2017届上海英语高三二模翻译五篇范文

第一篇：2017届上海英语高三二模翻译

长宁卷

72.只有多练，你才能提高驾驶技术。(Only)73.在旅游旺季机票订得越早越便宜。(book)74.无论白天在学校发生了什么事情，晚上要尽量把负担卸下。(No matter)75.随着互联网的发展，海量信息唾手可得，或许你觉得在也没有必要去图书馆了。(need n.)72.Only through frequent practice can you improve your driving skills 73.The earlier you book a plane ticket in a tourist season , the lower its price will be.74.No matter what happens at school during the day , as early in the evening as you can , put all your burden down.或者..., burdens should be put down as many as possible in the evening.75.With the development / growth of the Internet , an enormous amount of information is at hand./ at our fingertips / available so that you may think there is no need to go to the library.杨浦卷

1.新颁布的禁烟令得到了广大市民的支持。（ban）

2.出乎我的意料，年轻人对中国古诗词显示出了极大的热情。（passion）3.共享单车不仅解决了最后一里路的问题，而且还有助于改善空气质量。（Not only）

4.一考定终身的日子已经一去不复返了，但不可否认的是考试越多，学生压力越大。（denying）

72.The newly-issued ban on smoking has been supported by most citizens 73.Beyond my expectation, young people showed tremendous passion for ancient Chinese poetry.74.Not only do shared bicycles solve the last-mile problem but also they help improve air quality 75.Gone are the days when one examination could determine students' fate, but there is no denying that the more examinations they have, the more stressful they will feel.青浦卷

72.演讲前，花点时间看一下提纲，你会更自信。(spend)73.两年后这个主题公园将对公众开放，但是它是否会盈利尚未确定。(remain)74.诗歌大赛吸引了大批观众，他们从中领略到了汉语的魅力。(which)75.不管那个推销员如何极力鼓动，我还是能保持冷静没有买那套位于城东的房子。(No natter)72.Before making a speech, spend some time taking a look at the outline so that you will be more confident.73.This theme park will be open to the public in two years, but whether it will make profits remains to be seen.74.Poetry contest attracted a large audience, from which they had a taste of the charm of Chinese.75.No matter how hard the salesman urged me, I still kept cool/calm and didn't buy the flat located east of the city.宝山卷

72.她在舞台上的表现让她成了“网红”。（become）73.李教授写的这本书是面向学术读者的。（intend）

74.当球迷们向篮球队员献花时，队员们激动得热泪盈眶。（So...）

75.一项新的研究发现，那些拥有年轻心态的人比自我感觉年龄大的人更加长寿。（those who）

72.She has become famous online/She has become an online star/ celebrity because of her performance on the stage.73.The book(written)by Professor Li is intended for academic audience/ readers.74.So excited were the basketball players when their fans presented flowers to them that their eyes were filled with tears.75.A new study has found that people who are young(er)at heart live longer than those who feel older than they truly are.普陀卷

72.想和我一起看电影的人请举手。（those）

73.背包旅行（backpacking）不仅是一种度假形式，也是一种受教育方式。（Not only）

74.人们理所当然地认为花的钱越多就越有可能获得高品质的服务。(grant)75.网购是一种电子商务，它让顾客可以足不出户地购买心仪的商品或服务。（commerce）

72.Those who want to see the movie with me, please raise/put up your hands.73.Not only is backpacking a way of taking a holiday/going on holiday/ spending a vacation, but also it is/ but it also is a means of being educated/ education.74.People take it for granted that the more you spend, the more likely you are to get a quality experience.或者It is taken for granted that the more you spend, the more likely you will get quality experiences.75.Online shopping is a form of electronic commerce, which allows consumers to purchase ideal goods or service without stepping out of their houses.闵行卷

72.看孩子们在沙滩上打排球很有趣。(fun)73.我刚交卷就意识到少回答了一个问题。（Hardly„）

74.这本词典需要做彻底修改，什么时候再版还不得而知。（revise）75.这种收音机已经很落伍了，不增加新功能的话很难有销路。（unless）76.公共场所全面禁言有助于人们养成健康的生活习惯，并能有效预防某些疾病的发生。(prevent)72.It’s fun to look at the children playing volleyball on the beach.73.Hardly had I handed in the test paper when I realized I missed a question 74.The dictionary needs to be thoroughly revised , and it’s unknown when it will be republished.75.This kind of radio is quite out of fashion , so it’s hard to sell unless new features/ functions are added(to it).76.The comprehensive ban on smoking in public places can help people develop healthy lifestyles and effectively prevent certain diseases from happening.徐汇卷

72.铃声一响，孩子们就冲了出来。（Out）73.出事后不久，朱莉(Julie)就被停职了。(suspend)74.会当凌绝顶，一览众山小。(when)75.一些欧洲国家一直不愿接受非洲移民，部分原因是他们担心社会安全问题。(reluctant)72.Out rushed the children as soon as the bell rang.73.Julie was suspended from her job shortly after the incident.74.When I stand on the top of Mount.Tai, the other mountains appear so small.// When reaching the top of Mount.Tai, I hold all other mountains in a single glance.（注：本句中未提及泰山，不扣分，只要提及站在高山顶。）

75.Some European countries have been reluctant to admit African immigrants, partly because they are concerned about social security problems.黄浦卷

72.永远不要对你孩子的缺点熟视无睹。(blind)73.任何情况下，你都不应该恶意评论他人。(Under„)74.申请人必须精通英语，否则他无法胜任这个岗位。(command)75.除了美味的咖啡和甜品，这间咖啡馆还提供各种书籍，从小说到诗歌，应有尽有，足以让你安静地度过一个下午。(range)72.Never turn a blind eye to your kid's shortcoming(s).或者Never be blind to your kid's shortcoming(s).73.Under no circumstances should you make ill/ evil/ bad comments on others.74.The applicant must have a good command of English/ command English well, or he won't be qualified for the job.75.Besides nice coffee and dessert, the café provides all kinds of books, ranging from novels to poetry, so that you can stay for a whole quiet afternoon.崇明卷

72.这只训练有素的警犬对任何声响都很警觉。(alert)73.利用好图书馆无疑会对你的学习有益。(doubt)74.新的交通法规规定，机动车在任何情况下都得避让行人。(way)75.共享单车不仅使用方便，而且价格合理，为短途出行提供了一种额外选择。(Not only)72.The well-trained police dog is alert to any sound.73.There is no doubt that taking advantage of the library will benefit your study.No doubt/ Without doubt, taking advantage of the library will benefit your study.Taking advantage of the library, without doubt, is good for your study.74.The new traffic regulations make it a rule that vehicles must give way to pedestrians in any case/ under any circumstance.75.Not only are shared bikes convenient to use, but also their prices are reasonable, so they provide an additional choice for short trips.奉贤卷

72.根据最新颁布的交通法，车内任何人员都必须系好安全带。(fasten)73.这是一个简单的故事，但是简单并不代表缺乏深度。（lack）

74.正是他良好的英语听说能力使他在这次英语演讲比赛中脱颖而出。（it）75.说起健康时，世界各地的人都将增加睡眠放在第一位，而非饮食健康、加强锻炼或补充维生素。(priority)72.According to the newly-issued traffic laws, anyone in a car must fasten the seat belt.73.This is a simple story, but simplicity doesn’t mean a lack of depth.74.It was his English listening and speaking ability that enabled him to stand out in the English speech contest.75.When it comes to being healthy, the top priority for people all over the world is having more sleep rather than eating health food, exercising more or taking vitamins.或：When it comes to health, people all over the world give priority to having more sleep rather than …

或：When it comes to health, people all over the world think their first priority is having more sleep rather than „ 嘉定卷

72.现如今人们越来越关注自己的生活品质。（concerned）73.春游的小学生们没能抵制住商贩们的花言巧语。（resist）

74.只有通过参与志愿者活动才能有效地增强中学生服务大众的责任感。（Only）

75.家用轿车普及带来的便利不容否认，但随之产生的能源浪费、空气污染和交通拥堵等问题发人深思。（While）

72.Nowadays people are more and more concerned about the quality of their own life.73.The children going for a spring outing/ attending the spring excursion failed to / couldn't resist the sweet words of the dealers/ vendors.74.Only by participating in volunteer/ voluntary activities can high school students enhance/ improve/ strengthen their sense of responsibility to serve the public effectively.75.While the convenience brought by the popularity of private cars can't be denied, the consequent(ial)problems such as waste of energy, air pollution and traffic jams set people thinking/ are thought-provoking.While there is no denying that the popularity of private cars brings convenience,...虹口卷

72.看到他的表情，我忍不住把实情告诉了他。(resist)73.随着时间的推移，那本日记上的字迹现在已模糊不清，难以辨认。（With）74.把难记的单词或句子同一件有趣的事情联系起来，记住它们就轻而易举了。（associate）

75.正是因为学习方法因人而异，所以在学习和生活中适合你的不一定就适合我。（vary）

72.Seeing his facial expressions/ look, I couldn’t resist telling him the truth/ telling the truth to him.73.With time passing by, the writing/ handwriting in the diary has now become so faint/ illegible/ vague that it is hard to identify/ recognize/ make out/ distinguish.74.It will be/ is very easy to memorize difficult words or sentences if / when you associate them with interesting/ funny things.… if / when they are associated with interesting/ funny things.75.It is because learning methods vary from person to person that what is suitable for you may not/ doesn’t necessarily suit me in study and life.浦东卷

72.正巧这几天有空，去公园散步如何？(happen)73.一幅油画赠与了该美术馆，以纪念两个城市间的珍贵友谊。（honor）74.与诗歌欣赏有关的电视节目倍受欢迎，以至于越来越多的人开始关注中国古典文学。(So„)75.这位年轻的科学家把获得的众多突出成就归功于从高中时期开始就博览群书、做事持之以恒、不甘落后。（owe）

72.It(so)happens that we are / I am free these days.What about / How about taking / having a walk in the park? 或者What about having a walk in the park as / since we / I happen to be free these days? 73.An oil painting/A painting/ A picture was given/presented/has been given/has been presented to the gallery/art museum in honor of/to honor/honoring the precious/valuable friendship between(the)two cities.74.So popular/well-received are the TV programs about poetry appreciation that more and more people are beginning to pay attention to Chinese classic/classical literature.或者So well are the TV programs about poetry appreciation received that„ 75.The young scientist owed many of his outstanding/ great/ marked/ remarked/ distinguished achievements/ much success to reading widely/ extensively/ many books, persevering/ persisting in(doing)everything/ what he was doing/ keeping doing everything/ things and being unwilling to lag behind/ fall behind/ be left behind since(he entered senior)high school.或„ to the fact that he(had)read widely/extensively,(had)persevered/persisted in everything/what he was doing and was/had been unwilling/reluctant to …

静安卷

72.由于缺乏独特的文化，一些地方将不再吸引游客。(lack)73.自律和有经验的员工非常受青睐。(prefer)74.嘉宾们的故事以及他们朗读的文章如此感人鼓舞人心，在大众中激起了读书的热情。(So)75.虽然他之前的表现出挑，但由于对公司文化一无所知，他还是没通过面试。(ignorance)72.Lacking unique/ peculiar culture, some places will not attract tourists / visitors any more.For lack of unique/peculiar culture, some places will no longer attract tourists / visitors.73.Self-disciplined / Self-managed and experienced staff are most / much preferred.74.So moving / touching and inspiring are the guests' stories and the articles they read that a passion / enthusiasm for reading has been aroused / stirred(up)among the(general)public.75.Despite/In spite of his previous remarkable performance, he failed in /didn’t pass the interview because he was in ignorance of the company culture.Although/Though his previous performance was remarkable/ outstanding/ extraordinary/ amazing, he failed in /didn’t pass the interview due to/ owing to because of his ignorance of the company culture.名师押题卷

1.他由于缺乏日常训练而未通过驾驶考试。(lack)2.直到上了地铁二号线她才想起把书包忘在上海科技馆了。(Not)3.以牺牲健康为代价而减肥的人应该意识到改变这种生活方式的重要性。(cost)4.尽管几天来非常劳累，战士们还是迅速赶到另一水灾地区实施救援。(despite)1.He failed to pass the driving test for lack of daily training./ because he lacked daily training.2.Not until she got on the Metro/ Subway Line 2 did it occur to her/ she remember that she had left her bag in the Shanghai Science and Technology Museum.3.Those who try to lose weight at the cost of their health should realize the importance of changing their way life/ lifestyle.4.Despite/ In spite of the great tiredness for days, the soldiers still rushed to another flooded area/ another flood-stricken area for the rescue/ to carry out the rescue.

第二篇：2014年上海高三二模中译英

长宁

1.看，十年前种的那棵树现在长得多高了呀！(how)

2.你看上去很疲惫，为什么不回家好好睡一觉呢？(tired)

3.普遍认为在公共场合大声说话是粗鲁的，应该避免。（It）

4.二十一世纪以来，许多发达国家采取措施尽可能地吸引中国游客以拉动经济增长。(promote)

5.只有设定明确的人生目标并为之不遗余力地奋斗，才能实现你成为有用之才的梦想。(Only)

1.Look, how tall the tree(that was)planted ten years ago is now!

2.You look very tired, and/ so why don’t you/ not go home and have a good sleep?

3.It is generally thought/ considered/ believed that talking loudly in public(places)is rude and should be avoided.4.Many developed countries have been taking measures/ steps/ action to attract as many Chinese tourists as possible to promote economic growth since the 21st century.5.Only by setting clear goals/ aims in life and sparing no effort/ making every effort to work on it/ and working on it with all efforts can you realize your dream of being a useful person/ make your dream of being a useful person come true.奉贤

1.18岁意味着你要对自己的言行负责了。(mean)

2.她显出一副高兴的样子，好像什么事也没发生过。(mood)

3.运动能增强我的体质，也能让我释放学习压力。(Not only)

4.我们应该养成看报的习惯，因为读报有助于我们及时了解发生在国内外的各种事件。（inform）

5.如果我们把英语学习看成是了解文化的一种方式，而不是一门考试学科，我们也许就会体会到其中的学习乐趣。(regard)

1.Being 18 means taking responsibility for your words and actions.Being 18 means that you should be responsible for what you have said and done.2.She appeared to be in good mood,(and acted/looked)as if nothing had happened.She seems to be in a good mood as if nothing has happened.3.Not only can sports/(taking)exercising build up my body(health)/ strengthen/improve my fitness but also help me to release my study pressure/ help me relax from the pressure/stress of study..4.We should cultivate/develop/ form the habit of reading newspapers, because it helps us(to be)informed of various/ all kinds of events happening both at home and abroad in time.5.If we regard English learning as a means/way of understanding/ knowing / being aware of aculture but not a course / subject to be tested on/an examination subject/course,(then)we may experience/ understand the learning fun in it.闵行

82.千万别卷入那件事，否则你将自寻麻烦。(involve)

83.寒冷的天气让大多数濒危动物很难在这里生存。(it)

84.据我所知，提前预报地震仍是一个难以达到的目标。（ahead）

85.直到高中毕业，大部分学生才开始意识到没有最好地利用在校的时间。（Not„）

86.鼓励孩子们阅读的目的不在于读多少本书，而在于培养他们热爱读书。(lie)

82.Be sure not to get involved in that matter, otherwise you will invite trouble.83.The cold weather makes it difficult for most endangered animals(species)to survive here.Be sure not to get yourself involved in that matter, or you will look for trouble.84.As far as I know, predicting specific quakes ahead of time has been a goal difficult to achieve.85.Not until their graduation from high school do a majority of(most of)students come to realize that they haven’t made the best use of time at school.86.The purpose of motivating children to read lies not in the number of books but in the cultivation of their love for reading.The purpose of motivating children to read lies not in how many books they read but incultivating their love for reading.浦东

1.当地村民的善良感动了我们。(touch)

2.过于强调个人成就是没有意义的。(point)

3.虽然经理尽力想挽留他，但看来他去意已决。(seem)

4.他忙于搞科研，无法腾出时间照顾家人。(So„)

5.这些相片让我想起了那些艰苦的日子，那时，尽管困难重重，我们仍坚守着自己的目标。（when）

We were touched by the kindness of the local villagers.The kindness of the local villagers touched us

There is no point in emphasizing /stressing personal achievement(s)too much.There is no point in putting/ laying /placing too much stress/ emphasis on personal achievement.The manager tried to persuade him to stay, but he seemed to have made up his mind to resign/ leave.The manager tried to persuade him to stay, but it seemed that he had decided to leave.So busy is he with his scientific research that he couldn’t /can’t set aside time to take care of his family.These photos remind me of the hard days when we still stuck to our goals /targets regardless of all the difficulties.普陀

1.考官将会问你几个关于科技发展的问题。(related)

The judges/ interviewers will ask you several questions related to the development of science and technology.评分标准，满分4分：

Thejudges/ interviewers(0.5+0.5)will ask youseveral questions(0.5+0.5)related to(1)the development of science and technology(0.5+0.5).1.judges/ interviewers前没有添加定冠词，扣0.5分

2.science and technology两者漏翻其一，均扣0.5分

2.他在英语学习方面取得了比其他同学更大的进步。(than„)

He has made more progress than other students in English learning.评分标准，满分4分：

He has made more progress(1+1)than other students(1)in English learning(1).1.make progress时态用错、比较级漏翻扣1分，progress错用复数形式扣0.5

2.other students错用限定词，扣0.5

3.in English learning错用介词，扣0.53.就你的观点，缺少均衡饮食以及室外运动会有怎样的负面结果？(consequence)

From your point of view, what are the negative consequences of lacking balanced diets or outdoor activities?

评分标准，满分4分：

From your point of view(1), what are the negative consequences of(1)lacking(1)balanced diets or outdoor activities(1)?

1.“就你的观点”也可以翻译为：As far as you are concerned,„

2.“负面结果”也可以翻译为：negative results

4.在未来几周内，这些学校将要安装网络设备为了方便学生获取所需信息。(install)

In the coming weeks, the schools will be installed with network devices/ equipment to make it convenient for students to get the information needed.评分标准，满分5分：

In the comingweeks(0.5+0.5), the schoolswill be installed with(0.5+0.5)network devices/ equipment(1)to make it convenient for students(1)to get the informationneeded(0.5+0.5).1.the schools will install network device也得分，即install主动、被动都得分

2.the schools限定词不能缺失，否则扣0.5分

3.equipment不可数名词，错误扣0.5分

5.韩国影星在女学生中大受欢迎，很多人为了见上一面甚至愿意在机场等上几小时，这却让父母们很担忧。(So„)

So popular are the Korean stars among the girl students that some are even willing to wait at the airport for hours just to have a look, which makes their parents feel worried.评分标准，满分5分：

So popular arethe Korean stars(0.5+0.5)among the girl students(0.5)that some are even willing to(1)wait at the airportfor hours(0.5+0.5)just to have a look(0.5), which makes their parents feel worried(1).1.倒装句翻译错误或缺失，或没有翻译so„that„结构，均扣1分

2.“这却让父母们很担忧”根据语义翻译正确即得分

徐汇

1.20世纪末电子产品发生了巨大的变化。（see)

2.只有当我们将计划付诸实践，我们才有可能会成功。(Only)

3.他是承认错误还是掩盖事实，举棋不定。(whether)

4.新的高考改革能否减轻学生学业负担引起了教育专家们的热议。(arouse)

5.校园义卖活动不仅丰富了校园生活，还提高了学生们的组织活动能力，培养了他们团队合作精神。(In addition to)

1.The end of the 20th century saw great changes in electronic / digital products.2.Only when we put our plan into practice are we likely to be successful.Only when we put our plan into practice can we possibly achieve success.3.He is trying to make a decision whether to admit / confess his mistake or conceal the truth

4.It has aroused heated a discussion among education experts whether the new reform of college entrance examination can reduce students’ academic burden.It has aroused a heated discussion among education experts whether the new reform of college entrance examination can relieve students of their academic burden.5.In addition to enriching students’ school life, the school charity sale has also improved their ability to organize an activity and developed their team spirit

闸北

1．现在，很多年青人热衷于在网上征求游伴。（keen）

2.起先观众们听不清台词，但最终还是被演员们的表演打动了。（finally）

3.玛丽在报纸上了解到相关信息，这才意识到粮食浪费的问题有多严重。（Not until„）

4.为了能陪伴孩子度过珍贵的童年时期，许多妈妈放弃了前景良好的职业生涯。（give up）

5.尽管回报丰厚且风险不大，市场对银行最近推出的金融产品仍反应冷淡。（in spite of）

1.Now, many youngsters are keen on seeking tour pals on the Internet.2．At first audience couldn’t hear the lines clearly but finally they were moved by the actors’ performance.3.Not until she knew about the relevant information in the newspaper did she realize how serious the problem of food waste was.4.In order to accompany their kids through the precious childhood, many mothers have given up their work career of promising prospect.5.In spite of the good reward(returns)and low risk, the market reaction toward the financial product recently launched by the bank was still muted(cool).（静安、杨浦、青浦、宝山）

1.不管你相信不相信，善于倾听并采纳别人的意见是明智的。(advisable)

2.能否坚持自己所做的事情是一个人取得成功的重要因素之一。(persevere)

3.在线预订出租车虽然很时尚，但许多相关问题尚待解决。(as)

4.在北京的地铁上吃东西、抽烟或躺在座位上的人可能会被处以50至500元的罚款。(fine)

5.有些青少年热衷于网络游戏，有时候竟然连饭都可以不吃，而且他们和家长的关系往往也比较糟糕。(keen)

1.Believe it or not, it is advisable to listen to others and take their advice.2.Whether one can persevere in what he is doing is one of the important factors of his success.3.Fashionable as booking a taxi online is, many related problems remain to be settled/ solved.4.Those who are found eating, smoking or lying across the seats on the subway in Beijing can be fined between 50 to 500 yuan.5.Some teenagers are so keen on online games that they sometimes prefer not to have meals, and what’s more, they usually have a bad relationship with their parents.崇明县

1.你认为有必要采取措施保护上海方言吗？(it)

2.提前做出周密计划可以帮你更有效地完成这项艰巨任务。(advance)

3.代表受害者，他期望社会给予他们更多的理解和帮助。(behalf)

4.她的内心深处一直存着一个疑惑，她可能是18年前被父母领养的。(In the depth)

5.尽管时光荏苒，但和同学们一起为进入理想大学而苦读书的日子仍然是他难忘的记忆。(admit)

1.Do you think it(is)necessary to take measures to preserve Shanghai dialect?

2.Making a careful plan in advance can help you finish the tough task more efficiently.3.On behalf of the victims, he expected the society to give them more understanding and help.4.In the depth of her heart always lies a suspicion that she might have been adopted by her parents eighteen years ago.5.Although time flies, the days when he worked hard with his classmates to be admitted into their ideal universities are still his unforgettable memory.虹口

1.他们的建议听起来和我们的同样可行。(as„as)

2.一到机场，玛丽就发现把护照忘在家里了。(Hardly)

3.正是他对我们表现的评价，表明我们已经步入正轨了。(track)

4.我没想到那个曾经受到高度赞扬的钢琴家结果却令观众大失所望。(turn out)

5.如果不能独立找出提高学习效率的方法，你就很难取得令人满意的成绩。(unless)

1.Their suggestion sounds as feasible as ours.2.Hardly had Mary got to the airport when she found/noticed that she had left the passport at home.3.It was their comment on our performance that showed we had already been on the right track.4.I never thought that the pianist who had once been highly praised/spoken highly of turned out to be a great disappointment to the audience.5.It is very difficult for you to gain satisfactory achievements unless you find out the method of improving the learning efficiency by yourself / on your own.黄浦

1.这位医生已经说服了很多人戒烟。(persuade)

2.直到完成了任务，他才发现时间已经到了午夜。(Not until„)

3.他总是毫不犹豫地提出他认为对别人有帮助的批评。(hesitate)

4.现在就预订展览会的门票，你将有机会欣赏到众多的艺术作品。(chance)

5.药品没有广告说得那么有效，我服了药后，没有缓解我的咳嗽。(as„as)

1.The doctor has persuaded many people to / into give / giving up smoking.2.Not until he completed the task did he find it was midnight.3.He never hesitates to make criticism which / that he thinks is helpful to others.4.Book the ticket for the exhibition now, and you will have the chance to

appreciate a great number of works of art.5.The medicine was not as effective as what the advertisement(had)claimed, for

it didn’t relieve my cough after I took it.

第三篇：2018高三二模作文

宝山区

三写作 70分

26.依据下面材料，按要求作文。

有明确的信仰，并不能证明有精神追求的勇气；有精神追求的勇气，却能证明有明确的信仰。

要求：自选角度，自拟题目，800字以上。26．（70分）评分标准

一类卷(63－70分)基准分67分

能准确把握题意，立意深刻，选材恰当，中心突出，内容充实，感情真挚，结构严谨，语言流畅，有文采。

二类卷(52－62分)基准分57分

符合题意，立意较深刻，选材较恰当，中心明确，内容较充实，感情真实，结构完整，语言通顺。

三类卷(39－51分)基准分45分

基本符合题意，立意一般，选材尚恰当，中心尚明确，内容尚充实，感情尚真实，结构基本完整，语言基本通顺，偶有语病。

四类卷(21－38分)基准分29分

偏离题意，立意或选材不当，中心不明确，内容单薄，结构不够完整，语言欠通顺，语病较多。

五类卷（20分以下）符合以下一项即为五类：

（1）脱离题意。（2）文理不通。（3）全文不足400字。说明：

（1）未写题目扣2分。（2）错别字1个扣1分，至多扣3分。（3）标点错误多，酌情扣1－2分。（4）文面不整洁，酌情扣1－2分；文面整洁美观，酌情加1－2分。崇明区

三、写作（70分）

27．生活中，我们常常听到这样的抱怨，道理都懂，为什么不按照道理去做。

对此，你有怎样的思考？请写一篇不少于800字的文章。要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）文体不限，诗歌除外。奉贤

三、写作（70 分）

30.阅读以下材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于 800 字的文章。

冲突是指发生在两个或两个以上事物之间的互相对抗。达伦多夫在《社会冲突论》中认为，冲突也是解决问题的有效方式。虹口

三作文（70分）

26.阅读下面的文字，按要求写作。

网络流行词“佛系”，最早来源于2014年日本某杂志，指一种怎么都行、无须走心、看淡一切的活法，一切随缘。该词一出迅速流行，更有不少人自称佛系，有佛系追星、佛系购物、佛系恋爱、佛系员工、佛系学生等种种说法。

请写一篇文章，谈谈你对此的思考。要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。

嘉定

三写作 70分

26.作文。（70分）

鲁迅先生说过：“贪安稳就没有自由，要自由就要历些危险。只有这两条路。”这句话引发了你怎样的思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章，不要写成诗歌。

金山

三写作70分

26．根据以下材料，写一篇文章，谈谈你的思考。

我们每个人都生活在别人的眼光关注中。这些眼光中有鼓励，有肯定，但也有质疑甚至否定，然而，掌控人生的往往是你自己。要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。青浦

三、写作（70分）

26.根据以下材料写作

现实生活中经常面临着新的开始与旧的结束。恋旧、怀旧是人之常情，但也有人说“相见不如怀念, 怀念不如忘却”。如何看待并处理好新的开始与恋旧怀旧的关系是需要智慧和勇气的。

看了上面材料引发了你怎样的思考？请自选一个角度写一篇不少于800字的文章，题目自拟。

徐汇

三、写作(70分)26.当了解信息的途径越来越丰富、方式越来越便捷，人们会更容易获取自己想关注的信息，从而将自己包裹在以个人需求为主导的世界里。

这种现象带给你怎样的思考？请写一篇不少于800字的文章，题目自拟。

普陀

三写作（70分）

26.生活中，我们往往有意无意地和他人进行各种比较。有人认为这是人性的劣根、烦恼的根源，应该努力避免。对此你是否认同？请写一篇文章，谈谈你的思考。要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。杨浦

三．写作（70分）

26.世上没有移山的方法，惟一能改变我们和山的距离的途径是：山不过来，我过去。

人们可以持有这样的态度：改变可以改变的一切，适应不能改变的一切。

根据以上材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇文章。

要求：⑴不少于800字。⑵不要写成诗歌。⑶不要透露个人相关信息。

长宁——同嘉定黄浦

三、写作70分

26．有人说，人生的麻烦，大多是因为太快说“是”，太慢说“不”造成的。请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这句话的思考。

要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。

闵行

二写作 70分

27.阅读下面材料，根据要求作文。

生活中，我们自以为是某个事件的关注者，其实，我们往往不明就里，只凑了个热闹，没过多久就忘记了，成为事件的忽视者。请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这种现象的思考。要求：(1)自拟题目；(2)不少于800字。

浦东

三写作 70分

26．想出新办法的人在他的办法成功以前，人们总是说他异想天开。针对这种现象，请写一篇文章谈谈你的思考。

要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。