第一篇：考研小作文高分 道歉信
考研小作文高分模板——道歉信 Dear Sir or Madam 亲爱的先生或者女士 , Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party tomorrow and I have been longing for giving my sincere wishes to you on that special day非常感谢你邀请我参加你明天的生日派对。我一直都渴望能在那个特殊的日子为你献上我诚挚的祝福.(第一段一定得简单说明下你做了什么对不
起主人公的事情，即为什么道歉，顺带为其损失表达下遗憾。到 了第二段，就是吹牛道歉，并送上祝福)However , I am terribly sorry that I cannot be there because of a matter of some urgency.然而，非常抱歉，由于有急事我无法到场。The afternoon I got a call from my parents telling me that my sister has been hospitalized 今天下午，我父母打电话告诉我，我妹妹生病了.(妹妹生病了，自行车
坏了，作业没带，路上遇见老奶奶，各种理由，各种用)Both of my parents are busy at work 我父母工作都很忙.So I have to go home in a harry to take care of her所以我不得不尽快回家照顾我妹妹.I am sure you can understand this我相信你会理解的.I would like to say sorry again and wish you a happy birthday as well as a successful party我想再次表达我的歉意，以及祝你生日快乐，生日party一切顺利.Yours sincerely , Li Ming 补充：可以加上第三段内容，如下：
Please accept my heartfelt apology again.请再次接受我真诚的道歉 I hope to obtain your forgiveness for my carelessness.对于我的粗心，我希望能够获得你的谅解
PS : 根据楼主考研的经验，小作文对于格式的要求并不是那么死 板，越灵活越好，比如 15 年英二考了一个 notice，70%的考生都没注
意，开头仍然是写 dear student，但依据最后的分数来看，大家并没有
质的区别，只要意思大体正确，单词不拼错，阅卷老师不会为难你，小作文不需要花太多时间。
第二篇：考研小作文高分 感谢信
感谢信
Dear Mr.and Mrs Brown ,亲爱的布朗先生和布朗太太
Thanks so much for 非常感谢…….（这边写出来你所用像他们所致谢的内容，如： taking care of me during my study in London在我于伦敦学习期间，照顾我）.I would avail myself of this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance when in need.谨借此机会感谢您在我需要时，给予我的及时帮助和支持（随便写一个与你所要感谢的人相关的事情，如夸他的房子，车子，手表，如 Your house is really spectacular你的房子真的很壮观），and I enjoyed it so much 我非常喜欢它.What’s more而且 , Mrs.Brown ,your cooking is out of the world and beyond my words.布朗太太，你的厨艺举世无双，无法用言语来形容
（关于这个 cooking，根据题目具体环境，可以改成 environment环境、songs歌曲、advice建议、help帮助 等等，小作文思维要扩散点，结合语境）.You made me feel at ease during my studies in London当我再伦敦学习期间，你让我感到安心.I really cherish the memories of those days with you 真的很怀念和你在一起的那些日子.（依据题目内容，可以写希望和你尽快见面，希望以后多多帮忙，希望以后多多联系等等诸如此类的话，脑袋一定要转起来）
It could be great getting together with you once again能和你再次相聚就好了.I sincerely hope you would come to china and I wish be your guide我真诚地希望你能来中国，我希望能给你当向导.Best wishes to you!向你致以最美好的祝愿
Yours sincerely ，Li Ming PS : 根据楼主考研的经验，小作文对于格式的要求并不是那么死 板，越灵活越好，比如 15 年英二考了一个 notice，70%的考生都没注意，开头仍然是写 dear student，但依据最后的分数来看，大家并没有质的区别，只要意思大体正确，单词不拼错，阅卷老师不会为难你，小作文不需要花太多时间。
第三篇：考研英语小作文道歉信
to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 8分
同学你好，作文写的很好，但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事，因此要用过去时。
考研英语小作文批改例文：道歉信 8分
同学你好，你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的主将从现。
第一篇
dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 8-10分
第二篇
dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday afternoon.the reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the meeting.however, considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by e-mail.i will check the record and send my feedback to you.once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday afternoon.the reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the meeting.however, considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could(删除)send me a brief record of the project progress by e-mail.i will check(用词不当)the record and send my feedback to you.once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming篇三：考研英语写作小作文之道歉信
考研英语写作小作文之道歉信
在考研英语的part a 小作文部分，书信作为考查的重点所在，种类繁多。在前面我们曾就以题目为例，详细地解析过前五种书信：即建议信、投诉信、咨询信、感谢信和祝贺信的写作方法及其注意事项。今天中公考研英语教研组的张玉环老师就对考研英语小作文中的第六类书信——道歉信——进行深入的分析。
道歉信，英文中称为 letter of apology，是由于某事向某人表示歉意的信件，通常是由于自己的过错或不能履行承诺等而做出的道歉。写作时，一定要态度诚恳，提供合理的理由，并需在解释完原因后，尽可能提供一个合适的补救办法。道歉信曾在2008年英语(一)的小作文中考查过。作为英文应用书信的一种，道歉信非常符合考研英语的考查要求，既可考查考生的英语书面表达能力，尤其是应用文的英语表达能力，又可考查到考生对内容要点的归纳、概括、表述能力。
一般来说，在考研英语中，道歉信主体部分的写作可按照三个步骤进行，即“三步走”策略。接下来就以题目为例，具体解析一下这个策略。例题：
directions：
1)make an apology, and 2)suggest a solution.you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the address.题目要求向你在加拿大时的房东bob写一封信，为自己未能在回国之前归还音乐cd而向他道歉，并提出解决方案。根据上面所提的道歉信写作“三步走”策略，具体操作如下： 首段：i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.在“三步走”策略中，第一步就是要表明写信目的并且简述事由。正如上面的首段，只有一句话，首先非常清晰明了地说明写信目的。既然这是一封道歉信，那么写信的目的自然就是向收信人表示道歉，而这也正是题目所给出的写作要求之一。此外，在这句话中，表明写信目的之后还简要陈述了道歉的事由，使书信的交流功能更加准确和有效，这也是写信的常识问题。对于以上两点内容，简单来说，可用一句话表达，即i am writing this letter to express my apology to you for my failing to?? 在道歉信中，本段的主要内容就是首先就上面所道歉之事进行详细的陈述，包括事情是如何发生的以及自己为什么会犯这个错误而给对方造成不便。告知对方原因之后，接下来要做的事情就是为自己犯下的错误买单，也就是要为自己给对方造成的不便或损失进行补偿、提出解决方案。做补偿时务必要记住的是态度一定要诚恳、真挚，所以补偿方案需要实虚结
合：既要有具体的、实实在在的解决方法，还要为可能造成的损失做出将会弥补的承诺，以在最大限度上获得对方的原谅。
尾段：once again, i feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.please accept my apologies.本段中第一句话通过once again+i feel so sorry forany inconvenience caused的句型，再次表达了自己对收信人的道歉之意。之后，第二句话用一句非常简单的please accept my apologies表达了自己的期待，期待收信人接受道歉，进而原谅自己。
在考研英语的书信表达中，类似的首段或尾段的套用句式比较丰富，大家需要在复习过程中进行有意的积累，并在写作中加以运用： 1.i would like to give you my apology for...2.i must apologize to you for? 3.i express my regret at being unable to do...4.please accept my sincere apology for...5.i hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.6.i sincerely hope you can understand that i offended you unintentionally.7.we assure you that such a matter will never happen again.8.i do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness.因此，该题的完整范文如下： dear bob, i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.li ming篇四：考研英语小作文之道歉信
海文名师：考研英语小作文冲刺急训之道歉信 海文名师：考研英语小作文冲刺急训之道歉信
万学海文
距离最后的考试只有近两个月的时间，最后的冲刺序幕正式拉开。英语复习到这个阶段，最重要的就是作文。要想在最后的考试成绩中脱颖而出，现阶段就必须要把精力放在分值占在30分的写作上。
考研英语中大作文的要求是内容切题、表达清楚、文字连贯、句式多变和语言规范。小作文考察点在信息点的覆盖、语言的准确性、文章组织的连贯性上。
其中小作文占10分，分为求职信、祝贺信、道歉信、询问信、推荐信、感谢信、邀请信、辞职信等等二十多种应用文。每个类别都有相对固定的语言模式，都有固定词语要求。道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。道歉信通常包括三部分内容：
1、表示歉意，道歉的原由;
2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施;
3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。
写作“三步曲”：
表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。注意：
理由要尽量合理，违反生活常识将导致扣分;尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加顺畅。范文解析： directions: you were unable to attend mr.smith’s examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use “wang hua” instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua ◆常用句式：
1、i am writing to apologize for ? /i am writing to say sorry for 我写这封信是因??向你致歉。
2、i would like to give you my apology for? 对于??我向你道歉。
3、please accept my sincere apology for? 关于??请接受我真诚的道歉。
4、i am indeed very sorry for what i said/did, but believe i had no intention to? 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要??
5、please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.请原谅我说话欠妥。
6、i feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。
7、please accept my apologies for my oversight.请原谅我的疏忽。
8、please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再次表示歉意。
9、i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。
10、once again, i’m sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。篇五：2016考研复习：考研英语道歉信万能写作模板
更多精彩，复制打开链接：/kaoyan 2016考研复习：考研英语道歉信万能写作模板
相信各位2016考研的同学，大部分都会将作文放到最后的冲刺阶段来复习。说到考研英语作文的复习，当然少不了背诵模板，模板背的多，在考场上也能发挥不小的作用。所以，不管你的英语写作能力怎么样，多背一些模板和佳句总是有好处的。下面，文都网校小编给大家分享一些2016考研英语小作文万能写作模板：
道歉信 道歉信是由于自己的疏忽失误而向对方表达歉意并出于诚意写出具体弥补办法。第一段首先亮出写作目的并简单阐述该物品的状态：i am writing to make an apology to you for+句子(表明事件因由)。
第二段列出出错的原因及具体补救办法：to make up my fault,......i will......as a token of my apology i sincerely apologize for my careless mistake as well as for any inconvenience thus caused to you.第三段再一次表达歉意：once again, i am sorry for my carelessness.looking forward to your reply.应用文中的这三类投诉信、建议信、道歉信，每一类都有其写作的范式和具体的内容要求，并且语言要求简单准确，所以这需要大家清楚每一类文章的一些常用语句，在平常积累背诵，在考场上信手拈来。要想在考研英语作文上获得高分，也不能完全依靠模板，平时还是要多多练习一下写作，背诵的一些模板、写作佳句等，要学会运用才算是真正掌握，才能在2016考研英语的考场上用得恰到好处。
第四篇：考研英语小作文道歉信
篇一：考研英语小作文之道歉信
海文名师：考研英语小作文冲刺急训之道歉信海文名师：考研英语小作文冲刺急训之道歉信 万学海文
距离最后的考试只有近两个月的时间，最后的冲刺序幕正式拉开。英语复习到这个阶段，最重要的就是作文。要想在最后的考试成绩中脱颖而出，现阶段就必须要把精力放在分值占在30分的写作上。
考研英语中大作文的要求是内容切题、表达清楚、文字连贯、句式多变和语言规范。小作文考察点在信息点的覆盖、语言的准确性、文章组织的连贯性上。
其中小作文占10分，分为求职信、祝贺信、道歉信、询问信、推荐信、感谢信、邀请信、辞职信等等二十多种应用文。每个类别都有相对固定的语言模式，都有固定词语要求。道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。道歉信通常包括三部分内容：
1、表示歉意，道歉的原由;
2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施;
3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。写作“三步曲”：
表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。注意： 理由要尽量合理，违反生活常识将导致扣分;尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加顺畅。范文解析：
directions: you were unable to attend mr.smith’s examination on international business english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.write the letter with no less than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use “wang hua” instead.do not write the address.dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.sincerely yours, wang hua ◆常用句式：
1、i am writing to apologize for ? /i am writing to say sorry for我写这封信是因??向你致歉。
2、i would like to give you my apology for? 对于??我向你道歉。
3、please accept my sincere apology for? 关于??请接受我真诚的道歉。
4、i am indeed very sorry for what i said/did, but believe i had nointention to? 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要??
5、please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.请原谅我说话欠妥。
6、i feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。
7、please accept my apologies for my oversight.请原谅我的疏忽。
8、please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再次表示歉意。
9、i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。
10、once again, i’m sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。篇二：考研英语写作小作文之道歉信 考研英语写作小作文之道歉信
在考研英语的part a 小作文部分，书信作为考查的重点所在，种类繁多。在前面我们曾就以题目为例，详细地解析过前五种书信：即建议信、投诉信、咨询信、感谢信和祝贺信的写作方法及其注意事项。今天中公考研英语教研组的张玉环老师就对考研英语小作文中的第六类书信——道歉信——进行深入的分析。
道歉信，英文中称为 letter of apology，是由于某事向某人表示歉意的信件，通常是由于自己的过错或不能履行承诺等而做出的道歉。写作时，一定要态度诚恳，提供合理的理由，并需在解释完原因后，尽可能提供一个合适的补救办法。道歉信曾在2008年英语(一)的小作文中考查过。作为英文应用书信的一种，道歉信非常符合考研英语的考查要求，既可考查考生的英语书面表达能力，尤其是应用文的英语表达能力，又可考查到考生对内容要点的归纳、概括、表述能力。一般来说，在考研英语中，道歉信主体部分的写作可按照三个步骤进行，即“三步走”策略。接下来就以题目为例，具体解析一下这个策略。例题：
directions：
1)make an apology, and 2)suggest a solution.you should write about 100 words on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the address.题目要求向你在加拿大时的房东bob写一封信，为自己未能在回国之前归还音乐cd而向他道歉，并提出解决方案。根据上面所提的道歉信写作“三步走”策略，具体操作如下：首段：i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.在“三步走”策略中，第一步就是要表明写信目的并且简述事由。正如上面的首段，只有一句话，首先非常清晰明了地说明写信目的。既然这是一封道歉信，那么写信的目的自然就是向收信人表示道歉，而这也正是题目所给出的写作要求之一。此外，在这句话中，表明写信目的之后还简要陈述了道歉的事由，使书信的交流功能更加准确和有效，这也是写信的常识问题。对于以上两点内容，简单来说，可用一句话表达，即i am writing this letter to express my apology to you for my failing to?? 在道歉信中，本段的主要内容就是首先就上面所道歉之事进行详细的陈述，包括事情是如何发生的以及自己为什么会犯这个错误而给对方造成不便。告知对方原因之后，接下来要做的事情就是为自己犯下的错误买单，也就是要为自己给对方造成的不便或损失进行补偿、提出解决方案。做补偿时务必要记住的是态度一定要诚恳、真挚，所以补偿方案需要实虚结合：既要有具体的、实实在在的解决方法，还要为可能造成的损失做出将会弥补的承诺，以在最大限度上获得对方的原谅。尾段：once again, i feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused.please accept my apologies.本段中第一句话通过once again+i feel so sorry forany inconvenience caused的句型，再次表达了自己对收信人的道歉之意。之后，第二句话用一句非常简单的please accept my apologies表达了自己的期待，期待收信人接受道歉，进而原谅自己。
在考研英语的书信表达中，类似的首段或尾段的套用句式比较丰富，大家需要在复习过程中进行有意的积累，并在写作中加以运用：
1.i would like to give you my apology for...2.i must apologize to you for? 3.i express my regret at being unable to do...4.please accept my sincere apology for...5.i hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.6.i sincerely hope you can understand that i offended you unintentionally.7.we assure you that such a matter will never happen again.8.i do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness.因此，该题的完整范文如下： dear bob, i am writing to express my apology to you for my failing to return your music cd before i came back.li ming篇三：考研英语小作文批改例文：道歉信
考研英语小作文批改例文：道歉信 8分
同学你好，你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的主将从现。第一篇
dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming dear prof.wong, to make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next friday? if so, i promise i will finish the task and send my report to you via email.i do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.sincerely yours, liming 8-10分 第二篇
dear david, i am truly sorry that i cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next tuesday afternoon.the reason is that i am going to take a business to shanghai by plane that day, so i will be unavailable for the meeting.however, considering the importance of the meeting, i will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by e-mail.i will check the record and send my feedback to you.once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming dear david, once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li ming
第五篇：考研英语高分作文经典背诵之道歉信
考研英语高分作文经典背诵之道歉信
写作“三步走”：
表示歉意—>说明具体原因、提出补救办法—>再次致歉、希望得到理解 范文：
Dear Anne,Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.I do long for a pleasant chat with you.Please allow me to say sorry again.闪光词汇及词组：
drop sb.a line: 给某人打一个电话
preferable: adj.更好的，更可取的long for sth: 渴望
万能句型：
Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot„
I feel terribly sorry for missing the change of„
Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterwards?
If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a call about your preferable date.Please allow me to say sorry again.范文：
Dear Prof.Patent,I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago.For the past few days I have been in hospital with a continuous fever, which has thus prevented me from any academic activity.I hereby submit the doctor’s note.I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better.Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours faithfully,Li Ming
闪光词汇及词组：
assign: v.分配，指派
fall upon sb: 降临到某人身上
continuous: adj.持续的prevent sb from sth/doing sth: 使某人不能做某事
hereby: adv.因此，据此
submit: v.提交，递交
obliged: adj.感激的grant: v.同意，准予
万能句型：
I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete„due to„ I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task.Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
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