第一篇：高考英语作文能力三大发力点
高考英语作文能力三大发力点
提高英语作文能力的三大发力点。内容是我们表达的思想、讲的故事、抒发的感受；语言是我们在表达内容时涉及到的遣词、造句；结构，就是文中内容和语言的组织形式，即如何分段、每段写什么。语言是内容的载体，内容是语言所表达的内涵，而合理的结构体现着作者清晰的写作思路。
一、关于作文的内容
高考英语作文属于“限制性写作”。所谓的“限制”，就是通过内容要点、提纲、图画、图表等形式，对作文的内容进行限制.。也就是说，大家写的内容都是大同小异的。
比如2011年新课标全国卷，大家都是李华，都在国外上学，都在写求助信——这个大前提是固定的。区别只在于，到底在那几个方面求助而已。
这里，我们要谈到，英语作文和语文作文的考察方向是不一样的。语文作文会考察同学们的思想深刻性、知识丰富性、心态积极性等纯“内容”层面的东西；而英语作文主要考察的是你“对英语这门语言的运用能力”——这是英语应试作文命题的本质特征。
也就是说，同样在写“感谢老师”这个话题（2008陕西卷），某同学写的感谢理由是“老师为祖国做出贡献”，而他的同桌写的是“老师教得好”，此时，老师并不会因为某位同学的思想更加高尚而为给额外加分。老师给分的主要依据是：看谁能够把自己的想法表达得更加清楚！
请试着用英语造句：
1、老师，我感谢你，因为你为祖国做出了巨大的贡献。
2、老师，我感谢你，因为你教得好。请问，这两个句子中，那个更好造？
显然，第二个句子是容易得多的。因为很少有同学能够准确地翻译出“你为祖国做了巨大的贡献”这个句子！（You have been making great devotion to our motherland.）
为什么高分同学写作文如行云流水般一气呵成，而有些同学磨磨蹭蹭半天写不出东西，整天抱怨自己“单词量不够”？这是因为——他想得太难了，他想写他的表达能力驾驭不了的内容！
笔者认为：
1、高考英语作文不应存在“单词不会写”问题，初二水平的孩子照样能写。
2、之所以“单词不会写”，是因为在构思内容的时候，选取了自己表达能力驾驭不了的内容。
那么，到底要写什么样的内容？ 关于作文的内容，笔者提出两个观点：
1、对于题目要求的内容：写得全面。
2、对于需要自己发挥的内容：想得简单。
如2008年山东卷，让你给班上一位新同学提建议，帮助他尽快融入班集体。试题给出三个内容要点：
1、分析他无法融入班集体的原因；
2、给出建议；
3、谈谈你帮助他融入班集体的具体措施。
注意，这三点都是题目要求你写的内容，你都要写进文章里去，只要有一点没写，不管其它写的多么精彩，都将被认为是“没有完成试题规定的写作任务”，将大大被减分！这个就叫做对题目要求的内容：写得全面。
同时我们看到，这三点内容都需要自己进行一定的发挥：到底写什么原因呢？有哪些建议？有什么具体措施？
在思考这三个问题时，就要用到第二个观点：对于需要自己发挥的内容：想得简单。以第一段为例，我们可以想到的内容有：
1、害羞；
2、太爱学习；
3、不爱跟同学聊天；
4、没有找到共同兴趣爱好...5、不懂方言（dialect）；
6、不参加学校活动（school activities）；
这几个内容都非常的简单好写，很容易上手，直接解决了“单词不会”这个写作文的老大难问题。这样看来，只要注意到了“对题目要求的内容写的全面”和“对需要自己发挥的内容想得简单”两个事项，内容方面则再无大碍了。
二、关于作文的语言
在全省同学的作文内容差不多的情况下，老师阅卷主要靠什么依据来判分呢？其中一个依据，就是语言，也就是，你用什么样的语言来表达你的意思。
比如跟朋友分别时，表达“再见”这个意思，一般人就说“再见”，而语言水平高的诗人们则会说：
“孤帆远影碧空尽，唯见长江天际流。” “莫愁前路无知己，天下谁人不识君。” “桃花潭水深千尺，不及汪伦赠我情。”
看到了吗？同样的内容（再见），只要用不同水平的语言表达出来，给人的感觉就大不一样！
大多数考生写作文，都是以“写够字数”作为自己的努力方向，因此习惯性地用初
一、初二的单词、语法知识堆砌自己的命运；而真正的“高手”应该努力尝试使用较高级的语言知识来打造自己的高分作文。这方面的技巧包括：简单词替换、主语替换、句式替换等非常容易操作的技巧。
1、简单词替换：将good等简单词替换为excellent 等高级词汇。注意，在学习使用高级词汇时，应该首先尝试把一些常用词汇进行替换，如good，happy，tired，think about，important等。本文先列举这几个词的高级替换词如下，更详细的“简单词替换”技巧将另外撰文讲解。
good——excellent；
例句：It's an excellent idea for you to make a foreign pen-pal.你想交个外国笔友，这是个很棒的注意。
happy——joyful；
例句：We felt joyful and excited to see so many trees and flowers in the countryside.在乡下看到这么多花和树，让我们感到很开心和激动。
tired——exhausted;
例句：Exhausted as we were, we felt our time and effort worthwhile.虽然很累，我们仍感觉自己的时间和精力花的很值。
think about —— take into consideration / take into account（考虑到）； 例句：We should take into consideration other people's opinion.我们应该考虑其他人的意见。
important —— vital（至关重要的）；
例句：It is vital for us to be brave enough to face challenges in our life.勇于面对人生挑战，对我们来说是至关重要的。
上面这些句子本身都在高考作文里很常用，大家可以马上结合例句，掌握这几个常见词汇的“换词”，并思考和感受“换词”技巧的神奇作用。
2、主语替换：
a.将习惯使用的“用人作主语”换成“用物作主语”（亦称“无灵主语”），如把“I like English.”变成“English is my favourite subject.”或者“English attracts me a lot.”
b.用动名词作主语：把“You should communicate more with your classmates.”改写为“Communicating more with your classmates would be beneficial for you.”
3、句式替换：
a.使用“不完全倒装句”：遇到否定词、形容词这两种常见的“升级标志词”时，可以将句子变成倒装句来表达。如：“I don't believe it.”变成“By no means do I believe it.”或者把“This is a beautiful flower.”变成“So beautiful is the flower that we all like it.” b.使用“强调句”：用“It is + 被强调部分 + that +句子剩余部分”句型，来强调一个句子中的某个成分。事实上，只要是个现成的英语句子，都能拿出某个成分出来强调一下。如：把“I like English most.”改写为“It is English that I like most.”可以看出，强调句型是用起来最方便的高考高级句型。
需要注意，再厉害的句型，一旦重复次数过多，也会显得低俗。因而大家进考场前可以多掌握几种高级句型，就像战士上战场前多带几发子弹一样，在最关键的地方一发一发地用到作文里去。
三、关于作文的结构
刚 才，我们其实分析了高考英语作文的前两个重要的方面，那么，只要注意了内容和语言就够了吗？不是的！除了考虑内容（表达什么）和语言（怎样表达），我们还 要注意用什么样的顺序把整篇文章里的一个个段落、每个段落里的一个个句子组织起来，也就是第三点需要注意的东西：作文的结构。
作文结构研究的是下面两个问题：
1、文章分几段；
2、每段写什么。
高考属于“标准化考试”，在历年真题中，我们发现高考英语作文主要就这么几种：
1、提纲作文；
2、书信等应用文；
3、图画作文1：情景小故事；
4、图画作文2：看图议论文；
5、图表作文；
每年，每份试题，都是拿这五种命题形式中的一种或几种结合起来出题。学员经常问的“某种作文该怎么写？”这样的问题，往往指的就是某种作文应该满足什么样的结构。
在研究每年的高分试卷过程中，我们发现，阅卷老师偏爱的文章往往都是用某些特定的结构组织起来的。如书信作文一般分成三类段落：
1、开头段：
2、中间段；
3、结尾段。
其中，开头段要写出问候、自我介绍、写信缘由、写信目的四种内容；中间段要按照题目的要求进行“具体问题，具体分析”，一般要写原因、建议等内容；结尾段往往是感谢、祝愿、期待回信等客套话。了解了这样的结构，将大大提高作文构思的速度。
书信是很多省份年年必考的题型，关于书信及其他作文类型的具体写法，笔者将另外撰文详解。
总结与顿悟
综上所述，高考作文的发力点在于以下三个：内容、语言、结构。在长期研究过程中，我们发现，高分作文往往满足以下三个特点：
1、内容切题；
2、语言精彩；
3、结构清晰；
针对这三个发力点，李辉建议大家，我们可以有的放矢地进行以下三方面的工作： 第一，内容方面：了 解高考作文常考的话题，结合高中教材，整理背诵一些常考的话题以及这些话题中常见的单词和句子，考试时便可信手拈来，这将大大提高备考的针对性和答题的速 度。这样的话题包括：环境保护、身体健康、优良品质、成功智慧、家庭关系、同学关系（合作）、与老师的关系、外出活动、校园生活、社会问题、科技、文化与 跨文化交流等等。各地试卷和全国卷对这些话题各有侧重，在高考最后复习阶段，应根据本地高考真题和当年的模拟题有针对性地加以准备。第二，语言方面：掌握最容易操作的单词、句子、段落三个层次上的写作技巧，每学到一个新知识点，想想能否在作文中将它使用出来。
第二，结构方面：我们坚决反对“模板式”地生搬硬套，但提倡用合乎英语语言习惯和阅卷教师喜好的“套路”自己打造针对每篇文章的个性化模板。
在教学实践中，笔者发现，以这三大发力点设计的全套英语写作课程，能够有效提升学生的分数和自信心。故而取其精华，与广大同学们及各位同行分享，恳请批评指正，惟愿共同提高。
第二篇：高考英语作文提分技巧之“三大发力点”
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在多年教学过程中，新东方在线高中英语辅导名师李辉老师总结出内容、语言、结构是快速提升高中英语作文成绩的三大发力点。内容是我们表达的思想、讲的故事、抒发的感受；语言是我们在表达内容时涉及到的遣词、造句；结构，就是文中内容和语言的组织形式，即如何分段、每段写什么。语言是内容的载体，内容是语言所表达的内涵，而合理的结构体现着你清晰的写作思路。实践表明，只要在这三个方面上有所提升，英语作文分数就能明显提高。
一、关于作文的内容 英语作文属于“限制性写作”。所谓的“限制”，就是通过内容要点、提纲、图画、图表等形式，对作文的内容进行限制.。也就是说，大家写的内容都是大同小异的。
比如2011年新课标全国卷，大家都是李华，都在国外上学，都在写求助信——这个大前提是固定的。区别只在于，到底在那几个方面求助而已。
这里，我们要谈到，英语作文和语文作文的考察方向是不一样的。语文作文会考察同学们的思想深刻性、知识丰富性、心态积极性等纯“内容”层面的东西；而英语作文主要考察的是你“对英语这门语言的运用能力”——这是英语应试作文命题的本质特征。
也就是说，同样在写“感谢老师”这个话题（2008陕西卷），某同学写的感谢理由是“老师为祖国做出贡献”，而他的同桌写的是“老师教得好”，此时，阅卷老师并不会因为前者所表达的思想更加高尚而为其额外加分。阅卷老师给分的主要依据是：看谁能够把自己的想法表达得更加清楚！
请试着用英语造句：
1、老师，我感谢你，因为你为祖国做出了巨大的贡献。
2、老师，我感谢你，因为你教得好。
请问，这两个句子中，那个更好造？
显然，第二个句子是容易得多的。因为很少有同学能够准确地翻译出“你为祖国做了巨大的贡献”这个句子！（you have been making great devotion to our motherland.）
为什么高分同学写作文如行云流水般一气呵成，而你磨磨蹭蹭半天写不出东西，整天抱怨自己“单词量不够”？这是因为——你想得太难了，你的表达能力驾驭不了你想写的内容！辉辉老师认为：
1、高考英语作文不应存在“单词不会写”问题，初二水平的孩子照样能写。
2、之所以“单词不会写”，是因为在构思内容的时候，选取了自己表达能力驾驭不了的内容。
那么，到底要写什么样的内容？
关于作文的内容，辉辉老师提出两个观点：
1、对于题目要求的内容：要写得全面。
2、对于需要自己发挥的内容：要想得简单。
如2008年山东卷，让你给班上一位新同学提建议，帮助他尽快融入班集体。试题给出三个内容要点：
1、分析他无法融入班集体的原因；
2、给出建议；
3、谈谈你帮助他融入班集体的具体措施。
注意，这三点都是题目要求你写的内容，你都要写进文章里去，只要有一点没写，不管其它写的多么精彩，都将被认为是“没有完成试题规定的写作任务”，将大大被减分！这个就叫做对题目要求的内容：要写得全面。
同时我们看到，这三点内容都需要自己进行一定的发挥：到底写什么原因呢？有哪些建议？有什么具体措施？
在思考这三个问题时，就要用到第二个观点：对于需要自己发挥的内容：要想得简单。以第一段为例，我们可以想到的内容有：
1、害羞；
2、太爱学习；
3、不爱跟同学聊天；
4、没有找到共同兴趣爱好...5、不懂方言（dialect）；
6、不参加学校活动（school activities）；
这几个内容都非常的简单好写，很容易上手，直接解决了“单词不会”这个写作文的老大难问题。这样看来，只要注意到了“对题目要求的内容写的全面”和“对需要自己发挥的内容想得简单”两个事项，内容方面则再无大碍了。
二、关于作文的语言
在全省同学的作文内容差不多的情况下，老师阅卷主要靠什么依据来判分呢？其中一个依据，就是语言，也就是，你用什么样的语言来表达你的意思。
比如跟朋友分别时，同意表达“再见”这个意思，一般人只会说“再见”二字，而语言水平高的诗人们则会说： “孤帆远影碧空尽，唯见长江天际流。” “莫愁前路无知己，天下谁人不识君。”
“桃花潭水深千尺，不及汪伦赠我情。”
看到了吗？同样的内容（再见），只要用不同水平的语言表达出来，给人的感觉就大不一样！
大多数考生写作文，都是以“写够字数”作为自己的努力方向，因此习惯性地用初
一、初二的单词和语法知识来堆砌自己的命运；而真正的“高手”应该努力尝试使用较高级的语言知识来打造自己的高分作文。这方面的技巧包括：简单词替换、主语替换、句式替换等非常容易操作的技巧。
1、简单词替换：将good等简单词替换为excellent 等高级词汇。注意，在学习使用高级词汇时，应该首先尝试把一些常用词汇进行替换，如good，happy，tired，think about，important等。本文先列举这几个词的高级替换词如下，更详细的“简单词替换”技巧将另外撰文讲解。
good——excellent；
例句：it's an excellent idea for you to make a foreign pen-pal.你想交个外国笔友，这是个很棒的注意。happy——joyful； 例句：we felt joyful and excited to see so many trees and flowers in the countryside.在乡下看到这么多花和树，让我们感到很开心和激动。tired——exhausted;
例句：exhausted as we were, we felt our time and effort worthwhile.虽然很累，我们仍感觉自己的时间和精力花的很值。
think about —— take into consideration / take into account（考虑到）；
例句：we should take into consideration other people's opinion.我们应该考虑其他人的意见。
important —— vital（至关重要的）；
例句：it is vital for us to be brave enough to face challenges in our life.勇于面对人生挑战，对我们来说是至关重要的。
上面这些句子本身都在高考作文里很常用，大家可以马上结合例句，掌握这几个常见词汇的“换词”，并思考和感受“换词”技巧的神奇作用。
2、主语替换：
a.将习惯使用的“用人作主语”换成“用物作主语”（亦称“无灵主语”），如把“i like english.”变成“english is my favourite subject.”或者“english attracts me a lot.”
b.用动名词作主语：把“you should communicate more with your classmates.”改写为“communicating more with your classmates would be beneficial for you.”
3、句式替换：
a.使用“不完全倒装句”：遇到否定词、形容词这两种常见的“升级标志词”时，可以将句子变成倒装句来表达。如：“i don't believe it.”变成“by no means do i believe it.”或者把“this is a beautiful flower.”变成“so beautiful is the flower that we all like it.”
b.使用“强调句”：用“it is + 被强调部分 + that +句子剩余部分”句型，来强调一个句子中的某个成分。事实上，只要是个现成的英语句子，都能拿出某个成分出来强调一下。如：把“i like english most.”改写为“it is english that i like most.”可以看出，强调句型是用起来最方便的高考高级句型。需要注意，再厉害的句型，一旦重复次数过多，也会显得低俗。因而大家进考场前可以多掌握几种高级句型，就像战士上战场前多带几发子弹一样，在最关键的地方一发一发地用到作文里去。如果你想快速掌握更多写作技巧，可以报名新东方在线网络课程《高考英语15天快速提分班》，新东方在线辉辉老师将手把手将你培训成写作达人！
三、关于作文的结构
刚才，我们其实分析了高考英语作文的前两个重要的方面，那么，只要注意了内容和语言就够了吗？不是的！除了考虑内容（表达什么）和语言（怎样表达），我们还要注意用什么样的顺序把整篇文章里的一个个段落、每个段落里的一个个句子组织起来，也就是第三点需要注意的东西：作文的结构。
作文结构研究的是下面两个问题：
1、文章分几段；
2、每段写什么。高考属于“标准化考试”，在历年真题中，我们发现高考英语作文主要就这么几种：
1、提纲作文；
2、书信等应用文；
3、图画作文1：情景小故事；
4、图画作文2：看图议论文；
5、图表作文；
每年，每份试题，都是拿这五种命题形式中的一种或几种结合起来出题。学员经常问的“某种作文该怎么写？”这样的问题，往往指的就是某种作文应该满足什么样的结构。
在研究每年的高分试卷过程中，我们发现，阅卷老师偏爱的文章往往都是用某些特定的结构组织起来的。如书信作文一般分成三类段落：
1、开头段：
2、中间段；
3、结尾段。
其中，开头段要写出问候、自我介绍、写信缘由、写信目的四种内容；中间段要按照题目的要求进行“具体问题，具体分析”，一般要写原因、建议等内容；结尾段往往是感谢、祝愿、期待回信等客套话。了解了这样的结构，将大大提高作文构思的速度。
书信是很多省份年年必考的题型，关于书信及其他作文类型的具体写法，辉辉老师将另外撰文详解。总结与顿悟
综上所述，高考作文的发力点在于以下三个：内容、语言、结构。在长期研究过程中，我们发现，高分作文往往满足以下三个特点：
1、内容切题；
2、语言精彩；
3、结构清晰； 针对这三个发力点，辉辉老师建议大家有的放矢地进行以下三方面的工作：
第一，内容方面：了解高考作文常考的话题，结合高中教材，整理背诵一些常考的话题以及这些话题中常见的单词和句子，考试时便可信手拈来，这将大大提高备考的针对性和答题的速度。这样的话题包括：环境保护、身体健康、优良品质、成功智慧、家庭关系、同学关系（合作）、与老师的关系、外出活动、校园生活、社会问题、科技、文化与跨文化交流等等。各地试卷和全国卷对这些话题各有侧重，在高考最后复习阶段，应根据本地高考真题和当年的模拟题有针对性地加以准备。
第二，语言方面：掌握最容易操作的单词、句子、段落三个层次上的写作技巧，每学到一个新知识点，想想能否在作文中将它使用出来。第二，结构方面：我们坚决反对“模板式”地生搬硬套，但提倡用合乎英语语言习惯和阅卷教师喜好的“套路”自己打造针对每篇文章的个性化模板。
在教学实践中，辉辉老师从这三大发力点出发，设计了新东方在线《高考英语15天快速提分班》的作文部分，帮助大家在最短时间内完成以上三方面工作，帮助大量学员提高了作文成绩。在百度搜索新东方在线即可查询。欢迎你加入他们，成为高考英语提分军团中的一员。
第三篇：高考英语作文100篇(三)
高考英语作文100篇
（三）41、请根据下列提示，以“Road Safety”为题，写一篇短文。（字数：120—150)提示：每年有不少人在交通事故中伤亡。为使交通安全，要牢记如下交通规则：
(1)骑车要靠右行；(2)遇见红灯时不能向左拐或横穿马路；
(3)转弯或停车时要打手势；(4)穿过马路，要做到一停二看三通过；
(5)要帮助老人或孩子安全穿过马路；(6)要教育小孩不要在马路上玩耍或骑车。
42、请你写一篇题为“我们的班长”的短文，字数在100—120个之间。简况如下：
(1)她叫李敏，个子高，身体好，很活泼。她各科成绩都好，喜欢体育活动，又能歌善舞。
(2)她刚进校时，在英语学习上遇到不少困难。但她不怕苦，不怕难，努力把英语学好。
(3)她严于律己，乐于助人，是大家学习的好榜样。
43、请你根据下面的提示，写一篇题为“The Seasons”的短文，字数在120～140之间。提示：(1)春季，天气转暖，万物苏醒。农民忙于播种。
(2)夏季，天气炎热，雨量充足，对农民来说是个繁忙的季节。
(3)秋季，气候适宜，白天碧空万里，夜间繁星点点，是一个收获的季节。
(4)冬季，昼短夜长，天气寒冷，但农民却忙于准备来年的春耕。
44、请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。
提纲：(1)家乡的地理位置；(2)解放前的情况；(3)解放后的变化；(4)对家乡的感情。
45、假设上星期天上午，你与你朋友骑自行车去参观北京动物园，路上花了半个小时。到达那里时，看见游客已经很多。北京动物园很大，里面有几百种动物，可以看上一天。因此，你们只看了几种最有趣的动物。先看大象，然后看猴，最后看熊猫。你们在动物园玩得很高兴。
请根据上面提示，以“参观北京动物园”为题，写一篇120字左右的和短文。
46、昨天上午，你惊悉你的朋友阿里（Allee）被一辆汽车撞伤住了院，事情经过是：那天阿里正要穿过大街。他很小心，直到看到绿灯亮时才开始过街。可他刚要走到街心时，右侧(right-hand side)突然出现了一辆轿车，径直朝他开来。他躲闪（dodge）不及被撞出了几米远。他立即被进医院，并动了手术。昨晚你去看他时，他虽已脱险，但仍脸色苍白。
请以“A
Traffic Accident”为题，写一篇110—130字的短文概述这件事。
47、说明：李平（Li Ping）的哥哥是个解放军战士。请根据下面的提示为他写一篇简单介绍。内容要点如下：
(1)个子高、英俊、眼睛大、肩膀宽。
(2)1971年出生。在中学是个好学生。十七岁中学毕业，然后参军。
(3)在部队里，学习认真，积极参加军事训练（military training）。
(4)1991年到安徽参加抗洪斗争（洪水灾害：the flood disaster），做了许多好事。
(5)昨天下午来校作报告。
注意：(1)介绍须包括所给内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。(2)字数：80—120。
48、说明： 假定你们昨天到附近一个村庄帮助农民收割庄稼，请用英语写一篇短文，叙述这次支农劳动。内容要点如下：
(1)虽遭水灾（flood disaster），丰收仍然在望（in sight）。
(2)村庄离校有半小时路程。一早出发，到达便参加劳动。
(3)农民教你们割稻、捆稻。(4)午餐在田间，饭后稍作休息。
(5)农村景色（scenery）优美，令人陶醉（be fascinated by）。
(6)天黑归来，人累了，但心情愉快。注意：(1)要有标题。(2)记叙须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。(3)字数：80—120。
49、根据下面的提示，用英语写一则80—100字的日记。
提示： 九月十日（星期日）是教师节。这天天气晴朗。上午你参加了学校举行的庆祝会。庆祝会上有几位三十年以上教龄的老师得到了奖章。你的英语教师李老师也是其中之一。晚饭后，你和几位同学一起去看望李老师。李老师表示要将自己的有生之年献给教育事业，并鼓励你们努力学习。你深受鼓舞，决心将来也当一名象李老师那样的教师。50、根据提示，写一篇介绍颐和园的短文。
The Summer Palace： one of the most famous parks in Beijing.Where it is located： in the western suburbs of Beijing.How to get there： by bus or by taxi or by bike What it is like： one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing/big What you can see or do there/What it is famous for： Kunming Lake----man---made lake/Longevity Hill/700---meter Long Corridor/magnificent halls/beautiful gardens Suggestions： go boating on the lake or go for a walk along the corridor or climb the hill and have a beautiful view from the top or look at the big halls or visit small gardens
51、外国留学生Tom是你的同学，他住在友谊宾馆。你到宾馆请他参加明天下午李明的生日晚会，碰巧他不在。你给他留个条子，邀请他参加晚会，同时告诉他去李明家的路线。图中标有*号的地方就是李明家。
52、写一短文论述书本的价值。
53、假设你最近去旅游一次，请把活动情况记述下来。
54、写一则失物招领启事。
在操场拾到绿色书包一个，内有两本新教科书、练习本、袖珍英汉词典一本及铅笔盒一个，请失主到高三年级办公室认领。
高三年级办公室
1995年9月1日
55、假定你的名字叫李童，上个月学校派你去美国。在美国期间，你住在Jane家里。她带你参观和浏览了许多地方。Jane的妈妈为你做了许多可口的饭菜，这一切使你在美国度过了十分美好的日子。写一封感谢款待的信，表示对Jane及其家人的感谢。希望今后有机会在中国以同样的方式招待她。
56、假定你现在在英国进行短期参观访问，你的英国朋友George和Angle给你寄来一张邀请卡。读后写一封拒绝接受邀请的回信。说明你星期五上午要离Oxford去London。在信中表示你希望这次聚会成功、大家玩得高兴。假使你在英国的住址是29East Avenue，Oxford。
57、假定你叫田兵，你的妈妈身体不太好，家中有许多家具。前些日子你家刚刚搬入一个新单元中。在搬家时，你的外国朋友Jack主动帮忙。给他写一封感谢信。表达谢意。信中谈到你将举行一个乔迁之喜的聚会，盼望早日在聚会上再见到他。
58、写一封抱怨信，诉说你日前购买某厂生产的一双皮鞋穿了三次就坏了这一状况，要求厂方退回货款。
59用英语给朋友写一个便条，告诉她今天早晨开会你去晚了，因为自行车出故障了。请她别生气。60、写一则遗失启事。
李燕，高二(4)班学生，本月4日下午在本校大教室遗忘红色长大衣一件，大衣的一个口袋中装有一个小笔记本，另一口袋中装有自行车的钥匙。拾到者请交高二(4)班的班长或本人，我将不胜感谢。高二(4)班教室在1号楼204室。写作-3 〈范文〉
41、Road Safety
Every year a lot of people are killed or injured in road accidents.How can we make the roads safer? Remember the following traffic rules.When you ride a bike, keep to the right side of the road.Don’t cross the road or turn left at a red traffic light.Give a hand signal if you want to turn or stop.Before crossing the road, stop and look both ways, right and left.If the road is clear, it is safe to cross.The correct way to cross is to walk quickly, but not to run.If you run across the road, you may fall down.If you see small children or old people waiting to cross the road, it is a kind deed to help them to cross in safety.We should teach small children not to play or ride on the roads.Always obey these rules, you’ll find it much safer to walk or ride on the road.42、Our Monitor
Li Ming is our monitor.She is tall, healthy and lively.She does well in all subjects.She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing.Li Ming works hard at English.When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language.But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them.She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class.No pains, no gains.With great efforts she made much progress in English study.Li Ming is modest and always ready to help others.She is very strict with herself in her work and daily life.She sets us all a fine example.43、The Seasons
There are four seasons in a year： spring, summer, autumn and winter.In spring the weather gradually gets warmer and everything comes back to life.The peasants are busy with sowing.When summer comes, the weather gets very hot.It rains quite often.It is a busy season for the peasants.Autumn is the best season of the year.The weather is neither too hot nor too cold.The sky is blue and cloudless.At night millions of stars shine in the sky.It is the time for harvest.Winter is the last season of the year.The days become shorter and the nights longer.The weather is cold and windy.But the peasants are still busy preparing for the next spring ploughing.44 My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place.It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town.Many people had no work.They lived a hard life.In 1949 my hometown was liberated.Since then great changes have taken place there.The streets have been widened.Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another.The life of the people is greatly improved.I love my hometown.All the more I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.45、A Visit to Beijing Zoo
Last Sunday morning, my friend and I went to visit the Beijing Zoo.We went by bike.It took us about half an hour to get there.When we got there, it was already crowded with people.There were a lot of foreign visitors, too.It is said that the Beijing Zoo is the largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world.There are hundreds of different kinds of animals.It world take a whole day to see all the animals there.So we decided to see some of the most interesting ones.We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys.Finally we went to see our favourite “friends”--the giant pandas.We were delighted to see them waving to us.We really had a wonderful time in the zoo.46、A Traffic Accident
Yesterday morning, I was surprised to hear that my friend Allee had been hit by a car and was in hospital now.The other day he was going to cross a street.He was very careful and didn’t go until he saw traffic light turn green.But hardly had he got to the middle of the street when he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards him.It was too late for Allee to dodge.He was hit by the car and thrown a few meters away.He was sent to hospital immediately and had an operation.When I went to see him last night, he was out of danger but still looked pale.47、My Brother
Li Ping’s brother is a PLA man.He is a handsome, tall young man with big eyes and broad shoulders.He was born in 1971.He was a good student in school.When he was seventeen, he finished middle school.Then he joined the People’s Liberation Army.In the army, he studied hard and took an active part in the military training.In 1991, he went to Anhui Province to help in fighting against the flood disaster.He did a lot of good deeds there.Yesterday afternoon Li Pings brother came to our school and gave us a talk.We’ve learned a lot from him.48、A Good Harvest
In spite of the flood disaster, a good harvest is still in sight.Yesterday we went to a nearby village to help the peasants get in the crops.We left our school early in the morning.It took us half an hour to reach the village.As soon as we got there, we joined the peasants in their harvesting work.They taught us how to cut rice, and how to tie it.It was in the fields that we had our lunch.After lunch, we had a short rest.We were fascinated by the beautiful scenery of the countryside.It got dark when we returned home.We were very tired, but we felt very happy.49、A Page from My Diary Sunday, Sept.10
Fine
Today is Teachers’ Day.In the morning, I attended the school celebration, at which several teachers were given medals for having completed 30 years of teaching.Mr.Li, my English teacher, was one of them.After supper my classmates and I went to see Mr.Li.He said that he would devote the rest of his life to the cause of education.He also encouraged us to work hard at our lessons.I was inspired by what he said and made up my mind to be a teacher like Mr.Li when I grow up.50、One of the most famous parks to go to in Beijing is the Summer Palace.It is located in the western suburbs of Beijing.It is easy to go there by bus, by taxi of by bike.It is one of the most and biggest parks in Beijing.There is beautiful Kumming Lake in the park.It is a man-made lake.In front of the lake, there is the 700-meter Long Corridor.Behind it is the Longevity Hill.There are some magnificent halls and beautiful gardens in the park.It takes at least half of the day to visit the park.You can go boating on the lake or go for a walk along the corridor or climb the hill and have a beautiful view from the top or look at the big halls or visit small gardens.The best time to visit the park is spring or autumn.51、June 6th Dear Tom，I came to see you but you were out.Tomorrow is Li Ming’s birthday.We will have a birthday party at Li Ming’s tomorrow afternoon.We would be very happy if you will come.Li Ming’s home is not very far from your hotel.When you come you may go straight along Blue Road.Turn right at White Road.Then go across Stone Road.you will find a cinema on your left.Li Ming’s’ house is just beside it.Hope to see you at the party.Yours，Tong Hua
52、Books are called “King’s Treasures/Wealth” because they have something as valuable as gold and silver.They have the riches of knowledge.Kings keep their valuable objects carefully locked up and keep the keys themselves.Nobody can touch their valuable things.Yet the riches of knowledge are entirely different.Anyone can have the key to the riches of knowledge.The key is simply “READING”.Anyone who can read can open the door of the treasure house and go in and take what he likes.Why don’t we therefore learn to read and fill ourselves with the riches of knowledge which everybody admires?
53、I went for a pleasant outing on Saturday with some friends from school.We went to a lovely lake about a hundred kilometres north of here.We left by bus at seven o’clock in the morning and arrived at the lake at eight thirty.We spent the morning swimming and rowing small boats.Then we had lunch in a small restaurant by the lake.After lunch we climbed a large hill behind the lake and enjoyed the beautiful view from the top.We got back to the bus at around four o’clock and then we came back to town.We had a wonderful time.54、Found
September 1, 1995
A green school bag was found on the playground yesterday afternoon.Inside of which there are two new textbooks, exercise books, a pocket English—Chinese dictionary and a pencil-box.Loser is expected to come to the Office of Senior Grade 3 to identify it.55、No 15 Middle School
Xuanwu District
Beijing
China
August 10,1995 Dear Jane，Thank you so much for your hospitality and kindness last month.It was very kind of you to put me up at your house while I was in America.I really appreiate your taking me around delicious.Surely I had a wonderful time in America.I hope I can repay you in the same way in China some time in the future.Best Wishes，Li Tong
56、East Avenue
Oxford
December 6th Dear George and Angie.Thank you very much for the invitation to your housewarming party this Friday.I’d love to come, but I can’t because I will leave Oxford for London on Friday morning.I hope you all have a good time and that your party is a big success.Yours sincerely，Wang Mei57、2 Doorway 1 Building 5
Xi Luo Yuan
Feng T District
June 3 1994 Dear Jack，I am writing to thank you for all the help you gave us in moving into our new flat.As you know, my mother is in poor health and there is a lot of furniture.I know we would never have been able to move all the things into the new flat without your help.I am arranging a housewarming party soon and I look forward to seeing you then.Thank you again for everything you have done for us.Love.Tian Bing
58、Dear Sir，I am writing to you to complain about the shoes I bought a week ago from your shop.Although I have only worn the shoes for three times, the shoes are worn out out, and the shoes are of shape.At your price, I expect high quality.I am returning the shoes to you by post.I expect to receive another pair of better quality or the full refund of the shoes.Sincerely，59、Catherine，I’m sorry I was late for the meeting this morning.There was something wrong with my bicycle.I hope you’re not angry with me.Sally 60、I was careless and lost my red long overcoat in the lecture room on the afternoon of 4th of this month.In one of the pockets there is a small notebook and in the other pocket there is key to my bike.Will the finder please send it either to the monitor of Class 4, Senior Grade 2 or to myself? Many thanks to the finder.Our classroom is in Room 204, Building 1.Li Yan
(Loser)6
第四篇：高考英语作文带翻译(三)
高考英语作文范文带翻译
（三）Health is More Important-健康的重要性
There are many people who think that wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes.He was an American billionaire who got anything he wanted.However, in the last twenty years of his life, his health began to deteriorate and he was miserable.He had the best doctors and nurses.However, he could still find no relief.I realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do what you want to do.So I would like to say don't hurt yourself trying to make money.Instead take care of your body and be happy with what you do have.Health is more important.很多人都认为财富宫比健康更重要。在读到Howard Hughes的故事之前，我也是这么认为的。Howard Hughes是美国的一个亿万富翁，能得到他想得到的任何东西。但是在他生命最后的二十年中，他的身体变得很糟糕，他很悲惨。他有最好的医生和护士，但仍得不到解脱。我意识到在这个世界上，好的身体抵得上所有的金钱。因为即使你有百万美元但身体糟糕，也不能做你想做的事情。因此我想说的是关心你的身体，对你所拥有的一切感到高兴，不要为挣钱损害你的身体。健康更重要。
Which is more important, health or wealth? It is a hot topic among people.I can hardly answer this question.I didn't realize that health is more imporant until I saw a businessman's real life.A successful businessman, one of my father's friends, devoted himseff to his business.He works from morning to night every day.There is no weekends in his mind.He often says, “I must earn much money so that I can get what I want.”Lately, he is ill.Though he has a lot of money, he can do nothing but lie in the hospital's bed.So I think health is more important than wealth.People can do nothing if they are always in poor health, let alone happiness.No matter we are rich or not, we can not ignore the importance of health.健康和财富哪个更重要?这是人们常爱谈论的一个话题。我以前回答不出这个问题，但是现在从一个商人的真实生活中我意识到健康更重要。
我父亲的一位朋友，一个成功的商人，全身心投入到他的工作中。每天从早工作到晚，在他心目中根本没有周末的概念。他经常说：“我必须多挣钱，这样就可以想干什么就干什么。”近来，他病倒了，除了躺在医院病床上，什么也不能做。
所以，我认为健康比财富更重要。如果一个人身体总是不好，他什么也做不成，更不用谈幸福了。不管我们贫穷还是富有，都不能忽视健康的重要性。
Out of School-失学
Now more and more children in the countryside are out of school.One of the reasons is that their parents haven't much money to afford their school.They have to stay at home to earn money to support their families.What a pity!And another reason is that many parents think it is useless for girls to study and they would not like them to go to school.On the other hand, some children are not interested in their lessons and would not like to go to school.I think all the children, including girls, should have the right to receive education.We have the duty to lend them a hand when they are in trouble.All the people should pay attention to the education of children who will play a very important part in the future of our country.现在，越来越多的农村孩子失学了。一个原因是因为他们的父母没有很多的钱供他们上学，他们不得不在家里赚钱养家。太可怜了。另外叶个原因就是很多家长都认为读书对女孩子没用，所以不让她们读书。另一方面，一些孩子对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。
我认为所有的孩子(包括女孩)都有权利接受教育。我们有义务在他们困难时伸出手来帮助他们。人们应当重视孩子的教育问题，因为他们对国家的未来将起到非常重要的作用。
Now in the country areas, there are more and more children out of school.The reasons vary.First, many of the parents are too poor to send their children to school and children have to(Motivational model yuedu.mipang.com)stay at home to get money to support their families.Second, many parents think it useless for girls to study and they would not like them to go to school.Finally, some children are not interested in their lessons and would not like to go school.I think children are the future of our country and all the children including girls should have the opportunities to receive education.Knowledge can change the life of a person.I hope more attention will be paid to the solution of the problem, because children will play a very important part in the future of our country.现在在农村，越来越多的孩子失学了。造成这种情况的原因很多。首先，许多父母太穷了，无法送他们的孩子上学，孩子们不得不在家赚钱养家。另外一个原因是很多家长都认为读书对女孩子无用，所以不让她们读书。最后一个原因是有些孩子对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。
我认为孩子是国家的未来，所有的孩子(包括女孩)都应有机会接受教育。知识能改变人的命运。我希望人们应更重视孩子上学问题的解决，因为他们对国家的未来将起到非常重要的作用。
Net Bar－网吧
With the development of the Intemet, the net bar plays an important role in people's life.More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars.They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with “Meimei” on the net in the bar.Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.随着因特网的发展，网吧在人们生活中扮演了重要的角色。越来越多的人，特别是学生，愿意到网吧去，他们沉迷于在网吧玩电子游戏、结交坏朋友以及和荚眉聊天。一些学生常常在网吧玩到深夜，这些会导致学生的健康和学习问题。现在北京市已关闭了一些网吧，但是，一些学生乘车到郊区的网吧去玩。
庆幸的是，越来越多的家长和学校已经意识到这点。最近，辽宁省锦州市六千多名学生保证远离网吧。学生摆脱掉这种坏习惯是非常必要的。
Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students.It has become quite commom to go there.They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies.It is a good thing.最近，越采越多的人，特别是学生，愿意到网吧去，这已经成为一种普遍的现象。他们花费了大量的宝贵时间泡在网吧里玩电予游戏，结果不仅损害了他们的身体，也对他们的学习产生了不良影响。他们的身体变坏了，学习被忽视了。现在北京市已关闭了一些网吧，但是一些学生乘车到郊区的网吧去玩。
庆幸的是，越来越多的家长和学校已经意识到了这一点。最近，辽宁省锦州市六千多名学生保证远离网吧。大多数的学生充分利用时间，全身心投入到学习中去。这是一件大好事。
第五篇：高考英语满分作文精选三(附翻译)
高考英语满分作文精选三(附翻译)
健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。
提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；
3.饮食要健康；
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；
2.80—100词左右；
3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
【例文】
Dear Dad(Mum),You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I’m worried about your health all the time.I’d like to give you some suggestions.I hear walking is the best sport.Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym.Going to swim is also a nice choice, too.What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food.Try not to stay up too late.Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.Dad, please accept my advice.I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son(daughter)
Tom(Mary)
【翻译】
亲爱的爸爸（妈妈），你每天这么忙，你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡，是吗？为什么不步行到办公室吗？你最好锻炼，每周至少一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是，它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。爸爸，请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康！
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