小语2011高考书面表达

第一篇：小语2011高考书面表达

2011年安徽英语(论坛)高考卷的的英语书面表达属于开放式作文。提示材料要求以“My Approach to Difficultiea in Learning”为题，为某校英文报“Experience”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己在解决学习困难的一些做法，词数100左右。

试题材料是关于学生学习生活方面的，情景贴近实际，试题整体难度适中。本题考查了考生英语语言运用能力，分析问题及解决问题的能力。材料没有给出具体的写作内容要点，因此，考生可以根据材料要求，进行思考和展开想象，自由发挥的空间很大。考生在写作时，要以学习困难的解决方法为中心，细审题，列提纲，谋篇布局，遣词造句，连句成篇。注意采用的时态应该是过去时和现在时相结合，以第一人称为主，恰当准确使用过渡词汇，做到短文结构紧凑，层次分明，通顺自然，上下连贯。同时，还要注意卷面整洁，避免低级错误，写好开头结尾。

附：高考(微博)英语作文评分原则和评分标准

高考的评分原则以及评分标准是考生平常进行写作训练的指导原则，是考生在高考时进行写作的规范，也是高考阅卷老师评分给分的一个重要依据和标准。

（一）评分原则：

1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

第二篇：高考书面表达

书面表达范文

例文一：

据说，中国有一半人在吸烟。许多男孩和女孩都有吸烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。

众所周知，吸烟对人身体是有害的。越来越多的人们认识到这个问题的严重性，但他们仍然乐此不疲。

吸烟能导致很多疾病。由于吸烟，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸烟导致的最严重的疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。

为了保证人们的身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。请立即停止吸烟吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.Smoking causes many illnesses.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happiness in my mind?

Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.例文三：

进入2l世纪，环保是引起世界各国重视的大问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对环境污染的看法。

1．污染现已成为全球问题。空气、河流、海洋、土壤的污染对人类和动物十分有害。

2．列举2-3种产生污染的原辆以及由此造成的严重后果。

3．希望人们都能采取有效办法，控制污染，净化环境，保护生态平衡。（平衡：balance）In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考题）

春节是中国的传统节日。请以Spring Festival为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一下人们是

如何欢度春节的。

作文必须包括以下要点：

1.春节是一个家人团聚的节日，人们从四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成员坐在桌边，享用丰盛美味的食物。

3.在春节期间，孩子们会很开心。他们可以整天地玩耍，不用上学。而且，他们还能

得到许多压岁钱。

4.春节也是人们休闲和走亲访友的日子。人们彼此祝福“新年快乐”，并希望来年有好

运。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.例文五：（2011高考题）

在一个人的成长过程中，常会遇到烦恼。其中之一就是我们的父母亲经常翻看我们的书包和日记。假设你将参加校园英语演讲比赛，请就这一现象写一篇英语演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

有些同学觉得父母不尊重我们，没有给我们足够的空间。我们不必为此苦恼，因

为我们还不够成熟，有时，无法作出自己的决定，我们需要父母亲的帮助。同时，我们必须和父母亲进行交流和沟通。毕竟，我们要成长。我们要发展自己的个性。我们

需要有自己的观点、自己的想法以及自己对事物的判断。但总有一天，我们会相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.Thank you.例文六（2010高考题）

假如你是王红，今年暑假即将毕业。请以第一人称给某公司林先生写一封80-100字的英文求职信。内容要点可用不同方式表达。

求职信必须包括如下要点：

1.今年暑假，我将于东方职业学校毕业。

2.在校期间我的专业是计算机科学。我曾获得计算机辅助设计（CAD）一等奖。

3.去年，在业余时间，我在一家公司兼职，我学了很多东西。

4.我想在贵公司申请一份职位。我相信我能胜任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考虑我的申请。期待着公司能给我一次面试的机会。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.Yours faithfully,Wang Hong

假如你是李华，请根据提示的要点写一份60～80词的请假条给张老师。

要点：

1、李华病了，感觉不舒服，头痛，疲劳，不想吃东西。

2、从昨晚开始就这样，看了医生。

3、医生仔细地给他作了检查，说他患了重感冒，开了药。要求他卧床休息两、三天，多喝开水。

4、今天不能到校，请假两天

Dear Miss Zhang,I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

（1）你怎样得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成为他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何帮助他；

（4）你盼望他的回复。

注意：（1）电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数；[来源:学&科&网][来源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）词数：100左右。

Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

第三篇：高考书面表达压题

（一）感谢信：

假如你是四川某地区一名失学学生，名叫李华。你幸运地得到在北京工作的一位称作Mr Smith的美国人的赞助，于是重新回到校园学习。为了表示感谢，你于5月14日给Mr Smith写了一封信。信的内容如下：

1.得以重返校园，非常感谢。

2.在老师的帮助下，学习成绩进步很快。

3.受到老师的表扬，家长的鼓励。

4.决心更加努力学习，争取考上大学。

5.盼望见到Mr Smith，希望Mr Smith寄张照片来。

Dear Mr Smith,I’m glad to have received your money and books.Now , I can go to school again.I am happy and thank you so much.I have been studying hard since I accepted yourgifts.With the help of my teachers, I have made great progress in my studies.So our teacher praised me for it and my parents encouraged me.I have made up my mind to study harder and try to go to college this year.I’m looking forward to seeing you, but at present I am busy preparing for the college entrance examinations.I hope you can post me one of your photos.Best wishes!

Yours sincerelyLi Hua

亲爱的斯密斯先生，很高兴收到你的汇来的钱和书。现在，我又能回到学校了。我真高兴，对你十分感谢。自从接受了您的赞助以来，我一直在努力学习。在老师的帮助下，我在学习上取得了很大进步。因此，我得到了老师的表扬和父母的鼓励。我下定决心要更加努力地学习，今年争取考上大学。

我一直盼望见到您，但是现在我忙于准备考大学。我希望您能给我寄一张您的照片。

致以最好的祝福！

李华

（二）邀请信：

假如你是李明，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封信，邀请他参加你班学生将要举行的暑期夏令营活动并请他回信告诉你他是否能来。信的内容还包括以下几点：

时间： 7月20日至7月27日

地点：北京度假村

活动内容：参观北京名胜古迹（长城、故宫）；文化学习班（语言学习、相互介绍自己的国家、学校及学习和生活等）；文艺会（唱歌、跳舞、游戏等）

Mar.6th

Dear John,I’m writing to tell you that the students of my class are planning to go for a

summer camp at the Beijing Holiday Village, from July 20th to 27th this summer.I’d

like to invite you to come and join us.We will visit some famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and

so on.We’ll talk about our countries, schools, life, study and other things.We’ll give

parties at which the students will sing,dance and play games together.Would you

please write back to let me know if you could come?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Yours,Li Ming

亲爱的约翰,我给你写信，是要告诉你，我班同学计划要举行的暑期夏令营活动，地点是

北京度假村，时间是从七月二十日到二十七日。我想邀请你和我们一起来参加。

我们要参观一些著名的地方，像长城，故宫等等。我们会谈论我们的国家，学校，生活，学习等等。我们还要举行派对，同学们将一起唱歌，跳舞和做游戏。

你能给我回信，告诉我你是否能来吗？

盼望尽快得到你的回信！

李华

（三）求职信：

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按

下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。

1.表示感兴趣

2.说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历

3.希望得到回复

注意：

1.词数：100左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Dear Sir or Madam,_____________________________________

Dear Sir or Madam,I’m a student from Xinhua Middle School.I’m glad to learn that you want a few

part-time English reporters.I’m quite interested in it.I would like to apply for the

position.I think I’m fit for the job.As a student, I’ve read a lot and have much knowledge

in many fields.I’m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing.Besides, I’m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others.Above

all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station.So I’m sure I can

do the job well if I get the position.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua

先生/女士，我是新华中学的学生。听说你们想要招聘业余英语记者。我对之非常感兴趣。我想要申请这个职位。

我认为我适合这个职位。作为一名学生，我读书很多，拥有许多领域的知识。我喜欢英语，并且擅长口语和写作。

而且，我易于与人相处，喜欢跟别人合作。首要的是，我曾经在学校广播站当过记者。因此，我相信，如果得到这个职位，我能把这份工作做好。

盼望你的答复。

李华

（四）介绍地点：

假定你是李华。应应该朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。

Dear Bob,Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library is in the center of the school.There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building is right behind it.The library is big.When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects.There are also lots of newspapers and magazines.We borrow books and do some reading in the library.According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days.It is open from 9 am to 7 pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.We all like our library very much.Best wishes,Li Hua

亲爱的鲍伯，感谢你上一封信问到我们学校图书馆的情况。

我们的图书馆在学校的中央。它的前面是一个美丽的花园，而我们的教学楼恰好在它的后面。图书馆很大。但你步入其中时，你会看到许多书架，上面装满了不同学科的书籍。也有许多报纸、杂志。我们在图书馆借书和阅读。根据规定，每个学生一次最多可以借5本书，可以看10天。图书馆周一到周五，从上午9点开到下午7点，周末闭馆。

我们都非常喜欢我们的图书馆。

致以最好的祝愿，李华

（五）咨询信：

假如你是李明，正在澳大利亚学习，打算在暑假期间学习绘画。在一网站上

你发现一则招生广告，但一些具体信息不明确。请你根据提示，发一邮件询问有关情况。

提示：1.初学者是否可以参加学习？

2.是否上暑假班？

3.是否需要自带材料？

4.如只在7、8月学习，费用如何？

Dear Sir or Madam,I saw your advertisement on your website and I’d like to know more about your course.First of all, I should explain I’m just a beginner in painting.Can I take your course? As a student, I’ll have a few weeks’ holiday in July and August.Is there a course running at that time? If I decide to go ahead, do I have to take my own brushes or pencils with me or are they provided by your company? Is there anything else I need to take? Finally, how much does it cost if I learn painting for only two months?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

先生女士你好，我在您的网站上看到了广告，我想进一步了解课程情况。

首先，我得（像您）解释下，我是个初学者。我能参加学习吗?作为一名学生，我在七、八月份有几周的假期。那时候开设课程吗？如果我觉得去了，我必须携带画笔和铅笔吗？还是你们公司提供？我还需要带别的什么吗？最后，如果我只学习两个月的话，费用是多少？

盼望着你的答复。

李明

特别提示：

1.高考英语的作文一定要字迹工整，卷面整洁。因此，建议你好好用笔记本练练书写；

2.范文要背诵下来，可以参照翻译，弄懂句意；而且要背着写一写。可以一篇一篇攻克。写的时候注意句子可能存在的变化。

3.加粗的斜体字大多是常用的句式，要弄懂和记住。

4.高考中的作文能够被压中的可能性不大，但是，一些常见的句子可以套用，尤其写作的第一段，非常重要，尽量记住几个结构。写作一定要分段，一般都分三段：第一段，点题；第二段，表述过程；

第三段，收尾。平时练的时候就这样去练。在横线格上多写写。

第四篇：高考书面表达

书面表达（2011辽宁）

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学院毕业，你从报纸上得知BB公司要招聘一名中文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：

1.年龄；

2.学习情况及英语水平；

3.兴趣和特长；

4.性格特点.注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua—17 years old,and I ’m a confident and outgoing boy.I’ll graduate from XinXing English School in July.I happened to get the information from the newspaper that you are looking for an English secretary.I’m much too interested in it,so I’d like to apply for the job.When it comes to my study,I’d like to say that I’m very hard-working and I achieve good results in my study.It has been twelve years since I began learning English and I have had a primary command of the communication and hand-writing of English.What’s more ,I enjoy reading novels and history books ,in addition,my favourite sports is basketball.Last but not the least,I can most probably meet your demand.I’ll appreciate it if you give me an opportunity to make a contribution to the BB.Sincerely yours,Li Hua

文章注意事项：

1.17-year-old 不能用作定语修饰Li Hua，2.I’ll表示一种客观事实而I will多表主观意愿

3.Begin to do表示即将开始而begin doing多用于陈述过去发生的事

4.Enjoy表示做某件事的时候，喜欢享受，也就是边做边喜欢，而like只表示喜欢，没有去做的含义

5.History book直接名词修饰名词,表示直观属性

6.在文章中尽量不要用I think，需用时应该用It’s up to me(如果让我说，做决定的话),In my mind;In my opinion;I’d like to convey my view/point/idea/feeling that....;personally I think来替换

积累句型：

When it comes to....(I would like to say....)

I can most probably meet your demand(我应该比较符合你的要求)

书面表达（2011浙江）

假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100—120个词的心。信中应包括以下内容：

1.说明写作目的2.对这些行为提出批评

3.提出建议

注意：信的开头、落款及信的第一句话已给出

June 8,2011

Dear Mr.headmaster

I feel it a great honour to write to you!The purpose of my writing is simple but the issue is significant I think.These days,I noticed that some students in the school litter the ground with used paper or scribble on walls at random.After thinking about it for a long a long time.I decide to reflect to you.As far as I’m concerned,such behaviours are very rude manners and have a bad effect on the environment of the campus.In consequence,It’s high time that we took measures to prevent these phenomena from occuring again.What do you think?For one thing,you are expected to enact severe rules to prohibit littering and scribbling.Meanwhile,publishing the students who have the similar behaviours is also necessary.For another,you may as well call on us to pick up the rubbish on the ground.How I wish you could take my advice into consideration!I’m really convinced that with the efforts of every body,our school will grow better.Yours faithfully,LiYue

文章注意事项：

1.第一段最后一句I think 不放在句中要放在句尾，而在疑问句中I think常放在句中

2.没有In recent days要用These days替换

3.Notice指无意中地观察到，而observe多指专门观察（有时用于天文观察、显微观察等）

4.Wall可数the wall表示特指一面墙walls表示泛指

5.一定要注意and连接的两个并列结构或句子，例如连接两句话若同意主语一句用be动词一句用实意动词则and后加出主语，若都是be动词或都是实意动词则省略主语

6.注意主语，一定要看清，若上文没有提到或指代不明容易引起歧义的情况下要补出实实在在的主语，比如such behavious就不能用they来替换

7.Happen和occur

若事件用发生（happen）：accident,incident等

若现象用出现（occur）：phenomenon等

8.you should 如果想表达地更委婉用you are expected to do或you are supposed to do

9.I believe一般换成I’m really convinced that

10.I do wish语气生硬，换成How I wish that....较委婉

11.Grow 比be更加生动形象具体，还含有变的过程

积累词汇、短语、句型：

Reflect反应

For one thing....for another....May as well不妨...做好

You are expected to do

You are supposed to do你应该...I’m really convinced that我相信

How I wish that....With the effort

书面表达（2013-2014全市统考）

据最新统计，目前中国有2/3的城市缺水，大约3亿人喝不上健康洁净的水。你校学生会计划在高二年级开展“节约用水，从我做起”的英语演讲比赛。假如你叫刘畅，请你撰写一篇演讲稿，主题为“Save water,save ourselves”内容主要包括：

1.目前问题

2.提出办法（在家中刷牙，洗手时关闭水龙头：不要使用干净水冲厕所：提醒父母检查是否水管漏水：在学校不要扔掉未喝完的瓶装水等）

3.发出呼吁

注意：

1.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数

2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译

3.词数120左右：参考词汇：瓶装水bottled water：冲洗厕所flush toilet：

I’m LiuChang from Grade 2.The topic of my speech is“Save water,save ourselves”.As is known for us all,with the development of society,the issue of lacking water is becoming serious day by day.Believe it or not,nearly seventy percent of the cities in China are lacking in water resources and around thirty hundred million people are not able to drink healthful and fresh water.Consequently,something must be done to solve the problem,for example,taking off the tap when you are washing your hands and brushing your teeth,not using clean water to flush toilets,reminding your parents of checking whether the water pipe is normal.Last but not the least,don’t throw the bottled water away until you have finished drinking the water.To sum up,only if all of us make contributions to saving water can we eventually solve the water problem.Thank you for your listening.

第五篇：高考英语书面表达技巧

高考英语书面表达技巧

通常，英语学习，听、说、读、写、译五项基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英语课程标准》，对九级语言技能目标英语写作有6点明确的要求。同时列出了写作技能与试题设计的要求和写作评价标准，其测试方式有五种。学生作文主要从内容要点、语言使用效果、结构和连贯性、格式和语域及与目标读者的交流五个方面进行评价。英语书面表达是英语语言基础知识和语法基础知识的综合运用，还要具有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，要求内容清楚、意思连贯、结构完整、逻辑性强、主题突出、用词准确、文体恰当。一般，要文理通畅，非单纯地翻译。要答卷满意，平时确实需要长期的信心的培养，耐心的启发，由易到难，从简单到复杂，循序渐进地坚持内容、语言、语法、表达、结构、逻辑和卷面等进行规范地训练，而且训练有素。现在，不少学生对英语书面表达不予或不够重视。这并非完全意义上的写作，只要求用书面语言基本表达出要表达的东西。一般原则是：不多写、不少写和不错写。现结合存在的问题和多年的教学积累，谈谈高考英语书面表达应注重的五方面。用顺

审准题义，明确情景，看清要求。不少考生写作时，还有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解题的习惯，特别是不注意生词或短语提示，或干脆完全根据所给材料先后顺序逐一翻译。前后不连贯，层次不清晰，逻辑性不强。因此应认真思考材料，找到所要表达的主旨文意及线索，在线索引导下通畅地表达内容，增加可读性。为此，应注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示过度及连接的词汇，使之有较强的感情色彩。用对

对每一个句子都尽可能避免语法错误。通常错处出在：

2.1动词错误

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（划线部分改为Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（划线部分改为coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遗漏处加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遗漏处加are）

（3）时态错误。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（划线部分改为comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（划线部分改为starts）

书面表达可能出现多种时态，但特定时间背景下时态相同。如人事物现状的介绍，应以一般现在时为主；过去的介绍，应以一般过去时为主；日记应以一般过去时为主；通知应以一般现在时为主。千万不要随心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面积失分。

（4）语态错误。由于汉语被动色彩不浓，因此英语表达易受影响，该用而不用，不该用而用be动词。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遗漏处加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（划线处去掉was）

还有喜欢在动词前面加be动词。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（划线处去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（划线处去掉are）

2.2名词单复数混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（划线处改为800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（划线处改为ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠词错误

冠词属小词，重视不够，影响表达。

1）How do you spell the computer？（划线处去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（划线处去掉the）用准

用准确地道的语言，不能生涩难懂，不合英语表达习惯。常见现象如下：

3.1单词堆砌

写句子，用语不准，而根据汉语句序进行相应的英语单词堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（错）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（错）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重视掌握单词，写作时碰到生词难句就委婉地去解释，用模糊定义，语言生涩难懂，文意混乱，表达不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（错）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英语作文，受汉语影响，虽语法正确，却不符英语表达习惯。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（错）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（错）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

语言转换功在平时。简明扼要，表达清楚，是关键所在。冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初学写作要简单完整清楚地表达，就要把握两个关系：

4.1完整不一定就句式复杂

一味追求新、奇、特、难，容易出错。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（错）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（错）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2简单也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，结构就不完整，句意就不明确。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（错）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（错）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考试是根据内容和表达给分的，要点齐全，是直接因素。必须注意要点来源：

标题。有些需要标题，却粗心漏掉不写，造成失分。书写标题应力求简洁明了，有较强概括力和针对性，并注意单词字母大小写。

格式。不少应用文需要正确的格式，如通知的开头，常常要交待通知的对象；日记开头，常常交待时间和天气；信件的左上角必须注明写信人的地址和时间，下一行要顶格写上称呼，正文结束后，要有结束语，并签名。

正文。这是全文要点集中之处，应认真思考材料含义，理清大意，将所有要点逐一落实，并检查有无遗漏。

常识性。原材料不一定反应，但仍然重要，既属内容，又承上启下，增强文章可读性。如写通知结尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；写参观欢迎词开头可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，结尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介绍结束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；写信结尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必须注意原则：不多不少。该有的不少，不该有的不写。整洁

文章写好后，应认真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小写及标点符号错误，誊写应尽可能书写工整，布局美观。卷面整洁清爽就会增加得高分机会。

总之，了解、掌握、运用好以上五个方面，就容易得高分。