优秀英语作文大全网购的利与弊

第一篇：优秀英语作文大全网购的利与弊

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购的利与弊

with the development of the internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the internet has become a commonplace in our life.here consumers can buy almost everything they need.shopping on the internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.people don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.this is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.the goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the internet.all they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses.the commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.however, shopping on the internet also has its disadvantages.the first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally.sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.the second disadvantage is that some shops on the internet are not registered.they will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

第二篇：英语作文网购online shopping

With the computers becoming ubiquitous in many households, online shopping is no longer unfamiliar to us.The Internet offers us a channel to purchase various goods, for instance, apparel, home appliances, agriculture, medical, transportation, electronic components and so on.As online shopping is playing an increasing important role in our daily life nowadays.Justlike a coin has its two sides, online shopping is a two-edged weapon.On one hand, getting what we want without having to go out and look for it brings us great convenience.On the other hand, online shopping also carries some disadvantages.First of all, the commodity you bought online may not answer to the description from the seller.Secondly, some sellers sell fakes in order to earn great profits.At last, leaving your mobile number as it was marked as important information to fill in for delivery causes disclosure of personal information.So to sum up, the governmental departments can keep online shopping on the right track, and make adjustment if necessary.In addition, public should treat online shopping rationally.

第三篇：英语作文网

英语四级作文范文

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四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。

语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。基本表达

人们认为：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 万能理由（Omnipotence）

1.方便：convenient/ convenience 2.效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3.节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space;economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space;costly, lavish 4.人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance;selfish, isolated, conserative 5.人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6.娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lonely 7.环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8.安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9.经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10.人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改）

1、字母大小写

2、怪符号

3、单词拼写

4、主谓一致

5、动词时态

6、名词单复数 实例一

题目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途 Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it.It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land.It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it.It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand.People will produce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people--man and woman, old and young--ride their bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.注：1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。2.During the rush hour 分词结构开头。3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways.First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride.Second, riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.注：1.Compared with cars 分词结构开头。

2.be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于

3.thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词 4.cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive 5.be good for health 对健康有好处（万能理由）6.Moreover 表示递进

In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注：第一句应该用there be结构

Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a developing country.And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为„„； 2.另外一些人认为„„； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。（最好写成4段）实例二 99年6月真题

Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。Score: 14分

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（启）

注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。

Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.（承）注：1.本段总分总结构

2.they argue that = they think that 3.with the development of...随着„„的发展 4.what's more 递进关系，moreover 5.bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句；（2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（转）注：1.But 转折词（信号词）

2.they emphasize that = they think that 3.today's society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4.许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge；

获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge 5.knows nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；（2）给出自己的观点。

Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合）Score: 11分

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.注：结构非常好，可以套用。

Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books.Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.注：1.“people, who...,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。2.as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones 3.lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb.astray 4.they suggest that = they think that 5.touch 碰（闪光点词汇：如教材P7：shouldering the responsibility of doing sth.肩负起责任）

But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.Even the best book only contains one field of information.So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is better.注：1.hold 认为 同样表示“think”的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold 2.the best book 在西方国家是“圣经”的意思 3.to know more, to read more 错误，中式英语

To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.范文22.Is Television a Blessing or a Curse? Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people’s lives.But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.注：it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为

As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating.The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room.注：1.As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that 2.“使„„”不用make，而用keep, allow, offer However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing.They argue that it has brought about many serious problems.The major one is its effects on young people.They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.Even worse than that, vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes, distort their viewpoints towards human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted.In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.范文5.Travelling People who like travelling have their reasons.They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning.They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have.注：geographical and historical 押尾韵，如：押头韵 clear & clean Those who dislike travelling have their reasons.They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy.For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.In practice, travelling does more good than harm.If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time.It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.注：1.in practice = I think 2.does more good than harm 好处比坏处多，其他表达方法：be superior to/ inferior to 比如：the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3.enable 使 范文1.Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker.Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely.A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.使句子具有表现力的手段：

1、用形容词修饰名词；

2、副词修饰动词、副词修饰形容词

On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners.To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework.Another required test will only add to their burden.Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck.In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm.Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society.Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.范文21.Should smoking be banned? Should smoking be banned? Answers to this question vary greatly.Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking.They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed.And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship.Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go.注：1.vary greatly 许多种2.be in favor of = agree/ be of the opinion that 3.get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed 使人神清气爽 4.Giving and being given 给与被给。主、被动关系在英文中用现在、过去分词表达。

But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health.They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second.And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack.In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents.Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property.注：1.They have heard the official reports that...官方报告表明..2.be more likely to 更有可能，更容易3.chance 可能

There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else.If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注：1.outweigh 比„„重要，同样的表达：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2.最后用两句反问句结尾，非常精妙。课后作业 Private Cars 写成4段的首段写法：

In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China.People's attitude toward private cars varies widely.② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car.Yet, people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.③ In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight.People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.写成3段的首段写法：

With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard, more and more people can own private cars.cars are entering ordinary families.the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)支持段的主题句：

Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.支持段的分论点：

① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.② 舒适 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.否定段的主题句：① However(Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects ④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought.They complain that......⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.否定段的分论点： ① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.③ 污染环境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.注意：所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的，就是比较superordinate的词；而下义词就是具体的东西，即subordinate的东西。第四段（总结段）的写法：

① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages.As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.选择题型变体逻辑结构（My View on Sth.）选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构：

Paragraph I:（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

Paragraph II:（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）；

（2）举例加以论证。

Paragraph III:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点）范文17.My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate.Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.注：1.consensus 相同意见

2.第一句话可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.3.while 轻微转折和对比，强转折用词but, however 4.master 主人 As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion.There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands.In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life.Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have.We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.注：1.第一句as far as与I agree重复，把后半句改为the latter opinion seems more reasonable。

2.architect 建筑师，archor 弓箭手

3.In fact 前后是转折关系，之前从正面阐述，之后从反面阐述 范文17.My View on Fate（续）

Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example.When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf.Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless.This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.注：1.本段开始举例

2.Let's take„„for example 中间是插入语，表示强调，举例不宜太长。

In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard.We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”

注：bear sth.in mind：把„„牢记在心 范文13.The Way to Success 第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

Paragraph 1:(1)概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）；(2)具体描述这个事物或者观点（或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific）。

Paragraph 2:(1)作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句；(2)支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）；(3)本段总结（可以省略）。

Paragraph 3:(1)总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。四级作文试题2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education.You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多多种途径解决。2.哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。How I Finance My College Education How I Finance My College Education 第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：

Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before.How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母;2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱 第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.第二段分写：

In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.第三段：我所赞同的方法（阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法）。Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.Therefore /So /Hence,.....使文章富有表现力的手段：

1、使用有难度的词汇；

2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；

3、使用被动语态；

4、使用倒装句；(not only...but also...；only...)

5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。绿化我们的城市 第一段：

近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。普通版

Recently, with the development of businesses and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities.We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees.But, it is important to realize to make our cities green.润色版

In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experienced a(n)rapid/ fast/ amazing/ marked/ fantastic development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined/ decreased/ reduced sharply/ dramatically.Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.注：区分industry 和 industrial 绿化我们的城市（续）第二段：

绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一，绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木，我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后，绿化城市能够带来大量木材，这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。普通版

There are many advantages in making cities greener.First, it makes our air clean.Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption.Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities.With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature.Finally, it will bring us a lot of timber.And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.润色版 What benefits can the program of making cities greener bring to us? First, the air will be cleaner.Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by producing a lot of oxygen.This will improve the quality of the urban environment.Second, our cities will look more beautiful.Just imagine the city which is full of trees and flowers.What an attractive garden it is!What’s more, by making cities greener, we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.绿化我们的城市（续）第三段：

绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力，人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献，还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。普通版

Making cities greener requires people’s efforts all over the country.And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business.润色版

Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness;it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers.(Making cities greener requires the whole nation’s efforts.And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.)句型变化 A.(1)We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.(2)There are many trees along the streets.(3)There is a clean river in the city.(4)There are many fishes in the river.(5)There are willow trees on the one side.(6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.(7)There are many flowers on them.B.(1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener.(2)Green trees line the streets.(3)A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound.(4)On the one side stand rows of willow trees.(5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.1.There be...1)a.There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.b.Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.2)a.There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.b.Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.2.If 1)a.If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.b.Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.2)a.If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.b.The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.3)a.If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.b.Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.3.In order to 1)a.In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.b.An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.2)a.In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.b.New efforts will bring...4.More and more 1)a.More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.b.People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.2)a.More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.b.The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.3)a.More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.b.Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.4)a.More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.b.There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.5)a.More and more trees have disappeared in the city.b.There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.社会热点话题

写作练习：Jobs for Graduates 1)大学生难找工作 2)原因很多 3)解决的办法 With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education（高等教育）.As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job.Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter.According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000.Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs? 第二段细节论证 分析原因：

1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to...3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in...mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors...Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand.Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country.Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as...国家制定法律法规 个人接受教育

III、图表题（table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph）图表题的写作逻辑结构：

Paragraph I:（1）概括描述图表：趋势描写；

（2）具体描述图表：必要数据支持（细节性）。Paragraph II:（1）提出自己理由和观点（本段主题句）；

（2）细节性分论点（主要是原因，用于支持自己的观点，至少两点）。

Paragraph III:（1）预测未来和提出解决方法；

（2）总结全文和表达作者自己观点 【标题】Changes in People’s Diet

Directions: Write a three-paragraph composition to: 1.State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.2.Give possible reasons for the changes.3.Draw your own conclusion.You should quote as few figures as possible.【短文】Changes in People’s Diet

In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role, while the proportion of some high-energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased.What has caused these changes? I think there are two reasons.First, people now have more money.The price of meat and milk is much higher than that of grain, so in the old days people couldn’t afford them.Now they have enough money to buy both meat and milk.Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the elements of their diet.They look for a well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.In short, there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years because of financial and health reasons, and there will be further changes in the future 【修改版】

As can be seen from the table, the past five years has witnessed dramatic changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the staple food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role in their diet, while the consumption of high quality food such as meat, milk and fruit has greatly increased.There are two factors leading to the change.For one thing, people now enjoy a higher standard of living.In the old days few families could afford meat and milk every day, which often meant a big chunk of the family income.But now people have enough money to taste a rich verity of foods.For another, people of today attach more attention to nutrition.They are not merely content to fill the stomach.They are seeking the most reasonable diet which will do good to their health.In a word, with people’s standard of living getting higher and higher, changes in their diet will be more obvious and greater.图表题的适用句型：

1.As we can see from the chart/ graph/ table/ diagram,...2.The chart/ graph shows/ displays that...3.As can be shown in the table..., 4.The figures/ statistics in the chart reflect/ show/ reveal that..., 5.It is clear/ apparent from the chart/ table that...V、谚语格言题逻辑结构

Paragraph I：（1）点明要阐释的谚语或名言（general）；

（2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两面的逻（specific）。

Paragraph II：（1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句；

（2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）；

Paragraph III：总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。Practice Makes Perfect Practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.It is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something perfectly without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.【改写为】An English proverb says/ One of the greatest men once remarked/ Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb: “Practice makes perfect”.It means that/ In other words, it is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.Practice Makes Perfect（续）Take the study of English for example.Only practice can enable us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar.And it is only through practice that we can become fluent in speaking and writing, there is no other way.Another good example is sports.Practice is the only way to become stronger and run faster.Besides, in team games practice is what improves our sense of cooperation and helps the team to win.【改写为】History/ Our society abounds with the examples of “Practice makes perfect”.......（正反两方面都举例子）On the other hand/ On the contrary, no practice will only lead us to failure.There is hardly/ scarcely a man who can achieve success without practice.All evidence points to/ justifies/ lends supports to the fact that practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.举例一般为：英语学习；体育锻炼

To sum up, there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice.【改写为】For us college students, the saying/ proverb has a profound and realistic significance: there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice 课后复习（self-study Program）

1、课堂讲解内容：体会用词艺术和丰富的句式

2、写作练习：2002年6月真题（Student Use of Computers）

3、记忆写作万能理由和基本表达

4、完型填空练习：完成Passage 1--Passage 3 做题步骤：

（1）通读全文，了解文章大意；

（2）初选答案（排除法、优选法）；

（3）寻找线索；

（4）回头补缺；

（5）核实答案。图表题：2002年6月考题

Topic: Student Use of Computers(at least 150 words)

1、上图所示为1990、1995、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；

2、请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；

3、你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。2002年6月的图表题作文： As is shown by the bar graph, the average number of hours a student in a certain university spends on the computer per week increased dramatically over the period from 1990 to 2000.In 1990, it was less than two hours.And in 1995, it hit/ reach four hours.And in 2000, the number soared to（飞速上升）nearly twenty hours, which is over ten times than that of 1990.注：soared to/ boom/ shoot up/ rocket/ jump 飞速上升 climb 上升很慢 shrink 下降，缩水

第一段还有一种写法：„„In 1990, the number was less than 2 hours, while the figure hit 4 hours（或者这样写：while in 1995,）as compared with that of 1990, it had almost doubled.And what impress us most is that the figure soared to..., which„

Obviously computers are becoming increasingly popular for males and for females.A multitude of factors could account for the rise.In the first place, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.Also, the rapid development of the internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We can easily contact friends in remote places through the internet.In the second place, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enable more students to purchase them.However, there still exist some problems, such as, poor quality, out-of-date designs and so on.And how to balance the time between using computers an studying is also a serious problem.Anyhow, we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.IV、书信题的写作方法：

（一）信封格式：

名字、信箱、地域范围由小到大，写在右下角（与我们相反）。

（二）信纸格式：

日期：背月份的缩写

称呼（后面的标点是逗号）:Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, 正文：空4个字节或者顶格写，段与段之间空行）

签名：sincerely yours 书信写作的五点要求：

1、开门见山说意图

2、咨询/ 建议1、2、3、3、不同内容可分段

4、感谢客气不可少

5、期待回信成老套

（三）开头段：

1、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你）Dear Sir/ Mr.Prometheus, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department./ I am a„ at your„

/ I am a „ at your college, enrolled in the„ course./ My name is„, I am„

2、问候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）Dear Prometheus, Hello / Hi.How are you? / I hope everything is fine./ How are things going with you? / How are you getting on in / getting along with„..?

3、解释写信的原因（1）致谢：

I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises./ I am greatly indebted to you for(the double)you have gone to on my behalf./ Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada./ I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for„ / I would like to thank you most sincerely for„（2）抱怨：

I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room./ I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with / at„ / I wish to make a complaint about„

/ I am writing to draw your attention to„./ I am afraid I have got a complaint about„.（3）致歉：

I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects./ I am writing to you because I am unable to„./ I an terribly sorry that„./ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to„.（4）询问：

I would like to obtain /request/seek/inquire about some information about„

/ I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor./ I would like some detailed information on/about„.（四）结尾段：

1、发出请求

（1）Please give this matter your immediate attention.（2）I would very much appreciate it if„„as soon as possible.（3）Please render me some valuable advice which is conductive to my final decision.2、提供帮助

（1）I hope these„„will be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information.（2）„„will be taking responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance, she/he will be pleased to help you

3、再次表示歉意或感激

（1）Thank you for your kind assistance.（2）Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.（3）I am sorry that I cannot„„, and trust that you will understand.（4）In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.（5）I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.（6）Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4、期盼回信：R.S.V.P.（1）I look forward to your prompt response.（2）Looking forward to a prompt reply,（3）I expect to hear from you very soon.（4）I hope to receive your reply shortly.（5）I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter.书信题范文：2001.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1． 表示欢迎

2.提出度假安排的建议 3．提醒应注意的事项

A Letter to a Schoolmate June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang Example I: Dear Xiao Wang, I am very happy to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you like swimming.A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner.We can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain about two miles away from here is beautiful and it is worth touring.We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful birds eye view of the whole village.Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.I’ll prepare everything for you.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours, Zhang Yin 公文信函: 2002.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President, Li Ming freshman 大一 sophomore 大二 junior 大三 senior 大四 Example II: Dear Mr.Prometheus, I am a student at your TOEFL class and I am writing to explain my absence from classes since March 11, 2001.On March 10, 2001, I was involved in a serious motor vehicle accident.I was transported to the hospital in an ambulance, where I was treated for a broken ankle, fractured collarbone, and 3 bruised ribs.My doctor advised complete bed rest for 6 weeks, and as a result, I have been unable to attend classes since March 11, 2001.I am concerned about keeping up with my studies, and have been doing the required readings, as assigned by you.My biggest concern is whether I will be able to participate the final class.Would you please advise me regarding my courses, specifically if there will be any special consideration given to me in light of my current situation? Thank you for your kind assistance.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely, Janet, Student No„ 题型总结：

对比观点选择题：4段 社会热点话题：3段 图表题： 书信题： 格言题：

描写叙述题： 完型填空 做题技巧

（一）Prep Tips for Cloze I．做题步骤：

1、通读全文，了解文章大意；文章两种模式：总分、对比；

2、初选答案（排除法、优选法）；

3、寻找线索；

4、回头补缺；

5、核实答案。II．出题重点： 1．词语的辨析：

1）同义词； 2）反义词； 3）形近词；

形近词举例：Test 2...or down frightening hillsides to towns __87__ in deep valleys.87.A)lying B)laying C)laid D)lied 注：说谎：lie lied lied lying 躺：lie lay lain lying 放置，下蛋：lay laid laid laying 2．逻辑关系：

1）列举/种属关系：

such„as;especially;in particular;specifically;for example;for instance;likely;2）因果关系： because(for);due to;owing to;thanks to;since;for;as;for the reason that;seeing that;3）并列/递进：

besides;likewise;moreover;also;too;what’s more;apart from;except;furthermore;not noly„but also„.;in addition;4）转折/让步关系：

however;but;never the less;nonetheless;whereas;still;though;although;anyhow;anyway;in any case;yet;5）对比关系：

by contrast;in contrast;by comparison;like;as„as;on the contrary;conversely;oppositely;„.than„.;逻辑关系举例1：Test 4 Sometimes homework is returned 76 brief written comments but without a grade.76.A)by B)in C)for D)with 逻辑关系举例2：Test 2 The United States is well-known for its network of major highways designed to help a driver get from one place to another in the shortest possible time.__71__ these wide modern roads are generally __72__ and well maintained, with __73__ sharp curves and many straight __74__, a direct route is not always the most _ 75__ one.71.A)Although B)Since C)Because D)Therefore 72.A)stable B)splendid C)smooth D)complicated 73.A)little B)few C)much D)many 74.A)selections B)separations C)series D)sections 75.A)terrible B)possible C)enjoyable D)profitable 3．固定结构的识别：提高阅读的速度、对于内容有合理的预期、有利于总体把握文章：

either„or„;neither„nor„;too„to„;so„that„;not„until„;hardly„when„;no sooner„than„;not only„but also„ 固定结构举例：Test 3 76 geography books focus on a small area 77 a town or city.Others deal with a state, a region, a nation.Or an 78 continent.Many geography books deal with the whole earth.Another 79 to divide the study of 80 is to distinguish between physical geography and cultural geography.The former focuses on the natural world;the 81 starts with human beings and 82 how human beings and their environment act 83 each other.but when geography is considered as a single subject, 84 branch can neglect the other.76.A)Some B)Many C)Most D)Few 77.A)outside B)except C)as D)like 81.A)second B)later C)next D)latter 2． 搭配：

例如：a.+ n.;ad.+ v.;take advantage of„.;make use of„.等； 3． 动词用法：

1）主谓一致； 2）时态； 3）语态； 4）非谓语动词； 4． 介词用法：

1）介词与名词； 2）介词与动词； 3）介词与形容词； 顶一下(62)68.9% 踩一下(28)31.1% 2010上海世博会相关英语作文大全范文 World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as-2010上海世博会相关英语作文大全范文 关于2010世博会英语作文

How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)

Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.The World Expo in 2010（世博会）英文作文

The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)

The World Expo in 2010

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.our government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.From Joozone.com.世博会英语作文

Right from its establishment in 1992, Shanghai International Exhibition Center has provided much needed new potential for the exhibition industry in Shanghai , becoming the birthplace of many industry definitive exhibitions in Shanghai and making acclaimed contributions to the development of Shanghai exhibition industry.With its quality exhibition facilities and excellent services,it has been the first international exhibition center in China.As a member of the exhibition industry, Shanghai International Exhibition Center is committed to perfecting its hall services to exceed customers expectations, establishing exhibition brands, enhancing our capabilities of customer service and making contributions to the development of the exhibition industry in Shanghai and China as well!作文地带提供，这些简单概括就是说 ：上海世博会对上海的新发展奠定了基础，发挥了作用。要是作为上海世博会的一名成员的话，应该在力所能及的范围内去帮助世博会拥有更多项超越顾客所期待的服务，让上海世博会越发展越好.What should we do Ladies and gentlemen the World Expo is coming.What should we do as a student of Shanghai.The first ,study English hard.Millions of foreigners will visit Shanghai during 2010 World Expo.So we must study the international language harder.The second,be polite,be civilized.Do it from little things.Like do not spit sputum in rude.When you do somethings ,remember ladies first.In all,be a kind and polite man.Welcome World Expo!A time to make friends.Thanks you very much.本文来自作文地带:http:// 世博会英语作文

World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as grand events for economic, scientific, technological and cultural exchanges, serving as an important platform for displaying historical experience, exchanging innovative ideas, demonstrating esprit de corps and looking to the future.世界博览会是人类文明的驿站。从1851年伦敦的“万国工业博览会”至今，世博会正日益成为全球经济、科技和文化领域的盛会，成为各国人民总结历史经验、交流聪明才智、体现合作精神、展望未来发展的重要舞台.作文地带(www.xiexiebang.com)有翻译的英语作文网

With a long civilization, China favors international exchange and loves world peace.China owes its successful bid for the World Exposition in 2010 to the support for and confidence of the international community in its reform and opening up.The Exposition will be the first registered World Exposition to be held in a developing country, which gives expression to the expectations the world’s people place on China’s future development.具有悠久东方文明的中国，是一个热爱国际交往、崇尚世界和平的国度。中国取得了2010年世博会的举办权，这将是注册类世界博览会首次在发展中国家举行，体现了国际社会对中国改革开放道路的支持和信任，也体现了世界人民对中国未来发展的瞩目和期盼。另外一篇世博会英语作文，本文是关于世博会自愿者的英语作文

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.First, I’ll say something about World Expo History.As we know, the very first World Expo, the Great Exhibition of 1851, took place in the Crystal Palace in London.UK.Ever since then, the goals of World Expos have been both high-minded as well as commercial.Visitors are able to explore the world outside of their everyday experience—outside cultures, new scientific advancements, and new inventions.World Expos have excited and inspired more and more people in the world.上海世博会范文：

On December3, 2002, the Bureau of International Expositions(or call it BIE)announced that Shanghai will host Expo2010.the BIE had received bids from five cities to host Expo2010.Among the 5 nice cities, the BIE chose Shanghai at last!It’s really an exciting news for not only Shanghainese, but also all of Chinese people.Here are some details about it.世博会logo（会徽）介绍：

Look at this profile carefully.The title is “The 2010 World Exposition ,Shanghai, China ”.this is the logo.And the theme is “better city., better life”.OK, let’s guess who is the image representative? Yeah, you’re right, Yao Ming!

Shanghai Expo is the first comprehensive World Expo held in a developing country.And it is also the first one that takes “the city” as its theme, hoping that it can push forward the city development and help bring about a better urban living environment, just like the theme: better city, better life.I think, as a student in Shanghai, we should learn to be a gentle person and keep good manners from now on.And try to practice English more in order to communicate with foreigners fluently in the near future.Because, we’re a part of Shanghai!世博会相关的词组：

中国上海2010年世博会：Eopo 2010 Shanghai China 世博会会徽: the Expo emblem 世博会会徽看起来像三个人手挽着手。The Expo emblem looks like three people holding hands.世博会将持续半年。The Expo will last six months.世博会的主题: the theme of Expo 城市，让生活更美好。Better city, better life.世博园区: the Expo Site 沿黄浦江两岸：along both sides of the Huangpu River 主题馆: the theme pavilions 中国馆：China's pavilion 东方之冠：The Crown of the East 中国成功申办2010年世博会英语作文

On December, 2002, China won the bid to hosting Expo 2010.This is the first General Exhibition hosted by a developing country;However, China has a long-standing relationship with World Expo.Chinese people have participated in World Expo since its first presence.After wining its liberation, the People’s Republic of China has taken part in 12 world expositions.Chinese exhibits won many prizes in previous world expositions.The Yisheng Wine was awarded with the gold medal at Expo 1906 Milan Italy;many others like the embroidery of the Portrait of Jesus, Gold Prize Brandy , and Mao-Tai Chiew were among the highlights at the Panama-Pacific International Exposition—San Francisco 1915.

第四篇：网购的利与弊

对于社会热点问题---网上购物的看法

系别：物理与电子信息科学系

年级：09级

班级：电信二班

姓名：朱洪晶

学号：09120234

日期：2011-5-17

摘要：最新发布的报告显示2009年全国网上购物规模达到2670亿元，网上购物人数达到1.3亿。该报告预测，2010年我国网上购物市场规模将达到4900亿元。由此可见，网上购物已经风靡全球。

1999年，被誉为“草根创业之父”的马云创办阿里巴巴（淘宝是阿里巴巴集团旗下的），刮起“电子商务”旋风，中国最早的网络购物开始出现。北京正望咨询有限公司最新发布的《中国网上购物消费者调查报告2010》显示，2009我国网上购物继续高速发展，2009年全国网上购物规模达到2670亿元，网上购物人数达到1.3亿。而上海市和北京市的网上购物金额双双突破200亿元，分别为285亿元和229亿元。这两个城市是我国网上购物排名前两位的城市。另外，该报告预测，2010年我国网上购物市场规模将达到4900亿元。而中国电子商务研究中心8月初公布的数据显示，中国网上购物用户突破

1.3亿到今年末，网上购物交易额将达4300亿元。今年上半年，全国社会消费品零售总额同比增长18.2%，而同期的网上支付交易额同比增长71.1%。这一数据对比表明，网上购物市场的增长速度明显高于其他传统商业模式。

上面的两组报告显示：网上购物已经成为一种时尚。随着天气逐渐变冷，越来越多的白领也更倾向在网上购物。足不出户，轻松又方便。可同时也给我们带来了许多困扰，今天就谈谈大家对网上购物的一些观点和看法。

网上购物的利：

一、价格更低：在传统的营销模式中，一件商品要走到消费者手中。要经过层层代理商的盘剥。大致有厂家--区域代理--总代理--二级代理--商户-消费者，,价格往往是原有价值的几倍甚至十几倍（尤其是电子类产品）。而在网上购物上成本十分低廉，场地费，水电费，员工工资，产品的成本下降了，价格也自然就下降了，而且通过全国性的大物流公司，货物往往只须几天就到您手中，而价格也是传统价格的一半。

二、购物更方便：传统购物方式是在门市或大超市里.有营业时间的限制,要消费者亲自前去购物,网上购物方式要灵活的多，客户可以24小时随时购卖你所要的商品，网络购物没有地域性，不需要出门只需要客户在家里打开网站，点击鼠标就可以轻松购物，而且卖家负责送货上门，在很短的时间内就可以完成。并且可以获得较大量的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。而传统的购物形式需要奔波与多家商店之间，给客户增加了大量的时间消耗与车马劳顿的辛苦。

三、节省时间：一边听着轻快的音乐一边享受网上购物的乐趣。而且，还可以把你想要送给朋友的礼物，直接从网上订购后，就能送到你朋友家里。还可以货比N家。给你一整天的时间，你也顶多只能逛十几家商场，可是在网上，你可以在一个小时内搜索上百家店铺。找到款式相同，而又最便宜的那家

四、交流：比如某网站的BBS里，每天都有人秀自己的败家成果，及败家经验。这个我觉得也蛮重要的，因为你有时候不知道什么适合自己，自己到底想买什么类型的东东，或是什么品牌的比较信得过。就可以去BBS里发贴询问，不一会儿就会有很多热心的网友跟贴回复你，很窝心的感觉哟~

五、无压力：对于商家来说，其次，由于网上销售没有库存压力、经营成本低、经营规模不受场地限制等，在将来会有更多的企业选择网上销售，通过互联网对市场信息的及时反馈适时调整经营战略，以此提高企业的经济效益和参与国际竞

争的能力。再次，对于整个市场经济来说，这种新型的购物模式可在更大的范围内、更多的层面上以更高的效率实现资源配置。

综上可以看出，网上购物突破了传统商务的障碍，无论对消费者、企业还是市场都有着巨大的吸引力和影响力，在新经济时期无疑是达到“多赢”效果的理想模式。

但是事情都有双面性，下面是大家对网上购物的不同看法。

网上购物的弊：

一、商品信息描述不清。由于购买者对网络上的商品的了解只能通过图片和文

字描述来完成，而有些商品的描述语言模棱两可，容易使人对商品的认识产生歧异。当购买者根据自己的理解完成网络购物交易，拿到商品后，会投诉商品与自己订购的不一致。与传统购物相比，网络购物退换商品是一件相对麻烦和有成本风险的事情。

二、收货太慢。尽管现在EMS的速度已经比以前的邮寄快了很多，毕竟购买者还是要等上几天，而且有态度极差的快递公司，送一个快递需要大半个月的时间。耽误买者的宝贵时间。

三、网上购物强迫症（给消费者造成的问题）：除了吃饭睡觉，几乎都守在电脑旁边，腰酸腿疼;没事就去网络店铺“闲逛”，每买一样东西都要不停地比较，眼睛酸胀;几乎每天都要买点东西，不然就会觉得手痒心痒，存款数额则直线下降，继“车奴”“房奴”之后，把大量的时间、金钱、精力贡献给网络购物的“网上购物奴隶”又产生了。这一现象在引起人们注意的同时也引起了争议：谁让我们成为网上购物的“奴隶”?

四、售后服务。有的店主只是在买的时候态度很好，如果东西出现质量问题，售后服务是很难保证的。假设网上老板与现实老板的售后服务一样好，毕竟通过网上购得的商品更换与维修要不方便一些，要寄来寄去。

五、付款安全问题。虽然现在网上银行很方便，但是从技术角度来说，目前部分网银仍采用静态密码的方式，很容易被“木马”等病毒跟踪到，存在风险。最

近，银行纷纷关注网上购物的安全性问题，而沸沸扬扬的账户被盗用事件中，也有不少用户深受其害。

六、银行方面的问题。有关负责人表示，网银出现的问题主要来自三方面。一是假网站，在用户输入银行账号和密码时被对方套牢，一些网站甚至要求输入身份证号码，不仅取得银行账号，更获取了个人信息；二是在一些小网站注册信息后被黑客攻破，资料被黑客掌握；第三种情况主要是在平时的生活中泄露了自己的账户和密码。

据了解，目前几大银行纷纷推出软件、硬件或者与手机捆绑的形式来保障客户的资金安全。银行方面认为，硬件是提供安全的保障。但这笔不菲的费用应该由谁来承担，是银行提供免费午餐还是消费者付费“吃饭”？这都是一问题。总结

未来五年之内，中国网上购物市场的用户数量将会进一步增长，各项环境的改善，使网络购物的优势进一步凸显，交易额也将有较大的提高，特别是二三线城市，甚至中西部区域和农村，将成为掀动网络购物下一浪的重镇，随着中国网上购物市场的日渐安全、规范，网民开始享受网络带来的物质丰富性。

网上购物是把双刃剑，权衡好其中的利弊，才能让我们更加理性，愉快的消费。对于网络购物存在的弊端，消费者以通过自己在网上多次购物总结出些心得，让自己更加享受网上购物得乐趣。

第五篇：网购的利与弊论文

学期论文：浅谈网购的利与弊

【内容摘要】：本课题着重对网络购物进行了研究调查，了解目前我国网络购物的现状及出现的一系列问题，分析其问题出现的原因，并对其出现的问题提出一些具有可行性的对策，从而更加完善网络购物。并且，本课题还对当前网络购物的利与弊进行了详细分析，与传统的上街购物也进行了比较，希望能加深广大消费者对网络购物的认识，从而根据自己的实际情况而选择自己所中意的购物方式，使得消费者能更好地享受购物的乐趣。【关键词】：网络购物

优势

弊端

在信息技术飞速发展的今天，互联网在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的作用，通过网络，我们可以获取更多的知识，结识更多的朋友。当然，随着社会的发展，越来越多的人追随着网络购物的旋风，不论是腰缠万贯的大富翁、时尚的白领丽人、普通的工薪阶层还是在校的学生，都或多或少的有过网上购物的经历。如今，网络购物已经成为一种时尚，那么，努力改善当前的网络购物环境，让消费者拥有一个良好的、安全的、放心的购物环境便显得尤为重要。

一、当前网上购物的现状调查

（一）网上购物备受青年人青睐

通过问卷调查，在本人所在的常德地区有75%的网上购物消费者处于18—38的年龄阶段，而18岁以下的只占12%。通过对调查数据的分析，不难看出，性别不同对网络购物的选择也有明显区别，其中，女性消费者所占的比例明显高于男性消费者。

（二）大学生是网上购物的主要人群

改革开放以来，大学生的数量日益增多，而作为完完全全的消费者，消费者在我国的消费市场中占据着一定的比例，随着科学技术的发展和电脑的普及，以及网络购物的盛行，越来越多的大学生愈来愈倾向于网上购物。调查结果显示，大学生网上购物的比例明显高于其它职业，占了总比例的43%，是网络购物消费者的主力军。

（三）小额消费成为网络购物的主导趋势

由于网上购物的种类繁多，商品无论大小，应有尽有，而现阶段，我国的网络购物消费者大多以购买生活用品为主。根据调查，我了解到，目前，大多数的网络购物爱好者在网上购买的大多是以衣服、鞋子、化妆品、书籍以及电子产品等小型商品为主。其中，服饰、鞋子占了商品消费的34%,相比之下，其它的商品类型购买的比例则相对较低，所以，目前，网络购物平均消费的金额也相对较少，大多在50—200之间，由此可以发现，人们当前对网络购物的消费心理还是比较健康的。

（四）关于网上购物方面的法律还不完善

纵观我国现有的法律规定，目前，我国对网上购物的消费者的权益保护方面的法律仍不完善，只在《民法通则》、《合同法》、以及《消费者权益保护法》中有所提及，但大多都内容散乱，可操作性不强，远不能达到保护消费者的目的。

二、网上购物的利弊分析

（一）优势分析

当前，网络购物作为一种新兴的商业模式，与传统的购物模式有着很大的区别。近年来，网络的快速发展，使得人们对网络的需求更多，为网络购物提供了发展的环境和空间。

1.网络商店中的商品种类多，没有营业面积的限制，可以包含国内外的各种商品，充分体现了网络无地域的优势。在传统商店中，无论其店铺空间有多大，它所能容纳的商品量都是有限的，而对于网络商店来说，网络是商品的展示平台，是一种虚拟的空间，无论是国内的还是国外的、各种各样的商品都能通过网络这一平台进行展示，大大丰富了商品的种类。

2.网络购物没有任何的时间限制，作为网络商店，它可以24小时对客户开放，不论何时，只要用户在需要的时候登陆相应网站，就可以挑选自己所需要的商品，而在传统商店中，消费者大多都要受到时间的限制。3.网络购物成本较小，对于网络商品购买者，他们不论是挑选还是对比各家的商品，只需要登陆不同的网站，便可以在很短的时间内完成，而且可直接由商家负责送达，比消费者亲自前去购物的方式要灵活、方便得多。消费者既免去了传统购物中的舟车劳顿，也节省了大量的时间和费用，对于这点，传统购物是无法达到的。4.网络购物的商品价格相对较低，网上的商品与传统的商场中的商品相比，相对比较便宜。因为，通过网络，可以直接省去很多传统商场无法省去的相关费用，像店面租金、水电费、员工工资等固定费用。相比之下，商品的附加费用便会低很多，商品的价格也就低了。

5.对于经营者来说，网店库存小，资金积压小，经营成本较低。网店中很多商品一般都是在客户下订单后，通过消费者下订单和配送商品的时间差，进行商品调配，并不需要很多库存，从而减少了资金的积压，而传统商店则需要提前准备足够多的商品，在顾客选购商品的同时提供商品，经营的成本较高。

（二）弊端分析

事物都是具有两面性的，我们在看到网上购物的优点的同时，更要认清它在现阶段所存在的问题，以便尽早地找到解决方案，以促进网上购物的良性发展。

1.消费者知情权难以保证，在消费中，知情权是消费者享有的一项基本权利也是一项重要权利。传统购物时能直接看到、摸到真实立体的商品，还可直接向售票员进行详细咨询。然而，在上网购物时，有些商品的信息描述不清，而消费者获取信息的范围是有限的，对网络上的商品的了解只能通过图片和文字的描述来完成，只能获取商品的部分信息，因此，网络购物的消费者对商品信息的了解都是缺失的、不全面的。

2.交货延迟，收货太慢，网络购物与传统购物方式中消费者可以随买随拿的性质不同，网购在购买商品后，消费者还需要等几天才能将货物寄到消费者手中，现在，付款后不能按期收到货物的事情屡见不鲜，付款后收不到货物的情况也时有发生。

3．退货困难，网上购物时，如果所收到的货物不符合自己的意愿，或有质量问题要退货时，想要退掉并不是一件容易的事，网店经营者往往会找各种理由拒绝退货，就算商家答应退货，消费者还需要另付邮寄的相关费用，所以，消费者往往选择将货物丢弃在家或扔掉。4．售后服务的质量难以保证，在网络购物中，有的店主只是在消费者买的时候态度很好，但是，如果出现质量问题，售后服务的质量是难以保证的，他们往往只是表面应付，许多的问题根本得不到实质性的解决。并且，就算网上老板与现实老板的售后服务差不多，但网上购物的商品如果需要维修或退换，还需要寄来寄去，相比亲自退换要麻烦许多。

5、付款的安全难以保证，虽然现在的网上银行很方便，但从技术角度来说，目前大部分网银仍采用静态密码的方式，很容易被“木马”等病毒跟踪到，消费者信用账号、密码被篡改、被盗也是常有的事，对消费者的账户安全存在较大的风险。

三、促进网络购物发展的建议

（一）确保消费者知情权，最大限度的实现对有关商品或服务的重要 信息放在介绍该商品或服务的主页上，同时对于网页上显示的有关商 品的图片信息或文字描述必须真实，如果不能做到一致的应明确说 明。

（二）保护消费者隐私权，作为经营者，首先，应制定详细到位的消 费者营私保护政策，加大技术投入，保护消费者的隐私。其次，在网 站上明确向消费者提示关于其个人资料的收集方式以及使用目的，并 且要在获得消费者同意的情形下才能使用他们的个人资料，未经消费 者授权，不得将其信息提供给带三人。

（三）加强信用保障和支付安全，建立统一的网站支付清算体系，加 快我国网上支付工具的开发与应用，严厉打击网上金融犯罪，维护网 上支付安全，维护消费者的权益。另外，加强网站管理，树立良好的 品牌形象，提高企业自身的信誉度。

（四）作为消费者，在网络购物时除了选择知名度高、信誉好、售后 服务比较规范的网站外，还应当了解企业的商业信誉、经营规模，对 比较生疏、冷僻的网站要有充分的防范措施。在网上购买商品后，应 尽量采取货到付款的方式，在商品送到后，要认真检查该商品是否符 合自己的要求、是否有质量问题，当自己的权益受到侵害后，要及时 投诉，如果对方涉嫌诈骗，要及时报案，保护自己的合法权益。

四、结束语

网上购物在当今时代的发达资本主义国家已经显示出了较强的发 展趋势，在推动国家经济增长方面可以说是一支崭新的力量，相比之 下，目前，在我国，网上购物还是一个新生的事物。近年来，随着网 络的发展，越来越多的人开始接受网上购物。然而，我国拥有较大的 消费市场，网络购物在我国拥有较大的发展前景。但是，和任何事物 一样，网上购物也是把双刃剑，权衡好其中的利弊，才能让我们更加 理性、愉快的消费，尽可能的规避其弊端，从而更好地享受网上购物 的乐趣。参考文献

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