第一篇：中考英语十大常见作文话题
中考英语十大常见作文话题---按要点分类
一、难忘的事（1）别人帮助我 We became friends by accident.One day Jack was playing basketball on the playground.Amazed at how skillful he was, I made up my mind to play as well as him.I was grateful when he agreed to teach me.Every time when I wanted to give up halfway, it was Jack who encouraged me.Gradually, I mastered the skills and became confident enough to challenge the best players in our school.（2）我帮助别人 It happened on a Friday when I was seated in a crowded bus, heading for my school.It was just at that moment that an elderly lady with her little grandson stepped onto the bus.Immediately, I offered my seat to them without hesitation.The elderly lady expressed her great appreciation to me and we enjoyed a pleasant short trip together.（3）做家务表示对父母的感恩 Being a 15-year-old middle school student and feeling my parents have done so much to me, I have been considering what I can do for them to show my gratitude.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I decided to take this opportunity to do something helpful for our family.Not only did I clean the bowls and cookers, but I put all the messy things away.Tired and sweaty, I was about to open the door to throw rubbish when my parents showed up at the door.They were amazed to see what I had done and praised me.From then on, I determined to work harder to do more for my family.二、写人（1）外貌 My favorite teacher is Mr.Wang who is handsome and of medium build.My best friend is Linda who is a beautiful girl with long black hair and beautiful bright eyes.（2）性格
Mary is always wearing a sweet smile and willing to help others.Mr.Lee is our favorite teacher who has great sense of humor and always makes his class lively and interesting.（3）爱好 He is not only good at playing basketball but also does well in playing chess.Swimming is his favorite thing to do in his free time and he also shows great interest in playing soccer.（4）学习成绩 She is very good at lessons especially English, so she is one of the top students in our class.（5）难忘的一件事（见话题一）（6）感想（体会）I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream.That’s his best quality I should learn from him.Maybe that’s only a small thing and it’s not worth being mentioned.But I always believe a small act of kindness will make a big difference, so I make up my mind to learn from him to be the person who offers timely help to those in need.（7）祝福（祝愿）I sincerely hope Li Lei will make greater progress in a new high school.And I also wish he will have a bright future.三、与人相处，友情
（How to get on well with others）建议式
In our daily life, it is of great importance to know how to get along well with other people.First, sharing common hobbies or happiness with others may be of great help for you to make new friends.Then, being a friendly person, you’d better learn to smile to others often.Because smile passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people.Last but not least, when facing problems, always remember to communicate with each other patiently, try to overcome the difficulties together, which will also deepen your friendship.四、与父母沟通
例题：如何与父母建立良好关系（1）父母与子女关系良好的重要性
An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth.（2）这种良好关系应该是怎样的
Parents always show love and concern for us.They are our good listeners, advisers and supporters.With their help, we can over many difficulties in our life.（2）如何建立良好关系
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children show respect each other and exchange ideas freely.To build a relationship of this kind, parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.五、课余生活，兴趣爱好（1）集邮版 I’ve always been fond of collecting stamps since I was a little child.As far as I’m concerned, collecting stamps is a meaningful hobby, making my spare time interesting and exciting.Besides, when reviewing my collection of valuable stamps, my heart if filled with great sense of satisfaction and I can relax myself and keep away from the great pressure of school study life.Although my parents are strongly against my hobby for they consider it as a waste of money and they also think that searching for stamps may take up much of my time, which should be spent on my studies, I will try my best to communicate with them patiently and I believe they will understand and support me eventually.（2）运动版 户外运动---（健康话题）If the weather is fine, I will always spend my weekends jogging in a park to breathe fresh air which can refresh my mind and make energetic enough to concentrate better on my study.团队运动---（与人相处话题）Playing basketball / volleyball / football with your classmates after school will be a good idea, which will be of great help to not only keep you physically strong but build up team work spirit and deepen the friendship between you and your friends.六、环保
（1）环保的重要性 It is of extreme importance to protect the environment by leading a low-carbon life style which is environmentally friendly.（2）具体做法
种树---
Firstly, planting trees in a park on weekends with your friends will be a good choice.Because by doing so, the air will be refreshed and the environment where we live will be beautified.走路/骑车上学---
Besides, if I were you, I would walk to school instead of driving so that the gas that does to our health will be reduced effectively.随手关水龙头---Last but not least, It is necessary to save water by turning off the tap after washing hands.Or we’ll run out of fresh water very soon.（3）结尾，呼吁大家一起来保护环境 The environmental protection is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us.Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take actions from now on to protect our environment.七、学习方法（1）学习英语---听 It is of great help for you to listen to English songs and radio in order to improve your English pronunciation every morning on your way to school.（2）学习英语---说 It is strongly suggested to make friends with native English speakers so that you will know the culture of English speaking countries better and speak the language fluently.（3）学习英语---读 Reading some English newspapers and books will be a good idea, this way your English vocabulary will be enlarged effectively.（4）学习英语---写 If I were you, I would write to my pen pal who lives in America because by doing so, my writing skills will be improved.（5）老师指导 Having an English teacher is of great importance.Because you can hardly learn English well without instruction.（6）有信心 If you believe in yourself, you will be strong enough to overcome any difficulty that you face in studying English.（7）团队合作式学习 Study with a group by discussing problems that you can solve and learn from the practical study methods shared selflessly by others.八、假期计划（1）志愿者
做法---Our school is home to many special young people who all volunteer their free time to help others.I have been always dreaming of becoming a professional singer.So in the coming vacation, I volunteer to sing for groups of the elderly people at the old people’s home to cheer them up.What’s more, I love reading, and I put this love to good use by being a volunteer and working in the after-school care center at her local elementary school.Here, I help young children to read.感想---Volunteering is great!Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but I get to spend time doing what I love to do.”（2）旅行放松（减压话题）After a tiring and stressful school term, the summer vacation which I have been longing for is around the corner.回老家度假---I will go to visit my grandparents and spend my summer vacation there because beautiful natural views of that small country always flash in my mind during the busy school days.I was brought up by them and I always take the place as my second hometown.国内外旅行---Traveling around China or abroad will be my first choice to spend the summer vacation.It can enrich my knowledge that can’t be gained from school books and broad my horizons.What’s more, I will be completely relaxed and free from the stress and tiredness of busy school study life.九、健康话题
（1）以H1N1为例，说明健康的重要性 Presently, the disease HINI is flooding every corner of the world which seriously threatens people’s health.Therefore, it is a hot topic among people to keep healthy.（2）具体做法
吃---To start with, it’s very essential for us to for good habits of eating and drinking.Eating more fruits and vegetables serves our benefit.Meanwhile, keeping balanced diet is equally important to our health.运动---What’s more, we’d best take part in the proper sport activities such as playing basketball or running.It is said that no health without sports because sports can keep us refreshed and improve our immunity system.作息习惯（充足睡眠）---Additionally, a good lifestyle matters a lot.Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.乐观的生活态度---Last but not the least, an active attitude keeps the doctor away.We are supposed to get along well with our friends and keep happy all the time.（3）总结 To conclude, if we hope to lead a healthy life and be strong, we must bear in mind these words: healthy diet, proper sports, good lifestyle and active attitude.十、周围环境（1）交通安全（红灯）It’s very important for students to know about the traffic rules.When the red light is on, you must stop and you are not allowed to go on walking.Even though you have something urgent to do or maybe you think the drivers dare not run over you.But do you know that rushing is at the cost of your life? So it’s not worth taking the risk.（绿灯）It’s safe to cross the road when the light is green.（黄灯）When the orange light is on, you must wait and be careful, because the red light will be on very soon.Here are some suggestions to protect ourselves.First, we should follow the traffic lights and can’t break the traffic rules.Second, we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before stepping forward to cross the street.Last but not least, don’t forget that it’s very dangerous to play on the street.From now on not only I myself will strictly obey the traffic rules but I’ll also call on my classmates and my family to do so.（2）网络安全
利---The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.We can not only read news from home and abroad, but also get information, send emails, make phone calls, attend on-line schools, read various books and study English by ourselves.What’s more, people can enjoy music, watch sports matches, play all kinds of games and go shopping on-line.弊---However, every coin has two sides.It’s risky to make friends and shop on-line.What’s worse, some students who are addicted to the Internet don’t study hard or even quit school.个人观点---For my part, I completely agree with the latter view that the Internet has more disadvantages than advantages.It results in various computer crimes.What is more, it is harmful to the growth of the young.Something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the Internet.
第二篇：中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
1.审题不清
如2004年中考作文
要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题：
误 My father and my mother is all teacher.正 My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.误 The apples cheap.I'll take some.正 The apples are cheap.I'll take some.5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代词的误用 / 6
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.For example, my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.例1.When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.改为 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 When I get to the station the train leave.正 When I got to the station the train had left.10.综合性错误：
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
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第三篇：中考作文常见话题
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近几年全国中考作文均为话题作文，这是因为话题作文既能很好地为考生创设便于自由发挥的写作空间，又能综合考查考生的语文基本功和创新能力，特别是考查考生的联想、想像、描写、抒情和论述等多种能力。那么，当今时代的话题作文中，热点“话题”有哪些呢?
初中毕业生应该具备了一定的感悟能力，感悟人生的真谛对初中生来说意义重大。感悟人生，就要感悟生活、感悟生命、感悟快乐和幸福、感悟友情、感悟亲情、感悟人格、感悟自我、感悟成败等。因而，人的自控与他控、自尊与自爱、自信与自强、自戒与自省、自卑与自弃以及青春、快乐、幸福、人与人、正直、真诚、信任、信仰、机遇、人格、个性、毅力、从容、失败、满足与不满足、奋进与竞争、坚忍与忍耐、追求与超越等等，都有可能成为中考作文的话题。
朝气蓬勃的初中生，应该有五大追求：追求心中的太阳——理想，追求终身的财富——知识，追求生命的保护神——品格，追求人生的希望——完美，追求生活中的明灯——友情，那么，青春的路标、人生的目标、灵魂的坐标、真知的探索、美的体味与欣赏、美的创造与追求、人生贵相知、信仰和追求等等，都是很好的作文话题。
不少考生的中考作文选择了书信体。书信体作文，一般地应对对方提出一些忠告。下列话题都可以成为“忠告”的话题：人生、认真、奋斗、成才、微笑、宽容、容纳、回报、梦想、机遇、理智、品行、名声、未来、善良、沉默、创造、苦乐、存在、良心、角色、比较、交友、激情、热情、渴望、攀登、友谊、逢时、高雅、流言、诺言、后悔、美丽、朋友、朴素、关怀、勇气、拥有、帮助、做人、待人、看人、相处、挫折、逃避、岁月、寄托、希望、支点、充实、时髦、顿悟、纯洁、享受、独处、普通、体验、信誉、独特、隐私、宁静、距离、魅力、人缘、敬佩、平凡、价值、真心、真情、骄傲、坦然、愧疚、模仿、承诺、境界、自勉、批评、体谅、谦虚、完美……建议同学们在作文备考中加以思索，并尽可能练练笔。
续写式作文也能很好地为考生创设便于自由发挥的写作情境，同时还能与话题作文结合起来。如阅读下列材料，完成两道作文题：
一家事务所想购买一块地皮，但被地皮的主人——一位性格倔强的孀居老太太一口拒绝。一个天寒地冻的下午，老太太恰好经过这家事务所的门前，她想顺便劝总经理“死了这条心”。她推开门，发现里面收拾得十分整齐干净。她觉得自己穿着脏木屐走进去很不合适。正犹豫不决时，一位年轻姑娘笑容满面地迎上来。姑娘毫不犹豫地脱下自己的拖鞋给老太太穿，然后像亲孙女一样搀扶着老太太慢慢上楼。穿着带有姑娘体温的拖鞋，老太太……
(1)据文段续写一篇300字的短文，使这个故事有一个结局。
(2)根据这个故事，以“爱心的力量”为话题，写一篇800字左右的文章，题目自拟，文体自选。
上文对一些热点“话题”进行了罗列，供同学们复习参考。鉴于同学们的中考复习已步入冲刺阶段，笔者再挑出一批重点话题，请同学们也来个“重点”关注、思考。这些话题是：如果、成功者从不等待时机成熟、做时代的弄潮儿、败给悲观、读懂失败、今天我们该怎样做学生、造就与迷失、“自信者强”与“自强者胜”、一念之间、抬起头来做人、解读幸福、善良是宝、道德建设、人生价值、与时俱进、简单与平凡、争取与放弃、进取与超越、忍耐与等待、伟大的人格、生命是一张画布。
第四篇：英语常见话题作文经典
1.True Beauty 真正的美
Everyone is attracted by beauty and beauty is powerful.But what is true beauty? Perhaps you can get the answer from the following story.每个人都会被美所吸引，美有强大的力量。但是什么是真正的美呢?或许你可以从下面的事情中得到答案。This morning I went to the market to buy some vegetables with my parents.On the way we all highly praised a young man in western-style clothes and leather shoes who was riding by.But he rode so fast that he knocked an old lady down carelessly.Instead of stopping, he pretended not to see this and rode away quickly.We were all very angry with the young man.To our happiness, a girl in plain dress ran forward at once, helped the lady up and took her home.We all praised the girl.今天早上我和父母一起去市场买蔬菜，路上我们都赞叹一个西装革履的正骑车经过的年轻人。但是他骑得太快了，不小心把一位老妇人撞倒在地。而他却假装没看到，飞快地骑走了。我们都生那个年轻人的气。让人欣慰的是，一个穿着朴素的女孩立刻跑过来，扶起老人并把她送回了家。我们都夸奖这个小女孩。
From this we know we cannot judge a person by his appearance.A person who is dressed beautifully may not have a beautiful soul.Only a person who has a beautiful soul is really beautiful.由此我们知道了，不能通过外表来判断一个人。一个身穿华服的人可能没有美好的心灵，拥有美丽灵魂的人才是真正美丽的。
2.My Hometown
我的家乡
My hometown, which is in the south of Shandong Province, is a very beautiful village.It lies on the east bank of a small river, surrounded by green mountains, In the past my hometown was poor, and people led a hard life.They couldn't afford to send their children to school.But, great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past twenty years.Many families.have not only color TV sets, but also telephones, fridges, computers, and so on.New roads, houses, schools, hospitals have been built.People in my hometown are working hard for a better life.我的家乡在山东南部，是一个非常漂亮的村庄，它位于一条小河的东岸，为绿色的大山所环抱。过去，我的家乡很穷，人们过着艰难的生活，孩子读不起书。但是在刚刚过去的二十年里，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化口许多家庭不仅有了彩色电视机，而且电话、冰箱、电脑等应有尽有。新修了公路，新建了房屋、学校和医院。家乡人民正在为过上更好的生活而辛勤工作。
3.What Is Success? 什么是成功？
What is success? Different people hold different views on This question.Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money.Others argue that success means holding an important government post.Still others believe that whoever has got high academic title is successful.It is clear that there are quite different opinions on success.什么是成功？不同的人对此问题有不同的看法。有些人认为，如果一个人能挣许多的钱，他就是成功者。另一些人则争辩说，成功意味着高居政府要职。还有些人则认为，谁有高级职称，谁就是成功者。可见，对成功有截然不同的看法。
In order to become successful, you should first of all be both perseverance and hardworking.As you know, whatever you do, there are always two possible results: success and failure.When you fail, you should never lose heart.On the contrary, you must build up your confidence and work even harder.You should always keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it.In addition, you should pay great attention to your work method.It is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work.Finally, it is important for you to get along well with your co-workers, care for each other and help each other.If you follow these principles, you will
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certainly achieve remarkable success in the future.要成为成功者，首先，你必须有毅力并且勤奋。正如你所知道的，不管你做什么事，总有两种可能的结果：成功或失败。当你失败时，你不应丧失信心。相反，你应该增强信心，并加倍努力。你应始终牢记，毅力是成功之母，勤奋则是成功的关键。此外，你应多注意工作方法。你应不断总结经验，提高工作效率。最后，你应该和你的同事友好相处，互相帮助，互相关心。如果你遵循这些原则，你将来一定能取得成功。
4.The Way to Stay Healthy
保持健康的方法
Health is most important for any of us.]n order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.健康对我们任何人来说都是最为重要的。为了保持健康，我们需要一些普通的知识。
First]y, pay attention to the diet.We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and Iow in fat.As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”So fruit is good for health.Don＇t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter.Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us.Don＇t drink too much coffee, either.首先，注意你的饮食。我们应该吃大量的水果和蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素并且脂肪含量较低。正如一句谚语所说：“一天一个苹果不求医。”因此水果对健康有益。不要吃太多富合脂肪的食物，比如说黄油。同时，应当适量地吃甜食，因为糖过多对我们人体不利，也不要喝太多的咖啡。
Secondly, exercise is necessary.Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat.People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than who don＇t.其次，锻炼是必需的；经常性的锻炼能使我们保持身材；通常每天跑步的人的心脏要比那些不跑步的人更强壮。Finally, form good living habits.We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard.Over work and little sleep will lead to illness.What＇s more, stay away from cigarettes.最后，养成良好的生活习惯。我们晚上应该睡八小时，不要过分辛苦地工作。过度劳作和睡眠不足将导致生病。而且，不要吸烟。
These are the things we should pay attention to so as to stay healthy.以上这些方面我们都该注意，这样才能保持健康。
5.Protecting the Environment
保护环境
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories.Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed.Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如汽车污染的空气影响了人们的呼吸，工厂释放污染的气体，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排人河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可见随意丢弃的垃圾。事实上，污染正威胁我们的生存。
The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations.Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems.Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government.Laws have been passed to stop pollution.I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代去照顾好它。庆幸的是，愈来愈多的人们已经意识到这些问题。政府已经采取了很多措施去解决这些问题，法律已被通过以制止污染。我希望这些问题在不远的将来能得到解决，我们的家园变得越来越好。
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pollution and so on.We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.我们必须面对现实，采取行动解决环境问题。例如必须通过新的法律严格控制工业污染问题，大众必须接受污染危害的教育等。我们希望这些措施的有效实施能带给我们一个健康的环境。
6.Love Is More Important Than Money
爱比金钱更重要
When asked money and love which one is more important, different people have different ideas.As for me, love is more important.My reasons are as follows.当问到金钱和爱情哪一个更重要时，不同的人有不同的观点。对我而言，我觉得爱情更重要。我的原因如下。First, money cannot buy true love.The girl who firmly stated on a TV dating show that she would rather cry in a BMW than smile on a bicycle is just a case in point.From this point we can see that, no matter how rich people are, they cannot buy true love.首先，金钱买不到真爱。一个女孩在交友节目上坚定地说，她宁愿坐在宝马上面哭也不愿意坐在自行车上面笑，就是一个很好的例子。从这一点我们可以看出，不管一个人多富有，他都买不到真爱。
Second, love is above wealth.“Naked” wedding or “naked” marriage is a hot topic these days.More and more young people begin to marry each other without a big property.In these cases, love is more important than money.其次，爱情超越财富。“裸婚礼”或者“裸婚”是这些日子的热题。越来越多的年轻人开始和没有大财产的人结婚。从这种情况来看，爱情比金钱更重要。
To sum up, love is far more important than money.Provided that we lose wealth, we may regain it by working hard.But if we lose love, it will be impossible to make up for it.总是，爱情远比金钱重要。假如我们失去了财富，我们可以通过努力重新获得。但是如果我们失去了爱情，就不可能弥补了。
7.My Teacher 我的老师-Li xin, a young lady of 23 from xinjiang, has been a middle-school teacher of English for three years.she is slim and beautiful, and always has a nice smile on her face.李欣，23岁，新疆人，是一位年轻的中学英语老师，教书三年了。她身材苗条，长得秀气，脸上总挂着灿烂的笑容。
She was born for teaching and does a great jib.In her class, she can get her students involved in learning and doing exercises.They are attracted by the topics she gives and this makes her class lively.As a result, most students like to be in her class.她天生就是教书的料。课上她能调动学生积极参与的兴趣。学生喜欢她给出的讨论话题，课堂气氛活跃。因此学生都很喜欢她的课。
Li Xin is a good teacher not only because she has a good way of teaching, but also because she loves her students and never spoil them.She is kind and considerate, and is ready to help her students who meet with difficulties.李欣不仅教学方法不错，而且爱却不宠学生。她和蔼可亲，关心体贴，总热心帮助有困难的学生。
My teacher, Li Xin, is not only our good teacher, but also our best friend.We all like her and will remember her forever.我的老师李欣不仅是我们的好老师，还是我们的好朋友，我们都很喜欢她并将永远记得她。
8.Failure and Success
失败与成功
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Failure is so common in our life.No one can avoid it.When we fail in doing something, we often feel so depressed that we have no interest in other things.Sometimes failure can also make us lose heart.Therefore, no one wants to be a failure.失败是生活中是很常见的。没有人能避免失败。当我们做某事失败的时候，我们经常觉得很沮丧，而提不起兴趣去做其他的事情。有时失败会使我们丧失信心。所以，没有人想成为失败者。
Success is what we all hope for, because it can bring us a sense of pride and a good reputation.The moment we succeed, we always feel so proud, as if having everything in our hands.If one enjoys his continuous success in his career, he will be famous and worshiped by others.成功是我们所希望的，因为它能够给我们带来的自豪感和良好的信誉。成功的那一刻我们都感到很自豪，就好像我们拥有了一切。如果一个人喜欢在他的职业生涯中不断取得成功，他就会出名，被别人崇拜。
However, failure is the mother of success.One failure doesn’t mean you can never be successful.It depends on what we do to deal with failure.Those who are always afraid of failure and can’t go through it will never win.But as long as we can get some lessons and experience from our failure, we’ll be sure to succeed.不过，失败是成功之母。一次失败并不意味着你永远不能成功。这取决于我们如何面对失败。那些总是害怕失败，不能克服这个心理的人永远都不会成功。但只要我们能吸取教训，我们一定会成功的。
9.About Weight-losing 关于减肥
In recent years, losing weight has become a hot topic in our life, especially in women’s community.However, losing weight has aroused people’s attention as many problems has appeared.近几年，减肥已经成为我们生活中一个热烈的话题，尤其是在妇女群。然而，随着很多问题的出现，减肥已经引起了人们的关注。
There are many ways in losing weight.Some people lose their weight by persisting in doing exercise regularly.Some people take medicine to cut their weight.Furthermore, some turn to operation for help, especially the young.Therefore, all kinds of product have been sold in the market, such as special medicine, tea and equipment.减肥的方式有很多种。有的人通过坚持有规律的运动来减肥。有的人通过吃药来减肥。另外，还有一些人通过手术寻求帮助。因此，各种各样的产品在市场上出售，比如特殊药品，茶和设备。
It’s understandable for human to pay much attention to their good-look.However, many side effects have come into being when some people are losing weight.For example, some people have lost their weight by taking medicine, but at the same time, their digestion systems have been injured.Thus, we should pay more attention to our physical coordination when we choose the way to cut our weight.人们注意外貌是可以理解的。但是，当有的人减肥的时候，很多副作用就出现了。比如，有的人通过吃药来减肥，但是同时他们的消化系统也已经受损。因而，当选择减肥方式的时候，我们应该更加注意我们的身体协调。
In my opinion, doing exercise is the best way to lose weight.On the one hand, we can train our bodies by taking exercise and become healthier.On the other hand, our mind will be clearer if we do exercise often.在我看来，做运动是减肥的最佳方法。一方面，通过运动我们可以锻炼身体变得更健康。另一方面，如果我们经常锻炼，我们的思维就会更清晰。
10.the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones
手机利弊谈
Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows about students' using mobile phones at school.Firstly, with a mobile phone in hand, a student can get in touch with parents conveniently.Secondly, mobile phones can sometimes be used as a dictionary if it is connected with the Internet, which is beneficial to students' English learning.However, its advantages are also obvious.To start with, getting in touch with friends as well as
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parents by the phone too frequently will surely have a bad effect on students' study.What's worse, it is common for students to get addicted to mobile phone games.From the comparison between these positive and negative effects, we know that its disadvantages far outweigh its advantages.Therefore, students had better not use mobile phones.一般而言，大家都认为学生在学校使用手机有很多好处。首先，有了手机，学生能方便地与父母取得联系。其次，如果你的手机可以上网，你还可以把它当字典用，这对学生的英语学习非常有帮助。然而，学生在学校使用手机的不良影响也是很明显的。首先，过于频繁地用手机与父母和朋友联系对学生的学习有很大的负面影响。此外，很多学生会对手机游戏上瘾。对比其优缺点，我们知道其负面影响大于正面影响，所以，学生在校最好不要用手机。
11.Low Carbon Life 低碳生活
In recent years, the global warming gets increasingly attention.More and more people make contribution to stop the global warming.Therefore, a new lifestyle occurs--low carbon life.What can we do to live in low carbon?近几年，全球气候变暖越来越得到关注。越来越多的人为阻止全球变暖做出贡献。因此，一种新的生活方式诞生了——低碳生活。在低碳生活中我们可以做些什么呢？
First, remember to turn off lights and turn off the faucet when you do not need to use.Use the energy-saving lamps.There are many small things we can do to save resources.Second, when we go out, take public transport as much as possible, to reduce gas emissions and to ease the transporting pressures.首先，但你不需要用电和水的时候，记得把灯和水龙头关掉。使用节能灯。我们可以做很多小事来节省资源。其次，当我们外出的时候，尽可能乘坐公共交通以减少气体排放和缓解交通压力。
All in all, there are many other things we can do to live in the low carbon life.It needs us to do something practically.If everyone can keep this lifestyle from now on, it will greatly change the situation and our home would become more beautiful.总之，为了低碳生活，我们可以做很多事。它需要我们做出一些实际行动。如果每个人能够从现在起保持这种生活方式，情况将得到很大改善，我们的家园会变得更美丽。
12.Should Students Make Friends On Line?
学生应该网上交友吗? Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.The Internet helps make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language studies.学生应该网上交友吗?一些人的回答是肯定的。互联网有助于广交朋友，学生在网上聊天可以更加自由地表达感受和意见，还有利于外语的学习。
Others, however, think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students, get cheated on line.然而，另外一些人认为学生不应该在网上交友。他们说网上交友是浪费时间，应该把这些时间花在更有意义的学习上，而且一些学生在网上上当受骗。
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other, things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.我认为学生应该把他们的学习、健康和安全放在首位。至于友谊，我们可以很容易地在我们的同学以及周围的人中找到。
13.My view on Using Mobile Phones
我对学生使用手机的看法
Dear editor, 亲爱的编辑：
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The article gave us two different opinions on whether students should use mobile phones or not.Teachers, students and their parents all have expressed their own attitude.这文章给我们两种不同的观点关于学生是否应该使用手机。教师、学生和他们的父母都有表达自己的态度。As for me, I think students should be allowed to use mobile phones.High-tech communicational machines are needed for students to achieve more news all around the world, especially for the ones who live in school.The huge earthquake in Sichuan on May the 12th, for example, is a piece of terrifying news to all the people.With mobile phones, we can know this more quickly and give them some money, clothes and food as soon as possible.Mobile phones play an important part among the young, too.They can help us to communicate with friends that are away from us easily.And they can help us to tell our parents whether we're in danger, in trouble, or meeting with other problems.至于我，我认为学生应该允许用手机。学生们需要高科技通讯机器来获得更多世界各地的新闻，特别是对于那些住在学校的学生。例如，5月12日四川大地震对所有人来说是一个多么可怕的消息。有了手机，我们可以更迅速的了解并尽快给他们一些钱、衣服和食物。手机在年轻人中扮演了重要的角色。他们可以帮助我们轻易的与远处的朋友交流。他们还可以帮助我们告诉我们的父母我们是否处于危险中，陷入了困境，或遇到别的问题。
Generally speaking, I think, students should use mobile phones.总的来说，我觉得学生应该用手机。
14.Make Friends
交朋友
Friendship is essential in one’s life.A person without friends will not get happiness in his life.So we need to make friends.友谊对人的一声是很重要的。一个没有朋友的人，他的人生不会幸福。所以我们需要交朋友。
Friends can help us know more variety people, open our vision.We can learn a lot of things from them.The most obvious thing is we all are the apple of our parents’ eyes.They will do everything to make us happy.As a result, we are growing as the flowers in the greenhouse.We can’t live without our parents.However, we can learn to communicate ,learn to care others and learn to be independence through friends.So I think making friends is very important.朋友可以让我们认识更多不同的人，开阔我们的视野。我们从朋友身上可以学到很多东西。最明显的是我们都是父母的掌上明珠。他们会尽一切努力来使我们快乐。这样，我们就像是温室里的花朵。没有父母我们根本就活不下去。但是，通过交朋友我们可以学会沟通，学会关心他人，学会独立。所以我认为交朋友是很重要的。
Making friends is good , but it doesn’t mean that people should make friends with any person.Some people will do harm to us.As the saying goes, ”A friend in need is a friend indeed.” If a friend abandons you in the difficulty.Personally speaking, he doesn’t deserve your friendship.交朋友是好的，但这并不意味着人们应该与所有人交朋友。有些人对我们是有害的。俗话说，“患难见真情。”如果一个在困境的时候抛弃你的朋友。就我个人而言，他是不值得拥有你的友谊的。
In a word, making friends with right people is full of benefit.总之，跟对的人交朋友是很有用的。
15.My Teacher 我的老师
My English teacher, Mr.Jones, is a middle-aged man with thick glasses above his nose.We all like his classes, for he is always very active and has many ways to make his lessons lively and interesting.After class, he often plays table tennis with us.And at night, he usually works late and prepares the lessons carefully.When we told him that we had passed the entrance examination of senior middle school, he Was so happy that he jumped like a child.We all get along well with him.All of us still miss him very much after we have left the junior middle school.我的英语老师，琼斯是一个中年男子，他的鼻子上架着一副眼镜。我们都喜欢上他的课，因为他总是很活泼，6 / 15
有很多方法使他的课上的生动有趣。课下，他经常和我们一起打桌球。晚上，他经常工作到深夜，认真地备课。当我们告诉他我们已经通过入学考试，考上了高中时，他是如此的高兴以致于象个孩子似的跳了起来。我们和他相处得很好。离开这所中学后，我们每个人依然非常想念他。
16.The Importance of English
英语的重要性
In China, almost all students learn English, no matter they are pupils or undergraduates.Some people think that there is no need for Chinese to learn English, because after graduation, it is no use at all.I don't think so.English is the most widely used language in the world, and most business letters are written in English.With the deepening of reform and opening up, our Chinese and foreign exchanges increase greatly, so English must be the necessity.Besides, learning English well can help us better learn the advanced experience from foreign countries.It's beneficial for us to service our nation.In addition, learning English is a quite funny thing which enable us to explore a wider world.在中国，几乎所有的学生都学英语，不管他们是在校生或是即将毕业。有的人认为中国人学习英语是没有必要的，因为毕业后英语一点用也没有了。我不这么认为。英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言，大部分的商务信函都是用英语写的。随着改革开放的深入，中国和外国之间的交流更多了，所以英语是必要的。此外，学好英语可以帮助我们更好地学习国外经验。对我们报效祖国是有好处的。另外，学习英语是件很有趣的事，它能使我们开拓更宽广的世界。
17.My New Life in Senior School
我的高中新生活
Now, the new semester has begun for more than one week.I gradually adapt to my new life in senior school.In senior school, my biggest feeling is busy, for I have classes all the day and teachers leave us a lot of homework.In the morning, I have two periods for morning reading, Chinese and English, beginning from 7:00.After that, I have four periods in the morning and four other in the afternoon.There are many more subjects than in middle school, Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, history and so on.Sometimes, I am afraid of seeing so many textbooks in my desk.In addition, the contents are much more difficult than before.Math and physics are the most difficult ones for me.No matter how hard I work, I still can’t do well in them, which makes me frustrated.Therefore, in the new beginning, I must change my learning strategies to make my work more effective.All in all, my new life in new school is good and rich, though it’s busy.新学期已经开始一个多星期了，我慢慢地适应了高中的新生活。高中给我最大的感觉是忙碌，因为一整天都要上课，老师也会布置很多作业给我们。早上7点开始有两节早读来语文和英语。之后，上午有四节课，下午也有四节课。高中的课程比初中要多得多，如语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、历史等等。有时后我害怕看到我的课桌里有这么多的课本。除此之外，内容也比以前难得多。数学和物理对我来说是最难的。不管我多努力，我还是学不好这两科，这使得我很沮丧。因此，新学期开始我一定要改变我的学习策略，使我的学习更有效。总之，尽管忙碌，我新的学校生活依旧美好充实。
18.Protect the Environment, Starts from me
保护环境，从我做起
We want to hold a green Olympic Games ,so everyone should do something useful to protect the environment ,whether it is big or small.我们要举办一个绿色奥运，每个人都应该做些无论是大或小的有用的事来保护环境。
We should do something to stop people from doing bad things to the environment.We should put rubbish into dustbins instead of throwing it about.Everyone must care for flowers ,grass and tress in public.We should collect things like paper ,plastic bags our neighborhood as well ,it’s necessary to plant more trees every year.7 / 15
我们应该做些什么来阻止人们对环境做一些不好的事情。我们应该把垃圾放进垃圾箱而不是直接扔了，每个人都必须爱护公共场所的花，草，树木。我们应该收集社区的一些像纸，塑料袋的东西，每年种植更多的树是必要的。
It is everyone’s duty to make our neighborhood much better with our hands minds.Let’s make a contribution to protecting the environment and the Olympic Games successfully.用我们的双手和头脑使我们的社区变得更好是我们每一个人的职责。让我们为保护环境做贡献，祝奥运会成功。
19.My Attitude towards Life 我的生活态度
Life is an endless voyage, as there's no destination in our life.Life is also very fickle, since anything may happen in our life.We may be successful or defeated at any time.生活是一段漫长的旅程，因为我们的生活是没有目的地的。生活也很善变，因为在我们的生活中任何事情都有可能发生。我们随时都可能成功或失败。
Sometimes, I have the feeling that I was successful, but that happiest time has already passed away.Sometimes, I feel as if I went to the end of my life, but after a long tour, I find I have a long way to go.I always miss myself in this endless road and I feel very lonely.But in this loneliness, there's nothing to fear.So I have learned to grow up.I have learned to hold back my tears.I have learned to smile to others.有时候，我感觉我要成功了，但那快乐的时光却消逝了。有时，我觉得我已经到生命的尽头了，但经过长时间的旅行，我发现我还有很长的路要走。在这漫长的道路上，我总是想自己，觉得很孤独。但在这孤独中，没有什么好怕的。所以我已经学会了长大。我已经学会了忍住我的眼泪。我已经学会了对他人微笑。
I'm not defeated.However hard the situation is, I will never give up!However hard the situation is, I will never say I can't!However hard the situation is, I will never stop running!Never!我不会被打败的。不管处境有多么艰难，我都不会放弃！不管处境有多么艰难，我绝不会说我不行！不管处境多么困难，我永远不会停止奔跑！绝对不会！
20.An Unforgettable Thing
一件难忘的事
I’m a girl at the age of twelve and in grade six.As our grade six students have to attend the secondary school entrance exam a year later, we have to go to school to take part in the self-study at night.Considering the distance of my home to school, my father decided to teach me ride bikes.我是一个十二岁的六年级女孩。因为我们六年级的学生要参加一年之后的中考，所以我们要去学校参加晚自习。考虑到我家到学校的距离，我爸爸决定教我骑自行车。
It was a Saturday morning.My father told the key point to ride a bike at first.It was be brave and look forward instead of looking the wheels.My father held me and the bike firmly and then I ride it.Though I was afraid, I feel safe with my father around me.A few hours later, I can ride it without my father’s help.I was so happy, but my father was covered with sweat.I never fell off the bike with his protection.Watching my sweating father, I can feel his love for me.那是一个星期六的早晨。我爸爸首先先跟我讲解了骑自行车的要点。那就是勇敢，向前看，而不是看着车轮。我父爸爸把我和自行车都紧紧的抓住后我就开始骑了。我虽然害怕，但是有爸爸在我感到很安全。几个小时后，我可以不用我爸爸的帮助就可以骑它了。我很高兴，但是我爸爸满头大汗。由于爸爸的保护学自行车的过程我从来没有摔倒过。看着满头大汗的爸爸，我感觉到了父爱。
Learning to ride a bike is such a memorable thing that I’ m only master it but also understand the love of my father.学骑自行车是一件难忘的事，这不仅仅是因为我学会了而且还是因为我理解了父爱。
21.Smoking Is Bad for Health
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吸烟有害健康
As we all know, there are many people smoking, although everyone knows smoking is harmful to us.Giving up smoking is not easy but addicted to it is quite easy, that’s why there are more and more people smoking.Smoking and passive smoking is risk factor that leads to various diseases.It has become world’s top 8 causes of death.More than 90% of lung cancer caused by smoking and lung cancer rates of smokers are 18 times over the non-smokers.Besides, smoking also causes angiocardiopathy, digestive system disease, oral disease and so on.In addition, passive smoking causes great concern in recent years.People have known that passive smoking also do great harm to human, too.Therefore, many countries and regions prohibit people from smoking in public zones, in order to reduce the harm of secondhand smoke.From my point of view, the best way to keep healthy is giving up smoke, for smoker’s own good as well as for others.众所周知，即使人们都知道吸烟有害健康，但现在依然有很多人吸烟。吸烟容易戒烟难，这就是为什么烟民的数量越来越多的原因。吸烟以及被动吸烟都是导致多种疾病的危险因子，烟草已经成为全球第八大死因。超过90%的肺癌是由吸烟导致的，吸烟者患肺癌的几率是非吸烟者的18倍之多。此外，吸烟也会导致心血管病、消化系统疾病、口腔疾病等。此外，被动吸烟在近些年也引起了人们很多的关注，它也会对人体造成危害。因此，为了减少二手烟伤害，许多国家和地区都禁止人们在公共场所吸烟。我认为，维持健康的最好办法就是戒烟，为了自己也为了他人的健康着想。
22.To Form A Good Study Habit 养成良好的学习习惯
Nowadays, every student pays enough attention to study habit because of its importance.As for me, I have three ways to improve my study habits.现在，每个学生都很注意学习习惯，因为它很重要。对我而言，我有三种方法来改善我的学习习惯。
Firstly, make a plan for my study.The plan, I think, should include both the timetable, the regular and extra practice items.And the plan should be updated according to the progress of my study from time to time.Once the plan made, I follow it strictly.首先，给我的学习制定一个计划。我认为计划应该包括时间表，规律和额外的实践项目。而且，计划应该根据学习的进步时而不时地更新。一旦制定了计划，就要严格执行。
Secondly, make full use of the time in the class.I take notes of the important points of every class.I do not talk about anything that has nothing to do with the class.More importantly, I pay all my attention to the class and listen to the teacher carefully.其次，要充分利用课堂上的时间。我每一节课的重点我都做好笔记。课堂上我不讨论与课堂无关的事情。更重要的是，我我全神贯注于课堂，认真听老师讲课。
Thirdly, critical study is also very important.It means that we should not accept anything blindly and with careful thought.Everything is not absolutely correct in the world and everything is changing.We can find many answers to a question.If we think critically, we may find many possibilities to solve a problem.再次，批判性学习也很重要。这意味着我们不应该不经过认真思考就盲目接受一切。世界上的每一件事都不是绝对正确的，每件事都是时刻变化着的。同一个问题我们可以找到很多种答案。入股我们进行批判性的思考，我们就会发现解决问题的很多种可能。
23.Habits习惯
Habits, whether good or bad, are gradually formed.When a person does a certain thing again and again, he’ll be obliged to do it in the same way by some unseen force.Thus habit is formed.Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it.It is.therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits.习惯，不管是好是坏，都是逐渐形成的。当一个人反复的做某件事时，他就会被某种看不见的力量驱使不得不
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以同样的方式再去做这件事，于是习惯就形成了。习惯一旦形成，就很难、有时几乎不可能改掉。因此，在养成习惯时我们都应该特别小心，这一点至关重要。
Good habits have many advantages.Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy.Diligence helps to succeed.Honesty helps: win the respect and trust of others.良好习惯有着许多优点。早睡早起身体好；勤奋助人成功；诚实助人赢得他人的尊重和信任。If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing, we might be mined by them.如果我们养成了坏习惯，比如：粗野、懒惰、说谎、偷窃，我们就可能堕落。
We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good for ourselves and others.我们应该远离坏习惯并努力养成对己对人都有好处的习惯。
24.Smoking and health
吸烟与健康
Everyone knows smoking is bad for health.People who smoke too much may not live long.Millions of people die from smoking each year.每个人都知道吸烟有害健康。吸烟过多的人大多都活不长。每年有数百万人死于吸烟。
Smoking causes many illnesses.Those who often smoke have bad teeth.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.One of the most serious illnesses that are caused by smoking is lung cancer.Many people suffer from this terrible disease and lose their lives.吸烟能导致许多疾病。那些经常吸烟的人牙齿不好。许多烟民也因吸烟而常常咳嗽吸烟引起的最严重的疾病之一是肺癌。许多人被这种可怕的疾病夺去了生命。
Smoking is not only bad for smokers, but also bad for non-smokers, especially women and children.They may get their health harmed because of the smoke caused by cigarettes.吸烟不仅有害烟民的健康，也毒害着不吸烟的人，尤其是妇女儿童。吸烟产生的毒气很可能使他们的健康受到侵害。
Smoking is no good for health.I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.Let’s enjoy clean air together.吸烟对健康百害而无一益。我希望所有的烟民能为了自己和周围的人的健康而戒烟。让我们共享清新洁净的空气吧！
25.My Summer Holiday Plan
我的暑假计划
Here comes the summer holiday, I have planned a busy schedule on it.暑假就要到来了，我已经为它制定了一个忙绿的计划表了。
Firstly, I will find a part time job, probably work in a factory which is near my home, so that I can accompany with my parents.Secondly, I have joined a violin course in the previous time, because I have interest on it.therefore, I will do more practice at home by myself.As an old saying goes, practice makes perfect.At the end of the holiday, it’s time for me to have a good time.I tend to go on a trip with my friends, maybe Yunnan or other wonderful places.Travel to the place I have never been to certainly can broaden my mine.首先，我会找一份兼职，也许在我家附近的工厂工作，这样我就可以陪陪我父母。其次，之前我参加了一个小提琴的培训班，因为我对它很有兴趣。所以，我会在家多多联系。因为正如谚语所说的，熟能生巧。在假期末尾的时候，我会去好好地玩一玩。我比较想和朋友去旅行，也许去云南，也许是其他地方。去那些我从来没去过的地方肯定可以开拓我的视野。
Make a good plan and enjoy it.I hope we all can have a meaningful holiday.制定一个好的计划并玩得开心。我希望大家都能有一个有意义的假期。
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26.Give up Smoking
远离香烟
Nowadays, many school students smoke, and the number is growing increasingly, which makes school and parents worried.如今，很多在校学生吸烟，而且人数不断增长，学校和家长对此很担心。
According to a survey, more than two fifths of the students smoke in a school.They often get extra money from their parents to pay for cigarette, but their parents usually do not realize it.Even, some students steal money to buy cigarette, which is really a serious event.For middle school students, smoking do more harm to them than to adults, which is not only harmful to the body, but also detrimental to thinking.Furthermore, smoking is also harmful to others.Experts say that the second-hand smoke do more harm to others than the smoker.据调查，超过五分之二的学生在校吸烟。他们经常从父母那里得到额外的钱去买香烟，但是父母通常没有察觉到这一情况。有的学生甚至投钱来买香烟，这种情况真的很严重。对中学生来说，吸烟对他们的伤害比成年人更多，这不仅对身体有害而且对思维也有害。另外，吸烟对别人也是有害的。专家说，二手烟对别人的害处比对吸烟者的害处更大。
In short, smoking is a bad habit which wastes of money as well as do harm to health.总之，吸烟是一个不良习惯，既浪费钱又有害健康。
27.About Myself
自我介绍
My name is Simon.I'm 24 years old now.I'm from Changsha University.I major in English, because I have the gift for language study.我叫西蒙。我现在已经24岁了。我来自长沙大学。我的专业是英语，因为我有学习语言的天赋。
In my opinion, English is well-known all around the world.If I can speak excellent English, I could travel to everywhere in the world without language barriers.Now I can speak English like an American.Most of my classmates always envy my oral English.在我看来，英语是全世界都出名的。如果我能讲一口流利的英语，我可以没有语言障碍在世界各地旅行。现在我英语说得像美国人一样。我的大多数同学都羡慕我的英语口语。
I like traveling very much.Through traveling, I can widen my perspective and know more about our world.Now I have been to so many cities, such as Guangzhou, Zhuhai, and Zhongshan.These cities are nice, clean and modern.我非常喜欢旅游。通过旅游我可以开阔我的视野更加的了解这个世界。我到现在为止去过很多城市，如广州，珠海，中山。这些城市是很好，干净的和现代化的。
I think I'm easy-going and hard-working.When I'm at work, I always try my best to do everything well.I never let others do anything that I can do, and I never put off today's work to tomorrow.When you have difficulties, I’m eager to give you a hand if I'm able to.I hope I can be your best friend.我觉得我很随和，勤奋。我在工作时，总会尽我最大的努力把一切事情办好。我不会让别人来替我做我能做的事情，我从来不会把今天的工作留到明天。当你有困难时，如果可以的话我很愿意帮忙。我希望我能成为你最好的朋友。
28.How to Make Friends
如何交朋友
Everyone needs friends.A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness.But how can we make friends? First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel.When you don't agree someone, please discuss with him.Finally，11 / 15
never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble.And never leave your friend when he is in trouble.Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.Friends should be faithful to each other.So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.人人都需要、朋友。朋友可以给我们以帮助，与我们共事困难和快乐。但是，怎样交朋友呢?交朋友首先要对别人友善。你对别人微笑；肯定别人也会报以微笑。其次，朋友之间应该商量而不是争吵。当与别人有分歧时，要和他一起讨论。最后，不要相信那些在危急关头背离你的人，也不要在朋友危难时离开他。记住：患难之中见真情。朋友应该以诚相待。只要你把朋友的利益置于你的利益之上，你就会拥有好多好朋友。
29.Cherish Time 珍惜时间
If you ask me what is the most precious, I would say that it’s time.Time is something once lost, you could never have again.Therefore, we should cherish it and spend it in meaningful things.However, many people do too many meaningless things to kill their time, such as playing computer, watching TV, or gossiping.When you do these things, the time has long been unwittingly flowed away.In my opinion, the best way to make full use of time is planning your time rationally and sticking the plan firmly.Spending more time on something significant not only will make your life fulfilling, but also will give you a sense of accomplishment.Instead, killing your time with meaningless things would bring you depression even despair.Remember that those who abandon time will be also abandoned by time.如果你问我什么东西是最宝贵的，我会说是时间。它是你一旦失去就再也得不到的东西。因此，我们都应该学会珍惜时间，把时间用在有意义的事情上。但是，很多人却做了许多无意义的事情来消磨时光，比如玩电脑、看电视或者说闲话。当你在做这些事情的时候，时间早已在不知不觉间流走了。在我看来，最好的珍惜时间的做法是合理安排时间，并坚决按照计划行事。把时间用在有意义的事情上，不仅会让你的生活更充实，也会给你带来成就感。相反，若是用那些无聊的事情消磨时间，则可能会让你觉得沮丧甚至绝望。记住，抛弃时间的人，时间也抛弃他。
30.Impact of Using Ipad on Teenagers 使用iPad对青少年的影响
Ipad is a fashionable product.Many people are crazy about it, including the youngsters.It seems cool to have an Ipad.But, it's really good to the youngsters? Ipad是新潮玩意，很多人为之疯狂，尤其是年轻人。拥有一台ipad，听上去很酷，但是是否对年轻人就是件好事呢? Ipad has various functions.It is diverse and it's easier to carry than the computer.As to study, it makes learning easy, funny and interesting.It's able to broaden students' knowledge.However, its disadvantages seem obvious, too.People can play games and search the Internet by Ipad, so some students may be addicted to the games, which will do harm to their study.Furthermore, the Ipad is not cheap that it would make students compare to others.Students may feel proud to have an Ipad.Ipad有很多功能，比电脑更便于携带。用于学习时，它使学习更简单，更有趣味性。它能拓展学生的知识面。然而它的缺点也很明显，它可以用来上网玩游戏，所以学生很容易沉迷游戏，对他们的学习不利。其次，ipad价格也挺贵，容易引起学生攀比，以拥有ipad为傲。
All in all, Ipad is a high-tech product.No matter who should use it properly.总之，ipad是高科技产品，不管对谁，都得使用得当。
31.My Childhood
我的童年
I was born in a small county which is poor.Therefore, there were no beautiful clothes or many toys.Before I went to school at six, I only played with my peers nearby.It was such a wonderful period that I would never forget.We always
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made our toys independently, which cost no money at all.Sometimes, parents would help making toys as well.We could play from morning to night until parents told us to go home for dinner.However, as a rural child, I must help my parents doing farm work in the busy season, such as planting and harvesting.Besides, my mother is a teacher.Therefore, she began to teach me to read and count when I was three, so I had to spend some time I study.Now, remembering it, I feel much happy rather than upset.我出生在一个贫困的小农村里，因此不能拥有漂亮的衣服和玩具。在我六岁上学之前，我都是和邻居的同龄小朋友玩，那是一段我无法忘怀的快乐的岁月。我们通常都是自己做玩具，不花一分钱，有的时候我们的父母也会给我们做一些玩具。那个时候，我们可以从早晨玩到天黑，直到爸爸妈妈叫我们回家吃饭。但是，作为一个农村的孩子，在农忙的时候我也必须要帮忙家里干些农活，像是种植和收割这些。另外，我的妈妈是一名老师，因此在我三岁的时候她就开始教我识字、算术了，所以我还要花些时间在学习上。现在，回想起这些，我更多的是快乐，而不是烦恼。
32.The First Day in High School 高中第一天
Today was the first day of my new life.I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year.I was excited as well as worried.今天是我新生活的第一天，我翻看我的新课本，检查了新学年的一切。我既激动又担心。
Entering new school, I was curious about everything, new classrooms, new teachers, new classmates etc.It would be a new start for each student.And what I was worried about is that I had no friends here.I wondered if no liked to play with me.Were the teachers strict with students? 进入新的学校，我对所有事情都很好奇，新的教室，新的老师，新的同学等等。这对每个学生来说都是一个新的开始。我所担心的是在这没有朋友。我想知道是不是没有人喜欢和我玩。老师对学生是不是很严厉? I fell relaxed when the teacher asked me, ''What else could I help you, freshman?".I found that the teachers were kind and polite, and the classmates around me were friendly.While I was thinking about how to get on well with my classmates, my desk mate showed me his favorite Ipad4s.He wanted to play with me, but I didn't know how to play, so he taught me patiently, and we played happily.当老师问我：“我能够帮你什么吗，新同学?”的时候，我一下子觉得放松了。我发现老师很善良很有礼貌，周围的同学也很友善。正当我想着怎样和同学相处的时候，我的同桌给我看他最爱的Ipad4s。他想和我一起玩，但是我不知道怎么玩，于是他就耐心的教我，然后我们就开心的玩起来。
Worries have gone, and happiness is coming.忧虑已经消失了，幸福即将来临。
33.An Announcement
通知
May I have your attention, please? Next Saturday we will pay a visit to the Windows of the World.So we should gather at the school gate at 8 a.m.on May 1st.And then we will go there by bus.All of us are asked to hand in 30 yuan for the ticket, wear school uniform and take water and lunch by ourselves.After getting into the Windows of the World, we can visit freely and take photos.请注意!下星期六我们要参观世界之窗。所以我们应在5月1日早晨8点在学校门口集合，然后乘车去那儿。我们每人交30元门票钱。每个人都要穿校服，自带水和午饭。进入世界之窗后，我们可以自由参观、拍照。
We will get back at 6 p.m.by bus.Don't be late.我们会在下午6点乘车返回。不要迟到。That's all.Thank you for your attention.完了。谢谢!
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34.Views on Middle School Students' Using Cellphone
对中学生使用手机的看法
Cellphones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students at present.About that,people have different opinions.目前，手机在中学生中变得越来越普遍。关于这个问题，人们有不同的看法。
Some think it is good for students to bring a cellphone because it's more convenient to contact to each other.But othersdo not think so.They think it is bad for students to bring acellphone.Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies and so on,which will do harm to their study.Andthe teacher and students would be disturbed if cellphone ring during the class time.In my opinion, bringing cellphones to school is not a bad thing if we make the best use of it.有的人认为携带手机对学生有好处，因为这更便于他们相互联系。但是其他人不这么认为。他们认为携带手机对学生有害。因为学生会用手机玩游戏，发短信，看电影等等，这对他们的学习是有害的。而且，如果上课的时候手机响会打扰到老师和同学。我认为，如果我们合理利用它，带手机到学校并不见得是件坏事。
As we all know, a cellphone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information in 21st century.Ifthere’san accident, it's more convenient to dial for help immediately.What's more, we can use cellphones for relaxing ourselves a little bit when we're tired of studies.In my mind, it's not wrong to follow the cellphone fashion, but the most important thing is to know how to use them in a right way.我们都知道，在21世纪手机是我们交流信息最快捷的工具。如果发生事故，手机更方便我们立即拨打电话求助。另外，当我们学习觉得累的时候可以用手机来给稍微放松一下。在我看来，跟随手机时尚并没有错，但是最重要的是懂得正确使用它们。
35.Online Shopping 网上购物
With the development of Internet, more and more people tend to shop on the Internet.Online shopping has provided some benefits for us, but it also has some disadvantages at the same time.随着互联网的发展，越来越多的人喜欢在网上购物。网购给我们带来了一些好处，但是它同时也有一些缺点。For one thing, online shopping has brought some convenience for consumers.Instead of going one shop to another, people can choose and buy all kinds of commodities they like as long as they click the mouse gently.This is not only a better choice for the old who do not have enough energy to go outside but also a great convenience for those who have no time to go shopping in person.In addition, consumers have more choices and can do some comparison when they are shopping on the Internet.They can glance over various commodities in all shapes, sizes and colors and decided to buy or not.Furthermore, online shopping has made a great contribution to the development of express delivery industry.一方面，网上购物给消费者带来了一些方便。人们不再是逛一个个店，人们只需要轻轻点鼠标就可以选择购买他们想要的商品。这不仅对没有精力外出的老人来说是一个更好的选择，而且对那些没有时间独自出去购物的人来说也很方便。另外，消费者在网上购物的时候有更多的选择，也可以多做对比。他们可以浏览各种商品的所有型号，尺寸，颜色然后决定要不要买。另外，网上购物对快递行业的发展做出了很大的贡献。
However, for another, shopping on the Internet also has some shortcomings.Firstly, those who shop on the Internet can’t try the goods before they buy.Sometimes, the real goods are not the same as the goods they see on the Internet.Secondly, some shops on the Internet are dishonest and they would not deliver the goods after paying.And if this situation happens, the consumers would find nowhere to complain and never pull out the money any longer.然而，另一方面，网上购物也有一些缺点。首先，那些在网上购物的人不能够在买之前试一下商品。有时候，食物和我们在网上看到的物品是不一样的。其次，网上有的店是不诚实的，付款后他们不会发货。如果发生了这种情况，消费者就会找不到地方抱怨，就拿不回钱了。
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因此，当我们网购的时候应该多注意。
36.What Is Happiness?
什么是快乐? Many people believe that having a lot of money is the greatest happiness in life.But I don't agree with them, because money is not everything.Money can't make us a true man.很多人认为拥有很多钱是人生最大的幸福。但我不同意他们的想法，因为钱不是一切。金钱不能使我们成为一个真正的男人。
The way I see it, good health is much better than a lot of wealth.No matter how much money we have, we’ll not feel happy at all if we are in poor health.In order to be healthy, we must keep a positive attitude and have a good living habit.在我看来，健康比财富更重要。如果不健康，不管有多少钱，我们都不会快乐。为了保持健康，我们必须要保持积极的态度，形成良好的生活习惯。
Apart from good health, we must be diligent at work.As long as we work hard, we cannot just make a good living, but enrich our minds.除了良好的健康，我们必须勤奋工作。只要我们努力工作，我们不仅可以过上好生活，而且还可以丰富思想。Additionally, we ought to give our helpful hands to others when they are in need.While helping others, we can own a good fame as well as get more social experience.It's really a good way to kill two birds with one stone.Only by doing so can we enjoy the happiest life.此外，我们应该在别人需要帮助的时候帮助别人。在帮助他人的同时，我们可以拥有一个好名声，并获得更多的社会经验。这真是一举两得的好方法。只有这样我们才能享受幸福的生活。
37.Introducing Yourself 自我介绍
My name is Li Ming.I am a student of Beijing No.101 Senior Middle School and will graduate this July.I'd like to apply for a position in your school as an English teacher.我叫李明，是北京101中学的学生，将于今年7月毕业。我打算申请贵校英语教师的职位。
I have been learning English for nearly 10 years, starting my first study at the age of 9.My English test scores were quite good, and I often earned praise from my teachers.I won first place at the spoken English competition of the school last year.我从9岁起学习英语，迄今已经近10年了。我的英语考试成绩一直很好，并经常受到老师的表扬。在去年的全校英语口语竞赛中荣获第一名。
What is more, I like English very much and spend all my spare time studying English-listening to English broadcast every day, read two or three English articles and take every chance to practice my spoken English.更重要的是，我非常喜欢英语，把自己的业余时间都用于学习英语棗坚持每天收听英语广播，阅读2-3篇英语文章，利用每一个机会练习英语口语。
I love the work of an English teacher.I will do my best to be helpful to my students if I can have the position.I hope you will give favorable consideration to my application.Thank you for your time and attention.我热爱英语教师这一职业，如果我得到这份工作，我将竭尽全力帮助我的学生。恳请校方考虑我的申请。谢谢费心！
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第五篇：中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1.审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher。
正 my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有
动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。
误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
误 the apples cheap.i'll take some。
正 the apples are cheap.i'll take some。
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example, my friend in high school。
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。
例1.when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 when i get to the station the train leave。
正 when i got to the station the train had left。
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
如何写好文章开头
开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相，它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味着有了良好的开端，也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done，我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢？
1.“开门见山”式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month，my family went to Huangshan by train.It took us ten hours to get there.What a long and tiring journey!We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us。
② 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time.But I don't think so.First，when money is used up，you can earn it back，but„„
2.回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、remember(记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad(难过的)„„如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.或It was really an unforgettable experience I had。
3.疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is„„ 再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have anopportunity to travel abroad，why not consider Singapore?
4.倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves(捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital.I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt.Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you.It's a „„ story。
十字诀
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分；四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQ is extremely strong.观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1.每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday!详举吃的是什么。2.每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，inaddition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but, yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
中考英语作文必备的10个“万金油”句型
1.不用说„„ It goes without saying that „
=(It is)needless to say(that)„
= It is obvious that „
例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours。
2.在各种„„之中，„„ Among various kinds of „，„ /= Of all the „，„
例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular。
3.就我的看法„„；我认为„„
In my opinion, „
= To my mind, „
= As far as I am concerned, „
= I am of the opinion that „
例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health。
就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
4.随着人口的增加„„ With the increase/growth of the population, „
随着科技的进步„„ With the advance of science and technology, „
例：With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass。
随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
5.„„是必要的 It is necessary(for sb。)to do / that „
„„ 是重要的 It is important/essential(for sb。)to do / that „
„„ 是适当的 It is proper(for sb。)to do / that „
„„是紧急的 It is urgent(for sb。)to do / that „
例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean。
It is proper that we(should)keep the public places clean。
我们应当保持公共场所清洁。
6.花费 spend „ on sth./ doing sth.„
例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。
We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in。
7.how 引导的感叹句
例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。
At least it will prove how honest you are。
8.状语从句
A)如果你不„„，你就会„„ If you don't „，you'll „
例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance。
如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。
B)如此 „„，以至于„„ so „ that „
例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up。
当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。
C)每当我听到„„我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear „，I cannot but feel excited。
每当我做„„我就忍不住感到悲伤。Whenever I do „，I cannot but feel sad。
每当我想到„„我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of „，I cannot but feel nervous。
每当我遭遇„„我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with „，I cannot but feel frightened。
每当我看到„„我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see „，I cannot but feel surprised。
例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad。
= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad。
每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。
9.宾语从句
我认为，„„ / 我认为„„不 I think / I don't think that „
我想知道是否„„ I wonder whether „
例：He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club。
他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
10.Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard。
自从他上高中，他就一直很用功
中考指导：英语作文万能开头14句
1、关于„„人们有不同的观点。一些人认为„„
There are different opinions among people as to ____。Some people suggest that
____。
2、俗话说(常言道)„„，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______。Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in
many cases even today。
3、现在，„„，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，„„；其次，„„。更为糟糕的是„„。
Today，____，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First，____ Second，____。What makes
things worse is that______。
4、现在，„„很普遍，许多人喜欢„„，因为„„，另外(而且)„„。
Nowadays，it is common to ______。
Many people like ______because ______。Besides，______。
5、任何事物都是有两面性，„„也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages。
6、关于„„人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)„„，在他们看来，„„
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them，_____。
7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题„„，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious。
8、„„已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their
way。
9、„„在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
_____ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。
10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出„„。很显然„„，但是为什么呢？
According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______while.Obviously，______，but why？
11、Recently，the problem of „ has aroused people’s concern。
最近，„问题已引起人们的关注。
12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。
13、Nowadays，(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face。
如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。
14、With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that„
随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为„
冲刺高分四步骤法
多关注焦点、热点、人文关怀类题材
李老师告诉记者，近几年的中考书面表达命题常见题型一是根据所给标题写作，即命题作文，如 My school/family/class/hometown 等；二是根据英语情景提示写作或者是根据表格提示写作，即话题作文；三是根据一幅图画或者带有一些图片说明的题目，即看图写作。
这三种都属材料作文，特点是给出特定的书面材料，并准确地记述、描写、转达某一活动的内容或动机，从而达到书面语言交际的目的。体裁有记叙文、描写文、说明文和应用文(英文书信、E-mail、感谢信)、日记、请假条、便条、讲稿、启事、电话留言条、贺卡、发言稿(值日报告)、介绍、通知、看图写话等。
李老师着重强调了一点，近年的中考英语作文基本上是材料作文。这些题材与生活实际紧密联系，并关注社会焦点、热点问题，体现人文关怀。所设计的情景密切联系现实生活，写作题材源于生活，使学生有话可说，有利于写出真情实感，也有利主动性、创造性地发挥。所以，学生在复习时要多关注社会焦点、热点问题、人文关怀类题材。
打牢基础，养成勤练习的好习惯
李老师表示，要想在有限的篇幅和时间内，使书面表达行文流畅，语言丰富、得体，就要按题目的需要和自己实际英文水平，扬长避短，选用最熟悉的最有把握的词、句，注意时态、语态等多种句式的交替使用。
“最主要的是一定要平时打牢基础，练好基本功，养成练习的好习惯；多研究中考书面表达的要求，重视技巧训练；适时进行备考训练。”李老师提醒学生要掌握中考书面表达对学生的能力要求。
这些能力包括：在所学词汇、语法和句型的基础上写出句意完整、语法准确的句子；能根据所提供的材料、信息、图片、图表及英文词汇完成应用文、话题作文和看图作文；切中题意，文理通顺；上下文连贯，逻辑正确；要素完整，语言得当；格式正确；无拼写错误及大小写错误，书写规范整洁，标点正确。
四步骤法轻松“拿下”书面表达
李老师结合自己多年的教学心得，以及近几年编写指导学生中考英语的经验，就中考英语书面表达如何能够在考场有限时间内得高分，给出了四个步骤，初三学生不妨一试，并在寒假里按此法多多练习。
认真审题 包括文字说明、图表、短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇、字数要求等，准确把握人物关系和故事情节，理解主题大意，审清文体，确定格式，确定人称、主体时态。
列出要点 结合提示信息，把涉及的所有写作要点逐条列出，编写要点提纲，组织语言。如：1.开篇句：I think that.。我认为......；It is often said that....。人们经常这么说......2.连接句：Among all the given reasons, one should be mentioned。在所有理由中，有一个值得一提；The main reason why......is that....。之所以....。的主要原因是......3.结束句：一般情况下，记叙文和说明文采用自然结尾法；夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语，首尾呼应。结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。如：Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that„„考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以做出这样的结论„„另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year等。
完成写作 写作时语言要纯正地道，避免母语的影响；用多种表达方式，避免重复和呆板；使用熟悉的短语、句式，提高准确率。如：1.并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, not only...but also, neither...nor......both...and„„2.转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however„„3.时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last„„4.空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right„„5.比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as„„6.对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of„„7.递进关系的过渡词：also, and, then, too, in addition„„8.因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, so, therebefore„„9.解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually......10.强调的过渡词：in fact, in deed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important„„11.目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose„„12.列举的过渡词：for example, such as„„13.总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally„„
仔细检查 查格式是否有误；人称、时态是否恰当；语法结构是否正确；注意英汉表达的差异；字母大小写；字数是否合乎要求等
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