第一篇：四级作文模版
图表分析型模板
（1）As is clearly shown in the table/figure/graph/chart,_______between____and______.(2)Especially,______.(3)There are three reasons for_____.(4)To begin with,_______.(5)In addition/Moreover,_______.(6)For example,________.(7)Last but not least_______.(8)In short,_________.(9)As far as I am concerned/For my part/As for me,_________.(10)On the hand,_______.(11)On the other hand,______.(12)In brief,__________.填充内容：（1）图表总体描述+年代+年代（2）指出突出的数据变化（3）具体表示急剧上升，下降或特殊现象的词（4）叙述第一个原因（5）叙述第二个原因（6）具体例证（7）叙述最后一个原因（8）总结上文（9）作者自己的观点（10）理由一（11）理由二（12）总结上文
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Student Use of Computers(1)As is clearly shown in the chart, students are now spending much more time on the computer, from one hour to hours per week between 1990 and 1995.(2)Especially, it increases sharply to twenty hours in the year of 2000.(3)There are three reasons for this phenomenon.(4)To begin with, due to the sharp decline in price of personal computer, most college students now can afford one.(5)In addition, they find the computer a wonderful thing to have fun with.(6)For example, they can chat through QQ or playing games on line.(7)Last but not least, from Internet, they can learn things much more quickly than simply from reading books so that they can secure a good job in the future.(8)In short, low price increasing awareness of having fun or getting information from Internet make student use computers a lot.(9)As far as I am concerned, there are some complaints from both teachers and students.(10)On the one hand, students complain about the less availability of computers and slow speed of the network.(11)On the other hand, some teachers worry that the much more time spent playing computer games or surfing online will students to ignore their studies and even do cheating instead of doing research by their own.(12)In brief, in spite of problems concerning the use of computer, we can’t deny that computer is of more merits than defects.对比论述型模板
（1）When it comes to_______, people’s opinions differ.(2)Many people believe that______.(3)For one thing,______.(4)For another,_________.1(5)Some people, however, take a different attitude.(6)They regard ____.(7)In their view, ________.(8)Furthermore, ________.(9)As far as I am concerned, _______.(10)On the one hand, ________.(11)On the other hand,________.(12)So,_____________.填充内容：（1）文章主题（2）一些人的观点（3）理由一（4）理由二（5）另一些人的观点（6）理由一（7）理由二（8）理由三（9）作者自己的观点，看法（10）论点一（11）论点二（12）总结上文
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When it comes to the test of spoken English, people’s opinions differ.(2)Many people believe that is necessary to adopt such a test.(3)For one thing, fluent speaking ability is badly needed n today’s society that is experiencing reform and opening up.(4)For another, in a more competitive society such as ours today, fluent spoken English usually becomes that once more advantage you have to beat your rival in competing for a position having much appeal for both of you.(5)Some people, however, take a different attitude.(6)They regard the test as being unnecessary.(7)In their view, fluent spoken English does not necessary mean a better job, sometimes, opportunity plays a more important role.(8)Furthermore, many people do not use spoken English at all in their work.(9)As far as I am concerned, I am really in favor of the test.(10)On the other hand, it can encourage college students to try every means to improve their spoken English.(11)On the other hand, college student will benefit endlessly in their future career if they can speak fluent English.(12)So, I decided to make use of every opportunity to practice my spoken English, and surely it will do me much good.问题解决型模板
（1）There has been a discussion recently about______.(2)It is true to present situation that ______.(3)For one thing,________.(4)For another,________.(5)As is known to all, there are many ways to _________.(6)First of all, _______.(7)Furthermore,_________.(8)The last but the not least,____.(9)In brief,__________.(10)In conclusion,__________.(11)We’d better _________.(12)Accordingly, ________.填充内容：(1)提出问题（2）问题的必要性（3）必要性或后果一（4）必要性或后果二(5)提出解决问题的方法（6）方法一（7）方法二（8）方法三（9）总结上文（10）重申主题（11）进一步强调主题（12）总结全文 范文欣赏
How to Succeed in a job Interview
(1)There has been a discussion recently about the interview.(2)It is true to the present situation that the interview becomes indispensable in seeking a job.(3)For one thing, if a job seeker can make the best use of the interview and leaves a good impression on the mind of the interview, he may be lucky enough to get the jib competed for by many applicants.(4)For another, if the job hunter gives a poor performance during the interview, he is unlikely to stand a chance.(5)As is known to all, there are many ways to make an excellent performance in an interview.(6)First of all, the applicant ought to his appearance and manner of speaking.(7)Furthermore, he is supposed to display his ability, especially his grasp of professional knowledge required by the position for which he is applying.(8)The last but not the least, a really impression job seeker must convey a sense of self-confidence in and a practical attitude toward the cause concerned.(9)In brief, if the interview displays these characteristics and presents his most attractive qualities during the interview, the interview might make an on-the-spot decision to take him on.(10)In conclusion, the job interview is indeed important.(11)We’d better pay attention to skills.(12)Accordingly, if the interview as made full preparations for it and given a fairly confident and honest performance, his or her success can be ensured.道理论证型模板
（1）It is well-known that________.(2)For example, ________.(3)And_______.(4)What’s more,________.(5)Even___________.（6）However,________.(7)First all,________.(8)Meanwhile,_______.(9)And,_________.(10)Therefore,__.(11)In a word,_________.(12)It pays to ________.填充内容：（1）提出主题或现象（2）举例一（3）举例二（4）举例三（5）举例四（6）主题词（7）论证一（8）论证二（9）论证三（10）总结上文（11）总结全文（12）强调主题
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It Pays to Be Honest(1)It is well-known that nowadays dishonesty is a common phenomenon in society.(2)For example, many good-hearted doctors would not tell dying patients about their real condition.(3)And poor students tend to cheat on exams.(4)What’s more, greedy advertisers, armed with misleading advertisements, may lure customers into buying fake commodities.(5)Even such “decent” and famous figure as Liu Xiaoqing, Once considered China’s movie queen, have cheated the government on income taxes.(6)However, honesty is always seen as an important part of the human character.(7)First of all, if you treat others fairly, those associating with you will certainly profit from your sincerity.(8)Meanwhile, a sense of trust builds up in their hearts, which, in turn, will earn you more true friends.(9)And that will benefit you in the long run.(10)Therefore, it is essential for everyone to maintain an honest attitude towards the whole society.(11)In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor.(12)It pays to be honest.应用文类模板一
Dear ________，(1)I am delighted to learn that ________.(2)You are welcome to ________.(3)I am sure _______.(4)As for _________,I am thinking about ________.(5)On the one hand, __________.(6)On the other hand, ________.(7)I suggest _________.(8)As to______________.(9)Of course,_______.(10)By the way, ________.(11)In addition_________.(12)I am looking forward to ___________.填充内容：（1）写信原因（2）表示欢迎（3）期望（4）主题词+建议（5）建议一（6）建议二（7）供被建议人选择的条件（8）建议的具体内容（9）其他的建议（10）提醒注意事项一（11）注意事项二（12）表达本人的愿望
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Dear Xiao Wang，(1)I am delighted to learn that you will visit me during the week-long holiday.(2)You are welcome to stay with me and spend the holiday together.(3)I am sure we are going to have a good time together.(4)As for a most interesting and significant holiday, I’m thinking about making a careful arrangement in advance.(5)On the other hand, there are many places of interest in Beijing.(6)On the other hand, Beijing is also a cultural center in our country, in which there are many world-famous universities, such as Beijing University and Tsinghua University.(7)If you are interested in visiting them, we’ll set aside one day to walk around there to experience the cultural atmosphere in Beijing.(8)As to the famous sites, I suggest we visit the Tian’anmen Square, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, ect.(9)Of course we’ll also do some shopping in Wangfujing Street and enjoy the delicious food there.(10)By the way, please remember to take your sweater with you in case of the cold weather.(11)In addition, don’t forget your CD card and 4 student card just in case.(12)I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours Zhang Ying 应用文类模板二
Dear______，(1)My name is _________(2)I am_________.(3)I venture to write you a letter about_______.(4)The focus of the complaint is ________.(5)For one thing, ___________.(6)For another,______.(7)Honestly speaking,___________.(8)Honestly speaking, _________.(9)Besides,__________.(10)All in all, there is still much room for improvement.(11)I do hope ________.(12)Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours(Signature :)__________ 填充内容(1)写信人姓名（2）写信人身份（3）写信目的（4）抱怨或问题的中心（5）问题一（6）问题二（7）好的方面（8）需改进的方面（9）问题三（10）总述观点（11）表达愿望（12）致辞
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A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
January 6th, 2002 Dear Mr.President，(1)My name is Li Ming.(2)I am a junior student in Civil Engineering School.(3)I venture to write you a letter about the poor canteen service on campus.(4)The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food.（5）For one thing, the rice is too hard, the steam bread too cold, vegetables overcooked.(6)For another, the prices of the foods are surprisingly high.And many of us go out to have meals.(7)Honestly speaking, the dining environment has been improved.(8)But there are not enough seats.(9)Besides, the attitude of the canteen staff is not hospitable at all.(10)All in all, there is still much room for improvement.(11)I do hope we will not suffer for another year.(12)Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours Li Ming 1.Your personal information 2.The reason why you choose Boston University 3.Asking for the relevant materials 申请信参考范文
Department of Applied Physics Tsinghua University Beijing, China Sept, 11th, 2004 Office of graduate Admissions Boston University Massachusetts, USA
Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward master degree in your university.My name is Liu Xin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Tsinghua University(China).Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my BS degree;I plan to continue my study and research in this field under the instructions of first-class professors and in a dynamic academic atmosphere.I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, any array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics.I believe m interests are extremely congruent with the strengths oh the school.And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, a detailed introduction to the school of Physics, and other relevant information.My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours Li Xin 1.Provide the background information 2.Introduce the participants and proposed programs 3.And tell him/her what you need him/her to do 邀请信参考范文
An Invitation Letter Dec.20th, 2004 Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this letter to invite you to attend the International Students’ Semester-end Party, which is going to be held at the International Students’ Club at7:00 in the afternoon of Dec.28(Friday).Our university campus is covered with students of various colors from different countries.And it is our tradition that a special party for all the international students is held at the end of every semester, which, in fact, has become an important communication activity for them.Again, we shall invite some of the outstanding international students as well as professors to introduce their successful experiences in our county.Professor Cheng from China ,is going to deliver a presentation upon International Communication for Business Purposes, which will last only for 40 minutes.Besides, I am very glad to tell you that some of the other international students are going to perform some traditional and typical folk songs and dances of their countries.I believe that all of you will love it.By the way, you are especially encouraged to wear your traditional dressing.And if you hope to give any performance or presentation and you need us to do any special preparations for you, please do not hesitate to call my office.Please give us a reply before his Friday.And I am looking forward to seeing you there.Yours Sincerely Jessica London
第二篇：四级作文
预测主题之第十位：友谊
Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to make friends.When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement.With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.It implies loyalty, cordiality, sympathy, affection,and readiness to help.No man can make the most of his life without carefully and
conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along.Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends.Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities.Then we should treat our friends with courtesy, be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings.We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them.In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds.Only thus, can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life.预测主题之第九位：压力
As the pace of life continues to increase, we are fast losing the art of relaxation.Once you are in the habit of rushing through life, being on the go from morning till night,it is hard to slow down.But relaxation is essential for a healthy mind and body.Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it.In fact, it is not the bad thing as it is often supposed to be.A certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and give purpose to life.It is only when the stress gets out of control can it lead to poor performance and ill health.The amount of stress a person can withstand depends very much on the individual.Some people are not afraid of stress, and such characters are obviously prime material for managerial responsibilities.Others lose heart at the first signs of unusual difficulties.When exposed to stress, in whatever form, we react both chemically and physically.In fact, we make a choice between “flight or fight”and in more primitive days the choices made the difference between life or death.The crises we meet today are unlikely to be so extreme, but however little the stress, it involves the same response.It is when such a reaction lasts long, through continued exposure to stress, that health becomes endangered.Such serious
conditions as high blood pressure and heart diseases have established links with stress.Since we cannot remove stress from our lives(it would be unwise to do so even if we could), we need to find ways to deal with it.预测主题之第八位：节约
As is vividly revealed in the drawing above, water is being wisely utilized in the daily life of a family.The good conduct is indeed praiseworthy and should be popularized in our society.The implied meaning of the drawing can be stated as follows.To begin with, to practise economy is closely related to our daily life.In terms of our clothing, food, sheltering, and transport, much work can be done to save valuable energy and natural resources such as power, water, coal, gas and so on.We, as university students, should take the wise use of paper and second-hand textbooks into consideration.What’s more, the public participation is the foundation of a society in which to practise economy is advocated and treasured.Since social environment is shaped by the general public, the cultivation of economy-practising society depends on the active involvement of every member of our society, be he old or young.In sum, our daily life should be permeated with the sense of practising economy and public participation should be encouraged.In my view, necessary measures should be taken so as to practise economy.On the one hand, we should launch a public campaign to help people build up the sense of practicing economy in our routine life.On the other hand, education on how to practise economy must be promoted by relevant government departments and professionals at different levels.Only in this way can we create a real economy-practising society.预测主题之第七位：健康
Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That“s why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon,there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.预测主题之第六位：竞争
Competition is a common phenomenon in our social life.We compete when
we play games and when we try to do better than others in our study.There is constant competition for academic degrees, jobs, customers, money and so forth.In a sense, competition is one of the motive force to the development of society.In fact, the only way our world reward people is to give laurels to the winners, not to the losers.What is more, by attempting to compete at different activities, we learn to win and lose, gain experience and know our strengths and weaknesses.Competition prepares us for the tough things in life.To go ahead, to acquire possession, we should be competitive.To us, industriousness and ambition are positive values.Whether in games, in study or in business alike, the aim is to win the game, the degree, the trophy(战利品), and the contract.Learning to be competitive is clearly the best preparation for life.预测主题之第五位：纪律
Some people say that the best way to raise children is to them to be independent thinkers.Other people disagree and say that children need to be taught discipline in order to let them successful.In other word, children should either be granted freedom, or be given more discipline.I tend to agree with a policy of firm discipline.The people whose view places emphasis on encouraging children to think freely hope the child will be able to understand and govern the world.The child is considered as an “equal” to the adult.This view has been popular in the western countries, where corporal punishment of children is now illegal.The concept of “rights” for children is part of a wider political movement that also asserts right for women, animals and environment.Discipline is justified because adults are generally wiser than children.Discipline in childhood fosters(养育)the child for the hardship of his future life.预测主题之第四位：自信
Confidence is power--the power to attract, persuade, influence, and succeed.Imagine what your life would be like if you had an abundance of selfconfidence!Confidence isn”t an inherited trait, it“ s a learned one.This means that you can have an abundance of self-confidence.The very first thing you have to do to create abundant self-confidence is to start thinking with confidence.Pay attention to your internal dialogue, and learn to notice when you allow negativity or doubt to control the course of your thinking.Your environment has a tremendous influence on you.The books you read, the people you spend time with, and the music you listen to all influence the way you think and feel about yourself and the world around you.If you”re in a situation where you"re discouraged, such as an
unhealthy relationship or a miserable job, you have to change that situation if you want your self-confidence level to grow.Create an environment that supports you if your desire to have abundant self-confidence.Spend time with confident people.预测主题之第三位：心理
As is apparently betrayed in the bar chart above, at present
university students suffer from psychological problems of various kinds, among which spiritual depression, miscellaneous problems, and
suicide-committing top the list.What the chart reveals is indeed thought-provoking.The implied meaning of the chart above can be briefly stated as follows.On the one hand, university students are encountering more psychological problems than ever before.The fact can be attributed to many factors.Most university students are overloaded with study and haunted by employment pressure.As young and inexperienced people, they are also facing emotional dilemma and trial of human interrelationship.Besides, some students are in a financial predicament.On the other hand, necessary psychological work for university student is a must for the time being.It is quite shocking that at least forty percent of university students suffer from spiritual depression.The very fact should not be neglected.Effective countermeasures must be taken to reverse the current grim situation.In sum, the psychological problems should be put on our agenda.In my view, great efforts must be made so as to ensure the healthy growth of university students.To begin with, we must have a good understanding the necessity of psychological instruction and guidance among university students.What’s more, government departments at
different levels and related organizations should make joint efforts to
The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)
The World Expo in 2010
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government
has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.
第三篇：四级作文
Create a Conservation-Oriented Campus
1.建设节约型校园十分重要
2.原因是„„
3.为了建设节约型校园我们应该„„
【精彩范文】
Creating a Conservation-Oriented Campus
In this age of rapid depletion of natural resources, it is of paramount importance to create a conservation-oriented campus.The creation of such an ecologically-friendly campus would significantly contribute to China’s overall efforts to become a leading low-carbon nation in the world.The most compelling reason for such an endeavor is to change a deep-entrenched misconception prevalent among college students.Most universities provide water and electricity for free, misleading students into believing that such resources are limitless and inexhaustible.We should realize that, currently, many parts of our country are suffering from unprecedente drought and power scarcity.We should show due concern for the welfare of people in those places by refusing to be selfish in satisfying our own needs.As responsible citizens of our society, we have the responsibility to recycle whatever we can lay hands or.The small efforts by a single individual may make a huge difference.To be a well-educated college student is to be conservation conscious.College graduates are the future of our country and by enhancing their conservation awareness they would definitely play a leading role in protecting our environment in the future and in making our world a better place to live.【参考译文】
创立环保型的校园
在自然资源急剧消耗的这个时代，创立环保型的校园具有至高无上的意义。创造这样一个生态友好型的校园，将极大地促进中国整体上的能力，成为世界上处于领先地位的低碳大国。
作出如此一番努力，最迫切的一个原因，就是为了改变大学生中间甚为流行的一个根深蒂固的错误观念。大多数学校免费提供水和电，使学生们误以为这类资源取之不尽，用之不竭。我们应该意识到，就在眼下，我国的许多地区正遭受着史无前例的干旱与电荒。我们绝不应该自私地只追求满足我们自己的需求，而应该为那些地区的民众的福祉着想。作为我们社会中有责任心的公民，但凡我们身边的一切，我们皆应不吝举手之劳，悉数予以循环利用。个体的一份小小的努力，却能为世界带来巨大的改变。
要成为富有修养的大学生，就是要有保护自然的意识。大学毕业生是我们国家的未来;通过强化其保护自然的意识，他们注定会在未来的环保事业中发挥主导的作用，使我们这个世界成为更宜居之地。
【结构分析】
本文采用三个段落的写作手法，每个段落都起着不同的作用，但相互呼应，形成一个整体。
文章第一段，开门见山地重申题目中的命题，然后阐述该命题的意义。
文章第二段，阐述了创立环保型校园的原因。首先分析了过去的一个错误的想法，陈述了某些不环保的行为，让人们认识到不环保的坏处。这在写文章中可被看做一个“破”的过程。第二段的后半部分就是由“破”而“立”的部分。首先从“意识”(realize)着手, 然后进入到行动：“We should show due concern for„” 和“we have the responsibility to „”。在这两项行动之后，用“The small efforts by a single individual may make a huge difference.”进行了简短但寓意深刻的概括。这就是“收”。
第三段是结尾，提出了在新时代做一个合格大学生的标准，即必须具有环保意识。文章展望未来，阐述了作为社会精英的大学生，通过在大学期间致力于环保事业，从而在未来担当起引领我国环保事业的责任与义务。
【写作技巧分析】
每篇文章中总有一个核心的概念，像本文中“环保”这个概念就是。作为核心概念，它肯定要被多次提及。如果通篇只用一个概念，就不免会让人读上去觉得单调乏味。反之，如果能对这个核心概念进行表达方式上的多重变化，就能一方面给人以新鲜感，另一方面也让阅卷老师对你丰富的词汇量留下深刻的印象，因为丰富的词汇量必定隐含着平时庞大的阅读量。国外的好文章无不如此。
本文中从标题开始，就出现了“conservation”与“conservation-oriented”这样一些相关的词语，文章中同类词语有：“natural resources”，“ecologically-friendly”，“low-carbon”，“recycle”，“conservation conscious”，“conservation awareness”，“environment”。这些词汇在文章的不同地方出现，使整篇文章得以围绕着一个统一的主题来展开，从而避免了跑题的可能性。
当然，与环保相关的词汇还有很多，如“energy-efficient”, “environmentally friendly”, “green”，“preservation”, “harmonious coexistence of nature and man”„ 所有这些，都需要学生在平时积累，写作时就能灵活自如地用上了。
【值得熟记的句式与短语】
1.rapid depletion of natural resources：自然资源急剧消耗
2.it is of paramount importance to do something:做某事具有至高无上的意义
3.conservation-oriented：生态友好的
4.ecologically-friendly：生态友好型的
5.China’s overall efforts to become a leading low-carbon nation中国成为世界领先的低碳大国的总体努力
6.the most compelling reason for such an endeavor is to „ 此番努力最迫切的一个原因是„„
7.a deep-entrenched misconception prevalent among college students:大学生中间甚为流行的一个根深蒂固的错误观念
8.mislead sb.into believing that„误导某人相信„„
9.inexhaustible:取之不尽的
10.suffer from unprecedente droughts:遭受史无前例的干旱
11.power scarcity:电荒
12.to show due concern for„给予应有的关注
13.the welfare of people: 人民的福祉
14.to be selfish in satisfying our own needs: 自私地只满足我们自己的需求
15.as responsible citizens of our society: 作为我们社会中有责任心的公民
16.to have the responsibility to „有责任做„„
17.to recycle whatever we can lay hands or: 回收利用一切我们可以利用的东西
18.the small efforts by a single individual may make a huge difference： 个体的一份小小的努力，却能为世界带来巨大的改变
19.to be conservation conscious： 有保护自然的意识
20.to enhance conservation awareness： 强化保护自然的意识
21.to play a leading role in doing sth.： 在做„„中发挥主导的作用
22.to make our world a better place to live 使我们这个世界成为更宜居之地
第四篇：四级作文
大学英语四级考试作文预测（2011.11）
恩波教育英语研究所
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（一）Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students
1． 不少大学生的生活方式消极，不上课，不运动，不出去社交，而是宅在家里或宿舍，导
致知识水平下降的同时身体素质也在下降。
2． 你对此有什么看法和建议？
【范文】
In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities.This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition pressures, and so on.To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed.As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard.Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home.Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.【点评】
文章开门见上，指出大学生的不良生活方式，简单提及其危害。之后第二段分析了导致生活方式消极的原因：生物钟颠倒，沉迷于网络游戏，饮食习惯不规律以及各种竞争的压力。同时分别给大学，父母和大学生给出建议。
文章第一段中would like„ rather than意为“宁愿„„而不愿„„”； to some extend意为“在某种程度上”；reversed biological clock意为“颠倒的生物钟”；health comes first意为“健康第一”；conscientiously observe意为“认真遵守”；form意为“培养”。
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（二）Character Education
1． 学校教育除了培养学生的学习能力之外，还应注重诸如孝顺、诚实等的品德培养；
2． 品德培养的重要性。
【范文】
Normally school education aims to cultivate students' abilities to learn and think.But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life.As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.Character education plays an important role in the development of future society.It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities.In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives.What's more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently, how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously, for their own future, and also for the future of their motherland.【点评】
本题谈论的是学校教育，说明了只注重培养学生的学习，思考能力，很难建成和谐舒适的社 1
会，由此引出需要加强道德教育。第二段从几个方面说明品德教育的重要性：满足学生全面发展的需要；防止学生变得自私，自利，自负，没有礼貌等等；教导学生对自己和祖国的将来负责。
第一段第一句中hardly意为“几乎不”；leading a harmonious life意为“引领和谐生活”； attach more attention to 意为“更加重视”； 第二段第一句 plays an important role in意为“起重要作用”；efficiently，colourfully和seriously作为副词，修饰前面的动词，分别指代有效地学习，多姿多彩地生活，认真负责地做事。
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（三）Does Knowledge Change Fate?
1． “知识改变命运”曾是无数寒门子弟奋斗的动力所在，可如今现实却是，不仅知识难以
改变命运，穷孩子能接触到知识的机会也在减少。
2． 你对此有什么看法，且应采取什么措施阻止这种现象？
【范文】
Large number of children from poor families once held the belief “Knowledge can change fate” and thought that hardworking could reward them--As one sows, so will one reap.But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can't change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society.First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening.Second, it may let many real potential genius go away.Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.Therefore it needs to take urgent measures.On the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students.As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.【点评】
文章由习语“知识改变命运”引出话题，指出当今社会现实---知识无法改变命运。文章第二段分析了该现象的危害：加剧穷富差距和不公平；导致“潜在的”人才流失；不利于建立和谐社会。最后一段分别给政府，学校提出建议，采取措施改变这种状况。
第一段中reward 意为“回报”；As one sows, so will one reap.为习语，意为“ 一分耕耘,一分收获。” 文章第二段中列举该现象的危害，分别用 First,„Second,„Third表示“首先„„其次„„再次”。building a people-oriented, harmonious society意为“创建以人为本的和谐社会”。
第三段中 make preferential policies意为“制订优惠政策”，establish completed systems意为“建立完善的体系”。
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（四）Indirect Employment
1． 工作难找，大学生流行“曲线就业”，通过实习或做一些杂活积累社会经验。
2． 你对此有什么看法？
【范文】
Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out.Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment.Firstly, it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which
can't be gotten from books.Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests.Last but not the least, it improves university students' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs.【点评】
文章第一段指出大学生就业形势严峻，随之出现“曲线就业”。文章第二段开门见山，说明自己的观点---赞成这种做法，然后一一列出了好处：第一，缓解就业压力，获取新的知识和实践经验；第二，有利于大学生认识自己兴趣所在；第三，锻炼学生的社会技能和个性。
第一段中severe employment situation意为“严峻的就业形势”；finding ways out意为“寻求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意为“支持”；not only„but also意为“不仅„„而且„„”；Last but not the least意为“最后但是最重要的是”。
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（五）Who Should Pay the University's Tuition？
1． 大学学费不断上涨，有人认为大学学费应由学生自己赚取，有人认为应由父母供给。
2． 作为大学生，谈谈你自己的观点，并给出理由。
【范文】
University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities.With the rising of university's tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university's tuition.Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life.Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students' ability.As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part.It is true that trying to make money will affect university students' studies.But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money.Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.【点评】
文章第一段开门见山，指出关于谁支付大学学费的不同意见。第二段说明自己的观点----希望父母和孩子共同承担学费，这样有助于减轻家庭负担，学生也有机会通过社会实践获取更多社会经验。
第一段中With the rising of university's tuition意为“随着大学学费的上涨”；be beyond one' s ability意为“超出某人的能力范围”。第二段中gain working experience意为 “获取社会经验”；lighten financial burdens意为“减轻经济负担”。
大学英语六级考试作文预测（2011.11）
恩波教育英语研究所
预测作文
（一）New Part-time Jobs
1． 目前有一些新型的兼职工作出现，如网络写手，拍客，纠客等；
2． 你对大学生从事这类职业有什么看法？
【范文】
With the rapid development of information society, a large number of new part-time jobs emerge, such as cyber writers, shooter, rectifiers and so on.Since young people tend to accept new
things, many university students employ these jobs.However, some are afraid that these part-time jobs will distract students' attention from their studies and influence their academic achievements.As far as I am concerned, taking on part-time jobs can partly relieve students' economic burdens, especially to those from poor families.Almost all these new jobs meet the real demands of modern times, they can ensure college students to keep pace with the times and get self-improvements according to the needs of society.What's more, when compared with traditional ones, these new ones show characteristics of novel forms, diversified styles and flexibility.So if college students can balance their learning and part-time jobs well, they are sure to get enough knowledge as well as working experience, so as to get ready for their future success.【点评】
本题谈论的是一种社会现象。第一段首句引入“新型兼职工作出现”这一现象，之后提及人们对大学生从事这些兼职工作的担忧：担心大学生做兼职工作分心而影响学业。第二段说明自己的观点---兼职工作可以减轻学生的经济负担，而且这些新型兼职工作都是应运时代要求而生，可以使学生与时俱进，根据时代需求进行自我调整。第三段分析了新型兼职工作的特征“形式新颖，风格各异，自由灵活”，提倡学生合理安排学业与工作。
第一段第一句中cyber writers意为“网络写手”；shooter意为“拍客”；rectifiers 意为“纠客”；influence their academic achievements意为“影响学业”； 第二段第一句As far as I am concerned意为“就我而言，我认为”；relieve one's economic burdens意为“减轻某人的经济负担”；keep pace with the times意为“与时俱进”； 第三段第一句中show characteristics of意为“显示出„„特征”；第二句中balance意为“平衡”。
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（二）Bureaucratic Airs on College Student Cadres
1． 部分高校学生干部沾染“官气”，错把职能当权力；
2． 请对此现象及原因进行分析。
【范文】
College Student Cadres are those ones who usually do excellent jobs in academics and make outstanding performance in activities.Their manners influence the students around them greatly.However, due to the close relationship between college and society, many college student cadres gradually show undesirable tendency towards bureaucracy.They mistakenly regard their duties as authorities.This strange phenomenon not only reveals the immature of young adults, but also discloses that those cadres haven’t realized the nature of Students’ Union.The following factors can account for it.Firstly, self-cultivation of college student cadres is not good enough.Because they lack social experience, they make mistakes easily with the desires for quick returns.Secondly, the check-up systems in colleges overemphasize their performance in Students’ Union, so student cadres only focus on pursuits of outstanding performance.All things considered, universities should reinforce guidance and education for college student cadres and help them build up a stronger sense of services.【点评】
大学生干部曾经是一个时代活力动力、正气朝气、理想希望的象征。但是随着市场大潮的逐步浸染，大学生开始越来越深入地接触社会，并在各类活动中开始受到社会不良风气的诱惑。文章由部分高校学生干部沾染“官气”引出话题，之后在第二段分析了该类现象，指出大学
生干部涉世未深，没有认清学生会的本质所在。之后分析了产生这一现象的原因---自身素质不高并且急功近利；考核制度过分强调业绩。最后一段呼吁学校加强对大学生干部的引导，帮助其树立正确的信念和服务意识。
第一段中do excellent jobs in academics意为“学业优秀”；make outstanding performance in activities意为“表现突出”； undesirable tendency towards bureaucracy意为“官僚化的不良趋势”；第二段第一句中reveal和disclose都表示“揭示”，account for意为“解释，说明”； the desires for quick returns可以解释为“急功近利”；第三段中All things considered意为“总而言之”。
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（三）Limited Tour on Famous Universities’ Campuses
1． 名校成旅游景点，不少高校纷纷颁布“限游令”；
2.该不该限游，谈谈你的看法。
【范文】
Along with the phenomenon that famous university campuses have become popular tourist attractions, great concerns have been showed to campus tourism.Since it has been found that the normal teaching has been disturbed, the environment has been polluted and the spiritual atmosphere has been ruined, a large number of universities have carried out rules to limit tourists on campus.As we know, campuses are mainly places for study, and they are holy palaces where students gain profound scholarship of different fields.Being open to tourists may distract students' attentionfrom their studies, as well as make a great deal of hustle and bustle in the initially peaceful campus.Most importantly, it may cause unnecessary troubles for students.As a result, it is beneficial to limit tourists so as to guarantee students' personal interests.Meanwhile, I sincerely hope that universities would take into consideration the positive meanings, and hold regular “open” activities in order to improve their reputations as well as enable middle school students to get more information about them, and then help the students make enough preparation for their future.【点评】
文章首段指出如今“大学校园游”盛行，利用被动语态并列句指出其弊端：大学的正常教学秩序被打扰，环境受到影响，大学的文化氛围遭到破坏，引出话题：不少高校纷纷颁布“限游令”；第二段结合作者自己的观点指出是否支持这种做法。最后一段提出建议，希望大学“限游”的同时，结合考虑其积极因素。
第一段中Along with表示“随着”；disturb 和ruin均表示“破坏”。第二段中holy palaces表示“神圣的殿堂”； hustle and bustle表示“喧闹繁杂”；guarantee students' personal interests表示“保障学生的切身利益”。第三段中take into consideration表示“考虑”。
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（四）Job Orientation
1． 大学生是先就业后择业，还是从一开始就要有清晰的职业定位？
2． 请给出自己的分析及观点。
【范文】
In recent years, many college students face a big problem about whether they should gain a job first before choosing the most appropriate one, or they should hold a clear job orientation in their mind from the very beginning ?
As far as I am concerned, each choice has its own advantages.Getting a job without interests
helps college students gain enough time to find a better one while adjusting themselves into the real society.On the contrary, choosing a relevant job can avoid blindness employments and save students’ time for striving for their ideals.I completely agree that college students should make out plans for their career and be down-to–earth in carrying out it.Even confronted with the increasing difficulty of getting a job, they should not merely aim at material gains.【点评】
本题谈论的是一种社会现象。文章第一段指出现象---大学生是应该先就业再择业还是先择业后就业呢？文章第二段作者结合自己的观点分析两种不同抉择的有利之处：先就业可以使学生在现实社会中自我调整，为将来找到更合适的作准备。而先择业可以避免盲目就业，为实现理想节约时间。最后一段指出作者自己的观点--大学生应该制定职业规划。
文章第一段中 from the very beginning表示“从最开始”。第二段中On the contrary表示“相反地”，短语striving for their ideals表示“为理想而奋斗”。第三段中down-to–earth表示“脚踏实地的”，material gains表示“物质利益”。
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（五）How to Prevent Psychological Problems in Schools?
1． 心理问题成校园暴力主因，为避免极端行为的发生，对有“隐性”心理问题的学生进行前期干预尤为重要；
2． 应如何对学生进行心理干预，有什么有效的措施？
【范文】
In modern society, students are destined to cope with a lot of pressures, from either outer world or inner will.Reports are often heard that some students made violence, committed suicide or murdered their roommates.Students' psychological problems have become the primary cause of “extreme behaviours”.It is vital to take effective actions against psychological problems, especially to those ones without any apparent symptoms.In the first place, the authorities concerned should let students be aware of the utmost significance of mental fitness.Lectures on psychological health should be frequently given and psychological clinics should be set up to provide troubled students with timely help.In the second place, students should keep optimistic in their daily life and let their channel of communication open to their teachers and parents.Even in case of mental illness, they should not hesitate to go to psychological counselors for help.Only with these measures taken can we expect sound growth of students.【点评】
文章首段指出如今大学生受到各种压力，从而产生了各样的心理问题，同时提出有必要采取措施解决大学生的心理问题；第二段结合作者自己的观点提出如何对大学生进行心理干预：首先相关部门应对大学生心理问题引起重视，采取讲座和心理咨询的方式给学生及时提供帮助；其次，大学生应该保持乐观的态度，如遇心理问题，应毫不犹豫寻求心理咨询师的帮助。
第一段第一句中be destined to 表示“注定”；第二句made violence, committed suicide，murdered their roommates均是由心理问题产生的。第二段中In the first place,In the second place 表示列举，意思分别是“第一”，“第二”。not hesitate to do sth.意为“毫不犹豫做某事”。
第五篇：四级作文
1、现象类
In recent years,the problem of......has become increasingly serious,which has aroused the concern from the whole society+(1~2句)
Several factors can account for this problem/phenomenon.First of all.......Moreover...In addition...Consequently,It is important that we take three measure to solve this problem,firstly...secondly...thirly...2、图表类
From this chart ,we can see clearly that...declined abruptly from...to...,While...increased sharply from...to...during the period between...and...Several reasons /factors can account for this phenomenon ,On the one hand ,...On the otherhand...,in addition...Such changes have a significant effect on...For one thing...For another...In a word ,...is beneficial to...3、利弊类
Recently it’s been a fashion for...to do...Just as every coin has two sides , ding...has it’s own advantages and disadvantages
It’s main benefits are as follows ,Frstly...contribute to...Secondly , it can make for...Eventually...The negative effects ,However ,are obvious to begin with.Owing lack of.../ lacking in..., the students...Consequently...Moreover...Personally , it is advisable to look before you leap / As far as i’m concerned...What’s more...4、赞成反对类
Different people have different views on / about...Some people support / approve of / are in favour of / agree with this opinion saying...For one thing...For another...(those in favour of this opinion believe / maintain / think that...)on the another hand ,others insist on not doing.../many people think...otherwise(those oppose to this opinion argue that...)in the first place ,...in the second place...Taking all these factors into consideration / account , we may safely come to the conclusion that...Only if / when...can we...
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