雅思写作之去化技巧解析

第一篇：雅思写作之去化技巧解析

雅思写作之去模板化技巧解析

随着考生对雅思考试复习备考的深入，就出现了所谓雅思写作高分“模板”，指雅思写作中的一些固定的套句及其结构。新航道青岛雅思培训中心很多同学甚至对雅思写作“模 板”这个概念顶礼膜拜，更有甚者会把雅思写作认为是一个背模板的过程，只要背点模板，雅思写作获得高分就没有什么问题了。然而事实证明，很多考生在考场上 生硬地使用所谓的雅思写作模板之后，带来的却是意想不到的低分后果，那么如何突破雅思写作模板获高分?在这篇文章中，将着重分析如何消除双边结构的模板痕迹。众所周知，双边结构主要有两个方面的特征：考题文字中的观点双向和考生对观点支持角度的双边讨论，但最好不要模棱两可，应该有明确的单一指向性的观点倾向。

同样地，对于判断作文的结构类型，应该不是大的问题，我们关心的是，考生太过依赖所谓的模板，而使得文章没有灵活度，否则，期望通过所谓捷径来快速取得理想的分数往往会适得其反。

本文中，将主要通过分析双边结构类型作文中比较常见的话题，为考生分析如何淡化写作中的模板痕迹，使文章更为灵活。

分析

真题链接：In some countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.Discuss both views and give your opinion.以上是剑桥中的考试真题，相信大家都已经非常熟悉了。我们就一起结合此题，对双边结构的整体文章结构和遣词造句做一个简单的对比。

1.引言段

引言段是通篇作文的开篇之作，对于它的写法多种多样。但是无论怎样书写，切忌出现以下模式性的语句样式：

模板语言：

Nowadays, the discussion about „„is a very controversial one.Those who criticize„„.argue that„„, but people who advocate„„, on the other hand, maintain that„„

这样的模板相信大家不会陌生，它曾经受到无数考生的青睐。但是我们说过，这样过于机械的语言，很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解，更为糟糕的是，你的开头有可能和无数人是重复的!

下面我们就做一个简单的对比：

非模板语言：

No matter in which country, children are, without any exception, regarded as the protected in society, not to mention making them involved in any forms of paid-work(调用背景知识，引出话题).The necessity of allowing them to make money with their own hands is indeed worth discussing(结合对考题文字的统一转换，自然流露双边讨论倾向)

第二篇：雅思写作之 名人名言

It is never too late to learn.活到老，学到老

Misfortunes tell us what fortune is.不经灾难不知福

Storms make trees take deeper roots.风暴使树木深深扎根。

Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.只要有一颗意志坚强的心，没事不成Work makes the workman.勤工出巧匠

You have to believe in yourself.That's the secret of success.人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀

Money is a good servant and a bad master.金钱是善仆，也是恶主

Happy is the man who is living by his hobby.醉心于某种癖好的人是幸福的。

Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be.对于大多数人来说，他们认定自己有多幸福，就有多幸福

If you don't learn to think when you are young, you may never learn.如果你年轻时就没有学会思考，那么就永远学不会思考

It is no use doing what you like;you have got to like what you do.不能爱哪行才干哪行，要干哪行爱哪行

Work banishes those three great evils : boredom , vice, and poverty.工作撵跑三个魔鬼：无聊、堕落和贫穷

The decline of literature indicates the decline of a nation;the two keep in their downward tendency.文学的衰落表明一个民族的衰落。这两者走下坡路的时间是齐头并进的 Saying and doing are two different things.说和做是迥然不同的两回事

Actions speak louder than words.行动比语言更响亮

From small beginnings comes great things.伟大始于渺小

It takes all sorts to make a world.世界是由各种不同的人所组成的

第三篇：雅思写作真题解析

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雅思写作真题解析

雅思大作文在分析题目时，不能只看到其表面意思，与此同时解到题目所涉及的是哪一类话题也是特别重要的一环，题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证都要引起注意。本篇雅思培训，文都国际教育老师将和大家一起探讨两道典型的教育类话题。

As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

审题：

题目翻译：作为教育的一部分，学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?

能力考查：这个教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令，考查考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。一般来讲，碰到这种指令，理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的，但是还是建议大家尽量尝试用折中的写法，即部分同意部分反对。这种一分为二的思考方式可以在考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进行有效作答，另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。

框架构造：Partly agree

1.开头段(用于引出题目背景，并且表明自己的态度)

2.论证出国学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性

3.但是，反面论证这种做法对于部分学生是不现实的 4.结尾(再次重申自己的观点，并且可以给出自己的建议)

Sample answer:

Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.Compared with second-hand experience, living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people.Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.Meanwhile, living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it.First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and 文都国际教育官方网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/

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sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers.Tuition fees and life expenses can beanother problem.Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas.For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.To sum up, an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well.However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.思路分析：

Introduction:

Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.(对于题目的改写)As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.(在段落的最后，用一句话表明出自己的观点)

Body 1:

主题句：Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.(其中mentioned purposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化，为了避免重复，改用其他方式来表达)

支撑论点部分：Compared with second-hand experience,(用了对比论证手法，强调国外生活与学习的好处)living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people.Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.(凸显对于语言的好处，使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性)Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词)living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.(论证了对于文化的帮助，使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。

Body 2:

主题句：However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it.(用however转折连接词引出与上段不同的看法，指出了一部分特殊的学生不利于海外学习，这样就体现出了逻辑上的缜密)

支撑论点部分：

① First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers.(个论点，指出语言能力差的学生不适合出国学习，使用的是因果论证)

② Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem.Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas.For example, 文都国际教育官方网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/

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studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.(第二个分论点，指出家庭经济条件不好的学生也不适合出国学习，用for example引出了典型的举例论证)

Conclusion:

To sum up,(段落结尾常见连接词)an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well.However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.(个人观点的重述加上适当的建议)

Some people think children should obey the rules their parents and teachers set and listen to them, but others think less control will help children to deal with their own future life.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.审题：

题目翻译：有些人认为小孩子需要遵守和听从父母和老师指定的规则。然而另外一些人则认为对小孩少一点的限制会有利于他们更好的处理和解决未来生活中的问题。讨论两个观点并且给出你个人的看法。

能力考查：这个教育类话题是双边讨论的考试指令，考查学生是否能对于考官所呈现的两个观点进行有效的论证及对比。这个题目中一般都会有标志性词眼，例如some people believe…, while others think…。就这类题目的答题要点来说，我们会建议四段式结构，包括开头引入，两个观点的分别论证及结尾段给出你自己的看法。

题目关键词：rules, parents, teachers

框架构造:

1.开头段(用于引出两个观点所争论的内容)

2.论证个论点的合理性，即小孩子需要遵守和听从父母和老师指定的规则

3.论证第二个观点的合理性，即对小孩少一点的限制会有利于他们更好的处理和解决未来生活中的问题

4.结尾段(给出个人观点)

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第四篇：雅思写作话题分类解析之环境类篇

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朗阁海外考试研究中心 曹美玲

过去几年，环境话题一直都是雅思大作文考试的重中之重，其出题频率非常高，而且涉及的话题也非常广。虽然从近几年出题趋势来看，考环境类的频率稍微有所下降，但它依然是一个热门话题，与现代的发展现状以及环境的急剧恶化是密不可分的。然而，环境类出题的难点在哪里呢？朗阁福州雅思培训中心的专家通过长期的总结与研究认为，环境类考题比较专业的词汇以及考题的细化都是学生的极大阻碍。因此，本文将从环境类的历年三大高频考题，详解其思路以及相关的表达，为考生解决这一大难题。

历年高频考题汇总

1.个人是否要保护环境

Some think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve，while others think the problems cannot be solved unless individuals take some action.Discuss both views and give your opinion.题目解析：

观点A：个人对环境问题无能为力；观点B：个人可以采取行动解决环境问题。本题是一道典型的雅思环境类写作考题。由于考题的提问形式是“Discuss both views and give your own opinion.”所以，既要讨论到个人能够采取何种行动解决一些环境问题，也要讨论为什么有些环境问题个人无法解决（即只有政府或公司才能解决）。

相关表达：

sustainable development 可持续发展

exploit natural resources 开采自然资源

the ecosystem 生态系统

discharge/release vt.排放（污染物）

contamination n.污染物

low carbon 低碳

environmental protection 环境保护

greenhouse effect 温室效应

toxic a.有毒的

2.政府，公司，个人，谁负责任？

The environmental problem in the world cannot be solved by ordinary people，and governments and large companies should be responsible for the problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree？

题目解析：

本题可以从三种写作角度去思考，如果选择同意，那可以从政府和公司的角度重点切入，比如说保护环境是政府的责任，公司是污染的源头，政府公司有充足的资金和号召力等。如果不同意，可以重点从个人角度切入，人类活动是环境污染的源头，政府的政策和公司的策略受人类意愿影响，并且靠人们执行。当然不同意也可以从政府，公司，人类一起保护切入。

相关表达：

Environment is the foundation upon which the development of human civilization depends.环境是人类文明发展的基础

as environment continuously deteriorates 随着环境的持续恶化

industrial waste 工业废料

the chief culprit 罪魁祸首

suffer from respiratory diseases 患上呼吸疾病

provide medical subsidies 提供医疗补助

be confronted with dire challenges 面临严峻的挑战

unlimited discharge of pollutants 无限制的污染物的排放

introduce laws and policies 推出法律和政策

require public cooperation 需要公共合作

echo the policy 呼应政策

rapid depletion 快速的消耗

3.不保护的原因及措施

Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves.Why is the case？ What actions can be done to encourage individuals to protect the individual？

题目解析：

很多人认为环境问题很重要但是他们自己没有尽力去保护环境，为什么会出现这种情况？有没有什么措施可以鼓励个人保护环境。这是一道很典型的Report结构。我们也可以从个人，政府、社会切入。1.个人往往认为自己力量渺小，因此对环境保护采取消极态度。2.政府缺乏相关立法，对破坏环境的行为惩处不力。缺乏激励机制，很难鼓励民众进行环境保护活动。3.现代生活对物质的过分追求导致人们过多选择了高耗能、一次性等不环保产品。解决的措施需要对应性解决。政府加大执法，赏罚分明，媒体加大宣传等等。

相关表达：

take a pessimistic view 采取消极态度

penalty 惩罚

incentive 奖励机制

disposable 一次性的

environmentally friendly 环保的 exhaust emission 废气排放

enact laws and regulations 颁布法律法规

levy heavy tax on 对„征收重税

publicize 宣传

controversial issue 有争议的问题

be disposed of 去除，处理

dilemma 进退两难的局面

总结

通过对上述几个典型考题的分析，以及历年真题的汇总结合。我们不难发现，在历届雅思写作环境类话题中，出题思路主要有以下三个方面：

1.环境保护是谁的责任？考题给出的选项通常会有个人、公司、国家、国际合作等。

2.如何保护环境？考题通常会给出某个方案问其正确与否。

3.为什么人们明知环境正在被破坏却无动于衷？

如果考前对以上三方面的雅思写作真题都思考过，相信环境的话题一定会变得很简单，实际上只要把一些理由进行组合就可以了。当然，对环境类话题词汇的熟悉和灵活应用，以及反复的练习，对待考试才能知己知彼，百战不殆。

第五篇：南昌雅思培训之写作

雅思话题作文范文：改善环境质量

以下是南昌中国雅思为大家搜索整理的有关雅思写作范文改善环境质量相关信息介绍，雅思写作多少会涉及一些改善环境质量方面的考题，所以一下雅思写作范文考生可以借鉴里面的短语、句子或思路，给自己的写作找一些思路和灵感。

写作题目

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.以上即是雅思写作范文改善环境质量话题介绍，大家在备考雅思写作时可以结合以上提到的内容进行练习，俗话说熟能生巧，考生朋友们加油!