研英语图画作文所考到的主旨一般跟当今世界上热门的话题有联系，比如：赡养老人，环境保护等。因此，万学海文英语考研辅导专家建议2012年的考生在复习的时候，也可以多阅读英文文章或报刊书籍，积累素材，这样可以使自己对话题更熟悉，做到有话可说。

二、图画作文备考建议

1、审题。

审题很重要，包括题目中的direction部分，比如作文类型，写作篇幅结构，篇幅长短等；审图画，在这方面，考生要仔细审查图画，认真揣摩，从而更加准确把握图画所传递的信息；提示语，一般的图画作文都附有提示语，提示语有两个作用：限定和启发，考生应该注意，利用这些信息，这些信息在很大程度上影响到审题主旨的确立，有些考生由于没有看到或忽视了图画下面给出的提示语而对作文要深挖的主旨不能很好地理解，比如2010年的图画作文：文化火锅（附加信息：文化“火锅”，既美味又营养），它的寓意是：文化揭示出文章的话题，火锅在这里是喻体，它的显著特点是可以将多种材料混合，糅合，比喻多种文化的交融，美味是指各种各样的文化丰富了人们的精神生活，营养指的是文化交融能给人类带来很多好处。而当年由于很多考生在审题上忽视了附加信息而失去了好多的分数，比如，把文化放在火锅里乱七八糟地煮，说明文化遭受污染，说明人们不重视文化，呼吁文化保护，文化全球化的利弊分析等。以上所列举出的对作文主旨的分析都是断章取义，凭空臆造，想当然。所以万学海文建议2012年的考生在写这类作文的时候，一定不要忘记要好好瞅瞅图画下面的附加信息，有时字体很小，我们更需要留心。

词汇。

词汇是英语的基础，是备考各类型题目的基础，写作也不例外，如果词汇不够丰富，不会灵活运用，特别是在考研英语写作中，如果不掌握一些增分的亮点词汇，是写不出一篇优美的200个单词左右的图画作文的。所以万学海文提醒2012年的考生在平时备考的时候，一定要积累相关的词汇，以便在考场上得心应手。

3，内容的完整性。

文章的组织是否连贯，词的衔接是否到位等。因此，在此提醒考生应该熟记一些表示衔接的词或短语，兹列举一些如下：

转折关系：but, however, yet, on the contrary, contrary to, in contrast to, whereas, rather than, instead of, conversely

让步关系：although, even, despite, nevertheless, as, still, much as, anyhow, in any case, whatever

总分关系：for example(分), such as（分）, including（分）, in sum（总）, in general（总）, on the whole（总）

因果关系：because, due to, in that, owing to, since, now that, lead to, contribute to, result in, in view of, so, hence, therefore, consequently

递进关系：still, indeed, furthermore, besides, in addition, what is more

条件关系：if, in the event of, so long as, unless, only if ,in case, provided that，并列关系：and, as well as, likewise, not...only...but also...时间关系：when, while, as, after, before, since, until, as soon as, once, simultaneously, at the same time, whenever

目的关系：so that, in order that, lest, for fear that，经典句型：this is an interesting and thought—provoking picture.As is depicted(conveyed, illustrated)in the picture, we can deduce that„

The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound The two pictures reveal a not uncommon social phenomenon that„

考生在备考图画作文的时候，万学海文考研辅导老师温馨小提示：一定要认真审题，揣摩作者的意图，以便在文章主旨的理解和结构的搭建上做到心中有数，考生还要特别注意图画下面附加信息的作用，它的作用千万不能小觑，除此外，相关词汇的积累，衔接词、短语的积累也是十分重要的。

2012考研英语大作文写作模式指导

考研作文分为Part A、Part B两部分，也就是我们通常所说的大作文、小作文，考生在短期内通过努力可以快速提高。一般以漫画为主是大作文的考试风格，题材多选择议论文。一般漫画都直观、简单，考生的写作重点着重于下：

一、描写漫画：50个单词左右。该部分写作要求语言简练、无语病。

二、110-150个单词左右，按照题目要求的步骤分段写作，题目可能是要求考生解释图片隐含的深意表明立场并举例（如2007年），也有可能是反省图片反映现象产生的后果并表述自己观点（2006年），等。我们选取万学海文《2012考研英语历年真题权威解析（2002-2011）》中的部分优秀例句为考生复习大作文进行参考。

大作文的构造一般包括开头段、扩展段（可以有多个）和结尾段。开头段和结尾段通常短于扩展段。

一、开头段

简要描述图片:

As is vividly depicted in the picture...As is portrayed in the enlightening picture,...As is unfolded in the picture above, we can see that...As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly the relationship between...and...In the picture presented to us, we can see...The picture symbolically depicts that...The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that...The picture vividly shows...The above two pictures have shaped contrast to each other.As is shown in the first drawing,...In contrast,...The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other.In one picture,....But in the other,...The most striking feature of the drawing is...The purpose of the picture is to show us that...We can deduce form this picture that...二、扩展段

基本要求：

1.篇幅长于开头段、结尾段；

2.每段都有相应的主题句；

3.包含论证、解释、评论等；

常用句型：

On the one hand, many people hold a view that...On the other hand, others argue that...This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that...The picture conveys a deep and soul-stirring meaning.Though this picture only describes..., yet it demonstrates a universal law that...The drawing sets us thinking too much due to...It is most likely that the drawer means to compare...to...in the drawing and reflect a problem in...For one thing,...For another,...It can be easily spotted that...It goes without saying that the picture indicates that...Obviously, the picture indicates that...Undoubtedly, the picture arouses deep concern over the issue of...Sample as it is, the meaning conveyed by the picture is clear and profound.三、结尾段 提出看法，常用句型：

What it comes to...This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that....In sum, it is essential for us to...Therefore, it is imperative that we should take some effective measures.Only in this way can the tragedy described above be avoided and only in this way can the society become more harmonious to live.The answer seems self-evident: what we should learn...Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of a positive attitude.Only by..., can we demonstrate grace under pressure and turn our dreams into reality.We can frequently use the drawings to enlighten people to...It is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to...All things considered, I hold that...常用词语：

1、总结关系过渡词语

generally, in general, generally speaking, as a general rule, to take the above opinion to an extreme, to take the idea further, to some extent；as for me, as far as I am concerned, in my opinion, on a larger scale, in one sense, in a way，undoubtedly, obviously, in terms of, in conclusion, in a word, in summary，in brief, to sum up, on the whole, to conclude...2、比较对比关系过渡词语

in common, in the same way, the same as, like, likewise, similarly, equally important, whereas, yet, but, however, nevertheless, otherwise, on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other hand, rather than, conversely, instead, in/by contrast...3、列举关系过渡词语

such as, as an example, for example, for instance, as a case in point, thus, first and foremost, last but not least, first of all, in the first place, to start with, to begin with, also, next, besides, moreover, furthermore, what is more, in addition(to that), for one thing, for another thing, eventually, finally, initially...4、因果关系过渡词语

as, for, since, hence, therefore, accordingly, consequently, due to, owing to, thanks to, because(of), on account of, result in(from),as a result of, as a consequence, for the reason that...5、让步关系过渡词语

Although, despite, after all, granted that, even though, in spite of...6、强调关系过渡词语

especially, particularly, above all, most important of all, surely, certainly, obviously, no doubt, to be sure, in deed, in fact, even worse, needless to say, anyway...大作文五大命题规律

历年的考研作文都是与当下结合非常紧密的题材，考生也都会按照相应的方法进行复习。那么，作为考研英语的最后一道题目，大作文也有自己的命题规律。万学海文英语考研辅导专家们根据多年的辅导经验总结出了以下五大规律，以供2012年的考研同学们进行参考。

1.关注热点。

2006年关注偶像崇拜现象，2009年关注网络问题，2011年的考察环保问题，都是大众或者是青年人关注的热点。在年底时可以从网络上搜集到本年份大事记，从而有侧重的准备相关词汇和句型。万学海文提醒2012年的考生注意：出题者为避免作文题目被猜中，往往可能会将热点延迟进行命题。所以考生在准备大作文的时候可以参考本年和前一年所发生的大事进行预测。

2.与大学英语四、六级考试有关联。

2008年6月的CET6作文题目：《电子书是否可以替代传统书籍？》，2009年考研英语作文的题目是《网络的近与远》；2009年12月的CET6作文关注“参加各种艺术培训班”，2009年6月的CET4作文围绕着“博物馆”，2010年考研英语大作文题目是《文化火锅》，可见，考研大作文题目偶尔与四级考试的作文题目相关，常常与六级考试的作文题目相关，近期CET考试的作文题目为考生们提供了练笔、积累素材的好资源。

3.考题倾向于大型宏观话题。

2001年爱心，2003年成长，2005年家庭，2010年文化，2011年环保。试卷中给出的图片、图表只是表达局部或单个情况，入口小，话题大，命题从来不在细枝末节具体环节、或个别事件上做文章。社会积极面是命题主旨的趋向，考生需要以成熟主流的心态来思考问题的积极解决方案、在图画寓意中发现哲理。

4.避开政治和敏感话题

为避免过多的争议，政治话题因其观点难以达成普遍共识，是非曲直难以一时断定，不适合成为考题。敏感性话题同样也不适合成为考研英语的作文题目。

5.命题中的“和谐社会”倾向

围绕主流思想和时代背景，考研作文命题团队已经逐渐形成了以“和谐社会”为核心的命题思路和模式。可以用和谐的三个不同层次对“和谐社会”倾向下的作文话题进行划分：和谐发展之——个体，和谐发展之——个人、他人与社会，和谐发展之——人与自然。密切关注此类话题，掌握与“和谐”相关语词备考，是考生备考的当务之急。

第二篇：考研英语作文高分

小作文模板

1.建议信

Dear ________,As ________, I’m writing to express my views concerning ________.Although ________, there is still much room for improvement.Forinstance, ________.In view of these facts, I would like to make the following suggestions.First, ________.Second,________.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Yours sincerely,________

2.辞职信模板

Dear ________,I am writing to inform you of my resignation from the current position.I can/will ________ for the transition process.Although I really appreciate the invaluable experience working here, I gradually find_______.In addition , ________.Therefore,________.I would like to thank you for ________.Should there be any inconvenience and trouble caused by my resignation, I am sorry indeed.Yours faithfully,________

3.致歉信模板

Dear ________,I am excessively sorry that I must apologize for ________.I’m afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.In order to ________, I will ________.Please accept my most cordial and humblest apology.I do hope you ________ and excuse me for ________.Cordially yours

________

4.求职信模板

Dear ________,I have become aware ________ that you are seeking people qualified to fill the vacancy for ________.I am convinced that ________.I major in ________.Furthermore, ________.My resume and list of references are available upon request.I appreciate your time and consideration, and look forward to meeting you in the near future.Faithfully yours,________

5.感谢信模板 Dear ________,I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ________.Without your help, ________.________.Many thanks again for ________.I hope I will have a chance to ________.Sincerely yours, ________

6.申请信模板 Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to you in the hope of ________.I would like to know more details about ________.If ________, I will/can ________.I am eagerly looking forward to your reply.And your kind help would be greatly appreciated.Yours respectfully,________

7.投诉信模板 Dear ________,This letter is to notify you about a problem I am having with ________.I am dissatisfied with ________ because ________.I have already attempt to ________.Unfortunately, it seemed that ________.I am sure you will agree that ________.I look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,________

8.询问信模板 Dear ________,I am writing to ask if ________.Since ________, I would be most grateful if ________.Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.I am expecting your early reply.Yours faithfully,________

9.邀请信模板 Dear ________,Please allow me to have the honor of inviting you ________.The occasion will start at/in ________.Following that, ________.We would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence at ________.Please inform me of ________.Yours sincerely,________

10.祝贺信模板 Dear ________,I am thrilled to know that ________.Please allow me to give my most sincere congratulations on this exciting occasion.As your ________, I _______.It means ________.And it is ________.I take this opportunity to express my best wishes to you.Wish you ________.Yours sincerely,________

11.推荐信模板 Dear ________,This letter is in reference to ________, who ________.He/She is applying for ________.With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend ________.During ________, I spent considerable time with him/her.He/She ________.I believe he/she will ________.I hope the above information will help you ________.If you ________, please do not hesitate to contact me.Yours faithfully, ________

12.介绍信 Dear ________,It gives me much pleasure to introduce ________ to you.He/She ________.Because ________, I hope ________, which I shall ________.I hope it won’t cause you much trouble.Your kindness will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,________

13.便签模板 Dear ________,This note is to ________.I will ________.I am sorry that I can’t pass on the message to you in your presence because ________.Yours, ________

14.通知模板

ANNOUNCEMENT 通知主题

Speaker: ________ Time: ________ Place: ________ 正文

单位/个人

15.备忘录模板

Memorandum

To: ________ From: ________ Date: ________ Subject: ________ 正文内容

16.简历模板

RESUME

Name: ________

Date of Birth: ________ Marital Status: ________ Address: ________ Telephone: ________ Education: ________

Work Experience: ________ Languages: ________

Awards and Scholarships: ________ Interests: ________ Reference: ________

17.摘要模板

Abstract

In order to ________, the paper takes ________ into consideration.It first ________, and further explores ________.Based upon the above, the author concludes that ________.大作文模板

1.价值观类

一、As is symbolically depicted in the cartoon, ________(图片内容).The caption indicates, ________(说明文字).Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to

attract our attention to the issue of ________(图片的主题).Why________(主题的重要性)? The answer seems selfevident.On the one hand, ________(重要性体现或变现1).On the other hand, ________(2).It is my view that, we can frequently use such drawings to enlighten the juvenile as to the importance of ________（主题).All in all, ________(深化主题).二、I was really fascinated by the above intriguing cartoon.As is vividly portrayed, ________(图画内容).Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to direct our attention to ________(图画内涵), which is ________ to/in our life.For one thing, ________(内涵重要意义 1).For another, ________(2).Therefore, it is essential for us to ________(针对图画内涵的态度).First of all, ________(具体措施1).In addition, ________(2).With correct understanding and practical acts, we will ________(出现的结果).三、As is shown in the picture, ________(图片内容).The drawing vividly illustrates ________(表达的主题).Obviously the drawing conveys the meaning that ________(图片内涵).As an old saying goes, ________(应用相关谚语).This also applies to ________(扩展论证).Examples to prove the idea are abundant, and the most persuasive is ________ 举例说明).In conclusion, ________(总结深化主题).2.教育类

一、As is vividly portrayed in the first cartoon, ________(第一幅图片的内容).In contrast, ________(第二幅图片的内容)as shown in the second cartoon.The fact that ________(图片体现的问题).For one thing, ________(问题的表现或原因1).For another, ________(2).Therefore, ________(问题的结果).In fact, ________(对待问题的正确态度).Accordingly, ________(应该采取的 措施及意义).二、As is vividly depicted in the above picture, ________(图片内容).The caption informs us that ________(说明文字内容).Undoubtedly, what the picture conveys is ________(图片主题).In fact, ________(论证支持主题).As a college student, I firmly believe that ________(自己的观点).Admittedly,________(公认的做法).At the same time, ________(进一步的做法).It is believed that ________(总结).三、________(话题)plays a very important role in ________(起作用的方面).Without ________(话题带来的好处), ________(结果).However, ________(现状及问题).Therefore, ________(提出措施).Undoubtedly, ________(解决问题的方法)is of great necessity.On the one hand, ________(必要性体现1).On the other hand, ________(2).As a result, ________(总结).From my point of view, ________(个人观点).The final way to improve the situation is ________(建议).3.社会热点类

一、As can be seen in the above picture, ________(图画的内容).Apparently, ________(图画象征的含义).The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to ________(图画的主题).On the one hand, ________(主题的一个方面).For

instance, ________(举例说明).On the other hand, ________(主题的另一个方面).A good case in point is that ________(举例说明).Personally, ________(我的观点).After all, ________(问题的根本).二、The set of drawings above vividly depict a common phenomenon that________(图片揭示的现象).As is portrayed in the first picture, ________(第一幅图片的内容).In the second one, ________(第二幅图片的内容).Obviously, ________(图片的相同点/不同点).It goes without saying that ________(现象积极的一面).First, ________(原因1).Second, ________(原因 2).However, we have to admit that ________(现象的弊端).In my view, ________(对待这一现象的正确态度).三、As is vividly depicted in the above drawing, ________(图片内容).Undoubtedly, ________(图片反映的事实).The drawer highlights the longstanding issue of ________(图片揭示的深层问题).Nowadays, ________(对问题深入分析).Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to solve the problem of ________(正在讨论的问题).To begin with, ________(措施 1).In addition, ________(措施2).In fact, ________(用一个基本事实来支持论点).4.人口环境类

一、The above pictures present us with two situations with sharp contrast.In the first picture, we learn that ________(第一幅图片的内容).On the contrary, ________(第二幅图片的内容).It is apparent that ________(图片的主题).The purpose of the pictures is to tell us that due attention has to be paid to ________(图片揭示的现象).For example, ________(举例说明).Consequently, ________(现象造成的结果).Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to deal with the urgent problem.First and foremost, ________(措施1).Furthermore, ________(措施2).二、As can be seen from the graphs, ________(图表内容).Apparently, ________(图表说明的问题).There are numerous reasons for this effect, and I would explore only two of the most important ones here.First, ________(原因 1).For example, ________(举例说明).Second, ________(原因2).For instance, ________(举例说明).Personally, it is imperative to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the graphs.One measure is ________(措施 1).More importantly, ________(措施 2).5.健康类

一、________(提出引出主题的问题).Of all the complaints I have heard, this is the one most frequently uttered.As is shown in the charts above, ________(图表内容 1).Accordingly, ________(结果).We can see from the charts that________(图表内容2).However, ________(讨论对象的变化).According to the given figures,________(变化趋势).There are probably several reasons responsible for the trend.In the first place, ________(变化原因1).In the second place, ________(变化原因 2).Hence, ________(结论).二、The desire for ________(美好的目标)is universal.________(正面论证支持).On the contrary, ________(反面论证支持).There are numerous ways to ________(达到目标).First and foremost, ________(方法 1).Moreover, ________(方法2).Finally,(方法 3).As for me, ________(我的做法 1).In addition, ________(我的做法2).Therefore, ________(总结).

第三篇：考研英语作文高分经验

考研英语作文模板高分经验

文章来源：整理：省省清华

先说说我的情况吧，我是十月中下旬那会才萌发考研念头滴，总是从心里认为学历关系不大。后来我一个以前严重鄙视考研的学长，后来竟用了仅半年时间，考上厦门大学法硕，我给他发了条信息说想考研，他给我回的原话“个人认为，考研只能让你升值，而不会减少你的价值，再说三个月时间你也做不了什么大事，考后也一样找工作，多给自己条备胎”（我一直保存着）遂十月中旬开始准备考研。接着就是买英语黄皮书、专业书，政治真题，在这里提醒下师弟师妹们，一定要买最好的、一针见血的资料哦，一些资料虽然也很出名，但浪费你宝贵时间同时，学不到什么东西。比如我当时买了一本很出名的政治真题，后来发现里面的选择题讲解很多很罗嗦，但看完后你依然学不到什么，其他3个选项为啥错还是云里雾里更别提举一反三了。后来改选了高教版的政治真题，这本书的讲解一针见血，做过一遍的选择题，基本不会再错，因为她已经把你讲得理解透彻了。

废话了这么多还是归正传说说英语吧，我初中没怎么学习所以语法真是一窍不通的，英语4级考了三次才刚过线，6级考了几次现在都没过，我的英语底子确实比一般同学要差，面对只要英语不过线，其他考的再好也是白搭的残酷现实，我有点灰心，还好最后还是靠着英语作文过了法学线了，下面就具体说说吧。

3个月时间再去一点点背单词也不现实，于是我总体分析了英语试卷题型：完形10分、阅读60分（算新题型、翻译），作文30分，发现完形完全没必要花多少时间，它主要考查高级词汇、近义（形）词、语法，对我而言下在完形下功夫真是大海捞针，每个空才0.5分，再说提高了阅读理解这个也就不难了。

阅读理解可是大部头，从实质说，考研英语就两个题型：阅读和作文，完形、新题型、翻译都是变相的阅读理解。十月中下旬那会拿到阅读理解我也是很头疼，好多单词不认识，文章根本读不懂，即使勉强能看懂题目也对不了几个，仔细研读了前辈的经验后我是这么做的：怀着一颗特别特别特别虔诚的心，踏踏实实进行精读：

（1）第一遍先像考试一样，精力高度集中做第一遍（最好用铅笔做，在黄皮书薄的那本上）

（2）第二遍，再通读一遍文章，把不认识的单词用笔标出，再思考下你选择的答案

（3）对答案，自己找出和命题人思路不同之处，实在想不明白就看答案详解，去琢磨详解里的每句话，把错的原因注在旁边

考研大作文只用写一句话就可以得18分 省省清华QQ: 867209142

关于一句话万能模板的几个问题：

1.万能，整片模板200多单词，只要写1句话填写3个关键词就可以适合任何一年考研话题作文。

2.高分，里面的遣词造句都是精心之作，句式多变、用词高级、语言地道，正常考生考场上几乎不可能写出如此高水平的作文，得高分在情理之中。

3.节省考场时间，考场上默写一篇背熟的作文要比自己写一篇作文至少节省20分钟，为自己节省宝贵的考研时间用来做其他题目。

4.节省复习时间，有了作文模板就不用再为考研大作文复习花时间。

5.2011-2012年两年里已经有数百学生用这样的模板把大作文几乎写了18分。

（4）在黄皮书（厚的那本）划出不认识的单词，背诵时看不到的地方注明词义（5）第二天晨读时朗诵N遍这篇文章，顺便带着记生词（6）如此循环往复，在近3个月时间里，反复做了4、5遍黄皮书阅读理解吧，每一遍的答案都用铅笔住在旁边了，最关键是要琢磨，琢磨命题人思路。我发誓我对阅读理解绝对是很虔诚，很踏实，考完一对答案就傻眼了（我把阅读答案抄在准考证后面了），第一篇对了2个，第二篇对了1个，后两篇相当于没做，全军覆没，还不如都蒙一个选项呢，至少还能对一两个（因为答案ABCD几乎是均分的），完形全涂的C（对了4个，共得2分）当时感觉真是万念俱灰啊这3个月功夫白费了。。后来出了分数让我很惊讶，居然过了法学线了，算了一下，阅读理解得的6分加上排序题的6分（排序对了3个）完形2分，总共才14分，翻译肯定拿不到几分，汉语句子都写得不通顺，那剩下的30分从哪里来？!对，就是作文太给力了，作文是拿了27分以上。后来我把英语作文模板拿给考研辅导班老师看，他说这样的作文肯定是高分。下面就来说说怎么下的功夫吧。从考研一开始，我就借了同学近20本不同的作文书，每天下午多于2个小时的时间，做一篇大作文模板。在这里说下，也许有许多人反对模板，但对于我这样英语不好人来说，很难在考场上写出一篇潇洒的作文来，只能东拼西凑。还不如有篇自己的模板，但这模板绝对不能是作文书、辅导班里千篇一律的那种哦。

第一段是描述图画，解释涵义，最后说明这幅图意义深远，惹人深思（出题的哪幅图不惹人深思呢）用的形容词、修饰词很多，总体说是词藻华丽、单词写起来就很复杂很长，不多见，但让人感觉水平很高（当然了，20多本作文书找出来的呢）。第二段是有个承接上段的主题句，接着分析图画原因，总体分为图画直接原因、国家社会原因、个人原因、法制原因、意识问题、客观主观原因、教育体制等等（在考场上，哪个符合题意抽出哪个用）这段每个句子都是复合句，有适量的形容词、副词修饰，连词用的是for one thing，for another，最后有句和下文衔接的比喻句“如果我们对类似现象睁只眼闭只眼话，噩梦将降临”这个比喻句用于图画是消极的，积极的图画就换成另一个比喻句“图画的积极寓意对于我们，就像鸟儿离不开翅膀，像鱼儿离不开水”因为列举的原因比较多，完全可以选出很贴题的，每个句子都是很长的复合句，连词衔接得当，又有适当的形容词、副词修饰，写在卷子上不会有套用模板的感觉。

第三段，是写措施。措施要对应第二段的原因。开头是承上启下，大意是如果不改正就会造成公共…的缺失造成不可挽回的…损失，建设和谐…就会成为空谈。措施就是图画直接措施、法制措施、政府措施、媒体监督、群众监督、提高人们意识等等，是对应着第二段原因来的。用的连词是on the hand，on the other hand，从连词看只有两条，因为句子比较长、复杂，最起码包含了四条措施。最后是个很美的结尾句。

考研大作文只用写一句话就可以得18分 省省清华QQ: 867209142

关于一句话万能模板的几个问题：

1.万能，整片模板200多单词，只要写1句话填写3个关键词就可以适合任何一年考研话题作文。

2.高分，里面的遣词造句都是精心之作，句式多变、用词高级、语言地道，正常考生考场上几乎不可能写出如此高水平的作文，得高分在情理之中。

3.节省考场时间，考场上默写一篇背熟的作文要比自己写一篇作文至少节省20分钟，为自己节省宝贵的考研时间用来做其他题目。

第四段，用于不适合写措施的作文，一般用于是好事的图画。开头也是和第二段衔接，这段的举了个与图画寓意一样但更深刻的例子，主要意思是这样的好事弘扬的多角度意义及怎么弘扬。结尾和第三段结尾一样。

模板总体结构就是是什么（第一段）、为什么（第二段）、怎么办（第三段）、意义（第四段）。

考场上根据图画内容，灵活选择段落，一般寓意是好事就用一二、四段，坏事需要写整改措施的把第四段换为第三段。考试时我是在二中，没暖气那个冷啊，真的是冻得手写不出字来，提醒师弟师妹买暖贴用真的很管用哦，打开试卷作文是环保问题，我就很轻松的我模板前三段写上去了，自己加了点关于环保的词。作文写完看了下表，吓了一跳，竟然只用了十分钟的样子，同学都说英语时间很紧，可我做完整个卷子居然还剩下40多分钟，可能由于我平时就用复印的标准答题卡每天默写一遍我的模板，所以考场上一切都是轻车熟路，甚至哪行写到哪个句子都心里有数，我就用剩余时间对排序题精读，结果幸运5个对了3个，错的2个是颠倒顺序了（在这提醒下师弟师妹，排序实在不确定2个的顺序，可以都选一样的，这样保证能对一个，总比我这样颠倒顺序不得分强）

我当时在作文上下这么大功夫是有意识的，因为本来时间就那么短，不可能去按部就班的背单词，能记住10年真题生词就不错了，阅读理解不是一下子就能提升上去的，是个积淀，那么最容易提分的就是作文了，不需要太多的积淀，大小作文各有篇万能模板（当然是要下了很大功夫的哦），我个人不赞成压中作文话题之类的，因为即使把话题告诉你，现场也未必写出低分高的符合改卷老师眼光的美文来。

再来用模板套下近十年大作文真题吧，2010年话题是各国文化融合，寓意是好事，用模板的第一段描述图画绝对是比较有深度的，第二段题目要求是阐述图画涵义，用模板的第四段的框架阐述中国文化对世界文化渗透的意义，世界文化吸收中国文化瑰宝意义，第三段题目要求发表自己看法，可以用模板的第二段分析原因也可以用第三段写措施，当然也可以合用，从原因里抽出国际原因、改革开放经济社会发展原因、人们的意识提高、网络的发展等等比较贴题的原因，也可以写怎样弘扬这种文化交融精神，政府文化部门、媒体、学校、网络管理等等要怎么做才能继续推进文化融合。

同理，2009年话题是网络的近与远，人与人疏远寓意是坏事，完全就可以用模板的前三段，第三段阐述自己观点里就写整改措施，如何拉近网络时代人与人关系。

2008年话题是合作，寓意是好事，那就是用模板的一二段，模板第四段，举例就举国家间合作的例子，然后写合作的好处及怎么合作。

考研大作文只用写一句话就可以得18分 省省清华QQ: 867209142

关于一句话万能模板的几个问题：

1.万能，整片模板200多单词，只要写1句话填写3个关键词就可以适合任何一年考研话题作文。

2.高分，里面的遣词造句都是精心之作，句式多变、用词高级、语言地道，正常考生考场上几乎不可能写出如此高水平的作文，得高分在情理之中。

3.节省考场时间，考场上默写一篇背熟的作文要比自己写一篇作文至少节省20分钟，为自己节省宝贵的考研时间用来做其他题目。

2007年话题自信与挑战，不能把自己想的渺小也不能把对手想的强大，寓意中性了些，就用模板一二三段，第二段从几个原因中抽出个人的原因、教育的原因、意思问题等等原因，第三段针对这些原因选出相应措施。

2006年话题是偶像崇拜问题，2005年话题是个别子女不赡养老人，2003年话题是温室的花朵经不起风雨，这些都是寓意坏事一面，题目没有特殊要求的话就用模板一二三段。对于题目有特别要求的比如2001年话题是人类过度捕捞，题目要求第一段描述图画，第二段举例，第三段写措施，那就是模板的一、四、三段了。

2004年是终点又是新起点，寓意是积极的，题目有特殊要求，除了描述图画、理解画面含义外，要求用若干具体事例支撑自己观点，对于这类寓意积极的题目，一般不写措施了，就用模板的一、二、四段了，同样，2002年题目跨文化交流也一样。

小作文模板简单些，记着要熟知各种格式哦，小作文格式最重要。

总之，英语作文题目要求一般就是描述图画、阐述涵义、分析原因、写出自己看法，模板就是要涵盖这几点，用不变应万变。

关于专业课，真题和你所导师的研究方向可以指明出题方向，我就在学校网站上搜到我们出题那导师是该校文化部部长，负责宣传，研究方向也是和宣传有关，我就从学校指定的专业书上找与他研究方向一致的内容，并搜到他的论文、出的书籍，结果150分的专业课，竟考了90分的他研究方向的内容。

关于作息时间我是这样的：早上6点开始在图书馆晨读，内容是英语、专业课，困了就做会题提神，下午是英语时间（因为下午考英语）做阅读，整理作文模板，晚上去外面背书，累了就做题，一般都是专业课、英语。22点回到宿舍后背一个小时政治（感激我的室友，容忍我在宿舍整天朗读枯燥的政治），23点到临睡前做政治选择题（做选择题不容易睡着嘛）困了就上网看考研论坛里的经验分享，跟前辈讨高效学习的经验。

最后提醒下师弟师妹政治复习一定要抓好选择题，因为选择题分数占一半，也容易短时间内提分，大题分数拉不开多少，不要整天都把精力放在记大题上哦，选择题得分不高，政治肯定不会得高分。

当然这也是个人对考研一点感悟，只是在做完考研报告后，应本校考研师弟师妹的要求写给他们的，不同见解者勿乱留言！

做模板要做成万能的，像第一段吧：

(第一段，简单描述图画)I was proundly shocked by what I have seen in this picturewhichis so symbolic and instructive，as is appearently demonstrated in the drawing above，（空格部分具体描述图画内容，适当用形容词、副词）

考研大作文只用写一句话就可以得18分 省省清华QQ: 867209142

关于一句话万能模板的几个问题：

1.万能，整片模板200多单词，只要写1句话填写3个关键词就可以适合任何一年考研话题作文。

2.高分，里面的遣词造句都是精心之作，句式多变、用词高级、语言地道，正常考生考场上几乎不可能写出如此高水平的作文，得高分在情理之中。

3.节省考场时间，考场上默写一篇背熟的作文要比自己写一篇作文至少节省20分钟，为自己节省宝贵的考研时间用来做其他题目。

_____________________________________________what impresses me most is the

comparison between（写出图画的最核心思想，也可以把the comparison between去掉）______________________________________________________，what a philosophic and

thought-provoking scene it is！（出题的哪幅图画没有哲理、不让人深思呢？就要做成这种万能的哦）

考研大作文只用写一句话就可以得18分 省省清华QQ: 867209142

关于一句话万能模板的几个问题：

1.万能，整片模板200多单词，只要写1句话填写3个关键词就可以适合任何一年考研话题作文。

2.高分，里面的遣词造句都是精心之作，句式多变、用词高级、语言地道，正常考生考场上几乎不可能写出如此高水平的作文，得高分在情理之中。

3.节省考场时间，考场上默写一篇背熟的作文要比自己写一篇作文至少节省20分钟，为自己节省宝贵的考研时间用来做其他题目。

第四篇：英语：考研英语作文高分秘密

2006-11-20 | 英语：考研英语作文高分秘密

英语：考研英语作文高分秘密

导语：无论什么类型的语言考试都会把写作当作语言output 能力的最好形式。很多考生虽然懂得这个道理，在认识上却存在很多误区。大家经常会问“大纲单词是不是都背下就能得高分？范文要不要背？可不可能押中考题？怎么样复习才能提高写作能力？”等等诸如此类的问题。今天我们就来解决！

◆写作存在“三难、四差、一慢”等问题

上述问题的起源，一是由于大家在写作文时存在三难问题(即开头难, 展开难, 结尾难)，以及“四差一慢”问题(即语言能力差，词句变换能力差，主题展开能力差，全文段落连贯能力差和写作速度慢)。

二是因为对于历年大纲出现过的经典段落缺乏研究，没有认真分析范文是如何用自己的词句来说明现象，来描述图表，来表达不同人的正反观点，来说明阐述利弊，来阐述原因意义，来举例说明，来归纳总结，来预测趋势，来建议措施的。大部分考生只会盲目背诵见过的全部范文，不懂得要有选择的背诵，比如：重点词汇，常用套语，精彩句子，优秀段落，经典篇章。只有有选择的背诵才是高分作文的素材基础，肚子里面没有一定数量的好词好句是很难在一定的内写出一篇优秀的文章的。

◆拉开六个档次考生的分水岭：清楚表意，句式变化

我们从历年写作评分标准来看，便可以知道考生得分情况总共分六个档次。而在其中，又不难其中大纲明确写出的“内容切题，包括题中所列的各项要求”这一项对于得满分和及格分左右的考生是一样的。这说明，这个要求不是拉开考生实际分数的关键。“清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确”是把六个档次的考生拉开的分水岭。

第一档做到了“清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确”

第二档则是“比较清楚地表达其内涵，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词错误较少。”

第三档是“基本清楚地表达其内涵；句子结构和用词有一些错误。”

第四档是 “基本包含题中所列的各项要求，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。”

第五档是“基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可理解。”

第六档当然是什么都不写，或者文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解的0分考生了。

◆提出“四化”理论，提高作文水准

一、语言准确化：语言准确化主要表现在词汇准确和造句准确上。

1.词汇准确化主要表现为以下四个方面：1.拼写 2.介词 3.同义词 4.正规和非正规。

由于受中文的影响，很多同学会把一些常用的介词用错。比如在校园里，有的考生就写成in campus, 但正确写法是 on campus;再比如：成功的关键，不少考生写成 key of success, 实际是 key to success;另外，很多考生同义词不分，比如cause, reason不分，problem和question不分，consist of 和compose不分。可能是不少考生受了英语口语的影响或者专业英语的影响，喜欢用一些过于口语化和太正规的语言，这都是不合理的，我们写作要用的是白话文，用普通的正确的优秀的语言表达内容。

广大考生容易犯错误的原因是：

首先，不同民族对同一事物，同一现象认识方面有差异。

其次，对同一现象，同一意义语言表达方面有差异。例如，汉语认为“一阵大雨”，英语写成“a heavy rain”，不能写成“a big rain ”。

第三，学生对所学语言规则进行错误类推。例如，由“I went to the store yesterday morning.”推出“I went to the concert yesterday night.” 这种推导得出的句子可是一个错句。“昨天晚上”英语只能说“last night”。但是，“昨天上午(下午，傍晚)”则用“yesterday morning(afternoon, evening)”。

第四，学生照汉语思维直译，导致了表达错误和不地道、不准确的英语表达。比如，学生把“你的来信收到了”写成“Your letter has received.”，这是从汉语直译出来的，因为英语中物做主语时，应该用被动语态，应写成“Your letter has been received.”。所以提高写作水平必须从基础抓起，写每个句子都要注意基础语法与句型，注意每个词每个意义的使用条件与用法、搭配关系、名词单复数、同义词与近义词的区别等。

另外在背诵一些经常使用的万能套话，和不同场景的关键词汇。

比如环境保护的话题，大家就应该知道如下单词：

沙尘暴 Sand/dust storms

生态失衡 Disruption of ecological balance

温室效应 Greenhouse effect

全球变暖 Global warming

淡水资源短缺 Shortage of fresh water

环保意识 Environmental awareness

生态系统 Ecosystem

说到经济，中国的市场经济发展，就应该知道

国有企业 state-owned enterprise

私人企业 private enterprise

垄断市场 monopolize the market

偷税漏税 tax evasion

跨国集团 multinational corporation

贸易制裁 trade sanction

贸易壁垒 trade barriers

全球经济一体化 integration with the global economy

西部大开发 Go-West Campaign

中国加入WTO China’s entry into WTO

乱摊派乱收费 imposition of arbitrary quotas and service charge

2.句子准确化主要是避免写病句。考生常见的病句有：1.主谓一致 2.随意更换 3.逗号滥用 4.重复 5.逻辑主语和主句主语不一致 6.修饰语位置乱放 7.不分可数名词与不可数名词 8.冠词乱用 9.句子不完整 10.词语的搭配 11.句子无明确的主语 12.一个句子有几个动词谓语 13.中国式英语。

比如：汉语说“我不知道这是对还是错”如果写成 “I don’t know it's true or not..” 则是错句。因为在英语中，如果“know”之后跟疑问句，则用“whether”或“if”引导从句。在比如：“下岗，下海”等特色中国词汇，可能有的同学会写成down office, go down to the sea之内的令人产生歧义的英文来，而实际上是laid-off workers，go into business.二、词句多样化：词的多样化是指用词要多样 比如说图画作文，我们会用到show, 我们也可以说reveals, indicates, illustrates等等。在比如“认为”，我们可以说think, 也可以说hold, maintain, insist that。表达“越来越”不用老说more and more，还可以 用in growing numbers，on the rise等等。

而句子的多样化主要为以下五个方面：句子开头多样化，主语多样化，定语的多样化、长短句变化。大部分的考生都喜欢用“主谓宾”砖头式的句子去砸阅卷老师，不知道变化一下，用不定式，形容词，介词短语，分词，同谓语，从句开头。其次，大家都喜欢用“我，我们，他们”做主语，这实际上是受了汉语以人为中心的影响，英语可以用物来做主语，比如用动名词，名词或名词短语，不定式等等做主语。比如：When I see the picture, I always think of my childhood.就可以这么说：The sight of the picture always reminds me of my childhood.当然，句子还要讲究平行原则、如何把短句子连接成为长句子、如何把短句扩展成长句子。

三、结构清晰化：就是要求考生把主题句写在段首，自然段中，句子与句子之间要注意过渡词汇的使用。分析原因或者列举段落我们提倡“条理原则”。即要经常说首先，其次，然后，最后。比如：首先，to(begin/start)with/ first and foremost/most important of all;其次：then, furthermore, moreover, what’s more, in addition, besides;最后last but not least, finally.如果是讲两种人或两种情况，可以on the one hand, on the other hand 或for one thing, for another。

四、内容简单化：考研作文题型的存在的主要目的是为了考察考生的英语语言表达能力，而不是考察是否有构思能力，编剧能力。切记不用把内容想得多么复杂，而且复杂内容的英文表达会更难。话说回来，就算让考生当场写一篇字数在160-200字左右的短篇汉语文章也不一定能写出什么惊天地泣鬼神，见解深刻独到的微型杂文来。所以考生只要举一些简单常见的例子就行。

至于应用文，考生应该在注意把握信息点，注意信件的种类(即正式文体和非正式文体)。如果应用文考题是写给公司单位就要采用正式文体，如果考题是给朋友的话，就应当用非正式的普通用语。对于正式文体，我们可以背诵有关投诉信，询问信，请求信，道歉信，感谢信，建议信，求职信，辞职信，邀请信的一些惯用表达。而非正式文体我们同样要注意词句方面不要写错，要准确多样。

小作文字数要求是100个字，大概8句话。第一段就写一句话，第一句话表明你写信的基本内容，以开门见山为原则。比如询问信，就说要询问什么问题；求职信，就说要申请什么职位；如果是投诉，就写自己对什么东西的不满就可以了。第二段，一般是有三个outlines，每个考点写两句话，加起来就是六句话。结尾再加上一句客套话就行了。比如请求就写我焦急的等待着你的答复，如果是感谢信就写谢谢你的关照；如果是辞职就写我很抱歉可能对公司造成了不便如此之类的废话就罢了。

结束语：这样看来，不管是大作文还是小作文，我们都要保证“四化”即语言准确化，词句多样化，结构清晰化，内容简单化，写好考研作文不在话下！

第五篇：考研英语作文高分必备

考研英语作文高分必备

1． 开头超强公式一：名人名言

有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！

原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？

经典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）

更多经典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that„ 2． 开头超强公式二：数字统计

原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：

Honesty：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that „ 结尾超强公式

1． 结尾超强公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that„, Therefore, we can find that„ 2． 结尾超强公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recoMMend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作的“七项基本原则”

一、长短句原则

工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！

强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、主题句原则

国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）

10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！

四、短语优先原则

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其

一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其

二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、多实少虚原则

原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：

走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room

所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！

六、多变句式原则

1）加法（串联）

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）转折（拐弯抹角）

批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友„可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！

The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）

有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：

When to go, Why he goes away„

5）附加（多此一举）

如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（气势恢宏）

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑战极限原则

既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！文章主体段落三大杀手锏

一、举实例

思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：

To take „ as an example, One example is„, Another example is„, for example

二、做比较

方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；

世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语：

相似的比较：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with „, „

三、换言之

没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。

实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子：

I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语：

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

领航名师墨东博：考研英语作文模板--国有企业

As is vividly depicted in the picture , with a clear cracking sound , two bowls clashed into each other , in which the shinning one keeps its integrity , whereas the shabby one breaks into pieces.Just like being symbolically revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that the intact bowl, as a symbol of soly-invested companies , overwhelms the broken bowl representing the state-owned companies, with collision standing for fierce companies, profoundly indicates that it is time that our state-owned companies entailed reform especially after china’s entry into WTO when facing soly-invested companies abroad.To the popular mind , it is immediately assumed that when reform in state-owned companies is argued,it is car industry that is meant.To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon , several points should be figured out.For one thing, some of car industries once enjoyed the glorious past , They have ,however, gradually lost their market shares when soly ?invested companies were sweeping into domestic market.For another , in order to turn the corner ,the leaders of them should adopt the policy of reform such as acquisition, re-engineering and introduction of advanced technology and concepts of management.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below, No 1 Motor Vehicle Plant has witnessed from predicament to rejuvenation through none other than effective steps mentioned above.Therefore ,no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as reform in state-owned companies.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture.It is ,hence, necessary that efforts be made to follow the spirit of reform concerning state-owned companies.On one hand, the government should make law to perfect irrational rules and regulations being visible in reform process.On the other hand, the leaders of state-owned companies should enhance the awareness of reform.Only by undergoing these steps ,can our more state-owned companies become members of Top 500 in the world, which, indeed, has gone to the heart of maintaining good momentum of national economy growth.一、要求：考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。考生在答题卡2上作答。满分10分。

注意事项：

1）格式：称呼，结尾，署名

2）简明扼要，清楚明确。

3）遵照要求，内容齐全。

4）言语得体，真心诚意。

二、备忘录

备忘录是一种录以备忘的公文。在公文函件中，它的等级是比较低的，主要用来提醒、督促对方，或就某个问题提出自己的意见或看法。在业务上，它一般用来补充正式文件的不足。它的内容可以分为以下几项：

书端（Heading）

收文人的姓名、头衔、地址（Addressee's Name, Title, Address）

称呼(Salutation)

事因(Subject)

正文（Body）

结束语（Complimentary Close）

署名（Signature）

写作注意事项

1、书端部分包括发文机关的名称、地址、发文日期，有的还包括电报挂号、电传号、电话号码等。许多机关有自己特制的信笺，在写书端时，其格式和标点符号的使用与一般信件的相同。

2、称呼从左边顶格写起，对一般机关、团体的负责人一般用 Dear Sir，对政府官员可用Sir。

3、正文、结束语和署名等项与一般信件的格式相同。“事因”一项目前采用得较少。

范文

Directions: Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory.MEMO

August 16, 2005

To: The leader of student service department

From: Li Ming

Subject: Telephone

Dear Sir，I would like to remind you that we are in want of a telephone for each dormitory.As a university student, we need to cope with the daily increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the campus.We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us.Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of communication.I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as possible.Regards.Yours,Li Ming

三、摘要

文章摘要是对所写文章主要内容的精炼概括。美国人称摘要为“Abstract”，而英国人则喜欢称其为“Summary”。

通常国际刊物要求所要刊登的文章字数，包括摘要部分不超过1万字。而对文章摘要部分的字数要求则更少。因此写摘要时，应用最为简练的语言来表达论文之精华。论文摘要的重点应放在所研究的成果和结论上。

国际会议要求的论文摘要的字数不等，一般为200字-500字。而国际刊物要求所刊登的论文摘要的字数通常是100字-200字。摘要的位置一般放在一篇文章的最前面，内容上涵盖全文，并直接点明全旨。语言上要求尽量简炼。摘要通常多采用第三人称撰写。

科学书籍、论文和学术报告一般都附有内容摘要，这样可以节省读者的时间，使他们不必读完整个文章就能够了解它的主要内容。书籍摘要，一般放在封二或封三；论文和学术报告的摘要，一般放在正文前面。摘要应做到简明扼要，切题，能独立成文，使读者能准确地了解书籍的要义。写摘要时，最好用第三人称的完整的陈述句，文长一般不超过200个词。

英文摘要分类

摘要分陈述性的（Descriptive）和资料性的（Informational）两类。陈述性摘要只陈述书籍或文章的主题，不介绍内容。资料性的摘要除了介绍主题外，还应介绍文章的要点和各个要点的主要内容。它可以包括三个组成部分：

①点明主题，解析文章或书籍的目的或意图；

②介绍主要内容，使读者迅速了解文章或书籍的概貌；

③提出结论或建议，以供读者参考。

英文摘要常见句型

1）This paper deals with...2）This article focuses on the topics of(that, having, etc)...3）This eassy presents knowledge that...4）This thesis discusses...5）This thesis analyzes...6）This paper provides an overview of...7)This paper elaborates on...8）This article gives an overview of...9）This article compares...and summarizes key findings.10）This paper includes discussions concerning...11)This paper presents up to date information on...12)This article covers the role of chemicals in...13)This paper addresses important topics including...14)This paper touches upon...15)This paper strongly emphasizes...16)This eassy represents the preceedings of...17)This article not only describes...but also suggests...18)This paper considers...19)This paper provides a method of...20)This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze...摘要题型写作要点：

① 动笔之前，考生一定要认真仔细地阅读所给原文，弄懂原文大意，掌握原文要点。

② 摘要的长度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一，考试时应遵守规定的字数限制。

③ 在做摘要时考生切忌照搬原文。

④ 摘要应与原文的观点保持一致，并且仍按原文的逻辑顺序排列。

⑤ 重点反映主要观点，删除细节。

⑥ 简化从句，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。

⑦ 检查与修改时，考生应重点检查是否遗漏了原文的要点或包含了细节。

摘要题型写作实例

① 试题题目

Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 words.We continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have come in understanding some of the profound aspects of biology.We have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it;it is an indelicacy, like talking in mixed company about venereal disease or abortion in the old days.Death on a grand scale does not bother us in the same special way: we can sit around a dinner table and discuss war, involving 60 billion volatilized human deaths, as though we were talking about bad weather;we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a tear.It is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying circles.At the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one’s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, unthinkable.We may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go away.We like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just become, next year, say, a bit smarter.② 原文要点：

1.continue to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors

2.avoid talking about death

③ 参考摘要：

People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the issue.They talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in war.When they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they become very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their doom.Therefore, they fear very much.However, they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)

开头与结尾用语

开头：Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear sir or Madam, Dear President, Dear Sales Manager, Dear Dean, Dear Professor, To whom it may concern, Dear Mr.Smith，结尾：Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours, Yours sincerely, Best regards, Best wishes, lovingly yours, sincerely yours，l 正文第一句

朋友：Hi!How are you?

Hello!I hope everything is fine.Hi!How is everything going?

如不认识：I was a guest at your hotel from June 25 to 28.I am a student at your college, enrolled in the computer course.致谢：Thank you for your invitation to the international medical conference on October 11.Thank you for your letter dated October 11.解释写信原因：I am writing to advise you for the loss of my credit card.I’d like to inquire about course details.I am writing to complain about/of the poor service at your restaurant.l 结尾段

发出请求：I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Please reply to us at your earliest convenience.表达歉意：once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies once again.提出投诉：I expect to hear from you very soon.Please give this matter your immediate attention.常用信件写作介绍

1． 投诉信

开头：自我介绍，交代投诉内容，表明本信的目的和要求

正文：说明情况，讲清利害，分析利弊。告诉对方你因此受到的伤害或不便，提出解决问题的建议，表明希望如何处理。

结尾：表达希望问题得到迅速恰当解决的强烈愿望。希望尽快得到满意的答复。

常用句型：

I am writing to you to complain about….I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at…

I beg to call your attention to the fact that…

I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred…, calling for some remedial action.I very much regret to have to inform you that…

I am totally/completely disappointed/upset to find…

I find it awful/quite distressing that…

My experience in…on…(date)shocked me.I can hardly put up with it.There are some problems with the … that I wish to bring to attention.For one thing, there is….For another, …..I can hardly stand/bear/tolerate/put up with it any more.To improve the situation/solve the above problem, it is advisable for you to take the following measures:…

I look forward to a day when we could really enjoy a more efficient service.I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would complain to the Consumer’s Association.I request you to be kind enough to solve the problem as soon as possible.应注意：

1）礼貌用词，不能过激。

2）提出希望/要求，句型要多样化。

3）反映问题集中，不要联想其他。

Ex.1

Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem.2． 咨询信、请求信、说明信

开头：简要告知身份，表明写信原因或请求

正文：详细阐明询问、请求的具体内容、希望获得的信息。说明信应写明原因、实情及希望对方做些什么。强调所需信息/帮助的重要性。（按要求）

结尾：表达谢意，希望得到对方回复、帮助或合作。

常用句型：

I would like to inquire about some information concerning/regarding….I am writing in the hope that you can…

I am writing because I would like to…

Needless to say, your approval of my request will be beneficial not only to myself but to the company.Could you tell me what I have to do to…

It is sincerely requested that you…

My first question is that …

Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.If additional information is required, please advise me at your early convenience.Should I send you copies of my qualification in advance?

I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Please render me some valuable advice which is conducive to my final decision.I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.应注意：

1）请求内容/信息一定要详尽，具体。

2）语气要客气，委婉。

3）语言直接，具体，简明。

Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to

1)describe the book you want to borrow，2)specify by when the book will be returned, and

3)express your gratitude.3． 道歉信。

开头：简单交代对何事进行道歉。

正文：解释事情发生的原因，消除误会或矛盾。

结尾：再次表示遗憾何歉意，表明愿意补救的愿望，提出建议或安排。

常用句型：

I must apologize to you for…

I am very sorry that..I regret to inform you that I will not be able to…

I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences to you.I sincerely hope you understand that I offended you quite unintentionally.I believe you can understand that I have not intended to hurt you.I owe you an apology.It is my fault.I am to blame for this unpleasant thing.Please pardon/excuse/forgive me.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.I will try my utmost not to make such a stupid mistake again.I trust the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.I hope you will kindly forgive my lapse of attention.I am so sorry to have put you to/into so much trouble.应注意：

1）事情原委要解释清楚。

2）说明情况与理由，实事求是，简明扼要。

3）态度诚恳。

4）用词委婉，语气温和，得体。

Ex.You have invited a friend over to have dinner with you one night, but just before the dinner you received an urgent phone call from your office and you had to leave immediately.Write a letter of apology to your friend.4． 感谢信

开头：表达谢意，提及受到的帮助。

正文：回忆该帮助，高度评价/赞扬对方，表达当时的心情感受。

结尾：再次表达谢意，提出回报希望。

常用句型：

I am grateful/thankful to you for…

I am much obliged to you for your help.I shall always appreciate the assistance you have given me.I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.It was most thoughtful and generous of you to send me such a beautiful and fancy gift.Thoughtful considerate considerable

It’s very kind of you to help us.I hope you can know how much I appreciate your hospitality and your many kindnesses to me.Hostility

But for your help, I would not..If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that..Thanks from the bottom of my heart for…

With thanks from every one of us and best wishes to you.Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.应注意：

1）开头要直截了当。

2）表明诚意，避免空洞。

3）态度热情

Ex.You got sick just a week before the final examinations and were sent to a hospital.One nurse treated you very well and you recovered soon.Write a letter of appreciation to the nurse(Miss Smith).Dear Miss Smith，I was just at your hospital when I got sick before the final examinations.First, I thanks for you could treat me very well and let me recovered soon.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I’m afraid that I couldn’t pass the exam.Thank you for the bottom of my heart for your help and service.Dear Miss Smith，I hope you can know how much I appreciate your kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.I got sick just a week before the final examination.I was so worried that I couldn’t take part in the examination.It was just you that encouraged me to face the illness bravely.So I recovered soon, and I got good results in my final examination.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid I can’t have recovered so soon and achieved such good results.Again, I would like to express my thanks to you.Sincerely yours，Dear Miss Smith，I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that I would be still in hospital now.I got sick just a week before the exam.You treated me well and I recovered soon.Now I pass the exam.But for your kindness help, I would not have passed the exam.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.Yours sincerely，Dear Miss Smith，I was a patient of yours one week ago, and I write the letter to you to show my appreciation for your help.It was near the final exam then, and without your hospitable and generous help, I couldn’t have recovered so soon, let alone to get a high mark on the exam.I shall always appreciate the help you’d offered me and I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when opportunity arises.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.Best wishes，Sincerely yours，邀请信

开头：开门见山，说明目的。

正文：邀请内容（活动性质，地点，时间，日期），有关要求与希望。

结尾：重申对方参加的重要性，希望尽快回复。

常用句型：

I should be much pleased if you would come to our party on Friday the 15th at 6.I am pleased to invite you to participate in …to be held from…to….in..I feel it a great honor if you could..It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to…

We would be greatly honored if you could come…

I am writing to invite you to…

I am particularly anxious to have you join us.It’s a long time since I have had the pleasure of seeing you and I do hope you can come.We hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.I will cover all the expenses involved.应注意：

1）用词清晰，简明。

2）邀请内容清楚。

5． 求职信

开头：说明信息来源，表明写信目的 正文：提供个人资料，询问相关问题。

结尾：表达愿望，提供联系方式，表示感谢。

常用句型：

I have read your advertisement in…for a(position/post), and should be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for the position.I wish to apply for the post mentioned in your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper.I wish to apply for a position with your company.I myself like the job very much and I think my personality is well suited to working as a ….Honest, trust-worthy, reliable, enthusiastic, diligent, bright, smart, careful, patient, responsible, efficient, productive, versatile, open-minded, optimistic，I am confident that my experience and ability will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirement of your position.Born in…in.., I graduated from….University majoring in …..I have been working in…since my graduation, and I have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was ….And currently I am working for…

I intend to give up my present post in order to get a more challenging opportunity.With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than 4,000.I shall be very much obliged if you will offer me an opportunity for an interview.I am looking forward with great interest to hearing from you soon regarding my application.应注意：

1）适当展示自己（经历，才能）

2）不要言他

3）语言明确清楚，流露自信。

6． 推荐信

开头：开门见山，表明关系。

正文：称赞被推荐人（举例说明），客观介绍其相关能力，突出表现、性格与人品

结尾：作出保证，提出希望，表示感谢。

常用句型：

I am very glad to recommend you a former student of mine, Mr./Miss… to be a candidate for…

I am writing to recommend…

I have great pleasure to provide a letter for recommendation for Mr./Miss…

With reference to your advertised position, I have the pleasure to say that he is the just person you are looking for.He has proved to be industrious, responsible and skillful in carrying out his assignment.Besides being thoroughly honest and reliable he showed an unusual quickness and ability in…

I hope the above information will help you to know…

If you need any further information about his qualification, please do not hesitate to contact me.If further information about him/her is required, please do not hesitate to let me know/contact me

In view of his/her previous achievements in…, I am firmly convinced that Mr./Miss.., will make a successful graduate student/staff member.I would be most grateful if you would consider my recommendation and kindly offer him a…

应注意：

1）开门见山，简明扼要。

2）举例说明，客观叙述。

7． 表扬信

开头：身份简介，提及感谢的人，事。

正文：叙述经过，详细介绍值得表扬之处，表达感受

结尾：提出祝愿与希望

常用句型：

I am writing to tell you how highly I think of…

I am writing because I appreciate very much what Mr./Miss…from your company has done.I am greatly impressed by….What he has done shows that…

He deserves praise for what he has done.I am greatly inspired by…

It is your good service as well as excellent food that help you set up a world reputation.For this reason, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks and hope that your company will have a brighter future.应注意：

1）叙述经过，明确具体。

2）上升到一个高度。

3）语言诚恳。

8． 祝贺信

开头：开门见山，说明消息来源

正文：回忆过去，表明感受，展望未来，提出建议。

结尾：表达祝愿

常用句型：

What exciting/thrilling news!

It’s good/sensational news.I was delighted/thrilled to hear/to receive the news that ….It’s the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.I congratulate you on/upon your success.Congratulations and all good/best wishes.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on…

Permit me to congratulate you…

We want you to know how happy we were when…

It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…

Wish you all the happiness in the world.I hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life/career.All the luck in the world to you!

Best of luck to you!

范文：

Ex.1

Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem

Dear manager，I was a guest/customer at your restaurant last Saturday.I wish to refer you to the incident that happened that day, calling for your immediate attention to the matter.It shocked me when I found a fly in a dish in the middle of our meal.I could hardly bear it.I felt sick.If it happens again, I am convinced that no one will come to eat here any more.It is advisable for you to tidy up/ clean up your kitchen as soon as possible.Please give me your immediate attention to this matter.Sincerely yours，***

Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to

1）describe the book you want to borrow，2）specify by when the book will be returned, and

3）express your gratitude.Dear Jones，I am writing to ask for your help in lending me a book.Recently I’ve been busy preparing my graduate thesis, and therefore have been reading and researching numerous books and references.One of the books that my advisor believes to be particularly relevant to my thesis is called The Legal System in Society.Unfortunately I have been unable to find it at the library or in any bookstores.Do you happen to have this book? If so, may I borrow it? I promise to take good care of it and will return it to you within three days.Thank you very much.I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

练习题：

Ex.1

You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has friends visiting.They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You should prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Ex.2

Your classmate and close friend, Jack, has just passed the graduate entrance examination and is going to study at a famous university in another city.Write a letter of congratulation to him.Ex.3

You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in UK.You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had left your laptop in the family.Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality.Describe the computer and where it is and ask the host to send it back to you.Ex.4

You are a college student who applies for a part-time job in a shop during the summer vacation.Write a letter to the shop owner explaining why you are a suitable person for the job.Remember to ask him or her about the rate of payment.Ex.5

You are a college student who applies to a university for an MA degree program of the major “Life Science”.Introduce yourself and state out the reasons.Ask them to send the necessary information concerning the course.1.审题要认真

短文的标题是对全文的高度概括。通过认真审题来确定标题的核心词或者说关键词,依此来整理思路。因此,考生看到试题后绝对不能提笔就写,而是应该认真审题,看清题目的要求和提示,充分利用题目所提供的信息、关键词所圈定的范围,在确立主题后再动笔。

如 从标题 The Misery of Shyness 中得知,考生不但要解释说明 Shyness ,更重要的是要突出由 Shyness 带来的Misery。至此,短文要重点阐述带来了什么Misery。

2.文体要统一

正式文体的文章不宜用非正式的语句。有些考生在一篇很正式的议论文中用以下的句子做结语 OK, this is what I want to say.或是That’s my opinion.Do you agree with me？等等,使文章显得不伦不类。

3.主题要突出

标题如果是 Pollution from Cars 或 Air Pollution ,以下段落的阐述显得有些赘述 1 Part of this problem is the world’s exploding population.2 A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air.3 Besides, land and water pollution has also increased.4 Pollution is, in fact, threatening our health, our happiness, and our civilization.尤其是第三句,还有点跑题。

4.文字要连贯

一篇好文章要注重连贯性。连贯性主要体现在句子与句子、段落与段落的衔接上,这种衔接要通过过渡词语来实现,以达到文章通顺,语言流畅。例如 It is clear that television news can vividly bring into us dramatic events of importance, such as wars, games and soon, but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation.On the contrary, print news excels in its ability to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit, though it can not compete with television visually.Besides, television is essentially a passive medium.Such as, but, because of, on the contrary, though, besides 这些过渡词把句子从语义上连接起来,形成一个有机的整体,读起来犹如行云流水,自然酣畅。

5.内容要一致

要删除多余的词语,否则, 一是破坏了文章的一致性, 二是有凑字数之嫌。如 Scientists fear that nuclear energy will one day destroyus.2 They say that the explosion of a nuclear bomb can kill millions of people and cause disease and deformity in later generation.3 Because of limited energy resources, scientists are studying the possibilities of nuclear power.4 And any failure from a nuclear plant may cause enormous damage to the affected area5 What’s more, up to now people have not discovered a safe way to dispose of radioactive wastes.本段中的第三句与主题不符, 也与第二和第四句不连贯, 应删除。

6.表达方式要多样化

词、句型使用的多样化不仅给文章增加了色彩和可读性,与此同时也可反映考生的词汇量和语言掌握的程度等。为避免文章平淡、呆板, 可使用不同的句式 强调句、倒装句、否定句等等。长短句使用合理相间,用短句表达有力的结论,用长句体现严密的逻辑关系。考生在举例说明的段落中尤其要注意词语的多样性。

7.考点要覆盖全

无论是什么形式的写作都有写作内容上的要求,一般为三个方面。考生在动笔前一定要看清写作内容上的要求,以确保文章覆盖所有考点。

8.语言要流畅

评分标准已清楚地告诉考生 文章要语言流畅、字句通顺、表达准确, 这是得高分的基础。

Last year the public spent two hundred million pounds on pet food alone, to say nothing of animal care bills and furniture.1 It is difficult not to feel resentful about this when one considers what the same amount could do for victims of starvation and poverty,2 and it is not unusual for me to get hot under the collar when I read about another old person who has left all his ／her money to a dog or cat home.这两句在表达意义上用词十分到位,随着两个 when 引导的状语从句内容的递进,主句对表现气愤程度的加强通过用词的不同而表达得淋漓尽致；排比结构的运用使观点更加明确 在1 中 It is difficult not 和 to feel resentful about this 与2 中的 it is not unusual 和 to get hot under the collar 词语表达极其准确。这需要考生在平时大量阅读文章时多注意积累好的语言表达。

9.首尾要呼应

上述几项被阅卷者称为闪光点 ,即加分的因素。除此而外, 更重要的一点是要注意文章的完整性,即首尾要呼应。

10.检查要到位

这个重要环节往往被考生忽略不计,而因为少了这个环节所造成的后果真可谓是功亏一篑。在阅卷过程中,时不时会发现 ourself、thinked、the person who are… ,而这些会酿成不良后果的错误完全可在一两分钟的时间内检查、修改完成。所以, 在写完短文后, 要耐心地再读一遍。