第一篇：英语四级写作,要注意这几点才能得高分
英语四级写作，要注意这几点才能得高分
很多筒子都是越到考前他越浪，完全不care英语四级这回事啊。完全是“他强由他强，清风拂山岗”一副淡定的样子，但是等到考试的英语四级考试的前两天还是坐不住了。早知今日何必当初啊，好好复习不好吗？何况一个月也不算久啊，高分通关英语四级对你没有吸引力？
很多筒子反映自己写作的时候要不就是无话可说，要不就是写的文章太粗制滥造。所以今天主要给大家分享一下，英语四级写作如何才能得高分。
有两个问题需要解决： 1.写作时无话可说
这是因为同学们自己在平时的复习中对写作没有引起足够的关注，对素材积累的不够。练习太少，不知道写作其实也是有套路的。
2.如何提升写作水平
还有很多同学，在一篇120字的作文中，有一多半的词汇句式都是用来充字数的，这样的作品当然是得不了高分的。
那么，英语四级写作水平到底该如何提升呢？
首先，要恶补基础。在这里也给众多基础薄弱的考生推荐一本恶补基础的英语四级真题资料书——巨微英语《四级真题/逐句精解》，这本书对近几年的英语四级真题文章都进行了逐字逐句的解析：对简单句用文字说明的方式指出句子的语法构造，清晰明了；对长难句采用图解+文字的方法拆分句子的语法结构，解读每个语法成分。
它还详细注释了真题文章中的核心词汇，包含词汇的释义，用法、派生词、例句等。
有了这本《四级真题/逐句精解》，大家就能一次性突破词汇和语法这两大障碍，为写作奠定基础。
其次，在写作方面大家要注意这几点：
1.文意切题。切题是决定一篇作文是否合格的根本，所以写作时，文章主题一定要紧扣命题点或图画寓意来写，段落布局也要切合主题，从而确保内容准确。
2.结构清晰。一般而言，英语四级写作主要有三步，第一段提出问题、点明主题或描述图画；第二段分析问题、论述主题或揭示图画寓意；第三段解决问题、给出评论或发出吁请。考生可利用考前的几十天，集中训练，进行专项提高。
3.语言流畅。写作中的语言表达至关重要，它与结构布局相辅相成，缺一不可。考生可利用考前的几十天，熟记一些经典或万能句型、名人名言及亮点词汇等。
巨微英语《四级真题/逐句精解》一书中也总结了关于写作的技巧和英语四级预测作文20篇，帮助大家高效地提升英语四级写作能力！
第二篇：成人高考英语写作七个得高分原则
2011年成人高考英语写作七个得高分原则
[2011-8-16 16:10:10] 来源：环球网校 作者：
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一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
As a creature，I eat;as a man，I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind，they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事!
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with，you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句)。Without sufficient preparation，you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first，second，third，last(不推荐，原因：俗)
2)firstly，secondly，thirdly，finally(不推荐，原因：俗)
3)the first，the second，the third，the last(不推荐，原因：俗)
4)in the first place，in the second place，in the third place，lastly(不推荐，原因：俗)
5)to begin with，then，furthermore，finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with，next，in addition，finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost，besides，last but not least(强烈推荐)8)most important of all，moreover，finally
9)on the one hand，on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing，for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如：
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩!
六、多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and，但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Not only the fur coat is soft，but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用：
besides，furthermore，likewise，moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old，yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin，but it was warm.更多的短语：
despite that，still，however，nevertheless，in spite of，despite，notwithstanding
3)因果(so，so，so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall，so we went home.更多短语：
then，therefore，consequently，accordingly，hence，as a result，for this，reason，so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。
举例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：
When to go，Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他;或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don„t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu，our oral English teacher，is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语——要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional，sophisticated or simple，there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays，energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil，coal，natural gas，solar heat，the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard，to enlarge our scope of knowledge，to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑战极限原则
既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀!
原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：
The weather being fine，a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent，its size being about three times that of China.如果您可写出这样的句子，不得高分才怪!
成教信息：成人高考英语语法的15个常考点
[2011-8-12 17:37:49]
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一、动词时态及语态题（大家应该记住我所讲过的九种时态，特别是其中的过去完成，过去进行时，客观真理要用一般现在时等）
1、The manager told us that this factory was built in 1958.2、By the time we got there，the play had already begun.3、When I was a child，I knew that the earth turns about its axis.4、When Mr.Delay got home after a day's exhausting work，his wife and children were sleeping.二、非谓语动词题（特别是现在分词与过时分词的区别，大家一定要弄明白主动与被动这对最最重要的区别，要求大家多看我的上课笔记）
1、The film showed last night was very moving.（不用moved，大家别忘了-ed形容词和-ing形容词的区别）
2、Having finishing his lecture，the teacher asked if anyone wished to asked a question.3、The problem being discussed is very important.4、Given more time，we are sure to finish it.5、Will you please make yourself known to everyone here
三、It作形式主语及形式宾语题（这也是一个常考点，it本身是没有意思的，注意it还可以指时间，天气等。）
1、It is difficult to study English well.2、We think it is important to pass the exam.四、强调句型（大家要记住的是it is（was）……。that…。，如果前面是it iswas 后面往往选用that，当然强调人的时候也可用who）
1、It was at an evening party that I first saw her.2、It is what you will do that is important.3、When was it that he bought a new car
五、倒装句型
全部倒装句（这种全部倒装题历年只考过一次，考得最多的都是下面的部分倒装）
1、Stop talking！There comes the teacher.部分倒装句（如果选项里面有两个主谓倒装了，两个没有，我们一般要在倒装里做选择）
1、So badly was he hurt in the accident that he had to be sent to hospital.2、Not only does he study well，but also he is always ready to help others.3、Mary has done well in the English exam.So she has.She always does well in the exam.六、从句中选择关系词题（重点在定语从句，多看笔记，becausesincenow thatasfor； so…that…such… that…）
1、It was in so friendly a way that he talked with us.2、Oct.15，2005 is a day when we will take our English examination.3、We want to buy the same book as you are reading.4、The sun heats the earth，which is very important to living things.七、虚拟语气（我们要记住与现在，过去，将来相反的三种情况，特别是与过去相反的情况最常考，再有就是wishas if 后面所接的三种情况，还有一个常考点在suggest，demand，require，order等表示建议，要求，命令的词后面加从句时，从句里谓语要用（should）+动词原形，如果是被动则用（should +be +动词过去分词）
1、I would have done it better if I had had more time.2、I wish you would go with us tomorrow.3、I suggest that we（should）adopt a different policy.4、Had it not been for your help，we would never have been able to get over the difficulties.八、情态动词题（除了掌握常见情态动词基本用法外，常考点在三种表推测的情况，分别为must表对现在事情的肯定推测，can't表对现在事实的否定推测，must have +v-ed表示对过去事实的肯定推测，而则表示过去应该做某事而没有做）
1、The ground is so wet，it must have rained last night.2、She must be a doctor，I think.3、I should have called you last week，but I was too busy then.九、几组形容词及副词区别题（注意比较级、最高级、倍数表达； likelypossibleprobable； worthworthy； too muchmuch too； alreadyyet等）
1、His books are three time as many as my books.2、The Nile river is the longest river in the world.3、It is much too hot tonight.4、The harder he worked，the happier he felt.十、主谓一致题（往往出题者都是考谓语动词选单数这种情况，如each，every，everyone这样的词作主语以及Mary，like many other girls likes listening to music这样的题）
1、The moral of the officers and crew was very high.2、Each boy and each girl in the city is asked to go to school.3、Neither the quality nor the prices have changed.（近位原则）
十一、动词及动词词组区别题（常考的有raiserisearisearose； spendcosttakepayafford； woundinjurehurtdamage； findfindoutdiscoverinvent； hitstrikeringbeat； tellsayspeaktalk； joinjoin intake part in等以及我所讲过的动词短语）
1、Can you tell the difference between these two words
2、He joined the army three years ago.十二、主句用将来时，从句则用一般现在时（或现在完成时）表将来题
1、They will leave the classroom when they have finished writing.2、We will start to work as soon as our teacher comes.十三、名词所有格以及名词后面有限定时则该名词前一定要加定冠词the题（名词的格有以下两种情况，Tom'book，以及 the books of our school，特别是用of表示的所有格我们一定要习惯这种表达）
1、Beijing is the capital of China.2、He can't have the expience of all of the world.十四、常用介词区别题（如on，in，except besides，within，without，through等）
1、You should write in ink not with your pencil.2、He pulled her into the train by the arm.3、by bustrainair…。On foot，on the farm，in the morningafternoonevening，at nightnoon
十五、常考代词题（常考的有otherothers，anotherthe other； sometimessome timesometime； thatwhich； thatwhat，eitherneitheror； tooalsoeither； manymucha great deal ofa great number ofa great amount of； a fewfewlittlea little； as long asas far as； so long asso far as）
1、That you don't like him is none of my business.2、The weather in the north is much colder than that in the south in January.3、He must be a worker.I think so.
第三篇：2014年英语四级写作高分替换词
2014年英语四级写作高分替换词
2014年的英语四级考试就要来了，下面给同学们提供了英语四级写作中常用词的替换词，让你的作文不在平庸。大家抓紧时间记忆吧。
1)大多数人 most people→ the majority of the population
2)经常 often→frequently
3)我相信 I believe→ from my standpoint, from my perspective
4)必须 must→ it is a must for us to…
5)知道 know→ be aware of
6)因为 because→in that
7)最后 at last→eventually
8)然而 but→however
9)如果 if→provided that
10)各行各业的人 all kinds of people→people from all walks of life
11)引起，导致 lead to→contribute to
12)人 people→individuals
13)好的 good→desirable, benefitial
14)坏的 bad→undesirable
15)很多many→ numerous
16)越来越more and more→ a increasing/mounting number of
17)很very→extremely
18)方面side→aspects
19)表明 show→demonstrate, indicate
20)利用 use→utilize
21)因此/结果so→therefore
22)部分 part→proportion
23)提高 improve→enhance
24)改变 change→transform
25)强调/重视 emphasize→ attach great importance to
26)培养 develop→cultivate
27)破坏 destroy→undermine
28)解决 deal with →tackle /figure out
29)普遍的 everywhere→universal
30)明显的obvious→apparent
31)在当今社会in the modern society→in the current society
32)使 make→enable
第四篇：英语四级写作高分必备闪光点句型（范文）
2009年12月英语四级写作高分必备闪光点句型
一、“闪光点”
1)主语从句
Why he would reject such a good offer remained unknown all these years.Whether we can succeed or not depends upon our efforts.What you have done for us will be in our memory forever.It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that„
It is self-evident that„
It goes without saying that„
It is universally acknowledged that„
2)宾语从句
They believe that the central government’s decision to develop the western part of the country and the success of Beijing’s bid to host the 2008 Olympics will open up further opportunities for the country’s development.We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.Experience from foreign countries suggests that no aircraft manufacturers can survive depending only on their domestic market.3)表语从句
This is where she lived when she was young.Quality is what counts most.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.What we want to know is whether the government may take measures to tackle this problem.The question is which one you may choose.4)定语从句(限定性和非限定性)
As is shown/demonstrated/illustrated/depicted/described„in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table„，There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of yuan is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.The food supply will not increase nearly enough to match this, which means that we are heading into a crisis in the matter of producing and marketing food.5)状语从句(时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.Although we focus on the needs of exceptional children, we find ourselves describing their environment as well.6)分词短语做定语或状语
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.Coupled with the growing quantity of information is the development of technologies which enable the storage and delivery of more information with greater speed to more locations than has ever been possible before.7)强调句
It was him who gave us much hope for the future.8)倒装句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.9)省略句
If so, we have to give it up.If necessary„
Whatever the reason„
10)What句型
We totally agree with what you have just said.11)设问句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
12)被动句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that„(It is believed that„)The government and the public should pay enough attention to„(Enough attention should be paid to„from both the government and the public.)
二.提高
1.The above mentioned issue results from the following factors./ Many factors are responsible for the problem.To begin with, ________.What’s more, _________.Last but not the least, ____________.2.There is no doubt that____________.„
No one can deny that____________.„ It goes without saying that____________.„
3.When it comes to the issue, different people have different opinions.4.Just as any coin has two sides.I believe there is some truth to both.If I am allowed to make a decision, I prefer _____ to _______ because _______.5.sth.is an indispensable part of sth.6.People can not imagine the world without_______./ People can not imagine what the world would be like without_______.7.In my view, we have to think carefully before we make the decision to _____.Question1 ? Question2 ? These questions need to be answered before we make the final decision.8.in all walks of life
9.As an old saying goes，10.Instead of doing sth, we should.„rather than
11.It is true that„, but„ eg.It is true that we can’t do anything without money, but money is not everything.12.attach great importance to sth.13.„ is a hot issue
14.satisfy/meet one’s needs and desires
15.sth.benefit sb.= sth.do good to sb.sb.benefit from sth.sb.receive benefit from/by sth.sth/it.is beneficial to sth./sb.16.try every means to do sth./strive to do sth.17.sb.do sth., while sb.others do sth.else
18.it is supposed to do sth.英语写作：英语四六级考试写作必背的35句型
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V...(不可否认的...)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~(毫无疑问的...)
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(produce)any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此...以致于...)
例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~(虽然...)
例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~(借着...，..能够..)
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(..使..能够..)
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我们绝对不能...)
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式(该是...的时候了)
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~(...的人...)
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~(没有人不...)
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不...)
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子(明显的)
It is apparent that + 句子(显然的)
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是...的原因)
例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don't like it.夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来，...一直...)
例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~(...是值得的。)
例句：It pays to help others.帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on(以...为基础)
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遗余力的)
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事(让...明白...事)
例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~(与...息息相关)
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving
= make it a rule to + V(养成...的习惯)
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因为...)
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。
三
十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!
= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!三
十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不满意)
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三
十二、Have a great influence on ~~~(对...有很大的影响)
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三
十三、do good to(对...有益)，do harm to(对...有害)
例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三
十四、Pose a great threat to ~~(对...造成一大威胁)
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三
十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best(尽全力去...)
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
第五篇：英语四级作文得高分技巧及分析
四级作文高分策略 一、四级作文亲密接触 1． 评分：作文部分在整个四级卷面（满分为 100 分）中占 15
分。国家教委明确规定，从 1997 年 6 月起，四级考试中，如果 学生作文得零分，那么即使前面得了满分（即 85 分），其总成 绩仍将视为不及格。作文不够 6 分则实行倒扣分。2． 文体：纵观历年来的考题，我们不难发现议论文占据着七成
以上的比例，近几年还常常是以较为实用的形式出现，如书信、演讲稿、导游解说词或图表分析的形式出现。例如，2004 年 6 月 19 日大学英语四级作文题目为 A brief introduction to a tourist attraction；2005 年 1 月的题目为竞选学生会主席演 说；2003 年 6 月 CET 作文题目为 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident：假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就 此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：
1、车祸发生的时间 及地点；
2、你所见到的车祸情况；
3、你对车祸原因的分析。2001 年 6 月题目为 A Letter to a Schoolmate, 提纲： 对来
1、访的同学表示欢迎；
2、提出对度假安排的建议；
3、提醒应注意 的事项； 2002 年 1 月题目要求给校长写一信，就食堂的状况写一 信。从以上今年的出题趋势可以看出，四级作文对应用文的格式 还没有更严格的要求，但对实际生活中的应用能力，已经提出了 要求。很显然，现在的四、六级考试作文有些向考研英语的作文
考查方式转化。也就是说，四、六级作文也开始注重考生观察问 题、分析问题和解决问题的能力，当然还有用英语思维的能力。值得注意的是，但是从近些年看，四级作文往往不是单一的议 论文体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如： １.做合格大学生的必要性 ２.做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）３.我计划这样做 很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“„„必要 性”，这说明本段体裁是议论文；
第二段要求写“„„必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；儿 地三段要求写“„„这样做”，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以 在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。仅仅学会写议论文是不够的，近两年四级考试加大了应用文和记叙 文的考查力度，这就要求考生在熟悉议论文的基础之上加强应用文和 记叙文的训练。应用文主要考写信，考生必须明确写信的基本格式以 及写信的流程： 1.尊敬语气先开头； 2.开门见山说意图； 3.咨询建议一二三； 4.感谢客气不可少。
常用的客套话必须熟记： 1.It is with the greatest pleasure that I write th is letter to„ 2.We will be very glad if you can take our suggest ion into consideration.3． 命题形式：接下来谈论一下作文。过去十几年四级短文写作
也是有一定的变化的。自 1986 年实行四级英语统考以来，出现 过的作文题目主要可以分为以下几类：提纲式作文、段首名作文 和图表作文。下面对此作简要的分析。★ 提纲式作文：即给出汉语概要，并要求的据此写出不少于 12 0 词不达意的作文。这种类型的作文在 90 年代大约占 40%左右。这类作文相对而言简单一些。因为在审题材时，如果只有题目，考生受到的限制少，头绪太多，结果可能文章缺少统一性。提纲 式作文一般写成 3 段式，可分为比较类、对比类、驳论类、立论 类和解释说明类。
1、比较类：19992 年 1 月作文题目是：Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports.所给的 outline 是
1、参加体育运动有许多 好处。2.但也有副作用。3。你的体会。
2、对比类：1995 年 1 月作文题目是：Can Money Buy Happine ss? 所给的 outline 是：1 有人认为金钱是幸福之本（source o f happiness）。2 也有人认金钱是万恶之源..(root of all ev
il).3。我的看法。
3、驳论类：和对比类作文有相似之处，但着重点是对一个错误 观点的批驳。如 1998 年 6 月的作文题目：Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 所给的 outline 是：1 有些人认为某 些数字会带来好运。2 我认为数字和运气无关。
4、立论类：1994 年 1 月作文的题目是：The World Is Gettin g Smaller and Smaller.所给的 outline 是： 现代化的交通 1。工具越来越发达。2。人与人之间的交往越来越频繁。3。结论。
5、解释说明类：1993 年 6 月作文的题目是：My Most Favorit e Program.所给的 outline 是：1 我最喜欢的电视节目是。2 这类节目的内容和特点。3 我喜欢它的原因。★ 段首句作文：给出每一段句子的第一句英文，然后根据段首 句进行扩写。1990 年 1 月试题的题目是：What Would Happen I f There were No Power.所给的段首句分别是：1.Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life..2.If there were no electric power,.3.There fore,.★ 图表作文：1991 年 1 月、1994 年 1 月、2002 年 6 月都是图表 作文。
二、主题与逻辑
统一性(Unity)(Unity)原则 1.统一性(Unity)原则 首先，句子应具有统一性，也就是说，一个句子要表达一个明确 的意思。同样,段落也应有统一性。正如一个句子是由一系列的词语组成, 并表达一个完整的意思,一个段落是由系列的句子围绕一个中心 思想所组成的一个完整的统一体。段落的统一性指的是在一个段 落里只讨论一个主题。由于一个段落只围绕一个中心思想,所以 展开句中的各个事实、例子、理由等都必须与主题相关。比如你 的主题是有关出国深造的好处,那么就只谈其好处如果要谈坏处 的话就得另起一段。此外,段落的统一性还指的是:段落中的各个展开句都必须由主题 句中的主导思想展开。在写作中,学生有时容易犯离题的毛病。比 如在谈到出国深造的好处时,你也许会提到好处之一是培养独立性, 至于其原因,你也许会提到远离家人是一个因素,但假如你的笔墨 过多地停留在“远离家人”这一方面,那你就离题了,你的落就缺乏 统一性。所以要写好作文,必须遵守统一性原则。因此，在段落的写作过程中，段内各句都应紧扣段落的主题。对于 那些与主题无关的句子，无论多好，也要毫不犹豫地将其删去，否 则就会破坏段落的统一性。
文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的。就各段而言，其中 的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句进行，不能说与主题句 无关的东西。有人也将其称为统一性。请看一例：
The weather has been changeable.On Sunday we had a hig h wind that blew down some trees.Monday was so cold th at we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats.On Tuesday we formed a group to go roller skating.By Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out.Thu rsday was as hot and humid as an August day.Friday mor ning it began to rain, and it looks as if we’ have a ll cold, steady wind for a few days.这一段写“最近天气多变”，首句为主题句。扩展句叙述了星期日、星期
一、星期
三、星期四和星期五的天气情况，用以展开关键词 changeable。但星期二没有提天气，而是说当天的活动安排，偏 离了主题，打断了段落叙述的连贯性，破坏了段落逻辑意义的统 一性，应删去或改为与天气有关的话。
再如：
Sports benefit us in many respects.When taking part in
sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body.There is no doubt that properly balanced phy sical activities keep us physically fit.Furthermore, s ports can enrich our life and maintain our psychologica l health.Through participation, everyone can learn tha t on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team.Sports teach us about considera tion, cooperation and optimism, and how to cope with di fficulties.第一句是本段的主题句，接下来作者从体育运动对身体的好处说 了两句，第四句讲述体育运动对心理方面的益处，第五句从团队 的方面加以论述，最后一句既是论据，同时也是对前面三点的概 括。全段没有一句话脱离主题句。
连贯(coherence)(coherence)的原则 2.连贯(coherence)的原则 连贯就是指文章的段落之间、段落中各句子之间要有一定的衔 接。段落结构和句与句之间的衔接应遵照一定的顺序。段落之间的连 接也应符合逻辑。这样使文章连贯紧凑，自然流畅，层次分明，脉络清晰。段落只有在具有含义一致性的同时又具有表达的连贯
性才能充分有效地传达信息，真正实现写作目的。
内容的连贯性是表达连贯性的前提，一组互不相干的句子放在一 起，无法取得表达的连贯性；只有把一组意义紧密相关的句子有 机地组合起来，才能真正充分有效地阐述其主题思想。就上面 的例一来说，虽然它是以时间为线索将这几天串在一起，但仍让 人感觉太乱。每个句子都是以星期某一天的名子开头，太单调了。各个句子之间似乎没有什么关系，应该说是一篇连贯性较差的文 章。下面让我们对它稍加修改一下：
The weather has been changeable.On Sunday we had a hig h wind that blew down some trees.Monday was so cold th at we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats.And it remained gloomy the next day.To our pleasure, by Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out.But Thursday tuned out to be as hot and humid as an Aug ust day.Worse still, it began to rain this morning, an d it looks as if we’ll have a cold, steady wind for a few days.那么，如何使文章连贯呢？
就议论文而言，获取连贯主要有三种方法：一是使用代词或有意 地重复一些词，二是替代的使用，三是使用关联词语。代词和有意的重复可起到衔接的作用。例如在上面的例子中，在 提到星期二时，没有用 Tuesday，而是用了 the next day，避免 重复，并把这两天连在一起，让人感觉到了前后的承接。再如最 后一句中原文用的是 Friday morning，改为 this morning 后，意 义并没有改变，但一下子把距离拉近了，既承接起前面的五天，又能与后一分句中的将来时有效的结合。关联词和插入语的使用是四级考试作文中最明显的连接手段，如 上例中的 and，to our pleasure，but，worse still。需要注意的是，关联词的使用是与段落（文章）的展开方法密切 相关的，不要为了使用关联词而使用关联词。下面结合段落的展 开方法具体加以说明。1．举例法 列举事实或举出实例来说明中心思想, 是简单易行、具有说服力 的写作方法。
Communicating with other people by telephone is very co nvenient, especially when you have something urgent.Fo r example, if one of your family members is seriously i ll at right, and you don’t know how to deal with it an d where to find a doctor, what can you do? A telephone
is the answer.Dial 120 and you will get services from the hospital very soon.2.列举法 列举的模式通常是 主题句example 1example 2example 3 列举时常用 for e xample, for instance, such as, like, take„as an example, to ill ustrate 等词语.3.分类法 一般是在主题句之后，依次罗列段落指示词所表达的几个部分或 几个方面。然后，选用丰富的事例对所罗列的各个部分或各个方 面进行具体地说明或解释。
There are three basic kinds of materials that can“ be f ound in any good library.First, there are books on all subjects, both in English and in many other languages.These books are organized according to subject, title, and author in a central file caned the card catalog.B ooks can generally be checked out of the library and ta ken home for a period of two to four weeks.Second, the re are reference works.which include encyclopedias, di ctionaries, bibliography, atlases, etc., and which gene rally must be used in the library itself.Third, there
are periodicals-magazines, newspapers, pamphlets-which are flied alphabetically in racks, or which have been filmed to conserve space.Like reference works, periodi cals cannot usually be removed from the library.分类时常用：most of all，next，moreover，in addition，besi des，furthermore，to begin with，to start with，first of all，fir st，second，third„
4.因果关系 在段落一开头，就用主题句点明其因果关系，然后选用有关材料，客观的罗列某些原因或结果，以证阐述的中心思想。
Growing numbers of well-to-do Americans are making the deci sion to move abroad.They find it impossible in America to w alk the streets at night without fear of being raped, mugged, o r murdered, nor do they see a way to escape the poisonous ai r of the cities.They maintain that even American food has be come increasingly dangerous to eat.Last but not least, they ins ist that they are sick of the pace of American life, a pace that leaves no time for relaxation or pleasure.因果关系常用语汇: because of, so, owing to, thanks to, thus, as a result of, hence, for this reason, consequently, is caused b y, lead to, result in
5．比较法 主题句必须明确表明所要比较的对象和所要比较的范围，实际上 就是罗列两个或两个以上比较对象的相同点。
Learning English is like building a house.Laying a sol id foundation is the first and most important step.In other words, you should reads, you should read and spea k English every day.Memorizing new words and phrases i s also helpful.Like building a house, learning English takes some time.So don’t be impatient.Remember, Rom e wasn’t built in a day.常用语汇：at the same time, similar to, accordingly, bo th, show a degree of similarity, similarly, lie and so , the same as, and„ too, in the same way, in a like man ner
三、段落结构(Paragraph Structure)段落结构(Paragraph 句子是组成段落的基本要素。一个段落是由一组语义相关的句子构成 的。一般来讲,段落中的句子可分为主题句、发展句、结论句。段落 是围绕一个中心思想所展开的一系列相关的句子。它可以独立成章, 也可以是文章的一部分。英语段落的一个最基本的特征就是按照一条 直线发展,也就是说,每个句子须按照统一性和连贯性原则与前一个 句子相连接。事实上,英语段落就是以主题句、展开句和结尾句所组 成的一个统一的整体。
一、主题句(Topic Sentence)主题句是英文段落的典型特点。主题句是一个段落中最具有概括性的 句子,它表明该段落要讨论的内容,所以主题句就是一个段落的中心 思想,它不仅点明了主题(topic)而且也给该主题确立了主导思想(co ntrolling idea)。例如: It is difficult for Chinese students to write compositions in English.其中,for Chinese students to write compositions in English 是主题,而 difficult 是主导思想。根据这一主题句,作者接着便会就 ”中国学生用英语写作文“这一主题在”难“方面加以展开。同样，读者 也可以预料在段落的其余句子里,作者可能会在遣词造句或其他方面 来说明中国学生用英语写作困难这一情况的。1.主题句的位置 一般情况下,主题句出现在段落的开头,作为段落传递信息的出发点, 简明扼要地告诉读者段落的线索和范围。但是,段落主题句的位置并 不是固定不变的,它可以位于段首、段中、段尾,也可以首尾兼而有之。现就常见的三种情况分述如下: 主题句位于段首,直接点明段落的主题。这种段落结构有助于作者确 定段落的主线,使段内各句紧紧围绕段落的主题思想自然展开。例如: Hurricanes, which are also called cyclones, exert tremendou s power.These violent storms are often a hundred miles in diameter, and their winds can reach velocities of seventy-f ive miles per hour or more.Furthermore, the strong winds a nd heavy rainfall that accompany them cm completely destroy a small town in a couple of hours.The energy that is rele ased by a hurricane in one day exceeds the total energy con sumed by humankind throughout the world m one year.2.主题句的特点 主题句置于段首,开宗明义,一开始就规定和限制了段落的发展方向, 对段落的成败起着关键作用。所以,主题本身尤应把握准确。段落主 题句有以下几个特点: 1.概括性(general)主题句首先应概括,也就是说,主题句应涵盖全段所有的思想内容。2 具体性（specific）也就是必须具有一定的限定性,即有一个或一组核心词对主导思想的 范围进行限定,避免在段落展开中偏离主题方向。段落主题句所限定 的内容要有助于段落的铺开和抒发。换句话说,段落主题句限定的范 围要符合段落写作目的。一个段落的容量是有限的,限定的范围太宽, 其内容无法在一个段落中阐述清楚;限定范围太窄,则不利于段落主 题的发展。因此,写主题句既要注意其概括性,又要注意其具体性。也就是说,主 题句不能过于宽泛,否则,续写发展句时就会令人感觉如堕烟海,无从 下笔。欲使主题句具备具体性,首先要对段落的主题进行收紧。二 展开句(supporting sentences)
1.定义： 展开句就是对主题句所陈述的思想观点加以展开这类,提出 各种细节或例证以阐述或证明主题的各个方面.展开句必须切题、明 确、层次分明。写扩展句时要注意条理性，比如引出三条不同的理由 可以分别用： First of all, furthermore, the last but not the least。请阅读下文,注意展开句如何对主导思想加以展开的： How to Help a Choking Person You ought to know what to do to help a person who is chokin g.First，stand behind choking victim and put your arm aro und his or her waist.Second, you make a fist and place the thumb side against the person’s stomach just above the na vel, but below the ribs.Third, grasp your fist with your o ther hand and press into the victim’ abdomen with a quick s upward thrust.Repeat the action if necessary.三、结尾句(Concluding Sentence)在一个段落里,结尾句并不是必不可少的,但是因为结尾句具有段落 结束的标志(如 summary, in conclusion, in a word 等)以及能够 提醒读者作者的重要观点,所以结尾句对读者有益。结尾句的作用是 第一,复述主题句;第二,对整个段落加以总结;第三,对主题加以评 论。下面的例子分别说明结尾句的三个作用。
Good manners are important in all countries, but ways of ex pressing good manners are different from country to country.Americans eat with knives and forks F Japanese eat with ch opsticks.Americans say ”Hi“ when they meet Japanese bow.M any American men open doors for women Japanese men do not.On the surface, it appears that good manners in America are mot good manners in Japan, and in a way this is true.But in any country, the only manners that are important are tho se involving one person’s behavior toward another person.In all countries, it is good manners to behave consideratel y towards other and bad manners not to.It is only the way of behaving politely that differs from country to country.四、句子写作 明确段落的写作思路之后，让我们具体来看句子的写作。考试实践 表明，多数考生在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而 是最基本的单句写作能力。有些同学因为对自身的实力缺乏自信所以 考场上采取抄袭阅读文章里的句子这种方法来凑字数。这种做法实不 足取，因为一方面容易被改卷老师发现而认为该考生有偷懒的嫌疑，另一方面考生从阅读文章里抄来的优美句子和考生自己写的错误百 出的句子拼凑在一起令文章整体有不和谐之感，从而令改卷老师怀疑 该考生有作弊的嫌疑。通过句子写作这一关，可参考如下步骤：
1.确保句子的正确性，即准确表达思想而且没有语法错误。以＂ There be＂句型为例，错误的句子：There are many people like to go to the movies.正确表达：There are many people who li ke to go to the movies.考生最容易犯的错误是在 there be 之后 又用了一个动词作谓语，使句子结构出现严重错误。除了要小心避免 语法错误外，我们也不能忽视作文中经常出现的严重汉化的英语，即 中式英语，比如：”Man is iron, and food is steel.", ＂Women are half side sky.＂ “The food in the dining hall is diffi cult to eat”。如何克服汉化思维关键在于动笔前先思考一下类似 的英文句式，并且注意谚语的翻译不能随心所欲，尽量找到规范的翻 译方式。正如我们所知道的,英语句子通常包含主语和谓语结构,才能 表达某一完整意思。真正理解和掌握这一点,可以帮助我们避免许多 语法上的毛病。在句子结构方面避免下列几种毛病： 1． 串句（run-on sentences）2． 破句（fragmentary sentences）3． 赘句（wordy sentences/ redundancy）4． 修饰语错位（modifiers in wrong position）5． 悬垂修饰语（Dang1ing Modifiers）6． 结构不平行（Non-parallelism）
7． 主谓不一致（subject-verb disagreement）1． 所谓串句,是指两个或多个句子串在一起,误当成一个句子。串句 的表现形式主要有三种 1）两个完整句子只用逗号隔开 English is a required course in most colleges，a student m ust pass it before he earns his degree.2)两个完整句子不适当地用连词 and 连接 I intend to go with your brother and you may do as you plea se.3)两个完整句子串在一起 Students should be careful of punctuation trouble will resu lt if they are careless.2． 破句是串句的另一个极端把句子的一部分当成一个句子。In ten seconds I made my decision.A decision that changed the next seven years of my life.If a person possesses the ability and desires to go to coll ege, I don’t think money should stop him.Even though in s ome cases it does.第一个例子中 “A decision that changed the next seven years of my life.”是一个带有定语从句的名词词组, 实际上只是这个句 子的一部分。第二个例子中，从句“Even though in some cases it does.”被错当成一个句子.3.悬垂修饰语 一个修饰语必须非常明确地修饰句中的某一个词或某一组词.有些修 饰语初看好像修饰某个词语,但实际上什么也没有修饰,那么这个修 饰语就是悬垂修饰语。误：Losing sixteen pounds，her clothes began to look baggy.正： Losing sixteen pounds, she found that her clothes began to look baggy.以下是几种主要的悬垂修饰语 1)分词短语悬垂 当句子中的主语不是分词短语所表达的动作发出者,这个分词短语就 悬垂了。Looking to the future，the computer field may seem very at tractive to many.2)动名词悬垂
误：On hearing the news, my heart sank down.正：On hearing the news, I felt my heart sinking down.3)不定式悬垂 误：To pass the exam, this exercise must be done.正：To pass the exam, you must do this exercise.4)省略句悬垂 误：When a baby, his parents abandoned him.正：When he was a baby, he was abandoned by his parents.4.结构不平行平行结构是把两个或两个以上意思并列的成分，用同等的语法形式来 表达的一种修辞手段.They expect to hear lectures this morning, join discussions this afternoon, and attend the dance tonight.They always enjoy listening, talking, and dancing.这种结构整齐对称,使句子流畅,语意贯通并富有节奏感.误:Students need textbooks, notebooks, and they need pens.正:Students need textbooks, notebooks and pens.误:Knowing how to study and to learn to budge time are impo rtant for college students.正:Knowing how to study and learning to budge time are impo rtant for college students.误:What we want and the thing we do are often opposite.正:What we want and what we do are often contradictory.2.注意句式的多样性，语言生动且富于变换才能最终打动评卷 老师从而获得高分。不能从头到尾都是 I am„, he is„, I like„, 这样的简单句。增加句子形式的多样性。应避免全文使用同一长度、结构相似的句子，使长句与短句、单句与复句，倒装句与强调句相结 合，增加文章的说服力与生动性。1）适当运用同位语，插入语，非限定性定语从句，让逗号出现 在你的文章中。同位语 Environmental pollution, a phenomenon w hich lasted a number of years, has grown more and more seri ous.推荐用于开头对核心名词做出解释。2）倒装，Only in this way can we solve the problem.建议 最好使用在文章结尾处更显得掷地有声。
3）无灵主语，即没有生命的东西充当主语。当我们要讲述一个 经验性的事实或者常理时，不要过多使用“I think that”议论文中 过多使用“I” 容易影响文章的客观性。使用无灵主语就可以解决这 个问题 Past experience has taught us that we should not depe nd on others for everything.(Past experience 就是无灵主语)T he past decade witnessed her change from a beautiful young lady into a shabby woman.4）排比，可以增强语言表达的力度和整个文章的气势。例如在 95 年 1 月的考题“Can money buy happiness”中运用排比就可以收 到比较理想的效果。Many people die for money, lie for money, fight for money, and even sell their souls to the Devil for money.以上是讲述写好句子的方法，但因为考场上时间比较紧迫，所以 建议考生务必在考前背诵一些常用的理由句以防在考场上临时思路 受阻而束手无策。如 It can enrich our knowledge and widen our horizon.或者 It can increase the government revenue and re lieve the pressure of unemployment.等等。4． 注意措辞的力度(句型与词汇的选择,尽量将所学句型和词汇
运用到写作中)
a.As I came out of the farmhouse I heard an unusual noise in the distance, one which I had never heard before.I look ed up the valley in the direction from which the sound seem ed to come, but could see nothing.The noise grew, a low ru mbling that grew louder by the second.Then all at once I s aw it, a towering wall of water filling the valley from sid e to side.I turned and rushed back into the house.Anythin g left in the wake of that flood was bound to be swept away.I scooped up my small daughter and, grabbing my startled w ife by the arm, rushed for the stairs.Reaching the top I h ad only a moment to think.Which room? My daughter’s bedro om was furthest from the river bank at the back of the hous e.I thrust my wife and daughter through the door and close d it behind us.By now the roar of the river is deafening.b.I came out of the farmhouse and heard an unusual noise.I had not heard it before and looked up the valley to see w hat was making it.I saw nothing, the noise grew louder and louder, then I saw a great deal of water rushing down the valley.It looked dangerous so I went inside very quickly a nd took my wife and daughter upstairs, but was not sure whi ch room to go in.as my daughter’s room seemed best we wen
t in there as quickly as possible as the noise of the water was so loud.5．改错练习1．Born in a small town in South china in 1937, he grew up to be a musician.2.The girl is too young.3.He likes to sing, to swim, and table tennis.4.We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very cha rming young woman.5.She told my sister that she was wrong.6.He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not seriou s.7.To get up early, the clock was set at six.8.Rotten in the cellar, he had to throw the potatoes away.9.In Dreiser’s Sister Carrie, he describes a penniless gi rl’s way to success.10.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.11.In college, students should learn to analyze problems o n their own.Try to help them to acquire this ability.12.His job was a policeman.13.By taking a No.10 bus is one way to get there.14.They were waiting for the meeting to begin.They talked with each other.They talked about women’s volleyball tea m.The team had won victories in Tokyo.15.Walking into the classroom, the teacher carried a big b ook under his arm.16.he saw an old man get on the bus, quickly standing up t o offer him the seat.17.The girl’s bag was full of new books and big.18.His spectacles, an English dictionary, a cup of tea, bo oks and notes lay on the small desk.1
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