第一篇:英语应用文写作教学策略
摘要:从论述英语应用文写作的意义出发,着重分析了英语应用文写作中常出现的问题及解决途径。旨在鼓励教师培养学生英语兴趣,提高学生英语应用文写作的能力。
关键词:英语应用文写作问题策略
一、英语应用文写作的意义
随着我国改革开放的不断深入,政府机关、企事业单位和人民群众的对外交流日益增多,国际国内活动、社会交流、日常生活、工作和学习等方方面面对英语的需求越来越广泛。为了处理有关涉外事务,我们必须了解和掌握英语应用文写作。再加上一年一度的高考,全国英语等级考试都涉及英语应用文写作。所以使学生掌握和运用英语应用文写作有着极其重要的意义。
二、英语应用文写作中常出现的问题
笔者在多年的英语教学中,发现学生应用文写作常出现以下问题。
1.心理障碍大
有些学生由于性格内向且英语基础差,一提英语写作就头痛,紧张;另一些学生自尊心特别强,他们特别怕老师和周围同学对他们的评价,深怕动笔出错而影响他们的形象;还有一些学生则自信心弱,往往极度害怕、胆怯,不能自我决策,对成功的期望值很低,甚至于不愿意发表任何意见或看法。这些情绪都能直接导致行为失败,影响英语应用文写作水平的提高。
2.词汇量缺乏
语言的基本要素之一是词汇,要表达自己的思想就必须有足够的词汇量。部份学生由于词汇量贫乏,因而在写作过程中不能正确表达自己的思想。要么反复使用某一词组或句式;要么用词错误,表达不确切;有的知道要怎么表达但不知道怎么样写单词。所以词汇量缺乏已成为学生英语应用文写作中的最主要的问题。
3.语法错误多
部分学生由于英语基础差,在英语文章中经常出现语法错误。例如,要求他们给老师写封信,介绍他们近期的学习情况,有很多学生就是这样写的:
Dearteacher,Howareyou!
Underyour'shelp,ImakesgreatprogressonmeEnglish.NowIverylikeEnglish...看了学生们的这段文字后,真是啼笑皆非。他们根本不知道中英文信件的区别。另外,英语中的物主代词、宾格、第三人称单数、介词和副词的用法均没搞清,所以短短的一句话,语法错误出现了六个。
4.语篇表达差
部分学生语篇布局能力弱,句式缺乏变换,前后衔接手段单调。一篇文章要语意连贯,符合逻辑,离不开一定的语篇连接手段。英语中的语篇连接手段十分丰富,有的用于句子层次,有的用于语篇层次。根据M.A.K.Halliday的语篇理论,语篇衔接主要通过语法手段、词汇手段和逻辑联系语来完成。其中语法手段包括时间关联、地点关联、照应、代替、省略、搭配和时体配合等;词汇衔接包括复现关系和同现关系;逻辑关系语可分为增补、转折(让步)、原因(结果)和时间四类。学生在写作中很少使用这些手段,使得文章跳跃性很大,句与句之间、段与段之间、主题与段落之间缺乏有机的联系、照应和连贯性。
三、解决办法
英语应用文写作属于英语写作,它不仅涉及词汇与结构、语法与功能,而且还涉及学生的组织能力、分析能力、表达能力、逻辑推理能力以及对各种语体的掌握能力[4]。为了提高学生英语应用文写作能力,我在教学中从以下几个方面进行了了尝试。
1.培养学生学习兴趣
我们知道,兴趣在学习中的作用是无法比拟的。美国学者H.C.Lindgren曾说过“如果学习没有兴趣,那就不是学习”。因此,我在教学中采用“快乐教学模式”。在课堂上深入体验教学内容中的情感并用生动活泼、形象幽默并富有情趣和感染力的语言去感染学生,把握学生的情绪。用抑扬顿挫、缓急有效的讲课声,来传情达意感染学生,引发他们的兴趣。从感管角度看,声音变化的刺激,可以提高学生注意的集中性和稳定性,减少听课的疲劳。另外,我注意上课时的表情。教师的表情(面部表情、体感表情),教师一个鼓励的眼神,一句不经意的表扬,都能激发学生的学习兴趣。当学生一旦被融入到集体中来,他们的思维就会被有效激活,注意处于高度醒觉状态,就为他们的学习创设了良好的环境,他们的学习潜能将极大地发挥出来。“快乐教学”能使学生带着积极的情绪和情感投入到学习活动中来,学生学习的内在潜力能够得到更自主、更充分的发挥,从而有利于学生的心理健康与个性发展。此外,“快乐教学”能够给学生提供健康的学习氛围,使学生在学习过程中有一个愉快的心情。学生的学习在愉快的心境中完成,学生学习的内部动机就会增强,学习兴趣、效率就会提高。
2.从简单入手,循序渐进
要想充分地表达自己的思想,拥有足够的词汇量是前提,准确掌握词的涵义是基础,能写出语法正确、合乎英语表达习惯的句子和文章是目的。基于这一理解,我在训练学生应用文写作过程中,注重从简单入手,循序渐进。例如:
第一步:用简单的单词造句(用单词read造句)
第二步:回答简单的问题(DoyoulikeEnglish?)
第三步:连词成句(I,often,myanswer,teacher's,questions,class,in)
第四步:扩展句子(Ofallthesubjects,Englishismyfavorite.)
第五步:连句成段
从以上步骤学生能把上面的句子连成段:
IreadEnglisheverymorningbecauseIlikeEnglishverymuch.Ioftenanswermyteacher'squestionsinclass.Ofallthesubjects,EnglishismyfavoritebecauseIfinditmostinteresting.第六步给标题写短文(Myfavoritesubject)
看到这个题目后,要求同学们认真审题。这个题目的主题是MyFavoriteSubject而不是MyFavoriteTeacherorMyFavoriteBook,审清题目后,同学们开始着手写作了。老师巡视课堂。几分钟之后发现成绩好的同学很快就写完了。老师从中挑选一位写得好的同学写到黑板上。她是这样写的:
MyFavoriteSubject
IlikeEnglishverymuch.IreadEnglisheverymorning.Withtheteacher'shelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglish.IcanwritealittleEnglishnow.IfindEnglishisveryinteresting.AndIalsofindEnglishisgettingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Ifwewanttoknowmoreaboutforeigncountries,wemustmasterEnglish.Ifwewanttomakeourcountrydevelopfaster,wemustlearnEnglishwell.SomyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.IhopeIcantalkwithforeignersoneday.3.提供贴近生活的范文
经过反复操练,学生们掌握了一定的词汇量和一些篇章结构,组织形式以及写作技巧之后,为他们提供不同类型的英语应用文写作打下了良好的基础。应用文写作大多贴近生活,是我们日常生活中常用的一种体裁,所以提供范文──也就是套写,在英语应用文写作教学中起着非常重要的作用。如介绍信、申请信、邀请信、投诉信、遗失启事、便条、海报等都有它们自己的固定格式。要求学生们认真学习和反复操练。下面举例说明。
介绍信
尊敬的校长先生:
兹介绍我班班长李兵同学前往贵校(南方中学)了解学生学英语的情况,请您给予接洽并提供所需资料。
株洲市一中
2004班班委会
2005年4月23日
老师把范文板书在黑板上,交代好格式。
ALetterofIntroduction
Class200
4No.1MiddleSchool
Zhuzhoucity
Headmaster
TheSouthMiddleSchool
DearMr.Headmaster,Thisistocertifythatthebearer,Mr.LiBing,themonitorofourclass,issenttoyourschoolinthehopeofknowingsomethingabouttheEnglishstudyofyourstudents.WeshalldeemitagreathelpifMr.Liisprovidedwithwhateverinformationhemayneedtohave.Respectfullyyours,ClassCommitteeofClass2004
介绍信中要求学生重点掌握信头、信内地址和一些套用句型(信内地址是指收信人的姓名、职务及地址等,其位置在信头下面
一、两行处的信纸的左边)。重点句型如:兹证明用Thisistocertifythat...,兹介绍用Thisistointroducetoyouthat...,还有inthehopeofdoingsth或inordertodosth表目的,以及Weshalldeemitagreathelpifsbisprovidedwithsth或Manythanksforthetroubleyouwillhavetotakeforsb表感激。
通过范文教学之后,同学们发现用英语写介绍信确实不难。这样就大大地激发了他们的求知欲,信心倍增。紧接着老师再举一些贴近日常生活的例子。这时他们学习英语应用文写作的热情空前高涨。就是那些平时不太想动笔的学生都纷纷举手要求老师检查他们的写作成果。老师检查后发现他们确实进步大,就当众表扬了他们,这样他们的积极性越来越高。为日后的其他英语应用文写作学习打下了良好的基础。
4.加强督促,整体提高
英语应用文写作不是
一、两天就能写好的,只有通过大量的训练才能练好。一个班的学生英语水平有高有低,如何在有限的时间内提高他们的整体水平是值得我们关注的。本人在教学中是这样做的:
(1)练习巧设计
每学完一种应用文写作后,大量的时间应留给学生自己做练习。练习应设计合理,应与教材内容相关或与他们的生活息息相关。这样才能激发他们的思路,使写作变得轻松而容易。例如学完邀请信后,我就给学生们设计了这样一道练习题。
请柬
兹定于2005年5月4日(星期五)晚上7:00在教学楼103室举行舞会,为庆祝我们班主任袁老师的生日
恭请
0214班全体同学光临
0210班班委会
同学们弄清了请柬的书写格式,并知道了全文要用第三人称口气,全文不需要称呼语和结束语(因为这些都已经包括在正文了)之后,他们就可以一气呵成。
另外我把全班同学分为两大组。要求每组给对方出一封请柬,然后各组选派一名同学到黑板上去写。要求5分钟之内写完,写得又快又好的给予加分奖励。经过多次这样的比赛,同学们对英语应用文写作的兴趣大大提高了,整体水平也大大提高了。
(2)课外多辅导
要想提高所教学生的整体水平,老师课外多辅导是必不可少的。本人就是利用早、晚自习和课余时间进行辅导,且多关注后进生。一是督促他们学习,二是表达老师对他们的关心,使他们真正体会到老师在时刻关注他们的成长。
(3)学生自查、互查与老师批改相结合为了使学生互帮互学,整体提高,我让学生自查、互查。要让学生自查、互查,首先应让他们知道查什么,纠正什么,从哪入手。老师提供下列注意事项:如人称、时态、标点、大小写、句子结构是否正确;句子语法是否准确;表达是否符合英语习惯;句与句之间、段与段之间语意是否连贯;过渡是否自然;格式是否有遗漏。先自查,再进行互查,最后交给老师批改。
四、结束语
英语应用文写作本身是一个由浅入深,由简入繁,由易入难的循序渐进的过程,也是一种知识积累和不断实践的过程。我们应不断探素切实可行的教学新方法、新路子,促进英语应用文写作教学的不断发展。
参考文献
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2.Halliday,M.A.K.AnIntroductiontoFunctionalGrammar.2ndEdition[M],EdwardArnold,1994年;
3.黄国文,英语语言问题研究[M],中山大学出版社,1999年;
4.刘润清,论大学英语教学,外语教学与研究出版社,1999年;
5.H.C.Lindgren.课题教育心理学,张志光等译。
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第二篇:英语应用文写作
英语应用文写作范文 1.外籍教师lynne任教期满准备回国,学校答应派车送她去机场。她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师: 1).请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实,提醒司机(remind sb.of sth.提醒某人做某事)。
2).她之所以要确定一下,是因为太早不好叫出租车。3).感谢费心,并感谢一年来的关心。
4).在学校一年来,生活愉快、难忘,很可能再来。5).留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆,希望对学生有用。字数:100—120个词。hi, mr.li, yours lynne 2.假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出: 反对迁出:
①.游客多,交通堵塞 ①.建于1906年,中外闻名
②.郊区环境好 ②.搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意:1).词数100字左右,信的开头已为你写好。2).可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3).参考词汇: 郊区—suburb june 3 ,2005 dear editor , recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the beijing zoo should be moved out of the city.some of my classmates are in favor of the move.they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.they also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.however, other students are against the idea, saying that the beijing zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well –known at home and abroad.so it should remain where it is.what’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals.to move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in beijing.yours truly, li hua 3.假设你的英文名为jack,是英国诺丁汉大学的中国留学生。你负责为在该校就读的32名中国学生筹划圣诞节期间的苏格兰之行,为期7天,请你给诺丁汉的sta(students’travel agency)经理phil发一封电子邮件,联系有关事宜。要点如下:
(1)希望能够派车接送;(2)需要一名说标准英语,并非常熟悉苏格兰的导游;
(3)请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆、费用等情况;
(4)你的联系方式:电子邮箱地址:07747745007 注意:(1)词数:100词左右;(2)开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数; yours truly.jack 4.加拿大高中生david在互联网上登出启事notice,希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是重庆实验中学的李华,请在看到这则启事后,用英文给david发出一封电子邮件。主要内容包括:
①.你怎样得知他的愿望 ②.你愿意成为他的朋友 ③.你打算如何帮助他 ④.你盼望他的回复 注意:词数:100词左右 dear david,i am lihua.i am glad to read your notice on the internet and i know you want to make friends with a chinese in order to learn the chinese language and culture.i want to be your friend.now i’d like to introduce myself to you.i was born in chongqing in 1990,i study in the experimental middle school of chongqing and i am good at english.i think i can help you to know about china by sending e-mails.what’s more,we can have chats on the internet in chinese or english and i’ll tell you the customs,the festivals,the foods,etc.of the chinese.i hope we can keep in touch with each other.i am looking forward to your reply.yours, lihua 5.假如你是一名大学生叫李华,对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有已见,请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。字数100左右。开头已给出。
学生心态 向往城市,不愿下乡。
就业现状 城市人才过剩;农村渴求人才。
就业前景 农村天地广阔,可施展才华。dear editor, i am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates.nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.as a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.therefore, i believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.yours, li hua 6.假如你叫王东,你的叔叔三十年前离开家乡去了美国。不久前,他观看china report节目,得知中国决定加大建设社会主义新农村的力度,感慨万分,于是发了一份e-mail给你,询问近来家乡的变化情况。请根据email内容和提示要点,给你叔叔做简要回复。e-mail开头和结尾已经给出。
日期:20-03-2006 发件人:wangguifu 收件人:
主题:t0 xiaodong dear xiao dong how are you doing? the other day when 1 was watching china report cctv at home, i was excited to learn that the chinese government is calling on her people to speed up the reconstruction of their countryside.the report at once took my thoughts back to the small village i once lived in.how time flies!.it is 30 years since i left my home village.it must have changed a lot.would you please write and tell me something about its changes? remember me to your parents!yours,wang guifu 7.要点:①.叔叔离家后,家乡变化很大。②.生活条件愈来愈好。
③.房子大而宽敞,许多人住进了设施齐全的公寓。
④.装了电话,买了彩电、洗衣机、冰箱等。⑤.宽敞的道路连接了村庄和城镇。
⑥.买了拖拉机、卡车和汽车。⑦.学校教育良好。⑧.政府重视农村城市化建设。要求:1)、词数:100左右。2)、可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。dear uncle , i’m very glad to receive your email.our government cares very much about the reconstruction of our countryside.we are speeding up the citifying of the villages.best wishes.yours xiao dong 8.请以宿舍管理委员会的名义写一份通知,2007年4月2日发出。内容如下:
① 时间:4月5日晚上7点。②地点:3号楼103房间。
③ 内容:学生宿舍安全问题:安全用电、火灾应变、防止失窃等。
④ 参加人员:每间寝室一名同学。
⑤ 要求:带笔记本,按时到场,做好记录,并传达给室友。
注意:1)通知的格式已经为你写好,不计入总词数;2)词数:100左右。
参考词汇:学生宿舍 dormitory,盗窃theft(n.)notice a meeting is going to be held in room 103 of building 3 at 7 on the evening of april 5.problems to be talked about at the meeting include the safety of the dormitories, proper use of electricity, what to do in case of fire, prevention of theft and so on.a member of each dormitory is required to be present.they should take notebooks with them and arrive on time.they should take notes carefully and after the meeting they are to inform their roommates of what is discussed and what measures will be taken.april 2nd, 2007 9.假如你叫李平,是一位成绩优秀的学生,你班班主任在安排座位时,让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生作同桌,这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响,团活课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下,并说出自己的观点。赞同 反对 你的观点
1.人人有长处和不足,成绩差的学生也有可取之处; 2.相互学习,建立友谊; 3.通过帮助学习差的学生的学习从而使他们建立自信。1.部分学习差的学生常常违反校规校纪,担心自己会受影响,养成坏习惯。2.老是问问题,使自己不能专心学习。?
注意:1.词数:100~120,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。2.短文需包括表中所有要点,内容可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:成绩差的学生:a slower student dear mr.zhang, we have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.some are for the idea.as they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses.although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts.therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.in addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all.however, others don’t hold the same view.they think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits.besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.in my opinion, i’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together.yours, li ping 10.假如你是校报负责人,急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑,请你用英文以“an english editor wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事。内容要如下:
⑴.该工作主要包括两部分:一是从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章;二是选择与编辑同学们的来稿。⑵.希望该同学满足下列要求:
① 乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务; ② 英文与美术皆好;能熟练使用电脑。③
感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会(students’ union)联系。
注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)不要逐字翻译,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。an english editor wanted our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its english edition.the job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper english articles from other newspapers, magazines or internet for us students.the other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use. those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the students’ union this week. students’ union 11.假定你是某市居民,名叫李华。你觉得该市出租车行业问题较多,请写一封信给该市市长,内容应包括:
问题(1)停靠点太少,不易打的;(2)欺诈外地乘客;(3)车速过快,事故频频;(4)仍有拒载者;(5)深夜聚集在娱乐场所外等客时制造噪音,影响他人休息。
建议 要求加强管理
注意:1.字数100词左右。文章开头已给出。2.参考词汇:绕道:take a roundabout route 不替别人着想的:inconsiderate(adj.)行业:trade 加强管理:tighten control over„ dear mayor, i’m a resident of the city.i feel there are many problems existing in the trade of taxi in our city.first of all, there are still not enough stops in the streets so it’s not easy to take a taxi.and taxis often run very fast, which causes many traffic accidents.what’s more, some taxi drivers still refuse to pick up some passengers without any reason.another terrible thing which often happens is that deep at night taxis waiting around the entertainment places make much noise.many people suffer from this inconsiderate action.a friend of mine living in another city once visited me, and she told me our city’s taxi drivers cheated her by taking a roundabout route.what will a guest think of our city after such a bad experience? i think we must take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade.maybe the first thing to do is raise the taxi drivers’ professional morality.we are looking forward to your reply.sincerely yours, li hua 12.如你是学生会主席,请根据下面图表,用英语写一则关于春游的通知。
参加者 高中一、二年级的学生 2.参加泉山植物园。
集合地点 学校大门前
集合时间 1.4月25日上午乘校车前往; 2.早上七点集合,七点二十分开车。
注意事项 1.参观展览时保持安静;并认真记笔记,准备回来后讨论。篇二:英语应用文写作大全
应用文写作之书信
----劝诫/鼓励朋友或同学
一.写作结构指导
开头:称呼
第一段:开门见山地说明写信的意图,即信的开头要交待的事由。
第二段:交代信中所反映的主要问题的看法和建议,不同内容可以分段。
第三段:表达美好祝愿,期待对方回信。
结尾:结束语和署名
二.常用句型
i am writing to share with you my opinion about it.it’s quite natural/understandable for you to do„, however,„u from my point of view, you should never go to extremes.i hope my advice can be of some help to you.i wonder if you can take my suggestions into consideration.i am looking forward to your good news.三.优秀范文欣赏
2012年上海高考作文及范例
你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给12年六月八日 june 8, 2012 dear xu haiqing, you said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands.so you felt very depressed.there are different views on people’s wear.the following are my ideas about it.firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.you must always a famous saying goes, ―frugality is the mother of virtue.‖ so, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality.since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family.you will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.i hope you understand what i mean.i am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.(205 words)yours, huangping 四.实战练习
假设你是john,你的朋友angela在数学学习上遇到一些困难,上课听不懂,课后作业也不能独立完成,几次考试都不及格,她很苦恼,感到自卑,甚至想辍学。请你给她写封信,谈谈你的看法和建议。-------申请/ 自荐信
一. 写作结构指导
开头:称呼
第一段:介绍自己,开门见山地说明写信的意图,即信的开头要交待的事由。
第二段:阐明申请或自荐的原因、自己的优势或理由
第三段:表达美好祝愿,期待对方回信。
结尾:结束语和署名
二. 常用句型 i am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....i would like to write a letter to tell you that...i am confident that i am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising„...i shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.i will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience i am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.best regards for your health and success.三,高考作文点评
假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现正在招募志愿者,你 希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括: 1.个人情况:年龄,性别,学历 2.个人条件:英语好,爱好体育,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地情况 3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.生词:申请—apply(v.),application(n.)志愿者—volunteer dear sir / madam: my name is lihua.i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games.思考:避免每句都用第一人称i开头;
内容要点 1.年龄、性别 2.学历及英语水平 3.爱好体育、熟悉本地 4.善于交往、乐于助人 5.承诺
6.合适的结尾
【同学范文1】第一档(很差)1-5分 dear sir or madam, my name is lihua.i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games.i am an 18 girl.as a local people, i know the roads and buildings very clear.i like sports very much.by several years training, i am almost good at every sports.now i am a student.in school, my english is good, i am also a kind girl.when i know someone is in difficulty, i will give him or her to defeat it.best wishes for you.点评:~~~ 【同学范文2】第二档(较差)5-10分 dear sir or madam, my name is lihua.i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games.i hear that the games will be held in this place where i lives.i hope to be a volunteer.because by this, i can lean about the world and take exercise.i can provide the best service for the games.i know the situation here.i believe i can do well.点评:要点安排混乱,部分要点理解错误;拼写、语法错误较多,部分句型结构有问题;
【同学范文3】第三档(适当)11-15分 dear sir or madam, had a happy end.i apply for being a volunteer, i hope you can allow me to be a volunteer.i will do well in it and it and try my best to work.thank you.点评:缺少部分要点,如爱好体育、熟悉本地、善于交往、乐于助人等;承诺部分比较精彩。
【同学范文4】第四档(好)16-20分 dear sir or madam, my name is lihua,i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter acian games.i am a warm-hearted boy of 17, who is still studying in middle school.i want to be a member of them.please accept my application for being a volunteer, and i have been ready to make contribution to the games.点评:能通过使用多变的句式和高级的词组增强文章表现力,英语功底比较扎实。
【同学范文5】第五档(很好)21-25分 my name is li hua.i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games.i’m a boy of 17 years old and right now i’m studying in the ╳╳ no.2 senior high school.应 用 文 写 作
格式例文:
[书信作文写作模版1] 1. 保持书信格式---地址,日期,称谓,落款 2. 根据内容确定文体----建议,劝说,说明,申请,投诉,介绍;商榷/讨论; 描绘/叙述;致谢,致歉„
二、书信作文(2)写作流程图
范文示例:
topic a letter to the university president about the library service on campus.you should write at least 120 words, and base your 假设你是李强,请你就本校图书馆的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及图书馆的藏书数量和更新状况、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
【范文及点评】 a letter to the university president about the library service on campus.thjanuary 6, 2006 dear mr.president, i am writing to express my concern over the library service on the campus.as a major in english, i find that most of the books in english in the library are outdated.(2)提出第一个问题,藏书没有及时更新
第一部分:提出抱怨并表示遗憾
经典语录:
第二段
consequently, we fail to get the latest information of academic development both at home and abroad.(3)指出后果,不能及时得到最新信息 in addition, the light in the reading room is far from bright.(4)指出光线不好 worse still, there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.(5)指出没有空调的问题,(6)提出最后一个问题 last but not least, the newly developed electronic information system does not work well and needs further improvement.countless books should have been listed in the system.经典语录
第三段
there is no denying that the library has helped us tremendously.(7)客观说明图书馆的作用 but it is in urgent need of advancement.when improved, the library is certain to provide much more help with our study.(8)对图书馆的改进充满期待 thank you for your time.i am looking forward to your reply shortly.(9)结束语,期待对方的回信 yours sincerely, li qiang 2.咨询信(letter of inquiry)(1)写作方法
① 首段:
a.复述题目场景,表明写作目的; b.遵守礼貌原则,只问相关信息; c.简要介绍自己,表明写作目的。
② 主体:
a.询问具体问题,注意疑问句式; b.提供背景材料及询问原因; c.强调所需信息重要性; d.题目要求的内容均应涉及。
③ 尾段:
a.表明急切心情,提供联系方式; b.结尾彬彬有礼,表示诚挚谢意; c.希望得到对方帮助和合作。(2)写作流程图
范文示例 topic a letter of inquiry of applying for an english club.you should篇四:英语应用文写作格式总结[1] 英语应用文写作格式总结
常见的应用文格式: 1.备忘录(memo)
2.邀请函(invitation)
3.求职信(a job application letter)4.感谢信
5.通知(notice)
6.请假条(a leave of absence)7.e-mail 备忘录(memo):
date:(时间)november 10,2009 to:(收文人)kelly anderson, personnel manager from:(发文人)j.hign, assistant to the customer service director subject: reasons of decreasing sales(正文)
邀请函(invitation): topic: you must organize an annual academic conference which will be held on december 15.write an invitation to dr.william.dear dr.william, 正文(说明开会的具体时间,地点和内容,表示自己的诚恳请求)i am writing to invent you sincerely to attend the„„ 结束语(诚恳地邀请对方,期待对方的到来)yours, name 求职信(a job application letter): 和邀请函格式基本相当
写信日期(october 10,2009)dear mr.peter, 正文
yours sincerely, name 通知(notice): notice 正文(介绍活动的所有相关信息)
发文单位(english department)有的话写,看题目。
感谢信:
时间(date)
dear sir or madam: 正文(开头,中间)
结束语(感谢对方)thank you for your „„..yours, name e-mail:称谓,正文,同上
请假条: to: from: date: subject: dear sir or madam, 正文(说明请假的原因,请假的时间有几天,说明什么时候上班等,对此表示歉意,希望能得到批准)
结束语:i am looking forward to your kind answer.一、邀请信
非常希望...共进晚餐
2、thank you for inviting us to dinner 谢谢您邀请我们共进晚餐
我期望您会在百忙中光临
4、the reception will be held in...,on dec.12th..招待会定于...在...举行
5、we are looking forward to...我们期待着....6we have decided to have a party in honor of。。为此我们决定举办一次晚会来纪念。。
二、感谢信
1、thank you very much for....十分感谢...2、many thanks for your...非常感谢您...3、please accept my sincere appreciation for...请接受我对...真挚的感谢
4i am truly grateful to you for...为了...,我真心感激您
5thank you again for your hospitable reception and i am looking forward to seeing you soon.再次感谢您的盛情款待,并期待不久见到您。
第三篇:英语应用文写作
应用文写作
1. 应用文的重要性:日常生活中常用,考试能够合理测量学生的语言水平,阅卷相对来说较方便。阅卷教师只需掌握评分的标准和套路即可,因此考前必须予以充分重视和训练。
2. 应用文的主要种类。
应用文的种类主要包括感谢信, 祝贺信, 致歉信, 慰问信, 介绍信, 邀请信, 家信, 建议信, 询问信, 投诉索赔信等十几种书信。除书信外,还有很多实用文体。如日程安排、报告、解说词、演讲稿、观后感、个人情感或经历描述。这些写作方法和技巧有很强的时代性,标准性和可操作性,透彻的了解和掌握应用文各种文体的写作不但对您在校的学习和生活有很大的实用性,而且对您以后的工作和生活也有很高的参考价值.书信
书信写作的五点要求
1、开门见山说意图
2、咨询/ 建议1、2、3
3、不同内容可分段
4、感谢客气不可少
5、期待回信成老套
书信题的写作方法:
(一)信封格式:
名字、信箱、地域范围由小到大,写在右下角(与我们相反)。
(二)信纸格式:
日期:背月份的缩写
(January, February, March, April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November, December)
称呼(后面的标点是逗号):Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, 正文:空4个字节或者顶格写,段与段之间空行)
签名:sincerely yours
(三)开头段:
1、告知对方你的身份(假如对方不认识你)
2、问候收信人(假如他/她是你的朋友)
3、解释写信的原因
1、告知对方你的身份
(假如对方不认识你)
Dear Sir/ Mr.Prometheus, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department. / I am a… at your…
/ I am a … at your college, enrolled in the… course. / My name is…, I am…
2、问候收信人
(假如他/她是你的朋友)
Dear Prometheus,Hello / Hi.How are you? / I hope everything is fine./ How are things going
with you?
/ How are you getting on in / getting along with…..?
3、解释写信的原因
(1)致谢:
/ I am greatly indebted to you for(the double)you have done on my behalf. / Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada. / I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for…
/ I would like to thank you most sincerely for…
(2)抱怨:
I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room. / I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with / at…
/ I wish to make a complaint about…
/ I am writing to draw your attention to…. / I am afraid I have got a complaint about….(3)致歉:
/ I am writing to you because I am unable to…. / I am terribly sorry that…. / I would like to express my apologies for not being able to….(4)询问:
I would like to obtain /request/seek/inquire about some information about…
I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential
information regarding the following aspects. / I would like
(5)邀请
表示 “若你没有其他安排,请光临…”
If you have no other plans for Wednesday,April 8…,will you come to a little
informal dinner here at my home?
I hope that you have no previous engagement and can join us for the English
Evening at 7 on February 1st.
We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.
I’ll expect you at that time unless l hear from you to the contrary.
(6)祝贺
表示 “欣闻佳音,谨表祝贺。”
Permit me to present my congratulations to you upon your recent official
promotion.
Allow me to present my hearty congratulations on your elevation to the post of...
(四)结尾段:
1、发出请求
2、提供帮助
3、再次表示歉意或感激
4、期盼回信:R.S.V.P.1、发出请求
(1)Please give this matter your immediate attention.(2)I would very much appreciate it if……as soon as possible.(3)Please render me some valuable advice which is conductive to my final decision.2、提供帮助
(1)I hope these……will be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more
information.(2)……will be taking responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance,she/he will be pleased to3、再次表示歉意或感激
(1)Thank you for your kind assistance.(2)Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.(3)I am sorry that I cannot……, and trust that you will understand.(4)In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.(5)I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.(6)Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
4、期盼回信:R.S.V.P.(1)I look forward to your prompt response.(2)Looking forward to a prompt reply,(3)I expect to hear from you very soon.范文
询问信
You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:
1)detailed information about the books you want,2)methods of payment,3)time and way of delivery.To whom it may concern,I’m writing this letter to inquire about the English reference books I need for preparing for the entrance exams for graduate schools.Since I want to lay a solid foundation for English, I’m especially interested in grammar and vocabulary books.As far as the means of payment are concerned, I wonder if I can mail you the money through the post office.As you know, this is the most convenient way for me.Could you tell me how many days it will take the books to reach me? What’s more, if you can mail me the books, I’ll be much grateful.Thank you for your consideration and I’m looking forward to your reply.(118 words)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
求职信
June 17th, 2006
Dear Sir/Madam,I am responding to your advertisement in China Daily on June 10th, 2006, which invites applications for interpreters.Enclosed with this letter is my resume which details my background.I believe that I am the best candidate for this position.In the first place, I have been studying for four years in Beijing Foreign Studies University, one of the most prestigious language schools in China, which has provided me with a desirable command of English skills.In the second place, I have taken part in a number of social activities in the past years, which have helped cultivate my team-spirit and creativity.Besides, I have attended training courses for interpretation and have obtained related certificates.Last but not least, I have worked as a part-time interpreter, so I am well prepared for this job.I would treasure the chance and exert every effort to do a good job if I had the luck to be provided with the position.Besides, I shall be much obliged if you will afford me an opportunity for an interview, and I appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.Thank you for considering this application.
邀请信
Directions: Suppose you are the dean of the History Department, Peking University.You want to invite Professor Herb Jason, a well-known scholar of Chinese history, to come to attend an international conference on Chinese history.You’ll cover the following points:
1.The purpose of the invitation
2.The time and place of the conference
3.Ask him a favor of presenting a lecture to your students during his stay
Write your letter in no less than 150 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the address.Dear Professor Herb Jason,I am Li Ming, dean of the History Department, Peking University.I am writing to invite you to participate in an international convention that is to be held in Beijing from 22th to 25th, July, 2007.Since your visit in Beijing last year, all the teachers that attended your lecture have been deeply impressed with your thorough knowledge and profound understanding of the subject.We would be pleased if you could come, as our guest of honor, to the International Conference on Chinese History, If possible, would you please deliver a speech on whatever subject that interests you.Enclosed in this letter is a time schedule for the event.You would, of course, receive our standard honorarium to cover traveling and other expenses.When you arrive in Beijing, I will certainly meet you at the airport.Please let me know your date of arrival if you can come and tell us when you can make the trip.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.Look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
感谢信
Directions: Write a letter of thanks according to the following situation.Once you were ill and were hospitalized for a few weeks in the Chaoyang Medical Center, Taiyuan, Shanxi Province.During your stay the entire staff were kind to you.When you came back home, you wrote them a letter of thanks.Dear Sir/Madam,I’m writing to extend my heartfelt thanks to all the nurses and doctors in your hospital.Last month, while I was on a business trip in Taiyuan, Shanxi province, I suffered from a bad cold and a fever, so I was sent to Ward Rom 201, Chaoyang Medical Center.During my stay at hospital, nurses on duty patiently took my temperature, regularly examined my body, and often fed meals to me.In addition, doctors prescribed me the most effective drugs and gave the best medical advice.Thanks to the constant care from the hospital staff, I recovered quickly.Now that I have returned home, the excellent service of your hospital still impresses me.I believe that as patient, I have received the most professional treatment and the most considerate care.Please allow me to convey my sincere greetings toward the doctors and nurses that contribute all their efforts, patience and energy to their patients.Nothing can express my gratitude except my best wishes to them.If you have anything that needs my help, please don’t hesitate to contact me.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
书信
1.朋友之间联络建议类
2.部门机构投诉与意见类
朋友类
1.表示很高兴收到对方来信
2.直接针对对方的询问提出自己的建议
3.分析你给出建议的原因
4.在采纳和执行你的建议时需注意些什么?
5.表示盼望对方随时与你联系并盼望尽快收到对方的来信。
Templet
1.Dear ___,Pleased to receive your letter of(对方来信时间),and thank you for your season’s greetings.2.As for ___ you asked me in your last letter, I’d like to suggest ___.3.① By___, you can not only___, But also ____.② Not to mention that ____。
4.① Therefore, in order to___, you’d better ___.② As for ____, you should ___.③ Meanwhile,____.④ Last but not the least, ___.5.①Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have other questions.② Looking forward to hearing from you soon.③ Sincerely yours
A letter to a Schoolmate
Dear Xiao Wang,Pleased to receive your letter of June 26, and thank you for your season’s greetings(用作圣诞问候语).As for your one week holiday arrangement you asked me in your last letter, I’d like to suggest you visit some famous places of interests in Beijing, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall.By visiting these places, you can not only enjoy yourself, but also get to know more histories about Beijing.Not to mention that you will find Beijing develops so fast.Therefore, in order to have a good time, you’d better remember a few points.As for a better holiday you should take a pair of comfortable shoes.Meanwhile, remember to take your student card with you.Last but not least, take care of yourself on the trip.Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have other questions.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours,Zhang Ying
投诉意见类-公文
1.表明身份,提出要求
2.指出对方问题所在 3.针对上述问题提出建议和意见,并说明原因
4.提出希望,1.Dear ___,This letters comes to youfrom ___.In it, Some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.2.As you know, ___.(谈论的对象)But unfortunately, ___(不好的方面)
____(例一)
Besides, ___(例二)
What’s more,____(例三)
3.According to those mentioned above, I strongly recommend that ___.The reason for this is obvious.Only when ____ can we ____.4.To be brief, though a bit dissatisfied with ___, I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solve the problems there.Thank you for your attention/time.Faithfully yours, ___.A letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
Dear Mr.President,This letter comes to you from one of your students.In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.As you know, students are the main customers of the university canteen.But
unfortunately, we don’t find the service there is satisfying sometimes.The food tastes very bad.Besides, the canteen is always dirty.And what’s more, the fare is too high.According to those mentioned above, I strongly recommend that the workers of canteen should improve their service quality.The reason for this is obvious.Only when we have good meals can we study harder.To be brief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions, I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solve the problems there.Thank you for your attention.Faithfully yours,Li Ming
第四篇:英语应用文写作
英语应用文写作
按照一般的格式英语信函主要由六个部分组成:信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结句、签名。
信头(Heading)
信头由发信人地址和发信日期两部分组成,通常写在第一页的右上角。英语书信中的地址与中文正好相反,应该由小到大,先写门牌号码、街名,再写城市名、州(省)名、邮编、最后再写国名。如: No.256, Chaoyang Street Beijing, 100069, China
日期的写法英、美两种格式都可以,英国顺序为“日、月、年”,美国顺序则为“月、日、年”
信内地址(Inside Address)
包括收信人的姓名和地址,一般置于信纸的左上角。
称呼(Salutation)
称呼位于收信人地址之下的一至二行,顶格写起,自成一行。
正文(The Body of the Letter)
信件的主要内容。
结句(Complimentary Closure)
类似于中文中的“此致”“敬礼”这类的话,主要是一些套语。
签名
道歉信
1)道歉信的写法
致歉信是向收信人表示歉意的信件,包括三个部分:说明为何事而致歉;解释造成过失或不能履约的原因;再次致歉或提出解决方案。信息提示
信件启首
①直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定
②表达歉意
③诚恳希望对方能接受道歉
④ 表达出自己的心情,并请求对方原谅
⑤过渡句
⑥开始介绍道歉的原因
⑦阐述自己当时的处境和情况
⑧总结自己道歉的原因
⑨希望下次再次实现愿望
⑩约定下次约会的时间和地点
信件结尾与签名
2)道歉信模板
Date:________
Dear______,①I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that _______.② Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret______.③Please accept my sincere apology______.④I fear you are displeased at _____.⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for______.⑥Let me explain.⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _____.⑧I had no way out because ______⑨ Therefore it's not in my power to_______.⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____.I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____.We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.Yours,XXx
道歉模版句型
I would like to give you my apology for...对于……我向你道歉。
Please accept my sincere apology for...请接受我关于……的真诚道歉。
I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but believe I had no intention to insult you.对于我说的话/做过的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非要故意侮辱你。
Let’s not put a little misunderstanding between us.可别让我们之间存在哪怕一点点的误解。
Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.请原谅我的用词不当。
I feel badly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.我为此感到非常内疚,所以想让你知道实情。Please accept my apologies for my oversight.请原谅我的疏忽。
Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再次表示歉意。
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.我真心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.再一次,我为所有的不便表示歉意。
建议信
1)建议信的写法
建议信是向某人对某事提出写信人的建议。建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出合理请求性的建议。
信息提示
信件启首
① 写信的原因
② 引出作者的建议
③ 表述建议内容
④ 提出建议的理由一
⑤
⑥
⑦
⑧ 建议的理由二 具体到某一方面的建议内容 供被建议人选择的条件建议内容的另一方面
⑨ 其他的建议
⑩ 对建议内容的评价对建议内容所做的承诺
表达本人的愿望
信件结尾与签名
2)建议信模板
Dear ____ ,①I am delighted to learn that_______.②It.③In my opinion,_______.④On the one hand,________.⑤On the other hand,_______.⑥As to__________, I suggest_______.⑦If _______.⑧It is unnecessary for you to_____.⑨In addition, ____.⑩I am sure______.Please inform me_____.I am looking forward to_______.Sincerely Yours,Signature
建议模版句型
I would like to suggest that...我想……
I am writing to express my views concerning...我写信来是要表达有关……我的看法。
You have asked for my advice with regard to...and I will try to make some suggestions.你问我有关……的事情,我会尝试着提出一些建议。
If I were you, I would...如果我是你,我会……
It seems to me that you could...我认为你可以……
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我想如果你能……,可能会更好。
I believe you will take my advice into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.我时刻准备着就此事进行更详尽的讨论。
感谢信
1)感谢信的写法
信息提示
信件启首
① 直接表达谢意
② 表达出自己非常珍惜对方的付出/礼物
③ 对对方一定的赞美
④ 对方的情意对自己的影响
⑤ 介绍自己的近况
⑥ 表达出自己希望有回报的机会
⑦ 询问对方是否有时间
⑧ 表达自己回报的心情
⑨ 提出希望下次见面的愿望
⑩ 再次表达感谢
最后表达真挚的祝福
信件结尾与签名
2)感谢信模板
Date:_________
Dear____,①I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for____.②I'd like you to know how much your _____ meant to me.③You have a positive genius for ______.④I not only enjoyed_____ , but also___.⑤I shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life.⑥I _____.⑦I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating(互换).⑧ Would you kindly let me know _____.⑨I will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____.⑩ How nice it would be to see you again and I am looking forwards to seeing you next time!
I repeat my thanks again for your_____.Please give my kind regards to your_____.Yours truly,Signature
必背模版句型
I am writing to express my thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意。
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...在信中我要为……表达我真挚的谢意。
Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.Its one of the most wonderful gifts I ever got.非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物,这是我收到的最好礼物之一。
Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。
I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时帮助和支持。
On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for...我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激之情。
Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, we will nurture them forever.没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远铭刻在心。
Thanks again for your kind help.对你的帮助再次表示感谢。
My true gratitude is beyond any words description.任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。
Please accept my thanks, now and always.请永远记住我的谢意。
Your help is very much appreciated by each one of us.我们每个人都非常感谢你。
投诉信
1.写作攻略
具体写作步骤:
首段:表明来信所要投诉的问题,尽可能做到客观礼貌。
主体段落:写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。
结尾段:提出解决方案,不需展开。
Date
Dear XXX,My name is(姓名).2 I am(身份).3 I venture to write you a letter about(表述抱怨内容).The focus of the complaint is(抱怨内容的核心点).5 For one thing,(抱怨内容的一个方面).6 For another,(另一方面).7 Honestly speaking,(客观评论).8 But(抱怨产生的原因之一)9 Besides,(抱怨产生的原因之二).All in all, there is still much room for improvement(总结说明所抱怨现象或事物还有很大改进空间).11 I do hope(表达本人的愿望).12 Thank you for your time and kind consideration.(信件结尾常用语)
Sincerely yours
signature
2.必背模版句型
I am writing to make a complaint about...我写信是为了投诉……
I am most reluctant to complain, but...我非常不愿意投诉,但……
One annoying aspect of your service is...你们的服务项目中一个令人不满的地方是……
I have been pleased with your services for years, but now I feel very disappointed.多年来我一直很满意你们的服务,但现在我非常失望。
I would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault...我想让您知道这个问题/错误……
I am writing to inform you that I find...unsatisfactory.我写信是为了告诉你我发现……令人非常不满意。
I wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about...我想表达我对……的不满/失望。
It would be highly appreciated if you could...如果你能……我将万分感谢。
I trust you will take my complaints seriously and...我相信你会认真对待我的投诉,并且……
I hope you will give due attention to this matter.希望对此事你能给予足够的重视。
I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.我希望能在月底解决这事。
I could not be more satisfied if you can kindly...如果你能……我将会非常满意。
I would appreciate it very much if you could...如果你能……我将非常感谢。
第五篇:英语应用文写作
Letters of application-1(for a scholarship)
Daizong Street
Tai’an, Shandong 271018
China
April 10, 2010
The World Bank
Attention: Scholarship Program
1919 World Trade BuildingFirst Avenue
New York, NY 10001
U.S.A.Dear Sirs:
I have recently heard that the World Bank is offering scholarship for those who are going to study languages at a university.I would like to have you send me an application form.I received a score of 620 on TOEFL taken October 25, 2009, and would like to improve my English abilities by studying in an English university.Although my major is biochemistry, I want to improve my English well enough to translate recent Chinese research in my field into English for publication in the West.Thank you for considering me.Sincerely yours,(signature)
Huang Houping
Letter of application-2(for a position)
338E.44th St.New York, NY 10017
U.S.A.May 5, 2002
Professor Li Bing
Department of English
Beijing Foreign Studies University
Beijing 100081
P.R.C.Dear Professor Li,I am interested in teaching English in the People’s Republic of China.I am qualified to teach reading, writing and literature.An acquaintance of mine, Mr.Zhang Wei of your University suggested that I should write to you.Presently, I work as a teaching assistant in a college in Los Angeles, California.My background is strong in the liberal arts, especially in the English language.I have got my Ph.D.degree in linguistics from university of Michigan.Enclosed you will find a copy of my resume.Basically, I am interested in a position as a foreign language expert or as a teacher.If you have any position available, please allow me to interview with you.Thank you for your time and consideration.Respectfully yours,Martin Lews
Encl.Letter of application-3(for further study)
Dept of Computer Science
Tsinghua University
Beijing 100084
P.R.C.Feb.28, 2009
Professor S.M.Smith
Computer Engineering Department
Massachusetts Institute of Technology
Cambridge, Mass, 02139
Dear Professor Smith,I am writing to you about the possibility of further studies in the field of Computer Engineering leading to the Ph.D degree at your institution.Would you please send me the necessary information and forms?
I am 25, male, majoring in computer science.I received my B.E.(Computer Science)in June 2005 and M.E.(Computer Science)in March 2008 from Tsinghua University in Beijing.I kept on ranking in the upper 5% of my undergraduate class and graduate class.I do believe that the doctorate-oriented study at your institution is of great help for my further study in the area of Computer Science.I have taken the TOEFL Test(score 637)and GRE General Test(score 2170).I am going to take the GRE Subject Test on Computer Science this summer.Thank you very much.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours,Sensen Li
Encl.: resume
Letter of application-4(for a part time job)
College of Life Science,Shandong Agricultural University,61 Daizong Street,Tai’an 271018.April 10, 2010
Dr.Wang Dequan,Department of Pathology,Tai’an Central Hospital,Tai’an 271000.Dear Dr.Wang,I would like to apply for the position of part-time lab assistant that my organic chemistry instructor, Professor Fang Jin-yi, told me about.I feel both my academic background and my work experience qualify me for this job.I am presently a junior majoring Biological Science at Shandong Agricultural University.During the past years I have taken courses in biochemistry, cytology(细胞学)and physical chemistry.I have had experience in the laboratory and I am familiar with most basic procedures.Last summer I worked for the Provincial Drug Administration studying the effect of artificial sweeteners on rats.In this position, I prepared frozen sections and did computer correlations of study results.After graduation I expect to apply to medical school and eventually become a pathologist.Working in your department would enable me to gain more insight into this field as well as contribute something to it.I have enclosed a resume, and I will be available for an interview at your convenience.Sincerely yours
(signature)
Zhang Xi
Letter of application-5(for a teaching job)
Toute 1, Box 19
Mound City
Kansas 66056
U.S.A.April 10, 2010
Chair of Personnel Office
Shandong Agricultural University
Daizong Street
Tai’an 271018
China
Dear Sir:
I have heard from Dr.Joseph Thomas, Pittsburg University that your university wants English teachers to teach in Foreign Languages Department.I am interested in being considered for a teaching position in FLD for the 2010-2011 school year.I graduated from Harris Teacher’s College in 1965, and have teaching experience for more than 40 years.I have
enclosed a copy of my resume, which will show my background.Dr.Thomas has offered to give you further information about me.Thank you for considering this application.Sincerely yours,(signature)
Betty Jane Marcum
(Enclosure)
DATA SHEET
Name: Betty Jane Marcum
Address: Route 1, Box 19, Mound City, Kansas, 66056, U.S.A.Birth Date: January 18, 1940
Heath: Excellent, no allergies or handicaps
Education: Beaumont High School-Diploma, 1956
Harris Teacher’s College-B.A.Degree, ranked 2nd in graduating class-1965
Post-graduate work-six hours at No.Univer./St.Louis 27 hours at Pitts.State Univer.Certified to teach: Grades kindergarten through 12
All subjects-K-8
Biology 9-12
Teaching Experience: 1965-1966, St.Louis, Mo.-Grade 4
1966-1970-Overland, Mo.-grades 3-6
1970-1974, stayed home with my infant son
1974-present, U.S.D.346., Mound City, KS.Subjects taught here:
High school Spanish
High school English
High school General Science
High school Biology
Twelfth grade Advance Placement Biology
Junior High(grade 7 and 8)General Science
Coached Jr.High boy’s track
Jr.High girl’s basketball
Advocate: Writing, radio broadcasting, reading, speaking
Family: Husband, George W.Marcum, Jr., Married 28 years
Daughter, Amy, age 27, married
Son, James, age 21, Completing his last year in college
References: Mr.Gary wimmer, Superintendent
U.S.D.346
Mound City, Kansas 66056
Mr.Dwayne Osborne, Principal
Jayhawk Linn High School
Box D
Mound City, Kansas 66056
Mr.Vanetta Sabine-(Friend of eight years)
Box 536
Pleasanton, KS 66075
Letter of application-6(for a job)
Dear Mrs.Lesser,I am writing in response to your ad in the Austin American-Statesman for a Technical Writer/Intern.I have attached a copy of my resume for your interview.During the past five yours, I have gained valuable experience in various types of technical writing, documentation, and graphic design.I have written technical specifications, government contracts, and white papers for International
Software Systems, Inc., in conjunction with several branches of the United States Army and Navy.I have also edited several ads that were published in major magazines for Object International(such as PC World, PC Weekly, and ORACLE).In my current position at Dell Computer Corporation, I have written and illustrated an employee handbook and documented and flowcharted several corporate processes(such as hiring processes, EMI procedures and flowchart maps for engineering reviews and checkpoints).I am currently in process of completing my Associate Degree in Communication at Austin Community College.Once I achieve this degree, I plan to transfer to the University of Texas(at Austin)to complete a Bachelor’s Degree in Journalism.While my studies at UT have been invaluable to my career goals, your intern program provides an important element.I have been searching for employment opportunity like this one that combines my continuing education with practical experience in technical writing.In the past, several team members from your organization have assisted me in completing projects on a contract basis.They were instrumental in enhancing documents and work reflected a strong sense of pride and professionalism.Since these are the same business ethics I strive for personally, I can think of no better learning environment than joining an organization such as yours.I look forward to having the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications with you.Sincerely yours,Carol N.Brand
Enclosure: resume
A good example of memo
To:Dong Fang, Head Reference Librarian
From: Liu Jian, Reference Assistant
Subject: Implementing Open Shelves in the Reference
Section
Date:May 10, 2008
The purpose of this memo is to recommend a new shelving system for books in the reference section of our library.Following are(1)a background statement,(2)a discussion of the new system, and(3)recommendations.Background
Under the present system of closed shelves, students wishing to consult reference books must fill out a requisition slip, wait in line, give the requisition to a desk person, and wait some more time before receiving the desired book.This system is time-consuming, unwieldy, and ineffective.The result is that students do not like to use the reference facility of the library.New System
I propose that we switch to an open-shelf system at once.The transition can be made simply by eliminating the desk that forms the front of the reference section.The fear of theft that some people have voiced could be eliminated by using the magnetic detection system that is already in place.The benefit of open shelves would be a reduction in personnel and free access to a needed library resource.Recommendations
To implement the open-shelf system we should proceed with the following changes:
1.1.Eliminate the front reference desk.2.2.Maintain a central information desk.3.3.Reassign all but two librarians who presently work at the front reference desk.I am certain that these changes will do much to improve the service that this section of the library provides.