2018年高考考前英语书面表达大猜想下

第一篇：2018年高考考前英语书面表达大猜想下

2018年高考考前英语书面表达大猜想(下)重镑信息：国家教育部有关信息

教育部考试中心主任姜钢在《中国高等教育杂志》刊登的文章《坚持以立德树人为核心深化高考考试内容改革》透露，在命题工作中更加注重“四个加强”：加强社会主义核心价值观的考查；加强依法治国理念的考查；加强中国优秀传统文化的考查；加强创新能力的考查。业内人士认为，无论是发言者的身份，还是探讨的话题，堪称权威重磅。

反观近年全国卷真题，2013年I卷的“中国画”、2013年II卷的“中国结”、2015年II卷的“重阳节”、2017年I卷的“学习唐诗”、2017年II卷的“中国剪纸”均考查了“中国优秀传统文化”这个话题；其中2015年II卷的“重阳节去敬老院”还考查“社会主义核心价值观（孝敬老人）”这个话题。

大胆预测

笔者对全国卷书面表达的命题方向提出以下大胆的预测：

一、文体

1.稳。即文体基本局限于应用文中的书信体（含电子邮件）。

2.变。即可能会回避近年（特别是两三年内）考过的邀请信、求助信（请求信）、建议信、申请信、咨询信、约稿信。有可能倾向于近年未考过的祝贺信、感谢信、求职信等书信体；另外属于应用文的留言条也是生活中常用文体，也可能是考查方向（2009年I卷考查过留言条）。

二、话题

1.很可能会突出“中国优秀传统文化”这个方向。例如中国的四大艺术“琴棋书画”、文房四宝、四大发明、四大名著、国粹京剧、唐诗宋词、古代建筑艺术、文化遗址、中国武术、中医中药等等，与这些相关的话题均可能是命题的重要素材。学生应该积极参与中外文化的对话与交流，通过“讲好中国故事”，增强文化自觉和文化自信。在历年的书面表达中，自然融入了我国优秀传统文化内容，考生在学习外语、了解外部世界的同时，运用中国元素讲好中国故事，也考生在传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果的同时，增强文化自信。

2.可能是体现“社会主义核心价值观”，如“爱国”“诚实”“守信”等。实际上，这些也是中华优良的传统美德。

3.也可能是升学、留学、求职、招聘等方面相关的话题。

三、猜题（共49题，如下是1-25题，26-50题请继续期待）

自我们发出猜题的征稿启示后，老师们非常踊跃，到目前为止共收到稿件50篇，作为一个猜题活动，参与老师脑洞大开，都有不同看法，当中有很可能会考的热门题材，也有不太可能会考的冷门题材，现精选发布出来和大家分享，请老师、同学们自行甄别、鉴赏。

书信

邀请信广东 彭可勇

假设你是新华高级中学学生李华，在网上得知澳大利亚籍中学生David想来中国沿古代丝绸之路游览，他向网友征集驴友兼向导。你有兴趣做他的旅伴，请给David写一封自荐信，内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍；

2.你的优势；

3.希望能想成为David的驴友。注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文 Dear David，How do you do? I’ve learned from your post that you want to travel along the Ancient Silk Road in China during this summer holiday and are recruiting a tour pal and tour guide, so I’m writing to you to recommend myself.I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School.I love traveling and always want to travel along the Silk Road.I’ve done much research in my spare time.Therefore, I know much about every towns, cities and the places of interest along the road, including their history, customs and culture.More importantly, I can speak English fluently.I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua

广东 彭可勇

假定你是李华，你校外教David对中国传统文化很感兴趣。学校邀请著名书法家沈鹏到校举行书法讲座。请给David发一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加并介绍讲座的有关事宜。

1.讲座时间：5月15日（星期日）上午8:00—11:00；

2.讲座地点：艺术楼演讲大厅；

3.活动安排：听讲座，讨论及提问，观摩名家即兴创作等。注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

参考词汇：calligraphy书法； improvise v.即兴表演 参考范文 Dear David，I’m writing to invite you to thelecture on Chinese calligraphy which is the art of writing Chinese charactersand especially refers to the rules of writing with a brush.The lecture will be given by ShenPeng, a famous calligrapher, in the lecture hall of the Art Buildingon May 15th this Sunday.As far as I know, you like the traditionalculture ofChina,so you will enjoy it.The lecture will last from 8 a.m to 11 a.m, mainly consisting of three parts: one and a halfhours’ listening to the lecture, half an hour’s discussion and one hour for observingthe calligrapher improvising on the spot.I will be very glad ifyou come.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, LiHua

广东 李华军

假定你是李华，想邀请你的英国朋友Henry一起参加龙舟训练营，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.训练营时间，地点及参加者；

2.说明你打算参加的原因；

3.询问对方的意向。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.结语已为你写好。

提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp 参考范文 Dear Henry，I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.Knowing that you have a great interest in Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to invite you to come with me.This camp, to be held in the city park, will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese traditions and customs.For foreigners so fond of Chinese traditional culture like you, I’m sure that is will broaden your horizons and that you will enjoy it.I wonder if it is convenient for you to join me.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.Yours, Li Hua

自荐信广东 梁金凤

假如你是李华。近年全球掀起了学汉语的热潮，美国人Tony也是汉语爱好者，他在网上招募一名汉语学习顾问，请你给Tony写一封应征信，要点如下：

1.写信目的；

2.性格优点；

3.语言优势。注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文 Dear Tony，I’ve learned from your post that you are recruiting an adviser to help you learn Chinese so I’m writing to recommend myself.I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School.First of all, as an out-going, friendly and open person, I love making friends and helping them with their studies.Besides, I can speak both English and Chinese fluently.More importantly, in my spare time, I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs.I think we are sure to help each other make progress if you choose me as your adviser.I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua

广州市白云中学 李吉华

假定你是李华。2022年北京冬奥会正在招募志愿者。请给国际奥委会写一封自荐信，内容包括：

1.简述个人情况；

2.过去的志愿者经历；

3.参与志愿者活动的目的。参考范文

Dear Sir or Madam，I’m Li Hua, a student from China.I’m writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a volunteer of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.In terms of my personality, I’m outgoing and committed with a teamwork spirit.Furthermore, I not only have a good command of spoken English, but also have rich experience in volunteering.I’ve been a volunteer since I was a primary school student.As for me, it’s of significance to be a volunteer of 2022 Games.That’s because it’s a perfect opportunity to display China to the world.Therefore, I believe I’m qualified for the position.Thank you for taking my application into consideration, and I’m looking forward to meeting you at your convenience.Yours, Li Hua

河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假定你是李华，你了解到2020年北京冬奥运会正在全球招募志愿者，你想报名，请用英语写一封邮件申请参加，主要内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.自我介绍；

3.希望获准。参考范文

Dear Sir and Madam，I’m Lihua, a high school student.I’m writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for.Personally, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but it can make the visitors all over the world know better about our culture.On one hand, I have a good command of English.On the other hand, in the past three years I have taken part in many activities, in which I performed well and gained rich experience.More importantly, my skills in teamwork and sports contribute to my application for the job.Should you give me an chance of an opportunity of a personal interview, I would be most grateful.With best regards!

Yours，Li Hua

广东 李华军

假定你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会现正面向全国学生招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信，内容应包括：

1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历等；

2.个人条件：英语好，善于交际等；

3.承诺：提供最佳服务。参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam，My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.I was quite excited when I heard the Winter Olympic Games will be held in our country.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely.I believe I can do a good job for the games.First, I like sports and I am familiar with the local conditions.Second, I get along with others easily, which is especially useful for a volunteer.Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the games.Hope the games will be a great success.Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua

广东省韶关市曲仁中学 甘雪梅

假如你是李华，随着国外游客的不断增多，你所在的城市公园管理处计划在暑假招聘20名学生导游，你希望成为其中一员。请你用英语写一封求职信，要点如下：

1.写信意图；

2.个人情况。参考范文

Dear Sir or Madam，My name is Li Hua , a 19-year-old boy.I’m writing to apply a job as a student guide in the summer vocation.To begin with, as a senior high student, I’m used to practicing speaking English in everyday life.I often chat with some net-pals in my spare time, which really contributes to my fluency in oral English.So I can communicate with foreigners without any difficulties.Besides, I’m open—minded, quick in thought and very fond of social practice, which I think is a quality that a good guide should have.Above all, as a native of the city, I know a lot about its history and culture.So I’m sure that the visitors will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city.If I’m given the chance to be a guide, I’ll spare no effort to do it well.I’m looking forward to it.Thank you.Yours faithfully

Li Hua

推荐信广东省韶关市曲仁中学 甘雪梅

假如你叫李华，你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞期间打算来中国，他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。要点：

1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹；

2.叙述你推荐的理由；

3.表达你的祝愿。参考范文 Dear Mike，I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas.The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.The Great Wall of China is one of the great wonders in the world, which is visible from outer space.Because of its rich history and magnificent appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourist, scientist, and historians.The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.The view of the West Lake is simply charming.Different time and different weather make it a different scene.I’m looking forward to your arrival.There are many other wonderful places here.Wish you a nice journey!

Yours, Li Hua

广东 纪乐佳

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Leslie作为交换生来到你校学习。得知他对中国书法（calligraphy）很感兴趣，你写信给他推荐你校举办的书法学习班。内容包括：

1.表示欢迎。

2.介绍该书法课程（如时间、地点、内容和执教者等）。

3.邀请他参加该课程。注意：

1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文 Dear Leslie，I’m delighted that you’re coming to China as an exchange student.I’m writing to convey my warm welcome.I know you show great interest in Chinese calligraphy, so I’d like to recommend a course in calligraphy offered by our school.Calligraphy is the art of producing beautiful writing using brushes, which is not only a technique for writing Chinese characters but also a way to bring people inner peace.The course is given by Mr.Chen, who is experienced in this field and popular with students.It’s given at 9a.m.every Saturday in school library and is especially suitable for beginners, for Mr.Chen will teach the basic skills in calligraphy.Why not attend this course? I’m sure you will fall in love with calligraphy if you attend it and have a glimpse of the abundant traditional Chinese culture.Yours, Li Hua

北京师大明德文化发展中心

江节明

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Simon发来电子邮件说他准备暑假来中国旅游，想要你推荐两三座历史文化名城，请你给他回封邮件，并说明推荐的理由。注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文 Dear Simon，I am glad to learn that you will visit China this summer.You want to visit just a few beautiful cities in China.I suggest you should travel to Beijing and Nanjing, because these two cities have well preserved traditional Chinese culture and have numerous places of interest.Beijing is now the capital of China, which lies in North China, and Nanjing, a large city on the Yangtze River in South China, used to be where quite a few dynasties founded their capital.I believe you will enjoy these two ancient and modern cities.If time permits, you can as well visit another modern large city Shanghai, which is very near Nanjing.Hoping to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua

祝贺信河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假定你是李华，你的英国好友TOM在中央电视台主办的汉字拼写大赛中获一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.请他介绍经验；

3.盼复。

参考范文 Dear Tom，I’m lihua.On hearing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese character spelling contest held by CCTV1,I felt extremely excited.Congratulations to you!

As your best friend, I take pride in you!Your proficiency in Chinese character as well as your deep dive into Chinese culture has left a lasting impression.It came as no surprise that you won the contest.Of course, you deserve it!I wonder how you are able to have a good command of a foreign language.I really wish to improve my English, so could you please share with me your own experience and unique ideas on language learning.I would be grateful if you could write me back.Looking forward to your early reply.Thank you in advance!

Yours，Li Hua

建议信广东省韶关市曲仁中学 甘雪梅

近年来大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展，对此人们十分抱怨。假如你是李华，请用英语给报社写封信。要点：

1.交通现状及影响；

2.提出改进建议；

3.希望建议被采纳。参考范文 Dear editor，I’m writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic.Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development.To solve the problem, I’d like to put forward some pieces of advice.First, more streets and roads should be built.In this way, we can speed up the flow of buses and cars.next ,the number of bikes and cars can be limited, which can decrease the traffic flow.But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control.Meanwhile, it is suggested that buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles.What’s more, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.Yours, Li Hua

河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想学汉语。请给他写一封电子邮件，提出合理建议。参考范文 Dear Tom，Learning with delight that you are interested in Chinese and you want to learn it, I’d like to share some learning tips with you.To start with ,it will be a great idea if you watch some Chinese Tv programs , where daily communication is common.Additionally , you may as well read some Chinese stories suitable for your level , which is both fun and effective.What matters most is that you should make more pen pals.If so , you can have a good knowledge of Chinese.If you need any help , please don’t hesitate to contact me.Meanwhile, I truly hope my advice can be of great help to you.Yours, LiHua

河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom打算暑假来中国北京体验中国传统文化，来信向你咨询相关情况，请你给他写一封回信。内容包括：

1.游览历史名胜；

2.品味经典艺术；

3.品尝特色饮食；

4.体验中国茶道。参考范文 Dear Tom，How is everything going? Knowing that you are coming to Beijing for a tour to express Chinese culture, I’d like to share with you some typical cultures.To make you a good arrangement, I think you’d better first visit the most famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall and Palace museum, And then, appreciating Beijing opera will be a good choice, which will surely equip you with a sense of uniqueness.Besides, you can enjoy the outstanding food, such as Beijing duck.Of course, having a taste of Chinese tea is something you shouldn’t miss.Hopefully, you will enjoy your stay in Beijing.If you need more information, just let me know in advance.Yours, Li Hua

河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友JACK要在暑假期间回国，打算为他妈妈准备几件富有特色的礼物，特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件。内容包括：

1.建议礼物旗袍和中国结；

2.说明礼物原因；表达祝福。参考范文 Dear Jack，I’m glad to hear that you are coming back home during the summer holiday and you want to bring a few gifts for your mother that symbolize the Chinese culture.In my opinion, you can buy the following two presents.First of all, cheongsam, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman, Thus I am sure that your mother will like it very much.What’s more, the Chinese knot, which is pretty decoration popular with Chinese, is usually hung in the sitting room of our home.It stands for unity and good luck.Meanwhile, I’m convinced that it will bring good luck and happiness to your family.Have a good vacation and remember me to your mother.Yours，Li Hua

安慰信汉语书法大赛

假定你是李华，你的书法班的英国同学Sahna 因为在汉语书法大赛中表现欠佳而心情沮丧。请你给她写一封信表示安慰。要点如下：

1.表示理解；

2.帮其分析原因；

3.提供辅导。

汉语书法Chinese calligraphy 参考范文 Dear Sahna，I am sorry to hear that you didn’t perform well in the contest of Chinese calligraphy and that you are feeling discouraged.Anyhow, as a foreigner, you have tried your best.As the proverb goes, failure is the mother of success.Facing failure, you shouldn’t feel sad and lose heart.On the contrary, you should analyze the cause of your failure.As far as I am concerned, you are not well prepared for it and you need more time to practice more.Chinese calligraphy is a time-consuming art, so what you need to do is spend more time on it.If you want to practice, I am willing to work as a tutor to help you improve it.Yours, Li Hua

河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom 参加中国汉语水平考试（HSK）未通过，请写一封信安慰一下他。内容包括：

1.对考试失利安慰；

2.提出汉语学习建议。参考范文 Dear Tom，I am extremely sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK.Hopefully, the unexpected failure will not let you down ,for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met

As you know, language learning is never an easy task.However, it needs constant efforts and patience.As far as I’m concerned, you ‘d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really count.Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese materials as much as you can afford.More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made.If so,you will make rapid progress in Chinese.Wish you a good luck!

Yours，Li Hua 求助信河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假设你是李华，你的家乡苹果节负有盛名。你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Tom帮助润色。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件求助。内容包括:

1.求助事由；

2.求助内容；

3.表达感激。参考范文 Dear Tom，I’m writing to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor.When it comes to the apple Festival, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown.I, for a long time, have been desiring to write an appealing article to make it better known.However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find my English far from satisfying.As far as I know, you have such a good command of written English as impresses me a lot.Would you be kind enough to have my draft polished at your convenience?

I would appreciate it if you could take my request into account.Truly yours

Li Hua

河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

假定你是李华，前不久听了美国教授 Mr smith关于“读英语作品，提高英语运用能力”的讲座，受益匪浅，但仍有一些问题弄不懂，所以写信向他求助，内容包括：

1.自我介绍；

2.请教读英语作品时应注意什么；

3.推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。参考范文

Dear Mr smith, My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student.The other day, I attended your lecture on“ Read English works to improve your ability to your English”，which has benefited me a lot.However, in some aspect, I still need your help, so I’m writing to you today.To start with, could you please tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English works, vocabulary, grammar, culture, or something else? Besides, what’s the correct order to deal with the different aspects? More importantly, I’m wondering whether you can recommend some good works which are suitable for us, senior 3 students.I’d appreciate it if you could do me a favor.Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

广东省韶关市曲仁中学 甘雪梅

假设你是李华，擅长中国国画，且多次获奖，最近创作了一幅作品，给负责下月举办青少年画展的美国朋友Tom写一封信，请他展览你的作品，要点包括：

1.写信的目的；

2.作品简介；

3.期待回复。参考范文 Dear Tom，How are you? I’m happy to know you are in charge of a teenage art exhibition next month.As you know I’m good at Chinese painting and some of them have won prizes in China.Recently I completed a new painting which is about an old man fishing on the river.When you observe the painting, you will be amazed at the beauty of Mother Nature and realize the importance of having a peaceful mind.I wonder if my painting could be displayed along with other works then.Attached you will find a photo of my painting.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours , Li Hua

便条北京师大明德文化发展中心 江节明

假定你是李华，在你校上学的英国朋友David对这学期学校开设的选修课拿不定主意，你周末去找他准备一起商讨下，但他不在家，你给他写张便条，内容包括：

1.来访的目的；

2.选修课：国学、国画、京剧、武术；

3.你的建议。注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：国学——sinology;武术——martial arts 参考范文 Dear David，I came to see you but you were out.I’d like to discuss with you about your optional courses, as it is difficult for you to choose one from those four optional courses: Sinology, Traditional Chinese Painting, Peking Opera and Martial Arts.In my opinion, you should select one according to your interest.If you want to obtain a general knowledge of Chinese language, literature and some other aspects, you may take Sinology course.If you are interested in painting, you may choose Traditional Chinese Painting.If you just like acting, Peking Opera is the best choice.If you want to learn how to protect yourself, you can learn Martial Arts.So it is up to you to decide.Yours,Li Hua

描述广东省韶关市曲仁中学 甘雪梅

规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。要求：

1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。2.词数：80—100。

3.标题和短文开头已给出。

参考词汇：be friendly to…，help，study hard，come true 参考范文

My Dream

Everyone has his dream.My dream is to be a doctor.When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors.The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up.With the help of them, I was getting better.Now I'm very healthy.Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream.I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.To be a doctor is really great.I think my dream will come true one day.利弊分析河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 张云峰

共享单车发展迅速，已成时下热门话题。请给某英文报写一篇短文，分析共享单车的利和弊，并提出建议。参考范文

With the development of technology, bike-sharing is playing an important role in our life.It develops rapidly and now has become one of the most popular topics.Meanwhile, each coin has two sides so bike –sharing has its advantages and disadvantages.On one hand, bike—sharing makes it very convenient for people to travel in the city.You can find a bike anywhere whenever you want to go out.At the same time, its rent is low.More importantly, this can save time for people.On the contrary, its management is not satisfying.What’s worse, kids can unlock the bike and ride it.There is no doubt that such behavior is dangerous.What’s more, many people deliberately break the rules, like parking at random or illegal parking.Personally, it is important that everyone should obey the rules.In order to solve these problems, the government takes related measures to regulate this market.Only in this way can the bicycle sharing industry develop properly.13

第二篇：高考英语书面表达技巧

高考英语书面表达技巧

通常，英语学习，听、说、读、写、译五项基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英语课程标准》，对九级语言技能目标英语写作有6点明确的要求。同时列出了写作技能与试题设计的要求和写作评价标准，其测试方式有五种。学生作文主要从内容要点、语言使用效果、结构和连贯性、格式和语域及与目标读者的交流五个方面进行评价。英语书面表达是英语语言基础知识和语法基础知识的综合运用，还要具有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，要求内容清楚、意思连贯、结构完整、逻辑性强、主题突出、用词准确、文体恰当。一般，要文理通畅，非单纯地翻译。要答卷满意，平时确实需要长期的信心的培养，耐心的启发，由易到难，从简单到复杂，循序渐进地坚持内容、语言、语法、表达、结构、逻辑和卷面等进行规范地训练，而且训练有素。现在，不少学生对英语书面表达不予或不够重视。这并非完全意义上的写作，只要求用书面语言基本表达出要表达的东西。一般原则是：不多写、不少写和不错写。现结合存在的问题和多年的教学积累，谈谈高考英语书面表达应注重的五方面。用顺

审准题义，明确情景，看清要求。不少考生写作时，还有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解题的习惯，特别是不注意生词或短语提示，或干脆完全根据所给材料先后顺序逐一翻译。前后不连贯，层次不清晰，逻辑性不强。因此应认真思考材料，找到所要表达的主旨文意及线索，在线索引导下通畅地表达内容，增加可读性。为此，应注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示过度及连接的词汇，使之有较强的感情色彩。用对

对每一个句子都尽可能避免语法错误。通常错处出在：

2.1动词错误

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（划线部分改为Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（划线部分改为coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遗漏处加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遗漏处加are）

（3）时态错误。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（划线部分改为comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（划线部分改为starts）

书面表达可能出现多种时态，但特定时间背景下时态相同。如人事物现状的介绍，应以一般现在时为主；过去的介绍，应以一般过去时为主；日记应以一般过去时为主；通知应以一般现在时为主。千万不要随心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面积失分。

（4）语态错误。由于汉语被动色彩不浓，因此英语表达易受影响，该用而不用，不该用而用be动词。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遗漏处加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（划线处去掉was）

还有喜欢在动词前面加be动词。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（划线处去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（划线处去掉are）

2.2名词单复数混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（划线处改为800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（划线处改为ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠词错误

冠词属小词，重视不够，影响表达。

1）How do you spell the computer？（划线处去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（划线处去掉the）用准

用准确地道的语言，不能生涩难懂，不合英语表达习惯。常见现象如下：

3.1单词堆砌

写句子，用语不准，而根据汉语句序进行相应的英语单词堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（错）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（错）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重视掌握单词，写作时碰到生词难句就委婉地去解释，用模糊定义，语言生涩难懂，文意混乱，表达不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（错）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英语作文，受汉语影响，虽语法正确，却不符英语表达习惯。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（错）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（错）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

语言转换功在平时。简明扼要，表达清楚，是关键所在。冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初学写作要简单完整清楚地表达，就要把握两个关系：

4.1完整不一定就句式复杂

一味追求新、奇、特、难，容易出错。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（错）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（错）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2简单也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，结构就不完整，句意就不明确。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（错）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（错）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考试是根据内容和表达给分的，要点齐全，是直接因素。必须注意要点来源：

标题。有些需要标题，却粗心漏掉不写，造成失分。书写标题应力求简洁明了，有较强概括力和针对性，并注意单词字母大小写。

格式。不少应用文需要正确的格式，如通知的开头，常常要交待通知的对象；日记开头，常常交待时间和天气；信件的左上角必须注明写信人的地址和时间，下一行要顶格写上称呼，正文结束后，要有结束语，并签名。

正文。这是全文要点集中之处，应认真思考材料含义，理清大意，将所有要点逐一落实，并检查有无遗漏。

常识性。原材料不一定反应，但仍然重要，既属内容，又承上启下，增强文章可读性。如写通知结尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；写参观欢迎词开头可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，结尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介绍结束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；写信结尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必须注意原则：不多不少。该有的不少，不该有的不写。整洁

文章写好后，应认真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小写及标点符号错误，誊写应尽可能书写工整，布局美观。卷面整洁清爽就会增加得高分机会。

总之，了解、掌握、运用好以上五个方面，就容易得高分。

第三篇：高考书面表达

书面表达范文

例文一：

据说，中国有一半人在吸烟。许多男孩和女孩都有吸烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。

众所周知，吸烟对人身体是有害的。越来越多的人们认识到这个问题的严重性，但他们仍然乐此不疲。

吸烟能导致很多疾病。由于吸烟，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸烟导致的最严重的疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。

为了保证人们的身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。请立即停止吸烟吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.Smoking causes many illnesses.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happiness in my mind?

Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.例文三：

进入2l世纪，环保是引起世界各国重视的大问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对环境污染的看法。

1．污染现已成为全球问题。空气、河流、海洋、土壤的污染对人类和动物十分有害。

2．列举2-3种产生污染的原辆以及由此造成的严重后果。

3．希望人们都能采取有效办法，控制污染，净化环境，保护生态平衡。（平衡：balance）In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考题）

春节是中国的传统节日。请以Spring Festival为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一下人们是

如何欢度春节的。

作文必须包括以下要点：

1.春节是一个家人团聚的节日，人们从四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成员坐在桌边，享用丰盛美味的食物。

3.在春节期间，孩子们会很开心。他们可以整天地玩耍，不用上学。而且，他们还能

得到许多压岁钱。

4.春节也是人们休闲和走亲访友的日子。人们彼此祝福“新年快乐”，并希望来年有好

运。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.例文五：（2011高考题）

在一个人的成长过程中，常会遇到烦恼。其中之一就是我们的父母亲经常翻看我们的书包和日记。假设你将参加校园英语演讲比赛，请就这一现象写一篇英语演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

有些同学觉得父母不尊重我们，没有给我们足够的空间。我们不必为此苦恼，因

为我们还不够成熟，有时，无法作出自己的决定，我们需要父母亲的帮助。同时，我们必须和父母亲进行交流和沟通。毕竟，我们要成长。我们要发展自己的个性。我们

需要有自己的观点、自己的想法以及自己对事物的判断。但总有一天，我们会相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.Thank you.例文六（2010高考题）

假如你是王红，今年暑假即将毕业。请以第一人称给某公司林先生写一封80-100字的英文求职信。内容要点可用不同方式表达。

求职信必须包括如下要点：

1.今年暑假，我将于东方职业学校毕业。

2.在校期间我的专业是计算机科学。我曾获得计算机辅助设计（CAD）一等奖。

3.去年，在业余时间，我在一家公司兼职，我学了很多东西。

4.我想在贵公司申请一份职位。我相信我能胜任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考虑我的申请。期待着公司能给我一次面试的机会。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.Yours faithfully,Wang Hong

假如你是李华，请根据提示的要点写一份60～80词的请假条给张老师。

要点：

1、李华病了，感觉不舒服，头痛，疲劳，不想吃东西。

2、从昨晚开始就这样，看了医生。

3、医生仔细地给他作了检查，说他患了重感冒，开了药。要求他卧床休息两、三天，多喝开水。

4、今天不能到校，请假两天

Dear Miss Zhang,I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

（1）你怎样得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成为他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何帮助他；

（4）你盼望他的回复。

注意：（1）电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数；[来源:学&科&网][来源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）词数：100左右。

Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

第四篇：2011福建高考英语书面表达

2010福建高考英语书面表达

写演讲辞

去澳大利亚做演讲——主题是“水资源短缺”

材料提供三点措施：1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的观点

水资源问题：

Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming less and less.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.作为一名中学生，你是如何参与环保这项活动？

As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread message about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面临水资源危机，请你根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文。1.人们以为淡水是取之不尽的（提示：雨水、河水、井水„„）2.实际上淡水是非常紧缺的（提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染„„）3.人类应该怎么办？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor

k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有关环境保护水资源的英语作文5篇

有关环境保护的英语作文：水资源是有限的人们总以为淡水是取之不尽的，实际上淡水资源是很有限的。请谈谈你的看法。

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.Water

Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.水

水对生物很重要，没有水，地球上就没有生命。所有的动植物都需要水。人

类也需要水。

水几乎无处不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空气中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固态、液态和气态。当它是固态时，它可以像砖一样硬；当它是液态时，你可以将它从容器中倒出；当它是气态时，你看不见或感觉不到它。

虽然地球表面70％是水覆盖着，世界上仍有许多地方缺水。所以我们要好好利用地球上的水。

The Importance of Water

As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people's life and production, t,ife couldn't go on without water.With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can't live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health.In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.水的重要性

正如我们所了解的，动植物需要水，人类的生产生活也需要水。没有水便没有生命。

随着工农业的迅速发展，水的需要量越来越大。因此，许多地方缺水。而且，许多河流湖泊被工厂排放的污水所污染，鱼不能生存。同时，废水给人们的健康带来极大的危害。

为了保持河流湖泊清洁，防止水污染，我们必须采取措施，阻止各种污染。

环境日英语作文：关于河水污染的感想

根据下列提示写一篇关于河水污染的感想。

1.上星期天，你随父亲去钓鱼，看见河水污染，几乎钓不到鱼。

2.河水被污染的原因。

3.倘若全国各地的河水都被污染，后果如何？

4.环境污染对人类危害极大，我国政府正在努力采取措施与污染作斗争。

5.希望在不久的将来，河水会变干净。

词数 100~130.Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this，no living things will exist in the water.As we all know，environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.环境日英语作文：Water Pollution-水污染

Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.春天是一年中最好的季节，天气变得越来越暖和。我和我的同学们进行了一次环城一日游，所到之处景色宜人。但当我看到沿着城区流过的河流时，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。

随着现代工农业的发展，越来越多的污水排进河里，河水被严重污染。河水变得如此的肮脏以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水发出难闻的气味。

我们急切呼吁采取措施改变这种状况。政府应当建立各种设备，例如污水处理厂，并且鼓励科学家们想出更多更好的办法以减少水污染。

水是生命之源，保护水资源十分重要。

My classmates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried

about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as possible.At last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”

今年春天，我和我的同学去春游，我们玩得都很高兴。但同时，我也注意到我们城市的水污染变得越来越严重了。

沿途我们看到许多妇女在河边洗衣，河面上漂着垃圾，一家化工厂正将废水排入河中。河中看不到一条鱼，河水也不像从前那样清澈了，水质很差。对此我深感担忧，因为水对于所有生物都非常重要。没有水人类将无法生存。我希望人们能多关注这个问题，特别是政府部门，争取及早解决水污染问题。最后，我想说“保护水就是保护生命。”

第五篇：英语高考书面表达结尾模版

英语高考书面表达结尾模版

结尾万能公式

1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英语实战演练：

十五、（2009.辽宁卷）假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。

要点：

时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00 内容：采摘苹果

报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：带帽子、手套 注意：

1.词数100左右，开头已为你写好。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：社区 community 第二节：

一、评分原则

1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3.词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

6.如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1.时间：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00

2.内容：采摘苹果

3.报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前

4.提示：带帽子、手套

5.欢迎踊跃参加

【参考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本题命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。

第一步：审题

1、看要求：本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。开头已经写好，这样格式应该已经给出，审题的重点放在要点和要求上：要点有五项，注意有三项，但注意的第一项是重要的一项。

2、理思路：调整要点，讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间，活动的内容，要求、注意事项表达出来；然后再写5和3要点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理。第二步：写作

可以先在草纸上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，要尝试最简单的复杂句，如用定语从句、宾语从句等，但句式不易过于复杂，要用一些恰当的连词，使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然。第三步：检查

作文写完后，最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗？时态、语态、动词的数、单词拼写对了吗？标点符号、大小写用对了吗？检查完后再抄写在试卷上，注意卷面的整洁。

【专家简评】

主题与考生学习生活或学校活动无关，但由于是以涉外小区为背景所开展的社区活动，主题空间更为开阔，因此该主题大体符合高考英语写作话题的一般思路，可以归类为外事活动。通常，命题以要点形式给出和以汉语题干形式给出，对考生而言，前者的难度要大于后者。因为要点内容的呈现一般看不出英语的句式结构，而如果是完整或半完整句式的汉语题干却能让考生比较容易辨别出英语句式结构。这本身就是一种便利。因此，对于各命题单位而言，这几种形式都应该依据整卷难度的分布情况加以合理配备使用，以免过难或过易。

十六、（2009.浙江卷）

5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果.打扫.聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。

1.时间.地点.任务.活动；

2.老人们的反应；

3.简短评论。

注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不记词数）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【参考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

【解析】

本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文，选材贴近学生实际，有利于考生的正常发挥，考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。

【专家简评】

09浙江卷的话题和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了无新意。但这并不就说明该卷乏善可陈。若从以考生为本的角度看，该卷第一次出现在题中直接给出汉语拼音人名，而不是汉语人名，这也算是一个首创。目的只有一个：避免考生出错。其实，遮掩在汉语拼音中的人名也让人看不出这个人名究竟是汉语中的哪几个字，因为对于外国人而言，字母人名只是一个符号，他们是无法想象汉字人名所携带着的鲜活感和亲切感的。

浙江卷前几年基本上是选择疑问句式的标题作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在题中给出标题，却在文中直接给出标题，不知何意？不知这个对于检测考生的实际能力有何帮助？另外，虽然说的是新闻报道，但实际上是一个典型的叙事性质的短文写作。08年仅北京考了一篇叙事性质的写作。09年，除了北京继续考了叙事外，浙江也出现了叙事性质的文体要求。对于浙江考生而言，其写作难度应该远远低于前五年的写作要求了，应该是福。

十七、（2009.重庆卷）

国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。

内容包括： 自我简介 写信目录

话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）推荐的理由 预祝活动成功 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出 3.邮件中不能出现本人真实信息 4.请在答题卡上作答

【参考范文】

Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】

这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义，符合中学实际引导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点：

1.紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩”。

2.但自我简介、写信目录、推荐的理由、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开。3.注意分清段落层次，上下文的过渡。

【专家简评】

从写作文体要求看，重庆卷04年要求写记叙文，05年则改成议论文，近四年基本上是陈说性质的文体。就话题而言，近四年都与外事活动或外语学习相关。不过，09年的话题是涉外的话题征集，有些特点。六年来，三次短文写作，三次邮件（其中两次电子邮件）。李华同学出现3次（06，07，09）。总的说来，重庆卷一直比较谨慎，命题基本上没有超出全国卷I的范式。

十八、（2009.上海卷）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：

你感兴趣的课程

你期望从这门课程中学到什么 为什么想学这些内容 【参考范文】

Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。

Yours，Wang yue hua 【解析】

本文是书信格式，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应注意如下几点：

1.先谈自己感兴趣的学科，从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科，这是写作的关键，过渡要自然；

2.再写自己希望学到什么，要把握实用性。

3.然后谈出想学这些内容的原因，结合现实，理由合情合理。4.在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化，适度增加情节

【专家简评】 上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条：题干短，话题一般与学习或学校生活相关，写作形式主要是议论性质，间或插以混合性质，给考生的思维空间大。还有一点，从不给出范文。09年的Guided Writing属于混合性质：陈说+议论。话题涉外，且与教育教学课程相关，是很好的话题。但对于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否过于丰富了些？！参看一下惜墨如金的历年上海卷，你就会发现上海卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息，以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个异数了。

【总评】

2009年高考英语全国卷地方卷共19套，短文写作共20篇（上海卷和广东卷各2篇，宁·海卷共享全国卷I的短文写作题）。综观2009年高考英语短文写作试题，我们发现最重要的一个特点就是关于地方或传统特色话题，也就是母语文化输出类话题增多（5篇），以前只是在某个年份、某个卷种中有这种话题的点缀，现在看来已经蔚成风气。这说明各卷种的命题者们已经认识到了母语文化输出的重要性、紧迫性和现实性，这是最令人感到欣慰的。

强化训练

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假设你是你校京剧爱好者协会的成员，在一次同英国中学生代表团的联欢活动中，你协会将出一个京剧节目。在演出前，由你向外国朋友介绍京剧的由来，按以下提示介绍：

1．京剧在中国很受欢迎，历史悠久，有200年历史，在清朝乾隆年间，乾隆对地方剧

有兴趣。

2．1790年，为庆祝乾隆80岁生日，他召集各地方剧团来京为他演出，4个来自安徽

的剧团在庆典后留在北京。

3．1828年，一个湖北剧团来京，在京常与安徽剧团一起演出，两种唱派合在一起，逐

渐形成了一种新剧种，被称为京剧。

4．下面演出开始，希望朋友们喜欢。参考词汇：

地方剧：local opera

乾隆年间：the reign of Qianlong

表演：perform

剧团：troupe

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你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上头痛，医生让你休息两天。你用英语给老师写一个请假条。

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假设你是学生会的负责人，你们要组织一次英语讲座，请用英语写一个通知，把讲座的安排：时间，地点，主讲人，内容，以及注意事项通知大家。

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李华父亲的朋友陈伟是在美国居住多年的华裔。因陈伟的儿子陈小明明年要来大陆李华学校学汉语，陈小明来信询问学校情况，以下是小华回信的内容。

1．听说你明年来我校学习，我们很高兴。

2．我校是一所具有80年历史的老学校。

3．学校很美，有许多花草树木，两座教学大楼，一座宿舍楼。

4．学校设备优良，有体育馆、计算机室和大图书馆等。学生除正式课程外，还有许多

选修课，如：油画、打字、烹调等。

5．最重要的是，学校有许多优秀教师，课程有趣，老师既有知识又和蔼，非常愿意帮

助我们，我爱我们的学校，我真希望你也能喜欢我们的学校。参考词汇：

选修课：elective

体育馆：gym

宿舍楼：dormitory building

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写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。

魏明的美国朋友杰克开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。魏明回信介绍鲁迅：

1．鲁迅是著名的中国作家。他不仅是作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。

2．他的小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片

深刻地揭露了旧社会。毛主席对他有高度评价。他的一些作品还被选入了中学和大

学课本。

3．认为读鲁迅作品对他很有益处。参考词汇：

创始人：Founder

中国文学：Chinese Literature

阿Q正传：The True Story of AH Q

祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice16、（1分）

提示：为引进外资，进一步加快你家乡A城改革开放。你向一位外商介绍你家乡A城。

1．A城是一新开发的经济特区。它是一座具有三十万人口的临海小城。

2．解放前是一个小渔村，以渔业为主，没有工业，只有几所小学。

3．改革开放以来，许多外商到这里投资，经济增长很快，建立了许多大工厂、一个大

港口。港口与国内外许多城市连接。

4．教育有很大的发展，建立了该城第一所大学。已有三千人从该校毕业。我相信，A

城在不久的将来将更加现代化。参考词汇：

投资：invest

经济开发区：an economic-zone

港口：port

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11月11日，你将在家里为你的妹妹15周岁开一个生日晚会，写信给你的外国朋友Peter，邀请他来参加。晚会开始时间是晚上6点，将持续到很晚。告诉Peter每天晚上你都在家，请他给你打个电话告诉你他是否来参加生日晚会，并表达你盼望见到他的心情。

在信的开头告诉Peter你已收到他10月25日的来信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考试未能及时回信。

假设你现在的住址是北京西城区云梯胡同1号楼4门2号。

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给笔友保罗(Paul)的一封信 提示：

1．过了一个很好的寒假，在寒假中与父亲一起回老家河北农村。

2．吃惊于家乡的巨大变化。几乎村里每家都有彩电，许多家盖了新房。有的家还有了

摩托车和小汽车。

3．一位村民自豪地告诉我，他和一部分村民打算参加一个旅游团到国外旅游。

4．我表示羡慕他们，我对父亲说，将来大学毕业要回老家来，父亲也表示说他一退休

就来。

5．你的名字小海。

19、（1分）

张红从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书。写信应聘。以下是张红的简历。

年龄20岁，即将从职业学校毕业。专业：经济管理（business management）。学英语8年，会计算机。在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一，学习成绩在班上优秀。主要是本人喜欢办公室工作，相信能胜任秘书工作。如果能得到这个机会将十分感谢。

请以张红的名义向公司写信写聘。参考词汇：

职业学校：vocational school

专业：major

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给朋友小林的一封信，谈谈寒假生活。

1．寒假很忙，因为今年七月要参加高考。

2．每天埋头读书，复习每门必修课，做许多练习。

3．学习刻苦，每天学习10小时以上，累时看会儿电视，听音乐，但总不去影剧院。不

得不回绝亲戚朋友的邀请，只在除夕时打电话问候。

4．多希望没有考试，但又不可能，要尽力取得好成绩。考上渴望已久的清华大学。参考词汇：

必修课：required subject

埋头于某事：bury oneself in sth.参考答案：

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Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、（1分）

Dear Mr.Du，I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully，Li Qing

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There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2：00 to 4：00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION

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Dear Xiao Ming，I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua

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Dear Jack，I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming

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My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、（1分）

Doorway 4, building 1

Yunti Hu Tong

Xicheng District

Beijing 100037

China

November 4th,1995 Dear peter，Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!

I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves，Zhao Ning

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Dear Paul，How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!

I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?

Here are my best regards to you and your family

Yours Xiao Hai

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Dear Sir：

How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong

20、（1分）Dear Xiao Lin，I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!

Yours Wu Qi