初中英语写作

第一篇：初中英语写作

初中英语作文高分秘诀

1.动笔之前，认真审题

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2.围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：

（1）内容要点；

（2）运用词汇和结构的数量；

（3）运用语法结构和词汇的准确性；

（4）上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

3.语言通顺，表达准确

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)．注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。

1)语态、时态要准确无误。

2)主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。

3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4)注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。

5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如：

汉语英语

A.句号。.B.省略号„„„

C.顿号、无

(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：

1)外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。

2)服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。

3)内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。

4)感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。

5)动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行

加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：

1)表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or „

2)表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however „

3)表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that „

4)表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside „

5)表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as „

6)表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though „

7)表示递进关系的过渡词： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again „

8)表示因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result„

9)表示解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually „

10)表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important „

11)表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, „

12)表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as „

13)表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking „

4.不会表达，另辟蹊径

中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

(1)迂回而行

当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。

(2)小词大用

汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。

(3)借花献佛

有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。

5.锦上添花，量力而行

如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：

(1)句型多样化，不要I（We）„„到底，使人觉得乏味。

(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。

(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。

(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。

(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。

(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。

(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。

6.书写工整，卷面整洁

字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。

7.写完之后，勿忘检查

中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：

(1)格式是否有错。

(2)拼写有无错误。

(3)语言是否用错。

(4)时态、语态错误。

(5)标点错误。

(6)人称是否用错。

【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动，以免顾此失彼，影响全局。

总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。

初中英语写作技巧

书面表达，首先要抓住所给的提示，然后运用所学词汇、语法及句型，避繁就简，简明表达要讲的内容。

那么，如何才能做好英语写作题呢?这里介绍五个要诀以供参考。

1.紧扣中心;2.意思连贯;3.富于变化;4.注意时态;

5.不“生造”句子。

书面表达是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型，一般来说，书面表达采取情景作文和控制作文两种形式。情景作文多为看图填词、看图写话、看图作文等形式，后者指根据所给条件进行写作的形式。

以上两种书面表达形式，都不同于自由写作，都不允许同学们随意发挥，更不许逐词逐句地翻译提示，而是要求考生抓住信息大意，用自己所学的、熟悉的语言进行表达。所以，无论哪一种书面表达形式，都要求做到以下几点：

1.紧扣题目，准确、全面地表达出要点中规定的全部信息和内容，不得遗漏;

2.表达正确，意思连贯，过渡自然;

3.格式正确，书写规范，标点正确，字数符合要求。

做好“书面表达”这道题，应该从以下几方面入手：

一、充分准备，打好基础

为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文。只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法。其实，用英文写信、记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法。

二、仔细审题，明确要求

对题目所提供的信息要认真分析，明确要求，做到心中有数。要对所提供的信息加以分析、整理，使之更加具体化、条理化，为开始动笔做好准备工作，还要搞清题目的要求，以

便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文章。此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。

三、抓住重点，寻求思路

根据题目所提供的信息，草拟提纲，寻求逻辑次序，确定如何下手。否则，语无伦次的文章将不会被人接受，也不可能得到高分。

四、遣词造句，表达规范

用词要适当，不可逐句把提示汉译英，亦不可生拼硬凑，不要硬拿英语单词到中文句子里去对号，否则写出中文式英语，闹出笑话。一般来讲，写作时，应尽量选出你有把握的词，尽量使用短句(简单句)。如果有的单词不会写，有的思想不会用英语表达，你可以设法绕开，最好找一个同义词、同义句，或近义词、词组短语来代替。要正确使用关联词，如 and，or，but，so，because，since 等，以便行文自然流畅。除此之外，写作时还要注意时态、语态的各种句式的交替作用，使文章显得得体，表达流畅。

五、修改润色，锦上添花

作文写完之后，应注意检查修改，修改时先从全局修改。首先要检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当，接下来检查所写内容是否切题，该交待的内容是否交待了，最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求，最后是否一致。

局部修改，也就是段落、句子水平上的修改。作局部修改时，要检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误。

另外，值得一提的是，考生修改时，一定要注意文章长短(词数)是否达到了要求。为了便于辨认，修改好后，还要认真誊写一遍，英语誊写的基本要点如下:

1.四周应留空。

2.标题应写在第一行的中央。文章与标题间空 2-3 行，除介词、连词、冠词外，标题中每一个实词的第一个字母均应大写，但如果第一个单词是介词、连词等，这个词的第一个字母仍应大写。

3.段与段之间一般不空行，但每段第一行应缩进 4-5 个字母所占的位置。

4.书写工整、规范，卷面整洁，词间距要一致，尽量避免移行。

5.要删掉一个词时，用一条粗横线划掉，不要用括号括起来。

誊写完后，还应仔细校阅 1-2 遍。校阅要逐词逐句进行，注意检查语法、拼写、标点、大小写等方面的错误。校阅是自检的最后一关，应严肃认真的进行，尽可能地消灭一切差错，增强文章的效果。

经过以上工作，最后呈现在评卷老师面前的应该是一份干干净净、整整齐齐、主题突出、语言流畅、用词恰当的作文。

范文：一次体育课 A PE Lesson

下面是某节体育课的有关情况，请你据此写一篇日记。

1．时间：5月28日，星期一，下午。

2．天气：阴。

3．项目：跳远（jump）。

4．过程：

（1）打上课铃时就在操场集合；

（2）做准备活动（warming—upexercises）；

（3）听老师讲解并示范；

（4）我因心情紧张而失败；

（5）不灰心，反复练习；

（6）终于跳过了3米。

5．体会：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。

注意：

1．内容必须包括所有要点，但不能逐点翻译。

2．日记格式要正确。

3．词数100左右。

A PE Lesson

May 28th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.范文：写给母亲的感谢信

My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son

Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that

the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again

I hope that you have happiness everyday.Mum：

Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！

范文：介绍校内配套设施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.

第二篇：初中英语写作

中学英语写作教学：写作时应思考的是 What do you want to write ? What do you want to say to readers ?

将学生的现实需要与写作联系起来让学生产生写作的愿望。所谓现实需要就是指帮学生运用写作解决生活中的实际问题，例如老师在学期之初明确规定：学生生病必须用英文写请假条。逐渐地，这种需要就会转换成对写作的一种自觉愿望。初中英语写作教学指导重点应放在“模仿性写作”，在初三的后期可指导学生进行“创造性写作”，所谓创造性写作就是在老师的启发之下，让学生运用发散思维、批判性思维写出有新意的短文。模仿性写作注重帮助学生掌握写作的题材和内容，创造性写作要求作者在写作中表达自己的新思维。严格来讲，初中英语写作不是真正意义上的写作，是“准写作”，尤其在初中和高中的早期阶段，这种写作应该以模仿为主，在模仿的基础上，训练学生遣词组句、组句成篇的能力，以及训练学生写作的思维能力。

1.初一写作

初一写作是通过范文阅读仿写的形式来体现，即读格式化范文，如海报、问候卡、邀请卡等来参照写作。而描述性指让学生使用片语、单句去描述规定的图片，并通过图片的系列性来实现单句间的组合排列。但初一写作还不是语篇写作，写作的基本目的是斟词酌句，为接近意义上的写作进行前期的基本训练。这种训练不是机械的，而是纳入一定的图片设定的语境中来进行。

2.初二写作：

初二写作是老师引导下写简单话题作文，通过小组内讨论决定写作提纲，共同进行接力式写作并共同修改订正。初二写作只是初步培养学生简单的语篇写作能力，此时的写作不具有创作性，而是以模仿为主，因此读与写、听与写技能之间的配合转换尤为重要。

3.初三写作：

初三英语写作应让学生独立地去经历一个较为完整的写作过程，从素材的收集到独立的起草，老师的指导只是在体现在短文的修改阶段。此时，写作的流畅性还不能完全通过“意连”来实现，因此指导学生在写作中运用连接词(如 but，however，therefore，furthermore，so，still 等)来体现语篇写作中的“形连”应该予以重视。初三语篇写作的创作性体现在以下三方面：(1)以应用文体为中心的练笔创作，如书信文体、日记文体、海报通知等招贴文体；(2)表示逻辑关系的简单说明文体和表示时空人物关系的记叙文体的写作练习；

(3)以图示和表格为中心的描述性语段写作练习，如用语言解释一则广告，用语言解释一幅图，用语言解释一则用药须知等。通过初三学段的写作来训练学生的独立思考能力、集合思维和发散思维能力、创新思维能力、笔头语言的运用表达能力和对自己及他人写作成果的欣赏能力

第三篇：初中英语写作

英语写作25个经典句型

一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen

(known/heard/had/read, etc)

~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、There is no denying that + S + V...（不可否认的...）

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad toworse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

四、There is no doubt that + 句子~~（毫无疑问的...）

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

五、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（...的优点是...）

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create(produce)any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

六、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...）

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

七、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子（如此...以致于...）

例句：So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。

八、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~（虽然...）

例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}

虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

九、The + ~er + S + V,~~~the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V,~~~the + more + Adj + S + V~~~（愈...愈...）

例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。

The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。

十、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~（借着...，..能够..）

例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

十一、It is time +to do sth.（该是...的时候了）

例句：It is timeto solve the traffic problems.该是解决交通问题的时候了。

十二、That is the reason why ~~~（那就是...的原因）

例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don’t like it.夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

十三、For the past+ 时间，S + 现在完成式...（过去...年来，...一直...）

例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。

十四、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。

例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

十五、It pays to + V ~~~（...是值得的。）

例句：It pays to help others.帮助别人是值得的。

十六、be based on（以...为基础）

例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

十七、Spare no effort to + V（不遗余力的）

例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

初中英语重要句型：初中英语写作中常见的十二种句型

句型1：There＋be ＋主语＋地点状语／时间状语

There's a boat in the river．河里有条船。

There are seven days in a week．一周有七天。

句型2：What's wrong with＋sb．／sth．？

What's wrong with you？你怎么啦？

What's wrong with your watch？你的手表有什么毛病？

句型3：How do you like．．．？

How do you like China？你觉得中国怎么样？

句型4：What do you lit．．．？

What do you lit China？你喜欢中国的什么？

句型5：had better（not）＋动词原形

You'd better ask that policeman over there．你最好去问问那边的那个警察。

句型6：How＋adj．／adv．＋主语＋谓语！

What a／an＋adj．＋n．＋主语＋谓语！

How cold it is today！今天多冷啊！

What a fine picture it is！多美的一幅图画呀！

句型7：Thank＋sb．＋for（doing）sth．

Than for coming to see me．感谢你来看我。

句型8：So＋be／情态动词／助动词＋主语

He is a student．So am I．他是一个学生，我也是。

句型9：．．．not．．．until．．．

He didn't have supper until his parents came back．直到他的父母回来他才吃饭。句型10：比较级＋and＋比较级

The baby cried harder and harder．那孩子哭得越来越厉害。

句型11：the ＋比较级，the ＋比较级

The more one has，the more one wants．越有越贪。

句型12：．．．as＋adj．／adv．＋as．．．

．．not as（so）＋adj．／adv．＋as．．．

Do you think that art is as important as music？你认为艺术和音乐一样重要吗？

Last Sunday the weather was not so wet as it is today．上个星期天的天气不如今天的天气潮湿。

句型13：more／less＋adj．＋than．．．

I think English is more useful than Japanese．我认为英语比日语有用。

I think art is less important than music．我认为艺术不如音乐重要。

句型14：stop．．．from doing sth．

The Great Green Wall will stop the wind from blowing the earth away．绿色长城将阻挡风吹走土壤。

句型15：both．．．and．．．

Both you and I are students．我和你都是学生。

中考英语作文常用过渡词

1• by this time 此时at the same time同时after a while过了一会儿

in addition/besides/what’s more此外

by the way顺便提一句for example/for instance例如such as正如

in fact 事实上in other words 换句话说

at last/ finally最后as a result结果in a word总之

2•（1）表示选择or；either…or；otherwise否则；rather than；whether…or not；not…but

（2）表示转折but但 是；although虽然；yet然而；however然而；

（3）表示过渡by the way顺便提一下

（4）表示顺序at first/ first（of all）/ firstly/above all to start/begin with 首先；second / secondly第二；next接着；later后来；soon(shortly)after之后不久，在……之后不久；since then从那时起；at last / finally/in the end最后,from now on从现在起；in the meanwhile(meantime)在此期间，与此同时

（5）表示因果关系

because / as / since / for因为； because of this由于这一原因； thanks to多亏；as a result of由于……的结果；if so倘若如此；then那么；therefore因此；so所以；

（6）表示结论或摘要

in short 总之,in a word简言之，总之；

周知

as a result结果it is well-known that / as we all know众所

第四篇：初中英语写作

1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言

有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！

原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？

经典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that„

2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计

原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造： Honesty

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that „

写作绝招结尾万能公式：

1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that„, Therefore, we can find that„

2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？

更多句型：Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作绝招 写作的“七项基本原则”：

一、长 短 句原则工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

Asa creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet theprimary need

of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！

强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、主 题 句原则国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）

10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！

四、短语优先原则写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其

一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其

二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、多实少虚原则原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如： 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room

所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！

六、多变句式原则1）加法（串联）

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就

是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）转折（拐弯抹角）批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友„可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）

有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：

When to go, Why he goes away„

5）附加（多此一举）如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（气势恢宏）

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑战极限原则既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！

写作绝招文章主体段落三大杀手锏：

一、举实例思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！

Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast

更多句型：To take „ as an example, One example is„, Another example is„, for example

二、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语： 相似的比较： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with „, „

这个对 compare and contrast 题型很有用

三、换言之没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子：I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语：in more difficult language, in simpler

初中英语提示性作文“六步走”

提示性作文，即题干统一要求学生根据汉语意思和英语提示词写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。在分析2005-2011年中考试卷写作部分时不难发现，除2010年考的不是提示性作文，其它的均为关键字造句→成文型作文。2011年各城区的模拟题，包括海淀、东城、崇文、朝阳一模都考到了“关键字造句→成文型”的作文，所以需要引起广大考生的足够重视。

然而，学生在面对这种类型的作文时通常感觉摸不着头脑，不知如何下笔。但事实上只要大家记住我给提示性作文新的称谓，即“关键字造句→成文型作文”，这种类型的作文还是非常具有可操作性的。

首先我先来解释下这个新名词：“关键字造句”是指就作文题干所提供的一系列单词并参考给出的中文提示句子逐个进行造句；“→”是表示在已经造好的句子的情况下适当增加和扩充跟主题相近的句子使文章脉络更加清晰；“成文”是指在结束上两步造句和扩充句子的情况下适当补充些连词和过渡句使文章结构和内容更加丰富和完整。

下面我们就来见招拆招，再现“关键字造句→成文型”作文写作的“六步走”战略吧！

1.审题+立意。

考生需要花一定的时间充分了解题目的要求，同时在立意的过程中一定要确立写作的时

态和基调。

2.分段。

初中阶段的写作可以采用两段或者三段式，客观描述占一到两段，主观表达占一段。

3.关键字造句。

就是根据作文题干所提供的一系列单词并参考给出的中文提示句子逐个进行组词成句。在造好句子的情况下，扩写跟主题相近的句子。

4.连句成文。

就是在完成前一步骤的情况下，补充些连词和过渡句，使之通畅有逻

5.主观表达。

在这里要跟广大考生呼吁主观表达的重要性。05-09年北京市中考题中关键字造句→成文型作文的题干都明确提出“给出自己的建议、谈谈自己的感受、你对此事的看法、你有什么体会”之类的字样，所以切莫在自己的写作中忽略了自己的主观表达。通常情况下可以写3-4句话即可。

6.检查。

这是非常关键的一步，应该及时修正语言错误，看看文章是否符合题目要求。

接下来我们以中考作文的评分标准对初中英语关键字造句→成文型作文“六步走”进行一个可行性的分析。以第一档作文为例，完全符合题目要求（审题），内容完整、丰富（立意），思想健康、积极向上（主观表达）。能够使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇（关键字造句），语言通顺，语意连贯（连句成文），表达清楚，具有逻辑性（更高层次的要求）。所以只要考生根据这六步走战略一以贯之地练习，必定能攻克提示性作文。

第五篇：初中英语写作

初中英语写作范文集锦

1范文：孩子的独立教育

围绕：学校让学生打扫厕所和学校不让学生打扫厕所两种情况。写一不少于80个词的主题为“孩子的独立教育”英语作文。

给出词：only child，moral education

nowadays in china，many students are the only child in their family.they are the apple of their parents’ eyes or even their grandparents’，so they are free of any house work or menial labor.and moral education is no more than some bookish thing.Students are largely dependent on their parents and teachers.to educate them to be independent，the most effective way is to let them experience on their own.therefore，they are better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room，which can be regarded as part of the moral education.2范文：关于国庆节的英语作文

例1

National Day is coming，and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.It’s a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week.We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.We’re visiting Tianya Haijiao，Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think we’ll have a good time there.国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。

例2 National Day Holidays

I went to my cousin’s house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant；She said she’s worrying about getting fat，but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that he’ll educate his child in a severe way，with a future father’s matureness.I’m happy for them.：）

Yesterday，our research school’s soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half，but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half，so，we lost the game.Half of the National Day holidays have passed by……life still goes with good and bad times.3范文：中学生该不该上网

最近你们学校要举行一次“中学生该不该上网”的讨论。你是赞成者之一，认为我们不应该因噎废食。请根据下表内容写一篇发言篇。

要求：字数100词左右注意：不要逐句翻译。益处

1.看国内外新闻，获取信息。2.发e-mail，打电话。

3.上网络学校，阅读各种书籍，自学外语。

4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌等游戏，网上购物，丰富我们的生活。

5.提高我们操作电脑的能力

注意事项

1．不要沉湎于（be given to）上网以免影响生活和学习。2．不要上不健康的网站。

参考范文：

In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks.As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can.We can send e-mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends.We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet.We can even do shopping on line.Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer.But we should not be given to the Internet，or we'll get our life and study destroyed.Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites.Anyhow，this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend.We can't throw away the apple because of the core，can we？

4范文：我的同学 My Classmate

请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文

要求：

1、主题明确，语言流畅，思路清晰。

2、字数在100字以内。

思路点拨：

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述，所叙述的内容要交代清楚，条理清晰，重点突出，主次分明，详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文，主人公应该用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索，以

一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理，有真实感，叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行，同时加以点评。

参考范文 My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived，and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.5范文：介绍学生学习情况

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：A piano player

What do I want to do when I’m older？ Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when I’m ten years old.Now I’m in grand five.I hope when I’m sixteen years old，I can become grand eight.I’ll be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.范文：my dream place

The winter vacation passed quickly.In those days，I have done some things.Playing，doing homework and so on.Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework.She thanked to me.Though，I was proud of myself.I also went over my English learning.I think I have known more than before.In the new term，I will study hard.范文：The thing that I'll never forget

How time flies！I’m fifteen years now.During the long time，there was one thing that I will never forget.The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival，people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old，my family took the bus to my grandparents’ to say “Happy New Year” to them.In the bus，I had a good seat.At 7：30，the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time，there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down，but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly，a little boy behind me，stood up and made room for the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled，too.When I told my cousin about it after that，he said “The child is the father of a man.” I’m very ashamed.Why could’t I do the same thing as the little boy did？

From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others，the world will become much more beautiful！

6范文：怎样学习英语 How to study English？

作文一：

Study English，You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English.This isn't easy，since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue.Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership（where English is in use at least some of the time）is，for many people，even better.If nothing like this is accessible，you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.你需要常常和英语教师以外的人士用英语交谈。这当然很不容易，因为与母语相同的人自由交谈时，彼此若用英语交谈总会觉得很不自在。亦可参加英语俱乐部或国际会员的俱乐部（至少有时使用英语沟通），这样对很多人而言更有益。如果没有合适的社团可加入，也不妨考虑任何足以提高英语能力的机会。

作文二：

There are four key points to study English：listening，speaking，reading and writing.Firstly，we should be brave to talk with others in English.By doing this，we can improve ore talking and listening skill.Secondly，we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible.In this way，we can gradually improve our pronunciation.Thirdly，we should often read English books.When we come across a new word.We should guess its meaning through the contest first.then look it up in the dictionary to have a check.I thin，it is a good way of reading.Fourthly，we should practice our writing skills.Whenever we have any idea，we should get the pen and write it down at once.It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar.As long as we listen，speak，read and write more，we are sure to make remarkable progress！

7范文：介绍学生学习情况

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：风 Wind

Each season has wind.The warm wind in spring，the hot wind in summer，the gold wind in autumn and cold wind in winter are all called wind，but their tempers are quite different.When spring comes，warm wind wakes up everything；many flowers come out.It can bring us joy.In hot summer，the sweats roll down from our checks.Everything needs wind，but wind often hide and seek with us.Autumn comes.Cool wind blows yellow leaves down.The corn is ripe and all the fields become yellow.The farmers are busy getting in crops.It can bring us the happiness of harvest.In cold winter，cold wind blows so hard that everyone can hardly open his eyes

Wind，we welcome you，need you，but sometimes hate you.Will you please obey us and do good things for us.8范文：找妈妈 Looking for Mum

One day Li Ming caught a little bird.He tied it with a piece of thread and played with it happily.At that time，he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.A policeman saw her，came over and asked her why she was crying and where her house is.When he learned that girl had got lost and she was then looking for her mother，he decided to lead the girl to be back home.Seeing this Li Ming thought the little bird also had its mother and he should set the little bird free so that it could be with its mother again.Then Li Ming untied the thread and returned the little bird to the blue sky.9范文：能源 Energy

As we all know we need energy in our daily life.There are many kinds of energy.We can get our energy from food.The energy in food comes from sunlight which helps plants grow.Plants store up energy from the sun，much of our food comes from plants.Some of our food comes from animals，but animals depend on plants for food too.10范文：英语作文自我介绍 To introduce myself

Hello，everyone！

My name is Winnie.I'm a 15 years old girl.I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.I'm an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.I also like sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.I'm kind-hearted.If you need help，please come to me.I hope we can be good friends！

OK.This is me.A sunny girl.11范文：给父亲的信

Directions：you have decided to start jogging next month，but you haven't got any suitable shoes to wear.Now you are writing a letter to your father asking him to send you some extra money so that you can but the shoes.in you letter，you will include：

* your hard work；

* How you read about jogging in your English textbook；

* The advantages ofjogging；

* THe need for a pair fo quality shoes；

* The price of the shoes you plan to buy；

* THe time you need the money；

* Your appreciation for his help Dear dad，I am writing to you for help which I have come to a desperate need.You know I always want to be healthy and in geat shape，so I can pay more attention to teacher's instruction.Yesterday，I went to library and read some books about jogging.I think I need a good jogging shoes for my exercise.I believe a strong body can enhance my study as described by our textbook.I have found a cheap price of a pair of jogging shoes which cost only $500 nearby school.Daddy，you will help me buy this pair，wont' you？ The on sale may not last for long.Please send money as soon as possible，so I can start my jogging right away.I know you will fulfill my dream and expect my endeavor.I promise I will do my best on my study and exercise.Thank you for your consideration.Take care and wish you happiness.Yours beloved son.12范文：考试 Examination

Someone says examination can help us go over our lessons in time and after the examination we can find how we are getting on with our studies.But we are always having too many examinations and they are also too difficult for us to get through.I find some of us have lost interest in learning lessons.Besides，it is harmful to our health as we hardly have any time to go in for sports.I think the present system of measurement should be improved.13范文：什么是成功的秘诀 What Is the Secret of Success

My father is an engineer.He works very hard.Once I asked my father what the secret of success was.He didn't say a word，but wrote a few words on a piece of paper and handed it to me.I looked at the paper，it was written：A=X+Y+Z.“What does it mean？”I asked.“A means success，”explained my father.“X means hard，Y means good ways，and Z means you must stop talking and start to work.”

That's right.From then on，I tried my best to be better.14范文：通知 Notice

The sports meeting which was to take place this Saturday has to be put off because of the heavy rairi these days.All students are required to come to school on Saturday morning as usual，but there will be no class that afternoon.Weather permitting，the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning.Members of the school ping-pong team must come to the Ping-pong Hall at 4：30 this Saturday afternoon.Ping-pong stars from Wuhan will come and give special training and coaching then.Office of Physical Education 10th April，2005

15范文：一次体育课 A PE Lesson

下面是某节体育课的有关情况，请你据此写一篇日记。

1．时间：5月28日，星期一，下午。

2．天气：阴。

3．项目：跳远（jump）。

4．过程：

（1）打上课铃时就在操场集合；

（2）做准备活动（warming—upexercises）；

（3）听老师讲解并示范；

（4）我因心情紧张而失败；

（5）不灰心，反复练习；

（6）终于跳过了3米。

5．体会：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。

注意：

1．内容必须包括所有要点，但不能逐点翻译。

2．日记格式要正确。

3．词数100左右。A PE Lesson

May 28th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.16范文：写给母亲的感谢信 My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again

I hope that you have happiness everyday.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Mum：

Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！

17范文：介绍校内配套设施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.18范文：少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲 A young idler,an old beggar

“少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲”，请你谈谈对此的想法并如何行动。

Almost everyone knows the famous Chinese saying：A young idler，an old beggar.Throughout history，we have seen many cases in which this saying has again and again proved to be true.It goes without saying that the youth is the best time of life，during which one's mental and physical states are at their peaks.It takes relatively less time and pains to learn or accept new things in a world full of changes and rapid developments.In addition，one is less likely to be under great pressure from career，family and health problems when young.Therefore，a fresh mind plus enormous energy will ensure success in different aspects of life.Of course，we all know：no pains，no gains.If we don't make every effort to make good use of the advantages youth brings us，it is impossible to achieve any goals.As students，we should now try our best to learn all the subjects well so that we can be well prepared for the challenges that we will face in the future.19范文：寒假生活 Wonderful life in winter holiday

From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday.I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday.But I didn't.Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.I spend a lot of time on the homework… Every day in my Winter Holiday，I always got up late.Then I listened to the tape，it was nine o'clock.Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime！I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy！

I'm unlucky on the playing too.I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire.I'm careless to kindle the firecracker，so I'm very unlucky.I still unlucky on my friend's party.In the morning，I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10：50.After ten minutes，the party would start！So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home！And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home.My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me！

I'm worried and feel unlucky on my weigh.Last term，I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram！I must to do banting！

But most important，I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium，I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse，the monkey…in the sea.Now I've done it.It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.20范文：我家的小狗 My Little Dog

Last year，my friend gave me a little dog.I was fond of him very much.I liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever I went.I was very glad that I had a “body guard”。

Last winter I was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.However，no matter how late I went home，my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me.When I passed there，he barked two or three times then ran towards me.It seemed that he was calling me.My dog not only，took good care of me，but also was respoasible at home.When strangers came to my house，he barked at them but not hurt them.What a lovely dog he is！

21范文：我的储蓄罐 My Collecting-tin

I have a lot of little handiwork，but the favorite one is my collecting-tin.It is a little man made of china.He wears a red hat and a pair of big glasses.His blue clothes are very nice.He has a red noseband no big eyes like stars on his face.His big and round body is very funny.Because of this collecting-fin，I have learned how to savemoney.When I was a little boy，I always put coins away，then I dropped them into his round body.Sometimes he can “eat” plenty of coins at a time，He becomes heavier and heavier day after day.22范文：我的外籍老师 Our Foreign Teacher

Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher.She comes from America.She is thirty-one years old.She has fair hair，white skin and gray eyes.She is tall and slim.She looks very kind.And in fact，she is kind indeed.Ms Jerry is a good teacher.Although she only comes to our school twice a week，she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students.Once，she was ill，but she went on giving us lessons.When we learned this，we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm：“Each lesson she will bring us new pictures，new stories，new games and new songs.Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.23范文：参观博物馆 Going to the Museums

During a long vacation，I usually like to go to see the exhibits in one of a great many museums.Such as the art museum，the history museum，the museum of natural history，and the museum of science and technology.Many wonderful things are cared for in museums.There are paintings，potteries，sculptures，costumes，swords，ancient animal bones and plants，stuffed animals，antique steam locomotives，and many others.It is always a good review of history to visit those museums.24范文：寄信 Mailing a Letter

All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city，and even the smallest village has at least one postal station.You may go to a post office to mail a letter.However，there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes.If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address，he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.25范文：神奇的贝壳 The Magic Shell

At the beach I found a magic shell，so I brought it home in my pail；and I kept it up on my top bookshelf right under the picture whale.And now，whenever I wish I were back there by the shining sea，I hold the shell up close to my ear，till it brings the beach to me：all the hushing sound and the rushing sound of the seashore winds and waves are caught in my shell that I brought home.26范文：旅游事业 Ways to Improve china's tourism

【要求】

要求：旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以Ways to Improve China＇s Tourism为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。（提示：扩大宣传，改善旅游设施，提高服务质量……）

【范文】

Ways to Improve china＇s tourism

Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world.However，tourism in China is not as developed as it should be.If the following is done，China＇s tourism will definitely be improved.First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists.Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip.Finally，the quality of service should be improved.Don＇t tell people their ideas are bad unless you＇ve got a good one.27范文：模范学生 A Model Student

Do you mind being called a bad student？Of course not.So far as I know，everybody intends to be（become）a model student.However，to be a model student is by no means an easy thing.First，he must do his best to obtain knowledge.A man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed.Secondly，he must remember to improve his health.Only a strong man can do great tasks.Thirdly，he should receive moral education.If his conduct is not good，no one will consider making friends with him.28范文：通电话 A Phone Call

I was tired with preparing for the Joint College Entrance Examination the other evening.And having been alone for several hours，I was eager to have someone to chat with me about anything but examinations.So I telephoned my best friend Mary，who was also busy preparing for the joint entrance examination.On the telephone，I told her that I missed her very much.And I invited her to have a cup of coffee with me in a coffeehouse near her home.But to my surprise，she declined and said that she had to devote all her time to her studies.Hearing this，I could do nothing but hang up after saying “Sorry” to her.Disappointed and discouraged，I turned back to my desk and reluctantly buried myself again in my books.29范文：春天来了 Spring is coming on

Winter has gone，and spring is coming on.Watching the ice melting，I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter.A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance.It is a feast for our eyes and souls.The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring.Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine，enjoying the beautiful scenery，listening to the wonderful music，drinking the new tea，my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire.Spring is the most fantastic season in the year.It means so much to the other three seasons.30范文：一个特殊的女孩 A special girl

There is a special girl.Why is she special？Firstly she looks like a boy so her classmates always call her a “hoyden”.Maybe they’re right because she also has the same hobbies as the boys.She likes playing soccer，basketball，table tennis，badminton，computer games and so on.If someone bothers her she will feel annoyed and even fight against him.Secondly she is a lovely girl.She loves life very much.You may see her smiling all the time.She likes making friends with others.She likes making jokes with them，too.She likes singing but she is not good at it.She likes dancing，but she is not good at it，either.Thirdly，she is a sentimental girl.She likes talking to birds and flowers.She likes talking to herself，too.When she’s watching TV，she will cry over a touching scene.Sometimes she is moved to cry all day and all night.Lastly she’s a fantastic girl.She has lots of dreams.She always dreams of her future such as her job when she grows up.She wants to be a scientist because scientists invent things that are helpful for our lives.She wants to be a TV hostess because she has beautiful voice and she also wants to be…

That’s why I said she’s special.Do you want to know her？If you can keep the secret I can tell you who she is.The special girl is me.31范文：我的生日 My birthday

My birthday is on March 23th，I celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.Every year，I hold a little birthday party and invite my friends.We chat and play a lot of games together.The best part of it is that I love the birthday cake and the gifts I get from my parents and my friends.I also get some money on my birthday.I can buy what I want with the money.I have great fun on my birthdays，but on the other hand，I also understand that I am one year older after each birthday and that means I should be more responsible for myself and I should also my self-aware.I should understand more things and be less ignorant！

Fianlly，I should be thankful for my parents，I know they have done their best in raising me up.32范文：成人教育的发展 A Boom in Adult education

Directions：For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Adult Education.You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：

1.现在许多成年人都利用业余时间去大学或夜校读书

2.出现这种成人教育热的原因是……

范文：

A Boom in Adult Education

Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li，my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard day’s work，gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class.Miss Li’s case is not unique，and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.There are a number of reasons for people to go back for their education.Some people，like Miss Li，are doing it to acquire another degree or diploma to impress the society.To them more knowledge，or rather，more credentials means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.Other people，especially those who are laid off or out of employment go to vocational school to prepare to return to the job market.They are eager for new skills so that they can be qualified for the jobs in retail trade，administration，education and other service categories to which they are strange because most of them were blue-collar workers in the factory.There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine，painting，calligraphy and photography.As their working weeks decline people begin to have time to fulfill their old dream of their heart’s desire.Out of necessity or out of interest，people go back to school for the common goal——to improve themselves，and this boom in adult education，in turn，helps to raise the intellectual standard of the whole country.33范文：你喜欢哪种方式的旅行？ Which Mode of Travel Do You like?

Directions：For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like？ You should write noless than 150 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：

1.有的人喜欢参加旅行社旅游（package tours）

2.有的人喜欢自己独立行动（travelling on one’s own）

3.比较这两种旅游方式，我喜欢的是……

范文：

With the general standard of living improvingand the working week becoming shorter，more andmore people are able to make a holiday trip toplaces of interest.While many like to joinpackage tours fro convenience，I prefer to traveln my own.I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom.Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss；and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot.I can always adjust my plan.On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base.At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach.At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals.But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.34范文：快乐的家 A Happy Family

I have a happy family.Although it’s small，it’s full of love.There are four people in my family，my father，my mother，my elder sister and myself——we all love each other.My father is a doctor.He loves his work.Every day he works from dawn to dark.In his spare time，he likes reading and writing books.My mother is a teacher.She is very strict with her students but kind to them.Every day she goes to work early.She is not only a teacher but also a fiend of the students.My sister is a shopkeeper and she has been married for several years.I’m a middle school students.My wish is to be a university student.And my parents often encourage me to work hard.I will try my best to realize my dream.35范文：全家福 A Photo of My Family

Look at this photograph of my family.There are five people in it.The tallest one is my father.He is forty-eight years old.My mother is standing beside him.She is not as my father.She is three years younger than my father.Sitting in front of them are my grandparents.My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses.My grandmother is as fat as he.This little one is me.I’m sitting between them.All of us love one anther.I have a happy family.36范文：快乐的一天 A Happy Day

Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday.Now she is 56.I am very happy.Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy.Someone is doing exercise，someone is singing the nation song.A little girl comes to me and says to me，happy National Day.I know she loves the country，but I love her，too.Today is a happy day.37范文：最好的朋友 My Best Friend

I have a best friend.She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too.Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice-cream.She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name，too——Angle.38范文讲评：周末

「要求」

周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。

周末对于人们来说意味着什么。

每个人都有自己度周末的方式。

我是怎样度周末的。

「范文」

Weekends

Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest.For example，people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way.Within two days，some people can relax themselves by listening to music，reading novels，or watching films.Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball，wimming or dancing.Different people have different relaxations.I often spend weekends with my family or my friends.Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends.Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge.I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision.An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends.Weekends are always enjoyable for me.「评语」

全文思路清晰，论述充分，语言流畅易懂。用词讲究，注意了词语搭配，没有重复、堆砌之感。

39范文讲评：节日出行

「要求」

和外国朋友交谈是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是谈什么话题却要慎重考虑，因为各国风俗习惯不同，谈的东西要关涉到禁忌、兴趣。学校的英语角将要组织一次对外交流活动。请你以书面形式写一些可以作为谈话的材料。

「范文」

Holidays and Outings

It is common in English to ask people about their holidays.In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this.If the holiday has not yet taken place，then their holiday plans can be talked about.And if it is already over，then where they went，whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed.Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel，either at weekends or during their holiday periods，so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions.They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why，especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.Take vacaticn and long weekends.Never let vacation time expire.「评语」

看完上文，可知这实际上是一篇讨论英语话题的文章。从这个角度来写“Holidays and Outings”这个题目可谓不无新义。但是在与外国人交往时谈些什么都是一个很现实的问题。本文提供了这一范例。全篇也围这个问题来写，几乎每句话都是紧扣中心的。比如它始终突出了这是一个话题，就反复用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等词。

40范文讲评：介绍你的学校

「要求」

下周将有一批外宾来校参观，请你给外宾简要介绍你校的情况。内容包括三方面：

校史和成绩。

学校规模和主要设施。

师生状况（词数100—120）。

「范文」

An Introduction

Our school was built in 1945 and a great number of students have graduated from it.Now many of them have become scientists，professors and engineers.Many students have also become workers and farmers after graduation.They have achieved great success in the development of modern industry and agriculture.Our school is a key middle school in our province.It has thirty classes with over 130students.Our school has a six-storeyed teaching building，several laboratories and a large playground.Last year，a new library was built and it has more than 1000 copies of books.All the teachers here are trying their best to do their work well.Every students is making full use of his time to train himself to be a qualified student.「评语」

文章简洁得体，结构鲜明，语言流畅，介绍具体。读后让人对学校概貌了然于胸。

school 还有学派的意思，另外“一群鱼”叫做a school of fish.