英语四级作文点评及

第一篇：英语四级作文点评及

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will.四级写作考题出炉了。看到考题，我们眼前又是一亮：这不是新东方四级写作教材必背范文第13篇The Way to Success 的翻版吗！

这已经不是第一次了。

如果说以前这种情况颇为“偶然”，近年这种“命中考题”的情况似乎不再鲜见、渐渐变成“必然”了。2003年四、六级写作共用的题目Honesty Is the Best Policy就是我们教材必背范文第3篇Honesty；08年6月四级考题“大学生休闲娱乐的方式”和我们必背范文第12篇Ways of Relaxing 非常相近；08年12月考题Disposable Plastic Bags 是我们考前预测的重点；09年12月考题“创建绿色校园”和我们必背范文第9篇Make Our Cities Greener 非常接近，只要把city 改成campus 就可以了。

当然，猜题押题不是我们的宗旨。我们更重视的是如何培养学生的写作能力传授写作技巧。

一般来说，文章的主体段落展开方式不外乎因果分析和举例说明。今年的考题与以往很多“现象类”或“争议类”考题不同，要求评述一句格言，这和03年Honesty 非常相似。对这种文章，因果分析比较牵强。那么我们主要就依靠举例说明了。在我们的教材范文中就举了两个例子，一为孙中山依靠坚强的意志创建中华民国，二为苏秦刺股挑灯夜读。

其实考生只要掌握了方法，随便举一两个自己生活中的例子。只要文字表达顺畅，就是一篇好文章。

碰到熟悉的考题固然欣喜；碰到陌生的考题学会自如应对才是制胜的法则。

附教材范文：

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

第二篇：2014年6月英语四级答案及点评

2014年6月英语四级答汇总

听力：

1.B.Use a ladder to help her reach the tea.点评：事实细节题，主要听男士的意见Why don’t you use the ladder.strain v.表示拉伸，扭伤 strain your shoulder 拉伤肩膀

2.D.Outside an art gallery.点评：推理判断题，从女士的“exhibition”与男士的“favorite painter”中推断出。

3.B.She does not quite agree with what the man said.点评：推理判断题，从女士的评价中可以看出。

evaluation n.表示评估价值 ；an unfair evaluation 有失公正的评价；

4.C.Doris fixed up some of the book shelves.点评：推理判断题，从男士的“I got Doris to do some of them.”推断出答案。注意shelf 复数形式是shelves

5.D.He has found a better position.点评：事实细节题，主要听男生的陈述 “I’ve been offered a much better position with another firm”

firm在这里解释为：公司，企业。

6.A.They should finish the work as soon as possible.点评：推理判断题，从男士的“But I think we should get it over with this weekend”可以得出。

7.D.The furniture the man bought is inexpensive.点评：事实细节题，从男士的描述“dirt cheap”中可以得出。

dirt cheap 表示非常便宜。furnish v.表示布置；陈设 n.furniture 家具。

8.B.The woman is waiting for a call.点评：推理判断题，从男士的话中“I’ll let you know when he calls.”推断出答案。Conversation 1:

9.A.She had a job interview to attend.点评：事实细节题。关键听取原文中“It’s just that she submitted a job application yesterday and the company asked her in for an interview today”.10.C.Submit her roommate’s assignment.点评：事实细节题加单词的同义替换。关键听取原文中“I’m calling to see whether it would be OK if I gave you her essay.”

11.A.Where Dr.Ellis’s office is located.点评：事实细节题。关键听取原文中“And Dr.Ellis, one more thing, could you tell me where your office is?”

Conversation 2:

12.C.He can handle it quite well.点评：同义替换原文内容“But it’s bearable now that I’ m used to it”。be used to 表示为习惯做某事。

13.B.The 6:30 train.点评：细节题。重点听取原文中“It was terrible at first, especially getting up before dawn to catch that 6:30 train”

14.C.The time on the train is enjoyable.点评：细节题加词性转换。重点听取原文中“But now I quite enjoy it.”

15.A.Reading newspapers.点评：细节与词义替换。重点听取原文“In the morning, I just sit in comfort and read the papers to catch up with the news.”

16.D.Get key information by reading just once or twice.17.A.Choose one's own system of marking.18.B.By reviewing only the marked parts.19.D.Everybody needs some sleep for survival.20.C.It is a rare exception.21.B.His mother's injury just before his birth.22.C.She developed a strong interest in finance.23.D.She inherited a big fortune from her father.24.A.She was extremely mean with her money.25.B.She built a hospital with her mother's money.26.identical

27.approach

28.back and forth

29.opposite

30.indicates

31.referring to

32.parallel to

33.reserved

34.at a right angle

35.embarrassing

阅读题：

36.N.simply

37.A.average

38.M.ranked

39.F.launched

40.E.expensive

41.H.neglected

42.K.potential

43.C.distributed

44.L.quit

45.B.collection

段落匹配：

46.D

47.G

48.A

49.E

50.C

51.H

52.G

53.D

54.A

55.F

Passage 1

56.B they do not feel as fit for management roles.57.B It does not consider its economic impact on graduates.58.A It is difficult for male and female students.59.D They don't perform as well as they did in high school.60.A Women are too worn out to be ambitious.Passage 2

B.Few of them are equal to their positions.62 A.They believe they have the natural gift to lead.63 D.Being able to assess the situation carefully before taking charge.64 B.They become impatient and rude.65 C.Build up a strong team to achieve their goals.翻译一：

中国应该进一步发展核能，因为核能目前只占其总发电量的2%，该比例在所有核国家中居第30位，几乎是最低的。

2011年3月日本核电站事故后，中国的核能开发停了下来，中止审批新的核电站，并开展全国性的核安全检查。到2012年10月，审批才又谨慎地恢复。

随着技术和安全琐事的改进，发生核事故的可能性完全可以降到最低程度。话句话说，核能是可以安全开发和利用的。China should continue to develop nuclear energy, for currently, nuclear energy only contributes 2% in the total power generating capacity.The percentage, ranking the 30th among all the countries that possess nuclear energy, is almost the lowest.China's nuclear power development stopped after the nuclear power plant

accident in Japan in March, 2011.The approval of new nuclear power plants was suspended, and the nationwide nuclear energy safety inspection started.Until October, 2012, the approval was cautiously activated again.With the improvement of technology and safety measures, the odds of nuclear power accidents can definitely be minimized.In order words, nuclear energy can be developed and utilized safely.翻译二：

为了促进教育公平，中国已经投入360亿元，用于改善农村地区教育设施和加强中西部地区农村义务教育。这些资金用于改善教学设施、购买书籍，使16万多所中小学收益。资金还用于购置音乐和绘画器材。现在农村和山区的儿童可以与沿海城市的儿童一样上音乐和绘画课。一些为接受更好教育而转往城市上学的学生如今又回到了本地农村学校就读。

In order to promote equality in education, China has already invested 36 billion yuan into improving educational facilities in rural areas and strengthening compulsory education in central and western areas.These funds are used to improve teaching facilities and purchase books, benefiting more than 160,000 primary and secondary schools.The funds are also used for the purchase of musical instruments and painting equipments, thus children in rural and

mountainous areas now are able to enjoy the same music and painting lessons as those living in coastal cities.As a result, some students who have transferred to schools in cities for better education are now back to their local schools.作文一：

Yu Garden

If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai.Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden.She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish.Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk.There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there.Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen.For

example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden.This is a place where the features of this city are combined.作文二： Guilin – A Beautiful City in China

In China, there's a saying that “The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven.” In light of this, I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi.The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location.The trees line the

streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent.Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery.From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape.It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes.Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water.They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.本文作者：青春勿嬲，禁止一切侵权行为

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第三篇：2014年6月英语四级写作题目及点评

2012年6月英语四级写作题目及点评

四级写作题目一：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目二：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目三：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China.What is the place would you show him or her and why?

与去年的图画作文模式不同，今年又重新回到了话题作文的形式，并且所给话题也是考生非常熟悉的，很容易展开思路。更令人惊奇的是今年的作文虽然有三个话题，但是话题设定的背景信息是趋同的，都是说外国朋友要来中国或来你的家乡或来你的学校，让你介绍一下中国/家乡/学校的特色，目的还是为了推介我们本土的文化特色，看来出题人是越来越看重中国传统文化的弘扬了。去年的翻译题当中就出现了一系列的对中国传统文化的介绍，像中餐，中国结，茶文化，中国园林，中秋等等。所以说，文化题材，特别是有关中国文化特色的题材要成为以后大家复习的重点内容。以后备考四六级的同学一定要多联系这个文化题材的翻译和写作。

第四篇：2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文及点评

2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文范文及点评

题目：Create a green campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要 2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境

3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……

新东方版范文(一)

It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college.Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable.Some of the authorities' budget should be on how to reduce of the waste.What's more, we'd better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.(字数：167)

点评：本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句＋逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变。相信大多数同学应该能够习惯的应用新路老方法走的思路。但是，还是这句话，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。

新东方版范文(二)

In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus.We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use;food is wasted just because of its poor taste;clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion.As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus.There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus.On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account.On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels.Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps.For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on.For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves.恩波版范文 范文：

Create a Green Campus “Green campus” is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us.It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind.Of course, this concept is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world.The young generation is under the burden of severe environmental problems and the hopes of environmental improvement are lying in them.Therefore, campus plays a more important role in educating the young generation.The creation of “Green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities;most importantly, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own mission and responsibility.Under such stimulations, students may grasp the chance to learn every necessary course for the harmonious and sustainable development of the world.To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities.Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities.Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings.恩波版真题作文点评

此次的作文题目出的相对生僻，因为大多数考生对于“绿色校园”这个概念不大熟悉，这可能是最大的障碍，给考生着手写作文带来一定的困难。尽管“绿色校园”概念相对生僻，但此题中寓含的另一个概念“环境”却不可忽视，因此，考生应当从环境问题着手，着重点放在校园在“环境保护”中所起的重要作用，这样问题就能够迎刃而解。

首先要理清概念。“绿色校园”不仅指校园的绿色环境，“绿色学校”是指学校在实现其基本教育功能的基础上，将以可持续发展理论为导向，在全面的日常工作中将可持续发展思想纳入管理中，通过制订环境管理制度，开展有效的环境教育活动，创设环境保护的文化氛围，促进师生、家长和专家参与环保和可持续发展的实际行动，全面提高师生的环境素养，共同为社会的可持续发展做出贡献。从概念就能看出“绿色校园”的重要性。

其次要弄清“绿色校园”的重要性。“绿色校园”不仅仅是带领学生参与各种环境保护活动，更重要的是教育学生，使学生具有环境意识，从而使学生从自己意识的角度来理解当前的环境问题，为未来的环境改善打下坚实的基础。

最后就是要采取的措施。要很好地建设“绿色校园”光靠学校自身是不够的，这需要全体社会的动员与支持。只有在整个社会的共同努力下，“绿色校园”才能充分发挥其作用。从学校的角度来讲，学校应当在学校全面的日常管理工作中纳入有益于环境的管理措施，并持续不断地改进，充分利用学校内外的一切资源和机会全面提高师生环境素养的学校；鼓励师生的民主公平地共同参与学校环境教育活动，加强学校与社区的合作和联系，在实践参与的过程中发展面向可持续发展的基本知识、技能、态度、情感、价值观和道德行为，即提高全体教职员工和学生的环境素养，落实环保行动。

从总体写作来看，这篇作文总的可以分为三段：

第一段：着重写“绿色校园”的概念，从其概念引出“绿色校园”的重要地位。

第二段：此段的重点就是“绿色校园”的重要性，它能够促进学生们积极地参与到实际的环境问题中去，而且还能树立学生们的环境保护意识，对社会做出重大的贡献。

第三段：鉴于“绿色校园”的重要性，我们应当采取什么措施来建设“绿色校园”，把“绿色校园”的作用发挥到最大。

文都版范文 范文：

I am the part of the Green Campus

The Olympic Games was hold in our country last year.“Green and Environment-protecting ” is one of the Three Themes of it.Our government has made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more green project to keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource.As a university student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of green and environment-protecting home and.We will start it from ourselves, our classmates, our friends and other people around us.We can stop cars running through our campus streets.And in the bathrooms, we will never leave the water running on after using.We will never throw things everywhere without thinking, They are wrong.These things are taking place everyday everywhere in our school.So, let's begin to act!Don't talk loudly in public places.Turn off the water tap after using it.After washing the clothes, use it to flash the toilet.Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car.Save your pocket money and contribute to environmental protection organizations.Collect waste paper or bottles for recycling.Plant more trees and flowers.We can start from every little thing around us to truly realize the green campus.Publicize the theme of green and environment-protecting, and let us really reach the “Green and Environment-protecting” goal in our generation.This is the responsibility of everyone who loves life and peace.文都版真题作文点评

作文是绿色校园的问题，包括在文都我们每一次对作文从三个角度去做预测，一个是结构，一个是主题，一个是它的材料，进行一个预测，但是这一次我总结有点对不起我的学生，因为这次尽管结构，首先第一个就是我们的绿色校园的重要性;第二是绿色不仅仅是环境的问题，也是列举的问题，除了环境以外还有什么别的方法，第三是怎么去做，其实这个结构老师在预测的过程中预测到了，但是主题坦白地说这一次徐可风没有预测中，还好后面的材料那块，我是给了学生五个材料，其中有一个怎么哥本哈根的会议闹得很凶的，气候跟绿色那是可以接上轨的，这次听过我的课的学生在重要性上可以来这么一句话，如果说哥本哈根会议是很重要的的话，那么建设绿色校园也必然很重要，有了这么一句就跟时实有一个结合，这就是个亮点，怎么说找亮点这就是亮点，所以上结构上我们是预测中，在主题上没有预测中，但是在材料上怎么说吧也中了(笑)。写作这一块大概是这么个情况，但是我现在很担心一个问题，同学们在考场上的时候思路打不开，我一直很担心这个问题，尽管知道一个结构但是思路打不开，现在我们就结合我们这次写作的讲得细一点。第一个关于重要性这块，我觉得我们在思路说可以不可以去联系一些我们在校园里看到的能够跟绿色环保扯得上关系的一些现象，大家是不是可以看到校园里面的湖、池塘飘的可口可乐、康师傅的塑料瓶，这些是不是体现出一种对环境一种很污染，这肯定是不绿色，我们每次晚上看到校园里面的教学楼灯光很辉煌，一看是不是很多学生都在自习啊，是不是很多学生在很认真地学习呢，到了教室一只鬼都没有，就是开着灯光，这就浪费了一种电，是不是也是不绿色的体现，我发现有一些尤其是男孩子，他们我不知道他们洗一双袜子用多少水，但是我感觉他洗一双袜子的水够我洗个洗澡，这是不是也是一种浪费，对资源的不重视，就是不绿色的行为，其实这些我们都可以结合身边的校园的事情去表达，一下子你的思路就打开了。

关于第二点绿色不仅仅是指环境的问题，我们可以再想想绿色还包括什么呢?刚刚除了提到的一些浪费的问问题，再想想，是不是包括刚刚考完试的同学有没有作弊过呢，这作弊是不是不诚实的问题，从道德的角度来说也是个不健康的，只要不健康的我们都可以把它称为不绿色，这些也可以结合去谈，是道德上的东西，还有有一次我突然想起来有一次我去检查宿舍，到宿舍里面去看进一个男生的宿舍，进之前我在走廊上听男生一直在发出一些感叹声，我进去一看一大批男孩子围着一个电脑不知道看什么，我进去说，我说你们在看什么内容，他们一看到我立刻就闪开了，感觉脸色有点不太好意思，我走过去看看电脑屏幕一看什么都没有。我当时想为什么我一来大家就全部闪开了吗，他们说是普通网页，徐老师也曾经年轻过，不要骗我，他们在上网看什么很清楚，这是不是也是不绿色的东西，东西这些除了环境以外，我们的道德，我们的上网，包括我们说话的习惯，我们说话的很多的学生尤其是男同学说话很有个性的，动不动就是一些国骂，其实在英文里面有一个词专门叫F words,那个单词我们不用说出来了，这种是不是是一个语言上的不绿色的表现，所以我觉得这里第二段的内容会写得内容非常非常多，敢于展开你的思路。

第三段是怎么去做，才能够比较的绿色，对绿色校园应该怎么去做，对于这一块我们首先可以地点从环境上保护环境，第二从节约上，节约电力，节水。

第五篇：大学英语四级作文预测(附点评及万能句)

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（一）Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students 1． 不少大学生的生活方式消极，不上课，不运动，不出去社交，而是宅在家里或宿舍，导致知识水平下降的同时身体素质也在下降。2． 你对此有什么看法和建议？

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In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities.This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition pressures, and so on.To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed.As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard.Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home.Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.【点评】

文章开门见上，指出大学生的不良生活方式，简单提及其危害。之后第二段分析了导致生活方式消极的原因：生物钟颠倒，沉迷于网络游戏，饮食习惯不规律以及各种竞争的压力。同时分别给大学，父母和大学生给出建议。

文章第一段中would like„ rather than意为“宁愿„„而不愿„„”； to some extend意为“在某种程度上”； reversed biological clock意为“颠倒的生物钟”；health comes first意为“健康第一”；conscientiously observe意为“认真遵守”；form意为“培养”。

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（二）Character Education 1． 学校教育除了培养学生的学习能力之外，还应注重诸如孝顺、诚实等的品德培养； 2． 品德培养的重要性。

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Normally school education aims to cultivate students' abilities to learn and think.But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life.As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.Character education plays an important role in the development of future society.It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities.In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives.What's more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently, how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously, for their own future, and also for the future of their motherland.【点评】

本题谈论的是学校教育，说明了只注重培养学生的学习，思考能力，很难建成和谐舒适的社会，由此引出需要加强道德教育。第二段从几个方面说明品德教育的重要性：满足学生全面发展的需要；防止学生变得自私，自利，自负，没有礼貌等等；教导学生对自己和祖国的将来负责。

第一段第一句中hardly意为“几乎不”；leading a harmonious life意为“引领和谐生活”； attach more attention to 意为“更加重视”； 第二段第一句 plays an important role in意为“起重要作用”；efficiently，colourfully和seriously http://zikao.hushine.com/plus/guestbook/作为副词，修饰前面的动词，分别指代有效地学习，多姿多彩地生活，认真负责地做事。

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（三）Does Knowledge Change Fate? 1． “知识改变命运”曾是无数寒门子弟奋斗的动力所在，可如今现实却是，不仅知识难以改变命运，穷孩子能接触到知识的机会也在减少。2． 你对此有什么看法，且应采取什么措施阻止这种现象？

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Large number of children from poor families once held the belief “Knowledge can change fate” and thought that hardworking could reward them--As one sows, so will one reap.But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can't change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society.First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening.Second, it may let many real potential genius go away.Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.Therefore it needs to take urgent measures.On the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students.As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.【点评】

文章由习语“知识改变命运”引出话题，指出当今社会现实---知识无法改变命运。文章第二段分析了该现象的危害：加剧穷富差距和不公平；导致“潜在的”人才流失；不利于建立和谐社会。最后一段分别给政府，学校提出建议，采取措施改变这种状况。第一段中reward 意为“回报”；As one sows, so will one reap.为习语，意为“ 一分耕耘,一分收获。” 文章第二段中列举该现象的危害，分别用 First,„Second,„Third表示“首先„„其次„„再次”。building a people-oriented, harmonious society意为“创建以人为本的和谐社会”。第三段中 make preferential policies意为“制订优惠政策”，establish completed systems意为“建立完善的体系”http://cka.hushine.com/。

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（四）Indirect Employment 1． 工作难找，大学生流行“曲线就业”，通过实习或做一些杂活积累社会经验。2． 你对此有什么看法？

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Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out.Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment.Firstly, it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which can't be gotten from books.Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests.Last but not the least, it improves university students' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs.【点评】

文章第一段指出大学生就业形势严峻，随之出现“曲线就业”。文章第二段开门见山，说明自己的观点---赞成这种做法，然后一一列出了好处：第一，缓解就业压力，获取新的知识和实践经验；第二，有利于大学生认识自己兴趣所在；第三，锻炼学生的社会技能和个性。第一段中severe employment situation意为“严峻的就业形势”；finding ways out意为“寻求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意为“支持”；not only„but also意为“不仅„„而且„„”；Last but not the least http://zikao.hushine.com/意为“最后但是最重要的是”。

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（五）Who Should Pay the University's Tuition？

1． 大学学费不断上涨，有人认为大学学费应由学生自己赚取，有人认为应由父母供给。2． 作为大学生，谈谈你自己的观点，并给出理由。

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University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities.With the rising of university's tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university's tuition.Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life.Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students' ability.As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part.It is true that trying to make money will affect university students' studies.But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money.Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.【点评】

文章第一段开门见山，指出关于谁支付大学学费的不同意见。第二段说明自己的观点----希望父母和孩子共同承担学费，这样有助于减轻家庭负担，学生也有机会通过社会实践获取更多社会经验。

第一段中With the rising of university's tuition意为“随着大学学费的上涨”；be beyond one' s ability意为“超出某人的能力范围”。第二段中http://cka.hushine.com/plus/guestbook/ gain working experience意为 “获取社会经验”；lighten financial burdens意为“减轻经济负担”。

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Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....http://www.xiexiebang.com/随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。

As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。（Hold different attitudes 持不同的看；Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法）

As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting

求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。

As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。

The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.http://ckc.hushine.com/

人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。

......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“

_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是：”我们该如何

Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges，现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。