雅思写作考试指南(培训类)

第一篇：雅思写作考试指南(培训类)

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培训类的雅思写作考试介绍

介绍：

写作考试形式

IELTS考试写作(培训类)部分总共用时60分钟，包含两篇作文的写作要求，考生需完成这两篇作文。

作答方式

考生需将答案填写在答卷中。

考试时间

我们建议考生用花20分钟写作文

一、40分钟写作文二。考生需在1小时内完成两篇作文。作文二比作文一的分数所占的比例要高，因此考生应给留有充足的时间完成作文二。

评分

考生的作文将由具有评卷资格的考官进行评分，这些考官都经过了严格的培训和标准化考核。考生的作文将分派给随机安排的考官进行评卷。每篇作文都是由考官独自评分的，并获得一个分数。分数经过计算，最后得出一个写作的总分。培训类写作成绩有整分和半分之分。

作文一

在作文一中，考生需根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件，形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。题目包括对一个问题或事件的描述，以及对考生需完成的任务的三点要求。文章字数不能少于150字，建议考生用20分钟完成。

作文一的评分标准如下：

1)是否完成了写作要求

2)连贯性和结构层次

3)词汇来源

4)语法的多样性和准确性

作文一题目类型：

对考生的要求考生需根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件，形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。文章字数不能少于150字。

这篇作文要写什么内容？

题目指引中会说明一个问题或情况，题目还包括对考生需完成任务的三点要求。考生应仔细阅读题目的指引要求。

考生需提供什么样的信息？

考生需提供信息和/或解释一个问题。具体来说，考生需要：

• 咨询和/或提供一般性的事实性信息；

• 表达需求、要求、喜恶等；

• 表达看法或投诉；

• 提出要求、建议等。

考生需要对什么样的问题或情况进行写作？

考生需要进行写作的问题或情况都是来自日常生活的，比如：

• 写信给大学住宿管理人员，说明住宿方面的问题；

• 写信给一个新加入的员工，说明其在时间安排方面的问题；

• 写信给一家本地报纸，涉及在本地建设飞机场的内容；

• 写信给一间租赁公司，要求解决住房的供暖系统问题；

• 写信给一个说英语的朋友，邀请其参加一个派对。

这篇作文的写作形式如何？

这取决于写作的对象，如谁是接收人、写作人与接收人的关系等。考生应根据写作对象的不同而选择适合的写作形式，以实现写作目的，如写给朋友应用非正式的形式、写给上司应用正式的形式。

考生还需要其他哪些技能来完成作文一？

• 准确地分析考试题目要求

• 按考试题目规定作答

• 按照英文信件的习惯作答，如提供信息的顺序、写作形式的选用、如何写作书信的开头和结尾、如何安排信件的格式。

• 使用语言准确、得当

• 连贯地、有层次地组织信息、联系信息。

考生无需在信件中对地址进行写作。

作文一是如何进行评分的？

考官将从以下方面对作文进行评分：

• 是否完成了写作要求：考生能否清晰地表达此信的写作目的、能否完整并得当地完成了题目中的三点要求；

• 连贯性和结构层次：考生能否有效组织信息和要点、信息和要点之间的联系是否清晰； • 词汇来源：考生使用的词汇是否广泛、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求；

• 语法的多样性和准确性：考生使用的语法结构是否多样、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求。

有什么需注意的方面？

• 考生需将作文写在答卷上；

• 字数如果达不到最低要求将被扣分；

• 文章内容如果偏题或者跑题将被扣分；

• 任何抄袭(如抄袭其他来源的内容)的作文将被重扣；

• 文章如果不完整、内容相互没有关联将被扣分(如在任何部分使用点句或笔记形式)。

作文二

在作文二中，题目中会给出一个看法、论点或某个特定题目的问题，考生需就此提供事实性的信息、概述或提出一个解决方案、论证一个观点、或评价观点和论据。考生在这部分需进行议论文形式的写作。文章字数不能少于250字，建议考生用40分钟完成。

作文二的评分标准如下：

1)对写作任务的反应

2)连贯性和结构层次

3)词汇来源

4)语法的多样性和准确性

作文二对考生的要求

考生需写一篇议论性的文章，字数应不少于250字。

作文二是必须完成的吗？

是的。作文二比作文一所占的分数比例要大，如果考生没有完成这部分内容成绩将大打折扣。

考试时间有多长？

考生在这一部分最好不要使用超过40分钟的时间。

这篇作文要写什么内容？

题目指引中会给出一个观点、论点或问题，并要求考生对此进行讨论。考生应仔细阅读题目的指引要求。

考生需要对什么内容进行议论/讨论？

其中包括：

• 提供一般性的事实性信息

• 概述和/或提出一个解决方案

• 论证一个观点

• 评价论据和观点

考生需要对什么样的主题进行写作？

主题为一般性的内容，比如：

• 儿童的休闲活动是否应该具有教育性；

• 为何当今的家庭关系不如以往密切、如何可以使家庭关系更加密切；

• 照顾老年人应由谁来承担费用；

• 是否应在公众场合禁止吸烟。

考生应采用什么样的写作文体？

半正式的文体。即使在读者对象不明确的情况下，这部分内容通常仍需要使用议论性的文体。

考生还需要其他哪些技能来完成作文二？

• 准确地分析考试题目

• 按考试题目规定作答• 按照英文的议论文写作习惯作答，如提供信息的顺序、写作形式的选用、如何对写作议论文的开头和结尾、如何有效地进行分段。

• 使用语言准确、得当• 连贯地、有层次地组织信息、联系信息。

作文二是如何进行评分的？

考官将从以下方面对作文进行评分：

• 对写作任务的反应：考生是否能以合适的方式完整地完成题目中提出的写作任务；考生的论点是否切中题目的要求、论证过程是否完整、论点是否得到了论据的支持；考生的观点是否清晰和有效；

• 连贯性和结构层次：考生能否将信息和要点进行组织(如运用分段的能力)、信息和要点之间的联系是否清晰；

• 词汇来源：考生使用的词汇是否广泛、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求；

• 语法的多样性和准确性：考生使用的语法结构是否多样、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求。

有什么需注意的方面？

• 考生需将作文写在答卷上；

• 字数如果达不到最低要求将被扣分；

• 文章内容如果偏题或者跑题将被扣分；

• 任何抄袭(如抄袭其他来源的内容)的作文将被重扣；

• 文章如果不完整、内容相互没有关联将被扣分(如在任何部分使用点句或笔记形式)。

第二篇：雅思写作 环保类

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

如今，我们正在制造出越来越多的垃圾。你认为产生这种现象的原因是什么？政府怎样做才有助于减少垃圾的产生？

9分考官范文：in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, processed food.we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.(本段提出垃圾增多的两种原因：产品外包装与塑料购物袋的大量使用。)

than families did in the past.Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket,（本段论证原因1： 现代生活注重便利，从而导致产品外包装被大量使用）and throw it away.We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce.We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.（本段论证原因2： 塑料购物袋的大量使用）can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action.putting taxes on packaging, providing recycling services their waste.（这一段中给了解决方案：提高人们特别是孩子们的环保意识，对产品包装和塑料袋征收费用，对不循环使用废料的家庭与商家进行处罚等。）

With the political will, such measures reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.

第三篇：雅思写作犯罪类

雅思写作教育类范文

1.In many countries, crime is increasing.What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation? Although it is arguably impossible to pinpoint a single cause for the recent rise in global crime, the main culprits are thought to be poverty and political oppression.A commonality between the two appears to be the dissatisfaction of a people.Thus, it is argued that global crime can be reduced through measures that promote public feelings of well-being and security.To prove this, strategies that reduce poverty and oppression will be analyzed.Firstly, encouraging prosperity among poverty-stricken areas can be a very powerful tool when combating crime.For example, a once dangerous area of my hometown in Ottawa has undergone major infrastructural development over the past twenty years.The addition of schools, libraries and quality health facilities led to the establishment of a new economical status for the people who lived there.With the rise of this new affluence came a major fall in crime rates.This clearly shows how tackling the issue of poverty creates inroads against violations of the law.In addition to this, providing people more political freedom can also reduce crime.For instance, over the past ten years China has increasingly allowed critical comment of its ruling party to appear in local newspapers.Despite the fact that this level of freedom pales in comparison with many other countries, it is felt this thawing of political control has done a lot to reduce crime rates across the country.Thus, providing increasing levels of political freedom can be seen as a measure to combat crime.After analyzing the reduction of poverty and political oppression, it is felt that crime is best tackled by reducing the causes of unrest among people.By following this course of action, major reductions in global crime rates are expected.2.Giving detailed descriptions of crime by newspaper and television, someone says it could make bad consequence;this kind of media should be restricted.To what extent do you agree or not agree? There is no doubt that the detailed descriptions of crimes have been given by most of newspapers and television programs these days.Based on this, some people think that this is adverse for the children.This is partly because such kind of descriptions will give them a deep negative impression.Surely, I agree that detailed descriptions of crimes should be limited by the government.Also, I believe that the detailed descriptions of crimes will increase the incidence of crimes.They point out that thousands of criminals learn how to commit a crime from TVs or films.It is well aware that the crimes in young children are increasing annually, and it would associate with a wide range of crimes which children watch every day.For example, the same means, as the films show, is similar to the crimes in the actual society, such as robbery, sexual crimes and murders.On the other hand, other people argue that it is pointless to restrict this kind of media.They probably think that the detailed descriptions of crimes are beneficial for people to prevent crimes.It seems that people will improve alert sense, when they see the crime means as TV programs show.However, they hardly realize that the negatives outnumber the positives.In the meanwhile, people can learn how to prevent crimes by the other means such as Internet and books.In conclusion, I would like to express that the detailed descriptions of crimes should be restricted, but also that the government should appeal to people to learn how to keep away from crimes or dangers.3.Prison is not a cure for crime.To reduce crime in the long-term, courts should significantly reduce prison sentences and focus on education and community work to help criminals not to re-offend.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? There are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime.The traditional solution is to be hard on criminals and put them in prison for a very long time.An opposing view is expressed by people with more modern ideas.They think that education and job training are the long-term solutions to cutting crime.So who is rightIt is important to understand that some people are a real danger to society and need to stay in prison for a very long time.4.问题同上

As a punishment for criminals passed down generation after generation, imprisonment seems an effective deterrence.However, this is not true in dealing with the problem of soaring crime rate.So some people begin to challenge the existing practice, and suggest that education and job training should be offered to them.Personally, I am in favor of this proposal.To start with, there is no evidence showing a direct link between the imprisonment of criminals and the decline of crime rate.On the contrary, after being in prison for some time, some criminal recommit the same error, which indicates the failure of the very intention of imprisonment.Secondly, criminals, as human beings, may become very sensitive and self-abased for the prison record, they may even lose the confidence to lead ordinary and law-abiding lives.As a result, they may write themselves off as hopeless and resume the role of wrongdoers again.Last but not least, establishing and running too many prisons is a great financial strain for the government, which is a waste of money as well as human resources.In contrast, education and job training is a practice embodying humanism.It gives the wrongdoers a chance to the correct their misconduct and turn over a new leaf.This is especially true for those who go astray under some negative influence.By receiving job training, criminals may make a proper living rather than gaining profit in an illegal way.It would not long before the wrongdoers realize that they are still a member of community and they are not discriminated, which helps rebuild their confidence as well as contribute to the society.In conclusion, sending criminals to prison may serve as a deterrent rather than a solution to the problem, yet education and job training should be effective in the long run.5.Should parents be responsible for the kids crime? A recent report showing a 14-year-old child has killed her grandmother.The incident itself is very stunning to the public.Just as shown in the topic, crimes are not supposed to be done by younger people who are not legally responsible for what they did.What seems urgent to us is my appeals for those parents who should take the responsibility for any thing like this which should be prevented in advance.The most sounding reason for this is child should be supervised not only by school but also by his direct custody-his parents.No matter what blame we could put on child who has limited awareness of knowing what is correct to do and what is not, parents are not free from the duty that is already endowed by the society to watch their kids growing healthily.Moreover, parents have inevitable duty to educate their kids, let them know more about legal issues and right behaviors which is their basic lesson for life.We could be sure a kid is a good kid without any discipline of their parents.In terms of discipline, parents should also take the responsibility to face some punishment as they are supposed to be disciplined by the cruelty of society.Any kind of the crime indicated by the above itself means a lot to them and they should face the all around blames from the society and neighborhood.The loss of such a lawsuit will result in both the loss of face of their dignity and the loss of money in order to cover the compensation for the victims.So far so good, as for the age of kids who should take legal responsibility to such crime, the law has already settled for it.Countries around the world vary greatly.There is no fixed line, but one thing is sure, as soon as you grow into adult you should be responsible for what you do in society

6.Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to deal with them.Instead, education and job training should be offered.To what extent do you agree or disagree? How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face.Traditionally, the approach has been to punish them by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done.Some, however, advocate for trying to make them better with training and education and it seems they may have a good point.First of all, consider all the money that we have to spend to lock people up in jail.It doesn’t seem like a good use of public money if the people don’t actually get any better.Because most criminals eventually are let out of prison, our focus should be on making them better citizens.In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didn’t have a good education or happy family.So if they can learn job skills they perhaps can find work and feel they can contribute in a positive way.If they do this, they won’t need crime.Surly everyone deserves a second chance.Of course this does not mean that we should be too lenient on criminals.Those who commit crime should still be punished, but during their punishment they should also be treated.If we make an investment in them and show compassion, most will be able to make a new start.To summarize, we must make more of an effort to go to the root of the problem.We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training.By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.词汇：Punish Vt.惩罚，处罚

Advocate Vt.提倡

jail n.监狱=prison lenient adj.宽大的，仁慈的 compassion n.同情

patient n.病人 短语：in jail 监禁

end up 最后结果

commit crime 犯罪

make an investment in 投资于

make an effort to do 努力去做 三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子：

In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didn’t have a good education or happy family.We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training.By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.7.Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（8分）

With the crime rate hovering at high level, the print media as well as the electronic media dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to detailed crime coverage.Whether the media should present detailed accounts of crimes has triggered spirited debate.Many assert that the news media should stop giving details of crimes.Speaking for myself, I totally agree with their views.In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage.The principal purpose of reporter covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or television ratings;much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated.It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime.In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials.Reporting crimes in graphic detail helps those who are in the process of plan some criminal act to perfect their plans.Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime.And this may aggravate the already soaring crime rate.In the third place, detailed reports of heinous crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes.The reporters rarely consult the victims before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public.Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some base minds.Without the victims' consent, graphic accounts of crimes may become nightmares to them.In sum, detailed crime coverage in the media undermines our lives in several ways.I am convinced if such reports continue to go uncontrolled, it will exert even more baneful influence on individuals, communities and societies.表示同意可替换：approve of/ wholeheartedly support/ cannot agree with their view more/ consent to/ am for 不同意可替换：disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to/ object to/ disapprove of/ cannot go along with Sample 1: Prison is not a cure for crime.To reduce crime in the long-term, courts should significantly reduce prison sentences and focus on education and community work to help criminals not to re-offend.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime.The traditional solution is to be hard on criminals and put them in prison for a very long time.An opposing view is expressed by people with more modern ideas.They think that education and job training are the long-term solutions to cutting crime.So whoe is right – the traditionalists or the modernists? People in favour of reducing prison sentences often argue that prisons should not sumply be places of punishment.In traditional prisons, people learn a lot about crime, so when they leave prison, they will commit more crimes.Education, however, gives people the skills to get a job when they leave prison, which means that they will probably not re-offend.Part-time work experience in the community is also very helpful as it is a step back into everyday life in society.People can be in prison, but they can also feel they are doing useful work.On the other hand, some people argue that long prison sentences are right because the punishment should fit the crime.If, for example, someone commits a serious crime such as band robbery, they should go to prison for a long time.They also believe that reducing prison sentences significantly reduces people’s fear of prison and consequently, people will commit more crimes.People will not be frightened of going to a prison which is like a university with learning and work experience opportunities.In short, I agree that education and community work can have an important role in helping reduce crime, but there should be strict controls on the type of community work prisoners can do – It is important to understand that some people are a rea danger to society and need to stay in prison for a very long time.Crime 类常用词汇

触犯法律——break/ violate/ flout/ disobey the law 犯罪——commit a crime

罪行——offences/ crimes/ criminal acts 罪犯——criminal/ offender/ culprit /perpetrator

从犯——accomplice / accessory（noun）（后者指帮助犯罪单未直接参与的人）

憎恨社会——resent society/ hold a grudge against society 囚犯——inmate/convicts 受害者——victim 心理创伤——trauma 牢房——cell

监禁——imprison / incarcerate someone 被绳之以法——be brought to justice 宽容的——lenient

改造罪犯——reform/ rehabilitate criminals 执法部门——law enforcement agencies 重罪——heinous crime/ flagitious crime/ felony 轻罪——petty crime / misdemeanor 初犯的人——first-time offender

惯犯——hardened criminals/ repeat criminals 再次犯罪——revert to crime 守法的公民——law-abiding citizens 遵守法律——abide by/ comply with the law 无视…——disregard

给某人造成心理创伤——traumatize someone 抓捕——track down/ hunt down/ capture 犯罪倾向——criminal tendency

arson 纵火;burglary 盗窃;fraud 诈骗;kidnapping 绑架;smuggling 走私

指控某人：charge sb.with(a crime)被指控：be charged with(a crime)

受害者：victim

有罪的：guilty

无罪的，清白的：innocent

判处某人…年有期徒刑/死刑 sentence sb.to … years/ to death

囚禁：imprison v.imprisonment n.put sb.into jail/ prison

改造：reform, rehabilitate v.rehabilitation n.劳动改造：rehabilitation through labour

震慑，威慑：deter v.deterrent n.& adj.社区服务：community service

罚款：impose a fine on sb.监禁：custodial sentence

死刑：capital sentence/ death penalty

青少年犯罪：juvenile delinquency 少年犯：juvenile delinquent

校园暴力：campus violence/ school bullying

家长教育不好：bad/ poor parenting 学校教育：schooling

溺爱：spoil v.& n.过度纵容的：excessively permissive

单亲家庭：single-parent household/ family

缺乏父母的关爱：lack v.parental care

不稳定的家庭生活：unstable family life

贫困的经济背景：poor economic background

暴力倾向：violent inclination

媒体暴力：media violence

攻击性行为：aggressive behaviour

经常接触到暴力：repeated exposure to violence

唆使，煽动：instigate

攻击：assault v.& n.歹徒，流氓：gangster

参与犯罪：engage in acts of crime

犯罪心理学：criminal psychology

青少年心理：juvenile mentality

性格形成期：formative years/ stage/ period

情感上的困惑：emotional disturbance

情绪不稳定：emotional instability

任性的：wilful, self-willed

反社会的行为：anti-social behaviour

缺乏自信：lack n.of self-confidence 缺乏自尊：low self-esteem

自卑情结：inferior complexity

缺乏沟通：lack of communication

家长的管教：parental control and instruction

两代间的沟通：intergenerational communication

树立生活目标：set up life goals

自我实现：self-realisation

公共场所安装监控摄像头：the installation of surveillance cameras in public places

配备枪支的警察：policemen equipped with pistols

防盗的：burglar-proof/ theft proof

确保安全：ensure security

观察、监控：keep a lookout over

准确无误地记录下全过程：keep an accurate record of

偷看隐私：peep privacy

Crime 类模板

With the incidence of crime hovering at high levels, many people have become disturbed and alarmed.随着犯罪率居高不下，很多人被困扰并变得警觉。

The proliferation of criminal acts has rendered many citizens apprehensive and fearful.严重罪行的扩散让很多人变得恐惧害怕。

第四篇：雅思写作语言文化类

雅思写作语言文化类范文

范文一

With the fast pace of globalization, the whole world has become a global village with combination of different cultures.What are the reasons for losing a variety of languages and cultures? Think of some solution to alleviate the problem.With the pacing the world, globalization is no longer a myth.Nowadays, it is growing at a terrific speed.Each country has combined to be a global village.Languages and cultures are penetrating each other and we are losing a variety of them.There are several reasons for this phenomenon.The first reason can be seen is that the great flow of migration.Globalization has helped open the world’s borders, permitting more and more people in small countries to immigrate to other big countries.As the need of working and living, they have to mix new culture with their own culture and use the new language more often.Gradually, they lose their own custom.The development of technology and economy, however, is the most important factor.The high-tech products in developed countries possess a leading position in the international market due to globalization.Almost all the people in the world are enjoying the benefits of these products and more multinational corporations are emerging.This is not only a high-tech penetration but also a cultural invasion.People begin to be interested in these developed countries in an earlier age.They learn the language and culture of these countries, which will aid them to find a good job in the multinational corporations.To alleviate the dilemma, the following suggestions should be taken into consideration.In each country, a variety of cultural festivals should be held at a regular time such as poem or music festivals.Through this way, the traditional culture will be kept from generation to generation.Government should raise the consciousness of preserving traditional culture for inhabitants.In the final analysis, we should keep our own language and culture with the fast1

pace of globalization.范文二

Traditional arts civilized a nation.Do you think the government should subsidize musicians, artists, or drama companies? What should government do?

Traditional arts, as valuable cultural relics of a nation, are disappearing far away from the modern society.China, as one of the highly-civilized countries in the world, abound in various forms of traditional arts, such as painting, calligraphy, music, architecture and dramas, which are not only our national cultural treasures, but also a rich fortune of the world.As essence of a local culture, traditional arts reflect a nation’s artistic talents and traditions.For example, water-color painting depicts a harmony between people and nature.Architecture illustrates a nation’s aesthetic value and religious belief.Cathedrals, highlighted by Gothic style in the Medieval, represent Christianity.Pagodas, totally different from cathedrals stylistically, are a symbol of Buddhism.Peking Opera describes the history of our country.However, traditional arts are leaving contemporary people further and further away, one of the main reasons for which is that the authorities concerned and some institutes lack funds and professionals, which are quite essential to the research and promotion of the traditional culture.Another radical reason should be attributed to the impact of western cultures on traditions.Young people, especially youngsters, are addicted to western music like rock and roll, without any knowledge about traditional musical instruments.With the economic globalization, traditional culture and arts will be in the danger of assimilation.How to maintain and develop traditional arts becomes the biggest concern of a government.Firstly, the government should lay a fund for the research and promotion of traditional arts.Secondly, the research institutes and universities should work out a long-term developing scheme, organizing systematic research on traditional arts.Arts belong to a nation and the whole world as well.The prosperity of traditional arts will

diversify the culture of the world.范文三

What are the purposes of the places like museums, and how should they be funded?

It is well known that a museum is building to display a collection of artistic, historical, cultural or military objects.Undoubtedly museums can have a variety of purposes in the city;I think two roles the museums play can illustrate they are worth visiting.Visiting museums is informative.Once I visited a military museum in Beijing, China, soon I learned that an ancient warrior might have outfought his enemies in combat if he had had great strength while a modern soldier should be armed with sophisticated weapons.Therefore present soldiers should spend far much time on studying modern technology instead of building up muscles.Likewise, if you visit other museums, you will have a better perception on a certain field, because you can witness some genuine objects which cannot be seen on books.In addition, a museum can function to cultivate one’s sense of patriotism.In China, schools often organize trips to some historical museums.When the students learn that many years ago, a number of countries invaded China robbing treasure and killing Chinese civilians, promptly they will establish a strong sense to defend the nation, revealing that only a strong motherland can give them pride and safety.Now we talk about how to fund a museum.A museum can never be considered as a financial burden to society.I suggest that the government should invest a small amount of money on advertisements for the museums in the city.For example, ads of the museums should be forwarded on the travel brochures or maps of the city.Consequently tourists come and admission tickets are collected.Both reputation and funds are earned.In brief, museums should play a role as an instructive means of the city and incomes from admission can keep them running properly.

第五篇：雅思写作 旅游类 国际旅游

旅游类

Some people think international tourism brings more problems than benefits.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

not only has international tourism been booming, but also it seems an inevitable tendency.boosting of tourism industries may be mostly concerned with internationala series of related industriesand souvenirs, revenue to local government.Part of the one at the edge of destruction.the flourish of international tourism inevitably brings large numbers of working positions in this aspect, which will make government less stressful with reference to matters generated by unemployment.traveling worldwide, can strengthen cultural Hong Kong tour.tourists are capable of grasping local customs as well as behaviors, which is probably the primary intended goal of most trips.interaction with the locals during the trips will surely promote mutual understanding and friendship.Complaints may generate destination.irresponsible act like carving on pillar is an anxious issueenvironment pollution neither highers attraction of travel resorts nor makes tourists fully enjoy trip.international tourism is definitely rewarding to both local government and negative effects of international tourism can be reduced if tourists environment conservation in tourism attractions.