2017高中英语作文高分技巧

第一篇：2017高中英语作文高分技巧

2017高考英语作文

一、全国卷《考试说明》对书面表达的要求

1.准确使用语法和词汇

2.使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思 【高考作文评分标准/高考作文评分原则-总则】 1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3.词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

7.内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

二、全国卷“五档”作文

1.各个档次的给分范围及标准(满分25分)

A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

B.第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。

C.第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

D.第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

E.第一档(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。

F.不得分：(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

2.“五档”作文如何抓——培养能力

⑴抓“应用了较多的词汇”:词性多样、词汇高级、短语丰富。

⑵抓“应用了较多的语法结构”:高中阶段主要有感叹句、倒装句、复合句、强调句、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with/without复合结构等。

⑶抓“有效使用连接成分”:合理使用连词、连接副词等，使段与段、句与句之间形成明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，做到文意与结构上层次分明、条理清楚。

⑷抓“完成规定的任务”:对于题干、要点提示、注意事项以及参考词汇要做好全面读题，定好时态、人称、文体等，确保完成规定任务。

三、高考作文如何升

1.运用四大原则

⑴具体性原则在掌握了一定词汇量后，具体的表达往往比泛泛而谈更能吸引阅卷老师的眼光。eg:He is a good man.→He is a kind-hearted/friendly man.⑵新颖性原则写作时如果能恰当运用高中学过的但别人可能想不到的词汇，必能给阅卷老师带来耳目一新的感觉。eg:A good relationship between teachers and students is good for our study.→A good relationship between teachers and students is beneficial to our study.⑶短语优先原则多使用词组、习语代替一些同义或近义单词。

eg:As the number of Chinese learners is increasing,Chinese culture will be more popular.→As the number of Chinese learners is on the rise,Chinese culture will be more popular.⑷多样化原则在一篇作文中尽量避免过多地重复使用某一词汇，要使用多种词汇表达同一意思。eg:I like watching TV while my brother likes reading.→I like watching TV while my brotherenjoys reading.2.利用高级词汇，照亮阅卷人眼

现总结10例由普通词汇向高分词汇的转化: ① first→to begin/start with首先 ②finally→last but not least最后 ③course→curriculum课程

④hard-working→diligent勤奋的 ⑤shortcoming→drawback缺点 ⑥difficult→painstaking艰难的 ⑦immediately→in a flash立即

⑧interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing有趣的 ⑨be sad→be cast down伤心

⑩think→take the attitude that/harbor the idea that认为 3.频变句型结构，增强得分支撑

⑴肯定不如双否好eg:The postman comes on time every Sunday.→The postman never fails to come every Sunday.⑵陈述不如倒装妙 ①以否定词开头，使用部分倒装eg:I will never give up.→Never will I give up.【归纳】常见的否定词（组）:not,never,seldom,hardly,little,no sooner,in no case,at no time,by no means,in no way,in no sense,on no account,under no circumstance等。

②以地点状语开头，使用完全倒装eg:The library is in the center of our school.→In the center of our school lies the library.③“only+状语”位于句首，使用部分倒装eg:Only in this way can I make progress.④as/though引导的倒装句eg:Much as he enjoys it,he doesn't want to buy it.⑶主动不如被动巧多使用被动语态，能使表达更地道，更接地气。

eg:We can borrow at most five books at a time,and we can keep them for six days.→At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for six days.⑷非谓语结构不能少在平时，考生应多背一些好词好句。特别是含有非谓语结构的句子，在语境中理解它们的用法，只有这样，写作时才能得心应手。同时，在平时的训练中，考生也应大胆使用非谓语结构，以提高熟练度。

第二篇：高中英语作文高分技巧

高中英语作文高分技巧 一，写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。

2.一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。

3.句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。

一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。

1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如： 并列关系：and, as well as, also…

递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more…

转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite，instead of, in the end…

时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as …

比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand…

总结 in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking…

进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as …

因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore…

2)明确表达文章主题，内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。3)要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。4)注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查：

a, 要点有无遗漏；

b.句法、词法有没有问题；

c.单词拼写有无错误； d.大小写、标点符号有无问题；

e.字数是否在题目要求范围之内。

二、高考英语写作高分秘诀 1．句式要有变化

① 复杂句、并列句

② 倒装句

（1）虚拟语气中if省略；

（2）only+状语置于句首

（3）否定词置于句首

（4）地点副词置于句首

③ 强调句型

It is ……that(who)…

④ 非谓语动词。

⑤ 虚拟语气

⑥ 固定句型结构

too…to…

so…that…

such a…that…

not only…but also…

neither…nor…

such as…

not …until…

so that…

either…or…

⑦直接引语与间接引语

多种时态，动名词、不定式，并列结构 2．要使用高等级词汇及短语 ① 使用高等级词汇

② 使用短语

③ 使用谚语

④ 使用表强调的词，如alone, just, single, only, not…at all;on the earth;the very;

on earth等

⑤ 使用修辞手法:明喻，暗喻，夸张，头韵，拟人等

as busy as a bee;

as proud as a peacock;

as blind as a bat.3.使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成。

1）用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

above

before me

here

on the left across

below

in the distance

on the right beyond

nearby

opposite to

over also

further

next to

on top of up

down

close to

beneath under

around

near to

along 2)用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

soon, then, suddenly，at the same time，next, early，this morning /year，now，after，at present，later，afterwards finally，at last, all of a sudden , at noon ，in the morning/afternoon/evening

3)用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

first, second, etc.now

for this purpose

but

as a result

furthermore

finally

at last

moreover

also

therefore

likewise

another

for example

next

yet

for instance

on the contrary

once

in addition

in summary

such

in this case

on the other hand

then

otherwise

in conclusion

thus

in closing 4)用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

another

moreover

in addition(to)

equally important，too，also，at the same time，besides，then，in the same way, in fact

like，similarly

5)用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有： on the contrary, different from, on the other hand，in contrast to，despite，in spite of, yet, but

unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also，here…there, this…that, years ago…today，the former…the latter, then…now，the first…whereas the second ，some…others，one…the other

once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面…另一方面)6)逻辑关系

递进: then(然后)，besides(还有)，furthermore(而且)，moreover(此外)转折: however(然而)，but(但是)，on the country(相反)，after all(毕竟)总结: finally(最后)，at last(最后)，in brief(总之)，in conclusion(最后)。强调: indeed(确实)，certainly(一定)，surely(确定)，above all(尤其)。对比: in the same way(同样地)，just as(正如)，on the one hand…on the other hand

第三篇：大同高中英语培训班：高中英语作文高分技巧（定稿）

大同高中英语培训机构：高中英语作文高分技巧

任何一种语言的学习都是分为不同阶段的，英语学习同样如此。步入高中之后我们会发现，英语学习难度有所增加，对我们英语综合掌握能力有了更高水平的要求，从写作这一部分就可以看出来。为了帮助大家提高写作能力，下面就由译林培森大同高中英语培训机构的老师为大家介绍一下高中英语作文高分技巧。

首先，要扩大自己的词汇量，避免文章中多次重复出现同一单词。

我们试想一下，如果一篇文章当中有大量的词汇都是重复的，读起来肯定是单调乏味的。想要避免出现这一问题，我们首先要做的就是扩大自己的词汇量。英语学习离不开单词，任何一篇文章都是由单词所组成的，所以大同高中英语培训机构的老师建议同学们为自己制定一个合理的单词背诵计划，在背诵的时候要懂得掌握方法，可以把意思相同或相近的词汇放在一起进行背诵，这样我们在写作的时候就可以用不同的词汇来表达同一个意思，自然为文章加分不少。

其次，要合理安排文章结构，不要出现杂乱无章的情况。

有不少同学在动手写文章的时候脑子里都没有清晰的思路，总是想起一句写一句，也就是我们常说的“东一榔头西一棒”，这样的文章给人的感觉就是东拼西凑，不像一篇完整的文章。大同高中英语培训机构的老师建议同学们，想要克服这一难题，最好的办法就是在动手写之前列提纲，明确自己文章的主旨是什么，结构要如何安排，每一段要表达什么，这样在动手写的时候思路就会很清楚，写出的文章自然也就条例清晰、逻辑明确。最后，在细节部分要多加注意，不要因小失大。

我们常说“细节决定成败”，这个道理同样适用于我们写文章的时候。大同高中英语培训机构的老师建议同学们，在写文章的时候一定要在细节部分多加注意，认真审题，看清题目要求，比如字数要求，文章体裁要求等等，还要在单词拼写、时态、句法等方面多加注意，不要因为小问题而丢分。

以上就是大同高中英语培训机构的老师为大家介绍的高中英语作文高分技巧，希望可以帮到大家。想要写一篇优秀的文章，需要大家在平时多加练习，只有付出努力，才会有收获。

第四篇：高中英语高分

大作文（1）

（一）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

CCTV.com News: The rescue was still going on at the small town after the terrible earthquake in Wenchuan, Sichuan Province, West China.The rescue teamers made their efforts to rescue the victims buried in the ruins.They found four school kids were under a teacher's desk and the teacher placed himself to the side of the desk without boards, protecting his students from harm.When the firefighters tried to take the teacher's hands away, they failed.., the teacher held the desk terribly firmly.Everyone on the spot cried.The teacher would rather give his life to protect his school kidsand give the living chances to them.Everyone has the right to live, but the teacher chose to give the living chances to his lovely students.[写作内容]你的英语老师在上英语写作课时，要求同学们根据老师提供的英语新闻报道，谈谈对四川汶川地震的一些人与事的感想。请你以“Greatest Love is Unselfish”为题，准备一篇发言稿，内容包括以下内容：

1．以约30个词概括这篇新闻报道；

2．以约120个词，请就“大爱无私”的话题写一篇英语短文，表达你内心的感受，并包括如下要点：

1)你看完这个故事后，你如何评价这位老师的无私行为；为什么?

2)你的感想。

[写作要求]1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；标题自定。2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。Greatest Love is Unselfish

During Wenchuan Earthquake in Sichuan Province, a rescue team found a teacher, dead for hours, and four school kids, safe with the protection of the teacher.And the teacher's greatest love gave everyone a great shock.A very ordinary teacher would rather give his life to save and protect his students, for he knew that he was a teacher and should protect his students, As we know, when the disaster broke out, all the teachers in this earthquake area made their efforts to help and save their students, and this noble act shows that greatest love is unselfish.Facing natural disasters, sometimes we human beings may feel too weak, but just at this very moment, we will try everything to help others, even devote our lives to doing that.After reading the news story, I was moved to tears.Greatest love is unselfish.The teacher's action illustrates our kind teachers' greatest love to their students.大作文（2）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

We nowadays live in a global village, and many difficulties will arise if we can't express ourselves fluently in English.In spite of my awareness of its importance, I seldom find chances to practice and improve my oral English.So, I am still very weak with regard to this respect.One reason is that my pronunciation and intonation aren't good enough.The other is that I am so shy that I am always too nervous to find the exact words to express my ideas and feelings.As a result the best way for me to do is to remain silent when others are practicing and making great progress in their oral English every day.Now I am attaching much more importance to oral English and I have made up my mind

to seize every opportunity to practice.I begin to participate actively in all kinds of English activities, such as going to “English Corners”, talking in English with my classmates and with native speakers.“Nothing is difficult in the world if you really put your heart to it.” as the Chinese saying goes.If I can build up my confidence, if I am not afraid of losing face any more, if I really work hard on it, I am sure my oral English will be excellent someday.[写作内容]1．以约30个词概括短文的要点：

2．然后以120个词写一篇英语短文谈谈广东高考英语口试对你英语口语练习造成的影响，并包括如下要点：

1)你以前对英语口语的态度及原因；

2)广东高考英语口试对你目前英语口语练习造成的某些影响；

3)你的感想或期望。

[写作要求]1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；标题自定。2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。Living in a “global village”, the writer finds it important to practice oral English and he has paid more attention to it and is determined to get more chances to practice it.To be honest, I used to care less about spoken English, just resulting from the fact that spoken English was not so important as written English since it was not needed in the college entrance examination.However, everything has been changed since there was a oral English Test in Guangdong college entrance examination.Every morning, I have to get up early to practice my oral English, which in dead helps me to remember words more easily than before.In addition, I feel less shy to speak out in class when answering questions in English.Luckily, it is oral English Test that helps me to learn English better, making me feel confident in learning English.Meanwhile, I do hope that I will do well in oral English as well as college entrance examination.Only then, will my life be more hopeful, more wonderful, even more colorful.

第五篇：高中英语作文高分诀窍

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高考英语作文高分诀窍

一．高级词汇

1．occur 替换 think of

Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.→

An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2．devote替换spend

He spends all his spare time in reading.→

He devotes all his spare time to reading.3．seek替换want / look for

They sought(wanted)to hide themselves behind the trees.4．average 替换ordinary

I’m an average(ordinary)student.5．but替换very

The film we saw last night was very interesting.→

The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring.6．seat 替换sit

On his way to school, he found an old lady seated(sitting)by the road, looking worried.7．suppose 替换should

He is supposed to(should)have driven more slowly.8．appreciate 替换thank

Thank you very much for you help.→

We appreciate your help very much./ Your help is much appreciated.9．the case替换 true

I don’t think it is the case(true).10．on替换as soon as

As soon as he arrived, he began his research.→

On his arrival, he began his research..11．due to替换because of

He arrived late due to(because of)the storm.12．cover替换walk/read

After covering(walking)10 miles, we all felt tired.13．contribute to替换be helpful/useful

Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.→

Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14．round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby

① The summer vacation is round the corner(coming).Do you have any plans?

② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner(nearby).15．come to light替换discover

The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels.→

The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16．have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself

After visiting the workshop, we went back to school.Every one of us had a ball(had a good time).17．come up with替换think of

Jack is very clever.He often comes up with(thinks of)new ideas.18．set aside替换save

Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.(2004天津卷)

19．be of + n.替换adj.The products are of high quality(very good)and are sold everywhere in China.20．refer to替换talk about/of, mention

The professor you referred to(talked about)is very famous.21．can not but / can not help but替换have to do

I could not but(had to)go home.22．more often than not替换usually

More often than not(Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.23．lest替换so that /in order that

I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it.→I wrote down his telephone number lest I(should)forget it.24．be long for sth./ be long to do sth.替换want to do sth./wish forI want to see you very much.→I am long to see you.25．be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in

He is caught up in(very interested in)collecting stamps.26．more than替换very① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.→

I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.(NMET 2003)② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.(2004全国卷)27．perfect(ly)替换good/ very well

He speaks perfect(good)English./ He speaks English perfectly(very well).28．do sb a/the favor 替换help

Would you please do me the favor(help me)to turn down the radio? 29．the other day替换a few days ago

The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.(NMET 1997)30．in the course of替换during

In the course of(During)the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31．the majority of替换most

The majority of(Most of)the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.32．consist of替换be made up of

Our class consists of(is made up of)50 students.33．be worn out替换 be tired / broken① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out(tired).② My shoes are worn out(broken).Please buy me a new pair.34．become of替换 happen

What do think has become of(happened to)him ?35．attend to替换look after

36．on condition that替换as long as 37．nevertheless替换however

38．express one’s satisfaction with替换be satisfied with39．spare no efforts to do替换try one’s best to do 40．many a 替换many

41．be rushed off one’s feet替换be busy in doing 42．a handful of替换a little / some 43．meanwhile替换at the same time 44．get to one’s feet替换stand up45．beneath替换under

46．occasionally替换sometimes /once in while 47．for instance替换for example 48．seldom替换not often 49．wealthy替换 rich

50．amazing替换surprising

51．as a matter of fact 替换in fact 二．高级句型结构 ◆ It句型① It will be + some time + before…

It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.（2008年湖北卷）③ It is + 被强调部分 + that…

1)It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2)Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.◆ more …than any other 表示最高级

Among the optional courses, spoken English and computer study are more popular than

any one else.◆ 名词从句

① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in 全国卷 Ⅲ)②◆（非限制性）定语从句① The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,② It was quite an experience for us both,(2002 北京卷)◆ 分词结构

① I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing ② We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting 全国卷Ⅱ)③ Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.（2004 辽宁卷）

④ Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.（2008年湖南

卷）

◆ with结构① A terrible accident happened yesterday,② ◆ 倒装句 ① The library is to the east of the teaching building.→② Although we are tired, we are happy.→③上海卷)

④ May all your dreams come true!May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!（2007年湖南卷）◆ 被动语态① Opinions are divided on the question.(NMET 2002)

② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.(2004全国卷 Ⅳ)③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.(2004 江苏卷)◆ 巧妙的改写

（1）．Only 改成no one but

Only Tom passed the exam last week.→ No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）．as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/The

moment No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.（3）．have sb/sth do/done

The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken(her leg was broken.).（4）．变换插入语的位置① However, they suggest fees should be charged low.→

They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.(NMET 2002)② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well

you’ve learned Chinese.→

This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well

you’ve learned Chinese.(2004 全国卷Ⅰ)(5).用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several

days.→

Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.(2002上海卷)

Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.（2008年湖南卷）

◆ 其它

（1）注重句子的开头① 用with复合结构开头

With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems.（2006年湖南卷）

With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.（2009年江苏卷）

② 用非谓语动词形式开头ⅰ）In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.ⅱ）Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.（2）长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）

◆◆ 相关过渡语

1).表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last… 2).表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…

3).表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise…

4).表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus…

5).表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore,in addition, on top of…

6).表示并列关系: and, as well as, also…

7).表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief,to conclude…

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