2018广州中考作文预测绝密[精选五篇]

第一篇：2018广州中考作文预测绝密

广州中考作文预测绝密，不看后悔一生

现在，有的同学不吃早饭就去上学。请针对这种现象写一篇短文。内容包括：

1.学生不吃早饭的原因。2.不吃早饭对学生的影响（至少两个方面）3.你认为应该如何合理安排早餐?

范文(1)Some of us go to school without breakfast.We stay up late to study.We prefer sleeping a little longer to getting up early.So we don’t have enough time for breakfast.In the morning we usually have four classes.It’s a long time before lunch.If we don’t have breakfast, we may feel hungry in class and won’t concentrate on our study.What’s more, it’s bad for our health.From now on, we’d better get up a little earlier, and have noodles for breakfast.It’s also good to have bread, milk and eggs.It’s better to have some fruit after breakfast.Let’s have breakfast every day.(98words)

范文(2)Some of us go to school without breakfast.One reason is that they may not feel like eating anything early in the morning.Another reason could be that they don’t think the food is delicious.If they don’t have breakfast, they’ll get hungry during the classes, so they won’t listen to the teacher carefully.Even worse, It’ll be bad for their health.A growing child needs enough nutrition.Breakfast provides the energy our body needs.I really hope everyone can have breakfast at a regular time.Milke, eggs, bread, vegetables and fruits are good for us.A good breakfast is really necessary for us.(97 words)

目前，举国畅行勤俭节约、反对铺张浪费。我们中学生应当在这些行动中该做些什么呢？请根据下面要求，联系实际，适当发挥，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考词汇：junk food, order the food, eat up, restaurant, healthy food.Save Food and Eat Healthily

At present, our government has called on the people to save food.As middle school students, it’s our duty to do something for it.To save food, we should remember that at any time we should eat up all the food and shouldn’t waste any of food.Especially, when we dine out, we should order the food that we can rightly eat.Because many people in our country don’t have enough food to eat.To eat healthily, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food at school or at home.Of course, we may eat in the restaurant in case we have no time, but not too often.At last, we hope that we all work together at once.“中国梦”代表每个中国人的梦想。作为中学生，你对未来又怎样的憧憬？对人生有怎样的期盼？请你围绕“梦想”这一话题，根据提示信息写一篇英语短文。

内容要点提示：1.我的梦想是什么？

2.我为什么有这样的梦想？

3.我将怎样实现我的梦想？

提示词：achieve one’s dream, hold on to, difficulty, give up My dream China dreams are made up of all Chinese people’s dreams.As a middle school student, what’s my dream? I dream of becoming a teacher when I’m older, and I hope to work in my old school.Because I want to reward my teachers for teaching me so well, I’ll also try my best to teach my students as my teachers taught me.To achieve my dream, I’ll have to study harder from now on, I’ll never give up my dream no matter what difficulties I met.I’m sure my dream will come true as long as I hold on to it.If everyone does so, I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better.未来很美好，你长大以后打算做什么？厨师、记者、艺术家------描述一个你梦想的职业。

My dream job When I grow up, I’m going to be a singer.I love music and I’m good at singing.I want to be a singer like Lady Gaga.I can sing beautiful songs for people and make them happy.And also I can make much money.Then I can buy a beautiful house with a garden for my parents because they do so much for me.To realize my dream, first, I’m going to join the singing club and practise singing as often as possible.Second, I’m going to be a student at a music school.At last, I’m going to take part in some singing competitions to improve myself.I hope my dream can come true.

第二篇：2017广州中考作文

2017年中考广州作文预测：为幸福让路 【题目】

20.生活中时常可见互让、礼让、谦让、忍让、避让、退让等情景。让，是待人接物的素养;让，是宽宏大量的胸襟;让，是聪明睿智的取舍。

请以“让”为题目，写一篇记叙文或议论文。

【范文赏析】为幸福让路

这天早上，我背着书包跑到车站等车，因为是冬天，我哈着气，想暖暖手，天很暗，树上都结了霜，一会看看手表，一会把手伸进荷包，哈着白气，心想：今天真可怜，树上都结了霜，我起的本来就不是很早，车上怎么还不来呀，再不来，我可就迟到的!

过了一会儿，车终于来了，我挤上前去，终于上了车，我看了看表，太好了!还有半个小时。我找到了一个位子，坐了下来，车开的有些快，突然，“吱”的一声，公交车在一个紧急刹车后停住了，我的头差一点撞上了前面的椅子，我慌张的四处望着，以为出了什么事，呼，虚惊一场，原来是一辆婚车横穿了过来。

“烦死了，我还要去开会呢!”

“快开车!我要上班迟到了!”

“我上学要迟到了!”

“开车!快开车!”

“什么破婚车，挡着路，想要被撞死呀!”…………

听到乘客们的破口大骂声，司机终于忍不住了，他眉头紧锁，站了起来，大声地对我们说：“你们别吵了，别人结婚是一件幸福的事，所以要开得慢，录下来，换成你们还不是会开得慢，换成谁都会这样，只要我们心里放宽一点，多为别人想，这样，他们幸福了，我们也会因帮助了人而幸福的。”

好一位幸福火炬的传播者，好一位幸福的司机!我心里不禁赞叹道。原来做一个为幸福让路的人是多么简单，做一个幸福的人是多么简单啊!

为幸福让路，收获幸福。品味母爱 【题目】

(1)“品”，三个“口”。造字本义：一小口一小口地吃，慢慢地辨别滋味。

品尝美食是一种享受，萦绕在每个人的舌尖;品味情感是一脉温柔，流淌在每个人的心田;品评世态是一种情怀，伴随我们成长前行......请以“品”为话题写一篇文章

(2)题目：我的世界(加上适当的词或短语，补足题目)

【范文】品味母爱

爱，在橙黄色的灯光下……

我的笔沙沙地写个不停，学习了一个多小时，我不觉把头伏在桌子上。

“累了吗?”这时传来一声熟悉而亲切的问候。我一抬头，桌子上已经摆上了妈妈亲手泡的奶茶。我端起这杯热气腾腾的奶茶，闻着奶茶散发出来的诱人的草莓香，这是多么熟悉的味道呀!

在这静谧的夜里，我不禁陷入深思。

蓦地，我发现母爱就像这杯浓浓的草莓味儿的奶茶。它散发着独特的香味，只有它自己所能拥有的味道，浓浓的奶香，甜甜的草莓香，溶入到一起，从头喝到尾都是那么地甜，即使见底了，那杯底也还有糖份沉淀在下面。这正如那无私奉献的母亲，她的一言一行，她的一句句亲切的问候，一声声嘘寒问暖……这不都是母爱的无私表达吗?

我后悔自己一直以来的熟视无睹。从十五年前开始，我攫取母亲的乳汁，并开始向家里索取蔽体裹腹的物质，然后才有了今天的自己。岁月流逝，我从一个年幼无知的小女孩，长到一个亭亭玉立的少女，而母亲两鬓却悄悄地长出了一根根银丝，她为我操碎了心，无怨无悔地献出了她的一切。

母爱，这杯浓浓的香甜的奶茶，我整整品了十五年，今夜才品出她真正的味道。

母亲，十五年来，我的任性，我的无知，给您带来了多少次伤心，我的叛逆给您带来了多少痛苦，而您总是用一颗宽厚仁慈的心，包容了我的一切，我如何才能报答您那博大而又深沉的爱呀!

在这静谧的夜，我又一次，细细地品味了这杯热气腾腾的草莓味的奶茶，我不禁潸然泪守护梦想 【题目】(1)题目：守护

(将题目补充完整，然后作文)

(2)看漫画写作文

右边漫画，不同的人读出不同的意味。仔细观察，根据你的理解，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇作文。

要求：①文体不限，字数不少于600字，诗歌不少于30行；②不得出现真实的校名、人名；③字迹工整，卷面整洁

【范文】守护梦想

守护梦想，如同守住故土。——题记

土地是厚实的，它承载了世间的本真。深山中的大树离开了苍苍林莽，抛弃了扎根的故土，被移植到喧闹的城市，虽被人赏识，却也因此失去了自然地本真，失去了枝叶下映衬下的那种自然纯真的苍翠。

你不必马蹄硝烟，纵横驰骋，也不必叱咤风云，更不必寻山觅水，只需守护自己的梦想，就如同坚守住心灵的故土一样，你就一定会在这一片净土上绽放光彩。

“路曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索。”

屈原从长长的历史甬道中走来，带着一身正气，带着满腹诗书才华，坚持“美政”理想，爱国，爱民地追逐着自己的梦，他为了楚国的兴盛而终身奔走疾呼，虽然他个性的棱角在世故的社会中不能保全，虽然他选择了“悲壮”之路。可在滔滔的汨罗江水中，他将为了自己热爱的故土，将自己洗刷地如此透彻清澄，至死也不放弃追求自己坚真的梦想，至死也要让自己梦想的血液随着故土流淌。

“安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜”

大唐的雕楼玉砌中有肥沃的土壤，诗仙李白本可“移植入宫”享受锦衣玉食，名利富贵。然而，他追求自然洒脱，不媚权贵的故土永远是诗仙的扎根之处，他不慕荣华，不强颜欢笑，毅然决然地选择追寻自己的梦想，让自己回归心灵中那方宁静的故土。

梦，虽触不可及，“行路难，多歧路”，但诗仙李白却一直在向前走，从不停歇!正因有了“俱怀逸兴壮思飞，欲上青天揽明月”这满怀壮志的故土，才能激励诗仙永远地追逐;正因有了“众鸟高飞尽，孤云独去闲”这份自由和洒脱，才会绽放他永不凋零的花蕾;正因有了“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”这份自信和豁达，才能守护着那份夯实的故土。倘若，没有了诗仙这宽阔的胸怀，这弃富贵于不顾的洒脱，怎能找到故土的那份宁静?

“五年归国路，十年两弹成”

钱学森解放前在美国学习，已经取得了辉煌的成就，然而，当祖国焕发出新的生机，百废待兴需要他时，他毅然冲破重重阻挠，回到祖国，因为祖国有他的梦想，因为在他心中家为轻，名利为轻，事业最重，因他的根永远要扎在这片生他养他的故土上。钱学森用生命践行着爱国情怀，告诉世人，在故土上，才能绽放自己的光彩，体现自己的价值，为此，他坚守故土，义无反顾!

只有守住这梦想的故土，你才可以仰歌长笑，才可以大义凛然地生，马革裹尸地还，你才能让自己的那方故土永远滋养着万物。点评：文章结构新巧。题记“守护梦想，如同守住故土”既照应文题，又统驭全篇。三个小标题按时间顺序，依次讲述了屈原、李白、钱学森的故事，故事叙议结合，且都扣住“梦想”这个中心话题展开。另外，三个小标题本身，或取自其名言，或浓缩其故事，特色鲜明。

第三篇：中考预测作文

1.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Padsgo into our class”.（南京的21所中学目前正在推进“电子书包”项目。部分中学已经用Pad代替了课本。以“平板电脑进课堂”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）The following is for reference only.(以下问题仅供参考)1.What’s your opinion on“Pads go into our class”? 2.Do you agree or not? 3.Give your suggestions on learning on Pads.Padsgo into our class

As is shown above, many schools in America and other countries, including China, are using Pads instead of traditional textbooks in their classes.From my view, they are of great help to the students.Firstly, Pads provide students with various forms of background information.With the help of stories, music, pictures and videos, classes can be great attractions to students.Secondly, Pads make students learn more.When they have their lessons, students can type on Pads to gain more information than what the teachers have taught them.Last but not the least, Pads are so small and light that we can go anywhere with them in our pockets without carrying a large schoolbag full of books.I’m in favour of this move as long as they are not misused in class, especially when it comes to exams.2.Write at least 60 words on the topic “My opinion on online payment”（以“网络支付之我见”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)提示：现在，大家在网上、超市或商场购物时，很流行用支付宝、微信钱包等支付工具，请发表你对这种现象的看法和建议。

My opinion on online payment Nowadays, people often use online payment when going shopping online or in the shopping mall.However, it has advantages as well as disadvantages.On one hand, online payment is more convenient and easier than traditional payment.It saves people a huge amount of time ,and this enables them to spend more time on work or other things that they want to do.On the other hand, online payment isn’t as safe as it seems, especially when people lost their phones.As a result, the government should make certain regulations to ensure the safety of online payment.To sum up, we should take everything into consideration, and only in these ways can we use online payment securely.3.为了提高人们的环保意识，你所在的环保小组计划组织一次环保宣传活动，假如你是组长，请用英文写一篇活动倡议，你的倡议必须包含以下内容: 1).What kinds of pollution have you noticed in your daily life? 2).What do you think caused the pollution? 3).What can you do to deal with the pollution?（注意：

1、短文字数不少于60个词，标点符合不占格。

2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

To be green consumers As is known to us,our environment has been polluted in the past decade.Water, land and air around us are so poisonous that we have developed a variety of diseases, including cancer.Behind the pollution, one major reason is that many people are not aware of the danger we are facing now.(Factories poured the waste water into the river nearby without being treated.Farmers overused the fertilizer and pesticide on the farm, hoping for a higher production.Citizens throw a larger amount of household waste every day.)To solve the problems, we should be green consumers.We can not only persuade others not to throw rubbish into the rivers, but also plant more trees to make the air cleaner.Moreover, we can use paper bags instead of plastic ones when we go shopping.Using public transportation instead of private cars is another choice.Only in these ways can we better our Earth.4.随着年龄增长，同学们或多或少都有一些自己的小秘密，当你有心里话的时候，你会选择去和父母、朋友或老师倾诉吗？写出自己的小秘密或者心里话，去向自己的父母、朋友或老师倾诉。

（注意：

1、短文字数不少于60个词，标点符合不占格。

2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

My inner thoughts and feelings to my maths teacher

I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help with my maths study.I will never forget the experience when I began to learn geometry.I work hard on geometry but it’s not my cup of tea.I was in a low spirit and almost gave up.Luckily, your encouragement and help brought me fresh hopes for geometry.You tutored me after classes, and your way to solve thegeometrical problems always

interested me.Step by step, I became brave enough to challenge the hard problems.My confidence came back to me.Unbelievably, I won the second prize in the maths examination.It was the first time that I had experienced the happiness of success in my life.How time flies!Myjunior high school life will come to end.I always remember the profound influence you have made on my studies.5.假如你是李华，你们学校开设了有关中国传统文化的综合实践课。请你用英文写一篇不少于60字的短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈为什么有必要开这门课，在课上你通常做什么以及你的感受。

Words for reference(以下短语仅供参考)： show ,make tea, paper cutting ,dumpling ,proud Questions for reference(以下问题仅供参考)1).Why is it necessary to have classes about traditional Chinese culture? 2).What do you usually do in these classes? 3).How do you feel?

What I have learnt in traditional Chinese culture class We had courses about traditional Chinese culture this term.In my opinion, it is very necessary to have these lessons because not only can we get to know more about Chinese culture but also we can apply what we have learnt to our real life to make our life more colorful.In the classes, I’ve learnt a lot.The teachers showed us how to make tea and told us the history of tea.Paper cutting, a traditional chinese art,was also included and I can cut some beautiful paper flowers now.Making traditional Chinese food is my favorite, so we tried making dumplings and zongzi.It’s really interesting and I firmly believe that other students also love these classes like me.By having these classes, we both learnt a lot and made friends with our teachers.I am proud of being a Chinese.6.这两年真人秀节目开始走红，譬如爸爸去哪，(Where are we going, Dad), 奔跑吧兄弟(Running man)，我们15个(We fifteen people)等等一经开播都得到观众的大力支持，这类节目都是在鼓励我们走出自己舒适的生活，去接受一些挑战，做一些自己以前没有做过的事情。

According to this, write at least 60 words on the topic “How to face the challenge?”

(据此，写出一篇不少于60字的短文，说明我们要不要去接受一些挑战，及面对挑战时应该以什么样的心态处理？标点符号不占格。)

How to face the challenge Our life is full of chances, but we also face challenges in the course of our growth.I always keep an open mind to face the challenges that I come across.A challenge is a friend.We live our life with its company.When I face a problem, I would rather treat it like a friend that I need to take care than an enemy that I must defeat.Only by keeping a peaceful and active mind can I make it.A challenge is a teacher.He tells me my strength and weakness.It encourages me for a higher aim.The learning and growth process is also a process of overcoming a challenge.It makes me confident and strong by being both a friend and a teacher.7.近两年流行一档农村孩子和城市孩子互换生活环境的节目。如果有这样一个体验机会，作为城市孩子的你，去了农村以后，该如何适应那里的生活？如何和那边的“爸爸妈妈”以及农村的小伙伴们相处？请以 My life in a countryside 写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。

My life in a countryside Born and living in Shanghai, I’m unfamiliar withthe life in the countryside.It is truly challenging and mysterious if I’m given the chance to go through the adventure.As the saying goes, do in Rome as Rome does.On one hand, I have to adapt the life as soon as possible, such as the terrible food and the awful living environment.On the other hand, I will cook some traditional dishes of my own family for “mom” and “dad” there to add a new taste to their table.For the children in the countryside, I hold the view that they are so kind and smart that I will make friends with them soon.I can tell them what the city life is like and share my stories with them.Frankly speaking, it will be my special experience that I never forget in the future.8.中考结束，你们班同学约定要举行一次大聚会。对比两幅图片，你会发现以前聚会大家欢声笑语，无所不谈。现在聚会朋友们低头不语，只听到各种信息的提示声。请你以The changes in our way of communication为题写一篇不少于60词的文章。文章内容包括以下几点：

1）对于两幅图中聚会时的不同情景，你的态度是怎样的？理由是什么？

2）给出改善的建议（至少2条）

The Changes in Our Way of Communication Now people are so keen on electronics that we spend most time on the net-pals instead of friends in front of us.To be frank, I am not for it.Most of us are living a busy life and it is not easy to be together once in a while, thus we’d better value the precious chance.In addition, getting together from time to time enables us to discuss something important that we can not talk about through QQ or Wechat.In order to avoid the same situation at our after-exam party, I’d like to suggest everyone turn our phones off or to silence.It is also a good choice to gather our phones and havesomeone look after them untill the party ends.Without such distraction, we can fully enjoy our time.In brief, I believe parties without phones can also be happy and meaningful.9.端午节是中国传统的节日，那么端午节你是怎么度过的呢？请你写一篇日记来记录你端午节的感受和收获。

Words for reference(以下短语仅供参考)：

the Dragon Boat Festival , activities , presents , celebrate

Thursday, Jun.9th, 2016.Sunny

It is the Dragon Boat Festival today.I got up early because I was asked to prepare for our family get-together with mom.First, we had to get rice and reed leaves for our traditional food, zongzi.Making a zongzi is really a skillful job.I never made it a triangle at first.It was mom’s instruction and encouragement that made me succeed.Then in the afternoon, we went to the park for pleasure.We saw many people in the park.Some were flying kites in different colors and shapes, some were taking photos, others were walking and talking with each other.Everyone was having a great time there.I was busy and tired, but I learnt the secret of success, never giving up.What an interesting and meaningful Dragon Boat Festival we had today!

10.Write at least 60 words on the topic of “Studying from Babyhood”.以“学习从婴儿开始抓起”为题，写一篇不少于60字的文章

The following is for reference only.(以下问题仅供参考)1.What’s your opinion on studying from babyhood?(谈下你对学习从婴儿开始抓起的看法)2.Do you agree or not?（你是否赞同从婴儿抓起？）

3.Give your suggestions on studying from babyhood?（请谈一下你的个人观点）

Nowadays more parents hope that their children will enter famous schools.Therefore, it is very important to study from a baby.Personally, I agree with it.As we all know, if our babies study early, her brain will be fully developed, learning things more quickly.Our babies can learn a lot, from musical instruments, Chinese, Maths to English.In this way, they have the chance to enter a good kindergarten.If our babies study late, it will be hard to catch up with others.For all these reasons above, it is necessary to study at an early age.11.Write a letter at least 60 words, according to the given situation(根据所给的情景写一封不少于60词的邀请信)Suppose you are Mary, a student of Sunny School.Shanghai Disneyland Park is going to officially open to the public soon.Write a letter to your pen pal Jack and invite him to visit Shanghai Disneyland together.Phrase for reference(以下短语仅供参考)be keen on, officially open, combine with, have chance to do…, the most unforgettable thing，Dear Jack，Glad to write to you!I know you are keen on Mickey Mouse and Disney cartoons.There is great news that Shanghai Disneyland, the sixth one in the world, will be officially open to the public soon, combining Disney cartoon characters with games and adventures.We will have chance to explore six unique and unforgettable lands.We can not only enjoy the famous stage showing the King Lion but also join in many different theme activities especially the parades.In addition, we can go shopping in the Souvenir shop filled with lovely toys.The most unforgettable thing is to see Enchanted Storybook Castle!I’m sure it’ll be a fantastic journey here!

I am looking forward to your reply soon!

Yours sincerely，Mary

12.上海迪士尼度假区将于2016年06月16日正式开门迎客，并举办为期数日的盛大开幕 庆典，届时，必将会有很多游客进入园区游玩。作为上海中学生的一员，你对即将进园游玩的游客，有什么好的建议和意见。请以“My suggestions on visiting Shanghai Disneyland”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。Questions for reference(以下问题仅供参考)1)Give a brief introduction about Shanghai Disneyland.2)Some suggestions on visiting Shanghai Disneyland.As we all know, Shanghai Disney Park will be open to the public soon.It’s founded by China and the United States.Although it is very expensive to visit Shanghai Disney Park, it’s still popular with a lot of tourists.However, how should we visit it happily and efficiently?

Firstly, we can make some preparations for the visit.For example, we can search for the best route online, and make arrangements that are both effective and comfortable.Secondly, it is also important to wear comfortable clothes and shoes for easy walking.To sum up, I hope these two suggestions will be of great help for you.Wish you a wonderful trip!

13.在生活中，大家经常会遇到意见不一致的时候。当你和他人意见不同时，你会选择听取他人的意见还是坚持自己的意见或其他。以“Listen to others or not”为题陈述一件你和他人意见不一样的事件，并写出你的处理方式。

In our life, we may meet different views on the same thing.In my eyes, the best way to deal with the problem is to consider others’ opinions before making the final decisions.Last month, the headmaster asked us to finish a project in pairs.In the beginning, my partner and I held different opinions.Neither he nor I wanted to change our mind.In order to avoid entering a dead end, we decided to discuss it together.Through listening to each other, we found the key points and the task was finished perfectly.I learn that when meeting a problem, try to listen to others and you will get something great!

14.Write at least 60 words about the topic “I bring my happiness to _____”(请以“我给______ 带来快乐”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)The following is for reference only.(以下问题仅供参考)1).Who do you bring your happiness to? 2).What do you bring to your family, friends or strangers? 3).How do you feel?

My favorite proverb is “Happiness is a choice, not a mood”.So I firmly choose to be a happy man who infects others.I hope that I can bring my happiness to people around me, my family, friends and even strangers.To my excitement, I can bring happiness to strangers who live in old people’s home.Grandmas and grandpas are really happy when I as well as my classmates go there and put on performance for them.At that moment, there are big smiles on their faces.In fact, I am really excited and feel that I am the happiest person in the world when bringing happiness to others.How happy it is!

15.2016年1月1日起，上海市颁布了《上海市烟花爆竹安全管理条例》，明确规定禁止外环以内燃放烟花爆竹。对此，你有什么看法？你每年都放烟花吗？写出你的想法和建议?

Setting off firecrackers is a Chinese tradition.It brings us a lot of happiness.So many people do it during the Spring Festival.But I don’t set off firecrackers and I think it should be banned.Firstly, setting firecrackers not only pollutes the air but also makes a lot of noise.They are harmful to our health.What’s more, every year many people are badly injured because of the firecrackers, which make their family sad during the festival.So in order to protect the environment and our safety, I think it is necessary to stop people from setting off firecrackers.

第四篇：2015中考作文预测

主题素材专项备考

一一2015年中考作文备考素材关键词：真情

【2015年中考作文命题分析】

真情，是每一道作文试题的核心命意，感情唯有真实才可贵，感情唯有真实才美丽。“心灵”“美好”“美丽”“真情”之类的字眼高频出现于各地中考文题之中。“分享是美丽 的“(安顺)、“美丽的绽放”(潜江)、“触动心灵的”(遂宁)、“感悟美好”(凉山)等2014年中考作文试题便是这一主题高频呈现的明证。0 1 4年中考此类文题还有：我心灵的甘露(天津)，那份不一样的真情(长沙)，——就在身边(宜宾)，感动(雅安)，深处(宁波)，心泉叮咚(沈阳)，等等。

让发自心灵深处的声音穿透肺腑停驻于笔头纸端，让美丽的真情倾泻于字里行间，你一定能在这样美好的真情中看到一个全新的世界。

按照这一思路，真情类作文备考，我们还可关注以下这类相似的文题训练： 情到深处

心灵之花盛开的季节 我＿＿＿了(从“哭”“笑”“陶醉”“迷惘”“疑惑”“懂(明白)”等词语中选填一个)不想＿＿＿(从“住校”“成为作业的机器”“做笼中的小鸟”“压抑自己的情绪”等词语中选填一个)想＿＿＿的时候(家、你、母亲、父亲、玩、旅行„„)无论写怎样的真情，都离不开喜怒哀乐。“喜”有喜悦、愉悦、兴奋、沉浸，“怒”有生气、愤怒、怨恨、憎恶、厌弃，“哀”有悲伤、痛心、悔恨、惋惜，“乐”有快乐、陶醉、自豪、得意„„只要我们将内心潜在的真实情感发掘出来，因真实的生活而自然生发出真实的情感，就一定能写出令自己心动的文章来一一如果连自己都感动不了，可别指望阅卷者青睐哦。【经典素材】 文段一：

他在长长的行列里，等候护照检验；我就站在外面，用眼睛跟着他的背影一寸一寸往前挪。终于轮到他，在海关窗口停留片刻，然后拿回护照，闪入一扇门，倏乎不见。

我一直在等候，等候他消失前的回头一瞥。但是他没有，一次都没有。

此刻他二十一岁，上的大学，正好是我教课的大学。但即使是同路，他也不愿搭我的车。即使同车，他戴上耳机一一只有一个人能听的音乐，是一扇紧闭的门。有时他在对街等候公车，我从高楼的窗口往下看：一个高高瘦瘦的青年，眼睛望向灰色的海；我只能想象，他的内在世界和我的一样波涛深邃，但是，我进不去。一会儿公车来了，挡住了他的身影。车子开走，一条空荡荡的街，只立着一只邮筒。

我慢慢地、慢慢地了解到，所谓父女母子一场，只不过意味着，你和他的缘分就是今生今世不断地在目送他的背影渐行渐远。你站立在小路的这一端，看着他逐渐消失在小路转弯的地方，而且，他用背影告诉你：不必追。

一一龙应台《目送》 【运用剖析】 “描写+抒情”，是真情表达最为常用的方式。描写，要力求精准形象；抒情，要尽可能写出真实的情感。文段从“他”的“等候”“停留片刻”“闪入”“倏乎不见”，“我”的“站”“挪”“等候”等几个简洁的词语，极为精练地传达出人物内心真情，并将之前发生的相关事件插叙进来，使描写的内容显得更为丰富，以便为后文哲理性的抒情铺垫。这是描写的部分。

之后，作者则从“我”内心的真实情感出发，以抒情的笔触写及“我”之于事件的思考。“目送他的背影渐行渐远”是抒情的核心，“不必追”则真挚而深刻的感悟结论，也是至为感性的人生启示。这样的抒情不是无本之木无源之水，它紧紧依托于前文的铺垫，更因为抒情的“形象性”而使情感显得更加自然，更加真挚。

叙写真情就该这样，由人事景物自然生发情感，让情感表述更加形象。文段二：

我还记得2002年正月初二的那一天，我和爱人应邀到城西的弟弟家去吃饭，我们没有乘车从城里走，而是上了堤坝，绕着小城步行而去。那天下着雪，落雪的天气通常是比较温暖的，好像雪花用它柔弱的身体抵挡了寒流。

堤坝上一个行人都没有，只有我们俩，手挽着手，踏着雪无言地走着。山峦在雪中看上去模模糊糊的，而堤坝

下的河流，也已隐遁了踪迹，被厚厚的冰雪覆盖了。河岸的柳树和青杨，在飞雪中看上去影影绰绰的，天与地显得是如此的苍茫，又如此的亲切。走着走着，我忽然落下了眼泪，明明知道过年落泪是不吉祥的，可我不能自持，那种无与伦比的美好滋生了我的伤感情绪。三个月后，爱人别我而去，那年的冬天再回到故乡时，走在白雪茫茫的堤坝上的，就只是我一人了。那时我恍然明白，那天我为何会流泪，因为天与地都在暗示我，那美好的情感将别你而去，你将 被这亘古的苍凉永远环绕着!

一一迟子建《我的世界下雪了》

【运用剖析】

这是一个以曲折的笔法传递真情的范例。

同样是以描写起笔，作者让我们 看到了飘洒的雪花，让人感觉能抵挡寒流的雪花，看到了那么熟悉而亲切的河流。但作者并未就此抒发内心的真挚情感，而是让“泪”先流了下 来一一这泪是真实可触的，却让读者感觉有些茫然，为什么明明知道落泪是不吉祥的，还如此抑制不住自己的情感?但当我们读完整个语段之后，一切便恍然大悟：原来，是“美好的情感将别你而去，你将被这亘古的苍凉永远环绕”!而这美好的情感，如果你读了《我的世界下雪了》全文就会明白，是“我”与“爱人”间那份相濡以沫的深情。

许多时候，我们都会莫名地喜怒哀乐，说它“莫名”，只是因为眼下还没能感悟出是怎样的真情让自己生发相应的情绪，一旦找到了情感的“触发点”，你便恍然明白：原来，是 深埋在心底的某种情感让自己拥有这样的举动。

迟子建以她的生花妙笔告诉了我们如何描写这种看似“莫名”的情感，相信你也能把类似的情感写得真实而动情。

【2015年中考作文试题前瞻】

1．雨，再熟悉不过的天气现象。雨，又不仅仅是天气现象，它或许还与你内心的情感有关。

请以“走过多情雨季”为题写一篇作文。

要求：①除诗歌外，文体自选；②结合自己的生活体验写出真情实感，且全文不少于600字。2．“百度词典”对“心花怒放”一词的解释如下：怒放，盛开。心里高兴得像花儿盛开一样。形容极其高兴。请以“心花怒放“为题写一篇文章。

要求：①除诗歌外，文体自选；②结合自己的生活体验写出真情实感，且全文不少于600字。【素材链接】

用行动传递人间真情

爷孙2人因交通意外而不慎落入10米深的河沟里，险些丧命，山西3名铁路职工英勇施救却不留名。一心想要报恩的爷孙辗转数日终于找到了救命恩人。

10米深的河沟，常年流淌着1米多深的河水，被困河沟里的小轿车，无法打开的车门，呼救无助的老人和不谙世事的女童，手拉手迅速蹬水走来，用木棍用力拉撬车门前来施救的3位好心人，救人英雄朴实的话语，未留下姓名就已远去的背影„„一个个精彩画面的回放，把3名普普通通的山西铁路职工用爱谱写的故事呈现在世人面前。

素材运用：这件小事再次验证了平凡人身上传递的那份真情的力量。“遇上这事谁都会伸手相助的”，英雄们朴实的话语，折射了平凡人身上那道耀眼的光芒。“赠人玫瑰，手 留余香”，从大家默默而无私的行动中看，素材可运用于“帮助”这一话题；普通人之所以不普通，在于他们的血液里奔流着真情待人的因子，从这个角度而言，素材可运用于“平凡中的伟大”这一话题。

迁安“老好人”候秀霞

2010年4月，侯秀霞送走了80多岁的奶奶婆。在奶奶婆的灵柩前，侯秀霞痛哭流涕，表示自己一定不辜负奶奶婆的重托，让大伯公公安享幸福晚年。大伯公公名叫朱瑞，侯秀霞结婚后，时常去照顾他们。奶奶婆去世后，侯秀霞也不负重托，吃的穿的都可着大伯公公。大伯公公因脑血栓住了4次医院，每次都在侯秀霞的精心照料下转危为安。如今，在她的精心照顾下，大伯公公的身体一天天地硬朗起来。

侯秀霞除了打理好自己家里的事情外，还尽自己所能，帮助周围的邻居。谁家有需要，她都会去帮助；哪家有矛盾，她也会去劝解；做了什么好吃的，她也常常给邻居们送一些„„就是因为这些小事，侯秀霞“老好人”的外号传开了。

素材运用：真情助人已属不易，用真情传递人间大爱更显其可贵，从这个角度而言，素材可用于“传递”这一话题；侯秀霞本就是个老人，老人该是这个社会的弱势群体，但她总感觉到“奶奶婆”一样的孤寡老人比自己更弱，将幸运者对不幸者的真情关怀当成了自己的一份责任，从这个角度而言，素材可用于“责任”这一话题。

【佳作示例】

走过多情雨季——团慈溪市新世纪实验学校陆雨欣 雨，总在不经意间给你带来些淡淡的伤感。周三晴转暴雨

刺目的日光无法照彻我忐忑的心，心的阴霾处躲着个令人烦躁的小预兆。

和骏、威并排走出食堂，难得的漫步时光都显得那么滞笨，拖着碎步，踅进了办公室。因为粗心大意，因为挂着陌生面孔的定义，科学测试，我竟折了半壁江山!一向好强的我，一时之间眼眶微润，咽下泪水，匆忙从后门踅回教室，狠狠地完成试卷的订正。再一次小偷般踅到办公室等待老师讲解时，同学们争相查看成绩的场景，终是让泪水无情决了堤，我感觉得到自己身体微微的战栗，我听得到自己内心的哀伤和悔恨。

逝了热情的老师和同学注意到一隅不停抽泣的我，纷纷踱过来安慰，哭势一时间得到缓解，小妮种种卖萌的劝慰更让我感到温暖，老师耐心细致的讲解则既让我明白了细心才是我最重要的挚友，也让我因为懂得自己的成绩与“粗心”休戚相关而徒增悔恨。回到教室，一夜无语之间，内心传来的却是无助的泪。

是夜，雨滴落于静寂的夜，我的天空里阴云密布。周四多云转阵雨

一夜仿佛一整个世纪，悔恨在时间的打磨之下少了尖锐的棱角，似乎能静下心来听老师的讲解了，就这样静默着直到午餐之后。

独自一人迈入办公室，心若止水：倒数第五!虽在心理上早有准备，却依然被这个结局打傻。乖乖地等待老师惩罚，老师却故作严肃地抛下一句：“教训，想必你已经记住了。”沉寂的心湖一时间波涛汹涌。

窗外，那棵永远挺拔的雪松，被一阵突如其来的阵雨击打得噼啪作响。

周五雨转晴

雨，在中午时分停了。我的心里，找不着一丝丝回家的热情。该怎么解释呢?摇摇头，叹息一声一一又该惹他们生气了。

妈妈一如既往地站在门口迎我。夕阳染红门前绿叶带上稀疏的几株衰草，一如我内心一般破败。“科学，考得好差。”不知哪来的勇气，我第一时间宣布了这个“噩耗”。一向暴躁的母亲出乎意料地没有如雷般暴跳，淡淡一笑之间默然不语。

其实，我更愿意母亲一如往常般训斥一通。

“看见了吗?天晴了，连续下了两天都晴了。有什么好难过的?”耳畔传来父亲的声音。抬头望向窗外，夕阳染红了整个西天。

走过多情的雨季，呈现于你眼前的必定是温暖的阳光。

同学微评

马骏：似乎，写考试失利的文章很多，雨欣的这篇文章让叙事与借景抒发的真情交替出现，水乳交融，艺术效果果然不同凡响。看来，陈酒新瓶，让真情之花在普通生活的绿地上尽情开放，才能让平凡的素材焕发出崭新的生命。

第五篇：中考预测作文

假设你是李华，在得知四川大地震的消息之后，作为校学生会主席，你决定给灾区的中学生写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

1、得知四川发生突如其来的特大地震灾害，心情非常难过；

2、看到你们表现得非常镇定、坚强，感动得热泪盈眶；

3、患难见真情，全校师生向你们表示慰问的同时，共计捐款12万元；

4、美好家园可以重建，希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。

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Dear friends,I'm awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown.Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.A better hometown can be rebuilt.Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!

Yours Sincerely,Li Hua

The Wenchuan Earthquake

May 12, 2008, the Chinese people know about this big news-Wenchuan earthquake.In this earthquake.Many people left this world, so I am sad but I am glad to see that more and more People to help Wenchuan.I hope I can help people in Wenchuan.In the future, Wenchuan building will be better than before.It will be a beautiful city.4月20日四川雅安发生7.0级大地震，作为一名中学生，你有什么样的感受呢?你有没有献出自己的爱心呢?下面是你整理的2013年中考英语作文预测：雅安地震的参考范文。

2013年4月20日，四川省雅安地区发生了7.0级大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法

和感受。

要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右;词汇参考：地震 earthquake悲痛 sorrow受到感动 be deeply moved安慰 comfort重建 rebuild自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth

参考范文：

On April 20th, a big earthquake happened in Ya’an, Sichuan.Many people lost their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.I’m deeply moved by these people.So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.导语：雅安地震给灾区儿童带来了极大的伤害，他们有的失去了亲人，有的则受到了心灵上的创伤。请给灾区的儿童写一封慰问信吧!下面是小编整理的一篇参考范文。

I feel so sorry for your loss, maybe yesterday you're leading a happy life, but this unexpected terrible disaster destoryed all, no one would like that coming.But don't let the earthquake ruin your life and take your sunshine away!I hope you overcome the pain in a short time and get back to school with all your classmates.Hope you always feel be loved and protected, you must believe that there is a lot of nice people in our society and they're all willing to help if you met any difficulties.I believe you are strong in mind.Life is hard, try to turn this memory into consistant power.No matter what happens, as long as we are together, we will never ever ever ever give up!There is always hope and love!