第一篇:2011中考英语书面表达必背
2011中考英语书面表达应对策略及必背范文
【考点扫描】
书面表达是每年中考必考题型,是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式:
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条;
2、看图作文;
3、根据汉语提示作文。
无论是那一种书面表达形式,考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺,要素完整,语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误,标点符号正确,能达到交际目的。
【名师解难】
一.训练方法
1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话,叫“熟读唐诗三百首,不会吟诗也会作”。同样,要使自己具有较强的写作能力,首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯,相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯,不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法,同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里,自己写起文段来,就可以做到脱口而出,或是模仿、套用,甚至发挥。
2.练。每练一篇书面表达题,都要真正学到一点东西,不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始,到写单句,然后到写几句话,最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作,如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文,并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯,考试时就能得心应手。
二.应试策略
1.审题目:要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2.圈要点:防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3.列提纲:为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下,形成提纲。
4.定基调:定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
5.写全文:写短文时要做到以下六个方面:
(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重
复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1)语态、时态要准确无误。
2)主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4)注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:
1)表示并列关系的:and, as well as, or… 2)表示转折关系的:but, yet, however… 3)表示时间关系的:when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4)表示因果关系的:so, therefore ,as a result… 5)表示目的的:in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6)表示列举的:for example , such as… 7)表示总结性的:in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达,另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
6.改病句:认真检查,改正错误。中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
1)格式是否有错。
2)拼写有无错误。
3)语言是否用错。
4)时态、语态错误。
5)标点错误。
6)人称是否用错。
三.注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整,卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文,工作量之大,时间之紧,可想而知。书写是否工整,卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。
范文
1.保护环境是人类永恒的话题,随着环境的日益恶化,自然灾害越来越多,近来地震的破坏也日益频繁,尤其是近日日本发生的大地震,使得我们认为人类赖以生存的地球已经面临严重的威胁。如何保护环境就成为人类最重要的任务之一,人人应该有责任保护环境保护我们这个地球家园。请以“How to Protect the Environment”为题写一篇短文,阐述我们应该如何从身边做起来保护环境
内容提示:1 环境的现状:越来越糟糕,自然灾害(natural disasters)越来越多,地震的危害
严重威胁到了人类的安全;好的环境能给人类带来健康和快乐,改善环境意味着保护人类自己,提高生活质量环境保护的具体建议:要点自己拟定
注意: 1 语句准确、流畅,内容要点完整可根据实际情况适当发挥字数:70个左右。
How to Protect the Environment
The environment is getting worse and worse.More and more natural disasters are appearing, and there have been happened so many strong earthquakes recently in the world, especially in Japan.Good environment can make people feel happy and fit.To improve the environment means improving our life.We mustn’t cut down trees.Instead, we should plant more trees and flowers around us.Meanwhile, we should stop factories from pouring waste water into rivers and giving off waste gas into the air.Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins.Never spit in public.Don’t draw on public walls.It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment.2.最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果:
1.节水节电;
2.垃圾分类;
3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;
4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇:低碳low carbon纸巾tissue
注意:词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数);可适当增加细节了,以使行文连贯;开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考范文:
Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal oflow carbon life.First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Saving water also matters much.Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal.ln addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down.More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.3.Sunshine in My Life
提示:生活中处处满着阳光,每个人都会得到同学的帮助,朋友的支持,老师的关心,亲人的爱护,让你感受到生活中的阳光和幸福。请写一件你经历过的事,说明生活是美好的。要求:1.请根据所给的题目,用英语写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
4.随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如淘宝网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。参考范文:
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages ofinternet shopping these days.Some students think it's very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet.The shop on Internet for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if we like.What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.However, some students disagreed with them.we can't see the things while we are shopping.so we are not sure whether they are good or not.Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.5.许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
●我的压力是什么;
●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
参考范文:
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!
8.2011年全国实施公共场所禁烟规定,针对这一话题,某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况进行了一次调查,结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1.对调查结果进行描述;
2.表明自己的看法并提出建议;
3.词数在80左右。
提示词: do a survey about„(做一个有关„„的调查)
3% of the students(百分之三的学生)
参考范文
A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do.In other words, 10% of the students smoke.That’s terrible.As we know, smoking is harmful to our health.Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it.Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money.Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends.It’s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.In all, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.11.写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。(词数:50~80,不包括已经给出的单词)
Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.13.人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
1.广交朋友 1.浪费时间 ?
2.可自由表达思想 2.影响学习
3.有利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗
注:字数100—120之间。(书写不整齐者,酌情扣分。)
【参考范文】
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.The internet helps make many friends.Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
第二篇:中考英语书面表达必背句型
中考英语书面表达必背句型
1.The reason why+句子.....is that+句子:.....的原因是......2.So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子:如此。。以至于。。
3.形容词+as+主语+be: 虽然。。。
4.The+比较级...the+比较级。。:愈。。愈。。
5.By+V-ing,....can....:通过。。能够。。
6.There is no one but.....:没有人不。。
7.For the past+时间,主语+现在完成时:过去。。以来。。一直。。
8.Since+主语+过去式,主语+现在完成时:自从。。以来。。一直。。
9.Get into the habit of :养成。。的习惯
10.Thanks to :多亏,由于
11.What a /an+adj.+n.+.....!=How+adj.+a/an+n.+.....!:。。多么。。!
12.Have a great influence on。。:对。。有很大的影响
13.As soon as:一。。就。。
14.(not)as/so....as:(不)和。。一样。。
15.As....as possible:尽可能。。的16.Be afraid of doing sth./that:害怕做某事,担心。。
17.Be busy doing sth.:忙于做某事。
18.Be famous for....:以。。著名
19.Both...and.....:两者都。。
20.Buy sb.sth.:为某人购买某物。
21.Give sth.to sb.:把某物给某人
22.Either....or....:要么。。要么。。
23.Enjoy doing sth.:喜欢做某事
24.Get+比较级:变得越来越。。
25.Get on with.....:与。。相处
26.Get ready for...../get sth.ready:为。。作准备/准备好某事
27.Had better(not)do :最好(不要)做
28.Help sb.(to)do/help sb.with sth.:帮助某人做某事
29.Don’t think that.....:认为。。不
30.Would like to....:想。。
31.It takes sb.sometime to do sth.:做某事花费某人。。时间
32.It’s bad/good for: 对。。有好处/害处
33.It’s adj.for sb.to do sth.:对于某人来说做某事。。
34.It’s time for sb to do sth.:对于某人来说是做某事的时间了。
35.Keep sb doing sth.:让某人一直做某事
36.Keep/make sth.+adj.:让某事物一直。。
37.Make/let sb(not)do sth.:让某人(不)做某事
38.Neither...nor...:既不。。也不。。
39.Not at all:根本不
40.Not only....but also.....:不仅。。而且。。。
41.Not.....until:直到。。才
42.One....the other/some...others:一个。。另一个/一些。。另一些。
43.See/hear sb do/doing sth.:看见某人做了/正在做某事。
44.So....that....:如此。。以至于。。
45.Spend...on/in doing sth.:在某事/做某事上方面花费。。
46.Stop/prevent sb.from doing sth.:阻止某人做某事
47.Stop to do/doing:停下来去做某事/停下来做某事
48.Take/bring sth with sb.:随身携带。。
49.There is something wrong with....:。。出了问题
50.Too.....to。。:太。。而不能。。
51.Used to:过去常常
52.What about.../How about...:。。怎么样呢?
53.Why not....:为什么不。。
54.Can’t help doing sth.:情不自禁做某事
55.So+be/have/助动词/情态动词+主语:。。也是如此
56.It’s better to do...than(to)do...:干。。比干。。好
57.It seems+that从句:似乎。。
58.There be+sb/sth doing sth.:某人或某物正在做某事
59.Be sure to do sth.:肯定,必定(发生)
60.Be sure of /about:对。。有把握
61.Be sure+从句:相信。。
62.Enjoy oneself:玩得高兴
63.Hope to do sth./that从句:希望做某事
64.Wish to do sth./that从句:希望。。
65.Not...any more:不再。。
66.Agree with:同意
67.Invite sb to do sth:邀请某人做某事
68.Be worth sth.:值。。
69.Be worth doing sth.:值得做某事
70.Be sorry for.....:对。。感到遗憾
71.Rather than:而非
72.Have trouble(in)doing sth.:做某事有困难
73.Succeed in doing sth.:成功做某事
74.Remember to do sth.:记得做某事
75.Be allowed to do sth.:被允许做某事
76.Allow sb.to do sth.:允许某人做某事
77.Allow doing sth.:允许做某事
78.Promise to do sth.:允诺做某事
79.Be used to do sth.:被用来做某事
80.Be used to(doing)sth.习惯于(做某事)
81.Take turns to do sth.:轮流做某事
82.It’s one’s turn to do sth.:轮到某人做某事
83.Be surprised at....:对。。感到惊讶
84.Ask sb for sth.:向某人要某物
85.Try to do sth.:尽力做某事
86.Chat with sb.:和某人聊天
88.Try one’s best to do sth.:尽最大努力去做某事
89.Use sth.for doing sth.:利用某物来做某事
90.Refuse to do sth.:拒绝做某事
91.Order sb.to do sth.:命令某人做某事
92.In order to do sth.:为了做某事
93.It’s said that....:据说。。
94.Make up one’s mind to do sth。:下决心做某事
95.It’s one’s first time to do sth.:某人第一次做某事
96.It’s one’s duty to do sth.:做某事是某人的职责
97.Pay....for....:为。。付款
98.Need to do sth.:需要做某事
99.Remind sb to do sth.:提醒某人做某事
100.Plan to do sth.:计划做某事
101.Be careful of.....:注意。。
102.Keep one’s mind on sth.:专心于某事
103.Play a/an....part:扮演一个。。角色;起。。作用 104.No matter what/how。。:不管。。
105.祈使句+and/or+简单句:
106.Have+宾语+过去分词:让人做某事
107.Should have done:本应该做某事
108.Be forced to do sth.:被迫做某事
109.A number of +可数名词的复数:一些,许多。110.The number of +可数名词的复数:。。的数量。111.Practice doing sth.:练习做某事
112.Provide sb with sth.= provide sth.for sb :给某人提供某物 113.Have/has been in。。:一直在。。
114.Have/has gone to....:已经去了某地
115.Be supposed to do sth.:应该做某事
116.There is no doubt that+从句:毫无疑问。。
117.Lose oneself in....:沉迷于。。
118.Keep....away from:使。。远离。。
119.Protect....from...:保护。。不受。。的危害
120.Be satisfied with....:对。。感到满意
121.Warn sb to do sth.:提醒某人做某事
122.Avoid doing sth.:避免做某事
123.Make sure:确保
124.Have/has been to....:曾经到过某地
125.Look forward to:期待,盼望
126.Come up with:想出,提出(主意、计划等)127.Happen to do sth:碰巧干某事
128.How long....:。。多久
129.How far.....:。。多远
130.Forget doing sth.:忘记做过某事
132.Tell sb about sth.,:告诉某人某事
133.BE glad to do sth.:乐意做某事
134.Help yourself to.....:请随便吃/喝。。
135.Be friendly to sb :对某人友好
136.Thank sb for sth/doing sth.:因某事/做某事而感谢某人 137.Be full of :装满,充满
138.What is sb/sth like:某人/某物怎么样?
139.Feel proud of sb.:为某人自豪
140.In the future:将来,未来
141.Pick up :捡起
142.Deal with:解决,应对
143.What if :如果。。怎么办
144.Look after:照顾
145.Be willing to:愿意做
146.Be interested in:对。。感兴趣
147.Make good use of :充分利用
148.Here and there:到处
149.By mistake:错误地;无意地
150.Be suitable for:对。。合适的。
第三篇:期中考试书面表达必背句型
期中考试书面表达必背句型
1.I visited museums/ went to the mountains with my family last vacation.上个假期我和家人参观了博物馆/去爬山。
2.He bought something very special for his friends on his vacation.假期里他为朋友买了些十分特别的东西。
3.It was my first time to go to Hainan, everything was fantastic.这是我第一次去海南,一切都很棒。
4.He really enjoyed walking around the town.他尤其喜欢在小镇上漫步
5.Our plane was late because of the bad weather.So we waited for another two hours.因为天气恶劣,我们的飞机晚点了,于是我们又等了两小时。
6.I usually have dance lessons on Monday.通常我在周一有舞蹈课。
7.He is kind of lazy.He hardly ever helps with housework.他有点懒,他几乎不帮忙做家务。
8.I eat fruit and vegetables at least twice a day because I think they are good for my health.我一天至少吃两次蔬菜水果,因为我觉得他们对我的健康有好处。
9.The best way to relax is through exercise.It is healthy for the mind and the body.最好的休闲方式就是锻炼,对身心都健康
10.My friend is quite different from me.He is more outgoing than me.He sings more loudly than me.我的朋友和我完全不同。他比我更外向,唱得比我更响亮。
11.My sister doesn’t work so/as hard as me.so maybe I should help her more.我妹妹不如我努力,也许我该多帮帮她。
12.Friends are like books –you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good.朋友如书,贵在精不贵在多。
13.I like watching talent shows because they give people a way to make their dreams come true.我喜欢看才艺表演因为他们给人提供了一条可以使人实现梦想的道路。
14.Wanda cinema is the best place to go to on weekend,it has the best service and the newest
movies.万达电影院是周末的最佳去处,它有最好的服务最新的电影。
15.I like watching news because I expect to find out what’s going on around the world.我喜欢看新闻因为我期待去发现世界上正在发生什么。
16.Talk shows are more educational because we can learn a lot form them.脱口秀更有教育意义因为我们可以从中学到很多。
17.I always get good grades in the tests。我总是在考试中取得好成绩。
18.We could come into the house because I forgot to bring the key.我们进不了房子因为我忘带钥匙。
19.The movie shows her love for her family , friends and country.这部电影表现了她对家人朋友国家的爱。
20.The only problem was that there was nothing much to do in the evening but read.唯一的问题就是到了晚上除了看书无事可做。
21.There is something for everyone at the park.每个人都能在在公园里找到适合自己的事。
第四篇:中考英语书面表达 命题作文
中考英语书面表达 命题作文
命题作文就是我们依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。
写命题作文通常要注意以下几点:
一、审准题目:文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是“跑题”作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。
二、构思结构:就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。
三、选择材料:这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。
四、表达:就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:
1、记叙文类;
2、说明文类;
3、议论文类。
下面就谈一谈记叙文的写作
记叙文就是以记叙人物的经历或事物发展变化过程为主的一种文章。在初中写作训练中,记叙文是最基本,最常见,最重要的书面表达形式。记叙文有“六要素”即指“时间,地点,人物和事 件的起因,经过和结果”。一篇记叙文只要把这些要素写清楚,文章就会内容具体, 眉目清晰,中心意思明确。一般情况下,这六要素中的人物,时间,地点作为开端,要写在文章的开头。事件,原因常作为记叙文的段落发展,又称为文章的主体部分,应该放在文章的中间。结果作为记叙文的结局常放在文章的末尾处。
记叙文从写作的线索上来看,有三种表现形式:
1、以人物为主,围绕人物组织材料。
2、以事物为中心,围绕事件组织材料或围绕事件写人。
3、以写景状物,描写为主。
写好记叙文应注意以下几点:
1、明确写作目的:写文章的目的就是确切表达一个中心思想,文章的一切内容应自始自终地为展开中心服务。
2、选择细节材料:选择好的细节材料就是为了更好地表现主题,所选择的材料要有代表性,典型性。写作内容要详略得当,主要情节应详细写,次要内容要简略或概述。
1)关于写人物,一般要把某人的年龄,外貌和性格特征,人物行为,心理活动等方面简要概括出来。同时要略加点评或感想。
2)关于写事件,事件是记叙的核心,往往有它的起因,经过和结局。写事件要比较详细地交代事情的来龙去脉,同时要重点突出,表达精练,防止渲染。
3、恰当的选择写作方法:记叙文的写作方法就是指写作的顺序,文章先写什么,后写什么都要有一定顺序。
中考经典展示:
(1)以My Mother为题写一篇短文。(2003扬州)
内容要点:1.我的妈妈是护士,工作努力。2.上个月去北京,抗击SARS(fight against)。3.一个月没有回来。4.保护我们免受侵害。5.我爱妈妈,为妈妈自豪。
标题已给出,要求1.写清时间 2.要点要完整 3.可适当增加内容 4.字数在60个词左右
(2)班会上,老师要求每位同学用英语介绍自己的一位朋友,请你根据所提供的要点为题写一篇短文。(2003南京)
要点:1.Who is he / she。2.When and where did you get to know him / her。3.Why do you like him / her。注意:1.文章的开头和结尾已给出(不计入词数)2.词数60-80,须包括以上要点,可适当增加细节使短文意思通畅。3.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。4.文中不得出现真实的人名。校名等相关信息。
写作实践范例
以“My Chinese Teacher”为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:
1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。
2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。
3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。My Chinese Teacher Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we're getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.新题导练
请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文
要求:
1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。
2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以
一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文: My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived, and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.
第五篇:2014年中考英语书面表达
2014年广东中考预测之书面表达
2007-2013年广东韶关真题写作 07广东
I think the most important invention of all the time is the mobile phone.We all know that many years ago it was very difficult for us to send and get information from one place to another.It is the mobile phone that makes it very easy to get information from all over the world.Parents can use the mobile phone to get in close touch with their kids.And we can also enjoy the music or films/a film through the mobile phone.08广东SaturdayJune 12thCloudy
badly ill when Hong was 11 and his mother left them.He had to look after his father and sister.He didn’t accept helps from others and depended on his own.He was a superman in my eyes.No one can avoid facing difficulties.But many teenagers are too weak to face troubles.Learn to be strong and never say “I can’t”, tomorrow will be another fine day.(82 words)
09广东The Teacher I Never Forget
How time flies!Three years has passed since I became a middle school student.I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers.The teacher I never forget is Mr Zhang, an English teacher.He’s a tall man with thick glasses.He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.He’s humorous and always makes his class lively and interesting.He’s kind but is strict with us.He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang.I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.10广东How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example,one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway.Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor.Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running.At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.(82 words)
11广东My Earth Hour 2011(有参与)
The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year.It was the moment my friends and I
waited for a long time.We talked and played games at home with all the lights off.We were glad to be in the Earth Hour.As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment.For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping.Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.I think we can care for the earth by doing so.Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.(90 words)
12广东 社会公共行为举止 when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.13广东 面对谎言 Hongxing Middle School.Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor.I offered to do the cleaning for him.Later I found him playing basketball on the playground.I was quite unhappy.He didn’t tell the lie.I would do the duty for him if he asked.As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us.When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.13广东面对骗局 Hongxing Middle School.Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter.If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck.But if I didn’t , I would die the next day.I was so scared that I sent it to
some of my friends.As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters.If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.13广东面对谣言 Hongxing Middle School.I heard a rumor of the same kind this year.It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that.So it was sold out in our city very soon.I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all.I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors.Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.2014年广东中考书面表达预测——十大考点
(一)时事新闻, 国家政策, 家乡变化(六)旅游和介绍地方篇
(二)健康问题(七)新生事物评价
(三)关于环境保护问题(节约用水、用电、保护动物)(八)梦想和未来
(四)语言学习(九)烦恼篇
(五)写人记事篇(重点+好人好事)(十)社会准则, 公共道德
1.作弊问题
今年1月央视新闻频道报道,个别培训机构在2014年MBA招生考试中,通过考前发放无线电作弊器材、考中传送考试答案等方式组织考生在哈尔滨理工大学考点进行作弊。目前,学生考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原
因以及个人建议。原因:1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够3.考生自拟4.考生自拟看法与建议:至少两点(考生自拟)
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.2.珍惜时间
2014年2月7日,国家主席习近平在俄罗斯索契接受俄罗斯电视台专访时谈到:“今年春节期间,中国央视春晚上一首《时间都去哪儿了》唱入了人们的心中。对我来说,问题在于我个人的时间都去哪儿了?当然是都被工作占去了。我经常能做到的是读书,读书已成了我的一种生活方式。”而对于我们中学生来说,又应该怎样节约时间呢?
How to save time
We have ever heard of “Time is money.Time is life.” Time is very important to everyone.But we can see people waste their time everywhere.They spend much time playing computer games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on.It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class.We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time.If we can make good use of time, we are sure to get more.3.环境问题
在全国各地召开的2014年地方“两会”上,参会者都不约而同瞄准了“治霾”。造成雾霾这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,以 “Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80词的短文。
提示:1.重要性:只有一个地球2.主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施:停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇:disaster n.灾难protect v.保护
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
We all live in the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it, it will be angry.And then we will have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.It’s our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution.We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.Protecting the nature is very important.It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.4.卫生健康饮食
健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
1.保持健康的重要性2.保持健康的方法3.保持健康的结论(你的看法?)(1)多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物(2)多锻炼健身强体(3)鄙弃不良习惯(你的看法?)
How to keep healthy?
Dear boys and girls,It's very important for the teenagers to have good health.We are growing up.We need to study hard.If we don't have good health, we can't do anything well.And it's bad for our future.Here are some of my suggestions.First we’d better do more exercise such as playing basketball, running or swimming.Then we should have a balanced diet.Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third we need enoughsleep or rest.Next keep ourselves happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last we mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for our health.I hope we are healthy and enjoy our life.健康问题典型例句
1.It is very important to keep healthy.7.I didn't feel like eating anything.2.How can we keep healthy? 8.I decided to see the doctor.3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late.9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.4.We should eat the food healthily.10.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.5.We should do more exercise.11.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a
6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.day.12.He said, “Nothing is serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.5.网上购物Shopping Online
So far the Internet has been popular with people especially teenagers.People can do many kinds of interesting thing on it.With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.However, there's always a trap(陷阱)online.If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.6.你有微博吗?请写一篇短文,内容包括:1)青少年使用微博的利与弊(至少两点);2)青少年应该如何使用微博。
On the one hand, it’s probably one of the fastest ways to send and receive messages.And it’s fun in playing micro-blog as well as getting the latest news.On the other hand, it takes time and energy to play it.Sometimes it’s not good for our study and health if we spend too much time on it.So I think as teenagers, we should concentrate more on our schoolwork.We should make good use of it and be careful of all the information on it because some of it is not true.7.关于汽车普及的现象的看法
目前,在中国汽车越来越普及,你对这一现象的看法,内容包括: 1)汽车普及的现象;2)它给人们带来的好处和坏处;3)你提出一些好的建议。
cheaper and cheaper.Having a car, you can travel to anywhere you like.You don’t have to wait for the bus and you can go to a far place with your family on holiday.Although cars can make people’s life easier, it brings problems.There may be more traffic jams and it will bring about more air pollution.In my opinion, some roads should be widened(拓宽)and more new roads should be constructed.The government should take measures to control the air pollution from the cars.Only in this way will people enjoy the life with cars.8.与父母相处的话题
(一)假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。提示词语:listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile写作要求:1.语句通顺,书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语,也可以适当发挥;3.词数在80左右
Dear Han Mei,I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on.I'm annoyed.What shall I do?
Alice
Dear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.(二)对父母的感恩
Through it I know that we should live with a thankful heart.At that time, I think of my parents who are the first people I should thank.They gave me life.They give me home, bring me up and look after me.I cannot thank them too much.Maybe I should think how to pay back the love my parents give me.But now I think the best way to be appreciated of my parents is to study well and then being a useful person to the society when I grow up.9.建设和谐社会
假设你是张涛,是“某某一中”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会’’的主题,根据下面所给出的要点提示,用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。
要点提示:1.人与社会:祖国、家乡、学校,热爱关心2.人与人:家人、师长、同学,诚信互助
3.人与自然:能源、环境、动植物,爱惜保护4.你的态度:(内容由考生自己拟定)
Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”.I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do?
First of all, we should love our motherland.Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.Secondly, let’s fill the world with love.We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers.We should also care for each other and help those in need.More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students, let’s start fight now and spare no effort(不遗余力地)to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Zhang Tao
10.计划愿望
I have made up my mind to do something meaningful after senior high school entrance examination(中考).First I amgoing to travel so that I can feel beauty of the nature and enjoy the fresh air as well as relax after the busy middle school.Nextin order to get ready for my high school life, I will preview(预习)the lessons during the summer holiday.What’ more, I willmake up English, such as reading English every morning, memorizing English words and write five sentences in English.At last I will do some chores at home for my parents.My parents are busy with their work and spend a lot of time looking after me.I want to do something for them and make them relax.I am looking forward to my coming holiday.I hope I can have a relaxing holiday.11.朋友
人的一生离不开朋友,在人生的不同阶段有着不同的朋友。初中三年的学习生活即将结束,请以“The Friendship Between My Friends and Me”为题写一篇作文。
内容包括:1)你交了几个好朋友?2)你们成为好朋友的理由(至少两条)。
The Friendship between My Friends and Me
school life, I have made three good friends.Here are the reasons why we can be good friends.First, we can learn from each other.If someone has anything in his study, we will discuss it together.Second, we can help each other.When someone is in trouble or unhappy, the others will try their best to help him out and cheer him up.Third, we mostly agree with each other and never argue with each other.I think I am so lucky to have such good friends.We will be good friends forever.12.成功与失败
Failure is so common in our life.When we fail in doing something, we often feel so sad that we have no interest in other things.Sometimes failure can also make us lose heart.Therefore, no one wants to be a failure.Success is what we all hope for, because it can bring us a sense of pride and happiness.However, failure is the mother of success.One failure doesn’t mean you can never be successful.It depends on what we do to deal with failure.Those who are always afraid of failure and can’t get over it will never win.But as long as we can get some lessons and experience from our failure, we’ll be sure to succeed.