八年级下作文写作附例文

第一篇：八年级下作文写作附例文

【作文题目】那一刻，几分甜蜜在心头

【要求】

1、结合个人生活经历，选取真实的生活片段，写篇不少于600字的记叙文。

2、文章叙事清楚，结构完整，内容充实。

3、恰当运用描写、抒情等表达方式，写出真情实感。

【范文1】

几声悦耳的鸟叫声稀稀疏疏传人我的耳朵，朦胧中，我睁开惺松的睡眼，刺眼的自光射向我，真是个不好的征兆„„

“妈!妈!都几点了，你怎么不叫我起床?”看着闹钟上“7:05”的字样，我简直不敢相信!愣了几秒，我顿时睡意全无，立即弹起身来，穿衣服套裤子。这时，妈妈“啪嗒啪嗒”跑进来:“对不起啊，本来想让你多睡一会儿，没想到就迟了„„”我已经无暇顾及妈妈说什么了，穿好衣服拎起书包就往外冲。

去学校的路上不像以往那样安静清新，充满了城市的喧嚣和嘈杂。我跑在人群中，似乎感到行人们向我投来或是疑惑或是嘲笑的目光，我不禁加快了脚步，心里暗暗埋怨道:烦死了，烦死了!为什么要妈妈叫我起床，都这么晚了„„

眼看着离学校越来越近，我似乎有点不敢进学校，不敢面对同学们的目光和老师的批评。

果然，当我蹂手踢脚地走到教室门口时，同学们纷纷扭头朝我看来，老师不满地望r我一眼，示意我进去:我低着头溜到座位上，只感到双颊火辣辣地烫。

这个上午貌似无比漫长。我趴在课桌上望向窗外，几根电线杆上，小鸟停在上面又飞跑了，还不时唧唧喳喳地叫个不停。而此时的我，肚子也正“咕咕”地叫着，真后悔为什么明明已经迟到了何不吃些东西再来? 忽然，远处一个身影蹿入我的视线，我朝那边望去。那熟悉的身影越来越近—是妈妈!妈妈手里不知道拿着个什么东西，走到我教室门口，跟老师打了个招呼就把我叫了出去。

“你来干什么啊?”我清晰地看见妈妈手里拿的是个饭盒。

“你也真是的，跑那么快，本来想叫你吃点东西的，不然哪有精力上课啊，快来吃点儿。”妈妈边说着边打开饭盒。

浓浓的香味从饭盒中飘出，我看到妈妈的衣服乱乱的，不知是没整理好还是跑乱了;妈妈的头发也凌乱着，几颗水滴停在上面，不知是清晨的露珠还是汗珠„„

伴着叽喳的鸟叫声，沐浴着清晨的阳光，还有那浓浓的早餐味，似乎有几分甜蜜也在心头，慢慢散开„„

甜蜜，就像那冬日里的太阳，给人温暖;甜蜜，就像那夏日里的微风，给人凉爽;甜蜜，就像春日里的花朵，给人舒适。我永远不会忘记那一刻，那几分甜蜜在心头。

【范文2】 清晨·热牛奶

在一个阳光明媚鸟语花香的早晨，我睡在那被窝里感觉如此温暖。窗外小鸟在唱着歌，我被那优美的歌声吸引了，从床上起来，伸个懒腰，走到房门前。我听见外面有响声，于是我把门一打开，就看见了妈妈，只见她端着一杯热牛奶，她的汗珠就像绿豆般大小一滴一滴往下滴，她那银自色的头发在太阳的照射下显得格外耀眼。妈妈小心翼翼地迈步向我走来，让我感到无比幸福。这个早晨，因妈妈的到来，而格外温馨。

啊!我成长的路上是你在关心着我，特别是在那一刻，几分甜蜜在心头。

中午·折叠伞

夏日炎炎的中午，我在食堂吃饭，满头大汗，可这天气真谓是“孙猴子的脸—说变就变啊”!忽然间，那天空，乌云密布，黑压压的，让人心惊肉跳。看着同学们纷纷离去，我一个人在这儿等着妈妈。越是人少我的心越是害怕，我一个人躲在那墙角，一心祈祷着妈妈快来。终于，一个熟悉的身影闪到我面前，是妈妈!我迅速投人到妈妈的怀抱，在那儿我感受到了甜蜜，感受到了温暖:，妈妈拿着一把折叠伞，举过头顶，我们起回家，雨也渐渐小了。

啊!我成长的路上是你在呵护着我，特别是在那一刻，几分甜蜜在心头。

夜晚·电灯泡

在一个寂寥无人的夜晚，我独自一人在做作业。此时夜阑人静，只听见外面的风在吹。突然我的房门锁响了一下，把我吓了一跳，原来是我的妈妈来了，她看见我在做作业，就说:“儿子，早点睡，别做太晚了。”我说:“还有好多作业，明天就要做完。”于是我继续做作业。这时，妈妈打开台灯，关了电灯。我正疑惑呢，妈妈拿着一个电灯泡，搬了一个凳子站在上面换灯泡。一下子，房间亮堂了许多。原来啊，妈妈是想让我的房间更亮堂。那时，我的内心有一股热泉在向外涌动，此时我感觉我无比甜蜜，无比温暖!啊!我成长的路上是你在指引着我，特别是在那一刻，几分甜蜜在心头。甜蜜，就是喝牛奶时的温馨;甜蜜，就是撑雨伞时的晴朗;甜蜜，就是换灯泡时的领悟!啊，母亲!你给了我数不胜数的甜蜜!

第二篇：八年级下英语试题(附答案)

八年级下英语测试（附答案）

Marks：100分）

Ⅰ.单项选择(15分)

从下列各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选择可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

(volleyball

well.A.an;theB.an;/C.a;theD.a;/

()2.Most Chinese people eat dumplings and noodleschopsticks.A.off B.in C.withD.on

()3.The boy is good at drawing very much.He has a greatin it.A.troubleB.interestC.problemD.matter

()4.After a long walk, I felt very hot and I really wanted to drink.A.cold something B.something coldC.nothing coldD.cold anything

()5.Jack, your bedroom is in a terrible mess.Please.A.tidy it upB.take it offC.make it upD.put it away

()6.Mr Li is one ofteachers in our school.We all like him very much.A.humorousB.more humorous

C.the most humorousD.much more humorous

(is really hardus to climb such a high mountain.A.this;toB.it;toC.this;forD.it;for

()8.—Mike, why are you so excited?

—Oh, Jack asked meon a trip to Mount Tai with him.A.wentB.goesC.to goD.going

()9.——Five dollars.A.How longB.How muchC.How manyD.How often

()10.Jim has an in collecting coins and notes.A.interested;interesting

B.interesting;interesting

C.interested;interested

D.interesting;interested

()11.—Does your grandfather take exercise every day?

— 30 minutes taking a walk after supper.A.spendsB.takesC.costsD.pays

(com-position to describe our experiences

at the summer camp.A.six-hundreds-word

B.six-hundreds-words

C.six-hundred-words

D.six-hundred-word

(be Lucy’s, for we can find her name on it.A.can’tB.mustC.couldn’tD.might

()14.—Has your brother ever been to Egypt?

—No.He’s been looking forward tothe Pyramids.A.visitB.visitedC.visitsD.visiting

()15.—My CD player doesn’t work.—.Maybe I can help you.A.Of course not

B.Don’t say so

C.Let me have a look

D.I’m afraid not

Ⅱ.完形填空(10分)

先通读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从每题所给的四个选项中选出最佳选项。

“She’s coming.Hide it quickly!” The girls quickly16it under the table.It seemed that nothing had happened.When Miss Wang came into the classroom, everyone stood up and greeted her.She gave them a smile.The girls17that there was sadness in her eyes.They wished with all their hearts that they could do18to help her, but there was nothing that they could do.Miss Wang told them that she would19them.She explained that she wanted to stay as their teacher20she had no choice.Her father was badly ill.Her mother was too21to look after him alone.She22return to her hometown.Looking at the list of email addresses in her hand, she said she would keep in touch with them.She encouraged(鼓励)them to study hard and always do their best.Then she got ready to leave.The class monitor walked over to her and handed her a small package.With tears(眼泪)in her23, Miss Wang opened it.“It’s a photo of our trip to Laos last term.Look at it and24us always,” said the monitor.She nodded(点头).“25.I’ll put it up on the wall of my room.” Then she left.()16.A.threwB.hidC.looked atD.looked for

()17.A.noticedB.listenedC.smeltD.touched

()18.A.somethingB.anythingC.everythingD.nothing

()19.A.hurtB.killC.helpD.miss

()20.A.andB.soC.orD.but

()21.A.fatB.tallC.youngD.old

()22.A.mightB.couldC.had toD.able to

()23.A.mouthB.eyesC.earsD.nose

()24.A.forgetB.rememberC.believeD.pull

()25.A.Thank youB.All rightC.Not at allD.You’re welcome

Ⅲ.阅读理解(20分)阅读下列材料，从每小题所给的四个选项中，选出最佳选项。

A

Everyone in Jay’s family takes turns doing different chores at home.They use a chart to help them remember what to do each day.Weekly Chores

Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday

Jay Set the table Wash dishes / / Take out trash Clean the room

Mum Cook dinner Set table Cook dinner Wash dishes No cooking

tonight /

Dad Wash dishes Cook dinner Wash dishes Cook Dinner Pick up pizza /

()26.Where is the chart?

A.At Jay’s house.B.In the classroom.C.In the zoo.D.In the hospital.()27.When will the family eat pizza?

A.On Tuesday.B.On Thursday.C.On Friday.D.On Saturday.()28.What is this passage mostly about?

A.Helping at school.B.Helping at home.C.Jay’s new house.D.Dad’s office.()29.In this passage, the underlined word “chores” means “”.A.jobsB.time

C.peopleD.days

()30.Who cooks dinner on Monday and Wednesday?

A.Jay.B.Grandmother.C.Mum.D.Dad.B

Tom Hanks is well known to many people.He once acted in the films Forrest Gump and Da Vinci Code.But do you know that he was not popular with his classmates and teachers when he was very young?

Tom Hanks was born in Concord, California.He once said to a reporter, “When I was young, maybe others thought of me as a stupid boy.But I was a complete optimist(乐观主义者).I never kept these bad things in my mind and I didn’t care about others’ thoughts, so I didn’t get into trouble.Later I took acting classes.I thought the classes were the best places for boys who liked making noise.I often went to the movies.I would never go there with others.I would just drive to a theatre alone and spend a lot of time learning how to act.”

Tom Hanks has played many different characters.He acted well in Sleepless in Seattle.It became the turning point of Tom Hanks’ career(事业).Then his movie Philadelphia made him win the sixty-sixth Oscar as the best actor.Tom Hanks’ road to success hasn’t been very smooth, but he has worked very hard and never given up.Finally he has found his own place in the world of movies.()31.What did Tom Hanks do when some people thought he was a stupid boy?

A.He kept bad things in his mind.B.He got into trouble and stayed at home.C.He decided to become an actor.D.He was still as happy as before.()32.What did Tom Hanks usually do to learn how to act?

A.He often went to the movies alone.B.He often watched TV or VCDs at home.C.He often played different parts in some movies.D.He often went to the movies with his friends.()33.Which movie became the turning point of Tom Hanks’ acting career?

A.Sleepless in Seattle.B.Da Vinci Code.C.Philadelphia.D.Forrest Gump.()34.The underlined word “smooth” in the passage means “” in Chinese.A.曲折的B.平坦的C.漫长的D.窄小的()35.What does the writer try to tell us?

A.Talent is very important to a person’s success.B.Teachers’ or friends’ support is very important.C.No matter what difficulties we meet, we should stay optimistic and never give up.D.If we want to succeed in the world of movies, we should attend more acting classes.Ⅳ.词汇运用(10分)

A.根据句意及首字母提示补全单词。

36.My grandmother often uses a fto make her cool in the hot days.37.I think working hard is the secret of the s.38.Don’t speak to Jack like that.After all(毕竟a little child.39.—Thanks a lot.—It’s my p40.Tom is going to the post office to buy a sfor his letter.B.用方框中所给单词的适当形式填空, 每词限用一次。

valueshelfsailactivityskill

digital camera as a birthday present.44.We hope we can have more time to take part in all kinds of after class.45.There’re two in the bedroom.One is for me, and the other is for my

brother.Ⅴ.完成句子(10分)

根据所给中文完成下列英语句子，每空一词。

46.以他的观点，我们课后应该多加练习。

47.妈妈经常告诉我不要在玩游戏上花费太多的时间。

My mother often tells me not to spend time playing games.48.我有一些重要的事情想和你面对面谈谈。

I have something important to talk to you.49.谢谢你帮我照看我生病的女儿。

50.天气太热了，除了游泳，我什么事也做不成。

It’s too hot.I can do nothingswimming.Ⅵ.情景交际(10分)

从方框内选择适当的句子补全对话，其中有两项是多余的。

A: Hi, Li Yan.What’s your plan for this summer holiday?

B:

A: What else?

B: My parents will allow(允许 A: I agree with them.What films are you going to watch?

B: The Karate Kid(《功夫梦》)and How to Train Your Dragon(《训龙高手》).B: Yes.From the poster, I know Jackie Chan played a wonderful character in it.B: That’s great!A: I think you will enjoy the film.A.I hear that there are lots of actions in the film The Karate Kid.B.I’m going to take part in an English club to improve my English.C.And there is a child star called Jaden Smith.D.I’m going to watch it again.E.I can’t wait to see the film!

F.Do you know there is a very popular film?

G.They believe entertainment is very necessary(必要的)to me.Ⅶ.任务型阅读(10分)

阅读下列短文，回答问题。

American singer Beyonce surprised her fans.She released(发行)her new album without advertising it or telling anyone.It is one of the biggest secrets in music history.She wanted to tell her fans about the album by herself.She did not want her record company to tell them.It was also a surprise for other singers.She didn’t want to get anything between her music and her fans.She said she didn’t want anybody to talk about her new record before she did.Beyonce’s new album is only on iTunes.People can only download(下载)it from that site.It has 14 new songs and 17 videos.She wanted to do something that people would remember.She said she was very excited when she first saw Michael Jackson’s Thriller video.She wanted to do something similar.Her album sold 80,000 copies in the first three hours.56.Where is Beyonce from?

__________________________________________________

57.How did Beyonce make her fans and other singers surprised?

__________________________________________________

58.What did Beyonce want to get between the music and her fans?

____________________________________________________

59.How many more videos than songs are there in her new album?

____________________________________________________

60.How many albums did people buy in the first three hours?

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Ⅷ.书面表达(15分)

假如你是李帆，你的笔友Allen来信询问你的爱好。请你根据下面问题的提示，给她写一封回信介绍你的爱好。

要求：1.回信除须包含提示内容外，可适当发挥；

2.80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：

1.What is your hobby?

2.When did you start it?

3.Why do you like it?

4.What have you learnt from your hobby?

Dear Allen,I’m glad to hear from you.You asked me about my hobby.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Fan

参考答案

Ⅰ.1-5 DCBBA6-10 CDCBD11-15 ADBDC

Ⅱ.16-20 BAADD21-25 DCBBA

Ⅲ.26-30 ACBAC31-35 DAABC

Ⅳ.A.36.fan37.success38.just39.pleasure40.stamp

B.41.skills42.sailing43.valuable44.activities45.shelves

Ⅴ.46.In his opinion47.too much48.face to face

49.look after50.but

Ⅵ.51-55 BGACE

Ⅶ.56.America

57.She didn’t tell anyone about her new album before its release.58.She didn’t want to get anything.59.Three.60.80,000 copies.Ⅷ.One possible version:

Dear Allan,I’m glad to hear from you.You asked me about my hobby.Now let me tell you something about my hobby.In fact, I have many hobbies in my daily life, but my favourite is travelling.I have liked travelling since three years ago.I have already travelled to many places by myself or with my parents.By travelling I can broaden my mind.When I visit some different places of interest I can learn a lot about people, places and history.I think it is fun to travel.What is your hobby, Allen? Let’s share it together!

Yours,Li Fan

第三篇：八年级下英语写作课件

写作思维的训练可以在很大程度上改善一个人的口语表达能力(发音练习除外),一个英语写作好的人,口语相应来说也不会差到哪里去，下面为大家分享了八年级下英语写作的课件，一起来看看吧！

一、教学目标

通过练习写作，让学生进一步学习巩固写日记的格式和时态，并掌握关于日记的写作方法及策略。拓展学生的知识面，充分挖掘学生的潜能，培养学生学英语的兴趣。便于学生全方位地了解英语国家的文化背景，提高他们的学习水平。培养学生欣赏英语国家文化的能力和创新能力;培养学生良好的道德品质和人文素养;培养学生的国际参与意识和跨文化交际能力;发展学生的个性，提高他们的基本素质。

二、教学内容 书面表达

请根据以下图片的内容以及所提示词，假如你是康康（kangkang）,写一篇日记。字数在 80个左右，并注意日记的格式。

三、教学方法

讨论、示范、练习、同学之间互改、教师反馈。通过练习写作，让学生进一步巩固写日记的格式和时态，从而培养学生形成正确的写作方法及策略。通过写作，让学生进一步巩固写日记的格式和时态。培养学生正确的日记写作方法及策略

四、教学环节

step1.review

1.ask the students to read michael’s diary of his trip to the ming tombs in 1a , section d ,topic 2 , unit 6 , grade 8.2.ask the students to pay attention to the form of the diary.3.ask the students to talk about the forms of the diary.4.leading:

do you know how to write a diary ？ when we write our diaries , what should we pay attention to ？ we should pay attention to the forms of the diary.we should use the past tense , except that , we should pay attention to what we mainly write.we usually write the following: what we saw;what we did;who we met;how we felt and so on.step2.presentation

1.show the pictures to the students and ask the students to talk about the pictures.2.ask the students to say some sentences about the pictures.3.ask the students to write some sentences by using the words and expressions given.4.go camping

1)run after a goat

2)get lost

3)help him get back

5.teach something about the diary.march 17th，2011thursday rainy

today, i still went to my mother’s office.my mother was very busy, so was my father.they always live in beijing.they work hard every day.so i should save my money.and i can help them with housework because i am one of my family.in the future, i will take a job and work.but now i should study hard.讲解：

1）日记格式。一般是在左上角记上当天的日期（月、日、年或者日、月、年）、星期的排列顺序，星期写在日期之后；右上角写上当天的天气情况，表示天气情况的形容词，如：fine（晴朗的），cold（寒冷的），snowy（下雪的），sunny（晴朗的），rainy（多雨的），cloudy（阴天的）等。

2）人称。写日记时，人称通常是用第一人称。

3）日记常用的时态。日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去，常用一般过去时。但文章中如果要描述未来的一些情况时，可以用一般将来时。

step3.practice

1ask the students to say some sentences about the pictures.2.ask the students to write some sentences by using the words and expressions given.3.write down the diary and check the mistakes in your own diary.4.read the other students’ diary, and find out its mistakes and then correct them.5.show the good passage to the students.step4.sum-up

6.ask one or two students to sum up the important points in this lesson.1）.the forms of a diary

2）.the tense we should use

3）.what should we write when we write a diary ?

2.let the students discuss the following question: what should we do when we are lost?

step5.project

1.read another one student’s diary, and find out its mistakes, and then correct them.2.write a diary.pay attention to the forms of the diary.五、教学评价方式

包括自身评价和学生评价。初中英语写作的目的是让学生能够根据所提示的相关信息，充分发挥学生自身的想象力，表述与表达事实、自己的观点，同时能够让学生根据相关信息进行交流，并培养学生良好的写作习惯。所以本人在设计这节课目的是为了让学生进一步学习巩固写日记的格式和时态，并掌握关于日记的写作方法及策略。为了实现这一教学目的，本人使用了讨论、示范、练习、同学之间互改、教师反馈等一系列教学方法，并设计了一些比较实用的教学任务活动，如：让学生针对图片进行讨论图片中的信息，并根据所给词汇加以造句，使学生能够针对所给信息进行交流，从而提高学生的语言表达能力；通过展示范文并让学生讨论一些写日记的格式和时态，最后由老师加以总结，以进一步突破本节课的知识重点、难点;并设计了让学生讨论一些我们迷路的时候我们应该怎么做这一活动，以培养良好的解决一些日常生活问题的能力。在导入新课的时候，本人是借助于学生讨论的基础上，采用了问题式、设问的方式，过渡衔接极为的自然。通过学生之间的互改，能够充分发挥学生的主观能动性，并培养学生良好的合作精神。在对学生的写作进行反馈时，本人适当地运用了一些简单的表扬式和鼓励式的评价策略，对学生优秀句子充分给予肯定，并加以推广，以提高学生学英语的积极性和主动性。在布置作业时，本人设计了让同学们去改一篇其他同学的日记和写一篇关于自己的日记，以进一步培养学生良好的写作习惯，进一步学习巩固写日记的格式和时态。

当然，这一节课也出现了一些不足的地方。比如，由于学生英语基础不一样，在互改活动中出现一部分学生没办法完成活动项目；同时在时间的安排上还有一定的欠缺，所以没有时间展示学生的一些优秀文章。

第四篇：新目标八年级下英语写作

八下：Unit1：1你对未来有什么打算，准备读什么大学？毕业后做什么工作？你对未来的学习、生活有什么想法，请写一篇80词左右的短文。

My life in the future（▽▽）

Hello, everyone!I study at school now.In the future, After high school, I’m going to a university in Beijing.When I grow up, I will be a doctor.I will go to work by car.I will make a lot of money.Then I will have a beautiful building with garden.I think my life will be very interesting in the future.Now I am still a middle school student.I must try my best to work hard at my lessons.I think my dream will come true if I work hard.My dream（▽▽）

My name is David.I’m 13 years old.I have a dream.When I grow up , I’m going to be a reporter because I enjoy talking with people.I’m going to write articles and send them to the newspapers.After high school, I’m going to a university in Beijing.I will make a lot of money.In the future, I will work for a TV station and travel all over the world.Now I am still a middle school student.I must try my best to work hard at my lessons.I think my dream will come true if I work hard.The life in the future

In the future, there will be computers in each home.They will help us know more about the world.Kids won`t go to school but study at home on computers.Scientists will make lots of robots.They can help us do some homework.For example, cooking, cleaning.And I think there will be more cars and pollution.So we should grow more trees and find other useful solutions to protect our environment.In a word, the life in the world will be wonderful.Unit2你的朋友有一个烦恼,她不能与同学友好好相处.她不知道为什么.上周星期天,同学在家开生日聚会.他邀请所有除了她以外的同学.她感到焦虑,她不知道该怎么做.请你给她一些建议。

Dear Mary,（▽▽）

I’m sorry to hear that you have a problem.There are a lot of things you could do.Here are some advice for you.From your letter, I think you don’t know you friend well.I think you should have a talk with him and get on well with each other.You could write a letter to him and tell him your problems.Maybe you can tell your mother and ask her for help.I think you will be happy soon.Good luck!

Unit4.假设你是Peter，请你给你的笔友Tom写封电子邮件，谈一谈你拿到上期期末考试的成绩单时老师对你的评价及你的打算。词数，80词左右

Dear Tom,（▽▽▽▽）

How’s it going? I’ll tell you something about my report card

I finished my end-of year exams last week and got my report card today.I always feel nervous when I got my report card, but luckily I did OK this time.My Chinese teacher said I was the best in class, because I worked hard at it.My history teacher said I could do better.The good news is that my English teacher said my listening was good.But my worst report was from my math teacher.He said I was lazy.But I think it’s not true ,because I think math is really difficult..I’m going to study hard.I believe that I will study better next term.Best wishes，Peter

Unit5If I have a lot of money

If I have a lot of money, I will do something important.My dream will come true.Of course, I can do a lot with money.I’ll help the old.I’ll help the poor.Most of all, I’ll help these poor children who can’t go to school.I hope they will not only change themselves in the future with the knowledge, but also change the world around

them.At the same time, I think I’ll help my parents enjoy their lives.I can do a lot of good things and make our country beautiful.2.下周五将有一个英语晚会，请谈一谈晚会的一些制度方面的要求，70词左右。

（▽▽）There will be an English party from 5pm to 9 pm on Friday.You can come to the party with your friends.Here are some rules you must remember.Don`t bring food and drinks to the party.Don`t leave during the party.You mustn`t wear jeans.If you wear jeans, we won`t let you in.And please bring your ID card.Welcome to take party in the party.I hope you’ll have a good time on that day.Unit6谈爱好

（▽▽）I like to collect many things, books, toys, photos of famous people and so on(等等).But I like collecting stamps best.I have been collecting stamps for five years.When I was very young, my friens sent me a stamp.I loved it at once.Since then I tried to collect stamps and fell in love with it.I have more than one hundred stamps.some were from foreign countries, some were Chinese.I like them.I Often take them out and show them to my friends.Unit7

你的新邻居经常在家里大声的打电话，弹吉它，踢足球，大声的放音乐，与小狗一起玩得很晚，这让你很烦脑，请你向他写出你的请求

Dear Mr Smith,（▽▽▽）

I am glad to be your neighborhood.I know your work must be tired, because you got home very late.However, I don`t like sleep too late.Would you mind not making too much noise? Would you mind turning down the music? Could you please not talk loudly on the phone? Would you mind not dropping litter out of the window? Would you mind not playing soccer on the floor? Would you mind not playing the guitar too late ?

I am sorry to trouble you.But I think you can understand.Thanks!

If you follow the advice above, I believe you can get on well with everyone.Unit 8

八上：Unit8上个星期六学生们去西山进行了一次野餐, 请参考所给词语, 描述此次活动.参考词汇：(go to West Hill, by bus, a short rest, after, the foot of , sing, dance, climb, see, hear, happy)Our class had a picnic last Saturday.We went to West Hill by bus.We had a short rest after we got to the foot of West Hill.First we had our picnic lunch.After lunch we sang and danced happily.Then we began to climb the hill.We saw many beautiful flowers.We heard the birds singing and got a lot of wild fruits.We had a wonderful time.I felt very tired when I got home, but I was very happy.Unit 9A famous ping-pong player.Zhang yining is a famous ping-pong player.She was born in Beijing on October 5 1982.She is 1.68 meters tall.She started to play ping-pong when she was 6 years old.In 1991 she joined the Beijin table tennis team.At the age of 11, she joined the national table tennis team,.At the age of 16, she became a ping-pong champion.In 2004, she took part in the 28th Olympic Games in Athens and won two gold medals.Unit 12.以“My subjects”为题，谈一谈你所学习的课程。内容包括：（1）你最喜欢什么学科?（2）什么学科最有趣?（3）什么学科最枯燥?（4）什么学科最难?（5）什么学科最重要和有用处?

My Subjects（▽▽）

I’m a middle school student.I’m learning many subjects in school.They are Chinese, English, history, geography, math, music and P.E.My favourite is English.I think English is the most interesting of all.I don’t like history or geography.They are the most boring subjects.I like math, too, though it is the most difficult.I think Chinese is the most useful subject and P.E is the most important to our health.

第五篇：八年级语文下 作文：读后感写作训练

初二作文教学：读后感写作

（一）如何写好读后感

导语：读后感是议论性较强的读书笔记，要用切身体会，实践经验和生动的事例来阐明从“读”中悟出的道理。要处理好“读”与“感”的关系，做到议论，叙述，抒情三结合。如何写出一篇优秀的读后感?下面我们一起来看看。1.写好读后感的三点要求

(l)理解原文抓要领。

要想“读”后生“感”，不仅要读懂原文，而且要求能够理解原文的精神实质，抓准文章的要领。这样才能领悟其中的道理，从而引发出自己的感想。

(2)突出重点谈感受。

读的内容往往是丰富的，涉及的问题较多，读后的感受和启示也是多方面的。而读后感则应当围绕某一中心有重点地来写，要在思考、分析的基础上，选择感受最深、最有启发教育意义、确有独到见解的内容来写。要突出重点，切忌面面俱到、中心模糊或内容空泛。

(3)联系实际深开掘。

写读后的感受必须结合自己的生活经历来谈，要把所读的内容与自己在生活中体会较深的有典型意义的人和事有机结合起来，要尽可能使感想有一定的针对性和深刻的现实意义。2.读后感的一般写法

根据以上要求，读后感的一般写法可概括为四个字：

(l)引，概括地引述原文观点或具体文字的内容。

(2)议，以所引内容为基点生发展开，发表议论。

(3)联，在所引原文的基础上联系相关内容、个人生活实际或现实生活中相关的现象或问题。

(4)结，提出看法，小结全文。

当然，任何文章的写法都不应该受某种框框的局限，以上所讲的写法只是给同学们提供一个参考的内容和思路。具体写起来应灵活掌握。3.克服常犯的毛病

根据以往经验，最常见的毛病有四点：

〔1〕大量引述原文。

读后感，顾名思义，主要是写“感”，引述是为写“感”服务的，但有些同学偏偏忘记了这一条，本末倒置，大量抄录或复述原文，结果犯了以“引”代“感”、代“联”的毛病。

〔2〕脱离原文空写“感”。

任何事物都非凭空而生，都有个由来。“读”是“感”的基础，“感”由“读”而生发。只写感想而不交代其来由，不知“感”从何来，使“感”成了无本之木、无源之水，让人感到莫名其妙，不知就里。因此，写“感”应当与原文自然结合起来。

〔3〕内容杂乱无中心。

写出的读后感无中心，是犯了作文之大忌，也不符合写读后感应“抓要领”、“突出重点”的要求。因此，一定要确定好中心，不可漫无边际地想到什么写什么。

〔4〕感受认识太肤浅。

读后感要求写个人在感情上最受触动，在认识上最受启发的内容。因此，一定要联系和对照生活现实和个人实际，写与个人真情实感相结合的内容。但是，在不少同学的读后感中，看不到作者读后的动情点和深刻的启示点，内容肤浅杂乱。联系实际常常是做自我检讨，或者在文章结尾写一些空洞的表态的话。这些都是应当注意克服的缺点。

——摘自网络文章

（二）写 作 指 导

一、怎么找准“感”点

同学们读了一篇文章或看来一部电影，写读（观）后感，或印象不深，找不到感受很深的地方；或感受很多，确定不了写什么好。这时一要紧扣素材，不能让感受成无根之苗；二要紧扣自己实际，不能让自己无话可说。

例如拿《战狼2》为例，你可以就主人公冷锋来立意——爱，是勇敢的源泉，也可以围绕爱国思想来写——国强大，民幸福。这两个方面都是同学们可以写好的，而且立意也显得高大上。

二、怎么写好“感”点

1、“原文”有目的

紧扣你的中心有选择的引述原文。许多同学大量引述原文，但许多内容与你的感点关系不大，所以引述时一定要心中有数，懂得取舍。

围绕中心分析原文。如果只是引述而缺少分析，引述和中心联系就不紧凑，所以最好都引述内容进行简单的分析。

2、议论有方法

为了有力证明你的观点，可以从正面或反面举例，可以引用相关名言，这样不仅让观点站得住，而且也能丰富了文章内容。

3、联系自我，深化主题

文章结尾，应该联系自己，写出观点给生活的指导、思想的启迪。

三、怎么拟定题目

1、读《······ 》有感

这样的题目简单容易，但是没有没有新意，不吸引人。

2、主题式题目

例如：国强大，民幸福

这样的题目，新颖，主题鲜明。

4、主题主标题，材料副标题 例如： 国强大，民幸福

——观《战狼2》有感

三、怎么安排结构

读后感的写作是带着脚镣跳舞，又特别是结构，不可以随心所欲，所以写作前一定要拟定好提纲，使行文条理清楚，逻辑性强。

下面就用具体提纲来指导大家拟定提纲：

1、《战狼2》观后感的提纲

国 强 大，民 幸 福

——观《战狼2》有感

开头：自然引出观点

例如：去年，《战狼2》成为最火的一部电影，大家看了后都热血沸腾，给我们最深刻的感受就是：一个国家强大了，她的国民就是安全的、幸福的。

引述：围绕中心，选择素材

例如：冷锋在非洲深厚非洲人民欢迎；街上发生恐怖事件后，中国使馆是安全地；中国导弹攻击恐怖分子；挂着中国国旗安全通过反政府武装区。这一切都因为中国强大······

议论：结合相关事例证明观点（可以采用对比论证）

例如：一个国家强大了，她的人民可以幸福的骄傲的生活。反之，一个国家贫穷落后，那她的民众也跟着受尽屈辱。大家不会忘记······（可以列举旧中国国民受外国欺凌的内容）

联：联系自我，深化中心

例如：今天，我们国家强大了，我们挺直了腰杆，可以幸福地对世界：我是中国人，我骄傲。我们更应该对这份来之不易的幸福感恩，积极向上，努力学习，为使我大中华更强大而发奋读书。例文展示：

国强大，民幸福

去年，《战狼2》成为最火的一部电影，大家看了后都热血沸腾，给我们最深刻的感受就是：一个国家强大了，她的国民就是安全的、幸福的。

（开门见山，确定中心——简洁、自然、切题）

时光流逝，但我记忆清晰，一个个感人的画面依然清晰永远留存心间。冷锋在非洲受到当地人民的热烈欢迎，有非洲小孩把他当作父亲依赖；当恐怖分子在街上疯狂扫射的时候，“这里是中国使馆界，我们是中国人，请你们快点离开”！中国大使馆就成了安全的港湾；当中国人质被恐怖分子挟持，生命受到威胁时，“犯我中华者，虽远必诛！”一声“开火”！导弹呼啸，人民激动，敌人屈服；手臂悬挂五星红旗，队伍浩浩荡荡通过封锁区······这一切都是因为中国强大起来了。中国强大了，非洲人民把中国人待为上宾；中国强大了，中国大使馆就是温暖的家；中国强大了，恐怖分子也要惧怕你三分。

（引述素材，紧扣观点，讲究句式）

一个国家强大了，她的人民可以幸福的骄傲的生活。反之，一个国家贫穷落后，那她的民众也跟着受尽屈辱。大家不会忘记，中国弱小的时候，一个个不平等条约就是一座座压在人民头上的大山，如何挺直腰杆？大家不会忘记，中国弱小的时候，“华人和狗不得入内”如同一把利剑，刺伤了一个民族的自尊心；大家不会也不应该忘记，中国弱小的时候，小日本都能猖狂得像条疯狗，践踏我们的国土，残杀我们的人民；我们更不会忘记，先烈们用生命和鲜血让中国站了起来，父辈们用勤劳和智慧让我们的国家富了起来、强了起来。

（联系历史，列举事例，有力论证）

现在，耻辱的一切已经成为历史，并且永远成为历史，尘封在每一个中华儿女的血液里，激励我们感恩和奋进。作为新时代的青年，当我们能衣食无忧地在教室安心读书时，当我们能通过网络了解世界学习知识的时候，当我们能坐上高铁去欣赏美丽世界的时候，作为中国人，我们真切地体会到我们国家强大了，我们挺直了腰杆！我们可以幸福地对世界说：我是中国人，我骄傲。我们更应该对这份来之不易的幸福感恩，积极向上，努力学习，为使我大中华更强大而发奋读书。（联系自我生活，升华主题）

2、《小石潭记》读后感（提纲略）

心若静，美则在

——读《小石潭记》有感

“世界上不是没有美，而是缺少发现美的眼睛。”多年来，我不知道怎样才能拥有这样的眼睛，当我学了柳宗元《小石潭记》后，我终于明白：一个人只要能静下心来，就会发现生活中的美。

（运用名言，引出话题）

唐王朝大乱之后的沉疴宿疾时刻忧郁着柳宗元的心，他多么想为日益衰微的王朝出一点力。“王叔文变法”，他这条蛟龙以为等来了机会，施展自己的才华，让乾坤朗朗，普照天下。一百八十天，美梦就成了噩梦，从此，他就开始飘零，他的人生就走向了雨季。

（背景烘托，突出静对人生的重要性）

飘零到永州的柳宗元能在工作之余，平静被仕途伤害的心，在平凡之中去发现美，慰藉自己的忧郁。《小石潭记》就是有力的说明。如果不能平静世俗的纷扰，何以行走在偏僻的小丘？何以听到“如鸣珮环”的水声？何能有闲暇“伐竹取道”？如果不是拥有内心的宁静，又怎能专心致志看游鱼细石？如何能体会到“似与游者相乐矣”的美妙？可以这么说：他的平静给了他发现美的机会，美丽给了他快乐的回馈。

（紧扣原文，分析感点）

苏轼在《记承天诗夜游》中写道“何夜无月，何处无竹柏，只是少闲人如吾两人者而已”。静下心来，当一个“闲人”，就会处处有美景。静下心来仔细听，你会听到蚂蚁匆匆的脚步声；静下心来仔细看，你会看到柳叶儿睁开睡眼；静下心来仔细闻，你会闻到小草散发出泥土的芬芳。静下心来，你会看到许多真诚的笑脸，你会听到许多关切的话语，你会感受到许多生活的乐趣······只要静下心来，整个世界都美了，整个心都满了，整个生活都晴了。

（正面论证）

今天，快节奏成了生活的主旋律，快得让心无法平静下来。匆匆忙忙的上班下班，忽略了沿途的风景；匆匆忙忙的玩手机上网，忽略了身边的亲情。即使所谓的旅游，也不过是来也匆匆，去也匆匆，除了拍点照片，发点微信，许多人到头来都是一场空。静不下心来，不管世界多么美，你永远无法与之邂逅。

（反面论证）“静以修身”，“非宁静无以致远”，静不仅能发现美，还能创造美。所以我衷心希望我年轻的朋友们，静下心生活，感受生活中的美丽；静下心来读书，享受知识的美妙。

静下心来，你就拥有美丽的世界；静下心来，你拥有了美丽的明天。（联系学生，深化主题）