第一篇:英语四级作文写作模版加句型结构
万能开头公式:
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 经典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that … 写作绝招
结尾万能公式:
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢? 更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作绝招
写作的“七项基本原则”:
一、长 短 句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主 题 句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如: 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、多变句式原则 1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away… 5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑战极限原则
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!写作绝招
文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
一、举实例
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比较
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: 相似的比较:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、换言之
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
四级写作常用经典句型
1)主语从句
It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.2)宾(表)语从句
The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定语从句(限定性和非限定性)
There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.4)状语从句(时间,原因,地点,条件,让步,转折等)
Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5)分词短语做定语或状语
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒装句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.7)被动句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.Many people believe that...(It is believed that...)8)设问句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him? 常用句型:
1. 表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.2)The reasons for this are as follows.3)The reason for this is obvious.4)The reason for this is not far to seek.5)The reason for this is that... 6)We have good reason to believe that...
例:There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life.There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。2.表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.2)It does us a lot of good.3)It benefits us quite a lot.4)It is beneficial to us.5)It is of great benefit to us.例:Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.3.表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.2)It does us much harm.3)It is harmful to us.例:However, everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.综合运用篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。
As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展,人们开始关注............As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们带来了很多问题。
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges, 现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。展现问题篇
问题的常用词:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种观点都其可取之处。
According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer...rather than...根据我的个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。
Personally, I side with the latter(former)opinion...就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者)___________。/Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...通过以上的讨论,我们可以得出如下结论,___________。
So, as I see it..因此,我个人认为,_________。
第二篇:英语四级写作:通用句型及万能总结
英语四级写作:通用句型及万能模板总结
1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例: There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2.表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmfulto us.
例: However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi-sion.
4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示变化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2)A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.
3)The computer has brought about many changes in education.
例: Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事实、现状
1)We cannot ignore the fact that...
2)No one can deny the fact that...
3)There is no denying the fact that...
4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5)However,that’s not the case.
例: We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter
laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比较
1)Compared with A,B...
2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例: Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.
9.表示数量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...
2)The population in this city has now increased(decreased)to 800,000.
3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
例: With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.
再如: From the graph listed above,itcan be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
注:“From the graph listed above,it can be seen that”见句式12。考生将句式9和句式12结合在一起,便可较好地写出2002年6月CET -
4、6短文写作的第一段。
10.表示看法
1)People have(take,adopt,assume)different attitudes towards sth.
2)People have different opinions on this problem.
3)People take different views of(on)the question.
4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例: People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
第三篇:大学英语四级写作常用经典句型
大学英语四级写作常用经典句型
1)主语从句
It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that…
It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…
It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that…
It is / that
2)宾(表)语从句
We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定语从句(限定性和非限定性)
As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…,There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4)状语从句(时间,原因,地点,条件,让步,转折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are with student use of computers.5)分词短语做定语或状语
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒装句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7)被动句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that…(It is believed that…)
8)设问句
Do you still remember the boy several times so no one would trust him?
第四篇:英语四级写作句型
大学英语四级写作技巧简介2009-11-14 18:55大学英语四级写作技巧简介
大学英语四级写作技巧简介——文章结构(2007-05-31 22:34:41)分类:英语学习
英文写作一直是学生们的弱项,四级考试将近,大家都很担心写作问题,在此我先简单介绍一下文章的结构问题,以后再谈其他方面。
四级写作一般以三段式展开,题目要求中通常包含三个要点,每个要点为一段(记住,一定要分段),第一段提出问题,第二段分析问题,第三段解决问题。
以历年的真题为例,2006年12月的题目为Spring Festival Gala on CCTV,要求:1。许多人喜欢看春节晚会;2。但有些人提出取消春节晚会;3。我的看法。“喜欢看春节晚会”是正常现象,应该作为问题的开端进行简短介绍,“有些人提出取消春节晚会”才是重点,必须给出相应的篇幅做详细阐述。最后表明我的观点,其实就是问作者的态度及解决这个矛盾的方法。又如2006年6月的题目:An Announcement for a Voluntary Program, 要求:1。校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动现招募志愿者;2。本次志愿活动的目的、内容及安排;3。报名条件和联系方式。这仍是三段式的结构,第一段提出问题——告之大家会举办一次暑假志愿活动,第二段描述问题——介绍志愿活动的相关信息,第三段解决问题——怎样加入志愿活动(报名信息)。往年还考过写简历,写演讲稿,论述社会现象等题目,总是跳不出三段式,因此学生们必须掌握如何写三段式作文。
总的来说有三点要注意:1。开篇就得点题。文章字数有限,必须采取开门见山的方法,但开篇点题并不是说第一段第一句话就得提出问题,在这之前可以有所修饰,有导入的成分,但不要太长,一般第三句就得清楚、突出地把问题点出来。2。中间段阐述必须清楚。中间段是全文的核心部分,要做到阐述清楚,论证充分,要有一致性、连贯性和条理性。一般由主题句和扩展句组成,主题句是观点的高度浓缩,应该言简意赅;扩展句是对主题句的详细阐述,应该做到理由充分,内容一致。3。结尾段进行总结,并提出解决问题的方法。最后的总结在观点上可以重申但不可以重复,另外结尾一定要有所升华,不能仍停留在对问题的描述上,既然存在问题,就必须想办法解决。
至于如何开端、如何论述、如何结尾的问题,大家敬请期待下一回吧!当然我不会让大家久等的:)
写作能力无法一口气提高,大家必须在平时勤修苦练。
大学英语四级写作——突出主题(2007-06-01 15:57:26)分类:英语学习
Well begun is a half done,如何开头是值得注意的问题,它能确定你的文章给人留下的first impression。中国人喜欢先讲道理最后给出结论,而西方人习惯先下定义,再慢慢解释。按照西方人的思维方式,我们在写文章开头的时候就得突出主题,不拐弯抹角。常见的开头的写作方法大致有下面几种:
1。引述名言谚语
eg: “You have to believe in yourself.That's the secret of success.” Charles Chaplin ever said.In my opinion, self-confidence is the first element on the way to your goal.As the old saying goes:“Knowledge is power.” The main way for us students to gain knowledge is from the books.So some students argue that we should read extensively...It is well known to us all that “...”
2.对比,比较
eg: Some people say..., while others claim that...Some people believe..., but others argue that...Old people often feel that..., but for the young, it is....3.提出一个问题
eg: What constitutes enough information for the decision-maker? It's impossible to put a number
on it, but...Should the Spring Festival Gala be cancelled ? Different people have different answers.Misunderstanding is inevitable in communications.If such misfortuns occurs, what is your
response? Here are some tips for you to treat it in a proper way.4。数据引证(一般用在看图作文中)
eg: As we can see in the charts(柱状图,圆形百分比图),the number of Chinese people who go
abroad has increased greatly between 1992 and 2002.As is clearly shown in the charts, there is an increasing number of people who own a car
during the recent three years.The figures in this graph(曲线图)show us that...According to the graph, we can find that...It can be seen from the table(图表,表格)that...5.陈述现状
eg: With the rapid development of..., the interview is becoming more and more important in
job-hunting.Because of the development of..., great changes have occured in the educational system of
China.Nowadays mobilphone is very popular with college students.(很受学生欢迎)
In recent years cheating in CET4 still prevails among the college students.(近几年里四级
考试舞弊现象在大学生中仍然很普遍。)
It is well-accepted that nowadays dishonesty is a common phenomenon in society.(人们都意
识到现今社会中普遍存在不诚实的现象)
There is a heated debate over private car.Nowadays private car aroused a lot of controversy.偏离主题是写作中的大忌讳,它意味着考生做了30分钟的白工。为了避免这个问题我们一
定要仔细省题,弄清楚考题要求是写议论文、说明文还是记叙文,然后确定文章主题和大致
思路。
大学英语四级写作——主题句和扩展句(2007-06-05 10:09:26)分类:英语学习
在明确了题目要求、确定立意后,应该根据题意构思出文章的框架结构。其中写好主题
句是最关键的步骤。
论述的段落包含多个主题句。主题句(topic sentence)反映段落的中心思想,体现文章的整体结构,让读者对作者的思路一目了然。要写好主题句必须注意以下几个方面:
1。主题句必须是个完整的句子,与文章主旨密切相关。
2。主题句一般是general sentence,内容明确、具体。
3。主题句内涵要广,便于展开细节论述。
比如,写一篇论述计算器的文章,主题思想是反映计算器能帮助人们快速解决算术问题,但过分依赖计算器会对人脑有不良影响。那么主题句应该要紧扣计算器的使用利弊这个方
面,eg: Calculators can obveousely benefit us.However, overusing calculators will also do some harm to us.如果句子不够具体明确,段落的主题便模糊不清,在进一步阐述时会失去方向感。如:
To improve English proficiency, one needs to acquire some skills.这句话中的some skills太泛,读者弄不清到底是哪方面的技能技巧。改成:To improve reading ability, one needs to acquire
some reading skills.这样含义清楚,范围明确,便于细节描述。
而如果句子涉及的面太窄,不够general,没有进一步讨论的余地,这样的句子就不适
合作主题句。如:Today more and more women are going out to work.这句话含义非常清楚,没有进行详细阐述的必要,所以它本身只能是细节句,用来解释主题句。
主题句确定后,必须有足够的细节去支持主题句所提出的观点,给出充分、有力的论证。
这就是扩展句的任务。扩展句是段落的主干部分,是对主题句的中心思想的详细解释,它的特点是:1。清晰详实;2。条理分明;3。内容一致。如:主题句为:Cellphone is one of the
most popular means of communication.那么接下来的扩展句应该要紧跟这个中心意思,有条
理地进行阐述:(扩展句1)People make use of it to make an appointment, take a message for
others,discuss a question and so on.(扩展局2)People even use it to have a meeting or give a
notice.这两句话都说明了手机的社交功能,而且以递进的顺序排列,让读者更好地理解主题
句的含义,具有说服力。
大学英语四级写作——段落的展开(2007-06-05 10:56:54)分类:英语学习
主题句与扩展句构成段落,那么文章段落有什么样的特点呢?
1。段落一致性。
在一个段落就只有一个主题句,就是说一个段落就只能有一个中心思想,一个核心,段落中所有其他句子都要围绕这个中心展开或铺述,一切与主题句没有直接关系的句子都要
舍弃掉。如:However, fake commodities are extremely harmful to consumers as well as to the
whole society.First of all, fake commodities may cause losses to consumers.Meanwhile, fake
commodities may harm people's health, sometimes even lives.And in the 1998 fatal alcohol
poisoning case in Shanxi Province, for example, a peasant produced “alcohol”, dreaming of
becoming rich overnight;which, with 27 people killed and about 700 poisoned, caused great
sufferings to the victims and shoked the whole country as well.Therefore, it is really high time we
took action to crack down on the production and sale of fake commodities.第一句显然是主题
句,其后作者用了三个扩展句进行说明,每句话都与主题句密切相关,最后的结尾句对整段
论述做了升华。所以这一段落是符合一致性原则的。
2。段落连贯性
一个好段落在具体语言上和内容上要有连贯性,段落中的句子要符合一定的条理和逻辑
顺序,句与句之间衔接要紧密,过度要自然、流畅,这样才能反映出一个清晰的思路。如:
It is known to us all that modern transportation plays an important role in our life.In the past
people used to suffer a great deal if they had to make a long journey or convey some heavy goods,the fact is that the transport means at that time was simple and rare.Today, various vehicles, ships
and airplanes have enabled us to go wherever we like to.Not only does modern transportation
bring people much convenience, but is also frees people from the hard work of conveyance.What
is more important is that modern transportaion has saved much of our time so that we can do more
work and learn more knowledge.第一句话点明主题,然后通过古今对比展开论述,按时间顺
序排列,条理清楚,语句连贯自然。
按逻辑顺序安排细节是使段落连贯的方法之一,常用的顺序有四种:时间顺序、空间顺
序、演绎法和归纳法。演绎法是先通过主题句给出一般的总体的观点,然后给出扩展句摆具
体的事实,体现了一般到具体的顺序;归纳法是先给具体事实和细节,再概括总结出其中道
理、规律,体现了具体到一般的顺序。
使段落连贯的方法之二是使用适当的连接手段,一般是指关联词的使用。这个问题我下
次再详许述。
大学英语四级写作——段落的连贯性(2007-06-07 15:43:06)分类:英语学习
在确定好一条条的扩展句后,怎样把这些句子流畅而连贯地组合在一起呢?这便是关联
词发挥作用的时候了。在英语中,句与句之间、段与段之间一般都有连词或关联词连接,通
过这些词读者能够很清楚地明白文章前后的逻辑联系。适当使用关联词是四级写作必备的技
能,大家应该要引起特别重视。常用的关联词分为四类:
1。列举类
列举法常用在议论文中,当作者提出一个论点后,可通过列举出一系列事实对其进行说
明或论证。列举类关联词有:
first(ly), second(ly),...finally;for one thing, for another;on the one hand, on the other hand;
moreover;furthermore;what's more;in addition;besides;first of all;in the first place, in the
second place;(at)last;then;next;the last but not the least
2。举例类
举例法是用事例或数据对中心观点进行说明论证的方法,举例类关联词有:
for example;for instance;such as;like;take...for example;a case in point;namely;in other
words;that is;especially;in particular
3。比较和对比
比较是把两种或两种以上的事物进行比较,以辨别出它们的相似之处;对比是将这些事
物进行对照,辨别其差异而指出各自的特征和本质。这类关联词有:
but;however;yet;otherwise;while;in contrast;by contrast;on the contrary;similarly;
likewise;like;conversely;rather than;instead;on the other hand;equally;nevertheless;
nonetheless;unlike;still;in the same way;compared with...4.因果类
as a result;since;because(of);thanks to;due to;owing to;for this reason;hence;thus;
therefore;on this/that account;on account of;consequently
5.总结类
总结法是指在表达了一个观点或举了一个例子后,进行总结、给出概括,这类关联词有:
in this case;according to;in a word;in brief;in short;to sum up
新东方四级写作万能句型(2007-06-11 18:36:22)分类:英语学习
贴一些新东方的四级写作万能句型,希望对大家有所帮助:
1)第一段:
(1)现状说明:“用于文章开头的语句”
1.When asked about.../ When it comes to.../ Faced with...most/many people believe that..., but
other people consider it differently/ regard it as...2.When it comes to..., people's opinions differ.Some hold the opinion that..., while others claim
that...3.There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the role/ view/ idea of....Some people
claim that..., while others believe that....4.There is a general discussion today about the problem/ issue of....Those who criticize...argue
that....They believe that...But people who advocate..., on the other hand, argue that....5.Most people are of the opinion that....But I personally believe that....6.Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that....7.Now, it is generally acknowledged that..., but I doubt whether....(2)图表描述:“用于描写图片或数据的语句”
1.In 1990, it increased/decreased from...to...2.By comparison with 1998, it decreased/increased by
3.The figure has nearly doubled, compared with/ as against that of last year.4.It has increased/ decreased almost twice/ six times, compared with...5.The number is twice/ four times/ half as much as that of 1990.6.It accounts for/ takes up...percent of the total.(占„„的比例)
7.The number wasmore than/ less than..., a half/ third/ quater of the 1990 total.2)第二段:
(1)原因列举:“用于解释原因的语句”
1.The phenomenon/change in...mainly result from the fact that...2.One may regard the phenomenon as a...sign of.../ response to...3.There are many causes/ reasons for this dramatic growth/decrease.First,...Second,...Finally,...4.A number of factors can account for the change in...5.Another contributory factor of...is...6.Why do people...? For one thing,...for another,.../ One reason is...Another is...Perhaps the
primary reason is....7....is also responsible for the rise/ decrease in...(2)观点陈述:“用于比较、驳斥的语句”
I.用于比较的语句
1.The advantages of A outweigh any benefit we gain from B.2.Good as A is, it has its own disadvantages.For one thing, it...;for another, it....3.Although A has enormous/ much/ considerable/ a distinct advantage over B..., it can not
compete with B in...4.A's advantage sounds ridiculous/ means nothing when B's advantages are considered.II.用于驳斥的语句
1.Although a lot of people believe that..., I doubt/ wonder whether the argument bears much
analysis/ close examination
2.As opposed to widely held ideas, I believe/ think/ argue that...3.Although the popular belief/ idea is that...,(a)current study/ survey indicates that...4.They may be right about..., but they seem to neglect/ fail to mention/ consider the fact that...5.Although it is widely accepted that..., it is unlikely to be true that...6.It is true that..., but this is not to say/ it doesn't mean that...7.There is/are absolutely no/ in fact every reason(s)for us to believe/ accept/ resist/ reject that...8.What these people fail to understand/ consider/ mention is that...9.You/ One may think/ argue/ say that....It probably will.But...10.It is one thing to believe that..., but it is quite another to say that...3)第三段:
结束语:“用于文章结尾的语句”
1.From what has been discussed above/ Taking into account all these features/ Judging from all
evidence offered, we may safely draw the conclusion that....2.All the evidence supports an unshakable conclusion that....3.It is(high)time that we placed great emphasis on....4.It is(high)time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of....5.There is little doubt/ no denying that further attention must be paid to the problem of....6.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation
考前10分钟可用的英语四级写作技巧
四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地,阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。
高分作文标志
1:四级120-150字;六级150-180字;
2是否长短句交叉;
3用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替 enhance one’’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in
googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什
么事情;
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with „ 非常地道的词汇,表达"与„一致"的意思,替换 With „Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into
Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
第五篇:四级写作万能句型
四级写作万能句型
1.论说文
(一)第一段:
1、现状说明:
1.aboutWhen askedWhen it comes to..., most/many people believe that..., but other people Faced withregardconsider...as......differently2.When it comes to..., people's opinions differ.Some believe that..., while others claim that.3.There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the
roleview of....Some people claim that..., ideawhile others believe that....4.There is a general discussion today about the
issue of....Those who criticize...argue that....problemThey believe that....But people who advocate..., on the other hand, argue that....5.Most people are of the opinion that....But I personally believe that....6.Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that....7.Now, it is generally acknowledged that..., But I doubt whether....2、图表描述:
1.In 1990, it increased/decreased from...to...2.By comparison with 1998, it decreased/increased by 3.The figure has nearly doubled, withcompared that of last year.as againstincreased4.It has almost decreasedtwo and a half timestwice, compared with...six timestwice5.The number is 4 times as much as that of 1990.half6.It foraccounts...percent of the total.(up)takeshalfless thanthird7.The number was..., a of the 1990 total.more thanquarter
(二)第二段
1、原因列举:
1.The phenomenon/change in...mainly fromresults the fact that...arises fromsign of... to...response2.One may regard the phenomenon as a...causes3.There are many for this dramatic growth/decrease.First,...Second,...Finally,...reasons4.A number of factors can account for the change in...5.Another contributory factor of...is...are6.Why do...? did...For another,...For one thing, Perhaps the primary reason is....One reason is....Another is....rise in...decrease7....is also responsible for the
2、观点陈述:
1.Although a lot of people believe that..., I doubt whether the argument bears
wondermuch analysis.
n.close examinatiobelieve2.As opposed to widely held ideas, I argue that...think3.Although the popular belief is that...,(a)current ideastudy indicates that...surveymention the fact that...consider4.They may be right about..., but they seem to neglect to
fail5.Although it is widely accepted that..., it is unlikely to be true that...saythis is not to6.It is true that..., but it doesn't follow that...it doesn't meanbelieveaccept noabsolutely7.There is/are that... reason(s)for us to everyin fact resistrejectunderstand8.What these people fail to consider is that...mentionsayYou9. may argue that....It probably will.But...Onethink10.It is one thing to believe that..., but it is quite another to say that...3、利弊说明:
1.The advantages of A outweigh any benefit we gain from B.2.Good as A is, it has its own disadvantages.For one thing, it...;for another, it....enormousmuchl advantage over B..., it can not compete with B in...3.Although A has substantiaconsiderablea distinctsounds ridiculous4.A's advantage when B's advantages are considered.means nothing
4、举例论证:
1.2.3.4.Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.I can think of no better illustration than the following one(This case effectively clarify the fact that This story tells that …
(三)第三段:
1、归纳结论:
From what has been discussed above1.Taking into account all these features, we may safely draw the conclusion that....Judging from all evidence offered2.All the evidence supports an unshakable conclusion that....3.It is(high)time that we placed great emphasis on....4.It is(high)time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of....5.There is doubtlittlethat further attention must be paid to the problem of....no denying6.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.2、建议措施:
1.2.3.4.5.6.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.Hence, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures/steps.We should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control this problem.We should enhance/cultivate the awareness of people that this issue is vital for us.Only in this way can we solve the problem.I believe we humans can overcome this difficulty and we will have a brighter future.