第一篇:高考英语书面表达感谢信必备开头结尾
高考英语书面表达感谢信必备开头结尾
感谢信必备开头结尾
开头:
【例句一】我真的不知道如何表达我对你的帮助的感激之情。I really don’t know how to express my gratitude for your help.【例句二】我想表达我对你及时帮助的诚挚的谢意。
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help.【例句三】对你的好客表示诚挚的谢意。I warmly appreciate for your hospitality.【例句四】我写这几行文字是为了表达我诚挚的谢意。With deepest gratitude, I write to you here a few lines.【例句五】你做的给我们留下了深刻的印象,并且我希望我能对你表达我的感激之情对于那些我们曾经在一起度过的美好时光。
What you did gave us a deep impression and we hope to express our thanks to you for the wonderful days we spent with you.结尾:
【例句一】对你的慷慨的帮助,我必须再次表示感谢。I must thank you again for your generous help.【例句二】我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.【例句三】对你无私的捐赠表示感谢。I am most grateful for your selfless donation.【例句四】我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切表达感谢。祝你万事如意!I,(on behalf of)my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me/us.May you be blessed in everything you do.【经典文章】
假设你叫李华,现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示,给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信,表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。
提示:1.对老师教学的评价2.回顾在校时你的心情3.对老师的理解和祝愿。注意:词数100左右。信的开头已经写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Li, I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you.I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about.Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English.My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work.However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed.I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college.Thanks for your encouragement;if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream.And now I really understand you.I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges.Are you still so busy? How I miss you!Hoping to hear from you soon.Yours, Li Hua
第二篇:英语高考书面表达结尾模版
英语高考书面表达结尾模版
结尾万能公式
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英语实战演练:
十五、(2009.辽宁卷)假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。
要点:
时间:下周六上午8:00至11:00 内容:采摘苹果
报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00前 提示:带帽子、手套 注意:
1.词数100左右,开头已为你写好。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:社区 community 第二节:
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多余120的,从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
1.时间:下周六上午8:00 至 11:00
2.内容:采摘苹果
3.报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00前
4.提示:带帽子、手套
5.欢迎踊跃参加
【参考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本题命制稳健,是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。
第一步:审题
1、看要求:本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。开头已经写好,这样格式应该已经给出,审题的重点放在要点和要求上:要点有五项,注意有三项,但注意的第一项是重要的一项。
2、理思路:调整要点,讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间,活动的内容,要求、注意事项表达出来;然后再写5和3要点,这样逻辑清晰表达合理。第二步:写作
可以先在草纸上起草,用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达,要尝试最简单的复杂句,如用定语从句、宾语从句等,但句式不易过于复杂,要用一些恰当的连词,使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然。第三步:检查
作文写完后,最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗?时态、语态、动词的数、单词拼写对了吗?标点符号、大小写用对了吗?检查完后再抄写在试卷上,注意卷面的整洁。
【专家简评】
主题与考生学习生活或学校活动无关,但由于是以涉外小区为背景所开展的社区活动,主题空间更为开阔,因此该主题大体符合高考英语写作话题的一般思路,可以归类为外事活动。通常,命题以要点形式给出和以汉语题干形式给出,对考生而言,前者的难度要大于后者。因为要点内容的呈现一般看不出英语的句式结构,而如果是完整或半完整句式的汉语题干却能让考生比较容易辨别出英语句式结构。这本身就是一种便利。因此,对于各命题单位而言,这几种形式都应该依据整卷难度的分布情况加以合理配备使用,以免过难或过易。
十六、(2009.浙江卷)
5月1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果.打扫.聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。
1.时间.地点.任务.活动;
2.老人们的反应;
3.简短评论。
注意:报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不记词数)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【参考范文】
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
【解析】
本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文,选材贴近学生实际,有利于考生的正常发挥,考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。
【专家简评】
09浙江卷的话题和07湖北卷相似,又是志愿者,又是敬老,了无新意。但这并不就说明该卷乏善可陈。若从以考生为本的角度看,该卷第一次出现在题中直接给出汉语拼音人名,而不是汉语人名,这也算是一个首创。目的只有一个:避免考生出错。其实,遮掩在汉语拼音中的人名也让人看不出这个人名究竟是汉语中的哪几个字,因为对于外国人而言,字母人名只是一个符号,他们是无法想象汉字人名所携带着的鲜活感和亲切感的。
浙江卷前几年基本上是选择疑问句式的标题作文。例如:“Film or book, which do you prefer?”(06),请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题…(07),“Working Individually or Working in a Team”(08)。09年不在题中给出标题,却在文中直接给出标题,不知何意?不知这个对于检测考生的实际能力有何帮助?另外,虽然说的是新闻报道,但实际上是一个典型的叙事性质的短文写作。08年仅北京考了一篇叙事性质的写作。09年,除了北京继续考了叙事外,浙江也出现了叙事性质的文体要求。对于浙江考生而言,其写作难度应该远远低于前五年的写作要求了,应该是福。
十七、(2009.重庆卷)
国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动,正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华,经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件,向其推荐话题。
内容包括: 自我简介 写信目录
话题:我们应该感恩(thankful)推荐的理由 预祝活动成功 注意: 1.词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出 3.邮件中不能出现本人真实信息 4.请在答题卡上作答
【参考范文】
Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】
这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义,符合中学实际引导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点:
1.紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩”。
2.但自我简介、写信目录、推荐的理由、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开。3.注意分清段落层次,上下文的过渡。
【专家简评】
从写作文体要求看,重庆卷04年要求写记叙文,05年则改成议论文,近四年基本上是陈说性质的文体。就话题而言,近四年都与外事活动或外语学习相关。不过,09年的话题是涉外的话题征集,有些特点。六年来,三次短文写作,三次邮件(其中两次电子邮件)。李华同学出现3次(06,07,09)。总的说来,重庆卷一直比较谨慎,命题基本上没有超出全国卷I的范式。
十八、(2009.上海卷)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺(gardening),烹饪(cooking),防身术(self-defence),护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名),写一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括:
你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么 为什么想学这些内容 【参考范文】
Dear leader,I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses,such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening,because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing,I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more,I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another,after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。
Yours,Wang yue hua 【解析】
本文是书信格式,报名参加其中一门课程的学习,属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应注意如下几点:
1.先谈自己感兴趣的学科,从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科,这是写作的关键,过渡要自然;
2.再写自己希望学到什么,要把握实用性。
3.然后谈出想学这些内容的原因,结合现实,理由合情合理。4.在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化,适度增加情节
【专家简评】 上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条:题干短,话题一般与学习或学校生活相关,写作形式主要是议论性质,间或插以混合性质,给考生的思维空间大。还有一点,从不给出范文。09年的Guided Writing属于混合性质:陈说+议论。话题涉外,且与教育教学课程相关,是很好的话题。但对于上海考生而言,材料的提供是否过于丰富了些?!参看一下惜墨如金的历年上海卷,你就会发现上海卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息,以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个异数了。
【总评】
2009年高考英语全国卷地方卷共19套,短文写作共20篇(上海卷和广东卷各2篇,宁·海卷共享全国卷I的短文写作题)。综观2009年高考英语短文写作试题,我们发现最重要的一个特点就是关于地方或传统特色话题,也就是母语文化输出类话题增多(5篇),以前只是在某个年份、某个卷种中有这种话题的点缀,现在看来已经蔚成风气。这说明各卷种的命题者们已经认识到了母语文化输出的重要性、紧迫性和现实性,这是最令人感到欣慰的。
强化训练
11、(1分)
假设你是你校京剧爱好者协会的成员,在一次同英国中学生代表团的联欢活动中,你协会将出一个京剧节目。在演出前,由你向外国朋友介绍京剧的由来,按以下提示介绍:
1.京剧在中国很受欢迎,历史悠久,有200年历史,在清朝乾隆年间,乾隆对地方剧
有兴趣。
2.1790年,为庆祝乾隆80岁生日,他召集各地方剧团来京为他演出,4个来自安徽
的剧团在庆典后留在北京。
3.1828年,一个湖北剧团来京,在京常与安徽剧团一起演出,两种唱派合在一起,逐
渐形成了一种新剧种,被称为京剧。
4.下面演出开始,希望朋友们喜欢。参考词汇:
地方剧:local opera
乾隆年间:the reign of Qianlong
表演:perform
剧团:troupe
12、(1分)
你昨天去游泳患了感冒,今天早上头痛,医生让你休息两天。你用英语给老师写一个请假条。
13、(1分)
假设你是学生会的负责人,你们要组织一次英语讲座,请用英语写一个通知,把讲座的安排:时间,地点,主讲人,内容,以及注意事项通知大家。
14、(1分)
李华父亲的朋友陈伟是在美国居住多年的华裔。因陈伟的儿子陈小明明年要来大陆李华学校学汉语,陈小明来信询问学校情况,以下是小华回信的内容。
1.听说你明年来我校学习,我们很高兴。
2.我校是一所具有80年历史的老学校。
3.学校很美,有许多花草树木,两座教学大楼,一座宿舍楼。
4.学校设备优良,有体育馆、计算机室和大图书馆等。学生除正式课程外,还有许多
选修课,如:油画、打字、烹调等。
5.最重要的是,学校有许多优秀教师,课程有趣,老师既有知识又和蔼,非常愿意帮
助我们,我爱我们的学校,我真希望你也能喜欢我们的学校。参考词汇:
选修课:elective
体育馆:gym
宿舍楼:dormitory building
15、(1分)
写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。
魏明的美国朋友杰克开始学习中国文学,来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。魏明回信介绍鲁迅:
1.鲁迅是著名的中国作家。他不仅是作家,思想家,而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。
2.他的小说被译成多种文字,并被制成电影,如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片
深刻地揭露了旧社会。毛主席对他有高度评价。他的一些作品还被选入了中学和大
学课本。
3.认为读鲁迅作品对他很有益处。参考词汇:
创始人:Founder
中国文学:Chinese Literature
阿Q正传:The True Story of AH Q
祝福:The New Year’s Sacrifice16、(1分)
提示:为引进外资,进一步加快你家乡A城改革开放。你向一位外商介绍你家乡A城。
1.A城是一新开发的经济特区。它是一座具有三十万人口的临海小城。
2.解放前是一个小渔村,以渔业为主,没有工业,只有几所小学。
3.改革开放以来,许多外商到这里投资,经济增长很快,建立了许多大工厂、一个大
港口。港口与国内外许多城市连接。
4.教育有很大的发展,建立了该城第一所大学。已有三千人从该校毕业。我相信,A
城在不久的将来将更加现代化。参考词汇:
投资:invest
经济开发区:an economic-zone
港口:port
17、(1分)
11月11日,你将在家里为你的妹妹15周岁开一个生日晚会,写信给你的外国朋友Peter,邀请他来参加。晚会开始时间是晚上6点,将持续到很晚。告诉Peter每天晚上你都在家,请他给你打个电话告诉你他是否来参加生日晚会,并表达你盼望见到他的心情。
在信的开头告诉Peter你已收到他10月25日的来信,但由于最近一直忙于期中考试未能及时回信。
假设你现在的住址是北京西城区云梯胡同1号楼4门2号。
18、(1分)
给笔友保罗(Paul)的一封信 提示:
1.过了一个很好的寒假,在寒假中与父亲一起回老家河北农村。
2.吃惊于家乡的巨大变化。几乎村里每家都有彩电,许多家盖了新房。有的家还有了
摩托车和小汽车。
3.一位村民自豪地告诉我,他和一部分村民打算参加一个旅游团到国外旅游。
4.我表示羡慕他们,我对父亲说,将来大学毕业要回老家来,父亲也表示说他一退休
就来。
5.你的名字小海。
19、(1分)
张红从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书。写信应聘。以下是张红的简历。
年龄20岁,即将从职业学校毕业。专业:经济管理(business management)。学英语8年,会计算机。在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一,学习成绩在班上优秀。主要是本人喜欢办公室工作,相信能胜任秘书工作。如果能得到这个机会将十分感谢。
请以张红的名义向公司写信写聘。参考词汇:
职业学校:vocational school
专业:major
20、(1分)
给朋友小林的一封信,谈谈寒假生活。
1.寒假很忙,因为今年七月要参加高考。
2.每天埋头读书,复习每门必修课,做许多练习。
3.学习刻苦,每天学习10小时以上,累时看会儿电视,听音乐,但总不去影剧院。不
得不回绝亲戚朋友的邀请,只在除夕时打电话问候。
4.多希望没有考试,但又不可能,要尽力取得好成绩。考上渴望已久的清华大学。参考词汇:
必修课:required subject
埋头于某事:bury oneself in sth.参考答案:
11、(1分)
Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、(1分)
Dear Mr.Du,I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully,Li Qing
13、(1分)
There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2:00 to 4:00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION
14、(1分)
Dear Xiao Ming,I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua
15、(1分)
Dear Jack,I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming
16、(1分)
My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、(1分)
Doorway 4, building 1
Yunti Hu Tong
Xicheng District
Beijing 100037
China
November 4th,1995 Dear peter,Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!
I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves,Zhao Ning
18、(1分)
Dear Paul,How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!
I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?
Here are my best regards to you and your family
Yours Xiao Hai
19、(1分)
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong
20、(1分)Dear Xiao Lin,I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours Wu Qi
第三篇:高考英语书面表达的开头和结尾2
英语书面表达的开头和结尾
一篇文章通常可分为三个部分,即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体,直接影响到文章的质量。
文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下子引起读者的兴趣。
英语书面表达常见的开头形式大致有以下几种: 1.开门见山,揭示主题
文章一开头,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样 度假)的开头是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a “liar”,and is looked upon by honest people. 2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan”(去金山 旅游)的开头:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan.The bus ride there took three hours.The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.3.回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是: I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.4.概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world.But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.5.介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开 头是:
It was a rainy and windy morning.The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty.I was on my way back to school.Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.6.交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题 等。如 “Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种:
1. 首尾呼应,画龙点睛
在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效 果。如“I Cannot Forget Her”(我忘不了她)的结尾:
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life.I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.2. 重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾:
I love my home town, and I love its people.They too have changed.They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.3.自然结尾
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more.Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun.We returned home very late.4.含蓄性的结尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法,而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾:
Evening came before we realized it.We put down our sickles and looked at each other.Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.5.用反问结尾
虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,并具有特别的强调作用,引起读者深思。如 “Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我们要不要学做家务?)的结尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework.Don't you agree, boys and girls? 6.指明方向,激励读者
结尾表示对将来的展望,或期待读者投入行动。如“Let's Go in for Sports”(让我 们参加体育运动)的结尾:
As we have said above, sports can be of great value.They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter.A sound mind is in a sound body.Let's go in for sports.文章的结尾没有一定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是,一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语,以便使文章首尾呼应,结构完整
第四篇:书面表达感谢信
感 谢 信 dear______, i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _________(感谢的原因).if it had not been for your assistance in ___________(对方给你的具体帮助), i fear that i would have been_________(没有对方帮助时的后果).every one agrees that it was you who______________(给出细节).again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely 你的姓名
extend [?kstend] vt.延伸;扩大;推广;伸出;给予;使竭尽全力;对„估价 vi.延伸;扩大;伸展;使疏开
gratitude [gr?t?tju?d] n.感谢(的心情);感激 assistance [?s?st(?)ns] n.援助,帮助;辅助设备
感谢信
1)感谢信的写法
人们在交往中常需要相互致谢,收到别人赠送的礼物,得到别人的帮助、受到别人的慰问,都应该表示感谢。感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式。
感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情答谢他人,收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑,感谢的目的也就失去了。因此,写感谢信首先得真心诚意。
感谢信另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈,而应着重于具体的感谢事由。其次一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物、得到别人帮助,应及时写信予以答谢。否则,人家会对你的谢意大打折扣。
收到他人赠送的礼物应当及时写封感谢信,感谢信除了应写得真诚、具体、及时外,还应当特别提及所收礼物的具体内容,否则,泛泛而谈,使人觉得你不够真诚。为此,当你写感谢信时,应这样写:“thank you for your beautiful roses.”(谢谢您送的美丽的玫瑰花。);而不要笼统地写上“thank you for your beautiful gift.”(谢谢您送给我的漂亮礼物。),这样,使人觉得你既礼貌,又诚心,从而真正达到交往的目的。下面我们来看看具体的范例。
范例1 dear laura, i was truly enraptured beyond expression to receive your flowers which turned our living room into a garden.how considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday.you just couldnt have selected anything i had have liked more!you have a positive genius for selecting the right gift!the four years i spent with you at the college have been the pleasa ntest period in my life.i will cherish this memory forever.how nice it would be to see you again.you have been more than kind, and i wont ever forget it.my love and deepest gratitude, now and always!sincerely yours, jane 范例2 dear dan and laura, jim and i want to thank you for the beautiful salad bowl set.we are looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical wedding gift.thanks again for the lovely gift.fondly, minnie 范例3 dear mrs.gorden, id like you to know how much the week at your lovely house meant to me.i not only enjoyed myself immensely, but also i felt relaxed a nd refreshed as i havent felt for months.please give my love to helen.it was so nice being with her again just like our old days together at school.many thanks to you and mr.gordon for asking me.sincerely yours,jean brown 2)感谢信模板 date:_________ dear____, ①i am now writing to express my sincere thanks for____.②id like you to know how much your _____ meant to me.③you have a positive genius for ______.④i not only enjoyed_____ , but also___.⑤i shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life.⑥i _____.⑦i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.⑧ would you kindly let me know _____.⑨i will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____.⑩ how nice it would be to see you again and i am looking forwards to seeing you next time!i repeat my thanks again for your_____.please give my kind regards to your_____.yours truly, signature 信息提示
信件启首
①直接表达谢意
②表达出自己非常珍惜对方的付出/礼物 ③对对方一定的赞美
④ 对方的情意对自己的影响
⑤介绍自己的近况
⑥表达出自己希望有回报的机会 ⑦ 询问对方是否有时间
⑧ 表达自己回报的心情
⑨ 提出希望下次见面的愿望
⑩再次表达感谢
最后表达真挚的祝福
信件结尾与签名篇二:高考英语感谢信汇总
感谢信
1.表达感激之情,简单陈述写这封感谢信的原因; 2.详细说明要感谢的事由,措词更加具体真诚。再 次表示真诚的感谢; 3.向对方表达自己真诚的祝福,再次道谢。有时可向对方发出邀请。感谢信模板 1 dear ________,① i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感谢的原因).
② if it had not been for/had it not been for/ without your assistance in ________(对方给你的具体帮助),i would(not)have been ________(没有对方帮助的后果). ③ everyone agrees that it was you who ________(给出细节). ④ again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!⑤ please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely, li ming 感谢信模板 2 dear _____________ , ① i am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for _____________(感谢事由)。② id like you to know how much your meant to me.③ you have a positive genius for_____________(对收信人某一方面的赞美).④ i not only enjoyed _____________, but also_____________.⑤ i shall ever remember _____________as one of the most _____________in my life.⑥ i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating(报答).⑦ i will feel very honored and pleased if you _____________(表达自己回报的心愿)。⑧ i am looking forward to seeing you next time!⑨ i repeat my thanks for your_____.⑩ please give my kind regards to your________.yours sincerely li ming 1(2010年浙江省衢州市)假设你是某中学高三某班学生李华,高二多年来,经历很多次成功与失败的你,觉得自己似乎一下子成熟了许多,有一种真的长大了的感觉,面对紧张的学习,一次次的考试及今后的打算。。,你有太多的话想对关爱你的父母说。请以书信形式和爸爸妈妈谈谈。参考词汇 鼓励encourage /encouragement 对。。感激be grateful to sb.dear mum and dad how are you doing? 参考范文
dear mum and dad how are you doing? how time flies。i am now a senior three student ,enjoying many successes as well as going through a number of failures,which shows that i have really grown up.whenever i am thinking of these,i can’t help feeling grateful to you.it is you who first give me encouragement when i meet with difficulties,especially when i am not getting along well with my my studies.indeed,your inspiration seems to be a lamp,which offers me light of hope,courage and confidence.and more importantly,you are always teaching me to be good to others,and try to contribute to our society.yours sincerely, 2假设你叫王华,家住外地,暑假期间来北京游玩,住在朋友李海家里。李海为你安排了一周愉快的假期生活,还请假带你出去到许多地方玩。李海的母亲做了美味可口的饭
菜款待你。假期期满你回家后写信给李海表示感谢,并请他有机会到你处游玩。
请用英语写一封100词左右的感谢信。li hua dear li hai, yours, wang hua 3假如你是一名失学儿童,名叫李华,你有幸得到在中国工作的mr.brown的资助,可以重返校园。你给mr.brown写了一封信,内容如下: ★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园,非常感激;
★ 在老师的帮助下,学习有了很大的进步,受到老师的表扬和鼓励; ★ 决心更加努力学习,取得更大的进步;
★ 盼望见到mr.brown,希望他寄来一张照片。
注意:1.书信应包括以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数:100左右
dear mr.brown,i am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.i could not have returned to school without your help.thank you so much.i have been working hard since i went back to school.i have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers.they often praise me and encourage me.but for your help, i might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education.i have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.how are you getting on with your life and work? i would like to meet you in person, but i have no opportunity to do so.would you please send me a photo of yourself? thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!yours sincerely, li hua 假设你是李华上周参观伦敦时,你父亲的朋友rogers,把你照顾的很好,写一封信给 rogers先生,表达你的感激之情,字数100词左右,不得出现真实姓名与地址。dear mr.rogers, it is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for your hospitality and courtesy to me during my stay in london.originally i only wanted to call on you and gave my father’s regards to you, as it had been three years since you and he last saw each other.but you insisted that i stay in your house during my visit in london and took good care of my life as if i were a family member of you instead of the daughter of one of your friends.you really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.thank you again for your kindness and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality.yours faithfully, li hua篇三:2014北京书面表达(应用文)书面表达归类整理
书信类文体:包括求职信、祝贺信、道歉信、询问信、推荐信、感谢信、邀请信、辞职信等多种应用文。每个类别都有相对固定的语言模式,都有固定词语要求。
(一)感谢类
1、假如你叫李平,现在给住在北京的green先生写一封感谢信,green先生曾经是你校的外教,曾花了很多时间辅导你英语口语,使你在全市英语口语竞赛中获得冠军。你对此非常感激。这次听说green夫妇要回到你校访问。你很高兴 dear mr.green, how is your stay in beijing? yours sincerely, li ping
2、假设你是李华,因为英语成绩突出,已经被北京大学提前录取。请用英语给你的高三英语老师mr.zhang写封信。
内容包括: 1.好消息; 2.感恩,因为„..;3.你在北大的学习计划或对未来的打算; 4.对老师的关心和祝愿„ dear mr.wang, we haven?t seen each other for ages.how is everything going with you? i am writing to tell you the good news that i have already been admitted into beijing university in advance.actually speaking, you are the very person i should first say thanks to.it is you who helped develop my interest in english.without your help, i would not be good at english.beijing university is a place which i have been longing for.i am sure i will learn a lot there.besides my major, i will take part in all kinds of activities, which will surely do good to my future career.best wishes!
3、假设你叫李华,你在朋友王林家度过一周假期,昨天(2013年11月21日星期三)刚刚返校。现在给你的朋友王林写封感谢信,内容包括:
感谢王林为你安排一周愉快的假期;
简单回忆假期中的愉快生活,感谢王林请假带你游玩了许多地方;
认为王林的母亲是一位非常出色的厨师,美味可口的饭菜使你体重增加了5磅
再次感谢,并希望保持联系。欢迎他有机会来你校游玩。i?m writing to express my thanks to you for the wonderful vacation.i spent with you and your family.surely i ?ve spent a happy vacation during which you taught me how to swim, boat ,and fish.i really appreciate your taking time off work to take me around and show me so many places.your mother is a wonderful cook who can cook delicious food and i think i must have gained 5 pounds just a week i spent with you.i hop you ?ll be able to visit our school some time.(二)求职信、招聘信
假如你是校报负责人,急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑,请你用英文以“an english editor wanted”为题,按照以下要点写一则120-150字的招聘启事。1.描述主要的工作内容。2.希望该同学应满足的条件与要求。3.感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会(students’ union)联系。an english editor wanted our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its english edition.the job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper english articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students.the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.we hope that he/she could meet the following requirements.first, he/she is willing to devote some of the those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the students’ union this week.students’ union
2、假设你是李雷,是北京一中的一名学生, 想要参加北京大厦的招聘工作,请你根据下列内容给公司经理写一份申请。
1.1991年5月1日生于北京;2.今年7月高中毕业,学习英语6年; 3.对英语感兴趣,尤其擅长口语和写作4.熟练掌握电脑操作技术,会编程,打字每分钟100。
注意:1.词数:100字左右;2.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯; 3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。4.参考词汇:编程make programs dear manager, i am looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely, li lei 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:
教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等
授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)工作量:——每周12学时,任选三门课
——担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)
注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; dear peter, i remember you told me you were interested in teaching in china.our school now is looking for a please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions.i’d be more than happy to help.best wishes.li hua
(三)道歉信
道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌,道歉信要写得坦率,诚恳。
道歉信通常包括三部分内容:
1、表示歉意,道歉的原由;
2、出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施;
3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。写作三步曲:表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉,希望得到理解。
注意:理由要尽量合理,违反生活常识将导致扣分;尽量提供一个合适的补救办法,使行文更加顺畅。道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 i am writing this letter to express my regret? i am writing to apologize for ? i would like to give you my apology for? i am very sorry to say that ? i must apologize about(not)doing sth? please accept my sincerely apology for? i am writing to say sorry for? i am terribly sorry, but? 道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套句 once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.please allow me to say sorry again.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.i want to let you know how regretful i am feeling now.i am sorry that i can’t? and trust that you will be able to understand.书信作文优秀模板——道歉信 dear ______, ①i am truly sorry that ______(道歉的原因).②the reason is that ______(介绍原因).③once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.例文 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件: 1.表示歉意;2.解释原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数120~150; how are you going? we made a plan that we would travel in beijing together next week.while, i should apologize to you because i cannot go there on time for the reasons as follows.first, i cannot deny that it can help us broaden our horizon and deepen our mind when we travel in beijing.however, the government encourages us students to go to shanghai due to the fact that the expo is being held in shanghai now.as the saying goes, ’strike while the iron is hot’.after finish my college entrance examination, i am eager to learn something about study from the expo to prepare for my education in college.in addition, i have been busy with the preparation of the college entrance examination for about half a year and got tired.i need some time to relax instead of traveling.for the reasons that i mentioned above, i want to show my apology again.and would you please reschedule your time? shall we travel in beijing after two weeks? i am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.yours, li hua 范文2:
directions: you were unable to attend mr.smiths examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use wang hua instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua dear susan: we’re planning supper at six;that will give us a nice long evening to talk.if i don’t hear from you before then, i’ll be expecting you on the [twelfth]!affectionately yours, li ming an invitation for a reception dear mr.smith: it would give [me/us] great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the chinese delegation.the reception will be held in the [the city hall], on [tuesday, october the fourth].cocktails will be served promptly at [six] to be followed b dinner at [eight].[i/we] sincerely hope you can attend.let [me/us] know.sincerely yours,li ming
(五)投诉信 假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点:1.问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换; 型号新,无配件,无法维修。2.要求:公司应尽快予以更换。
注意:1.词数为100左右;2.参考词汇:配件—— spare part;dear sir,i am writing to you for the mobile phone of dephone-s250 i bought on 20th apr.2008 at tele mall in wuhan, p.r.china.ten days after that, it didn?t ring and send short messages.then i took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and i had to wait at least three months for a new one.later i went to the repairman.he said since it was a new model in china, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.i was so desperate on hearing that.how can i wait that long? therefore, i require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.thank you for your consideration.sincerely yours, bu manyi 2假如你叫李华,上周日在green supermarket 超市里买了一支“no-spot”面霜,你使用以后发现该产
品并没有广告中所宣传的功效。请根据以下要点向超市经理写一封投诉信,希望能解决此事。需包含下列要点:(1)广告中承诺no-spot 安全有效,能去除斑点;(2)谨遵说明使用,效果并非如此:
①有副作用—举例子说明; ②影响工作。
(3)要求赔偿医疗费;(4)发票保留至今,以备起诉使用。dear manager, i bought this cream in green supermarket last sunday.i still retain the receipt.last sunday evening, i applied the cream to my face following the instructions carefully.to my great surprise, when i got up the next morning, i felt my face tickling.during the following two days, this symptom became worse and worse, which greatly affected my life and work.yours faithfully, li hua(六)询问信 即寻求信息,征求建议、提议或求助之类的信件。
1、假设你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入到新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(q吧)给他写封信。best regards, zhang hua
2、设你是李华,作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年,寄住在mr.brown家里,刚回到国内。回国后,你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家,因此给他写了一封信,请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下:
感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助 一本英语词典忘记带回
词典是美国老师送的,非常珍贵 词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上 邮资自己付 mr.brown,im now safely back home.thank you very much for all the kindness i got from you during my stay.hope everything is fine with you there. now i wonder whether i could ask you a favour.when i came back, i suddenly realizes that i had left my english dictionary behind at your place.it is a precious gift from mu american teacher.would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? ill pay for the postage.the dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom.it is the one with a red cover. thanks and all the best. yours,篇四:感谢信格式以及范文
感谢信的格式和写法
一、感谢信的概念和主要特点 1.感谢信的含义
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体(党政机关、企事业单位、社会团体等)或个人表示感谢的专用书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。写感谢信既要表达出真切的谢意,又要起到表扬先进,弘扬正气的作用。它广泛应用于个人与个人之间、个人与组织之间、组织与组织之间,用以向给予自己帮助、关心和支持的对方表示感谢。2.感谢信的主要特点
⑪感谢对象要确指
感谢信都有确切的感谢对象,以便让大家都清楚是在感谢谁。
⑫表述事实要具体
感谢别人是有具体的事由的,否则就会显得抽象空洞。
⑬感情色彩要鲜明
感动和致谢的色彩强烈鲜明,言语里充满感激之情。
二、感谢信的种类
感谢信依据不同的标准可以有不同的分法。1.按感谢对象的特点来分
⑪写给集体的感谢信
这类感谢信,一般是个人处于困境时,得到了集体的帮助,并在集体的关心和支持下,自己最终克服了困难,度过了难关,摆脱了困境,所以要用感谢信的方式表达自己的感激之情。
⑫写给个人的感谢信
这类感谢信,可以是个人也可以是单位也可以是集体为
了感谢某个人曾经给予的帮助或照顾而写的。2.按感谢信的存在形式来分
⑪公开张贴的感谢信
这种感谢信包括可在报社登报、电台广播或电视台播报的感谢信,是一种可以公开张贴的感谢信。
⑫寄给单位、集体或个人的感谢信
这种感谢信直接寄给单位、集体或个人。
三、感谢信的格式和写法
感谢信通常有标题、称呼、正文、结语和落款五部分构成。1.标题
感谢信的标题的写法有这样几种形式:“感谢信”——单独由文种名称组成的:“致鬃椎母行恍拧薄筛行欢韵蠛臀
闹置乒餐槌傻模骸白捉值乐伦拙缭旱母行恍拧薄筛行凰胶臀闹置谱槌傻摹?/p> 2.称呼
开头顶格写被感谢的机关、单位、团体或个人的名称或姓名,并在个人姓名后面附上“同志”等称呼,然后再加上冒号。3.正文
感谢信的正文从称呼下面—行空两格开始写,要求写上感谢的内容和感谢的心情。应分段写出以下几个方面:
⑪感谢的事由
概括叙述感谢的理由,表达谢意。
⑫对方的事迹
具体叙述对方的先进事迹,叙述时务必交待清楚人物、事件、时间、地点、原因和结果,尤其重点叙述关键时刻对
方给予的关心和支持。
⑬揭示意义
在叙述事实的基础上指出对方的支持和帮助对整个事情成功的重要性以及体现出的可贵精神。同时表示向对方学习的态度和决心。4.结语
写感谢信收束时表示敬意的话、感谢的话。如“此致敬礼”、“致以最诚挚的敬礼”等。5.落款
感谢信的落款署上写信的单位名称或个人姓名,并且署上成文日期。前者在上,后者在下。
四、写作感谢信的注意事项 1.内容要真实,评誉要恰当篇五:书面表达申请信
英语书面表达训练探讨
失分原因 1.不会审题,偏离主题 2.汉语思维,逐字翻译 3.句子逻辑关系混乱 4.语法错误
书面表达训练建议
(一)多读、多背好文章、范文,听、仿、看全面训练(二)限时训练 1.读题(定体裁)2.确定内容 3.确定时态、语态、人称等 4.写:时间(25分钟左右);(收拢:基本词汇、句型)(附:关联过渡语)
1、时间顺序:first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin/start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, at present, lately, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment
2、平行对等类:and, both„and, as well as, as well, neither„nor„, or, either„ or„.3、转折关系类:but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand,4、因果关系类: for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to
5、空间顺序类: on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of, on the other side of, at the top/end of, in the middle of
6、解释说明类: to put it another way, that is(to say), in other words, such as, for example, for instance, and so on 7 表陈述事实的in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。8.表强调的过渡词:certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, absolutely without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, in particular,9、递进关系类: what’s more, what’s worse, what’s better, in addition, worse still, besides, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only...but also, for one thing„for another 10.总结类: in short, in brief, in a word, all in all, on the whole, to sum up, in general, generally speaking, above all, after all, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。
应用文
书信(letter)、日记(diary)、便条(note)、通知(notice)、请柬(invitation card)、海报(poster)、致词(speeches)、失物招领(lost and found)
书信
申请信、建议信、感谢信、邀请信、投诉信、求助信、祝贺信、高考英语求职信(申请信)
求职信的结构及常用句型
一、介绍消息来源;表明求职心愿
二、介绍个人简历,摆出求职优势
三、请求答复联系 表明感激之情
1)开篇点题,交代消息来源、写明写信的目的.第一段开头:写信的目的(purpose)i’m writing to apply for the job(求职)i learn from/read in the newspaper that„/i was told that„/be experienced in„
/i would be grateful if you could„ 1.i learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a „ 2.i saw from your advertisement in yesterday’s china daily that „ 3.having known that your office needs a „ i would like to apply for the post.4.i’m interested in the post which you advertised in yesterday’s china daily.5.i’m looking for a job as a„and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm.2)介绍个人简历,重点放在与所申请的工作相关的知识技能的介绍上,要有详有略.第二段:自我介绍(self-introduction)
常用短语: graduate from„ be good / skilled at„ enjoy doing sth / in one’s spare time„ / get on well with„1.i’m good at.../ i do well in.../ i master...well......2.i have a good knowledge of.../ i have the ability to...5.i’ll get on very well with my fellow workers.6.once i’m hired, i’ll devote myself to the cause of the...工作经历的常用句型:work experiences 1.i once worked as a...for two years 2.i was working as a...during the period of....3.in 2000 i worked....4.i’ve had the experience of...5.i’ve been...since...能力:
1、i have learned english for 8 years.i am very good at english, so i have been an editor of my schools english paper in the past two years.2、i’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.my grades are among the best ones in my department.第三段:表达盼望尽快收到答复的迫切愿望并表明感激之情.常用句式: i would appreciate it very much if you could give me the opportunity.thank you for your consideration./ i am looking forward to receiving your reply.结尾:
1.if i could have the opportunity to get the job i will be quite appreciative.thank you for your consideration.i look forward to hearing from you.2.i think i’m suited for the job.if you can let me have this chance i will try my best to do it well.expecting you answer.you can connect me by posting a letter to 3.i will be quite appreciative if i am offered the opportunity.thank you for your consideration.i wish to get your answer soon.4.i would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available.高考英语建议信
写作要点
建议信:作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2 对象: 1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3基本框架:
开头(beginning):开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)主体(body):对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的建议。(reasons and evidence)结尾(ending):呼应开头,重申观点。(restate your opinion)
(说明写信目的; 介绍详情,说明原因;提出建议;希望采纳建议,并盼望回复。)4 注意事项 1)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要合呼情理,语气要委婉礼貌。总之要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。
第五篇:高考英语书面表达技巧
高考英语书面表达技巧
通常,英语学习,听、说、读、写、译五项基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英语课程标准》,对九级语言技能目标英语写作有6点明确的要求。同时列出了写作技能与试题设计的要求和写作评价标准,其测试方式有五种。学生作文主要从内容要点、语言使用效果、结构和连贯性、格式和语域及与目标读者的交流五个方面进行评价。英语书面表达是英语语言基础知识和语法基础知识的综合运用,还要具有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力,要求内容清楚、意思连贯、结构完整、逻辑性强、主题突出、用词准确、文体恰当。一般,要文理通畅,非单纯地翻译。要答卷满意,平时确实需要长期的信心的培养,耐心的启发,由易到难,从简单到复杂,循序渐进地坚持内容、语言、语法、表达、结构、逻辑和卷面等进行规范地训练,而且训练有素。现在,不少学生对英语书面表达不予或不够重视。这并非完全意义上的写作,只要求用书面语言基本表达出要表达的东西。一般原则是:不多写、不少写和不错写。现结合存在的问题和多年的教学积累,谈谈高考英语书面表达应注重的五方面。用顺
审准题义,明确情景,看清要求。不少考生写作时,还有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解题的习惯,特别是不注意生词或短语提示,或干脆完全根据所给材料先后顺序逐一翻译。前后不连贯,层次不清晰,逻辑性不强。因此应认真思考材料,找到所要表达的主旨文意及线索,在线索引导下通畅地表达内容,增加可读性。为此,应注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示过度及连接的词汇,使之有较强的感情色彩。用对
对每一个句子都尽可能避免语法错误。通常错处出在:
2.1动词错误
(1)多用。
1)There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.(划线部分改为Five hundred)
2)A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.(划线部分改为coming或去掉comes)
(2)缺失。
1)He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.(遗漏处加be)
2)It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.(遗漏处加are)
(3)时态错误。
1)Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.(划线部分改为comes)
2)Class start at 8:00 am.(划线部分改为starts)
书面表达可能出现多种时态,但特定时间背景下时态相同。如人事物现状的介绍,应以一般现在时为主;过去的介绍,应以一般过去时为主;日记应以一般过去时为主;通知应以一般现在时为主。千万不要随心所欲,不假思索地使用,造成大面积失分。
(4)语态错误。由于汉语被动色彩不浓,因此英语表达易受影响,该用而不用,不该用而用be动词。如:
1)He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.(遗漏处加been)
2)The matter was happened two years ago.(划线处去掉was)
还有喜欢在动词前面加be动词。如:
3)I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.(划线处去掉am)
4)They are decide that they will study harder.(划线处去掉are)
2.2名词单复数混用
1)He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.(划线处改为800-word)
2)It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.(划线处改为ten-minute或ten minutes'')
2.3冠词错误
冠词属小词,重视不够,影响表达。
1)How do you spell the computer?(划线处去掉the)
2)We should treasure the time because the time is money.(划线处去掉the)用准
用准确地道的语言,不能生涩难懂,不合英语表达习惯。常见现象如下:
3.1单词堆砌
写句子,用语不准,而根据汉语句序进行相应的英语单词堆砌而成。如:
1)Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.(错)→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.(正)
2)Welcome you come back to our school to visit.(错)
→You’re welcome back to visit our school.(正)
另外,不重视掌握单词,写作时碰到生词难句就委婉地去解释,用模糊定义,语言生涩难懂,文意混乱,表达不清。如:
Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.(错)
→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.(正)
3.2使用Chinglish
英语作文,受汉语影响,虽语法正确,却不符英语表达习惯。如:
1)Our friends are all over the world.(错)→We have friends all over the world.(正)
2)My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.(错)
→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.(正)
语言转换功在平时。简明扼要,表达清楚,是关键所在。冰冻三尺,非一日之寒。用全
初学写作要简单完整清楚地表达,就要把握两个关系:
4.1完整不一定就句式复杂
一味追求新、奇、特、难,容易出错。如:
1)Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.(错)→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.(正)
2)It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(错)→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.(正)
4.2简单也不一定就用省略句
在不可省的地方省略,结构就不完整,句意就不明确。如:
1)He studies very hard and kind.(错)→He studies very hard and he is very kind.(正)
2)He doesn''t know what and how to do.(错)→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.(正)
另外,考试是根据内容和表达给分的,要点齐全,是直接因素。必须注意要点来源:
标题。有些需要标题,却粗心漏掉不写,造成失分。书写标题应力求简洁明了,有较强概括力和针对性,并注意单词字母大小写。
格式。不少应用文需要正确的格式,如通知的开头,常常要交待通知的对象;日记开头,常常交待时间和天气;信件的左上角必须注明写信人的地址和时间,下一行要顶格写上称呼,正文结束后,要有结束语,并签名。
正文。这是全文要点集中之处,应认真思考材料含义,理清大意,将所有要点逐一落实,并检查有无遗漏。
常识性。原材料不一定反应,但仍然重要,既属内容,又承上启下,增强文章可读性。如写通知结尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”,“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”;写参观欢迎词开头可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”,“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”,结尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”,介绍结束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”;写信结尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”,“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”
必须注意原则:不多不少。该有的不少,不该有的不写。整洁
文章写好后,应认真修改,不忙于提前交卷,避免大小写及标点符号错误,誊写应尽可能书写工整,布局美观。卷面整洁清爽就会增加得高分机会。
总之,了解、掌握、运用好以上五个方面,就容易得高分。