中考英语书面表达训练教案

第一篇：中考英语书面表达训练教案

一． 教学课题：

中考英语书面表达训练教案

二． 教案背景：

外研版、九年级、中考专项复习-书面表达训练。

英语书面表达题是学生比较头疼的题型。学生表达思想时往往写成了汉语式。错误多，不连贯。近几年的中考作文失分很大，有的学生还养成了抄前面阅读理解的习惯。三． 教材分析：

外研版教材每个模块后都设计了针对模块内容writing。这对于学生习作有一定的帮助，但由于题型设计与中考作文要求有差别，加之英语课时较少，有时仅用几分钟时间说说而已，甚至是放弃。缺少系统的练习，学生对作文有畏惧心理，写作方面的障碍自然就多了。

四．教学方法：

本节课针对学生作文练习少，对作文有恐惧心理的特点，设计了低层次，小梯度练习。从句子结构、动词的时态、常用作文的开头、结尾，到作文实战练习，中考作文评析、作文修改。采用自主练习、小组互评、范文共赏的形式调动学生写作的积极性。五． 教学过程： 导入：

Step1：同学们，今天我们针对书面表达题进行专项复习。书面表达题就是要求同学们针对题目的要求用英语写作文，我们在日常作文

中主要出现的错误有： 1.句子结构错误。

eg.I very like music.→I like music very much.I am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a doctor.2.动词时态、语态使用不当。

eg.He goes to the hospital last Sunday.→

He went to the hospital last Sunday.She chose to give a speech at the party.→ She was chosen to give a speech at the party.3.词汇运用错误。名词、动词、形容词、副词/连词等，也包含短语、不定式使用不当。

eg.They had to work very hardly when they were young.→

They had to work very hardly when they were young.Discuss:小组讨论一下，平时自己在作文过程中常出现的错误。Step2:师：怎样减少出错呢？首先让我们看一下常用的句子结构。句子成分可分为主语,谓语,宾语,表语,定语,状语,同位语。但我们常用的简单句的结构有： 主语 + 谓语(及物动词)+ 宾语 People enjoy music.主语 + 谓语(不及物动词)He often swims in a river.主语 + 系动词 + 表语 You look lovely.I’m impressed.所以我们下笔时要分清句中的主语、谓语、宾语、表语，注意他们的位置。

小组活动：请同学们翻译下列句子。

1.她母亲是一位教师。（Her mother is a teacher.）

2.昨天汤姆去了网球俱乐部。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：师：接下来让我们讨论一下怎样减少动词时态或语态错误。

生：关键是确定文章的要求，是记叙过去的事还是描写现在或将来的事。

师：很对，2009年潍坊市初中学业水平考试考试书面表达题的要求是：丰富多彩的初中生活即将结束，有哪件事情让你至今印象深刻，甚至难以忘怀？请以An unforgettable experience为题，写一篇英语短文。你们觉得应该用什么时态来写呢？

生：多用动词的一般过去时态。

师：很好。

Step4: 当然文章写作自然有一些常用的开头、结尾可以借鉴。那么常用的开头有： 1.时间开头法：

eg.Today is Thursday,----------

It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading newspaper.2.天气开头法： eg.It was rainy today.It happened on a wet day of July.3.开门见山：

eg.Last weekends we went out for a walk.4.名言引人：

eg.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.------------------常用的结尾有： 1.总结法

eg.Tough we were tired, we felt very tired.2.发出号召或倡议

eg.I’m proud of what I’ve learned.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will become much more beautiful.3.表达祝愿

eg.I hope you will have a wonderful time.师：当然常用的开头结尾还有不少，希望同学们多总结学习。Step5最后，作文的关键还在于审题：一定要读懂要求。如要求写得体裁、字数、必须包含的内容、书写等等。我们就以2010年潍坊市中考英语试题为例：大家热热身：

某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；心理压力大，不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此，他们发起了题为How Io Keep Fit的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇 80词左右的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。（文中不要出现作者

本人的真实信息）

小组活动：把写好的作文在小组之内交流，选出写得较好的在班内展示。

（小组优秀者到讲台读自己文章）Step6.Sum-up

这节课我们学习了书面表达题的一些解题技巧，当然在实际学习中还需要不断的总结练习，如养成记笔记的习惯。学生个人总结自己学习体会。Step7.Homework:

我们以2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试作文题为作业：

假设你是某文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。要求：1.80词左右；2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。

Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park.I wanted to take some photos.My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling him.Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill.It didn’t work at all.I put it back quietly after I returned home.And I haven’t told him till now.when I face to my father, I feel terrible.What should I do?

Yours, David

Dear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes，Helen

六．教学反思：

本节课我从学生习作易出现的错误入手，分析出错的原因，进行及时的练习。开头结尾进行了适当的总结，小组之内交流合作。以潍坊市近三年中考作文为题例，让学生感受中考作文的要求、难度。不足之处是学生练习时间相对少一些。

七．教学资源

2010年山东省潍坊市初中学业水平考试写作答案（满分15分）One possible version: How to Keep Fit

As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food.Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks.Secondly, it's good for us to take more exercise, such as running, walking, ball games and so on.At last, we should learn to relax ourselves.We can listen to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep.To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.评分标准：词数在70—100之间；如果少于70词，应酌情扣分。1．内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）：

2．较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3．基本要点写出，有稍多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，错误较多，语句小通顺（3—5分）； 5．双写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。

2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试英 语 试 题 写作答案及评分标准： One possible version: Dear David, First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately.It you tell him the truth, he'll be angry with you.But at least you'll prove how honest you are.Then I think you should offer to pay.But you shouldn't use your pocket money.Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it.If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Best wishes, Helen 评分标准：词数在60—100之间；如果少于60词，应酌情扣分。

1.内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）；

2.较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3.基本要点写出，有较多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4.篇幅不足，错误较多，语句吧通顺（3—5分）； 5.只写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。

第二篇：英语书面表达限时训练

英语书面表达限时训练

国内某英文报招聘兼职记者，报道2012年奥运会。假设你是李 目前在英国做交换生，想应聘这份工作，请按下列要点写一封自荐信。

1.个人情况：熟悉本地情况，有相关工作经历。

2.能力优势：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、团队合作等。

3.承诺：保证按要求完成任务。

注意：词数100-120，参考词汇：交换生 exchange student Dear Sir or Madam:,I am writing to apply for the job as a part-time repoter for The london Olympic Games.

第三篇：初三英语书面表达训练

中考作文】2013中考英语作文预测

2012中考英语作文预测：8个要准备的话题 1.关于学习英语的话题: 复习要点 Learn English 请你以“How to learn English well?”写份演讲稿80字左右.范文: Dear classmates: We have been learning English for over 6 years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!

2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。

保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的结论

(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯

(你的看法?)How to stay our health /fit? 范文1: Dear boys and grils : I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool student first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you bye!范文2:Dear boys and girls: I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李华,你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论,主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。

提示: 70%的学生

30%的学生

应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长

锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳

锻炼能增强体质,保持健康

锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习

锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好

锻炼中可能会受伤

要求:语句通顺,句意连贯;词数为80词左右;发言稿的开头已写好,但不计入总词数。

Dear classmates: I’m Li Hua.After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕环境问题影响着人们的工作学习生活等而我们的工作生活生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。

范文: How to protect/save our environment/world? The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.关于“人口问题 POPULATION ”

6.关于中学生使用手机的优缺点,谈谈你的看法(见2008年初中毕业写作专题复习)。范文:略

7.介绍自己的兴趣余爱好(单元四)。

8.春节习俗与计划,如何过2009年的春节,假如你是LINGLING给外国朋友JHON发一份电子邮件。

The spring Festival Dear John, The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中国的农历).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(装饰)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(团聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friends.I ’m going to Disneyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessons do exercise every day help the old and children.Welcome to China.Waiting for your e –mail.Yours

Lingling

Happy new year to everyone!

英语书面表达

一、人物

1、以“The Most Interesting Teacher”为题，根据下面的提示，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，可以作适当的发挥。

注意：如果是女教师，则称她为“Sue”;如果是男教师，则称他为“Oliver”.1.Who is the most interesting teacher in your heart? And what does the teacher teach? 2.What is the teacher like? 3.Why do you think the teacher is the most interesting? The most interesting teacher

The Most Interesting Teacher I think my history teacher is the most interesting teacher in our school.His name is Oliver.He is a tall man with glasses.He is kind to everyone.In my mind, Oliver is the most knowledgeable person.He often tells us some interesting historical stories in class, such as Cao Cao and Liu Bei.I became interested in history when I was very young.I fell in love with Oliver and his classes.I regard Oliver as the most interesting teacher.2、Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself”.(以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不计入总词数。)（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）Use the following points as are reference(以下内容仅供参考)What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?

I'm proud of myself I used to be a shy girl and I used to be afraid of speaking in public.But now I am outgoing.All is because of the last speech competition.I am good at English, so the teacher asked me to enter the speech competition.My classmates supported me and they were sure I could win the competition.I didn't want to let them down.So I encouraged myself to be brave.I took a deep breath and kept smiling.I practiced so }lard that I won the competition successfully.My teacher and classmates are proud of me, and I am proud of myself, too.二、假期计划

3、同学们很快就毕业了, 马上要迎来快乐的暑假和2012年的伦敦奥运会,你的心中是否充满期待?请用英语写一篇90词左右的短文, 和大家分享你心中的暑期计划.写作要求: 1.主要选择通过电视或现场看哪几种比赛项目? 最喜欢哪几位体育明星?为什么? 2.主要安排哪几项体育锻炼活动?(包括时间,地点和目的意义等)注意: 短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的相关的真实姓名,地名,校名等信息.The summer vacation and the 2012 London Olympic Games are coming.It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.During these days, I'll choose to watch the Olympic Games by TV, especially I will spend my time on the table tennis, badminton and weight lifting because I like these sports.Of all the players I like Zhang Yining, Lin Dan and l.iu Xiang best.1 think they are very excellent players.As for myself, I'll also plan for several PE exercise activities.Firstly, I'll do morning exercises every morning to build up my body.Secondly, I'll play table tennis with my friends to be a second Zhang Yining.Through these activities, I believe I'll be stronger and more energetic to get prepared for the study of senior middle school.Hello, everyone!Summer vacation is coming.I'd like to talk about my plan for the summer vacation.I have two plans.The first plan is to teach stay-at-home kids in the village.I'm always looking forward to being an English teacher.I will prepare for the class and teach the children carefully.If I do it, I can get much experience about being a teacher.That will be useful for me.As for the second plan, it's to raise money for the children in Yushu.I think we should try our best to help them rebuild their new home.I am sure I can have a special and exciting vacation.Let's be helpful and useful in the summer vacation.That's all.Thank you.4、暑假是每个中学生期盼的一段时光，请你围绕如何过一个轻松、愉快、有意义的暑假，写一篇90词左右的英语短文。

注意：

1、文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；

2、下列词汇可供参考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help… with housework, take part in …

A Meaningful Summer Holiday Many students maybe look forward to having a good summer holiday.I think traveling is the best choice on holiday.We could have a good rest and go to visit lots of places of interest.We could do some sports, like basketball, football and so on.What's more, we can have fun doing some reading.()f course, we can't forget to help our parents with housework.If we do something to help others who need help, we will have a more meaningful summer holiday.三、一次经历

5、在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请以“My Pleasant Day”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，记述你那天的活动和感受（如exciting, fun…）Ways to relax? TV, Computer, Sports, Music, Shopping… Work? Homework, Housework, Cooking, Cleaning… Other things? Enough sleep, Delicious food… 写作要求：1.参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。

My Pleasant Day

Yesterday I was busy, but I was really happy.After breakfast, my parents took me to the amusement park.We took some photos over there.My mother bought me a toy car.I even played the roller coaster and that made me felt excited.After leaving the amusement park, we went to visit my grandparents.I spent the whole afternoon chatting with my grandfather.My parents prepared delicious food for us.We had a wonderful dinner together.What a pleasant day it was!

6、反思可以使每个人成长进步，为未来做好计划可以铸就成功。初中的即将结束，新的高中学习将要学习将要到来。请你用英语记录下一两件最让你感动或遗憾的事，同时为你将来的生活做一点设计，下列句型可以帮助你完成作文：One thing in my mind is …., I am happy that …, It is a pity that I didn’t …., I will…

写作要求：内容真实，要点齐全，行文边贯，词数90词左右。

My life in junior school will come to an end soon.I am happy that I am going to have another chance of beginning my study again.It is a pity that I didn't study harder in the past because I spent a lot of time playing computer games.Once I even fell asleep in front of a computer.However, in last year's Paralympics, Nataliya, a ping-pong player, changed my attitude towards life.She was known as “Venus in Poland” for having only one arm and set: a good example for me.So I will take part in more activities and make more friends to make my life more meaningrul.四、英语学习

7、回想你三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。

写作提示：1.Listen to the teacher;2.Take part in activities;3.Be confident in ourselves.写作要求：1.文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3.词数：80词左右

What should we do in English class?

In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully.This is the most important for us.When we have any questions, we should ask the teacher or classmates at once.It's necessary for us to take notes in class, too, because reading notes is helpful to review what we have learned in class.When the teacher asks us to practice English in groups, we should take an active part in the activity.We should be confident in ourselves and not be afraid of making mistakes.If we keep on working hard at English, we'll be able to be good at it one day.五、健康

8、某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；理压力过大，不能与人很好地沟通等。为此，他们发起了题为“How to keep Fit”的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇80词左右的短文，说明如何保持身体健康。（文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息）写作参考：

1、保持健康的重要性

2、保持健康的方法

3、谈谈你的看法

How to Keep Fit

Everyone wants to keep healthy.But how to keep fit? Firstly, you should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they are good for your body, just as the old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Secondly, you'd better go to bed early and get up early.As we all know “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.” Thirdly, you should do more exercise.For example, you can run in the park and the street in the morning.No sports, no life.At last, you should always try to make yourself happy.If you can do these, I think you can keep healthy.Keeping Health

Health is very important for us.Good health can make us enjoy our life and do well in everything.While poor health means nothing.So, we mus keep healthy.How to keep healthy then?

First, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they give us enough vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.So we should not eat the food with lots of sugar and fat.Second, we'd better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies strong.Besides, we should be happy every day.Finally, we have to give up those had habits such as drinking and smoking.In a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of ourselves.六、毕业留言

9、初中生活即将结束，新的生活即将开启，请为你最好的同学写一段毕业留言：他（她）给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光及对他（她）最美好的祝愿。

写作要求：1.可参考下图所给提示词,也可适当发挥,开头已给出(不计入总词数)2.80词左右.How time flies!We have been studying together for 3 years.You are always so happy that your smiles seem to be more shining than the sunlight.!shall never forget that monthly-examination, in which I got a really low mark.I just felt the sky was going to fall down.Just then, you came out.You comforted me a lot, which encouraged me to keep studying hard.You touched me deeply.You are so diligent a person that you certainly will have a bright future.Good luck to you.七、爱好

10、现在网络越来越发达，中学生上网的利弊已成为人们讨论的焦点。请参考下面的信息并结合自己的观点写一篇90词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。

网络的优点：课后放松，辅助学习，传递信息，开阔视野，网络交友等…

网络的缺点：上网时间长有害健康，沉迷网络游戏，不思学业，不良网站，误导学业，虚拟网络，真假难辨…

Internet plays an important role in my daily life.But it has both positive and negative points.On the one hand, surfing the Internet is very easy and it is becoming more and more popular

among teenagers.They are so interesting and enjoyable that students all love playing them.It's true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest and make them happy and relaxed.On the other hand, surfing the Internet has some disadvantages.Some students are so addicted to the games that they can't get out of them, which would waste time and do harm to their study.What's more, there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet, which would have a had influence on their health.I think that Internet is a good thing, but we also need to get rid of it sometimes.Habits Habits whether good or bad, are gradually formed.When a person does a certain thing again, he'll be obligea to it in the same way by some unseen force.Thus habit is formed.Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it.It is therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits.Good habits have many advantages.Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy.Diligence helps to succeed.Honesty helps win the respect and trust of others.If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing,we might be ruined by them.We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good ourselves and others.八、关系处理

11、父母与孩子之间常有摩擦.父母想让孩子听他们的,按他们说的做,但孩子更愿意自己选择朋友,自己设计(design)未来，更加独立（independent）地生活，所以不和往往在所难免。解决（solve）这一问题的最好办法只有相互理解。孩子们应学会尊重父母，聆听他们的意见，因为他们有更丰富的人生阅历（experiences）.父母也应尽量和孩子交换（exchange）意见，不能过分地责备（scold）和打骂，那样会使孩子远离父母。把孩子当作朋友，这样他们会信任父母，会使家庭生活更幸福。

请根据中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，把以上观点正确表达出来，不少于90词

Parents and Children Parents and children often disagree with each other.Parents want their children to listen to them and do what they ask their children to do.But children want to be free to choose their friends, design their future and live a life in a more independent way.So the disagreement between them can't be avoided.The best way to solve the problem is to understand each other.Children should learn to respect their parents' opinions, for parents have richer experiences of life.Parents should also try to exchange opinions with their children.Don't scold or beat them too much.These will make them away from parents.Treat them as friends.Then children will believe in their parents.It will make family life much happier.How to Get along Well with Others

In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.Therefore, it is very important for us to know how to get along with other people.To get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following words.To begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean.Lies will surely make people stay far away from us in the long run.After all, honesty is the best policy.Second, we have to be humble enough.If we are proud in public, we can hardly win other's respect, not to mention “friendship”.Finally, we must not be selfish.We should learn how to show concern for others.As long as we abide by get along well with others.what mentioned above, we will find it easy

九、梦想

12、请你以未来计划为话题,根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的短文.1.你的梦想职业及居住地等 2.你做出这些选择的理由;

3.你为实现未来计划应做的努力;4.有一天你实现了你的理想,你怎样回报父母,回报社会.My Dream in the Future I have a great dream.I want to be adoctor when I grow up.I will work in the hospital in my hometown.On the one hand, to work as a doctor is very important and useful.Because a doctor can help people who are ill.And a doctor can help people to keep healthy and also help sick people enjoy their life.On the other hand, I can keep not only other people but also my family healthy.When they are ill, I can give them some advice on health.I love my hometown and I love the people there.So I want to be a doctor.At present.I must study hard so that I can learn more knowledge.Then I may go to a medical university.If I am a doctor, I will work hard and try my best to help other people.I hope my dream will come true.十、最喜爱的学科

13、My Favourite Subject My favourite subject is Chinese teacher.I like it because I have a lovely Chinese teacher.She is very kind to us.She teachers us very carefully.And her classes are very interesting and funny.In Chinese class, I always listen carefully ahd take notes.I am not afraid of making mistakes in learning.I often read Chinese novels and watch the TV program-Quiz Show after school.That not only makes me know great Chinese culture and history, but also helps me improve my Chinese skills.Thanks to my Chinese teacher, I will learn Chinese better!

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.十一、环保

14、从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料供袋，从而掀起了全国性的“拒塑”环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

写作提示：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋.2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本.3.离开教室应关灯.4.走路或骑自行车上学龄前5.简述理由: 保护环境,减少污染,节约能源等 写作要求: 1.词数90词左右

2.可根据要点适当增加细节,使文章连贯，3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名,否则以零分处理.What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone.I'm Li Hua.It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

第四篇：中考英语书面表达 命题作文

中考英语书面表达 命题作文

命题作文就是我们依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。

写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：

一、审准题目：文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是“跑题”作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。

二、构思结构：就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。

三、选择材料：这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。

四、表达：就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式：

1、记叙文类；

2、说明文类；

3、议论文类。

下面就谈一谈记叙文的写作

记叙文就是以记叙人物的经历或事物发展变化过程为主的一种文章。在初中写作训练中,记叙文是最基本,最常见,最重要的书面表达形式。记叙文有“六要素”即指“时间,地点,人物和事 件的起因,经过和结果”。一篇记叙文只要把这些要素写清楚,文章就会内容具体, 眉目清晰,中心意思明确。一般情况下,这六要素中的人物,时间,地点作为开端,要写在文章的开头。事件,原因常作为记叙文的段落发展,又称为文章的主体部分,应该放在文章的中间。结果作为记叙文的结局常放在文章的末尾处。

记叙文从写作的线索上来看,有三种表现形式：

1、以人物为主,围绕人物组织材料。

2、以事物为中心,围绕事件组织材料或围绕事件写人。

3、以写景状物,描写为主。

写好记叙文应注意以下几点:

1、明确写作目的:写文章的目的就是确切表达一个中心思想,文章的一切内容应自始自终地为展开中心服务。

2、选择细节材料:选择好的细节材料就是为了更好地表现主题,所选择的材料要有代表性,典型性。写作内容要详略得当,主要情节应详细写,次要内容要简略或概述。

1)关于写人物,一般要把某人的年龄,外貌和性格特征,人物行为,心理活动等方面简要概括出来。同时要略加点评或感想。

2)关于写事件,事件是记叙的核心,往往有它的起因,经过和结局。写事件要比较详细地交代事情的来龙去脉,同时要重点突出,表达精练,防止渲染。

3、恰当的选择写作方法:记叙文的写作方法就是指写作的顺序,文章先写什么,后写什么都要有一定顺序。

中考经典展示：

(1)以My Mother为题写一篇短文。(2003扬州)

内容要点:1.我的妈妈是护士,工作努力。2.上个月去北京,抗击SARS(fight against)。3.一个月没有回来。4.保护我们免受侵害。5.我爱妈妈,为妈妈自豪。

标题已给出，要求1.写清时间 2.要点要完整 3.可适当增加内容 4.字数在60个词左右

(2)班会上,老师要求每位同学用英语介绍自己的一位朋友,请你根据所提供的要点为题写一篇短文。(2003南京)

要点:1.Who is he / she。2.When and where did you get to know him / her。3.Why do you like him / her。注意:1.文章的开头和结尾已给出(不计入词数)2.词数60-80,须包括以上要点,可适当增加细节使短文意思通畅。3.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。4.文中不得出现真实的人名。校名等相关信息。

写作实践范例

以“My Chinese Teacher”为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:

1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。

2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。

3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。My Chinese Teacher Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we're getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.新题导练

请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文

要求:

1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。

2、字数在100字以内。

思路点拨

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以

一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

参考范文： My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived, and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.

第五篇：2014年中考英语书面表达

2014年广东中考预测之书面表达

2007-2013年广东韶关真题写作 07广东

I think the most important invention of all the time is the mobile phone.We all know that many years ago it was very difficult for us to send and get information from one place to another.It is the mobile phone that makes it very easy to get information from all over the world.Parents can use the mobile phone to get in close touch with their kids.And we can also enjoy the music or films/a film through the mobile phone.08广东SaturdayJune 12thCloudy

badly ill when Hong was 11 and his mother left them.He had to look after his father and sister.He didn’t accept helps from others and depended on his own.He was a superman in my eyes.No one can avoid facing difficulties.But many teenagers are too weak to face troubles.Learn to be strong and never say “I can’t”, tomorrow will be another fine day.(82 words)

09广东The Teacher I Never Forget

How time flies!Three years has passed since I became a middle school student.I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers.The teacher I never forget is Mr Zhang, an English teacher.He’s a tall man with thick glasses.He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.He’s humorous and always makes his class lively and interesting.He’s kind but is strict with us.He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang.I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.10广东How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example，one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway．Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor．Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways．And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running．At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school．(82 words)

11广东My Earth Hour 2011（有参与）

The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year.It was the moment my friends and I

waited for a long time.We talked and played games at home with all the lights off.We were glad to be in the Earth Hour.As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment.For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping.Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.I think we can care for the earth by doing so.Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.(90 words)

12广东 社会公共行为举止 when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.13广东 面对谎言 Hongxing Middle School.Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor.I offered to do the cleaning for him.Later I found him playing basketball on the playground.I was quite unhappy.He didn’t tell the lie.I would do the duty for him if he asked.As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us.When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.13广东面对骗局 Hongxing Middle School.Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter.If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck.But if I didn’t , I would die the next day.I was so scared that I sent it to

some of my friends.As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters.If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.13广东面对谣言 Hongxing Middle School.I heard a rumor of the same kind this year.It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that.So it was sold out in our city very soon.I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all.I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors.Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.2014年广东中考书面表达预测——十大考点

(一)时事新闻, 国家政策, 家乡变化(六)旅游和介绍地方篇

(二)健康问题(七)新生事物评价

(三)关于环境保护问题(节约用水、用电、保护动物)(八)梦想和未来

(四)语言学习(九)烦恼篇

(五)写人记事篇（重点+好人好事）(十)社会准则, 公共道德

1.作弊问题

今年1月央视新闻频道报道,个别培训机构在2014年MBA招生考试中,通过考前发放无线电作弊器材、考中传送考试答案等方式组织考生在哈尔滨理工大学考点进行作弊。目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原

因以及个人建议。原因：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够3.考生自拟4.考生自拟看法与建议：至少两点（考生自拟）

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.2.珍惜时间

2014年2月7日，国家主席习近平在俄罗斯索契接受俄罗斯电视台专访时谈到：“今年春节期间，中国央视春晚上一首《时间都去哪儿了》唱入了人们的心中。对我来说，问题在于我个人的时间都去哪儿了？当然是都被工作占去了。我经常能做到的是读书，读书已成了我的一种生活方式。”而对于我们中学生来说，又应该怎样节约时间呢？

How to save time

We have ever heard of “Time is money.Time is life.” Time is very important to everyone.But we can see people waste their time everywhere.They spend much time playing computer games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on.It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class.We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time.If we can make good use of time, we are sure to get more.3.环境问题

在全国各地召开的2014年地方“两会”上，参会者都不约而同瞄准了“治霾”。造成雾霾这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以 “Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80词的短文。

提示：1.重要性：只有一个地球2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然

参考词汇：disaster n.灾难protect v.保护

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

We all live in the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it, it will be angry.And then we will have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.It’s our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution.We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.Protecting the nature is very important.It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.4.卫生健康饮食

健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。

1.保持健康的重要性2.保持健康的方法3.保持健康的结论(你的看法?)(1)多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物(2)多锻炼健身强体(3)鄙弃不良习惯(你的看法?)

How to keep healthy?

Dear boys and girls,It's very important for the teenagers to have good health.We are growing up.We need to study hard.If we don't have good health, we can't do anything well.And it's bad for our future.Here are some of my suggestions.First we’d better do more exercise such as playing basketball, running or swimming.Then we should have a balanced diet.Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third we need enoughsleep or rest.Next keep ourselves happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last we mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for our health.I hope we are healthy and enjoy our life.健康问题典型例句

1.It is very important to keep healthy.7.I didn't feel like eating anything.2.How can we keep healthy? 8.I decided to see the doctor.3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late.9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.4.We should eat the food healthily.10.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.5.We should do more exercise.11.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a

6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.day.12.He said, “Nothing is serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.5.网上购物Shopping Online

So far the Internet has been popular with people especially teenagers.People can do many kinds of interesting thing on it.With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.However, there's always a trap(陷阱)online.If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.6.你有微博吗？请写一篇短文，内容包括：1）青少年使用微博的利与弊（至少两点）；2）青少年应该如何使用微博。

On the one hand, it’s probably one of the fastest ways to send and receive messages.And it’s fun in playing micro-blog as well as getting the latest news.On the other hand, it takes time and energy to play it.Sometimes it’s not good for our study and health if we spend too much time on it.So I think as teenagers, we should concentrate more on our schoolwork.We should make good use of it and be careful of all the information on it because some of it is not true.7.关于汽车普及的现象的看法

目前，在中国汽车越来越普及，你对这一现象的看法，内容包括： 1）汽车普及的现象；2）它给人们带来的好处和坏处；3）你提出一些好的建议。

cheaper and cheaper.Having a car, you can travel to anywhere you like.You don’t have to wait for the bus and you can go to a far place with your family on holiday.Although cars can make people’s life easier, it brings problems.There may be more traffic jams and it will bring about more air pollution.In my opinion, some roads should be widened(拓宽)and more new roads should be constructed.The government should take measures to control the air pollution from the cars.Only in this way will people enjoy the life with cars.8.与父母相处的话题

(一)假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整；2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；3.词数在80左右

Dear Han Mei,I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on.I'm annoyed.What shall I do?

Alice

Dear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.(二)对父母的感恩

Through it I know that we should live with a thankful heart.At that time, I think of my parents who are the first people I should thank.They gave me life.They give me home, bring me up and look after me.I cannot thank them too much.Maybe I should think how to pay back the love my parents give me.But now I think the best way to be appreciated of my parents is to study well and then being a useful person to the society when I grow up.9.建设和谐社会

假设你是张涛，是“某某一中”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会’’的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。

要点提示：1．人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心2．人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助

3．人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护4．你的态度：(内容由考生自己拟定)

Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”.I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do?

First of all, we should love our motherland.Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.Secondly, let’s fill the world with love.We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers.We should also care for each other and help those in need.More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students, let’s start fight now and spare no effort(不遗余力地)to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!

Zhang Tao

10.计划愿望

I have made up my mind to do something meaningful after senior high school entrance examination(中考).First I amgoing to travel so that I can feel beauty of the nature and enjoy the fresh air as well as relax after the busy middle school.Nextin order to get ready for my high school life, I will preview(预习)the lessons during the summer holiday.What’ more, I willmake up English, such as reading English every morning, memorizing English words and write five sentences in English.At last I will do some chores at home for my parents.My parents are busy with their work and spend a lot of time looking after me.I want to do something for them and make them relax.I am looking forward to my coming holiday.I hope I can have a relaxing holiday.11．朋友

人的一生离不开朋友，在人生的不同阶段有着不同的朋友。初中三年的学习生活即将结束，请以“The Friendship Between My Friends and Me”为题写一篇作文。

内容包括：1）你交了几个好朋友？2）你们成为好朋友的理由（至少两条）。

The Friendship between My Friends and Me

school life, I have made three good friends.Here are the reasons why we can be good friends.First, we can learn from each other.If someone has anything in his study, we will discuss it together.Second, we can help each other.When someone is in trouble or unhappy, the others will try their best to help him out and cheer him up.Third, we mostly agree with each other and never argue with each other.I think I am so lucky to have such good friends.We will be good friends forever.12．成功与失败

Failure is so common in our life.When we fail in doing something, we often feel so sad that we have no interest in other things.Sometimes failure can also make us lose heart.Therefore, no one wants to be a failure.Success is what we all hope for, because it can bring us a sense of pride and happiness.However, failure is the mother of success.One failure doesn’t mean you can never be successful.It depends on what we do to deal with failure.Those who are always afraid of failure and can’t get over it will never win.But as long as we can get some lessons and experience from our failure, we’ll be sure to succeed.