第一篇:中考英语
【技巧一】:作文成绩看字迹,得分要素是第一
任何形式的作文考试,阅卷老师打分时,第一眼,看的是字迹。因此,写作文必须要把字写好。记住,考作文考的是内容,而不是书法,切忌字迹潦草。
【技巧二】:考试作文五六段,干净整洁看卷面
考试作文中,要注意及时分段,三四个段落显得少了,八九个段落,显得琐碎了些。除非有特殊情况,段落以五六个段落为好。此外,卷面一定要整洁,不要涂改得乱七八糟。我的看法是,考试作文每段最好别超过5行,顶多是5行半。切忌一段都八九行,写成“大肚子作文”。一旦给阅卷老师视觉上的疲劳,影响他的心理,分数就受影响。如果有必要,死拉硬拽也要注意分段。
【技巧三】:色彩对比也关键,建议用笔选择蓝
考试作文的卷子上,都是用黑颜色印刷的方格。如果你用非常粗而且黑的钢笔答题,墨水容易“泄一滩”,影响卷面的干净。建议学生用不浅不深、笔画不粗不细的蓝色中性笔写作文。这样的作文写出来,与黑色的方格形成一定的视觉对比,阅卷老师在视觉上有眼前一亮的感觉,分数上可能就会占便宜。在用蓝色中性笔写作文的时候,注意不要用字把方格填满,建议占字格下面或者左下面的四分之三,这样,显得作文每行的层次感比较强。卷面显得也相对美观。
【技巧四】:开头结尾要简练,最好首尾两行半
除了切忌大肚子作文外,“大头作文”也要不得。建议考生在写作文的时候,开头结尾占两行半的卷面。顶多也不能超过三行半。想想看,一个开头就占太多的空间,阅卷老师的视觉又会有瞬间的疲劳,也会影响阅卷老师的情绪。
【技巧五】:动笔之前要拟题,漂亮标题如美女
考试作文中,一般都是由考生自己来拟定题目,题目不宜太长和太短。怎么拟题呢?对于成绩一般的考生,应该采取特别措施了。拟题的办法有2个:
一是你去搜索一下作文拟题目,可以找到作文老师讲述的类似技巧。
二是考生家长或考生,赶紧去翻阅最近一年的读者和青年文摘的合订本,根据题材,选择几十个比较精彩的标题,背下来,考试的时候可能比葫芦画瓢地就能采用到。
2011年中考作文三大高分诀窍
作文成绩的优劣关系到语文学科成绩的高低,考生要想夺取中考语文高分,必须首先要夺取作文高分。那么如何夺取中考作文高分呢?我们不妨从以下几点做起:
考场作文构思要巧妙
《上海中考作文评分标准》中列出的第三项就是 “思路与结构”,占10分。其中A类卷的标准是:思路通畅;层次分明,且结构安排有特色。而“思路与结构”的安排,体现在文章写作之前的“构思”之中。构思在整个写作过程中是重要的一环。构思大致包括三个方面:选择题材,安排人物、情节;酝酿、提炼主题(或中心);确定艺术表现形式,如结构安排、表达方式和作品体裁等。
构思巧妙主要表现在以下几个方面:
第一,文章的开头要吸引人。好文章的开头有:设置悬念式开头;倒叙式开头;情景描写式开头;点题式开头;议论抒情式开头;引名人名言或哲理性的话开头等。
第二,情节安排要曲折生动,引人入胜,“文似看山不喜平”。因此,叙事要有点“波澜”,不能平铺直叙。
第三,表达方式要灵活多变,忌单一重复。
第四,点题要巧妙。历年中考作文中,因构思巧妙而脱颖而出的佳作不少。例如:1998年的考题《我的欢乐》,有一名考生运用丰富的想象,把自己幻想成一只 “和平鸽”,“要作一次旅行,从我的家乡——台湾,一直飞到祖国的心脏”,文中以一只“和平鸽”的行踪为线索,展现了沿途在香港、上海、长江三峡工程、长城以及北京等地上空俯瞰到的一幅幅壮丽的景象,表达了“祖国统一、繁荣富强,是我最大的欢乐”这一主旨,写出了中华民族的心声,高扬着时代的主旋律。这就摆脱了初中生身份的局限,摆脱了时空的束缚,超越了“小我”,进而写出了“大我”——中华民族的欢乐。真是构思新颖,不落窠臼。又如2001年的考题《有家真好》,有一名考生通篇运用拟人化手法,把台湾比作从内战结束后离开祖**亲的孩子——“我”,模拟游子的口吻准确而传神地演绎了台湾同胞的真切感受,在“有家真好”的题目下表达了盼望台湾早日回归祖国的重大主题,具有很强的表达效果。再如2006年,有一名考生叙写 《我们的名字叫“花样”上海人》,选取典型的人物和典型的事例,描述了“花样”上海人“有春花的热情,有夏花的爱心,有秋花的收获,有冬花的坚韧”等个性特征。全文按照春、夏、秋、冬四个时令季节为序,以春日的红杏、夏日的荷花、秋天的硕果和冬日的腊梅为喻,并配以鲜明的富有时令季节特征的四句古诗文名句,作为四个部分的小标题,凸显上海人的“花样”性格,构思十分巧妙。
总之,好文章的构思往往是巧妙的,新奇独特而不落俗套。
考场作文写人要鲜明
回顾上海历年中考作文题,涉及叙事写人的作文题有1985年的 《同桌》、1988年的 《我和××》、1989年的《我》、1992年的 《忘不了他(她)》、1995年的 《母爱》、1997年的 《良师》等。要夺取此类作文的高分,写出来的人物必须具有鲜明的个性,忌千人一面,千人一腔。有的学生写起人来,总是喜欢用“目光炯炯有神,迈着矫健的步伐”之类的词句,千篇一律,缺乏鲜明的个性特色,令人望而生厌。相反,有的学生由于平日里仔细观察身边人物的言行举止,因而无论是写“父爱”、“母爱”抑或是写“师爱”,写出来的人物个个栩栩如生,跃然纸上,具有鲜明的个性特征,令人久久难忘。请看下面的三个片段:
从我看见文学社老师的第一眼起,就觉得:这个老头,不简单!
是不简单。不然怎么会退休十年了还坐在这里气定神闲地给我们上课呢!不然怎么会在各种大小报刊上都能翻到他的大作呢!不然怎么会把一个个对文学还懵懵懂懂的学生,不出一二年,就调教得玩起文字来有模有样了!对,他就是一个不简单的良师。
他的头上顶着几片雪花,他的鼻梁上戴着一副眼镜,他的手上布满了蛛网,他的肚子里装满了墨水。他闪亮在眼镜后的小眼能鉴定一篇文章的好坏,也似乎能看透一个人写作水平的高低。他那张嘴总能吐出我们意料不到或者前所未闻的知识和信息,也似乎能迸出我们未来的写作前景。他那双手可以修改出一篇篇佳作,也似乎可以充实一个人的涵养。他,真的不简单!(这三段文字节选自 《良师》)
这三段文字节选自某生写的 《良师》。通过四个“不简单”,由外而内地介绍了文学社指导老师的与众不同之处,“良师”的形象已初露端倪。
写人,不仅要学会写活单个人,还要学会写活群体形象。例如2004年的《我们是初升的太阳》和2006年的《我们的名字叫____》,都属于要求叙写群体形象的考题,当年的考生是如何写活“我们”这一群体形象的?你可以阅读这两年的中考佳作,从中受到启发。
考场作文语言要流畅
《上海中考作文评分标准》中列出的第二项就是“语言”,占25分。其中A类卷的标准是:能准确、清晰地表达自己的思想;语言流畅,有一定的表现力。
具体讲,语言流畅,是指文章的语言表达流利,语句通畅。好文章的语言应该是流畅的,而不是疙里疙瘩的;表述应该是简洁明白的,而不是里嗦的;词汇应该是丰富的,而不是贫乏的;用语应该是准确的,而不是词不达意的;语意应该是通畅连贯的,而不是前言不搭后语的;比喻应该是新奇、贴切、形象的,而不是平淡、庸俗、抽象的;描写应该是具体的、细腻的、生动形象的,而不是笼统的、粗糙的、枯燥乏味的;读起来应该是琅琅上口的,而不是佶屈聱牙的。需要说明的是,入选本书的上海历年中考作文的语言,大多是流畅的。
当然,写出优秀考场作文的要求和注意点还有很多,例如,情感要真实,中心要明确,结构要有特色,条理要清晰,详略要得当等,在此不一一赘述,但上述五点尤为重要。如果你的考场作文做到了上述五点,写出了自己生活中的独特体验和感悟,写出了特色或亮点,那么,得高分就有希望。
怎样应对开放度大的中考作文考题
我们的作文题一般由三个部分组成:提示语、要求和题目,近几年从各地的中考题看开放度相对较大,其目的是让更多的学生有的可写,写出不同。有时命题会在题目上加以限定,有时也有题目自拟的考查方式。题目自拟是给学生更多的发挥空间,但也会给学生造成困扰,什么都可以写,但写什么要慎重考虑,只有写一篇像样的好文章,才可能得高分。
今天就和同学们聊一聊,开放度大的作文考题的应对,首先我们来看一组今年的各地中考作文题。
例1.(山西)
打开初中语文的每一篇课文就是走进一个世界,窥见一段人生,感悟一种智慧,领受一片情感,感受一颗心灵。
请结合初中语文课文,按特别要求拟题,写一篇不少于600字的作文;感情自然、朴实、真切;文体不限(诗歌除外);文中避开真实的人名、校名和地名。
(拟题特别要求:作文题目中必须包含课文题目,或课文作者,或课文中的人物,或课文题目中的词语等等,如《背影》、高尔基、小弗朗士、百草园。)
例2.(黑龙江哈尔滨)
一个公司的职员向朋友抱怨:同事的冷漠、客户的刁难、老板的忽视,让他苦恼不已,所以他决定换个工作。朋友提醒他说:“现在找一份工作不容易,你应该多和大家沟通,尝试着改变自己。”他接受了朋友的建议。半年之后,再见到朋友时,他向朋友说,现在自己在原来的公司很开心,与同事的关系很融洽,客户对他很满意,老板也夸他工作出色,正准备给他升职加薪。
这个职员的经历至少给了我们这样一些启示:少抱怨别人,多反省自己;与其被动变换环境,不如主动适应环境;要主动与人沟通,为自己打开一片广阔的天地;要善于采纳别人正确的意见和建议。
请根据以上材料,自选角度,写一篇文章。
例3.(湖北襄樊)
阅读下面材料,按要求作文。
一位65岁的老人想从北京市步行到上海市参观世博园,她觉得这样游览世博园才有意义。经过长途跋涉,克服了重重困难,她到达了目的地。在那儿,有位记者采访了她:“这路途中的艰难险阻是否曾吓倒过您?您又是如何鼓起勇气徒步旅行的?”老人平静地答道:“没什么呀,一步一步地走路是不需要什么勇气的,关键是你目标要明确,要清楚到哪儿去!”
这一类题目的共同点就是开放度大,让学生有足够的空间打开思路,但学生面对这样的题目时,如何选择切入点是文章成败的关键,什么都能写,一定要写自己最能写的。
下笔前你可以从以下几个方面考虑:
第一,一定要注意材料永远是写作的提示。再好的语言,再好的故事,一定不能在你的写作中抄写或是借用,不要对材料扩写、续写和改写。作文一定是自己写的,写自己的经历或感受。
比如例1要求作文题目中必须包含课文题目,或课文作者,或课文中的人物,或课文题目中的词语等等,但拟定的题目一定要与你所写的文章一致。
《我心中的鲁迅》《走进李清照》《我的“傅雷爸爸”》《像海伦·凯勒一样》《风筝飞翔》《我爱故乡》等,这样拟题一方面符合要求,另一方面也让自己有的可写。
如果拟成这样的题目,就给自己写作增加了难度,《诸葛亮》、《沁园春·雪》、《唐雎不辱使命》等,表面看符合拟题要求,但没给自己留下写作空间,只能对学过的课文翻译、讲评,就是写读后感也不能这样拟题,因而这样的写作就不符合作文的要求,不可能得高分。
第二,所写文章主旨必须从所给材料中提炼,不要脱离材料内容。所给材料并不是虚设,其目的是对文章有所限制,避免写作脱离题意。
例2中的启示就能够提炼出文章的中心或论点,一定要选择一个词语或是一个句子,保持与题目的关联。
第三,文体不限不是没有文体,请选择你最能驾驭的文体,写你最熟悉的内容,尽量写出你的真情实感(或表达你独特的见解和主张)。文体的选择决定了文章所写的内容,记叙文写自己,议论文写典型事例作论据。
第四,为了更好地表达你的意思,要有一个自己习惯的、相对固定的结构,可用咱们以前讲过的“五段式”,也可用其他形式,这样你的文章内容才充实,层次才清晰。
总的来说,不管题目如何,我们一定要按照写作的要求,完成一篇文章的创作,不要过多地被题目左右,陷于材料中不能自拔。
技巧点拨:考场议论文的写作一定要鲜明地亮出自己的观点。写作时开门见山,摆明态度,不失为一种普通但又实用的方法。这篇文章的开头采用设问的方式,一问一答,简洁有力,鲜明地亮出自己的观点,为下文展开打下了基础。
痛苦的时候,你会回家,用眼泪尽情发泄;心烦的时候,你会回家,让家的温暖驱散心中的乌云;家——融进去的是悲伤,化解出来的是快乐;家——接纳的是难过,释放的是开心。家真好!(选自云南省中考作文《家,真好》)
技巧点拨:记叙文也能开门见山。你看,这篇文章运用排比的形式将自己对“家”的感受毫无遮掩的表达出来。为全文定下了基调。
排比因其独特的魅力而成为学生中考作文的“新宠”。巧用排比,用以叙述,则清晰深刻;用以描写,则形象生动;用以抒情,则情深意浓;用以说理,则鞭辟入里。排比句句式工整,内涵丰富,语气连贯,可以增添语言的气势美,可以构建形式的整齐美,可以打造文章的层次美。请看来自2008年中考作文排比美句集锦:
1.向前,向前,向前,是愚公子孙无愧的执着努力,是于谦大敌当前的淡定从容,是曾国藩屡败屡战的无所畏惧。(北京市中考满分文《向前!向前!向前!》)
2.人生一世,总是在追寻。寻山间鸟语,见花落花开;寻琴音乐语,感撩拨心弦;寻卷中乾坤,叹如梦人生。(南京中考满分文《寻》)
3.音乐,寻的是一份韵律与洒脱。那是高山流水的一声轻叹,一泄千里;那是梁祝化蝶的凄哀婉转,柔情永恒;那是二泉映月的两种甘苦;那是英雄的交响曲,命运的欢乐颂„„(南京中考满分文《寻》)
4.书籍,寻的是一份智慧与人生。跟随余秋雨,我也曾一同踏上那段通往敦煌的风沙之路,看那几千年盛开的灿烂文化之花;跟随三毛,我也曾一起行走在荒无人烟的撒哈拉,放不羁的风筝乘上自由的翅膀;踩着沈从文的脚印,我看到那山腰上采茶苗女身上有一种光彩叫民俗;撑上余光中的船,我远望南海一湾浅浅的海峡荡漾着一种思念叫乡愁。(南京中考满分文《寻》)
5.寻觅书间,我听见僵卧孤村的陆放翁“铁马冰河入梦来”的豪气,予我爱国情;我听见饱经沧桑的聋子贝多芬 “扼住命运咽喉”的呐喊,予我不屈意;我看见爱迪生的电灯,爱因斯坦的相对论,霍金的宇宙,予我崇高理想。(南京中考满分文《寻》)
6.既然不能像雄鹰一样一飞冲天,那就像蜗牛一样步步为营;既然不能像瀑布一样一泻千里,那就像溪流一样涓涓细淌;既然不能像太阳一样光芒四射,那就像星星一样柔和的散发光和热。(南京中考满分文《寻》)
7.云散了,因为风醒了;月升起,因为太阳下山了;我哭了,因为我懂了。我懂了姥姥的对快乐的渴望,懂了亲情的珍贵,懂了家是人生的港湾,那道风景线将伴我一生。(南通中考满分文《一道风景线》)
8.回眸是一剂良药,让我在苦熬中奋起;回眸是一枚邮票,伴我飞向新的航程;回眸是一种智慧,让我调整方向,走上人生正轨,渡向成功的彼岸。(徐州通中考满分文《成长回眸》)
9.历史是铁马嘶鸣、弯弓映月的豪迈;历史是“匈奴未灭,何以家为”的气概;历史是天下大治,四海升平的祥和;历史是“宫阙万间都作了土”的悲壮。(山东济宁中考满分文《历史?成长》)
10.“会当凌绝顶,一览众山小”是我们在攀登中留下脚印后的欣喜;“长风破浪会有时,直挂云帆济沧海”是我们历经磨难后的自信豪迈;“问渠那得清如许,为有源头活水来”是我们不断“充电”后的收获;“几处早莺争暖树,谁家新燕啄春泥”是我们在自然中行走观赏到的和谐„„(山东济宁中考满分文《留下成长的脚印》)
11.拥有上进心的人,永不会原地踏步,因为他们要追求前路的无限风光;拥有上进心的人,不会在顺境中颓废,在逆境中低头,因为他们向往更上一层楼;拥有上进心的人,不会后悔,因为他们在拼搏的同时,也获得了最丰富的人生。(甘肃省金昌市中考满分文《有这样一种声音》)
12.绿叶的坚持,使秋日用最美的姿态飘零;微风的坚持,把歌声送到思念的地址:邮政的坚持,是用星星拼出人们微笑的样子,用爱作为每一个生命的开始。(上海市中考满分文《我眼中的色彩》)
13.翻开历史长卷,无数绿色深一笔,浅一笔,浓一笔,淡一笔,描画着友谊,描画着爱情,描画着凌云壮志,描画着落拓不羁的生命。(上海市中考满分文《我眼中的色彩》)
14.四季轻柔淌过窗外,有冷暖的显现,有草叶的枯荣,有风雨的起伏,有清风的盈亏。当冬虫新透窗纱时,感受到的是春潮的萌动;当细雨敲点窗棂时,感觉到的是夏意的湿润;当桂香渗浸窗楣时,感触到的是秋光的充盈;当香雪堆砌窗台时,感动到的是冬日的纯清。
(广州市中考满分文《又见枝头吐新芽》)
15.这种态度,这层思考能使人欣赏到朴实的田野、健壮的山崖、深沉的沟壑、乐观的流水;体味到蝴蝶的翩跹、燕子的呢喃、黄莺的婉转、百灵的歌唱;感触到如水的轻风、如风的流云、如云的松涛、如涛的轻阴;领会到心情的平稳、心境的和美、心态的特定、心力的温情。(广州市中考满分文《又见枝头吐新芽》)
16.雨是水的精魂,在绿树间呜咽地歌唱,在荷花中翕忽地蹦跳,在湖面上轻快地奏乐。(温州市中考满分文《下雨天,真好》)
第二篇:中考英语作文
2012中考英语作文题目预测及范文一:低碳生活
假定你是李华,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果:
1.节水节电;
2.垃圾分类;
3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;
4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇:低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue
注意:词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数);可适当增加细节了,以使行文连贯;开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it._______________________________________
Best wishes,Li Bing
参考范文:
Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life.First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Saving water also matters much.Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal.In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down.More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.2012中考英语作文题目预测及范文二:网购利弊
随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如*****网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
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参考范文:
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days.Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet.The shops on Internet,for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like.What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.However, some students disagreed with them.We can't see the things while we are shopping.So we are not sure whether they are good or not..Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.2012中考英语作文题目预测及范文三:缓解压力
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
●我的压力是什么;
●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
词数80~100;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure._________________________________________
That’s all.Thank you!
参考范文:
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!
2012中考英语作文题目预测及范文四:火灾自救
近年来,我国火灾频频发生。2010年11月15日,上海胶东路一座高楼起火,损失严重。这个事件提醒注意防火安全很重要。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文来分析引起火灾的原因并谈谈你对火灾中自救的建议。
要求:
1.词数不少于90,短文开头过渡已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
提示:
防火安全fire safety 电 electricity 燃放烟花爆竹 set off fireworks
爬行crawl on one’s knees 消防栓 the fire hydrant
Usually fire accidents are caused because of carelessness.For example, ______________________
What can we do to protect ourselves when there is a fire?____________________________
2012中考英语作文题目预测及范文五:自然灾害
2011年初,我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨(freezing rain),特别是贵州、湖南和四川,灾情失分严重。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭,电网瘫痪。冻灾致使贵州40万人饮水难,四川两电厂停运。部分山区人民生活异常困难,在各级政府的带领下,人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击冰灾,涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生,你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?
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参考范文:
As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011.Everything was covered with freezing rain.Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most.It caused the buses, trains and planes stop service.The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas.As a result, huge economic loss was caused.Many people could not work and live normally.There was no food, water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow.As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.2012中考英语作文题目预测及范文六:电子图书
据报道,从2011年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外,同时还将发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明,在韩国,电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的讨论,请你写一篇80词左右的短文,表达你对这件事情的看法。
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参考范文:
E-Books Are Good
It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011.What good news this is!E-books have many advantages.Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees.Besides, they are very convenient.To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop.But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.2012中考英语作文题目预测及范文七:网上交友
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
赞成的理由 反对的理由
1.广交朋友 1.浪费时间
2.可自由表达思想 2.影响学习
3.有利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗
你的看法是?
注:字数100—120之间。(书写不整齐者,酌情扣分。)
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参考范文:
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes.Internet helps people make many friends.Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
第三篇:中考英语作文(共)
成功之路第三篇:口头通知——欢迎美国代表团文体:口头通知【题目要求】
假如你是班长,根据下面的内容和提示,写一篇100字左右的口头通知,以便向同学们宣布。事由:欢迎美国学生来校参观。参观时间:10月22日上午9:00——12:00。参观人数:约50人。活动安排:1.8:30在校门口欢迎。2.9:00带客人到会议室开联欢会。3.领客人参观植物园、校办工厂。4.11:00在操场进行篮球比赛。5.客人12:00离校。注意事项:1.对客人要友好大方。2.要用英语交谈
【李阳疯狂英语经典范文】American Student’s Visit
Boys and girls, [1]May I have your attention, please? About fifty American students will come to visit our school on October the 22nd.We’ll meet them at the school gate at 8:30 am.At 9:00, we’ll take them to the conference room, where a get-together will be held.After that, we’ll show them around our botanical garden and the school-run factory.At 11:00, there will be a basketball match on the playground.They’ll leave our school at 12:00.[2] We must talk with them in English.Please be friendly and courteous to them.Remember, we not only stand for our school, but also stand for China.[3] Thank you.Hope you have a good time 成功之路第四篇:写好英语作文的秘密
文体:鼓励信【题目要求】
请你仔细阅读所给的英文信,然后给Worried写一封回信。要求包括以下内容:1.鼓励他振作起来,不要灰心2.记一些惯用词组和句型结构,将他们组织在一起并用其造句。3.多读英语,告诉他通过大量阅读才能正确使用语言。4.多背诵一些好的短文。
Dear Helpful, I’m a Senior Three student and I’m in trouble.I used to like English, but now I am having some problems in English, especially in English writing.Though I know English is a very important subject.I think now it has become a little
difficult for me.My poor writing skills have caused me to get low marks on my English exams.This has made me dislike English and I am afraid to take any more exams.I really want to change my situation and enjoy learning English again.I wonder why so many students like English and can get good results in English exams.I do want to be one of the best students and go to a famous university after graduation.This is my dreaming, but my English is not good enough.What should I do? Worried(注意:1.不要逐字逐句翻译,词数100左右。)Dear Worried, [1] I have received your letter and I’m glad to give you some suggestions.First of all, don’t be disappointed.Many students find it difficult to write well.In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, you should do the following things.First, do some studying with the set phrases and sentence structures.Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them.Second, read English as much as possible.There are many things that can’t be learnt immediately.You must see them in books many times.Then you’ll be able to use them correctly yourself.So, in order to write well, you must learn to read a lot.Finally, you’d better recite some good passages.The more passages you read, the better you will write.[2]I’m sure you can improve your written English as long as you study hard.Remember, practice makes perfect.Helpful 成功之路第六篇:学生是否应该参加体育锻炼
【题目要求】假如你叫李华,你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论。讨论主题是:高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼?请你根据下表提供的信息,给某英文报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况。介绍讨论情况。55%的学生认为1.应该每天进行体育锻炼。2.可以做早操、大乒乓球、打篮球,但时间不要过长。3.锻炼能增加体体质,减少疾病4.运动使大脑休息,使复习效果更好。
45%的学生认为1.体育浪费时间。2.锻炼使人疲劳。3.运动以后很兴奋,较长时间不能复习功课。4.运动中可能会受伤。(注意:1.词数100字左右。)
Dear editor, [1] I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.55% of the students think they should take exercise every day, such as doing morning exercises, playing ping-pong and basketball, but it shouldn’t take up too much time.Proper exercise can build up one’s body and reduce diseases.What’s more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively.[2] On the other hand, 45% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and it is tiring.After having sports, they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons.It’s also possible get hurt in sports.成功之路第八篇:经典图表描述
【题目要求】有一批外宾将来红星电视机厂参观,请根据下表所提供的信息,用英语为该厂写一篇简单介绍。年代………………人数 ……人员………………设施………………………………产品
80年代初建时期……200多……多为初中毕业生……3个车间,设备简单……黑白电视机现在……2000多……80%为大学生……15个装备有先进设备的大车间……10多种不种型号的彩色电视机,畅销全国及世界各个地方
注意:1.词数:120字左右
The Red Star Television Factory [1] The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of fine quality, was set up in the 1980’s.There were only more than 200 workers then, and most of them were junior middle school graduates.The working conditions were poor,there were only three workshops with some simple equipment.The main products then were black and white TV sets.[2] In the past 20 years, great changes have taken place in this factory.The number of workers and engineers has risen to over 2,000, and 80% of them are college graduates.Fifteen big workshops are well equipped with modern machines, and there are over ten different types of color TV sets, which are sold all over the country and to many parts of the world as well.成功之路第九篇:农村儿童失学问题 文体:议论文
【题目要求】请根据下表,给《中国日报》写一篇稿件,谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。
原因1.家庭贫穷,供不起儿童上学,他们不得不去赚钱养家。2.部分家长认为女孩上学无用,不愿意让他们上学。3.部分儿童对功课不感兴趣,不愿意上学
看法1.每个儿童包括女孩都应该有受教育的机会。2.全社会都应重视儿童教育,他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。
注意:1.不要逐字逐句翻译。2.语句要通顺连贯。3.字数在100个左右。
Rural Education [1] Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school.I think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.As a result, they have to stay at home to earn money to support their families.Another reason is that many parents think it’s useless for the girls to study and
they would not like them to go to school.The third reason is that some children are not interested in their lessons, and would not like to go to school.[2] In my opinion, all children including girls should have the chance to receive an education.People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very important part in the future of our country.成功之路第十篇:网络学校
文体:说明文
【题目要求】请根据以下表格用英语向来访的外宾介绍你校新建的网络学校的情况。组成部分……………………………………功能
多媒体教学系统……使教与学更为方便;在课堂上获得更多的信息,学到更多知识。电子阅览室……向师生开放;可收发电子邮件;可通过因特网查找最新信息 远程教学系统……只要家中有电脑,任何人都可以学习本校课程 校务管理系统……有助于改善学校管理;满足现代化学校的需要
注意:1.介绍需包括表格中主要内容,可适当增减信息使内容连贯。2.词数100左右。
New Century Net-school Ladies and gentlemen, [1] Welcome to our New Century Net-school!Our net-school is made up of four parts.The Multimedia Teaching System makes teaching and learning easier and much more interesting.Students can get more information and knowledge in class.The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world and get the latest information from the Internet, is open to both teachers and students.The Long-distance Teaching System is for the students who are not studying in our school.They can study at home if they have a computer.The School Management System helps to improve our school management and meets the needs of a modern school.[2] Thank you.中学生是否有必要带手机去学校文体:议论文
【题目要求】现在,很多学生带手机上学。为此,某英语报在你校组织了一场讨论。讨论的主题:中学生是否有必要带手机去学校。请你根据下表提供的信息。给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。大多数同学认为:可方便与家长、同学联系:是一种时尚。大多数老师认为:中学生年龄尚小,还不能自控;用手机玩游戏,发短信浪费时间;容易引起攀比;如需打电话,学校里有公用电话可供使用。你的观点:追求时尚可以理解,但学习是首要任务。注意:1.词数100个左右。【李阳疯狂英语经典范文】 Mobile Phones at School Dear editor, [1] I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.[2] The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone.And what’s more, it’s the latest fashion.[3] However, most teachers think middle school students are not old enough to control themselves.It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone.And it’s easy to cause the students to vie with each other.If necessary, they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.[4] In my opinion, following the fashion is understandable.But as middle school students, we should put all our heart into our studies.Yours truly, Li Hua 英语是我最喜欢的科目文体:议论文
【题目要求】英语是被广泛使用的国际化语言,如果你要与外国朋友做生意,你得学会英语;大型国际会议,英语是工作语言;世界上有很多英文版的书,要阅读他们需要讲英语,要想更好的了解外国人并为世界和平出力,你也要懂英语,正是因为英语如此重要,所以英语是我最喜欢的科目。
写作提示:1.本文从不同角度阐述英语的重要性,用一般现在时。2.注意句子的变化,不要全部使用一个句式。
【李阳疯狂英语经典范文】
English Is My Favorite Subject [1] English is my favorite subject, because it’s such a widely used language.It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.[2] English has now become an international language because it is used by almost every country in the world.If you want to do business with foreigners, you have to learn English, because most of them speak and write in English.English is one of the working languages at international conferences.Today, many great reports, papers, and books are written in English, so if you want to read them, you must know English well.If you know English, you can also understand people from other countries better and contribute more effectively to world peace.[3] No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.So we should pay more attention to learning English in order to make our country powerful, competitive, and international.
第四篇:2018中考英语作文
2018中考英语作文
人物篇
1.对你最重要的人
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生活中有一些人对你很重要。这个人可能是你的父母、老师或朋友。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈对你很重要的人是谁,为什么他(她)对你很重要,以及你想为他(她)做些什么。
提示词语:help, encourage, respect, cook 提示问题:
• Who is very important to you? • Why is he/she so important?
• What are you going to do for him/her? 经典范文:
My mother is very important to me and I love her
She is very busy and often goes to bed very late, but sheinsists on getting up early every morning to make breakfast for me.What's more, she often helps me andencourages me to solve problems by myself when I'm in trouble.With her help, I made great progress in my study.She respects my privacy and never checks my mobile phone.I always want to do something for my mom.Mother's Day is coming.I'm going to make a surprise breakfast for her on that day.2.你最想感谢的人
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假如你是李华,在你的成长过程中,一定有某个人陪伴你、影响你、感动你,让你健康、快乐成长,学会感恩、学会回报。你们学校的《英语园地》正在以 “Learn to Be Thankful” 为题征文,请你写一篇文章。谈谈你最想感谢的人是谁,他/她是什么样的人,为什么感谢他/她。
提示词语:kind, hardworking, helpful, encourage, solve the problem 提示问题:
• Who is the person that you want to thank? • What is he/she like? • Why do you thank him/her? 经典范文:
Learn to Be Thankful
The person I want to thank most is my English teacher.He is a very kind person, who always has a big smile on his face.He is also hard-working, which makes him one of the best teachers in our school.Besides, he is veryhelpful.He has helped almost every student in our class.That's why he is very popular among us.The reason why I want to thank my English teacher is that he always encourages me.Two years ago, I did really badly in English.But he tried his best to help me to solve the problems.Thanks to his help, I made great progress in my English study.社会篇
1.献爱心捐赠
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假如你是李华,为了帮助洪灾地区的小朋友渡过难关,你们学校上周组织了以“友爱、互助”为主题的献爱心捐赠活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你在这次活动中捐赠了什么,为什么捐赠这些物品,以及你的感受。提示词语:donate(捐赠), book, schoolbag, clothes,toy, help, proud 提示问题:
• What did you donate?
• Why did you donate the things? • How do you feel? 经典范文:
At my school, we had a charity sale last week
The charity sale was held on our school playground last Saturday morning.We prepared many things which were made by hand in our spare time, such as kites, model planes and so on.They looked very beautiful.We also brought old toys and secondhand books to sell on the sale.At 8:30, the activity started.Many students and teachers came to take part in it.Everyone chose their favorite items and paid for them at a much lower price.In the end, the money we made added up to over 2,000.We sent the money to the community to help children who couldn't attend school and the seniors who needed better care.I had a wonderful experience.I'm proud of what we have done.If everyone makes a contribution to the charity, the world will become much better.2.社会实践活动
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学校组织过很多社会实践活动,请你写一篇短文,介绍一下你参加的一次活动,在这次活动中你去了哪里,做了什么,你的感受是什么。
提示词语:Agriculture Carnival(农业嘉年华), the Science and Technology Museum, the Capital Museum...提示问题:
• Where did you go? • What did you do during the activity? • How do you feel? 经典范文:
At my school, we have held a lot of social practice activities.Last month, I went to the Science and Technology Museum with my classmates.The Science and Technology Museum is a wonderful place for young people to learn.I visited the natural world and found something new.It was amazing.Besides, I did a lot of physics experiments by myself.They help me to put what I have learned into practice.I saw a lot of interesting things in the museum, too.I learned a lot.I was pretty excited and happy at that time.In my opinion, it is a good way for us to learn something usefulout of the books in museums.3.从“朗读者”谈“遇见”
中央电视台播出的文化节目“朗读者”深受大众喜爱,每一期都对我们进行了心灵的洗礼。它第一期的话题为“遇见”。你们学校的英语俱乐部也在开展关于“遇见”的分享交流活动。请你以“遇见”为题谈一谈:你何时何地与你最好的朋友相遇,当时发生了什么,你有什么感受。
提示词语:smile, help, great, relaxed 提示问题:
• When and where did you meet your best friend for the first time?
• What happened when you met that day? • How did you feel? 经典范文: Meeting
I met my best friend on the first day when we came toour school.I didn't know anyone in my class, so I sat on my seat in the classroom quietly.Just then, a boy came to me and sat beside me.He started the conversation between us with a “Hi” and a big smile.His warm voice and smile made merelaxed at once.At that moment, our friendship started.We were close and helped each other.We shared our stories and happiness.Meeting him was great!3.非物质文化遗产进校园
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假如你是李华,你们学校将开展“非物质文化遗产进校园”活动,让学生体验剪纸艺术。你知道你校交换生Peter对此很感兴趣,你打算邀请他参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的时间和地点,活动的内容,以及需要为此做什么准备。
提示词语:listen to a talk, learn papercutting, a notebook, colored paper 提示问题:
• When and where is the school going to hold the activity?
• What are you going to do at the activity?
• What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity?
Dear Peter,How is it going?
Our school is going to hold an activity fot.I'm looking forward to your early reply.经典范文: Dear Peter,How is it going?
Our school is going to hold an activity for students to experience nonmaterial cultures.I am writing to invite you to take part in it.It will be held at the school hall from 2:00 to 4:00 next Thursday afternoon.First, we are going tolisten to a talk about it.And then we are going to learnpaper-cutting.If you would like to come, you can take a notebook to take notes and some colored paper to make beautiful papercuts.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
经历感受篇
【仿写句子】
1.I still remember it took me two days to write this report.2.She helped me get the valuable concert ticket.3.I would like to thank my parents because they give me much help and care.4.I get on well with my friends when I was in the junior middle school.5.I went to Beijing with my parents last week, and we were very satisfied with the bus service there.1.感恩父母,从我做起
假如你是李华,你们学校就“感恩父母,从我做起”这一话题展开讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈为什么要感恩父母,你和父母之间发生的最难忘的事以及你的感受。提示词语:think, bring up, prepare for, encourage, confident, happy, proud 提示问题:
• Why do you want to thank your parents?
• What was the most unforgettable experience between you and your parents? • How do you feel? 经典范文:
I think it's important for us to thank our parents.Since I was born, my parents have given me all their love and care, but never expect anything in return.They have brought meup and taken good care of me carefully and patiently.Last year, I was chosen to take part in a speech competition.I felt very nervous.My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it.They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result.They said the process of learning was more meaningful.With their help, I did very well that time.I felt happy and proud.I'd like to say “Thanks a lot!You're great!I will love you forever!” to mum and dad.2.有意义的活动
初中学习生活就要结束了。在过去的三年里,你和同学们参加过很多学校组织的活动,例如运动会、联欢会、读书交流会、外出参观等。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文报刊投稿,介绍一次有意义的活动,这个活动是什么,你(们)做了什么,你的感受是什么。
提示词语: meaningful(有意义的), celebrate, happy 提示问题:
• Which school activity is very meaningful? • What did you do? 经典范文: There have been many meaningful school activities in the past three years.One of them is the New Year Party last year.All the teachers and students celebrated the coming new year on the
final
day.My
classmates showed their various talents in art.Some played the guitar while singing, and others danced to the music.As for me, I played a piece of music on the violin.All of them cheered me up.We played very happily and that night impressed me a lot.At the end of the party, we read a poem written by our classmates to our teachers.This party is meaningful not only because we had a happy time together but also it was a chance to express our thanks to our teachers.行为规范篇
【仿写句子】
1.It's necessary to wear comfortable sports shoes in P.E.class.2.When you watch TV at home, you'd better turn it down.3.We are not supposed to speak loudly in public.4.In order to reduce the traffic jam, the government calls on everyone to drive less.5.We all should try our best to care about the environment.1.从浪费谈节约
假如你是李华,在生活中你看到过各种浪费现象,比如:浪费时间、浪费食物、浪费资源等等。为了培养同学们的节约意识,学校和某英文网站共同以“节约×××”为题征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中应该节约的某种东西,为什么应该节约它以及如何节约。
提示词语:population, limit, time, reuse, call on 提示问题: • What should we save? • Why should we save it?
• What do we usually do to save it? 经典范文:
In my point of view, all of us should save water.People can't live without water.But the real situation is that the shortage of water is becoming a serious problem in many parts of the world due to growing population and the pollution of the rivers and lakes.To deal with the water problem, we can do something to avoid wasting water in our life.Firstly, we should remember to reuse water.For example, the water left over after washing vegetables can be used to water plants or to clean the floor.Secondly, we had better limit our shower time.Also, we can call on more people to save water in different ways.In short, water holds great value to human beings.Let's do as much as we can to save water.介绍篇
【仿写句子】
1.Tom is very good at playing chess.2.There is very beautiful natural scenery and kind people and you will like it.3.Spring festival is an important festival for people to spend time with their family members.4.We can go to the museum either by bike or by bus.5.Our English teacher can not only speak English but also French.1.怎样介绍自己 假如你是李华,想成为国际儿童福利院的志愿者,请用英文给相关负责人写一封申请信,介绍自己的基本信息,包括你的年龄、所在学校,你的爱好及能为儿童福利院的孩子们做什么。
提示词语:good at, sing, dance, help 提示问题:
• How old are you and where do you study? • What's your hobby?
• What can you do for the children? Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua.I'd like to be a volunt
I'm looking forward to your early reply.经典范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua.I'd like to be a volunteer at the International Children's Home.I'm a girl of 15 and study at Yuying Middle School now.Singing and dancing are my hobbies and I'm good at playing the piano.More importantly, I'm good with children and like playing with them.As a result, it will be no problem for me to get along well with them.Also, I'm outgoing and I can teach them to sing and dance and tell them interesting stories.I'm sure we will have a good time together.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely,Li Hua
观点建议篇
【仿写句子】
1.Before you go to your friend's home, you are supposed to make a call.2.You'd better prepare for your lessons in advance.3.It's a good way to improve your spoken English by reading English newspapers and watching English movies.4.I think it's a waste of time to spend too much time surfing the Internet.1.中学生是否应该有零花钱
学校正举办主题为“My Pocket Money”的英语征文活动,请你就以下三个方面谈谈自己的看法:中学生是否应该有零花钱?你平时是如何使用零花钱的?怎样更好地管理你自己的零花钱?
提示词语:pocket money, buy, make use of, manage money 提示问题:
• Should students have pocket money?
• How do you usually spend your pocket money? • How can you manage your pocket money better? 经典范文:
I think students should have some pocket money because sometimes we need to buy some necessaries and develop the skill of managing money as well.I usually spend my pocket money on snacks.School things also cost money.Besides, I often buy my favorite things such as books or CDs.In my opinion, it is really important to make better use of the money.Above all, making plans is a good choice.In this way, I can think about if I spend the money properly.Secondly, it's necessary to save some money for something urgent.If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.2.中学上网
网络为我们的日常学习与生活带来了极大的便利,但是也有一部分中学生上网成瘾,严重影响到他们的健康和学习。假如你们班在下周班会上将谈论有关问题,请你根据所给提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
提示词语:learn, play, spend too much time 提示问题:
• What are the advantages and disadvantages of getting online? • What do you think of getting online for middle school students?
• How should students get online properly?
Good afternoon, class.Today let's talk about getting online.Many students 经典范文:
Good afternoon, class.Today let's talk about getting online.Many students like getting online very much.They can learn more knowledge and how to use the modern machine—computer where they can get more information.In this way, it's a good way to enrich their knowledge andbroaden their horizon.But some students spend too muchtime playing computer games and even stay up late to chat with friends online.It takes them too much time.Gradually, they find it hard to focus on the study.What's worse, some are even cheated or robbed by their net friends.It's unwise to ban the Internet in the information age.So it's better to make a plan of the free time, and control the time well on the computer.Make sure not to spend too much time on the Internet.
第五篇:中考英语
文章的结尾没有固定的模式,同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下,记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语,以使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。
1、自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy。再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2、首尾呼应,升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it。
3、反问结尾,引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure(学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning Eng-lish is great fun?
4、表达祝愿,阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:I hope the farm-ers’ life will be better and better。
另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式
时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。
如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ago,last…——过去时
next,in…——将来时等
人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如:Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English。
其中we和our就是人称的统一。
格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。
根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。
特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。
同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…
And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What ismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,but
Although+clause(从句),In spite of+n/doing
On the one hand…
On the other hand…
Some…,while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because,As
So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。
常用状语从句句型:
1)时间when,not…until,as soon as
2)目的so that+clause;to do(为了)
3)结果so…that+clause,too…to do(太……以至于……)
4)条件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要)
5)让步though,although,even though,even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6)比较as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:
1.We live more and more comfortable。
改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)
2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。
改正:much information
(不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There has many programs in TV。
改正:There are many programs on TV。
(There be句型和介词短语)
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。
改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(动名词作主语)
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章,特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。
一、代入法
这是进行英语写作时最常用的方法。同学们在掌握一定的词汇和短语之后,结合一定的语法知识,按照句子的结构特点,直接用英语代人相应的句式即可。如:
◎ 他从不承认自己的失败。
He never admits his failure.◎ 那项比赛吸引了大批观众。
The match attracted a large crowd.◎ 他把蛋糕分成4块。
He divided the cake into four pieces.二、还原法
即把疑问句、强调句、倒装句等还原成基本结构。这是避免写错句子的一种有效的办法。如:
◎ 这是开往格拉斯哥的火车吗?
Is this the train for Glasgow?
还原为陈述句:This is the train for Glasgow.◎ 他是因为爱我的钱才同我结了婚。
It was because he loved my money that he married me.还原为非强调句:Because he loved my money,he married me.◎ 光速很快,我们几乎没法想像它的速度。
So fast does light travel that we can hardly imagine its speed.还原为正常语序:Light travels so fast that we can hardly imagine its speed.三、分解法
就是把一个句子分成两个或两个以上的句子。这样既能把意思表达得更明了,又能减少写错句子的几率。如:
◎ 我们要干就要干好。
If we do a thing,we should do it well.◎ 从各地来的学生中有许多是北方人。
There are students here from all over thecountry.Many of them are from the North.四、合并法
就是把两个或两个以上的简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来。这种方法最能体现学生的英语表达能力,同时也最能提高文章的可读性。如:
◎ 我们迷路了,这使我们的野营旅行变成了一次冒险。
Our camping trip turned into an adventure when we got lost.◎ 天气转晴了,这是我们没有想到的。
The weather turned out to be very good,which was more than we couldexpect.◎ 狼是高度群体化的动物,它们的成功依赖于合作。
Wolves are highly social animals whose success depends upon their coopera-tion.五、删减法
就是在写英语句子时,把相应汉语句子里的某些词、短语或重复的成分删掉或省略。如:
◎ 这部打字机真是价廉物美。
This typewriter is very cheap and fine indeed.注:汉语表达中的“价”和“物”在英语中均无需译出。
◎ 个子不高不是人生中的严重缺陷。
Not being tall is not a serious disadvantage in life,注:汉语说“个子不高”,其实就是“不高”。也就是说,其中的“个子”在英语中无需译出。
六、移位法
由于英语和汉语在表达习惯上存在差异,根据表达的需要,某些成分需要前置或后移。如:
◎ 他发现赚点外快很容易。
He found it easy to earn extra money.注:it在此为形式宾语,真正的宾语是句末的不定式to earn extra money.◎ 告诉我这事的人不肯告诉我他的名字。
The man who told me this refused to tell me his name.注:who told me this为修饰the man的定语从句,应置于其后。
◎ 直到我遇到你以后,我才真正体会到幸福。
It was not until I met you that I knew real happiness.注:not…until…为英语中的固定句式,其意为“直到……才……”。
七、分析法
指根据要表示的汉语意思,通过进行语法分析和句式判断,然后写出准确地道的英语句子。如:
◎ 从这个角度看,问题并不像人们一般料想的那样严重。Seen in this light,the matter is not as serious as people generally suppose.注:分词短语作状语时,其逻辑主语应与句子主语一致,由于the matter与sec之间为被动关系,故see要用过去分词scen.◎ 我没有见过他,所以说不出他的模样。
Not having met him,I cannot tell you what he is like.注:如果分词的动作发生在谓语动作之前,且与逻辑主语是主动关系,则用现在分词的完成式。
八、意译法
有的同学在写句子时,一遇见生词或不熟悉的表达,就以为是“山穷水尽”了。其实,此时我们可以设法绕开难点,在保持原意的基础上,用不同的表达方式写出来。如:
◎ 汤姆一直在扰乱别的孩子,我就把他撵了出去。
Tom was upsetting the otherchildren,so I showed him the door.◎ 有志者事竟成。
Where there is a will,there is away.◎ 你可以同我们一起去或是呆在家中,悉听尊便。
You can go with us or stay athome,whichever you choose.当然,同学们在写句子时千万不要拿句子去套方法,也不要拿方法去套句子。处处留心皆学问。只要加强知识的积累,一定还会有更多更好的方法。