第一篇：高中英语作文开头技巧
高中英语作文开头技巧
英语作文的开头的好坏对整个作文的评分都重要的影响，那么英语作文怎样开头才能瞬间打动阅卷老师？首先我们先来欣赏一下一些文学巨匠的开篇，看看他们是如何开篇的！娜·卡列尼娜》
列夫·托尔斯泰
幸福的家庭总是相似的，而不幸的家庭则各有各的不幸。
All happy families are happy alike, all unhappy families are unhappy in their own way。《双城记》查尔斯·狄更斯
这是最美好的时代，这是最糟糕的时代；这是智慧的年头，这是愚昧的年头；这是信仰的时期，这是怀疑的时期；这是光明的季节，这是黑暗的季节；这是希望之春，这是失望之冬。我们的前途拥有一切，我们的前途一无所有；我们正走向天堂，我们也正直下地狱。
It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.It was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness.It was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity.It was the season of light, it was the season of darkness.It was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair.We had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to heaven, we were all going direct the other way.《傲慢与偏见》简•奥斯汀
凡是有钱的单身汉，总想娶位太太，这已经成了一条举世公认的真理。
It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possessing of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.《老人与海》欧内斯特•海明威
他是个独自在湾流中一条小船上钓鱼的老人，至今已了84天，一条鱼也没逮住。
He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone 84 days now without taking a fish.《再见，柏林》克里斯多福•伊薛伍德
我是一台被动的相机，开着快门只记录不思考。
I am a camera with its shutter open, quite passive, recording, not thinking.《墨菲》塞缪尔•贝克特
太阳照常升起，一切都没有改变。
The sun shone, having no alternative, on the nothing new.《变形记》弗兰兹•卡夫卡
一天早晨，格里高尔•萨姆沙从不安的睡梦中醒来，发现自己躺在床上变成了一只巨大的甲虫。
As Gregor Samsa awoke one morning from uneasy dreams he found himself transformed in his bed into a gigantic insect.《彼得潘》詹姆斯•马修•巴利
所有的孩子都长大，只有一个例外。All children, except one, grow up.模仿是好的写作的开始，其实写作时有一些技巧可以学习的，我们可以尝试一下下面的技巧：
“开门见山”式
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。1
对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train.It took us ten hours to get there.What a long and tiring journey!We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.2
对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time.But I don't think so.First, when money is used up, you can earn it back，but…… 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。
这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、remember(记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad(难过的)……
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had.疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is ……
再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore? 倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。
如“Catching Thieves(捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital.I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt.Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you.It's a...story.
第二篇：高中英语写作开头技巧
高中英语写作开头技巧
一篇文章通常可分为三个部分，即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体，直接影响到文章的质量。
文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，一下于引起读者的兴趣。作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种： 1.开门见山，揭示主题
文章一开头，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“howispentmyvacation”(我怎样度假)的开头可以写成： ispentmylastvacationhappily.“honesty”(谈诚实)的开头可以写成：
honestyisoneofthebestvirtues.anhonestmanisalwaystrustedandrespected.onthecontrary,onewhotellsliesisregardedasa“liar”andislookeduponbyhonestpeople.2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“atriptojinshan”(去金山旅游)的开头可以写成：
thedaybeforeyesterdaymyclasswentonabustriptojinshan.thebusridetheretookthreehours.thelongtripmadeusverytired,butthesightofthebeautifulsearefreshedus.3.回忆性的开头，用回忆的方法来开头。例如“atriptothetaishanmountain”(泰山游)的开头是：
iremembermyfirsttriptothetaishanmountainasifitwereyesterday.4.概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“thehappinessofreadingbooks”(读书的快乐)的开头：
peopleoftensaythatgoldandsilverarethemostvaluablethingsintheworld.butisaythattoreadbooksismorevaluablethananythingelse,becausebooksgiveusknowledgeandknowledgegivesuspower.5.介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“anaccident”(一场事故)的开头可以写成: itwasarainyandwindymorning.theskywasgloomy,thetemperaturewaslow,andthestreetwasnearlyempty.iwasonmywaybacktoschool.suddenly,aspeedingcarcameroundthecorner.6.交待写作目的的开头
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如“pollutioncontrol”(控制污染)的开头： inthisarticleishalldrawyourattentiontothesubjectofpollutioncontrol.下面是两篇例文，供大家可以参考： 关键字：毒鸡蛋 thechinesenewsagencyxinhuasaysthepeople'sdailynewspaperhavebothcarriedreportssuggestingthattheadditionofindustrialchemicalmelaminetoanimalfeedinchinaisanopensecret.quentin sommervillereportsfrombeijing.animalfeedinchinaisroutinelycontaminatedwithindustrialchemicalmelamine,accordingtothecountry'sstatemedia.chemicalfirmshavebeenrepackagingscrappedmelamineasproteinpowderandsellingathome.whenaddedtothefeed,itgivestheillusionofboostingnutritionallevels.china'smelaminescandalbeganinthedairyindustry,4babiesdiedand20thousandchildrenwerehospitalisedafterthechemicalwasaddedtomilk.thisweek,theauthoritiesinhongkongdiscoveredmelaminein4pandsofchineseproducedeggs.it'sbelievedtheyhavegottherebecauseofcontaminatedanimalfeed.关键字：感恩节 livewiththankfulness doyouknowthanksgivingday?doyouknowwhyhumanthankgod? thanksgivingfallsonthefourththursdayofnovember,adifferentdateeveryyear.thepresidentmustproclaimthatdateastheofficialcelepation.thanksgivingisatimefortraditionandsharing.eveniftheylivefaraway,familymembersgatherforareunionatthehouseofanolderrelative.allgivethankstogetherforthegoodthingsthattheyhave.inthisspiritofsharing,civicgroupsandcharitableorganizationsofferatraditionalmealtothoseinneed,particularlythehomeless.onmosttablesthroughouttheunitedstates,foodseatenatthefirstthanksgivinghavebecometraditional.whatshouldwethank? thethankfulgreatuniverseprovidestheenvironmentofexistenceforusandgiveussunlight,air,waterandeverythinginkeepingwithweexistenceofspace,pingstormtoletusaccepttotoughenforus,pingtousmysteriousletuslookfor.thethankfulparentsgiveusthelife,makeusfeelthemerrimentofthehumanlife,feelthegenuinefeelingofthehumanlife,feelthecomityofthehumanlife,feelhappinessofthehumanlife,alsofeelhardshipsandpainandsufferingsofthehumanlife!thethankfulteacherworks withdiligenceandwithoutfatigueeverydayofteach,giveusknowledgeability,putonthewingwhichfliestowardtheidealforus.thethankfulclassmateandfriendgrowsuproadof,letinolongerstandingaloneintheitineraryoflife;thewithgratitudeisfrustratedandletusbecomeinatimethefailurestronger.
第三篇：高中英语作文及技巧
高中英语作文
1.We had a heated discussion about physical exercise(whether we should do exercise every day)yesterday.Some students who are in favor of the idea think we should take exercise every day, such as basketball, but it shouldn’t take up too much time(we shouldn’t spend too much time on it).Exercise can build up one’s body and reduce diseases.let one’s brain have a rest pay attention to their lessons.It’s also possible2.假如你是李华。你的美国笔友即将随其父母来中国，并
在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗，请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗。
要点如下：
1历史悠久。2 中国人独有的传统节日。3 家庭团圆。共进晚餐。5 吃月饼。6 赏月。
Dear Mike,I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here.The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together.After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirits of the festival-unity.Often ,if the weather permits, they will go out of the
houseto enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pleasant.It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people.I wish you a pleasant journey and I’m sure you
will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day.Yours,Li Hua
3.The Way to Stay Healthy
Health is most important for any of us.In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.pay attention to the diet.We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and Iow in fat.As a proverb says, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away.“So fruit is good for health.Don＇t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter.Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar
does harm to us.Don＇t drink too much coffee, either.do running every day usually have stronger hearts than who don＇t.too hard.Over work and little sleep will lead to illness.What＇s more, stay away fromcigarettes.These are the things we should pay attention to so as to
stay healthy.4假定由你负责接待一个外国旅游团。请你拟定
一篇发言稿向游客介绍南京。要点如下：
1.南京位于中国东南部，是江苏省省会，人口约500万。
2.南京有2400多年历史，曾有10个朝代在此建都。
3.南京很美，有许多名胜，如玄武湖、鸡鸣寺、石头城等，还有许多现代化的工厂和高大的楼房。
Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our city.I’d like to tell you something about our city.Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China.It has a population of about 5 million.The city has a history of
more than 2,400 years, and was once the capitals of ten dynasties.It is a very beautiful
city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City.It also has many modern factories and high buildings.I’m sure you will have a good time here.Thank you.5.某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文，请按下
面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文，介绍你的家乡
过去的情况和现在的变化，向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给
出。
过去：家乡小镇绿树环抱；小河清清鱼儿嬉戏；房屋简陋
街道狭窄；人们劳作生活清贫；
现在：高楼大厦厂店林立；大小车辆驰骋街头；工业发展
环境恶化；树木减少鱼儿消失；治理污染当务之急
I used to live in a beautiful small town with greentrees all around it．The river，running through thetown，had clean water in which fish could be seen swimming in groups.The house, however, were small and simple, and the street wasn’t wide enoughto run cars.People here worked hard all year round yet lived a life of no more than poverty.Now great changes have taken place here.You can see tall buildings, department stores and factories everywhere.Cars and buses are running inbroad streets.But with the development of industry, pollution is becoming more and more serious.A lot of trees are gone, and fish have disappeared because of the dirty water.To our joy, people have been doing their best to stop pollution and make the town even more beautiful.假如你发现同学们遇到重要考试，都会出现头晕、乏力、睡眠和食欲不好等精神紧张的情况。请你用英语写一篇关于如何正确对待考试及如何克服考试紧张情绪的短文。短文内容包括以下要点：
1、平时努力学习，正确对待考试；
2、考试期间适当运动，正常作息；
3、睡前洗个热水澡、喝杯热牛奶有助于快速入睡。
Just Try to Relax During Exams
As you know most of us middle school students feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam.There is no doubt that exams are important to us students, but it’s very important to have a right attitude towards them.As a matter of fact, exams are no more than a
means of checking.Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results.Study hard every day and make good preparations.Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.We’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise during an exam.Besides, enough sleep can make us full of energy and make it possible for us to perform well in the exam.A warm bath or a cup of milk before going to bed might help you to have a sound sleep.So, my suggestion is: Don’t worry about it, and just try to relax whatever happens.6.语言集锦
because of因为as a result of 由于……原因thanks to 幸亏，由于due to由于owing to因为，由于therefore因此thus 这样as a result 结果so因此
to conclude据推断in a word总之in brief简而言之to sum up总计，合计
7.高级句型结构
◆ It句型
① It will be + some time + before…
It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.（2008年湖北卷）
③ It is + 被强调部分 + that…
1)It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2)Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.◆ more …than any other 表示最高级
Among the optional courses, spoken English and computer study are more popular than
any one else.◆ 名词从句
① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the
② ◆（非限制性）定语从句
① The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→
(NMET 2003)
② It was quite an experience for us both,◆ 分词结构
① I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless ② We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting
③ Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.④ Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.◆ with结构
① A terrible accident happened yesterday,②
◆ 倒装句
① The library is to the east of the teaching building.→
② Although we are tired, we are happy.→
③
④ May all your dreams come true!May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!（2007年湖南卷）
◆ 被动语态
① Opinions are divided on the question.② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.(2004全国卷 Ⅳ)
③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.◆ 巧妙的改写
（1）．Only 改成no one but
Only Tom passed the exam last week.→ No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）．as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/The
moment No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.（3）．have sb/sth do/done
The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken(her leg was broken.).（4）．变换插入语的位置
① However, they suggest fees should be charged low.→
They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.(NMET 2002)
② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well
you’ve learned Chinese.→
This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well
you’ve learned Chinese.(5).用同位语代替非限制性定语从句
Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several
days.→
Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.8.相关过渡语
1).表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last…
2).表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…
3).表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise…
4).表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus…
5).表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore,in addition, on top of…
6).表示并列关系: and, as well as, also…
7).表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief,to conclude…
英语作文常用谚语、俗语
1、A liar is not believed when he speaks the truth.说谎者即使讲真话也没人相信。
2、A little knowledge is a dangerous thing.一知半解，自欺欺人。
3、All rivers run into sea.海纳百川。
4、All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。
5、All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
6、A bad beginning makes a bad ending.不善始者不善终。
7、Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。
8、A faithful friend is hard to find.知音难觅。
9、A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
10、A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难，失朋友易。
11、A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
12、A good beginning makes a good ending.善始者善终。
13、A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。
14、A good medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。
15、A mother's love never changes.母爱永恒。
16、An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，不用请医生。
17、A single flower does not make a spring.一花独放不是春，百花齐放春满园。
18、A year's plan starts with spring.一年之计在于春。
19、A young idler, an old beggar.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
20、Better late than never.不怕慢，单怕站。
21、By reading we enrich the mind.读书使人充实，22、Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。
23、Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。
24、Custom is a second nature.习惯是后天养成的。
25、Custom makes all things easy.有个好习惯，事事皆不难。
26、Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。
27、Do nothing by halves.凡事不可半途而废。
28、Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。
29、Don't trouble trouble until trouble troubles you.不要自找麻烦。
30、Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。
31、Easier said than done.说得容易，做得难。
32、Easy come, easy go.来也匆匆，去也匆匆。
33、Eat to live, but not live to eat.人吃饭是为了活着，但活着不是为了吃饭。
34、Every man has his faults.金无足赤，人无完人。
35、Every man is the architect of his own fortune.自己的命运自己掌握。
36、Every minute counts.分秒必争。
37、Each coin has two sides.38、Fact speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。
39、Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
40、God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助。
41、Health is better than wealth.健康胜过财富。
42、Honesty is the best policy.做人诚信为本。
43、Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算。
44、It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。
45、Knowledge is power.知识就是力量
46、Like mother, like daughter.有其母必有其女。
47、No pain，no gain.（不劳无获。）
48、You never know till you have tried.不尝试，不知晓。
49、An idle youth, a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
50、Diligence is the mother of success.勤奋是成功之母。
51、Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起
使
人健康、富裕和聪颖。
52、Experience is the best teacher.经验是最好的教师。
53、Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it.世上无难事，只怕
有
心人。
54、Where there's a will, there's a way.有志者事竟成。
55、Practice makes perfect ．（熟能生巧。）
56、Pride goes before a fall．（骄傲必败。）
第四篇：高中英语作文技巧
关于英语作文，我先问一下，各位考试时候英语作文写什么样字体？回答肯定各种各样的，不过从今天起希望你们能够统一！不知道你们见没见过扫到计算机屏幕上面的英语作文？你们平时自认为很潇洒的字体放大了后是什么样你们自己可以想象一下，什么样的字在电脑上看最舒服，确定一定以及肯定的告诉你们，就是那种各位认为很幼稚的字体！就是刚学英语的孩子写的abcdefg,圆圆的胖胖的，很可爱的那种字体，而且千万要一个字母一个字母的写，不要连在一起！也就是说最好用标准园体。这样说吧，现在高考改卷，是把每一块分类用扫描仪扫描放到电脑里面。比如作文那一块，会被单独扫出来，放在电脑里以后，改卷的人看着投影仪上呈现出被放大了的段落，同时给出心里的分数，按下想给的分数。几个人的分数会根据系统判断，差别不大的话取平均值。差别大了，才会拉评分组组长来看。（依旧是被屏幕放大了的字）。所以，字写得好坏，一旦被放大，差别就不那么大了，最主要的是让改试卷的看得清爽，眼睛不累。同时注意的是，最好不要涂涂改改，不然看起来觉得很不舒服，很麻烦。只要注意卷面清爽，就可以了。
有一点需要大家知道，大家知不知道高考批卷老师是怎样批英语作文的？通读文章，找华丽的句子？找语法应用？挑错误？扣分，分等？打分？估计你们老师是这样告诉你们的。现在我告诉你实际情况！我们中国人相对于西方人有个特点，就是第一印象认定的事情不太愿意改！解释一下，拿到你的作文，批卷老师大概读一下，会在心中确立一个等级，一等是21分到25分，二等是16分到20分，三等是11分到15分......最要命的是，一旦老师心中确立了你的等级，就不愿意再更改了！也就是说，接下来细看你作文写得好坏，一般也只是在相应等级内变动了！换句话说，两篇作文第一篇老师大致看一下第一印象就把它归为一等文，接下来再细一点看，即使你错误稍稍多一些（当然不能多的离谱），他给你打了最低分也有21分。而第二篇作文老是拿到手大致看一眼归为二等文，然后细看，即使写得再怎么精彩一般也不会高于20分了。这没什么奇怪的，这是中国人的性格特点，换我们去批卷子很可能也这样！（我亲自问过一些批卷老师，信不信由你们）所以说，老师的一念之间，作文就会拉开等次！我们就要想尽一切办法给老师留下一等文的第一印象！（也就是一上来就要把老师唬住！）这样，作文的分数，一般只是在相应等级内变动了。
高考时电脑阅卷，斜体字老师看到的特别乱心，我亲自看过的！
: 英文的手写体本来就有点斜
: 我们老师让我们练斜体。我越写越烂能不能速度说方法啊
: 那是因为很多人写出来的斜体字都是l,f,s,w之类的是斜着的，而a,i,o这些字母却是正着写的，写得不好，自然就看起来乱了
: 各个字母饱满的程度不一也是很大的问题
同样，也先告诉大家先敲一个警钟！高考答题时，尽量别出现单词拼写错误，要是比较长的单词拼错了还好说，那种最简单的单词千万不要拼错！如果错了可能就不是扣分的问题，也许后果很严重！举个例子，假如sorry这个单词，对不起的意思，如果你考试时拼错了，写成了sarry，假如老师一下就发现你是单词拼写错误那还好办，对多给你多扣一分，但大家有没有想过，批卷老师批了那么多卷子，身心已经是非常疲惫了，突然一看见sarry这个单词，可能突然会愣住了，因为他不认识这个单词！然后老师仔细回忆这个单词是什么意思，突然他反应过来了，不是这个单词他不认识，而是你根本就拼错了！这时老师很可能会认为自己被耍了！带来的结果很可能就是把你的作文降等！（以上是我自己推断的，没问过批卷老师，不过你们可以设身处地的想一想，有没有这种可能！）所以说，最简单的单词，千万不要拼错！进入正题之前，先教你们几个当时我最喜欢我最喜欢用的装酷小技巧，: 错别字应控制在两个以内，尽量用熟悉的单词和短语
: 我们老师说的前几排千万别写错字 错了 分数很低的: 的确，基本的都错，就别说什么档次了。老师说过
: 改卷时根本不会注意到个别的拼写错误，除非开头就错了很多，一般也不会为个别小错降档的。
进入正题之前，先教你们几个当时我最喜欢我最喜欢用的装酷小技巧，首先就是very这个单词，以后不要再用了，弄哪个那，extraordinary！这个单词高中生会用的不多，不用掌握什么用法，就记住用very的地方都可以替换成这个，绝对比用very拉风！然后那，however这个单词不知道你们掌握得好不好，教大家一个玩赖的技巧，一个句子+逗号+however+另一个句子，这里面however是没有实际意义的，就是表转折，但你可以用这招把两个简单句捏在一块啊！短句子成长句了！第三个，however后面用不用逗号
第三个，就是把很简单的句子，用一点小技巧，改成比较无耻的倒装句！举个例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么说？i not
onle sing ,but also dance，改动一下，not only do i sing,but also dance.倒装句！（虽然简单且无耻，但谁敢说这不是倒装句？）此方法最适合倒装句掌握的不好的同学写出来骗批卷老师：大哥（姐）我会倒装句！
让文章与众不同，那些还远远不够！必须先从最简单的地方着手，让自己的文章与众不同，就像我前面说的能用very的地方都换成extraordinary，十个人九个用very而你用extraordinary，那你不就与众不同了吗！再给你们补充一些，重要的怎么说？important？这是土人用的！牛人用什么？牛人用significant！由于怎么说？as a result？土人！牛人用什么？牛人用as a consequence.所以怎么说？so？土人！牛人怎么说？牛人用therefore！（别看therefore这个单词简单，知道用它代替so的同学不多啊！）举个例子，I got up early，therefore i was late.类似的替换的单词很多，比如以后set这个单词不要用了，替换成establish。越来越好怎么说？ 土人也许会用better and better，牛人只用一个单词：enhance 造个句子 we need to enhance our English，就等于better and better。好怎么说？土人用good，比他们强一点的人也许会用great
: as a result 不是 因此的意思吗
: I got up early，therefore i was late.“early 不是早的意思吗？ 这句话不和逻辑。
: important 也可以用vital来取代~
: 惯性思维是用improve吧？
:有结果的意思啊„„= =因此和结果不是一样吗？？？= =
好怎么说？土人用good，比他们强一点的人也许会用great，wonderful，但牛人用什么？牛人用gorgeous，更牛的人用fabulous，简单的替换一下，水平立刻显现出不一样了。不想要怎么说？土人会用unwanted，牛人用unsatisfactory。改变怎么说？土人用change，牛人用transform。类似的替换技巧有很多，但由于时间太长了多数都忘了，你们自己也可以总结积累一下，不要做土人，做牛人！
买卖江湖:
作为一个初三党，来看看高考英语作文，本人英语作文也是很差。但是想问问楼主，这样的转换语法上毫无问题吗？是否会造成歧义呢？
牛人专用英语作文技巧贴！英语作文SO EASY.（持续更新中）
高考状元8以上的问题解决了，我们来说一下语法，从句。相信很多同学掌握的不是很好，我教大家一些简单的技巧？首先弄清句子的最主要成分是什么？主语加谓语。不管大家写多复杂的句子，一定记住不管写多复杂的句子，没有谓语动词不叫句子！接下来具体地说语法的技巧：
有一个很简单的从句，叫宾语从句，I think that......没有人不会用吧，不过我奉劝大家尽量别这么用，老师批10张卷子看到了8张里面有I think that不烦吗？如果一定要用宾语从句的话换一种说法：I have a thought that......别看只改动了一点，同位语从句！同样I hear that谁都会用吧，不过同样谁都会用所以我们不要用！厉害一些的人会用：It is reported that......不过真正的牛人用There is a piece of news that 同样的意思，但明显比I hear that要帅！还有一种从句叫定语从句很多人也愿意用，不过我建议大家不要用，因为其实在英语里，定语从句是种挺白痴的句子，没人说的！（你们看美国大片时发现过有人说定语从句吗？）不过如果大家非要用我教大家一个必杀！很少有人知道的！其实定语从句是可以并列排比的！这招凑字数最好使，写出来也挺酷的。
这招凑字数最好使，写出来也挺酷的。举个例子，我喜欢玩篮球，然后篮球有很多种特点，就可以把这些特点用定语从句的形式并列出来：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is.......其实在上千年前，我们的老祖宗就会这么用了，大家学过韩愈的师说吧，里面有句话：师者，所以传道授业解惑也。这就是个经典的定语从句，翻译过来就是teacher is a job who传道，who授业and who 解惑。这种定语从句你要是用出来绝对能吓批卷老师一跳！
还有种用法叫后置定语有人感觉挺难吧，其实记住个例子就行了，穿着比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini，变成a girls
wearing a bikini就行了，这就是后置定语，很简单吧
语法的问题不也解决了吗，接下来就教大家一些细节地方上的技巧，首先因为什么怎么说?because 绝大多数人都用这个单词，教大家一个很绝的用法，逗号+for 就可以代替because！举个例子，我总听李孝利的歌，因为我喜欢李孝利：I often hear the songs of 李孝利，for i love her 中间的逗号+for就相当于because，同样，掌握这个用法的同学不多！
: 可以引导原因状语从句：for表现的因果关系不像because那样强烈，它引导的原因状语从句并不说明主句行为发生的直接原因，只提供一些辅： He could not have seen me, for I was not there.他不可能见过我，因为我不在那里。俩不完全相同的: 瞎，for和because用法有些不同啊，上次用就被打错了
: a girl in bikini ,for = because ? 从没听说过。俺在美国6年了。
尽管怎么说？土人们although，而牛人用In spite of 举个例子，尽管你是女生你也不能欺负我！In spite of the fact that you are 女生，you can't 欺负 me！
时间状语大家掌握的都不错吧，一看到她妈妈，小女生一下就哭了，用when就是土人！直接写seeing her mother，zhe girl cried
还有首先是first吧，以后大家可以写first and foremost，和first一个意思，但看上去牛X的多，另外，用到这个用法时还可以用到一个简单的插入结构 主语，first and foremost，谓语这就是一个插入结构，我在前面还讲了一个however吧，这个单词放到句子中是没什么意义的，就是为了装酷！同样可以用到这：主语，however，谓语插入结构！
: zhe girl cried the
: 插入结构楼主能不能举个具体的句子例子
: zhe girl cried 是the吧
: 非谓语。新东方的老师说这是重点拉风语法啊
: in pite of，初二就有的东西也会拉风
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.其它的短语可以用：
besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
: 其实句子如果可以简短一点出错的几率就小点...像这句”not only the fur......“ 直接写”The fur coat is soft and warm."就行了
:他就是想麻烦，然后老师给高分
:只怕多写多错
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.其它的短语可以用：
besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walkoutoftheroom
有一个句式说：“„for the simple reason that„”表示某种现象的原因是什么。然而，很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“„because„”如果要表示“总是能够”的概念，很多同学提笔就会写can always，但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定，用never fail to。
注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn’t”这样的略缩形式，而是 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词；如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍
According to（根据）„„题目大意„„I believe that（我认为）„„你的观点
2.As far as we know（我们都知道）„„题目大意„„from my point of view(我认为)„„你的观点First（首先）„„second（其次）„„at last(最后)„„
First（首先）„„and then(然后)„„in conclusion（最后，总之）
As far as we know（我们都知道）„„moreover（而且，此外）„„
specially（特 别是）„„inconclusion（最后，总之）表并列：similarly同样的 / in the same way 以同样的方式表转折：however/but 但是
表对比：not that „but that„不是„而是„/ one hand„.on the other hand一方面„另一方面„/ unlike„与„不同/not so much„.as„与其„不如„
表目的：for the„„„.为了„
表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以
表例证：for example
例如
表假设：if 如果
表让步：although„虽然„„（注意：后不可接but！虽然但是不可这样连用）/of course 当然„/clearly„显然„all in all（总的来说）„„
by and large（总的来说）„„ +in my opinion（我认为）„„ no matter how（不管怎样）„„ on the whole（总的来说）
回复299楼！如果基础实在是太烂，原来只得个位数字的分数，有一个好办法最少能得13—14分。你只要做到如下两点：
1、卷面：写好你的每一个单词，先在费纸上打草稿，然后往答题纸上抄，抄的过程要字大（字母写的圆一点，不要斜着）行稀，并且上下对应工整，每行的单词数量固定，就像是在稿纸上那样对应，每一行八九个单词就恰到好处，然后把答题纸上的所有行都写满，最多空一行！（因为老师判卷子不会数单词数量的，老师认为你只要把所有空白地方写满就算单词够了，不然你写的密密麻麻，写的再多也算不够数量）2为了避免语法错误还有不会写单词，全部用简单句，一句话一句话的写，但要注意加几个短语，句中加几个Althouth.举例用for example最后一段开头用In a word总结等等„加几个短语就能提2～3分！以上内容只适合英语作文个位数的同鞋
相关过渡语
1).表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last„
2).表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side„
3).表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise„
4).表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus„
5).表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of„
6).表示并列关系: and, as well as, also„
7).表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude
接下来是替换篇，让一些常用的单词换种酷形式！牛人都必会的，坚决不做土人！
1．occur 替换 think of
Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.→
An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2．devote替换spend
He spends all his spare time in reading.→
He devotes all his spare time to reading.3．seek替换want / look for
They sought(wanted)to hide themselves behind the trees.4．average 替换ordinary
I’m an average(ordinary)student.5．but替换very
The film we saw last night was very interesting.→
The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring.6．seat 替换sit
On his way to school, he found an old lady seated(sitting)by the road, looking worried.7．suppose 替换should
He is supposed to(should)have driven more slowly.8．appreciate 替换thank
Thank you very much for you help.→
We appreciate your help very much./ Your help is much appreciated.9．the case替换 true I don’t think it is the case(true).10．on替换as soon as
As soon as he arrived, he began his research.→ On his arrival, he began his research..11．due to替换because of
He arrived late due to(because of)the storm.12．cover替换walk/read
After covering(walking)10 miles, we all felt tired.13．contribute to替换 be helpful/useful
Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.→
Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14．round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby
① The summer vacation is round the corner(coming).Do you have any plans?
② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner(nearby).15．come to light替换discover
The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels.→
The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16．have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself
After visiting the workshop, we went back to school.Every one of us had a ball(had a good time).17．come up with替换think of
Jack is very clever.He often comes up with(thinks of)new ideas.18．set aside替换save
Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.(2004天津卷)
19．be of + n.替换adj.The products are of high quality(very good)and are sold everywhere in China.20．refer to 替换talk about/of, mention
The professor you referred to(talked about)is very famous.21．can not but / can not help but替换have to do
I could not but(had to)go home.22．more often than not替换usually
More often than not(Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.23．lest替换so that /in order that
I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it.→
I wrote down his telephone number lest I(should)forget it.24．be long for sth./ be long to do sth.替换want to do sth./wish forI want to see you very much.→
I am long to see you.25．be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in He is caught up in(very interested in)collecting stamps
26．more than替换very
① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.→
I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help
27．perfect(ly)替换good/ very wellHe speaks perfect(good)English./ He speaks English perfectly(very well).28．do sb a/the favor 替换helpWould you please do me the favor(help me)to turn down the radio?
29．the other day替换a few days agoThe other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.30．in the course of替换duringIn the course of(During)the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31．the majority of替换most
32．consist of替换be made up ofOur class consists of(is made up of)50 students.33．be worn out替换 be tired / broken
① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out(tired).② My shoes are worn out(broken).Please buy me a new pair.34．become of替换 happenWhat do think has become of(happened to)him ?
35．attend to替换look after36．on condition that替换as long as37．nevertheless替换however
38．express one’s satisfaction with替换be satisfied with
41．be rushed off one’s feet 替换be busy in doing42．a handful of替换a little / some
43．meanwhile替换at the same time44．get to one’s feet替换stand up
45．beneath替换under46．occasionally替换sometimes /once in while
47．for instance替换for example48．seldom替换not often
49．wealthy替换 rich50．amazing替换surprising51．as a matter of fact 替换in fact
第五篇：作文开头技巧
高考作文开头技巧
1、开门见山法：
例：朱自清《背影》的开头:“我与父亲不相见已两年余了,我最不能忘记的是他的背影。”
2、巧用修辞法：最常见的是比喻和排比
例：2010年高考全国卷Ⅱ的优秀作文《浅阅读与深阅读》的开头：“茫茫书海之中，如果深阅读是大海，那么浅阅读只能是小溪；如果深阅读是蓝天，那么浅阅读只能是浮云；如果深阅读是草原，那么浅阅读只能是绿坪。”
3、引用开头法
例：2012大纲全国卷《放下顾虑》的开头：“我们之所以未能走得更远，是因为我们的肩上背负的顾虑太多。”于丹如是说。
4、故事开头法
例：大家都读过《渔夫和金鱼的故事》，渔夫的老婆贪得无厌，木盆变成金盆她不知足，草房子变成高楼大厦她不知足，她由一个乞丐似的老太婆变成了一个雍容华贵的皇后还不知足。最后，她的贪得无厌成了竹篮打水一场空，她又回到了一贫如洗的破房子中。从这个故事中可以看出，一个人的贪得无厌是多么的可怕和可憎。所以，在人生漫漫的征途中，人应该有知足心，知足者常乐。——《知足者常乐》
5、情景开头
例：2011四川卷《总有一种期待》的开头：“垂柳树下，难掩泪面，忍把浮名，换了浅吟低唱；汴京城外，挥手离别，仍念执手，眷念香衾绣被。”
6、疑问开头法
例：幸福是什么？杂交水稻之父袁隆平说：……常晒太阳，呼吸新鲜空气，有个好身体。”李白说：“安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜。”幸福并不需要德高望重，更不需要财大气粗。其实幸福很简单，追随你的梦想，做你想做的事情。——2011福建高考《幸福的意义》
素材
柴静辞职自己出资拍“穹顶之下”的中国
知名主持人柴静2015年从央视离职后的去向一度被关注和热议。今天，柴静的新作——大型空气污染深度公益调查《柴静雾霾调查:穹顶之下》首发，柴静也现身接受媒体专访。她透露，促使她展开调查的原因是，没出世的女儿便患有肿瘤，从一出生就接受手术，“在照顾她过程中，对雾霾的感受变得越来越强烈”。
《穹顶之下》全片103分钟，柴静走访多个污染现场寻找雾霾根源，并多国实地拍摄治污经验。这次关于雾霾的调查，被认为“是非机构、非记者所做的信源最权威、信息最立体、视野最开阔、手段最丰富、最有行动感的雾霾调查”。在此前的交流现场，柴静综合运用当众演讲、现场演示、视频展示和网络传播这四大手段，剖析了给中国带来严重大气污染的燃煤和燃油存在的四大问题。
为了完成这个难度不小的调查，柴静奔波于中国、美国、英国，还亲自上手和同伴一起拍摄、编辑视频，更为关键的是这次调查花的都是她自己的钱。告别央视后，选择这一题材让众人惊诧，谈及初衷，柴静说：“这不是一个计划中的作品，当时因为孩子生病，我辞职后打算用相当的一段时间陪伴她，照顾她，所以谢绝了一切工作邀请。照顾她过程中，对雾霾的感受变得越来越强烈”。
“这是我和雾霾之间的私人恩怨。”公开演讲中，柴静还首次爆出，她没出世的女儿患有肿瘤，从一出生就接受手术，目前已经痊愈。但害怕女儿有一天会问“什么是蓝天”、“为什么老把我关在家里”，因而启动了雾霾调查。柴静称，自己怀孕前从不戴口罩，女儿出生后每遭遇雾霾天却连孩子笑一下都担心吸进太多PM2.5，她担心孩子生活在污染的空气中，输在起跑线上。
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