留学个人陈述

第一篇：留学个人陈述

个人陈述

我叫李彬，来自中国陕西西安。我在22年的生命历程中，练就了坚韧、顽强的性格，2004年我以优异的成绩考入西安财经学院，现正攻读金融专业的金融学学士学位。我的大学是一所学科非常齐全的综合性大学，大学生活使我不仅在学习方法、专业知识上得到了全方位立体化的发展，更重要的是提高了我对各学科知识的融合能力，同时也极大的提高了我的求知欲望。因此，我决定在毕业后去美国留学，通过了解，目前我希望申请底特律大学金融专业硕士学位。

家庭对每个人来说都非常重要，因为它是我们接受教育的第一课堂。我的外公曾是一个电力科学家，奶奶则是个朴实的农民，父亲是人民警察，母亲是一位会计从业人员，他们对我的言传身教，对我的人生观、价值观的建立和发展起到了极其重要的作用，同时也帮我建立起了诚实、勤劳、永不言败的性格。所以受他们的影响，我对金融类学科有着十分的兴趣。我的家庭是我一生中最重要的财富，是它赋予了我学习这方面学科的兴趣，以及勇往直前的的性格。

通过对专业知识的学习，使我对经济金融类学科产生了浓厚的兴趣，我拜读了胡碧教授的《货币银行学》，书中他用通俗易懂的案例，将迷雾般的金融原理与人们普通的生活有机的结合到一起，使我掌握了将大多数人觉得枯燥的金融学原理，在实际生活中的学习方法，同时也使我对胡碧教授产生了崇拜之情。同年，我又拜读了James C.Baker的代表作《国际金融》，通过这本书的学习，使我迷恋上了金融方面的知识。由于对知识的强烈渴求，使我更加专著的学习金融反面的理论知识，并且我遇到了一位良师，中国金融行业非常著名的胡碧教授。胡教授将货币银行的理论与实践相结合，向我们传授货币银行，以及经济投资方面的知识。这种教学方法很符合我的学习习惯，所以我很快就进入了状态，我们经常在一起探讨中国期货行业的发展和世界期货市场的价格波动。

除了专业知识的学习外，业余时间，我还和我的同学，朋友一起在学校组建摇滚乐队，并且经常参加学校组织的各类文艺活动，2005年在学校举办的乐器大赛上以萨克斯独奏《春风》获得第一名，同年代表学校参加省首届大学生才艺大赛并在乐器组获得第三名的成绩。我还和队友一起代表学校去孤儿院和敬老院慰问演出，受到校领导的肯定。我在丰富的业余活动中，不仅实现了人生价值，同时也锻炼了自己的组织能力，使我的个人素质得到了极大的提高。除此以外，我还非常喜欢体育运动，擅短跑，篮球等。年轻，就应该充满活力。

2007年暑假，我作为西安财经学院学生代表，共参加了多场在西安举办的金融知识巡展的交流活动，通过参观，学习了金融发展史，尤其是美国的历史。我深深地被先进的运作模式和强大的科研能力所打动，对比自己的学校，尽管我们已经发展很快，但距离世界顶尖教育还有一段差距。这种感觉，激发了我的学习热情，我下决心要在回国后用自己的力量，为我的祖国发展做出自己的贡献，这也是我申请贵校的一个重要原因，因为作为一个中国人的责任，我要用我在海外学习的先进知识来建设我的祖国。

“踏实，坚定，勤劳”是我继承的优良传统，也是我的人生信条。面对大学即将毕业，强烈的求知欲及对专业知识的热爱，我决定选择美国继续自己的专业学习，去接受美国大学严谨的教学，尖端的研究和新的思维方式，从而充实自己，实现自身的价值，也希望自己能成为中美两国文化的传递使者。谢谢您的关注，期盼您的答复！

第二篇：出国留学个人陈述

Personal Statement

ByXXX

When occasionally reading the master piece Letter to a Young Lawyer by Alan Dershowitz, I was deeply attracted by words such as Lawyer, Justice, Practice Mentality, and Creed of Life.These words led to my further meditation on the qualities of a lawyer---critical thinking, efficient methods to defend one’s opinions, logical mentality.Living in a society in desperate need of justice and rightness, I had determined to devote myself to the cause of law resolutely.And the first thing is to be equipped with professional knowledge and practice skills.Thus, after graduation next year from Chongqing University, which is listed in 211/985 project, I intend to further my study at your university due to your prestigious reputation in this area

With great determination and sense of mission, I devoured the pages to learn and think in and out of class, resulting in the top-ranking score at various courses, for instance, 87% for Lawyers, Notarization and Arbitration Practice;85% for Corporate and Business Law;85% for Financial Law;and 90% for Jurisprudence.Nevertheless, I know that a consistent praise is far away to make my dream realized.Hence I submerged myself in the sea of reference books in the law field, such as The Concept of Law by H.L.A.Hart，An Introduction To The Principles of Morals and Legislation by Jeremy Bentham，Justice in Robes by Ronald Dworkin, Taking Rights Seriously by Ronald Dworkin, Constitution Law of United States, The laws by Plato, etc.Since many cases concerns economic disputes and my second major is economics, I also read some books in this field such as The Economics of Money, Banking and Financial Markets by Frederic.S.Mishkin, Economics by Paul.A.Samuelson，The Problem of Social Cost by Ronald Harry Coase, etc.Apart from that, after a half year’s training, now I am very confident to pass the Judicial Vocational Qualification Test in the near future.I had been the programme manager of SIFE(Student In Free Enterprise)programmes at my university, which is an international non-profit organization that works with leaders in business and higher education to mobilize university students to make a difference in their communities while developing the skills to become socially responsible business leaders.There I had leaded my team taking a series of social cases among which I would like to share the most unforgettable ones.Our first programme was the Bangbangjun Program.“Bangbangjun” is a typical Chongqing way to call the luggage porters, who are the migrant workers.Suffering from frequent discrimination, they live their lives at the foot of the social ladder.There are some companies to manage their business.Through on-site inspection we found that the situation was worse than our imagination in those companies.Deficiencies and shortages existed everywhere such as in legal security, internal systems, labor rights, and the financial management.With the help of the supervisor

as well as lawyers and business consultant we tried to find universal business modes to benefit as more porters as we can.After 3 years’ endeavor we succeeded in bringing the company with advanced business modes and legal aids, setting up websites and establishing brands, perfecting taxing structure and internal regulations;strengthening employees’ protection and helping the company in refunding.There, my tasks were to lead my team to supervise the operation of the procedures, provide legal guidance in equity and interest allocation, social insurance and the process of refunding.Additionally, I also did researches on the life status of migrant workers and guided them to protect their legal rights.In the end I wrote the annual report for the programme.Much as I applied of my professional skills and felt about the hardships of the migrant works, I congratulated myself that I had chosen such a noble cause.Moreover, I had participated in another programme named FedEx Migrant Workers’ Children Success Skills Program.The aim of the programme was to achieve better communications between migrant worker parents and their children, promote more educational opportunities for these children, and help them to establish a scientific life and social value.In order to lead my team to fulfill the task, I invited professionals to come to offer psychological consultation;gave inspiring speeches, recruited volunteers to teach them social etiquette and hygiene knowledge;and organized books and stationery donation activities.With these management experiences I had a more comprehensive understanding on how to lead a team to fulfill a task, making it so easier in the third programme called Global Entrepreneurship Week in Chongqing University.By patrols speeches and entrepreneur interviewing did we provide a communication and resource-sharing platform for university students.In this way did students could learn from the entrepreneurs’ experience and knowledge in a more vivid way.This time I followed up the whole process from scheme, arrangement, implementing, leading the team to solve problems encountered, especially in the status limitation, content prescription, and school official approval convincing.Besides, I took other programmes as well such as GSVC(Global Social Venture Competition), in which I was responsible for checking agreement and compliance;and EOP(Economic Opportunity Program), in which I took charge of protocoling the framework of their cooperation with primary school.Apart from my practice experience in SIFE, I had another internship in summer vacation in Beijing’s No.1 Intermediate People’s Court, where I had learned basic criminal litigation procedures, connecting processes with public security organ and procuratorial organ and the criminal litigation defending skills.One other internship I had was in Bangbangjun Moving Company from 2009~2011.In that company I helped the staff with my professional advice in checking agreement and compliance;

formulating the regulations, explicating the division and assign of stock rights, etc.When I was exhausted from my work and studies, I would do some exercise to get myself refreshed and revitalized.As the reward of unceasing efforts of being the national second-level athlete, I did a good job in 2008 Swimming Competition of the University Games in Chongqing, and won the third place of 50-meter freestyle, the third place of 100-meter butterfly, and the first place of 4 × 100-meter freestyle respectively.Additionally, I also performed well in 2009 Swimming Competition of Healthy Campus Games in Chongqing, and won the first place of 50-meter backstroke, the second place of 4 × 100-meter mix-style and freestyle respectively.As for career planning, I intend to pursue my further study of international business law or trade law after passing the Judicial Professional Qualification Test;In order to be a partner of law office, I would accumulating my experience mainly in non-lawsuit legal matters and foreign matters;afterwards there would be some further academic demands such as applying for Phd degree.The legal system in P.R.China now is changing with a higher pace compared with that of the economics globalization, resulting in a greater demand for qualified lawyers who can deal with international cases such as political disputes among countries, business disputes among enterprises, and cultural transmission.I want to be one of them who can handle international affair easily due to their domestic education and experience abroad.Wherefore hoping that by contrasting, coordinating and coalescing could I view law and justice from a new and unique angle, I intend to apply to study at your honored university.Sincerely hope that you would spare a careful thought on my considerate decision and I am looking forward to your favorable reply.Thank you!

第三篇：留学美国 个人陈述

个人陈述：重点（每一个段落都要有一个主题，第一句话是主题，下面以此来展开，支持第一句。）

个人PS分以下几点：

一：个人基本信息及情况（包括家庭状况，学习情况，性格，个人特长）。

二：个人特长（对一的拓展）--主要介绍三个与专业相关的特征

每一个特长自成一段，第一句是对特征的总括，下面是例子的举证。如领导力，就要举出相应的例子进行证明。

三：专业计划（由二过渡过来，因为个人情况，兴趣，能力而选择了这个专业）

第一句是选择的专业，下面是对此专业认识及自己的远景计划。

四：选择美国的原因及录取后，毕业后的计划

总括下此专业在美国的排名境况，然后规划下自己在此专业的长远计划以及学成后的打算。

总之：PS要简洁，明了，每一个段落多有其特色，相应的见模板，从模板中理解上面说的要点。按照上面的要求先写出中文的PS。类似议论文或叙述文。

下面是更细致的PS介绍（可参考）

1、保持真实性。

2、写出特点。每个人的生活都大同小异，但是每个人又有独具特色的一面，如果你写出自己的特色，你就是一个独特的，没有人能够模仿的人，同时你的个人陈述也会激发读者的阅读兴趣。

3、细节支持。再次强调，个人陈述中不要有那么多的虚词和空洞的内容，一定要有细节去支撑你想突出的主题。把一个事物具体化，这样不仅内容充实，有细节，也容易让别人相信，觉得这个事情是真的。

4、抓住他们的眼球。每个申请委员会的老师会阅读每一篇个人陈述，因为这是他们的职责，如何在众多文书中吸引他们的眼球，让他们留下深刻印象？抓住老师眼球你就成功了一半，独特的开头和结尾，吸引人的细节描述比起虚词更能抓住他们的眼球。

5、对自己有信心。信心是成功的源泉，不管怎么样，都要相信自己是最好的。

搜集想法的方式有很多种，比如形象灵感，列单子，头脑风暴等等。现在让我们先来一个头脑风暴吧!或许会有一些东西是你未曾想到的!

1.你是谁?你是一个怎么样的人?

2.你有什么样的优点和缺点?哪些优点你认为对申请有利?为什么有利?哪些缺点你认为是毙命的?

3.你印象最深刻的一件事情?

4.你最有成就感的一件事?

5.你经历最大的挫折是什么?如何度过的?有什么感想或收获?

6.你现在最想做的事情是什么?

7.回忆你最喜欢的一件物品，它对你有什么样的影响和意义?

8.你的老师是怎么样评价你的?朋友怎么样评价你的?家长怎么样评价你的?

9.你最重要的课外活动和社区活动是什么?

10.这个学校为什么要录取你?

11.你的职业目标是什么?

12.为什么申请这个专业?

13.你将能为这个学校带来什么?

14.你对现在所学专业或者将要学习的专业有什么样的认识和看法?

个人陈述写作程序第二步：精简想法

通过以上方法，相信很多内容会在你脑海中出现，比如目标，重要经历，个人优势等等，我们要把大量想法精简，找出最能表现你自己的。你必须找出一个主题，这个主题不仅得将你的个性特征与经历完美融合形成一个连贯整体，还要表达你对进入这所学校的强烈愿望。审理材料的也是一个正常人，也会疲惫，如何给一个每天阅读50-100份类似文稿的人留下一个持久的印象并非易事，这就要求你的文章必须精简，有想法，有主题，不能把所有你认为优秀的东西都列在上面，必须有所删减。在删减过程中要注意：你选的主题是否有利于突出你个人的价值?有没有具体的事例以能更生动描述你的经历?你的主题有噱头吗?你的主题是不是申请表上一些内容的简单重复?文章中有支持主题的段落吗?你能完整回答提出的问题吗?能在限定的次数内充分表达你的观点吗?你的主题会牵扯到许多其他人吗?例如信奉上帝，民主党或共和党……争议性的东西最好不要出现在这些主题中。

精简想法，把主题确定下来以后，你要仔细搜索关于这些主题的细节，越详细越好!这些细节要有力支撑你的主题。人们都不喜欢空头话，都不喜欢虚的东西。只有细节撑腰，事实做主，写出来的东西才有真实性，才能打动人。在搜索细节的过程中，你就可以计划这个细节适合放在什么地方。

个人陈述写作程序第四步：创建结构和提炼大纲

主题确定了，细节想好了，结构和大纲自然就出来了。这主要想说一下开头和结尾。开头千万不要写我是谁谁，来自哪，想申请贵校什么专业。这样的开头方式太过于开门见山，无任何特色可言。有特色的开头是成功的一半，能让读者有继续看下去的念头。制造一个悬念，创造一个情境等等，都是不错的开头方式。结尾部分也很重要，材料审核者今天心情不好，可能不看你中间部分的内容，但肯定也会看你开头和结尾部分，所以一个好文章，不仅要有吸引人的开头，也要一个给人留下印象深刻的结尾。

个人陈述写作程序第五步：初稿及修改

提纲是初稿的根据，往提纲里头加入细节和内容，初稿就出来了。初稿完成以后，先休息两天，过两天再回头看看你写的文章，再回归到最原始的问题。

1.文章能不能很好表现你自己?

2.文章的开头和结尾是否真的吸引人?是否能给人留下深刻印象?

3.文章是否有明确的主题?所有内容是否围绕这个主题?

4.文章有详细细节支撑吗?

5.文章有语法错误吗?

6.我能写的再好一点吗?

第四篇：留学申请个人陈述

Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua University

Personal Statement

For nearly one year, when all other colleagues had gone back home after work or to the bars for relaxation, I kept myself busy with the designing, programming, and refactoring work.When I got home every day after ten o’clock in the night, I would read papers of XXX and continue for seeking the universities and professors attractive to me until one o’clock in the morning.My sense of responsibility for the company made me obliged to finish all the projects in my hands before I leave for America.And my yearning for the free American environment which is easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater pressure.Although over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technology Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit come true.I know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulness while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative ideas.However, the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already existed.That’s why I gave up the achievement without hesitation.I know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx program.In such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally become a top talent to make contributions to the development in the field.Moreover, my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my pursuit.I became interested in computer science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal interests.But my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua University.Being clear of my interest and goal, I spent quite a lot of time in computer science besides the basic courses required by the university.Although I didn’t gain an extraordinary GPA, I succeeded in transferring to the School of Software.Afterwards, my GPA continued increasing and my foundation in the major was consolidated.I have a good habit in learning and working.No matter how great the pressure was, I would stick to my studies after work.And I finished reading books like Interconnection Networks-An Engineering Approach and reviewed(Introduction to Algorithms, Computer Networks, Database Systems Concepts)twice.In addition, I am very creative.I could solve the instability in file transmission by using FTP/HTTP method instead of the original Web Service/COM+ method to cope with different network situations after independent

Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua University

thinking;I could solve the problem of difficulties in managing the patch files by putting the client patch files on the server for Auto update, improving the clients’ satisfaction greatly.What’s more, I am very strict with myself and always keep a heart for excellence.I successfully became a formal employee in advance during the probation period.And I gained the Intermediate Engineer position in only one year which normally took three years by others.At the same time, my strong sense of responsibility helped me never disappoint my supervisors and colleagues even when it was necessary to work overtime continuously or all night.Besides, I can even get enlightened when facing failures.My experience in taking charge of the GCM—Grandsoft Cost Management project can be cited here as an example.In this project, we adopted C/S structure using COM+/Web Service as the communication method, and SQL Server 2000 as the database.Although the SQL was optimized and different DB engines and components were tried, the querying efficiency was not improved obviously when dealing with mass data and complex business logics.However, I learned in the course how to improve the efficiency of database query for huge amount of data, how to conduct efficiency test and experiment and how to use the simplest query to realize the huge business logics.In trial use of the Qlikview software of a professional data query company, although I was not able to solve the problem, I learned the BI thoughts to cache data into the memory to improve the application efficiency.However, though I have laid a solid foundation in my years of studies in Tsinghua University and my self-studies during the work, though I have improved my ability in practice and problem-solving, I still lack in theories which can be seen from the above examples.Only practice is not enough to solve problems completely.The importance of theories can be also seen in my adjusting the tree traversing algorithm.I improved the GCM product’s tree building efficiency by dozens of times after I analyzed the general law of data distribution.Therefore, I am more determined to continue my further education abroad.Having gone through the thinking during the learning-working-learning process, I believe that I’ve already found what I need.The xxx program will be the most meaningful place for me in my life.The next ten years of concentrative research coupled with my determination to accept new challenges will enable me to become a paving stone on the road of CS development.以上内容由华恒海淀精品留学部提供

第五篇：留学申请个人陈述范例

Applicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of China

Personal Statement

My interest in finance can be initially traced back to the bestseller entitled Rich Dad, Poor Dad written by Kiyosaki Robert T.and Lechter Sharon L..Though a ten-year-old boy at that time, I was much fascinated with the economic knowledge conveyed in simple expressions of the book which I read for several times and shared the cases in it with my friends.My motivation to explore the financial world also benefits from my parents both of whom have achieved higher education in finance and engaged in the relevant fields.Having received a rigorous academic training for my past undergraduate study in Renmin University of China, I’m eager to educate myself on an international scale.Finance appeals to me by its extensive and profound nature.As far as I’m concerned, the relationship between finance and economy is akin to that between blood and body.Just as the physical conditions can be reflected from the circulation of blood according to the Chinese medicine, the economic operation of a country can be judged from its financial status, funds flow, etc.My exposures to the professional courses of Money and Banking, Corporate Financing, Macro/Micro Economics, Econometrics, International Finance, and Insurance as well as the mathematical courses such as Mathematical Analysis, Advanced Algebra, Probability Theory and Mathematical Statistics have enabled me to lay a solid academic foundation of finance.Meanwhile, bearing in mind sound interpersonal skills and hands-on ability are the basic personal qualities required of a successful financial person, I availed myself of various opportunities to undertake practices.I began to invest in the stock market in 2007.In face of the frustrations at the outset, I audited all the courses of security analysis and investment on campus, read a lot of financial magazines and newspapers and consulted some professors and my parents.I was uplifted during such a process, not only in money making, but also in grasping the principles and regulations behind the stock market.I value my experiences in conducting research programs which acted as bridges linking my theoretical knowledge with the larger world where it would be applied.More importantly, I got much enlightenment and inspiration from making presentations, like my presentations regarding the comparison and analysis of appreciations of Yuan and Yen along with the cases of insurances.In these presentations, I tried to arrive at flexible and comprehensive command of complicated knowledge.Besides, I derived self-confidence and sense of joy in immersing myself in the fields where my interests genuinely lay.My other unique assets are attributed to my internships in different units where finance invariably plays an important role.When I worked in China Foreign Exchange and Trade Centre, I gained a full understanding of the trading systems of commercial banks and raised my own proposals which were soon adopted about their function setting.Meanwhile, I found a trader’s work busy but interesting, which allowed me to see my own strength and weakness gauged with the professionals.I had my professional skills and teamwork spirit honed during my internship in People’s Bank of China where I learned about the functions of the central bank and my prominent performance won recognition from the persons in charge there.Furthermore, my on-the-spot investigations in a goal

Applicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of China

mine enterprise and a copper mine enterprise allowed me to see other fields where finance matters tremendously through my exposure to the financial conditions, profit resources and development trends of the enterprises.These experiences, combined with my bountiful extracurricular activities such as the volunteer position of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, involvement in organizing exhibitions and shows have prompted me to set my own career goals—compared to the research work, I prefer a more practical career.And I have learned to focus on the way to achieving my goals—to pursue more advanced education in America, the ideal place full of practical opportunities regarding finance and economy as a whole.I have long admired your esteemed university for its significant achievements in the teaching and research of finance.Your program of finance, with its well-structured curriculum, highly-productive faculty as well as a multitude of real-world projects matches my academic background and interest perfectly.I hope to work in a world-class financial institution or a transnational enterprise after the completion of my master program and your diverse student body and strong alumni work will no doubt become a stepping stone leading me to my career goal.Fully prepared and determined, I’m convinced that your university is precisely my starting point.以上内容由华恒海淀精品留学部提供