高考英语书面表达专题—感谢信丰富表达,变换句式范例

第一篇：高考英语书面表达专题—感谢信丰富表达,变换句式范例

高考英语书面表达专题—感谢信丰富表达，变换句式范例。

高考英语书面表达专题—感谢信丰富表达，变换句式范例。假如你是某中学高三（1）班班长李华。你们的英语老师Nancy已完成教学任务，准备回美国。请你根据以下内容要点给Nancy写一封email，并代表全班同学对她表示感谢。1.参加Nancy授课的日子非常轻松快乐，大家都被她精彩的教学和优美的声音所吸引；2.Nancy总是组织很多课堂活动，让大家积极参与；3.她经常说的“never say you can not.”给大家留下了深刻的印象；4.她用”team spirit”来鼓励大家交流和分享；5.希望她再来到中国。注意：1.词数为100左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。句子提取及翻译:1.时间飞逝，因为你要回国，所以我们不得不说再见。2.我很高兴能代表全班同学因为你精彩的教学而表示感谢。3 我们真的很感激你给我们上的课，在你的课上，我们感到很快乐，放松。4 我们深深地被你的有趣的教学和迷人的声音所吸引。5 你为我们组织许多活动让大家积极参与。6 我相信每个人在你的课堂上收获很多。7 我们印象最深刻的是 never say you can not.8 你要求我们有团队精神并鼓励我们互相交流并且分享我们的观点。9 多亏你的帮助，我们在英语学习上取得了很大的进步10我们期待着你下次参观中国。一句多译：时间飞逝.因为你要回国，所以我们不得不说再见。Time flies like an arrow./ How time flies!/ As time goes on/ goes by /With time going on/ going by, We have to say goodbye because you are going back / return to your country soon.我很高兴能代表全班同学因为你精彩的教学而表示感谢。I am glad to express thanks / gratitude to you / I am glad to thank you for your excellent teaching on behalf of the whole class.我们真的很感激你给我们上的课，在你的课上，我们感到很快乐，放松。We really appreciate the classes you gave to us, in which we felt happy and relaxed.我们深深的被你的有趣的教学和迷人的声音所吸引。We are deeply attracted by your interesting teaching and charming voice.你为我们组织许多活动让大家积极参与。You organized many activities for us in order that we could take an active part in them.我相信每个人在你的课堂上收获很多。I believe that everyone has gained a lot in your lessons / benefited a lot from your lessons.我们印象最深刻的是 never say you can not.What impressed us most was “never say you can not”.你总是要求我们有团队精神并鼓励我们互相交流并且分享我们的观点。You always required us to have a spirit of teamwork and often encouraged us to communicate with each other and share our ideas.多亏你的帮助，我们在英语学习上取得了很大的进步Thanks to your help, / With your help, we have made great progress in our English study.我们期待着你再到中国。We are looking forward to your second visit to china./ We are looking forward to your coming toChinaagain.范文欣赏Dear Julie,How time flies!By the time you are going b阿ack to Britain, I’d like to say thanks to you on behalf of the whole class for your teaching us so well.We always felt the days when you taught our oral class were pleasant and relaxing.In your lively class, you organized many interesting activities, in which every one of us took an active part.You often said “Never say you can’t”,which left us a deep impression.What’s more, you told us how effectively team spirit works and encouraged us to communicate and share each other’s opinions bravely.Now it’s hard for us to say goodbye to you, though we have to.Wish you a good trip and we sincerely hope you will come back some day.By the way, I am attaching your picture with the whole class.Please do check it out.Yours,Li Hua

第二篇：书面表达感谢信

感 谢 信 dear______, i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _________(感谢的原因).if it had not been for your assistance in ___________(对方给你的具体帮助), i fear that i would have been_________(没有对方帮助时的后果).every one agrees that it was you who______________(给出细节).again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely 你的姓名

extend [?kstend] vt.延伸；扩大；推广；伸出；给予；使竭尽全力；对„估价 vi.延伸；扩大；伸展；使疏开

gratitude [gr?t?tju?d] n.感谢（的心情）；感激 assistance [?s?st(?)ns] n.援助，帮助；辅助设备

感谢信

1）感谢信的写法

人们在交往中常需要相互致谢，收到别人赠送的礼物，得到别人的帮助、受到别人的慰问，都应该表示感谢。感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式。

感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情答谢他人，收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑，感谢的目的也就失去了。因此，写感谢信首先得真心诚意。

感谢信另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈，而应着重于具体的感谢事由。其次一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物、得到别人帮助，应及时写信予以答谢。否则，人家会对你的谢意大打折扣。

收到他人赠送的礼物应当及时写封感谢信，感谢信除了应写得真诚、具体、及时外，还应当特别提及所收礼物的具体内容，否则，泛泛而谈，使人觉得你不够真诚。为此，当你写感谢信时，应这样写：“thank you for your beautiful roses.”(谢谢您送的美丽的玫瑰花。)；而不要笼统地写上“thank you for your beautiful gift.”(谢谢您送给我的漂亮礼物。)，这样，使人觉得你既礼貌，又诚心，从而真正达到交往的目的。下面我们来看看具体的范例。

范例1 dear laura, i was truly enraptured beyond expression to receive your flowers which turned our living room into a garden.how considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday.you just couldnt have selected anything i had have liked more!you have a positive genius for selecting the right gift!the four years i spent with you at the college have been the pleasa ntest period in my life.i will cherish this memory forever.how nice it would be to see you again.you have been more than kind, and i wont ever forget it.my love and deepest gratitude, now and always!sincerely yours, jane 范例2 dear dan and laura, jim and i want to thank you for the beautiful salad bowl set.we are looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical wedding gift.thanks again for the lovely gift.fondly, minnie 范例3 dear mrs.gorden, id like you to know how much the week at your lovely house meant to me.i not only enjoyed myself immensely, but also i felt relaxed a nd refreshed as i havent felt for months.please give my love to helen.it was so nice being with her again just like our old days together at school.many thanks to you and mr.gordon for asking me.sincerely yours，jean brown 2）感谢信模板 date：_________ dear____, ①i am now writing to express my sincere thanks for____.②id like you to know how much your _____ meant to me.③you have a positive genius for ______.④i not only enjoyed_____ , but also___.⑤i shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life.⑥i _____.⑦i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.⑧ would you kindly let me know _____.⑨i will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____.⑩ how nice it would be to see you again and i am looking forwards to seeing you next time!i repeat my thanks again for your_____.please give my kind regards to your_____.yours truly, signature 信息提示

信件启首

①直接表达谢意

②表达出自己非常珍惜对方的付出/礼物 ③对对方一定的赞美

④ 对方的情意对自己的影响

⑤介绍自己的近况

⑥表达出自己希望有回报的机会 ⑦ 询问对方是否有时间

⑧ 表达自己回报的心情

⑨ 提出希望下次见面的愿望

⑩再次表达感谢

最后表达真挚的祝福

信件结尾与签名篇二：高考英语感谢信汇总

感谢信

1.表达感激之情，简单陈述写这封感谢信的原因； 2.详细说明要感谢的事由，措词更加具体真诚。再 次表示真诚的感谢； 3.向对方表达自己真诚的祝福，再次道谢。有时可向对方发出邀请。感谢信模板 1 dear ________，① i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感谢的原因)．

② if it had not been for/had it not been for/ without your assistance in ________(对方给你的具体帮助)，i would(not)have been ________(没有对方帮助的后果)． ③ everyone agrees that it was you who ________(给出细节)． ④ again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!⑤ please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely, li ming 感谢信模板 2 dear _____________ , ① i am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for _____________(感谢事由)。② id like you to know how much your meant to me.③ you have a positive genius for_____________(对收信人某一方面的赞美).④ i not only enjoyed _____________, but also_____________.⑤ i shall ever remember _____________as one of the most _____________in my life.⑥ i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating(报答).⑦ i will feel very honored and pleased if you _____________(表达自己回报的心愿)。⑧ i am looking forward to seeing you next time!⑨ i repeat my thanks for your_____.⑩ please give my kind regards to your________.yours sincerely li ming 1（2010年浙江省衢州市）假设你是某中学高三某班学生李华，高二多年来，经历很多次成功与失败的你，觉得自己似乎一下子成熟了许多，有一种真的长大了的感觉，面对紧张的学习，一次次的考试及今后的打算。。，你有太多的话想对关爱你的父母说。请以书信形式和爸爸妈妈谈谈。参考词汇 鼓励encourage /encouragement 对。。感激be grateful to sb.dear mum and dad how are you doing? 参考范文

dear mum and dad how are you doing? how time flies。i am now a senior three student ,enjoying many successes as well as going through a number of failures,which shows that i have really grown up.whenever i am thinking of these,i can’t help feeling grateful to you.it is you who first give me encouragement when i meet with difficulties,especially when i am not getting along well with my my studies.indeed,your inspiration seems to be a lamp,which offers me light of hope,courage and confidence.and more importantly,you are always teaching me to be good to others,and try to contribute to our society.yours sincerely, 2假设你叫王华，家住外地，暑假期间来北京游玩，住在朋友李海家里。李海为你安排了一周愉快的假期生活，还请假带你出去到许多地方玩。李海的母亲做了美味可口的饭

菜款待你。假期期满你回家后写信给李海表示感谢，并请他有机会到你处游玩。

请用英语写一封100词左右的感谢信。li hua dear li hai, yours, wang hua 3假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的mr.brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给mr.brown写了一封信，内容如下： ★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；

★ 在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励； ★ 决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；

★ 盼望见到mr.brown，希望他寄来一张照片。

注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：100左右

dear mr.brown，i am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.i could not have returned to school without your help.thank you so much.i have been working hard since i went back to school.i have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers.they often praise me and encourage me.but for your help, i might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education.i have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.how are you getting on with your life and work? i would like to meet you in person, but i have no opportunity to do so.would you please send me a photo of yourself? thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!yours sincerely, li hua 假设你是李华上周参观伦敦时，你父亲的朋友rogers,把你照顾的很好，写一封信给 rogers先生，表达你的感激之情，字数100词左右，不得出现真实姓名与地址。dear mr.rogers, it is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for your hospitality and courtesy to me during my stay in london.originally i only wanted to call on you and gave my father’s regards to you, as it had been three years since you and he last saw each other.but you insisted that i stay in your house during my visit in london and took good care of my life as if i were a family member of you instead of the daughter of one of your friends.you really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.thank you again for your kindness and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality.yours faithfully, li hua篇三：2014北京书面表达(应用文)书面表达归类整理

书信类文体：包括求职信、祝贺信、道歉信、询问信、推荐信、感谢信、邀请信、辞职信等多种应用文。每个类别都有相对固定的语言模式，都有固定词语要求。

（一）感谢类

1、假如你叫李平，现在给住在北京的green先生写一封感谢信，green先生曾经是你校的外教，曾花了很多时间辅导你英语口语，使你在全市英语口语竞赛中获得冠军。你对此非常感激。这次听说green夫妇要回到你校访问。你很高兴 dear mr．green, how is your stay in beijing? yours sincerely, li ping

2、假设你是李华，因为英语成绩突出，已经被北京大学提前录取。请用英语给你的高三英语老师mr.zhang写封信。

内容包括： 1.好消息； 2.感恩，因为„..;3.你在北大的学习计划或对未来的打算； 4.对老师的关心和祝愿„ dear mr.wang, we haven?t seen each other for ages.how is everything going with you? i am writing to tell you the good news that i have already been admitted into beijing university in advance.actually speaking, you are the very person i should first say thanks to.it is you who helped develop my interest in english.without your help, i would not be good at english.beijing university is a place which i have been longing for.i am sure i will learn a lot there.besides my major, i will take part in all kinds of activities, which will surely do good to my future career.best wishes!

3、假设你叫李华，你在朋友王林家度过一周假期，昨天（2013年11月21日星期三）刚刚返校。现在给你的朋友王林写封感谢信，内容包括：

感谢王林为你安排一周愉快的假期；

简单回忆假期中的愉快生活，感谢王林请假带你游玩了许多地方；

认为王林的母亲是一位非常出色的厨师，美味可口的饭菜使你体重增加了5磅

再次感谢，并希望保持联系。欢迎他有机会来你校游玩。i?m writing to express my thanks to you for the wonderful vacation.i spent with you and your family.surely i ?ve spent a happy vacation during which you taught me how to swim, boat ,and fish.i really appreciate your taking time off work to take me around and show me so many places.your mother is a wonderful cook who can cook delicious food and i think i must have gained 5 pounds just a week i spent with you.i hop you ?ll be able to visit our school some time.（二）求职信、招聘信

假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请你用英文以“an english editor wanted”为题，按照以下要点写一则120-150字的招聘启事。1.描述主要的工作内容。2.希望该同学应满足的条件与要求。3.感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（students’ union）联系。an english editor wanted our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its english edition.the job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper english articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students.the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.we hope that he/she could meet the following requirements.first, he/she is willing to devote some of the those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the students’ union this week.students’ union

2、假设你是李雷，是北京一中的一名学生, 想要参加北京大厦的招聘工作，请你根据下列内容给公司经理写一份申请。

1.1991年5月1日生于北京；2.今年7月高中毕业，学习英语6年； 3.对英语感兴趣，尤其擅长口语和写作4.熟练掌握电脑操作技术，会编程，打字每分钟100。

注意：1.词数：100字左右；2.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯； 3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）。4.参考词汇：编程make programs dear manager, i am looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely, li lei 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：

教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等

授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）工作量：——每周12学时，任选三门课

——担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）

注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； dear peter, i remember you told me you were interested in teaching in china.our school now is looking for a please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions.i’d be more than happy to help.best wishes.li hua

（三）道歉信

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。

道歉信通常包括三部分内容：

1、表示歉意，道歉的原由；

2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；

3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。写作三步曲：表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。

注意：理由要尽量合理，违反生活常识将导致扣分；尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加顺畅。道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 i am writing this letter to express my regret? i am writing to apologize for ? i would like to give you my apology for? i am very sorry to say that ? i must apologize about(not)doing sth? please accept my sincerely apology for? i am writing to say sorry for? i am terribly sorry, but? 道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套句 once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.please allow me to say sorry again.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.i want to let you know how regretful i am feeling now.i am sorry that i can’t? and trust that you will be able to understand.书信作文优秀模板——道歉信 dear ______, ①i am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②the reason is that ______（介绍原因）.③once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.例文 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数120~150； how are you going? we made a plan that we would travel in beijing together next week.while, i should apologize to you because i cannot go there on time for the reasons as follows.first, i cannot deny that it can help us broaden our horizon and deepen our mind when we travel in beijing.however, the government encourages us students to go to shanghai due to the fact that the expo is being held in shanghai now.as the saying goes, ’strike while the iron is hot’.after finish my college entrance examination, i am eager to learn something about study from the expo to prepare for my education in college.in addition, i have been busy with the preparation of the college entrance examination for about half a year and got tired.i need some time to relax instead of traveling.for the reasons that i mentioned above, i want to show my apology again.and would you please reschedule your time? shall we travel in beijing after two weeks? i am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.yours, li hua 范文2：

directions: you were unable to attend mr.smiths examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use wang hua instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua dear susan: we’re planning supper at six;that will give us a nice long evening to talk.if i don’t hear from you before then, i’ll be expecting you on the [twelfth]!affectionately yours, li ming an invitation for a reception dear mr.smith: it would give [me/us] great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the chinese delegation.the reception will be held in the [the city hall], on [tuesday, october the fourth].cocktails will be served promptly at [six] to be followed b dinner at [eight].[i/we] sincerely hope you can attend.let [me/us] know.sincerely yours，li ming

（五）投诉信 假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点：1.问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换； 型号新，无配件，无法维修。2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。

注意：1.词数为100左右；2.参考词汇：配件—— spare part;dear sir，i am writing to you for the mobile phone of dephone-s250 i bought on 20th apr.2008 at tele mall in wuhan, p.r.china.ten days after that, it didn?t ring and send short messages.then i took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and i had to wait at least three months for a new one.later i went to the repairman.he said since it was a new model in china, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.i was so desperate on hearing that.how can i wait that long? therefore, i require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.thank you for your consideration.sincerely yours, bu manyi 2假如你叫李华，上周日在green supermarket 超市里买了一支“no-spot”面霜，你使用以后发现该产

品并没有广告中所宣传的功效。请根据以下要点向超市经理写一封投诉信，希望能解决此事。需包含下列要点：（1）广告中承诺no-spot 安全有效，能去除斑点；（2）谨遵说明使用，效果并非如此：

①有副作用—举例子说明； ②影响工作。

（3）要求赔偿医疗费；（4）发票保留至今，以备起诉使用。dear manager, i bought this cream in green supermarket last sunday.i still retain the receipt.last sunday evening, i applied the cream to my face following the instructions carefully.to my great surprise, when i got up the next morning, i felt my face tickling.during the following two days, this symptom became worse and worse, which greatly affected my life and work.yours faithfully, li hua(六）询问信 即寻求信息，征求建议、提议或求助之类的信件。

1、假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语（q吧）给他写封信。best regards, zhang hua

2、设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在mr．brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助 一本英语词典忘记带回

词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵 词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上 邮资自己付 mr．brown，im now safely back home．thank you very much for all the kindness i got from you during my stay．hope everything is fine with you there． now i wonder whether i could ask you a favour．when i came back, i suddenly realizes that i had left my english dictionary behind at your place．it is a precious gift from mu american teacher．would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? ill pay for the postage．the dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom．it is the one with a red cover． thanks and all the best． yours,篇四：感谢信格式以及范文

感谢信的格式和写法

一、感谢信的概念和主要特点 1.感谢信的含义

感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体（党政机关、企事业单位、社会团体等）或个人表示感谢的专用书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。写感谢信既要表达出真切的谢意，又要起到表扬先进，弘扬正气的作用。它广泛应用于个人与个人之间、个人与组织之间、组织与组织之间，用以向给予自己帮助、关心和支持的对方表示感谢。2.感谢信的主要特点

⑪感谢对象要确指

感谢信都有确切的感谢对象，以便让大家都清楚是在感谢谁。

⑫表述事实要具体

感谢别人是有具体的事由的，否则就会显得抽象空洞。

⑬感情色彩要鲜明

感动和致谢的色彩强烈鲜明，言语里充满感激之情。

二、感谢信的种类

感谢信依据不同的标准可以有不同的分法。1.按感谢对象的特点来分

⑪写给集体的感谢信

这类感谢信，一般是个人处于困境时，得到了集体的帮助，并在集体的关心和支持下，自己最终克服了困难，度过了难关，摆脱了困境，所以要用感谢信的方式表达自己的感激之情。

⑫写给个人的感谢信

这类感谢信，可以是个人也可以是单位也可以是集体为

了感谢某个人曾经给予的帮助或照顾而写的。2.按感谢信的存在形式来分

⑪公开张贴的感谢信

这种感谢信包括可在报社登报、电台广播或电视台播报的感谢信，是一种可以公开张贴的感谢信。

⑫寄给单位、集体或个人的感谢信

这种感谢信直接寄给单位、集体或个人。

三、感谢信的格式和写法

感谢信通常有标题、称呼、正文、结语和落款五部分构成。1.标题

感谢信的标题的写法有这样几种形式：“感谢信”——单独由文种名称组成的：“致鬃椎母行恍拧薄筛行欢韵蠛臀

闹置乒餐槌傻模骸白捉值乐伦拙缭旱母行恍拧薄筛行凰胶臀闹置谱槌傻摹?/p> 2.称呼

开头顶格写被感谢的机关、单位、团体或个人的名称或姓名，并在个人姓名后面附上“同志”等称呼，然后再加上冒号。3.正文

感谢信的正文从称呼下面—行空两格开始写，要求写上感谢的内容和感谢的心情。应分段写出以下几个方面：

⑪感谢的事由

概括叙述感谢的理由，表达谢意。

⑫对方的事迹

具体叙述对方的先进事迹，叙述时务必交待清楚人物、事件、时间、地点、原因和结果，尤其重点叙述关键时刻对

方给予的关心和支持。

⑬揭示意义

在叙述事实的基础上指出对方的支持和帮助对整个事情成功的重要性以及体现出的可贵精神。同时表示向对方学习的态度和决心。4.结语

写感谢信收束时表示敬意的话、感谢的话。如“此致敬礼”、“致以最诚挚的敬礼”等。5.落款

感谢信的落款署上写信的单位名称或个人姓名，并且署上成文日期。前者在上，后者在下。

四、写作感谢信的注意事项 1.内容要真实，评誉要恰当篇五：书面表达申请信

英语书面表达训练探讨

失分原因 1.不会审题，偏离主题 2.汉语思维，逐字翻译 3.句子逻辑关系混乱 4.语法错误

书面表达训练建议

(一)多读、多背好文章、范文，听、仿、看全面训练(二)限时训练 1.读题（定体裁）2.确定内容 3.确定时态、语态、人称等 4.写：时间（25分钟左右）；（收拢：基本词汇、句型）(附:关联过渡语)

1、时间顺序：first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin/start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, at present, lately, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment

2、平行对等类：and, both„and, as well as, as well, neither„nor„, or, either„ or„.3、转折关系类：but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand，4、因果关系类: for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to

5、空间顺序类: on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of, on the other side of, at the top/end of, in the middle of

6、解释说明类: to put it another way, that is(to say), in other words, such as, for example, for instance, and so on 7 表陈述事实的in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。8.表强调的过渡词：certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, absolutely without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, in particular，9、递进关系类: what’s more, what’s worse, what’s better, in addition, worse still, besides, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only...but also, for one thing„for another 10.总结类: in short, in brief, in a word, all in all, on the whole, to sum up, in general, generally speaking, above all, after all, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。

应用文

书信(letter)、日记(diary)、便条(note)、通知(notice)、请柬(invitation card)、海报(poster)、致词(speeches)、失物招领（lost and found）

书信

申请信、建议信、感谢信、邀请信、投诉信、求助信、祝贺信、高考英语求职信（申请信）

求职信的结构及常用句型

一、介绍消息来源;表明求职心愿

二、介绍个人简历，摆出求职优势

三、请求答复联系 表明感激之情

1)开篇点题，交代消息来源、写明写信的目的.第一段开头：写信的目的（purpose）i’m writing to apply for the job(求职)i learn from/read in the newspaper that„/i was told that„/be experienced in„

/i would be grateful if you could„ 1.i learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a „ 2.i saw from your advertisement in yesterday’s china daily that „ 3.having known that your office needs a „ i would like to apply for the post.4.i’m interested in the post which you advertised in yesterday’s china daily.5.i’m looking for a job as a„and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm.2)介绍个人简历，重点放在与所申请的工作相关的知识技能的介绍上，要有详有略.第二段：自我介绍（self-introduction）

常用短语: graduate from„ be good / skilled at„ enjoy doing sth / in one’s spare time„ / get on well with„1.i’m good at.../ i do well in.../ i master...well......2.i have a good knowledge of.../ i have the ability to...5.i’ll get on very well with my fellow workers.6.once i’m hired, i’ll devote myself to the cause of the...工作经历的常用句型：work experiences 1.i once worked as a...for two years 2.i was working as a...during the period of....3.in 2000 i worked....4.i’ve had the experience of...5.i’ve been...since...能力：

1、i have learned english for 8 years.i am very good at english, so i have been an editor of my schools english paper in the past two years.2、i’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.my grades are among the best ones in my department.第三段：表达盼望尽快收到答复的迫切愿望并表明感激之情.常用句式： i would appreciate it very much if you could give me the opportunity.thank you for your consideration./ i am looking forward to receiving your reply.结尾：

1.if i could have the opportunity to get the job i will be quite appreciative.thank you for your consideration.i look forward to hearing from you.2.i think i’m suited for the job.if you can let me have this chance i will try my best to do it well.expecting you answer.you can connect me by posting a letter to 3.i will be quite appreciative if i am offered the opportunity.thank you for your consideration.i wish to get your answer soon.4.i would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available.高考英语建议信

写作要点

建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3基本框架：

开头（beginning）：开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。（state your idea）主体（body）：对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。（reasons and evidence）结尾（ending）：呼应开头，重申观点。（restate your opinion）

（说明写信目的； 介绍详情，说明原因；提出建议；希望采纳建议，并盼望回复。）4 注意事项 1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合呼情理，语气要委婉礼貌。总之要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。

第三篇：高考书面表达

书面表达范文

例文一：

据说，中国有一半人在吸烟。许多男孩和女孩都有吸烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。

众所周知，吸烟对人身体是有害的。越来越多的人们认识到这个问题的严重性，但他们仍然乐此不疲。

吸烟能导致很多疾病。由于吸烟，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸烟导致的最严重的疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。

为了保证人们的身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。请立即停止吸烟吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.Smoking causes many illnesses.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happiness in my mind?

Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.例文三：

进入2l世纪，环保是引起世界各国重视的大问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对环境污染的看法。

1．污染现已成为全球问题。空气、河流、海洋、土壤的污染对人类和动物十分有害。

2．列举2-3种产生污染的原辆以及由此造成的严重后果。

3．希望人们都能采取有效办法，控制污染，净化环境，保护生态平衡。（平衡：balance）In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考题）

春节是中国的传统节日。请以Spring Festival为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一下人们是

如何欢度春节的。

作文必须包括以下要点：

1.春节是一个家人团聚的节日，人们从四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成员坐在桌边，享用丰盛美味的食物。

3.在春节期间，孩子们会很开心。他们可以整天地玩耍，不用上学。而且，他们还能

得到许多压岁钱。

4.春节也是人们休闲和走亲访友的日子。人们彼此祝福“新年快乐”，并希望来年有好

运。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.例文五：（2011高考题）

在一个人的成长过程中，常会遇到烦恼。其中之一就是我们的父母亲经常翻看我们的书包和日记。假设你将参加校园英语演讲比赛，请就这一现象写一篇英语演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

有些同学觉得父母不尊重我们，没有给我们足够的空间。我们不必为此苦恼，因

为我们还不够成熟，有时，无法作出自己的决定，我们需要父母亲的帮助。同时，我们必须和父母亲进行交流和沟通。毕竟，我们要成长。我们要发展自己的个性。我们

需要有自己的观点、自己的想法以及自己对事物的判断。但总有一天，我们会相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.Thank you.例文六（2010高考题）

假如你是王红，今年暑假即将毕业。请以第一人称给某公司林先生写一封80-100字的英文求职信。内容要点可用不同方式表达。

求职信必须包括如下要点：

1.今年暑假，我将于东方职业学校毕业。

2.在校期间我的专业是计算机科学。我曾获得计算机辅助设计（CAD）一等奖。

3.去年，在业余时间，我在一家公司兼职，我学了很多东西。

4.我想在贵公司申请一份职位。我相信我能胜任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考虑我的申请。期待着公司能给我一次面试的机会。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.Yours faithfully,Wang Hong

假如你是李华，请根据提示的要点写一份60～80词的请假条给张老师。

要点：

1、李华病了，感觉不舒服，头痛，疲劳，不想吃东西。

2、从昨晚开始就这样，看了医生。

3、医生仔细地给他作了检查，说他患了重感冒，开了药。要求他卧床休息两、三天，多喝开水。

4、今天不能到校，请假两天

Dear Miss Zhang,I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

（1）你怎样得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成为他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何帮助他；

（4）你盼望他的回复。

注意：（1）电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数；[来源:学&科&网][来源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）词数：100左右。

Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

第四篇：高考书面表达

书面表达（2011辽宁）

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学院毕业，你从报纸上得知BB公司要招聘一名中文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：

1.年龄；

2.学习情况及英语水平；

3.兴趣和特长；

4.性格特点.注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua—17 years old,and I ’m a confident and outgoing boy.I’ll graduate from XinXing English School in July.I happened to get the information from the newspaper that you are looking for an English secretary.I’m much too interested in it,so I’d like to apply for the job.When it comes to my study,I’d like to say that I’m very hard-working and I achieve good results in my study.It has been twelve years since I began learning English and I have had a primary command of the communication and hand-writing of English.What’s more ,I enjoy reading novels and history books ,in addition,my favourite sports is basketball.Last but not the least,I can most probably meet your demand.I’ll appreciate it if you give me an opportunity to make a contribution to the BB.Sincerely yours,Li Hua

文章注意事项：

1.17-year-old 不能用作定语修饰Li Hua，2.I’ll表示一种客观事实而I will多表主观意愿

3.Begin to do表示即将开始而begin doing多用于陈述过去发生的事

4.Enjoy表示做某件事的时候，喜欢享受，也就是边做边喜欢，而like只表示喜欢，没有去做的含义

5.History book直接名词修饰名词,表示直观属性

6.在文章中尽量不要用I think，需用时应该用It’s up to me(如果让我说，做决定的话),In my mind;In my opinion;I’d like to convey my view/point/idea/feeling that....;personally I think来替换

积累句型：

When it comes to....(I would like to say....)

I can most probably meet your demand(我应该比较符合你的要求)

书面表达（2011浙江）

假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100—120个词的心。信中应包括以下内容：

1.说明写作目的2.对这些行为提出批评

3.提出建议

注意：信的开头、落款及信的第一句话已给出

June 8,2011

Dear Mr.headmaster

I feel it a great honour to write to you!The purpose of my writing is simple but the issue is significant I think.These days,I noticed that some students in the school litter the ground with used paper or scribble on walls at random.After thinking about it for a long a long time.I decide to reflect to you.As far as I’m concerned,such behaviours are very rude manners and have a bad effect on the environment of the campus.In consequence,It’s high time that we took measures to prevent these phenomena from occuring again.What do you think?For one thing,you are expected to enact severe rules to prohibit littering and scribbling.Meanwhile,publishing the students who have the similar behaviours is also necessary.For another,you may as well call on us to pick up the rubbish on the ground.How I wish you could take my advice into consideration!I’m really convinced that with the efforts of every body,our school will grow better.Yours faithfully,LiYue

文章注意事项：

1.第一段最后一句I think 不放在句中要放在句尾，而在疑问句中I think常放在句中

2.没有In recent days要用These days替换

3.Notice指无意中地观察到，而observe多指专门观察（有时用于天文观察、显微观察等）

4.Wall可数the wall表示特指一面墙walls表示泛指

5.一定要注意and连接的两个并列结构或句子，例如连接两句话若同意主语一句用be动词一句用实意动词则and后加出主语，若都是be动词或都是实意动词则省略主语

6.注意主语，一定要看清，若上文没有提到或指代不明容易引起歧义的情况下要补出实实在在的主语，比如such behavious就不能用they来替换

7.Happen和occur

若事件用发生（happen）：accident,incident等

若现象用出现（occur）：phenomenon等

8.you should 如果想表达地更委婉用you are expected to do或you are supposed to do

9.I believe一般换成I’m really convinced that

10.I do wish语气生硬，换成How I wish that....较委婉

11.Grow 比be更加生动形象具体，还含有变的过程

积累词汇、短语、句型：

Reflect反应

For one thing....for another....May as well不妨...做好

You are expected to do

You are supposed to do你应该...I’m really convinced that我相信

How I wish that....With the effort

书面表达（2013-2014全市统考）

据最新统计，目前中国有2/3的城市缺水，大约3亿人喝不上健康洁净的水。你校学生会计划在高二年级开展“节约用水，从我做起”的英语演讲比赛。假如你叫刘畅，请你撰写一篇演讲稿，主题为“Save water,save ourselves”内容主要包括：

1.目前问题

2.提出办法（在家中刷牙，洗手时关闭水龙头：不要使用干净水冲厕所：提醒父母检查是否水管漏水：在学校不要扔掉未喝完的瓶装水等）

3.发出呼吁

注意：

1.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数

2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译

3.词数120左右：参考词汇：瓶装水bottled water：冲洗厕所flush toilet：

I’m LiuChang from Grade 2.The topic of my speech is“Save water,save ourselves”.As is known for us all,with the development of society,the issue of lacking water is becoming serious day by day.Believe it or not,nearly seventy percent of the cities in China are lacking in water resources and around thirty hundred million people are not able to drink healthful and fresh water.Consequently,something must be done to solve the problem,for example,taking off the tap when you are washing your hands and brushing your teeth,not using clean water to flush toilets,reminding your parents of checking whether the water pipe is normal.Last but not the least,don’t throw the bottled water away until you have finished drinking the water.To sum up,only if all of us make contributions to saving water can we eventually solve the water problem.Thank you for your listening.

第五篇：高考英语书面表达感谢信必备开头结尾

高考英语书面表达感谢信必备开头结尾

感谢信必备开头结尾

开头：

【例句一】我真的不知道如何表达我对你的帮助的感激之情。I really don’t know how to express my gratitude for your help.【例句二】我想表达我对你及时帮助的诚挚的谢意。

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help.【例句三】对你的好客表示诚挚的谢意。I warmly appreciate for your hospitality.【例句四】我写这几行文字是为了表达我诚挚的谢意。With deepest gratitude, I write to you here a few lines.【例句五】你做的给我们留下了深刻的印象，并且我希望我能对你表达我的感激之情对于那些我们曾经在一起度过的美好时光。

What you did gave us a deep impression and we hope to express our thanks to you for the wonderful days we spent with you.结尾：

【例句一】对你的慷慨的帮助，我必须再次表示感谢。I must thank you again for your generous help.【例句二】我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.【例句三】对你无私的捐赠表示感谢。I am most grateful for your selfless donation.【例句四】我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切表达感谢。祝你万事如意！I,(on behalf of)my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me/us.May you be blessed in everything you do.【经典文章】

假设你叫李华，现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。

提示：1．对老师教学的评价2．回顾在校时你的心情3．对老师的理解和祝愿。注意：词数100左右。信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mr Li, I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you.I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about.Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English.My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work.However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed.I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college.Thanks for your encouragement;if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream.And now I really understand you.I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges.Are you still so busy? How I miss you!Hoping to hear from you soon.Yours, Li Hua