2016年高考英语真题分类 专题10 书面表达(解析版)

第一篇：2016年高考英语真题分类 专题10 书面表达(解析版)

2016年高考试题分项解析之专题10书面表达

1.【2016·全国新课标I】书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company.I havealready finished my application and resume.But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to pay attention to.So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help.I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply.And I’d be really thankful.Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。

2.【2016·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1．主题：环境保护；

2．展览时间；

3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】 Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June15th and last three weeks.Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.I know youtake good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join, youcan send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.Hope to hear from you soon.Yours

Lihua

【名师点睛】

本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句....themethe last time you visitedour school.条件状语从句If you want to join....；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。

考点：考查半开放作文

3.【2016·全国新课标III】书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】 Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not, let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.Yours, Li Hua

考点：书信类作文 【名师点睛】

题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。

4.【2016·北京】书面表达（共两节，35 分）第一节（15分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：

1.该人物是谁； 2.该人物的主要贡献； 3.该人物对你的影响。注意：

1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim，It’s great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.That opened our eyes to the world.In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books!Just let me know.Cheers!Yours, Li Hua 考点：应用文写作 【名师点睛】

题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。第二节（20 分）

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。提示词：地球日Earth Day

【答案】

Actions for a Greener Earth

A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.考点：情景作文 【名师点睛】

话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。5.【2016·天津】书面表达（满分25分）

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1）回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2）谈谈收获或感情；（3）表达祝愿语期望。注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends, How time flies!

Thank you.【答案】略

【考点定位】考查提纲作文

【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。6.【2016·上海】Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为

荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须： 1.描述调研数据；

2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。

【答案】（略）

考点：考查图表作文

7.【2016·四川】书面表达（满分25分）

某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.你最喜欢的季节；

2.你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）。注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.题目已为你写好； 3.行文连贯，语篇完整； 4.文中不得透露个人真实信息。

8.【2016·浙江】书面表达（满分30分）

“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。要求如下：

1.简述你对这句名言的理解；

2.用一个具体事例加以说明；

3.给出恰当的结尾。

注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：

2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

【答案】One possible student version

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success.It came from good planning and better doing combined.【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。考点：考查开放式作文

9.【2016·江苏】书面表达（满分25分）

81.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 ~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.不必写标题。【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【答案】

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space.Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.(150 words)Possible version two: Internet voting is quite popular nowadays.Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to.Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have.Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted.Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed.Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(150 words)

【名师点睛】

本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无误无误，全文无中国式英语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句.....in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.....if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest等等。考点：考查任务型读写

第二篇：2013年高考英语书面表达真题及

一书面表达（共35分）

某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.【范文赏读】

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly.Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite.Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class.They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better.If we find those materials interesting, we'll focus our attention on them for long.However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence.My classmates always call me “Mr.forgetful”, because I cannot memorize those I have learnt.I know that it is because I don't spend some time in memorizing them after class.My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory.二 书面表达(满分25分)孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。内容要求: 1.描述漫画内容;2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;3.提出你的看法。

注意: 1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;3.词数120左右;4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇：铺路pave the way From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.【范文赏读】

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development.Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.2014高考考点专项集训45天

高考越来越注重考察知识之间的联系和贯通，知识和能力专项包含了高考命题的全部落脚点。专项集训部分包含了必考专项集训和选修专项集训，锁定高考命题核心点和能力突破点——15天专项提分大突破！......查看详情>> 上一篇：2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：江苏卷 下一篇：2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：四川卷 2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：江苏卷 来源：天星更新日期：2013-07-09 点击：74 第五部分：书面表达(满分25分)81.请根据你对以下两幅图的理解, 以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题, 用英语写一篇作文。

参考词汇: banner(横幅)stump(树桩)你的作文应包括以下内容: 1.简要描述两幅图的内容;

2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意: 1.可参照图片适当发挥;2.作文词数150左右;

3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Actions Speak Louder than Words 【范文赏读】

Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment.Actions are important in other fields, too.Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：湖南卷 来源：天星更新日期：2013-07-09 点击：29 Section C(25 marks)Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。match winner loser result 内容: 1.自己或他人的一次经历;2.你的感受。注意: 1.必须使用所给4个关键词;2.词数不少于120个;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【范文赏读】

Last week, a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two.The players from both sides are all excellent football players, so the match went on fiercely at first.At last the result is: the winner is Class Two, and we were the loser.We didn't win the match, but we didn't lose heart.On the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and a match comes second.On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret.In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there's no need feeling regretful for these failures.What's more, we should analyze the reasons of the failures to get success for the next time.In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it's the mother of success.2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：辽宁卷 来源：天星更新日期：2013-07-09 点击：20 第二节 书面表达(满分25分)一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点: 1.它是中国的传统节日之一;2.家人团聚;3.赏月、吃月饼;4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.【范文赏读】

The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country.Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we still try to go home for the celebration.The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories.In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：天津卷 来源：天星更新日期：2013-07-09 点击：78 第二节：书面表达(满分25分)61.假设你是某大学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等);组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等);表达当选的愿望。注意: 1.词数不少于100;2.请勿提及真实学校名称;3.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;4.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:副主席vice president 竞选run for Good afternoon, my dear friends.My name is Li Jin.Thank you.范文赏读

Good afternoon, my dear friends.My name is Li jin.Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club.Concerning the position of vice president of the English Club, I feel qualified to take the job.First, I have gained a lot of experience and received wide praise from my classmates for my job as monitor.Second, I am a warm-hearted boy and always ready to help others.Third, I am good at organizing activities and have held a number of English corners and discussions.Looking into the future, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students if I am lucky enough to be the vice president.My plan is as follows:on the one hand, I will organize some campus activities, like “English Evening”, a platform where students can show their English.In this process, we can still learn from each other.And I will invite some famous professors to give lectures for our students so that we can acquire a lot of knowledge.On the other hand, I will organize more activities to enhance the interschool communication.We can compete with students from other universities in debate contests or speech contests.Moreover, I will open more channels for you to voice your opinions and need.I sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good vice president.Thank you.2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：重庆卷 来源：天星更新日期：2013-07-09 点击：57

五、写作（共两个写作任务，满分35分）写作一（满分15分）

请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。

A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room.He never has time to talk to me.” 要求:（1）就此材料发表你的看法;（2）紧扣材料，有明确的观点;（3）词数不少于60。写作二（满分20分）

调查显示,中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华,现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括:

·说明写信目的 ·简述江豚现状

·希望WWF如何帮助(比如:资助江豚保护项目等)·表示感谢并期待回复 注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a student from Chongqing, China.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文赏读】

Some children are so busy with their own business that they have no time for their parents.Sadly, this is anything but rare among today's children.It is all right for them to do whatever they want, but isn't it also of great importance to talk to the ones who show them selfless love? Talking to parents is not only a means of knowing them and avoiding misunderstanding but also a perfect way to learn how to love them in return.【范文赏读】

Dear Sir or Madam，I'm a student from Chongqing, China.I'm writing to call your attention to the danger finless porpoises are currently in.Seriously affected by human activities, finless porpoises in the Yangtze River are in danger of becoming extinct.To our disappointment, only about 1,000 are estimated to be still living at present.We sincerely hope that WWF can play a role in protecting this endangered species.Firstly, a sponsorship will be of great help.But more importantly, we need information from experts in WWF to help us better understand the animal thus being able to take better care of them.Thank you for your attention and I'm looking forward to your reply.

第三篇：高考英语书面表达分类模句3

Because of my carelessness, my school-bag was left on the playground.由于我的疏忽，我的书包是在操场上丢失了。

通知/海报/致辞.172May I have your attention, please ?

请大家注意一下？

?173I have something important to tell you.我有重要的事情要告诉你。

174I have got an announcement to make.?我要发表一个声明。

175I am told that a speech contest will be held at the “English Corner ”this summer vacation.告诉我，一个演讲比赛将在“英语角”这个暑假举行。

176?I’m glad to have the honor to tell you some activities you’re going to have today.我荣幸地将告诉你一些活动，你会有今天。

177The party is a good chance for us to practise our English.?聚会是练习英语的好机会。

178Everyone is welcome to attend the party.欢迎大家参加聚会。

179Please bring along your pens and notebooks.?请带钢笔和笔记本。

180All the students are requested to attend the celebration of the Teachers’ Day to be held in the Grand Hall in the Main Building at 6:30 this evening, ?要求所有的学生都参加教师节举行在主楼大厅6:30今晚的庆典，181Don’t miss the chance.Please get there on time.别错过机会。请准时到达那里。

182Please get everything ready.Don’t be late.请做好一切准备。别迟到了！

183That’s all.Thank you.这一切。谢谢你.184A professor from?Beijing?University?will give us a lecture on pollution.In the school hall at 8:00 tomorrow morning.来自北京大学的教授将给我们作一个关于污染的报告。在学校大厅明天早上8点。

185There will be a lecture on pollution given by Professor Wang from Beijing University.?

将有一对由北京大学的王教授污染的报告。

186It will last from half past two to four o’clock.它将从两点半上四点。

187?Please sign your name at the Service Desk before 9:00 a.m.请到服务台签上你的名字，在9点之前

188Lunch will be served at the place of visit.在参观的地方供应午餐

189After the report, we’ll have a discussion.报告结束后，我们将有一个讨论。

190?There will be a close basketball match between Class One and Class Two.会有密切的篮球赛在一班和二班。

191Please be there on time and give your opinion at the meeting.请准时并在会上发表你的意见。

192It would give us great pleasure to invite you to give us a talk in our school.Will you accept our invitation

我们非常荣幸能邀请你来我们学校给我们谈一谈。你会接受我的邀请吗？

192(欢迎词)I’m greatly honored to extend, on behalf of all the teachers and students ,our warm welcome to Professor David.I’m sure Professor David’s visit ?will promote

the friendly relationship between our two departments.All of us will benefit a lot

from their visit.I’m sure he’ll give us much valuable advice in ?our research.Finally I hope Professor David will enjoy his stay in?China.我很荣幸能延长，对所有的老师和学生代表，我们热烈欢迎戴维教授。我肯定戴维教授的访

问将促进我们两个部门之间的友好关系。我们所有人都将受益于他们的参观很多。我相信他

会给我们很多有价值的建议

我们的研究。最后，我希望戴维教授将享受他呆在中国。

193（欢送词）I have the honor to speak on behalf of my classmates at this farewell

party for Mrs.Smith.Mrs.smith came to our school from America in

September, 1999.In the past four years, she’s always been kind to us, patient with

us and strict in her work.She gave such interesting and lively classes

that every one of us enjoyed them very much.Mrs.Smith.is leaving us for her hometown

soon.Now please allow me to express our hearty thanks to her

successful work and wish her good health and a pleasant journey.我荣幸地说我代表我的同学在这个欢送史密斯太太。史密斯太太来到我们学校，美国

九月，1999。在过去的四年中，她一直对我们很好，她和我们一起工作有耐性。她给了这样的课既生动又有趣，我们每一个人都很喜欢它们。史密斯太太。我们很快离开她的家乡。现

在请允许我向她表达我们诚挚的感谢

工作顺利，祝她健康和愉快的旅程。

194How time flies!Two years have passed since Mr.Smith came to teach us English.When you return to your country, we all hope you will keep in touch with us.Thank you for giving us such a warm welcome.时间过得真快！因为史密斯先生来教我们英语两年了。

当你回到你的国家，我们都希望你能与我们保持联系。

谢谢你给我们这样一个热烈的欢迎

195（告别词）First of all, allow me to thank all of you for your kind invitation.I’m greatly honored to have such a chance to visit your university.My visit is both

interesting and memorable.I’m glad to say I gained a lot from my visit.I’ll treasure

your friendship.I’d like to take advantage of this opportunity to

express my pleasure and my greatest gratitude to you again.May our friendship last forever!

Thank you!

首先，请允许我感谢你们盛情邀请。我很荣幸能有机会参观你们大学。我的访问是

有趣和令人难忘的。我很高兴的说，我从我的访问获得了很多。我会珍惜你的友谊。我想利

用这个机会

表达我的快乐和你我最大的感谢了。

愿我们的友谊天长地久！

谢谢！

招聘求职

196endship Travel Service looking for travel guides, aged between 20~35, height 165mm

(female), 175mm(male);good at spoken English and Putonghua, with a good knowledge

of Chinese history, geography and culture.友谊旅行社找旅游指南，20岁~ 35之间，身高165毫米（女），175毫米（男性）；良好的英

语和普通话，有通晓中国历史，地理和文化。

197ave just read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.我在报纸上看到贵公司需要一个秘书。

198 like to get the job.我想得到那份工作。

199I want to offer myself for the position.我想给自己的位置。

200??I had the pleasure of seeing your advertisement in the newspaper.??我看到你们在报纸上登广告的乐趣。

201??Having known that your company needs a typist, I wish to apply for the

job/position.??得知贵公司需要一个打字员，我想申请这项工作/职位。

?202?Having read your ad in the newspaper, I feel I am fit for the job.??在报纸上看到你的广告，我觉得我很适合这个工作。

203??Given the job, I’m sure to make a good guide.??得到工作，我一定要做一个很好的指南。

204??If I am accepted, I will do my best to do the job well.??如果我接受，我会尽我最大的努力做好工作。

205??If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.??如果我能接受这个职位，我会感谢你的好意。

? 注意事项/制度规则?

206Don’t touch the machines without permission.不要触摸机器未经许可。

207??Always do as you’re told to.??总是按照你告诉。

208??When you leave the room, remember to turn off the machine and leave the lab one

by one.??当你离开房间的时候，关掉机器，离开实验室，一个一个的。

209??Show your identity card when your turn comes.??出示你的身份证当轮到你时。

210??You may borrow no more than three books each time.??你可以借不超过三本书的每一次。

211??You can keep them for 5 days and you may renew them if you can’t finish them

on time.??就可以保留5天，你可以续借如果你不能按时完成。

212Pay the cost price for any damage done to the books or magazines.?付出的成本价格的书籍或杂志做任何损伤。

213?Obey the rules of the library.??遵守图书馆的规定。

214??You are forbidden to smoke or to make a loud noise.??禁止你吸烟或发出噪音。

215??People along the sea shore must make full preparation for the hurricane.??人沿着海岸必须做好充分的准备的飓风。

216??Pay attention to the gas, the fire and water as well as the falling trees and

telephone poles.??注意煤气，火和水等倒下的树木和电线杆。

请假/便条

217I came to see you but you happened to be out.我来看你，但是你碰巧出去了。

218??Since you’re out, I have to leave this note with you.因为你??，我要离开这个注意你。

219??Don’t forget to take some food with you for lunch.??别忘了给你带些食物吃午饭。

220??If you want to take photos there you can take a camera with you.??如果你想拍照，那里你可以带上一个照相机。

221??Please telephone our teacher if you don’t want to go along.??请打电话给我们老师：如果你不想走。

222??I’ll expecting you at 3:10 at our school gate.我会等你??3:10我们校门口。

223??I’m writing to you to ask a sick leave.??我给你写信请病假。

224 ?I ask you for sick leave of three days.?我向你请假三天。

225??I’m sorry that I can’t go to school, so I want to ask for two days of sick

leave.??对不起，我不能去学校，所以我想请两天病假。

226??I wonder if you could give me your permission.??我想知道你是否能给我你的许可。

?227?Your kind permission will be greatly appreciated.??您的许可将是极大的赞赏。

228??I’ll go back to school as soon as I am well enough.And I’ll do my best to

make up for the missing lessons during my absence.??我会回我好学校。我会尽我最大的努力来弥补失去的课在我不在的时候。

?229Tomorrow’s meeting will be put off to Friday.?明天的会议将推迟到星期五。

230??The flight to Beijing will be delayed for five hours.Now we have to change some

of our plans.??飞往北京的航班将延误五个小时。现在我们必须改变我们的计划。

231??I have to meet my wife at the airport at 3 p.m.today.??我得去机场接我的妻子今天下午3点。

232??You are requested to ring him up this evening any time from 8:00 to 11:00.??请你打电话给他任何这种晚上从8点到11点。

书信往来?

233I’ll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school.?我如果你能告诉我一些关于你的学校不胜感激。

234??In your letter you asked me for some advice in how to improve your spoken English.你在信中??你问我一些建议，如何提高你的英语口语。

235??I was so pleased to receive your letter and I am writing to tell you„

??我很高兴收到你的来信，我写信是要告诉你„

236??It’ very kind of you to write to me.??非常感谢你给我写信。

237??I’m getting on well with my classmates.??我和同学们相处得很好。

238I have some difficulty in learning English.I can’t tell the difference between

written English and spoken English.Would you please give me some advice ?

我有一些学习英语的困难。我不能辨别之间的书面英语和英语口语的差异。请你给我一些建

议吗？

Dear Editor,亲爱的编辑，I’d like to tell you something about the trouble I was facing in buying furniture.The other day I ordered a set of furniture at a furniture exhibition.They sent me

the furniture after four weeks.But I found the color and the size of some pieces

were not what I had ordered.What’s more, one leg of the desk was broken.So I asked

them to take back the furniture and give me back the money, but they refused.I wrote

to the director of the factory but there was no answer.我想告诉你一些关于我在购买家具面临的麻烦。那天我订购一套家具在家具展。他们把我的家具，四周后。但我发现了一些颜色和大小所定的不。更重要的是，桌子的一条腿断了。所

以我问他们收回家具给我钱，但是他们不肯。我写信给工厂的厂长可是没有回答。

I hope you will publish my letter in the newspaper and help me solve the problem.我希望你能发表我的信在报纸上，帮我解决这个问题。Yours sincerely,你的真诚，Li Gang李刚

??I’ll take Flight CA984 to fly to New York on July 27th.The plane takes off at

11:20 in the morning from Beijing Airport.??我要飞行ca984在七月二十七日飞往纽约。飞机起飞分在上午从北京机场。

Yours sincerely,Yours sincerely,

第四篇：高考英语书面表达技巧

高考英语书面表达技巧

通常，英语学习，听、说、读、写、译五项基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英语课程标准》，对九级语言技能目标英语写作有6点明确的要求。同时列出了写作技能与试题设计的要求和写作评价标准，其测试方式有五种。学生作文主要从内容要点、语言使用效果、结构和连贯性、格式和语域及与目标读者的交流五个方面进行评价。英语书面表达是英语语言基础知识和语法基础知识的综合运用，还要具有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，要求内容清楚、意思连贯、结构完整、逻辑性强、主题突出、用词准确、文体恰当。一般，要文理通畅，非单纯地翻译。要答卷满意，平时确实需要长期的信心的培养，耐心的启发，由易到难，从简单到复杂，循序渐进地坚持内容、语言、语法、表达、结构、逻辑和卷面等进行规范地训练，而且训练有素。现在，不少学生对英语书面表达不予或不够重视。这并非完全意义上的写作，只要求用书面语言基本表达出要表达的东西。一般原则是：不多写、不少写和不错写。现结合存在的问题和多年的教学积累，谈谈高考英语书面表达应注重的五方面。用顺

审准题义，明确情景，看清要求。不少考生写作时，还有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解题的习惯，特别是不注意生词或短语提示，或干脆完全根据所给材料先后顺序逐一翻译。前后不连贯，层次不清晰，逻辑性不强。因此应认真思考材料，找到所要表达的主旨文意及线索，在线索引导下通畅地表达内容，增加可读性。为此，应注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示过度及连接的词汇，使之有较强的感情色彩。用对

对每一个句子都尽可能避免语法错误。通常错处出在：

2.1动词错误

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（划线部分改为Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（划线部分改为coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遗漏处加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遗漏处加are）

（3）时态错误。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（划线部分改为comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（划线部分改为starts）

书面表达可能出现多种时态，但特定时间背景下时态相同。如人事物现状的介绍，应以一般现在时为主；过去的介绍，应以一般过去时为主；日记应以一般过去时为主；通知应以一般现在时为主。千万不要随心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面积失分。

（4）语态错误。由于汉语被动色彩不浓，因此英语表达易受影响，该用而不用，不该用而用be动词。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遗漏处加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（划线处去掉was）

还有喜欢在动词前面加be动词。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（划线处去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（划线处去掉are）

2.2名词单复数混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（划线处改为800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（划线处改为ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠词错误

冠词属小词，重视不够，影响表达。

1）How do you spell the computer？（划线处去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（划线处去掉the）用准

用准确地道的语言，不能生涩难懂，不合英语表达习惯。常见现象如下：

3.1单词堆砌

写句子，用语不准，而根据汉语句序进行相应的英语单词堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（错）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（错）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重视掌握单词，写作时碰到生词难句就委婉地去解释，用模糊定义，语言生涩难懂，文意混乱，表达不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（错）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英语作文，受汉语影响，虽语法正确，却不符英语表达习惯。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（错）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（错）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

语言转换功在平时。简明扼要，表达清楚，是关键所在。冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初学写作要简单完整清楚地表达，就要把握两个关系：

4.1完整不一定就句式复杂

一味追求新、奇、特、难，容易出错。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（错）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（错）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2简单也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，结构就不完整，句意就不明确。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（错）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（错）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考试是根据内容和表达给分的，要点齐全，是直接因素。必须注意要点来源：

标题。有些需要标题，却粗心漏掉不写，造成失分。书写标题应力求简洁明了，有较强概括力和针对性，并注意单词字母大小写。

格式。不少应用文需要正确的格式，如通知的开头，常常要交待通知的对象；日记开头，常常交待时间和天气；信件的左上角必须注明写信人的地址和时间，下一行要顶格写上称呼，正文结束后，要有结束语，并签名。

正文。这是全文要点集中之处，应认真思考材料含义，理清大意，将所有要点逐一落实，并检查有无遗漏。

常识性。原材料不一定反应，但仍然重要，既属内容，又承上启下，增强文章可读性。如写通知结尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；写参观欢迎词开头可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，结尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介绍结束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；写信结尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必须注意原则：不多不少。该有的不少，不该有的不写。整洁

文章写好后，应认真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小写及标点符号错误，誊写应尽可能书写工整，布局美观。卷面整洁清爽就会增加得高分机会。

总之，了解、掌握、运用好以上五个方面，就容易得高分。

第五篇：高考书面表达

书面表达范文

例文一：

据说，中国有一半人在吸烟。许多男孩和女孩都有吸烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。

众所周知，吸烟对人身体是有害的。越来越多的人们认识到这个问题的严重性，但他们仍然乐此不疲。

吸烟能导致很多疾病。由于吸烟，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸烟导致的最严重的疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。

为了保证人们的身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。请立即停止吸烟吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.Smoking causes many illnesses.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happiness in my mind?

Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.例文三：

进入2l世纪，环保是引起世界各国重视的大问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对环境污染的看法。

1．污染现已成为全球问题。空气、河流、海洋、土壤的污染对人类和动物十分有害。

2．列举2-3种产生污染的原辆以及由此造成的严重后果。

3．希望人们都能采取有效办法，控制污染，净化环境，保护生态平衡。（平衡：balance）In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考题）

春节是中国的传统节日。请以Spring Festival为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一下人们是

如何欢度春节的。

作文必须包括以下要点：

1.春节是一个家人团聚的节日，人们从四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成员坐在桌边，享用丰盛美味的食物。

3.在春节期间，孩子们会很开心。他们可以整天地玩耍，不用上学。而且，他们还能

得到许多压岁钱。

4.春节也是人们休闲和走亲访友的日子。人们彼此祝福“新年快乐”，并希望来年有好

运。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.例文五：（2011高考题）

在一个人的成长过程中，常会遇到烦恼。其中之一就是我们的父母亲经常翻看我们的书包和日记。假设你将参加校园英语演讲比赛，请就这一现象写一篇英语演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

有些同学觉得父母不尊重我们，没有给我们足够的空间。我们不必为此苦恼，因

为我们还不够成熟，有时，无法作出自己的决定，我们需要父母亲的帮助。同时，我们必须和父母亲进行交流和沟通。毕竟，我们要成长。我们要发展自己的个性。我们

需要有自己的观点、自己的想法以及自己对事物的判断。但总有一天，我们会相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.Thank you.例文六（2010高考题）

假如你是王红，今年暑假即将毕业。请以第一人称给某公司林先生写一封80-100字的英文求职信。内容要点可用不同方式表达。

求职信必须包括如下要点：

1.今年暑假，我将于东方职业学校毕业。

2.在校期间我的专业是计算机科学。我曾获得计算机辅助设计（CAD）一等奖。

3.去年，在业余时间，我在一家公司兼职，我学了很多东西。

4.我想在贵公司申请一份职位。我相信我能胜任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考虑我的申请。期待着公司能给我一次面试的机会。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.Yours faithfully,Wang Hong

假如你是李华，请根据提示的要点写一份60～80词的请假条给张老师。

要点：

1、李华病了，感觉不舒服，头痛，疲劳，不想吃东西。

2、从昨晚开始就这样，看了医生。

3、医生仔细地给他作了检查，说他患了重感冒，开了药。要求他卧床休息两、三天，多喝开水。

4、今天不能到校，请假两天

Dear Miss Zhang,I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

（1）你怎样得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成为他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何帮助他；

（4）你盼望他的回复。

注意：（1）电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数；[来源:学&科&网][来源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）词数：100左右。

Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua