第一篇：书面表达感谢信
感 谢 信 dear______, i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _________(感谢的原因).if it had not been for your assistance in ___________(对方给你的具体帮助), i fear that i would have been_________(没有对方帮助时的后果).every one agrees that it was you who______________(给出细节).again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely 你的姓名
extend [?kstend] vt.延伸；扩大；推广；伸出；给予；使竭尽全力；对„估价 vi.延伸；扩大；伸展；使疏开
gratitude [gr?t?tju?d] n.感谢（的心情）；感激 assistance [?s?st(?)ns] n.援助，帮助；辅助设备
感谢信
1）感谢信的写法
人们在交往中常需要相互致谢，收到别人赠送的礼物，得到别人的帮助、受到别人的慰问，都应该表示感谢。感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式。
感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情答谢他人，收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑，感谢的目的也就失去了。因此，写感谢信首先得真心诚意。
感谢信另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈，而应着重于具体的感谢事由。其次一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物、得到别人帮助，应及时写信予以答谢。否则，人家会对你的谢意大打折扣。
收到他人赠送的礼物应当及时写封感谢信，感谢信除了应写得真诚、具体、及时外，还应当特别提及所收礼物的具体内容，否则，泛泛而谈，使人觉得你不够真诚。为此，当你写感谢信时，应这样写：“thank you for your beautiful roses.”(谢谢您送的美丽的玫瑰花。)；而不要笼统地写上“thank you for your beautiful gift.”(谢谢您送给我的漂亮礼物。)，这样，使人觉得你既礼貌，又诚心，从而真正达到交往的目的。下面我们来看看具体的范例。
范例1 dear laura, i was truly enraptured beyond expression to receive your flowers which turned our living room into a garden.how considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday.you just couldnt have selected anything i had have liked more!you have a positive genius for selecting the right gift!the four years i spent with you at the college have been the pleasa ntest period in my life.i will cherish this memory forever.how nice it would be to see you again.you have been more than kind, and i wont ever forget it.my love and deepest gratitude, now and always!sincerely yours, jane 范例2 dear dan and laura, jim and i want to thank you for the beautiful salad bowl set.we are looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical wedding gift.thanks again for the lovely gift.fondly, minnie 范例3 dear mrs.gorden, id like you to know how much the week at your lovely house meant to me.i not only enjoyed myself immensely, but also i felt relaxed a nd refreshed as i havent felt for months.please give my love to helen.it was so nice being with her again just like our old days together at school.many thanks to you and mr.gordon for asking me.sincerely yours，jean brown 2）感谢信模板 date：_________ dear____, ①i am now writing to express my sincere thanks for____.②id like you to know how much your _____ meant to me.③you have a positive genius for ______.④i not only enjoyed_____ , but also___.⑤i shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life.⑥i _____.⑦i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.⑧ would you kindly let me know _____.⑨i will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____.⑩ how nice it would be to see you again and i am looking forwards to seeing you next time!i repeat my thanks again for your_____.please give my kind regards to your_____.yours truly, signature 信息提示
信件启首
①直接表达谢意
②表达出自己非常珍惜对方的付出/礼物 ③对对方一定的赞美
④ 对方的情意对自己的影响
⑤介绍自己的近况
⑥表达出自己希望有回报的机会 ⑦ 询问对方是否有时间
⑧ 表达自己回报的心情
⑨ 提出希望下次见面的愿望
⑩再次表达感谢
最后表达真挚的祝福
信件结尾与签名篇二：高考英语感谢信汇总
感谢信
1.表达感激之情，简单陈述写这封感谢信的原因； 2.详细说明要感谢的事由，措词更加具体真诚。再 次表示真诚的感谢； 3.向对方表达自己真诚的祝福，再次道谢。有时可向对方发出邀请。感谢信模板 1 dear ________，① i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感谢的原因)．
② if it had not been for/had it not been for/ without your assistance in ________(对方给你的具体帮助)，i would(not)have been ________(没有对方帮助的后果)． ③ everyone agrees that it was you who ________(给出细节)． ④ again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!⑤ please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely, li ming 感谢信模板 2 dear _____________ , ① i am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for _____________(感谢事由)。② id like you to know how much your meant to me.③ you have a positive genius for_____________(对收信人某一方面的赞美).④ i not only enjoyed _____________, but also_____________.⑤ i shall ever remember _____________as one of the most _____________in my life.⑥ i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating(报答).⑦ i will feel very honored and pleased if you _____________(表达自己回报的心愿)。⑧ i am looking forward to seeing you next time!⑨ i repeat my thanks for your_____.⑩ please give my kind regards to your________.yours sincerely li ming 1（2010年浙江省衢州市）假设你是某中学高三某班学生李华，高二多年来，经历很多次成功与失败的你，觉得自己似乎一下子成熟了许多，有一种真的长大了的感觉，面对紧张的学习，一次次的考试及今后的打算。。，你有太多的话想对关爱你的父母说。请以书信形式和爸爸妈妈谈谈。参考词汇 鼓励encourage /encouragement 对。。感激be grateful to sb.dear mum and dad how are you doing? 参考范文
dear mum and dad how are you doing? how time flies。i am now a senior three student ,enjoying many successes as well as going through a number of failures,which shows that i have really grown up.whenever i am thinking of these,i can’t help feeling grateful to you.it is you who first give me encouragement when i meet with difficulties,especially when i am not getting along well with my my studies.indeed,your inspiration seems to be a lamp,which offers me light of hope,courage and confidence.and more importantly,you are always teaching me to be good to others,and try to contribute to our society.yours sincerely, 2假设你叫王华，家住外地，暑假期间来北京游玩，住在朋友李海家里。李海为你安排了一周愉快的假期生活，还请假带你出去到许多地方玩。李海的母亲做了美味可口的饭
菜款待你。假期期满你回家后写信给李海表示感谢，并请他有机会到你处游玩。
请用英语写一封100词左右的感谢信。li hua dear li hai, yours, wang hua 3假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的mr.brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给mr.brown写了一封信，内容如下： ★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；
★ 在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励； ★ 决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；
★ 盼望见到mr.brown，希望他寄来一张照片。
注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：100左右
dear mr.brown，i am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.i could not have returned to school without your help.thank you so much.i have been working hard since i went back to school.i have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers.they often praise me and encourage me.but for your help, i might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education.i have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.how are you getting on with your life and work? i would like to meet you in person, but i have no opportunity to do so.would you please send me a photo of yourself? thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!yours sincerely, li hua 假设你是李华上周参观伦敦时，你父亲的朋友rogers,把你照顾的很好，写一封信给 rogers先生，表达你的感激之情，字数100词左右，不得出现真实姓名与地址。dear mr.rogers, it is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for your hospitality and courtesy to me during my stay in london.originally i only wanted to call on you and gave my father’s regards to you, as it had been three years since you and he last saw each other.but you insisted that i stay in your house during my visit in london and took good care of my life as if i were a family member of you instead of the daughter of one of your friends.you really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.thank you again for your kindness and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality.yours faithfully, li hua篇三：2014北京书面表达(应用文)书面表达归类整理
书信类文体：包括求职信、祝贺信、道歉信、询问信、推荐信、感谢信、邀请信、辞职信等多种应用文。每个类别都有相对固定的语言模式，都有固定词语要求。
（一）感谢类
1、假如你叫李平，现在给住在北京的green先生写一封感谢信，green先生曾经是你校的外教，曾花了很多时间辅导你英语口语，使你在全市英语口语竞赛中获得冠军。你对此非常感激。这次听说green夫妇要回到你校访问。你很高兴 dear mr．green, how is your stay in beijing? yours sincerely, li ping
2、假设你是李华，因为英语成绩突出，已经被北京大学提前录取。请用英语给你的高三英语老师mr.zhang写封信。
内容包括： 1.好消息； 2.感恩，因为„..;3.你在北大的学习计划或对未来的打算； 4.对老师的关心和祝愿„ dear mr.wang, we haven?t seen each other for ages.how is everything going with you? i am writing to tell you the good news that i have already been admitted into beijing university in advance.actually speaking, you are the very person i should first say thanks to.it is you who helped develop my interest in english.without your help, i would not be good at english.beijing university is a place which i have been longing for.i am sure i will learn a lot there.besides my major, i will take part in all kinds of activities, which will surely do good to my future career.best wishes!
3、假设你叫李华，你在朋友王林家度过一周假期，昨天（2013年11月21日星期三）刚刚返校。现在给你的朋友王林写封感谢信，内容包括：
感谢王林为你安排一周愉快的假期；
简单回忆假期中的愉快生活，感谢王林请假带你游玩了许多地方；
认为王林的母亲是一位非常出色的厨师，美味可口的饭菜使你体重增加了5磅
再次感谢，并希望保持联系。欢迎他有机会来你校游玩。i?m writing to express my thanks to you for the wonderful vacation.i spent with you and your family.surely i ?ve spent a happy vacation during which you taught me how to swim, boat ,and fish.i really appreciate your taking time off work to take me around and show me so many places.your mother is a wonderful cook who can cook delicious food and i think i must have gained 5 pounds just a week i spent with you.i hop you ?ll be able to visit our school some time.（二）求职信、招聘信
假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请你用英文以“an english editor wanted”为题，按照以下要点写一则120-150字的招聘启事。1.描述主要的工作内容。2.希望该同学应满足的条件与要求。3.感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（students’ union）联系。an english editor wanted our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its english edition.the job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper english articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students.the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.we hope that he/she could meet the following requirements.first, he/she is willing to devote some of the those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the students’ union this week.students’ union
2、假设你是李雷，是北京一中的一名学生, 想要参加北京大厦的招聘工作，请你根据下列内容给公司经理写一份申请。
1.1991年5月1日生于北京；2.今年7月高中毕业，学习英语6年； 3.对英语感兴趣，尤其擅长口语和写作4.熟练掌握电脑操作技术，会编程，打字每分钟100。
注意：1.词数：100字左右；2.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯； 3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）。4.参考词汇：编程make programs dear manager, i am looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely, li lei 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等
授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）工作量：——每周12学时，任选三门课
——担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； dear peter, i remember you told me you were interested in teaching in china.our school now is looking for a please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions.i’d be more than happy to help.best wishes.li hua
（三）道歉信
道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。
道歉信通常包括三部分内容：
1、表示歉意，道歉的原由；
2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；
3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。写作三步曲：表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。
注意：理由要尽量合理，违反生活常识将导致扣分；尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加顺畅。道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 i am writing this letter to express my regret? i am writing to apologize for ? i would like to give you my apology for? i am very sorry to say that ? i must apologize about(not)doing sth? please accept my sincerely apology for? i am writing to say sorry for? i am terribly sorry, but? 道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套句 once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.please allow me to say sorry again.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.i want to let you know how regretful i am feeling now.i am sorry that i can’t? and trust that you will be able to understand.书信作文优秀模板——道歉信 dear ______, ①i am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.②the reason is that ______（介绍原因）.③once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.例文 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数120~150； how are you going? we made a plan that we would travel in beijing together next week.while, i should apologize to you because i cannot go there on time for the reasons as follows.first, i cannot deny that it can help us broaden our horizon and deepen our mind when we travel in beijing.however, the government encourages us students to go to shanghai due to the fact that the expo is being held in shanghai now.as the saying goes, ’strike while the iron is hot’.after finish my college entrance examination, i am eager to learn something about study from the expo to prepare for my education in college.in addition, i have been busy with the preparation of the college entrance examination for about half a year and got tired.i need some time to relax instead of traveling.for the reasons that i mentioned above, i want to show my apology again.and would you please reschedule your time? shall we travel in beijing after two weeks? i am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.yours, li hua 范文2：
directions: you were unable to attend mr.smiths examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use wang hua instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua dear susan: we’re planning supper at six;that will give us a nice long evening to talk.if i don’t hear from you before then, i’ll be expecting you on the [twelfth]!affectionately yours, li ming an invitation for a reception dear mr.smith: it would give [me/us] great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the chinese delegation.the reception will be held in the [the city hall], on [tuesday, october the fourth].cocktails will be served promptly at [six] to be followed b dinner at [eight].[i/we] sincerely hope you can attend.let [me/us] know.sincerely yours，li ming
（五）投诉信 假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点：1.问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换； 型号新，无配件，无法维修。2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
注意：1.词数为100左右；2.参考词汇：配件—— spare part;dear sir，i am writing to you for the mobile phone of dephone-s250 i bought on 20th apr.2008 at tele mall in wuhan, p.r.china.ten days after that, it didn?t ring and send short messages.then i took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and i had to wait at least three months for a new one.later i went to the repairman.he said since it was a new model in china, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.i was so desperate on hearing that.how can i wait that long? therefore, i require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.thank you for your consideration.sincerely yours, bu manyi 2假如你叫李华，上周日在green supermarket 超市里买了一支“no-spot”面霜，你使用以后发现该产
品并没有广告中所宣传的功效。请根据以下要点向超市经理写一封投诉信，希望能解决此事。需包含下列要点：（1）广告中承诺no-spot 安全有效，能去除斑点；（2）谨遵说明使用，效果并非如此：
①有副作用—举例子说明； ②影响工作。
（3）要求赔偿医疗费；（4）发票保留至今，以备起诉使用。dear manager, i bought this cream in green supermarket last sunday.i still retain the receipt.last sunday evening, i applied the cream to my face following the instructions carefully.to my great surprise, when i got up the next morning, i felt my face tickling.during the following two days, this symptom became worse and worse, which greatly affected my life and work.yours faithfully, li hua(六）询问信 即寻求信息，征求建议、提议或求助之类的信件。
1、假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语（q吧）给他写封信。best regards, zhang hua
2、设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在mr．brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：
感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助 一本英语词典忘记带回
词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵 词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上 邮资自己付 mr．brown，im now safely back home．thank you very much for all the kindness i got from you during my stay．hope everything is fine with you there． now i wonder whether i could ask you a favour．when i came back, i suddenly realizes that i had left my english dictionary behind at your place．it is a precious gift from mu american teacher．would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? ill pay for the postage．the dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom．it is the one with a red cover． thanks and all the best． yours,篇四：感谢信格式以及范文
感谢信的格式和写法
一、感谢信的概念和主要特点 1.感谢信的含义
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体（党政机关、企事业单位、社会团体等）或个人表示感谢的专用书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。写感谢信既要表达出真切的谢意，又要起到表扬先进，弘扬正气的作用。它广泛应用于个人与个人之间、个人与组织之间、组织与组织之间，用以向给予自己帮助、关心和支持的对方表示感谢。2.感谢信的主要特点
⑪感谢对象要确指
感谢信都有确切的感谢对象，以便让大家都清楚是在感谢谁。
⑫表述事实要具体
感谢别人是有具体的事由的，否则就会显得抽象空洞。
⑬感情色彩要鲜明
感动和致谢的色彩强烈鲜明，言语里充满感激之情。
二、感谢信的种类
感谢信依据不同的标准可以有不同的分法。1.按感谢对象的特点来分
⑪写给集体的感谢信
这类感谢信，一般是个人处于困境时，得到了集体的帮助，并在集体的关心和支持下，自己最终克服了困难，度过了难关，摆脱了困境，所以要用感谢信的方式表达自己的感激之情。
⑫写给个人的感谢信
这类感谢信，可以是个人也可以是单位也可以是集体为
了感谢某个人曾经给予的帮助或照顾而写的。2.按感谢信的存在形式来分
⑪公开张贴的感谢信
这种感谢信包括可在报社登报、电台广播或电视台播报的感谢信，是一种可以公开张贴的感谢信。
⑫寄给单位、集体或个人的感谢信
这种感谢信直接寄给单位、集体或个人。
三、感谢信的格式和写法
感谢信通常有标题、称呼、正文、结语和落款五部分构成。1.标题
感谢信的标题的写法有这样几种形式：“感谢信”——单独由文种名称组成的：“致鬃椎母行恍拧薄筛行欢韵蠛臀
闹置乒餐槌傻模骸白捉值乐伦拙缭旱母行恍拧薄筛行凰胶臀闹置谱槌傻摹?/p> 2.称呼
开头顶格写被感谢的机关、单位、团体或个人的名称或姓名，并在个人姓名后面附上“同志”等称呼，然后再加上冒号。3.正文
感谢信的正文从称呼下面—行空两格开始写，要求写上感谢的内容和感谢的心情。应分段写出以下几个方面：
⑪感谢的事由
概括叙述感谢的理由，表达谢意。
⑫对方的事迹
具体叙述对方的先进事迹，叙述时务必交待清楚人物、事件、时间、地点、原因和结果，尤其重点叙述关键时刻对
方给予的关心和支持。
⑬揭示意义
在叙述事实的基础上指出对方的支持和帮助对整个事情成功的重要性以及体现出的可贵精神。同时表示向对方学习的态度和决心。4.结语
写感谢信收束时表示敬意的话、感谢的话。如“此致敬礼”、“致以最诚挚的敬礼”等。5.落款
感谢信的落款署上写信的单位名称或个人姓名，并且署上成文日期。前者在上，后者在下。
四、写作感谢信的注意事项 1.内容要真实，评誉要恰当篇五：书面表达申请信
英语书面表达训练探讨
失分原因 1.不会审题，偏离主题 2.汉语思维，逐字翻译 3.句子逻辑关系混乱 4.语法错误
书面表达训练建议
(一)多读、多背好文章、范文，听、仿、看全面训练(二)限时训练 1.读题（定体裁）2.确定内容 3.确定时态、语态、人称等 4.写：时间（25分钟左右）；（收拢：基本词汇、句型）(附:关联过渡语)
1、时间顺序：first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin/start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, at present, lately, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment
2、平行对等类：and, both„and, as well as, as well, neither„nor„, or, either„ or„.3、转折关系类：but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand，4、因果关系类: for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to
5、空间顺序类: on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of, on the other side of, at the top/end of, in the middle of
6、解释说明类: to put it another way, that is(to say), in other words, such as, for example, for instance, and so on 7 表陈述事实的in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。8.表强调的过渡词：certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, absolutely without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, in particular，9、递进关系类: what’s more, what’s worse, what’s better, in addition, worse still, besides, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only...but also, for one thing„for another 10.总结类: in short, in brief, in a word, all in all, on the whole, to sum up, in general, generally speaking, above all, after all, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。
应用文
书信(letter)、日记(diary)、便条(note)、通知(notice)、请柬(invitation card)、海报(poster)、致词(speeches)、失物招领（lost and found）
书信
申请信、建议信、感谢信、邀请信、投诉信、求助信、祝贺信、高考英语求职信（申请信）
求职信的结构及常用句型
一、介绍消息来源;表明求职心愿
二、介绍个人简历，摆出求职优势
三、请求答复联系 表明感激之情
1)开篇点题，交代消息来源、写明写信的目的.第一段开头：写信的目的（purpose）i’m writing to apply for the job(求职)i learn from/read in the newspaper that„/i was told that„/be experienced in„
/i would be grateful if you could„ 1.i learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a „ 2.i saw from your advertisement in yesterday’s china daily that „ 3.having known that your office needs a „ i would like to apply for the post.4.i’m interested in the post which you advertised in yesterday’s china daily.5.i’m looking for a job as a„and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm.2)介绍个人简历，重点放在与所申请的工作相关的知识技能的介绍上，要有详有略.第二段：自我介绍（self-introduction）
常用短语: graduate from„ be good / skilled at„ enjoy doing sth / in one’s spare time„ / get on well with„1.i’m good at.../ i do well in.../ i master...well......2.i have a good knowledge of.../ i have the ability to...5.i’ll get on very well with my fellow workers.6.once i’m hired, i’ll devote myself to the cause of the...工作经历的常用句型：work experiences 1.i once worked as a...for two years 2.i was working as a...during the period of....3.in 2000 i worked....4.i’ve had the experience of...5.i’ve been...since...能力：
1、i have learned english for 8 years.i am very good at english, so i have been an editor of my schools english paper in the past two years.2、i’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.my grades are among the best ones in my department.第三段：表达盼望尽快收到答复的迫切愿望并表明感激之情.常用句式： i would appreciate it very much if you could give me the opportunity.thank you for your consideration./ i am looking forward to receiving your reply.结尾：
1.if i could have the opportunity to get the job i will be quite appreciative.thank you for your consideration.i look forward to hearing from you.2.i think i’m suited for the job.if you can let me have this chance i will try my best to do it well.expecting you answer.you can connect me by posting a letter to 3.i will be quite appreciative if i am offered the opportunity.thank you for your consideration.i wish to get your answer soon.4.i would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available.高考英语建议信
写作要点
建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3基本框架：
开头（beginning）：开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。（state your idea）主体（body）：对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。（reasons and evidence）结尾（ending）：呼应开头，重申观点。（restate your opinion）
（说明写信目的； 介绍详情，说明原因；提出建议；希望采纳建议，并盼望回复。）4 注意事项 1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合呼情理，语气要委婉礼貌。总之要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。
第二篇：书面表达
中考英语书面表达的考点集汇、讲解和训练
【考点扫描】
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；
2、看图作文；
3、根据汉语提示作文。
无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。【名师解难】 一.训练方法
1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、1 内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。二.应试策略
1.审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。
2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：
1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下 3 文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）时态、语态错误。5）标点错误。6）人称是否用错。三.注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。【中考范例】
VII.书面表达（共1题，计10分）
假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。
要求：1.认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。2.词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。
Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs
After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。
1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。
2.圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：
1、收到对方的来信；
2、愿意和对方交朋友；
3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；
4、自己的身份、特长和爱好；
5、自己的希望。
3、列提纲：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China
4、定基调：1.时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2.人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4.开头和结尾题目已经给出。
5、写全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6
6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。【满分演练】
（1）
华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山（the Hua Mountain）
1．位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。2．乘汽车去大约要花1个小时；也可以乘火车去。
3．登山便可领略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。注意：
1．字数：80词左右。2．请不要逐字翻译。（2）根据提示和要求完成下面短文
假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物—— 一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信（100个词左右）表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1.向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。
2.礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。
3.告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。
注意1.信的格式已经给出。
2.信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。（3）
根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限。
今天是6月23日星期日，天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了西安市动物园。那里的动物十分有趣，人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物时，就上前阻止并说……
请你用英文写一篇日记，记述今天的经历。（请注意日记格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．animal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）
根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。注意1.字数60~80。
2.所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。
假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。
name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…
Dear friends
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）
根据中文提示和英文提示词语写一篇短文。
今年暑假，有一批美国中学生要来你们学校访问。请你写一篇有关西安的简介，以便和他们交流。
注意：1.字数100左右；
2.必须使用所给英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看图写话。
根据以上四幅图和提示词语，写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、语句通顺、符合逻辑的短文，开头已给出。要求：1.叙述要用第三人称。2.词数60~80个左右。3.要表达自己的看法或想法。
4.选用下列词语：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）
请你参考图文提示，写一篇60~80词的短文。注意：1.语言规范，语意完整，内容丰富。2.表达符合图意，书写规范。3.给出自己的观点。4.文章的开头已给出。
参考词：pollute, turn off the tap(水龙头)，dry, save(节约 vt.), water resources(水资源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）
请根据下面四幅图，写一篇70个单词左右的短文。文章开头已经给出，不算入总词汇数内。
参考词汇： on fire 着火firefighter n.消防员put out 灭火
Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”
__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看图写话。
要求：1.根据图画所提供的语境，写出意思连贯、语言流畅、语法准确、符合逻辑的短文。2.至少使用两种时态，70词以上。不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。
3.标题和第一句已给出，但不计入70词之内。
One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）
根据所给图画用英语写一篇约80词的短文。
(11)
假如你所在的学校要出一期英语壁报。你准备就自己经历的一件事写一篇英语短文向壁报投稿。下面五幅图记录了你上个星期六与老师和同学到南河边参加植树活动的全过程。请你就以下五幅图写一篇英文短文。
注意：1.短文内容要包括所有图画中的主要内容 2.词数：70～90
3.生词提示： 桶bucket锄头hoe
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请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。（词数：50~80，不包括已经给出的单词）
内容要点：
过去 现在 旧房 高楼 河水污浊 河水清澈 步行、骑自行车 乘公交车、小汽车 Changes in Our Hometown
Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【练习答案】
(1)参考答案：
The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)参考答案：
Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：
How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei
(3)参考答案：
Sunday June 23rd
It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”
(4)参考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)参考答案：
Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)参考答案：
Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)参考答案：
From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)参考答案：
Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)参考答案：
TAKING CARE OF TREES
One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found
that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”
(10)参考答案：
Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）参考答案： 内容要点：
（1）上星期五老师告诉我们“明天去南河边植树”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六点半我就起床了。（3）我带着桶去学校，同学们带着桶、锄头在校门口等待。（4）到南河边，我们开始植树。（也可描写动场面。）（5）看着新种下的树，我们都很高兴。
Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)
After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）参考答案：
Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶几边，我认出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一个才是妈妈的杯子呢？突然之间，我觉得，自己真得太不了解父母了。当妈妈为我倒水时，我却不知她的杯子是什么样的；当妈妈为我夹我喜欢吃的菜时，我却没想过他们是爱吃淡一点，还是浓一点。。。2009年到了，意味着过去一年的逝去和新的一年的到来。妈妈为我操劳了一整年，仔细想想，现在的我也应该为她做一点点事了。
于是，我决定先将茶沏好再找杯子。学着爸爸平时沏茶的顺序，我先从茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往烧水的壶里加入水放在电茶炉上烧，接着，我将爸爸已经掰好的普洱茶片拿了两片放在盖碗里，等了一会，水开了，我小心地将水注入盖碗，将盖盖上，把盖碗里第一遍的茶水滤掉，然后再次注水，盖上盖，焖一会才两手并用地将茶水倒入茶海里，因为第一次自己动手，盖碗的烫手是我所没想到的，手忙脚乱的我弄得茶几上一片片的水渍。重复几次这样的程序后，我先帮外婆倒了一杯茶，因为外婆特别喜欢喝茶。当外婆从厨房走出来的时候我已经把茶都给倒好了，这时，外婆才告诉我哪一个是妈妈的杯子。
妈妈起床了，我双手捧着水杯送到她的面前，就像捧着一颗温热的心。妈妈一愣，随即脸上露出了微笑，她一手接过水杯，伸出另一只手将我拉进了她的怀里，那手轻轻柔柔地在我的头上抚摸着，接着妈妈在我的脸上深深地亲了一口。虽然妈妈经常亲我，但这一刻的亲吻却最让我感到幸福。我抬起头对妈妈说：“妈妈快喝吧，要不茶要凉了。”妈妈仰起了脖子，张着嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了几大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的样子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。
我记得在我小学的时侯，就读过一首曹值的七步诗：“煮豆持作梗，辘毂以为汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那时只知其大意，只知道曹操的长子曹丕继位，他在一些奸臣的影响下，担心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之内作出一首诗来，否则处死；结果他的弟弟就在七步之内写出了流传至今的“七步诗”。当时这首诗对曹丕也是一种极大的潮讽。
几个世纪过去了，社会和生活都发生了极大的变化；应该说人的素质也应有所提高；一个人生活在世上，是离不开亲情、友情和爱情的；有人说：打架亲兄弟，上阵父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的团结并不是真对与他人打架斗殴，在生活上，21 事业上应是不可或缺的照应；俗话说“一根筷子容易断，十双筷子断就难”；可见，团结是一种力量，只有团结才有攻不破的堡垒。
然而，就在生活优越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因为一点小事，一点利益而你争我斗，反目成仇，甚而相残；我和我的朋友在聊天时有时聊及这个问题，有人这样评论：一个人生活在世上，如果不顾亲情，对兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顾，那他在这个社会上和任何人都不要谈“情”字，特别是友情。
树大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是难免发生的，但要看你怎样去对待，把金钱和利益看的太重，那麽，你就会值亲情于不顾；看淡名利，注重亲情才是做人的底线；争则不足，让则有余，在利益和金钱面前，我们何不礼让一点，做一个有道德、有素质、有亲情的人呢？
家和万事兴，团结是一种力量，让我们团结友爱，和睦共处，为个人的事业、为家庭的生活、为国家的兴盛而看重亲情、友情、爱情；把金钱和利益看淡一些吧！人过留名，雁去留声，希望在几十年之后，当你离开这个世界的时侯，留给后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。
今天是她父亲的生日,她要回家和父亲一起过生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父亲已经六十多岁了,为了子女的成长与幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.话说过来,人一辈子真的很不容易.人年老时非常希望能够和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一个电话甚至一个短信,父母也已经很知足了.我由于长期在外,很想念爸爸妈妈.想起过去,心里真的很辛酸,父母亲为了我们的成长真的付出了很多,然而他们现在又生活得怎么样呢?想起过去的一幕一幕,我心里很难受!我很希望做做子女的我们,踏踏实实地做好每一件事情,不让父母担忧,这是最基本的我们应当做的事情.22 谈到这里我不由自主地想起一部电影《我的兄弟姐妹》,这是一部关于亲情的影片,暂且不管故事的真实性,主要考究它的内涵.主人公齐思甜和哥哥齐忆苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齐天生活在一个不富裕却充满温馨和爱的家。然而在一个暴风雪的夜晚，他们的母亲旧病复发，咳得吐血了。父亲背她去医院，却出了意外，他们俩都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬进了四个孩子的家。性格刚强的哥哥无法忍受这个新家庭的种种，无奈地带着弟弟妹妹离开了家。他们开始四处奔波，寻找落脚之处。当实在没有能力照顾弟弟妹妹的时候，他把妹妹齐思甜送给一对正要出国的夫妇；把弟弟送给他的舅妈一家；又把小妹妹带到一对老人家中请他们收养。他自己和弟弟妹妹们便各奔东西……20年后，齐忆苦在北京当上了出租车司机；齐思甜出国受到良好的教育，成了音乐家；齐天成为东北大学学生；齐妙却当上了舞厅小姐。在北京的音乐会上，思甜蓦然回首的瞬间，音乐霎时凝固了。他们四人拥抱在一起，泪水顺着另一支悠扬的乐曲落下，听众的掌声久久不息……终于，他们有了一次永久的重逢。
齐思甜的父亲是一个音乐教师，他们一家人都生活在音乐的天堂里，这也为后来思甜成为音乐家打好了基础。父亲说：“人生路上有许多困难的事情，只要有音乐在，你的灵魂便不再寂寞。”这位父亲是伟大的，他乐观开朗，以身作则。尽管他和蔼可亲，但同时又是一个严厉的父亲。有一回，齐忆苦偷邻居家的鸡蛋，是为了满足妹妹小小的心愿。而他却因此挨了父亲的鞭子，还罚他站在雪地里很久。在父亲被分配到别的地方边劳动边教音乐时，他对这“莫须有的罪名”并没有悲愤倒下，而是瞒着家人当搬运工挨家挨户送木材，还干各种各样的粗活。他也没有一丝怨言，还对孩子说：“我没事。”懂事的孩子们也拿起了工具，帮父亲干活。他哼着小调，阳光幸福地洒在他们脸上。
可见,这位父亲是多么伟大，他以他的行动告诉了孩子们音乐的重要性及如何面对生活的苦难。
那么，又是一种什么样的力量，使后来的四个孩子重逢，使他们欢聚，使他们接受心灵的洗礼？
毋庸置疑，是亲情。
寒冷的冬天，四个孩子依偎在车站。他们在为下一餐饭而担心着。“哥，我饿。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹们的话刺痛了哥哥。他说：“只要我还有一口气，就不让你们受委屈。”事实上他也这么做了。如果不是亲情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘记，那一晚，父母临走时对他的嘱咐：“你是哥哥，要照顾好弟弟妹妹。”
生活改变了许多人和事，也改变了他们。但是，亲情是始终不渝的。最小的妹妹齐妙长大后竟成了舞厅小姐！她离开原来的家后，养父母去世得早，加上无人看管，就开始堕落下去了。她在20年后与齐思甜相遇时，大言不惭地对她说她满足于当前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回忆起以前的一点一滴，又不免伤感和懊悔。她发现自己对不起所有爱她的人，她的良心受到了谴责。于是，亲情的归来使她的精神方面的巨人复活了！她的灵魂才得以解放。
亲情给人以新生，亲情又犹如一支镇心剂。
亲情是心中的太阳，照耀着我们；亲情是温柔的春风，抚摸着我们；亲情如绵绵的春雨，滋润着我们。
亲情是雪，晶莹剔透；亲情也可以是雷，惊天撼地。
亲情可以是灯，温暖柔和；亲情也可以是微弱的烛光，不亮却很辉煌。不管怎么说，亲情一定是无价的宝藏。
没有了亲情，世界变得荒芜、凄凉；没有了亲情，生命则无法繁衍后代；没有了亲情，生活就单调枯燥；没有了亲情，人间也成了地狱。
亲情是沟通两代之间思想交流的桥梁，是一条连结两颗心的纽带。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，谁也不认得谁。但落在地下后，结成一体，结成冰，化成水，就永远也分不开了。”
“临行密密封，意恐迟迟归”，是亲情。“我在这头，母亲在那头”，也是亲情。
无价的亲情呵，愿我们在你的鼓舞下，驶向美好灿烂的明天。关于亲情的影片..我看这部影片时,心情很沉重,流泪了.我想,不论一个人的出身是多么卑微,只要我们能够记住亲情的鼓舞与期待,只要我们我们去刻苦努力,只要我们在心理上能够战胜自己,那么我们就是生活的强者!
第三篇：书面表达
中考中的书面表达题，主要有“补全对话”、“看图填词”、“看图写话”、“看图作答”、“看图完成短文”、“看图完成句子”和“根据提示的内容，完成某项写作”等形式。这类题型的考试目的在于：通过书面形式测试考生口头会话和作简单书面表达的能力。下面作一简单介绍：
一、测试要点
一般说来，测试的主要内容都是以日常生活为背景，进行简单的会话或写作。例如：问候、问路、看病、打电话、购物、自我介绍等功能意念项目和简单的应用文，例如：便条、通知、短信等。一个题目写10个左右的句子，字数为80－100个左右。
二、日常训练与应试注意事项
1.平时要注意句型与对话的学习，注意听说训练，积极参与听说训练的教学活动，以达到会话相当熟练的程度。
2.在会话中，注意常在情景中使用的习惯用语、套语的归纳和应用，做到脱口而出，应对如流。
3.注意口语与书面语的区别及一些特殊的表达方法，做题时一定要瞻前顾后，既要看到前面的内容，又要看到后面的语句；既要符合习惯用法，又要注意表达的准确性。
4.要经常进行日常应用文和命题作文的学习与训练。
三、解题技巧
1.要注意看清题目的要求与提供的情景，需用哪些习惯用语，哪种时态，根据词数限制，应选用哪一种表达方式为最佳。
2.表达要正确，要注意英美人的习惯用语，切忌随心所欲，用中文去对照英文进行翻译。例如：A：How do you do？此题只能选择How do you do?”来回答，除此，无第二种选择。如果从语法和字数方面来考虑，那将会有“How old are you?”“What is your
name?”“Where are you from?”等多种与问句不符的答语。
3.注意在一些交际场合中，习惯使用的客套语。只要根据已知部分，就可推测出未知部分。例如：How are you?回答 可用“fine ” “I ’m fine.Thank you.”如果用“How do you do?”来回答，就大错特错了。
4.在写应用文类命题作文或对话时，应注意应用文的格式、人称、动词的时态等用法；写短文或对话时，要注意切题，不写没有把握的句子，切忌为使文章生动，在句中随意增加自己无把握的词，导致中文式英语而影响考试成绩。尽量用自己熟悉的句型和词汇来表达一个完整的意思就可以了。
四、举例分析
1.写短文。以Self Introduction为题，要求写出10个意思连贯、表述正确、无严重语法错误、语言流畅的句子，向新来的老师作自我介绍。第一句已给出：My name is Cheng Hui.分析：该题是要求考生向新来的老师作自我介绍。那么，该短文的写法可从如下三个自然段来写。第一段，向新老师介绍自己在学校学习、生活的情况；第二段向新老师介绍自己在家里与父母之间的关系及生活情况；第三段可以写自己与父母、同学和老师之间相处情况等。
2.写对话。以“A Talk About English Study”为题写一篇对话，要求所问所答必须与英语学习有关，问答表述完整、正确、无严重语法错误、语言流畅、提问不少于5项内容。分析：写对话一要采用问答的形式；二要掌握好对话的内容与中心思想；三要在落笔之前，心里有一个构思计划?即该对话要从哪几方面进行表述?。就该对话而言，可从5个方面的内容进行表达：一是谈对英语这一门学科了解得怎样；二是谈学习英语用了多长时间；三是谈是否在课后还练习讲英语；四是谈英语这门学科是否难学；最后可以说明自己为什么喜欢学习英语。
第四篇：书面表达
书面表达
1．书面表达（本题20分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？ ．．．．．．．2.你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。3.就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today，__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Ming
2．书面表达(满分15分)
假如你叫李明，是一位高一新生，你的班主任(也是你的英语教师)要求你们在下午的班会课上用英语演讲的形式参与班长(monitor)竞选，请根据图片和文字提示，以“I believe I can” 为题写一篇演讲稿。要求:
1.短文必须包括三个方面内容：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么； 2.短文内容可适当发挥，提示词可选用； 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
4..短文词数为80左右，开头、结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
I believe I can
Good aftemoon, ladies and gentlemen!My name is Li Ming
Thank you!
试卷第1页，总3页 3．书面表达
从前，我们通讯不便捷，只能通过书信与千里之外的亲朋交流，富有浓浓的亲情。今天，随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。人们的交流变得非常的方便，可我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见，很多人都有同感：“距离近了，可亲情远了。”请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求：1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2.题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：1.have effects on 2.concentrate on 3.face-to-face conversation 4.make good use of
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】 试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉
试卷第2页，总3页 人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。
试卷第3页，总3页 本卷由系统自动生成，请仔细校对后使用，答案仅供参考。
参考答案
1．Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.Yours, 【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇电子邮件。本题所给材料是是根据上文的故事表达自己的感受。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
写作亮点：文章直接谈到作者对麦克的故事感兴趣。文中用到了一些好的句式，如：I can't stand bad manners in public, either.；On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.给文章增色不少。考点：考查提纲作文。2．
Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!
My name is Li Ming!I'm very glad to be a member of our class.I want to be monitor for these reasons.First, I’m hard-working and helpful.I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects.I am kind and I would like to help you anytime.Second, I am active.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball, singing and dancing.I believe I will guide our class in the correct direction in study and other fields.I'm sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years.That’s all.Thank you!【解析】
试题分析：本文要求写一篇演讲稿，要按照要求，从：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么三个方面进行写作。用第一人称形式，我的品质和能力用一般现在时态，我将为大家做的用一般将来时态。要根据演讲稿的特点选择恰当的词语和句型结构，增加语言的感染力。
写作亮点：范文开头简单的自我介绍后直接点题：我要当班长；接着由first, second 等等列出自己想当班长的原因；后面用两个一般将来时的句子说明自己将会怎样当好班长。叙述清楚，结构明晰。文中的I believe I wi11„；I'm sure we will„充分表达了作者的自信，彰显了作者个性，突出了短文主题，语言精炼，符合演讲稿的特点。【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。3．
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead
答案第1页，总2页 本卷由系统自动生成，请仔细校对后使用，答案仅供参考。
of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】
试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。
写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。
【考点定位】图画及提纲类作文。
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第五篇：书面表达
18。(四川乐山)从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。
内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋；2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关灯；
4.最好走路或骑自行车上学；5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。
3.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello,everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
参考作文：What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello,everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse（重复利用）the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What’s more（更多的是，经典词组多用！）, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
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