2013英语四级写作经典及点评：人生要自己创造

第一篇：2013英语四级写作经典及点评：人生要自己创造

2013英语四级写作经典范文及点评：人生要自己创造

生活充满了考验和不可预知性。有些人在困难面前一蹶不振，怨天尤人，而有些人却能走出困境走向成功。我们究竟该怎样面对生活，该怎样把握自己?

Create Your Own Life

Sometimes things happen to you that may seem horrible, painful, and unfair at first, but upon reflection you find that without overcoming those obstacles you never would have realized your potential, strength, willpower, or heart.①

Illness, injury, lost moments of true greatness, and sheer stupidity all occur to test the limits of your soul.Without these small tests, whatever they may be, life would be like a smoothly paved road to nowhere.It would be safe and comfortable, but dull and utterly pointless.If someone hurts you, betrays you, or breaks your heart, forgive them, for they have helped you learn about trust and the importance of being cautious to whom you open your heart.②

Make every day count.③ Appreciate every moment and take from those moments everything that you possibly can for you may never be able to experience it again.Talk to people that you have never talked to before, and listen to what they have to say.You can make anything you wish of your life.Create your own life and then go out and live it with absolutely no regrets.[191 words]

行文点评

本文是一篇哲理性的小散文，整体内容可以分为两部分。前面三段，着重描写了生活中的考验以及这些考验对于我们的重要性。后面几段则向读者们提出了一些建议，呼吁人们珍惜生活，创造自己的生活，点明文章的主旨照应了题目。

本文用词考究，句式优美，长短句交错。复合句的使用使得文章更加赏心悦目，排比反复的修辞手法也为文章增色不少。

好文妙译

人生要靠自己创造

有时候一些发生在你身上的事情起初看起来很可怕、很痛苦、很不公平，但是经过深思熟虑你会发现，如果没有克服过这些困难的话，你就永远不会意识到自己的潜力、力量、毅力和勇气。

疾病、伤害、真正伟大时刻的错失以及做了一些愚蠢至极的事情，所有这些事情的出现都是在考验你灵魂的极限。如果不经历这些小的考验，无论它们是什么，你的生活将会像一条通向碌碌无为的平坦之路。它也许是安全而舒适的，但也是枯燥和毫无意义的。

如果某些人伤害了你，背叛了你或者是刺痛了你的心，请原谅他们，因为是他们帮助你学会了什么叫信任，帮助你懂得要谨慎选择你要交心的人。

珍惜每一天。珍惜每一刻，并且带走每一刻所能得到的东西，因为你再也不可能重复这个过程了。

跟那些你从来没有说过话的人说话，并且倾听他们的话语。你可以做到任何你想做的事情。

创造自己的生活，然后走出去，去毫无遗憾地享受生活吧。

词汇斟酌

reflection n.反映，反射，深思，考虑

potential a.有潜力的，有潜能的;n.潜力，潜能

willpower n.毅力，意志力

sheer a.纯粹的, 彻底的;ad.完全，全然

betray vt.背叛，出卖，失信于

cautious a.谨慎的，小心的 佳句临摹

①【注释】upon reflection沉思，深思熟虑

【临摹】At first I thought it was a bad idea，but upon reflection I realized she was right.最初我认为那是个坏主意，但考虑之后我认识到她是对的。

②【注释】hurt, betray, break 三个动词的连续使用，构成了一个排比句式，加强了语气。

【临摹】We were in the midst of shock — but we acted.We acted quickly, boldly, decisively.我们处在惊恐之中，但是我们采取了行动，迅速、大胆、坚定地采取了行动。

③【注释】count计算在内;认为有价值。

【临摹】Take careful aim and make every shot count.仔细瞄准而弹无虚发。

思如泉涌

Life is not all roses.人生并非康庄大道。

Adversity is a good discipline.苦难是磨练人的好机会。

Storms make trees take deeper roots.风暴使树木深深扎根。

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第二篇：2014年6月英语四级写作题目及点评

2012年6月英语四级写作题目及点评

四级写作题目一：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目二：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目三：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

与去年的图画作文模式不同，今年又重新回到了话题作文的形式，并且所给话题也是考生非常熟悉的，很容易展开思路。更令人惊奇的是今年的作文虽然有三个话题，但是话题设定的背景信息是趋同的，都是说外国朋友要来中国或来你的家乡或来你的学校，让你介绍一下中国/家乡/学校的特色，目的还是为了推介我们本土的文化特色，看来出题人是越来越看重中国传统文化的弘扬了。去年的翻译题当中就出现了一系列的对中国传统文化的介绍，像中餐，中国结，茶文化，中国园林，中秋等等。所以说，文化题材，特别是有关中国文化特色的题材要成为以后大家复习的重点内容。以后备考四六级的同学一定要多联系这个文化题材的翻译和写作。

第三篇：英语四级作文点评及

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will.四级写作考题出炉了。看到考题，我们眼前又是一亮：这不是新东方四级写作教材必背范文第13篇The Way to Success 的翻版吗！

这已经不是第一次了。

如果说以前这种情况颇为“偶然”，近年这种“命中考题”的情况似乎不再鲜见、渐渐变成“必然”了。2003年四、六级写作共用的题目Honesty Is the Best Policy就是我们教材必背范文第3篇Honesty；08年6月四级考题“大学生休闲娱乐的方式”和我们必背范文第12篇Ways of Relaxing 非常相近；08年12月考题Disposable Plastic Bags 是我们考前预测的重点；09年12月考题“创建绿色校园”和我们必背范文第9篇Make Our Cities Greener 非常接近，只要把city 改成campus 就可以了。

当然，猜题押题不是我们的宗旨。我们更重视的是如何培养学生的写作能力传授写作技巧。

一般来说，文章的主体段落展开方式不外乎因果分析和举例说明。今年的考题与以往很多“现象类”或“争议类”考题不同，要求评述一句格言，这和03年Honesty 非常相似。对这种文章，因果分析比较牵强。那么我们主要就依靠举例说明了。在我们的教材范文中就举了两个例子，一为孙中山依靠坚强的意志创建中华民国，二为苏秦刺股挑灯夜读。

其实考生只要掌握了方法，随便举一两个自己生活中的例子。只要文字表达顺畅，就是一篇好文章。

碰到熟悉的考题固然欣喜；碰到陌生的考题学会自如应对才是制胜的法则。

附教材范文：

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

第四篇：英语四级写作及解析

2009 年 12 月英语四级写作范文及解析

1、建设绿色校园很重要

2、绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……

3、为了建设绿色校园，我们应该…… Creating a Green Campus Recently the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention.Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individulas and society,for its significance cannot be denied。A green campus environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students.Needless to say, a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish.In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere。In view of the seriousness of the situation, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus.In the first place, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.Furthermore, it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory results.With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future。

历 年四级作文题及范文(2009-06)[2009/06/26] 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么? 也会带来一些问题 你的看法 Free Admission to Museums(满分版)Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad.The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as there’s a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society.Only with free access to this live ‘database’, can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.However, free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well.The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations.As a result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control.On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct.Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it.For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some ‘closed’ days for museums for regular maintenance.Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.历 年四级作文题及范文(2008-12)[2008/07/26] 1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.造成的问题 3.限制使用塑的意义 Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags ? These days disposal products often hit the headlines of newspapers and have been brought into focus of the public.Indeed, it is widely accepted that they have gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life.Taking a look around you, you can find examples too numerous to list: When you walk on the street, you can see plastic bags flying over your head;When you ramble along the river, you can find plastic bottles floating on the water;When you stroll in the park with your lover, you can notice waste paper thrown everywhere.? Among the most important reasons often cited by people is the quickening pace of modern life.They are often too busy to wash dirty dishes or glasses, as a

result they can do nothing but use disposal products.Also playing a part is the improvement of people's life.As a result of the policy of opening and reform, an increasing number of people are much richer than before and can afford disposal products.(原因)? Admittedly, they might benefit us in a short term.Unfortunately, they will do us harm in more than one way.The major harm is(that)they are sure to pollute the environment.To make matters worse, they are likely to have potential harm to public health.To illustrate this point, I can think of no better example than HP, the river through S.As a result of disposal products in it, the water has caused some diseases in the local people.(影响)? To sum up, for the factors mentioned before, we can safely reach the conclusion that the prevalence of disposale products is bound to cause a chain of undesirable effects.In view of the present situation, it is high time that the government tried every means to protect the environment.Only in this way, can we have a bright future.历年四级作文题及范文(2008-06)[2008/06/25] 1.有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 2.还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习3.你对于网络的看法 Recreational Activities In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities.Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study.Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically;while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives.Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities.At last they are lured away from their study or their work.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them.Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development.来源：江涛英语第一时间解析 2008 年 6 月 21 日四级写作 分析： 此次写作题目与昨天我们预测的写作题目之一 The Internet 重合度非常高，都属于正反论证类，需要考生论述正反两方的观点，并最终表明自己的观点。写 作中可用的句型和表达也与 The Internet 的范文达到高达 70%的重合度。具体参 加下面的预测范文。Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 2.还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习

历年四级作文题及范文(2007-12)[2007/12/25]

1、各学校开了各种各样的选修课

2、学生选课有不同的原因

3、就我而言 范文一 Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose from.However, students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas.Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation.Because they assume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job.Others may have their choice made just for fun.They tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses.As far as I’m concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own.范文二 Nowadays many college students prefer to

have electives in their spare time because the courses can offer a variety of skills and abundant knowledge apart from what they learn in the daily courses.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, many students want to get another degree besides their own, so that they can have more competence when they seek a job.Furthermore, as for me, I don’t care about degree or job, I just want to obtain some necessary skills to make my college life worthwhile.What I’m concerned most is how to own more skills that may be necessary for my future.Finally, some students want to learn anything that is different from what they are learning now.The science students, for example, want to know about Shakespeare while the art students want to tell how a vehicle works and how to deal with it when it breaks down.So, they can all get what they think is useful to their college life.On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of multi-demand of the employment market.There is still a long way for us to improve the elective itself, but as a student myself, I find it rewarding and interesting.作文评析： 今年四级的作文，从题目看是明显的议论文。按照我们曾经介绍过的议论文模式，可以用模版来写一 些，开头可以用议 论文典型的开头，比方说，Many students nowadays prefer to have electives because ….., 或者，With the development of the employment market, many students would like to have another course……这样在文章的开篇就提出了明确的主题现 象。第二段可以按照题目要求，根据自己的经历和现在学校的状况，举例说明 这种选修课给自己所带来的利弊，如果自己倾向于上选修课，那么可以多举些优 例如： a ______ majored student myself, I prefer to choose ______ as As 势的例 子，my elective, and I find that _________.比如可以丰富自己的学科范围，扩大知识 面，增强竞争力等。第三段可以说这种现象的劣势，比如： Good as______ is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages also.The apparent example is _______.就你自己的经历来看，可 能有比方说，耽误了正课的时间，学习太多无法消化，精力分散等。最后可以总结，On the whole, above all, 等等，陈述你的观点。

历年四级作文题及范文(2007-06)[2007/06/26] 欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部 欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部。标题：Welcome to our club 本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞，属于一篇应用文写作，与 04 年 6 月的导游词 类似，笔者认为难度不大，可按照以下提纲书写： 1.表达你的欢迎； 2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。范文： Ladies and Gentlemen, First of all, please allow me to express the most heartfelt welcome to all of you on behalf of our English Club.We have been looking forward to seeing you for long.It is a wonderful day today.Now I would like to brief my club to you since I want to leave the most wonderful for you to discover.Our club, organizing various activities regularly catering for the needs of participants, is well-known among many English learners.If you want to meet native English speakers, please join us.If you want to speak English not only accurately but also fluently, please join us.If you want to discover the most attractive aspects in English, please join us.I do hope that you will enjoy your journey of English study with us.Thank you!Sincerely Yours Li Ming

历年四级作文题及范文(2006-12)[2006/12/26]

1、许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会

2、但有些人提出取消春节晚会．

3、我 的看法． The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger

generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.【点评】 本次四级考试作文总体上来说并不是很难。但表现出两个出人意料：一是体 裁，二是题材。对于体裁来说，本次四级作文属于正反对比论证类的文体。比较出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多学生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用场。但是这 只 能得到最基本的分数。虽然模板对于考查学生的语言表达并不益处，但还能测试 出考生的语言基本功。从四级考试写作的测试目的来看，还是注重考查学生对基 本 语法、基本词汇运用能力的掌握情况。所以除了模板之外，考生还要在基本 表达上狠下功夫，只有在平时多操练，在考场上才游刃有余。除此之外，学生还 要在作文 中多采用闪光点，这样就会使作文在基本分数上有所提升，有所突破。

2006 年 6 月英语四级作文 题目：An announcement for a voluntary program

1、校学生 会组织依次暑假志愿活动现招聘志愿者

2、本次志愿者活动的目的、内容及安排

3、报名条件和联系方式 Volunteers Needed 范文 A： Ladies and gentlemen, our Students’Union is calling for your due attention for a voluntary program to be launched in this imminent summer vacation and we are looking forward to your keen concern andd active participation in earnest.This Program is designed to offer the young kids from a certain poverty-stricken area of Yun Nan Province an opportunity of tree education, which means a two-month stay there.We are convinced it si bound to help us university students to put our learning to full play, to foster a meaningful conception of life of being more caring and tolerant and to assume new tasks and responsibilites after graducation.Dear fellow students, we are beneficiaries of a rare privilege of formal education, meanwhile, there are many people, as innately lalented as us, have been deprived of this equal chance, therefore, we hope sophomores and juniors, if interested and willing to help, in this university to contact us ator by 021-12345678.历年四级作文题及范文(2005-12)[2006/07/26] 1． 名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2． 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3． 我 认为…… 2005 年 12 月 24 日英语四级作文及范文 Part V.Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below : 1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3．我认为…… 〔参考作文〕Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 〔参看范文一〕 One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus.During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites.In my opinion,university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists 〔参看范文二〕 In university compus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere.Although most of them visit with hope and repect, I think university compus should not be open to tourists.First, tourists' visit will disturb the normal teaching.They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so on.They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere.Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words.These will affect the environment of the compus badly.The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism.So It should not be open.2

005 年 6 月 18 日英语四级作文及范文 Teacher’s Day ： 1.向老师致以节日的问候。2.回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。3.我如何报答老师。〔参考范文之一〕 This is Teachers’ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.This profession deserves the special recognition and respect.There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field.You have my eternal gratefulness.Have a happy Teachers’ Day.The whole secret of the teacher’s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth;for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life.What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soule.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher.On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me.What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view.On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you.One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.〔参考范文之二〕 National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May.And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine ang smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our buliding.Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she aslo told me that’s very common like many yong people of my age.She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can’t remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!Another teacher’s day,to all the teachers,to our parents.〔参考范文之三〕 The Once per year ’s Teacher’s Day will come soon.At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher.Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school.My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry.After checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute enteritis.My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me.My teacher fed me food and medicine on time.After struggling with the serious illness in one days and one nights, I left hospital.Then my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in succession.I express gratitude to my teacher, I can’t recover so fast without my teacher.Because of my teacher I can participate today’s CETD.I want to repay my teacher.No present can express my grateful feeling to my teacher.And the best repayment is that I can pass

the CETD this time.

第五篇：英语四级写作

(1)Character education

Normally,school education aims to cultivate students ‘abilities to learn and think.But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moralnormsand ethics.we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for being a harmonious one.As a result ,school attach more attention to develop students’ character education.such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.Character education plays an important role in the development of future society.It meet the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities.In the long run ,it protects students from being selfish.indifferent ,conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives.What’ s more ,it teaches students how to learn efficiently ,how to live colourfully and how to do thing seriously ,for their own future ,and also for the future of their motherland.素质教育

通常，学校教育目的是培养学生的学习能力和思考能力。但越来越多的人意识到，没有道德和伦理的培养。我们很难想象一个不错的社会和谐。因此，学校更加重视培养学生的品德教育。如诚信和孝道的素质。在未来社会发展的素质教育发挥重要作用。它满足需要强调，培养学生的综合素质。从长远来看，防止学生从自私。漠不关心，自大以及不礼貌的日常生活。更重要的是，它教导学生如何学习效率，如何生活丰富多彩和怎样做的事认真，对自己的未来，也是祖国的未来。

(2)New Part Jobs

With the rapid development of information society , a large number of new part-time jobs emerge ,such as cyber writers , shooter rectifiers and so on.Since young people tend to accept new thing ,many university students employ these jobs.However ,some are afraid that these part-time jobs will distract students’ attention form their studies and influence their academic achievements.AS far as I am concerned ,taking on part-time jobs can partly relieve students’ economic burdens ,especially to those from poor families.Almost all these new jobs meet the real demands of modern times ,the can ensure college students to keep pace with the times and get self-improvements according to the needs of society.What’s more , when compared with tradition ones ,these new ones show characteristics of novel forms ,diversified styles and flexibility.So if college students can balance their study and part-time jobs well ,they are sure to get enough knowledge as well as working experience ,so as to get ready for their future success.(2)新的兼职工作

随着信息社会的快速发展，大量的新兼职工作机会出现，如网络作家，枪手整流器等。因为年轻人倾向于接受新事物，很多大学生聘请这些工作。然而，有些人担心这些兼职会分散学生注意学习形式和影响他们的学术成就。

在我看来，在兼职的部分原因在于减轻学生经济负担，特别是那些来自贫困家庭。几乎所有这些新的工作能满足现代的真正需求，可以确保大学生与时并进，并得到自我改进根据社会的需要。更重要的是，与传统的产品相比，这些新特性的新形式，多元化的风格和灵活性。如果大学生能平衡自己的学习和兼职好，所以，他们肯定会足够的知识和工作经验，从而为其未来的成功做好准备。

（3）My View on Major-hopping

People’s opinions are always different once they talk about major-hopping.those whose never change their major throughout their life maintain that they have been loving their major for years and dreaming of applying what have learned to their future work ,so what’s the point in changing to another major? They also believe that anyone who wants to excel in this specially has to work hard in the same field for years to acquired skill and knowledge.Many people think otherwise.on the one hand, if they are not interested in or satisfied with their major at college, they decide to make a change when they pursue postgraduate studies.on the other hand, they are also likely to make the transition because they want to find a satisfactory job in the future.My own opinion is that major-hopping,in this fast-developing information era, has become more that common and acceptable.if we want keep pace with times, we have to change for the faster, the higher, and the stronger.if we are sure that the major fits us better and will add meaning to our life, why cannot we make a new beginning?

人们的想法总是不同一旦他们谈换专业。那些不会改变主要在其整个生命保持这一年他们一直爱着他们的专业和梦的运用已经学会今后的工作，所以在不断变化的另一个主要的重点是什么？他们还相信任何excel在这特别的人多年来一直努力在同一领域获得的技能和知识。

许多人认为不然。一方面，如果他们没有兴趣或满意他们的主要高校，他们决定在他们从事研究生学习期间进行更改。另一方面，因为他们希望找到一份称心如意的工作，在未来，他们还是有可能实现转型。

我的意见是大跳，在这个快速发展的信息时代，变得更常见，也可以接受。如果我们要与时俱进，我们必须改变更快、更高、更强大。如果我们相信这主要对我们更好，而且将添加的意义我们的生活，我们为什么不能做一个新的开始？

MODEL TEST 8

During the period from 1995 to 2009,the number of marriage decreased from 9.51million to 8.48 million, while the number of divorce rose from 0.8 million to 1.21 million.We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon.First, young people of marriage age are becoming fewer because of the family planning policy adopted since the late 1970s.second,the current society is one where fierce competition takes place everywhere, and many young people can„t and won‟t get married before they embark on a promising career.Third, today„s people put more and more emphasis upon independence and freedom-they won„t get married before they find an ideal partner, and they will not hesitate to say goodbye when the spark of love dies down.The great change, in my mind,signals the fundamental shift in people‟s view on family and marriage.This trend will probably continue as contemporary people pay more and more attention to high-quality marriage.在1995年至2009期间，婚姻的数量由9.51million下降至848万，而离婚的人数从80万上升到121万。我们认为三个原因可以解释这种现象。首先，由于计划生育政策，自二十世纪七十年代下旬以来，通过结婚年龄的年轻人越来越少。第二，当前社会是一个竞争激烈的地方到处发生，许多年轻人可以，t和赢了，结婚前他们开始有前途。第三，今天，人们越来越强调独立和自由-他们赢了，结婚前他们找到理想的合作伙伴，他们会毫不犹豫的说再见在爱的火花时，平静下来。

巨大的变化，在我看来，人的根本转变的信号，是对家庭和婚姻的视图。这一趋势可能会继续作为当代人越来越重视高质量的婚姻。

（6）Bureaucratic airs on college student cadres

College student cadres are those ones who usually do excellent jobs in academics and make outstanding performance in activities.their manners influence the students around them greatly.however , due to the close relationship between college and society ,many college student cadres gradually show undesirable tendency towards bureaucracy.they mistakenly regard their duties as authorities.This strange phenomenon not only reveals the immature of young adults , but also discloses that those cadres haven‟t realized the nature of the students, union.The following factors can account for it.firstly , self-cultivation of college student cadres is not good enough.because they lack spcial experience , they make mistakes easily with the desires for quick return.secondly , the check up system in college overemphasize their performance in students-union , so student cadres only focus on pursuits of outstanding performance.All things considered, universities should reinforce guidance and education for college cadres and help them build up a stronger sense of service.对高校学生干部的官威

大学生干部是那些学者的他通常做的出色工作，使活动中的出色表现。他们的礼貌大大影响他们周围的学生。但是，由于大学和社会之间的密切关系，许多大学生干部逐步显示对官僚主义的不良倾向。他们错误地认为自己的职责部门。

这一奇怪现象不仅揭示了年轻人的不成熟，但还披露，这些干部还没，没意识到学生的性质，联盟。以下因素可以解释。首先，大学生干部修养不够好。因为他们缺乏spcial经验，他们很容易犯错和快速回报的欲望。其次，检查系统在高校过分强调成绩的学生、工会，所以学生干部只注重追求卓越性能。

总的来说，高校应加强高校干部的指导和教育，帮助他们建立更强的服务意识。

MODEL TEST 10

My view on the negative effects of plagiarism

Nowadays every one of us may come across people who copy others,books, articles or other works for their own benefits now and then.this phenomenon is the most harmful to the academic circle and even the whole society.In my opinion ,their harmfulness can be summarized in the following three respects.In the first place ,the rights of the original holders are cruelly violated.In the second place, people will lose the impulse to create if there is plagiarism here and there.Last but not least ,plagiarism will lead to the degradation of the whole academic circle , when includes not only the publication, but also people,s minds.In my mind ,the government and the citizens should join hands to put an end to plagiarism.on the one hand , he government should punish the plagiarism severely lest they harm the authors again.On the other hand ,common citizens should report such harmful phenomena as soon as possible.only by the joint efforts of the government and the common people can do away with plagiarism.我认为剽窃的负面影响 现在我们每一个人都可能碰到有人复制他人、书籍、文章或其他作品不时为自己的利益。这一现象是最有害的学术界，甚至整个社会。

在我看来，他们的危害可以概括成以下三个方面。首先，残忍地侵犯原持有人的权利。其次，人们将失去创造的冲动是否有剽窃这里和那里。最后，剽窃会导致整个学术圈的退化，不仅包括发布时，但也人，是思想。在我看来，政府和市民应该携起手来，杜绝抄袭。一方面，他的政府应该惩罚抄袭严重，以免他们再次伤害作者。另一方面，普通公民尽快应报告等不良现象。只有政府和百姓的共同努力下可以取消剽窃。

（7）No pain, no gains

The well-known proverb “no pains ,no gains ”has been accepted by all of us.it tells us that we have to make efforts whenever we want to be successful in a certain field.Let,s take English study as an example.If we want to improve our listening ability , we have to keep on listening to different materials and make records from time to time.It is also true with spoken English.listening to teachers attentively in class and reading books are far from enough –you should practice talking with partners every week.Another good case in point is acrobatics.Nobody is born a good acrobat, and one can only become a skilled one after countless failures.All of us excited when they win grand prizes in international competitions, but who knows how many hardships they have endured?

Judging from the examples given above, we may safely come to the conclusion that no pains, no gains.so why not try our best to learn our specially well? I am sure we will become experienced and skilled if we never give up.没有痛苦，没有收益 著名谚语“不劳而不获”我们已被接受。它告诉我们，我们要努力当我们希望在某些领域获得成功。让，是以英语学习为例。如果我们想提高听力，我们还要继续听取不同的材料，使记录时间。此外，也与英语口语。在课堂上听老师讲课和阅读书籍是远远不够–you每周都要练习交谈与合作伙伴。另一个好例子是杂技。没有人生来就是好的杂技演员，和一个在无数失败后，只能成为一个熟练的人。当他们在国际比赛中赢大奖时，我们都很兴奋，但他知道经历了多少艰辛？从上面的例子来看，我们完全可以得出结论：不劳而不获。所以为什么不努力学习特别好？ 我相信如果我们从未放弃，我们会越来越有经验和技能。

（9）Whenever we talk to others , we should not hesitate to complain in two situations.First ,if a matter is not done properly , we should complain.otherwise ,the wrong practice will go on and on , until it becomes such a serious matter that nobody can overlook it any longer.to make matters worse,the most appropriate time for solving the problem may have passed.second ,if the matter is dishonest or even report to the police , or it will harm the interest of other people or even the whole society.Many people don,t complain when they should ,mainly for two reasons.in most cases ,they put up with the wrongdoings because the matter is not too serious.it is also likely that they do not want to seem to make fuss about trivial matters.neverthless ,when they choose not to complain , they do nothing to prevent wrongdoings from spresding.If people don,t complain when they should ,illegal actions even crimes will be on the rises.every one of us should learn to form the habit of complaining whenever necessary

每当我们同别人谈话，我们应当毫不犹豫地抱怨在两种情况。首先，如果问题没有做好，我们应该抱怨。否则，错误做法将继续，一直继续，直到它变成一个非常严重的问题，没有人再可以忽略它。更糟糕的，解决问题的最适当的时间可能已经过去。第二，如果事情是不诚实甚至报警，或会伤害其他人的利益，甚至整个社会。很多的人，当他们应该抱怨，主要有两个原因。在大多数情况下，他们把不法行为，因为这件事并不太严重。它也可能，不希望似乎对小事大惊小怪。neverthless，当他们选择时，不要抱怨，他们从spresding做什么能阻止不法行为。如果人们，当他们应该抱怨，甚至犯罪的非法行动将会上升。我们每个人都应该学会形式抱怨必要时的习惯

Limited tour on famous universities, campuses

Along with the phenomenon that famous university campuses have become popular attraction , great concerns have been showed to campus tourism.since it has been found that the normal teaching has been disturbed, the environment has been polluted and the spiritual atmosphere has been ruined ,a large number of universities have carried out rules to limit tourist on campus.As we know ,campuses are mainly places for study ,and they are holy palaces where students gain profound knowledge.being open to tourists may distract students,attention from their studies ,and make a great deal of hustle and hustle on peaceful campuses.most importantly , it may cause unnecessary troubles for students.For example ,their personal interests can,t be guaranteed.Meanwhile, I sincerely hope that university would take into consideration the positive meaning, and hold regular “open activities” in order to improve their reputations as well as enable middle school students to get more information about them , and then help students enough preparation for their future.