环球雅思IELTS_SCHOOL_全真版本写作训练班专用教材

第一篇：环球雅思IELTS_SCHOOL_全真版本写作训练班专用教材

(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test

难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习)

1.Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research.(不能缩写)

2.Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed.(英式美式拼法不能混用)

3.We must do our best(utmost)to protect(preserve)animals.(词汇用法太嫩)4.It is clear(manifest)that pornographic shows do harm to(undermine, endanger, jeopard)the lives of lots of youngster(adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰

5.Nowadays(In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6.In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7.We are confronted with many environmental problems.They are becoming more and more serious.(句式,语法)

8.The traffic problem is becoming worse.We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9.So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard to fight crime!(不应该带感情色彩)

10.We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, “Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.”(文化背景,圣经不可用)

难点二: No specific topic pool.题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:雅思话题不会超出十大类别: 文明类: Tourism Education Government

Women and families Language and culture

Technology and the Media Development and globalization 野蛮类: Crime Animals

Environmental problem

难点三:中国大陆考生对很多话题不熟悉,考场上思考素材花费时间太长

对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法

A 分类法

Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to study in universities.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice to their studies.Some people think old building should be destroyed and replaced to make room for new constructions.To what extent do you agree or disagree

B 替代法

Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century.Do you agree or disagree

Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the road.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think animal experimentation should be banned because they are cruel.To what extent do you agree or disagree

C 综合法

Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate the teachers' job performance.Others think this will lead to loss of discipline and respect.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think the government should pay for education and health care.Others think this is not the responsibility of the government.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.D 裸奔法(无想法时的救命稻草)

People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face.What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole

Unlike many other countries, police officers in the UK do not carry guns.Some people think this is a wise policy.To what extent do you agree or disagree 往以下这些方面考虑论点取第一个字母缩写: TM STREEC $

Technology & Efficiency Environment & Health Mind & Soul Employment & Competition Society & Crime Culture & Population Time & Space Money & Fun Rights & Responsibilities TM STREEC $

Tech & Ef Envi & Heal Mind & soul Empl & Comp Soci & Crim Cul &Plp Times & Spa Mo & Fun Ri & Resp

难点四: 中国考生掌握语法的深度和广度让人惊叹,但是使用时准确度不够

对策: 雅思写作“语法的七宗罪”改错练习

1.Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee.(n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.(v.原型不可做主语)

2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.(被动语态)

2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.(主谓一致)

2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.(时态)3.Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.副词

4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create.介词

4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5.Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6.These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed.逗号

7.These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)

Cause and effect 因果关系标志词1)表示原因的 because, as, since, due to, owing to(画横线的连接词请重点掌握)

2)表示结果的 hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果)so…that…(如此…以致…)

E.g.The ecological problems are being aggravated.Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment.生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染.Exemplification 举例关系标志词 …is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例)for instance.(比如…)To Illustrate…(例如…)As an illustration…(作为例证…)

e.g.The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate.Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films.亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影.Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词 While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contrast e.g.Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could often perform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)

现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务.e.g.The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced.In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词 Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管 ,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)

e.g.1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词 A is best characterized by…(A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…)A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g.A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals.Supposition 假设论证, 标志词 provided that…(如果)given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要)if…, suppose that…

e.g.Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued.e.g.Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside.Modification 修饰关系标志词 that, which, who

In this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料 IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型

说明

A 内容分为三部分:开头段通用模板,主体段为加分句型,结尾段为模板;B 为了方便同学使用,又分为进步类,倒退类,中间类和解决类模板;C 这里职包括作者Patrick 在IELTS 写作大作文里实际写作种经过检验确实实用的模板,不常用的或者小作文的模板没有包括.开头段通用模板

进步类

1)In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas.在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2)Today we have embarked upon the …era.今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked upon the information era.3)Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent of the information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类

4)But A is attended/accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction of many lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5)Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound social changes have com some sufferings;and …is very prominent among them.随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.6)With the incidence(发生率)of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.…的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.例句:With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.7)In this day and age, it is standard practice for … to do something.今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work.8)Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.9)The issue of … has been thrown into sharp relief/focus.…引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into sharp relief.10)However, there is no consensus on …yet.或者 people hold divergent

/contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者 people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.11)Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate.某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate.12)Whether…has triggered/sparked/aroused/given rise to spirited debate.是否应

该…引起了激烈的辩论,同样的意思还可以用以下三个常用句型表达 …Whether…is a highly debatable issue.或者Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者 Whether…is a controversial issue.例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers'

performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13)Some(people)assert/contend/argue/hold/maintain/claim/think/believe that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the

countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities.一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14)…is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lower costs.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型

前进类 profit from

People the world over can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of B

Advertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3 something plays a pivotal /key role in …

It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4enable /allow somebody to do something

Cultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new society successfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt to

New immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can get access to something 或者 can access something 或者can utilize something

In this day and age, many individuals can access the Internet via computer or mobile phone.倒退类

1…is attended by /…is accompanied by

The staggering advancement of technology is attended by server pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…

The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from A

The proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued with

In present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of something

Modern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impels somebody to do…

Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词

We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology.其中 We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保… 我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the(Chinese academy of Social Science)reveal that…

如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and Greenpeace

A recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.be addicted to /preoccupied with something

In present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling.something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of … The population explosion is the chief culprit in/ the root cause of water scarity.11be confronted with something

In contemporary society, we are confronted with a plethora of violent and pornographic TV shows.present/pose a threat to…

In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity.be awash with/be inundated with something

The media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensue

If parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue.15With the incidence of … hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiable

Experimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/ unjustifiable.中间类

1…on the grounds that…

Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on something

In this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live, play and learn.A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance B

The advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B.Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of B

In an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…

It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类 give priority to something

The government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to B

The government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable to

Without proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵)

Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned rather than condoned.it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that… 或者 something is of paramount/ overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.abide by/ comply with

It is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.something requires/ necessitates /call for…

The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe.distinguish between A and B

Many youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure that Parents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板

1)based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…

2)In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段)作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看…

3)The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something, prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)

IELTS 作文常用同义词

人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens

在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age 解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat

破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个语气最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications 危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers

明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious 从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about 积极的,好的 beneficial, advantageous 消极的,坏的 baneful, detrimental

好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit

无处不在的 prevalent, pervasive

大量的 a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of(后面跟可数名词复数)a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)

增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor 保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich

污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call for

Patrick 考试经验分享(test-taking tips)

有人提出先写task2再写task1.这种说法听起来好像很新颖,其实是在回避考试的不

确定性,与先写task1再写task2的做法没有本质的优劣之分,那么到底应该如何决定写作顺序呢

根据我参加雅思考试的经验以及学生的反馈,在拿到考卷以后,不管一个人心理素质多好, 绝对没有人只会看一道题就开始写作.任何考生都一定会本能的现把两道题都很快的看一遍再开始写其中的一道题.同学们很快地看完两道题目以后,如果确实觉得task2地题目自己准备地很充分,有信心在40分钟左右写出一篇自己满意地议论文,那么就应该先写task2, 因为task2占总分地60%.但是如果看完两道题之后,你觉得task2地题目自己准备得不充分或者一时想不出足够得内容,那么我强烈建议大家先写task1.这是因为task1的结尾段往往需要从图表中总结出深层的关系,这个task1结尾段深层关系对评分是很重要的.而 task2的结尾段,与一些老师所持的观点相反,除了“discuss both views and give your own opinion”这一类题型之外,其他题型的结尾段只起概括上下文作用,在实际评分中并不是那么重要.因为考官在评阅大家的task2结尾段时,一般都清楚多数同学写这一段的时候时间已经时第58分钟甚至59分50秒了,所以考官知道task2的结尾段时无法准确反映一个考生的写作水平的,评分的时候互放松对结尾段的要求,而重点打击开头段和主体段.第二讲十大全真版本范文,词汇与模板

一、Education 类

Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' job

performance.Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline.Discuss and give your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)

In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out

performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work.But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students, people hold divergent views.Some argue that students should be allowed to do so.Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work.Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)

Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers' work.First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading.It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments.Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job.Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)

However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons.In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating the teachers to improve their lectures.Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student.In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance.Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching.In the third place, a measure of

students' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life.The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)

In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers'

performance might have some potential drawback.However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice.On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is in the best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.Education类8分范文

Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.Do you agree or disagree 题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的“看着容易写好太难”的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别“families without large amounts of money” 和“poor families” 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指“low-income families” 还包括“middle-income families”, 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的“穷人的孩子早当家不同”;另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和 topic sentences(范文里用横线标明)

关键词:income gaps 指收入差距 income inequality 指收入不均 intergenerational 两代人之间的 turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的“打翻身仗” offspring 孩子

counterpart 相对应的人(或事务)meritocratic society 说白了就是“凭本事吃饭的社会” self-restraint 自制能力 infancy 婴儿期 frugality 勤俭 financial strains 说白了就是缺钱, 名词 well-off/affluent(adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词 initiative 主动性 well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多 tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的 deal with,大家挑着用啦

It is widely accepted that we have been living in a “the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer” age in terms of income gaps within a generation.However, to this day, there has been no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational.Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largely grow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially.Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society.(Thesis statement)

First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint.These

individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously.Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection.Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiences of parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue.Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financial strains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal.Hence they end up being better able to

manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents.It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all.To the former group of

children most desirable things in life have to be “earned”—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled.On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part.This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams.Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents.Well-acquainted with all the disadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get their

families upwardly mobile.These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and(subsequently)occupational expectations for their children.As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents.Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave.They keep tabs on their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically.The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise.To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little.Rather, hands-on experience in comprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more

essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities.Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇

Education:

1)培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展 promote the student's physical, mental(或者用intellectual)and emotional development 心理健康

psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns)学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun)儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun)给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者 motivate(vt)the student to do something 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths

2)传授知识 impart(vt)/inculcate(vt)knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念 instill(vt)high moral values(注以values 复数比试价值观)给学生以灵感 stimulate the students;thought 或者 give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/ upbringing 教学法 teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do

something 适应能力 adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握 students' grasp/ command(nouns)of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill

3)限制创造力的发展 extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt)creativity(noun)打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts)the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格 mould(BrE,vt)one's character 责任感 a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器

student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas.死记硬背

learn thing by rote.4)记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律 memorize equations, formulas, theorems and

laws(nouns)应用apply(vt)盲从 follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv)用填鸭式教学教育学生 force-feed(vt)the students 为了记忆而记忆 memorize for memorization' s own sake

5)把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现)segregate(vt)students 来自于其他同学的压力 peer pressure 逆境 adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神 team spirit(noun)独立思考: think independently(adv)

6)在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题 encourage students to think critically(adv)学生的反馈 students' feedback 或者 students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance

7)学生学习的各门功课加在一起 curriculum(noun)具体的一门课的内容 syllabus 课外活动 extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影 A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief(nouns)不遵守纪律的(形容词)学生 disruptive/ unruly students

8)理论只是theoretical knowledge 通才 generalist 专才 specialist 全面发展的well-rounded /versatile 为社会健康发展做贡献 contribute to societal well-being/ welfare(注意这里welfare不是“福利”的意思)

9)大学学科的分类可以分为:人文学科(包括文学,历史,语言学等)humanities 社会科学(包括政治,经济,社会学等)social sciences 艺术(包括音乐,雕塑等)arts 文

科的总称也可以称为 liberal arts 或者liberal studies 理科(包括物理,化学,生物等)sciences 工科(包括工程,自动化等)engineering 大学里的任何一个学科都可以叫做一个discipline 基础科学basic sciences 应用科学applied sciences 小学教育

primary-level education 中学教育 secondary-level education 大学教育 tertiary-level education 职业教育 vocational education/ training 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths

Education 类模板 In this day and age, it is universally acknowledged that education is one of the key

determinant of individual success.众所周知,在当代教育是一个人成功的决定因素之一.2In contemporary society, education plays a pivotal role in individual development.在当代社会,教育在个人发展中扮演着至关重要的角色.Education类名人名言

1.“A child miseducated is a child lost.”-John F.Kennedy

2.“Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire.”—W.B.Yeats

3.“Technology is just a tool.In terms of getting the kids working together and motivating them.The teacher is the most important.”-Bill Gates.4.“Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.”—Aristotle 5.The solution to adult problems tomorrow depends on enlarged measure upon how our children grow up today.“ Margaret Mead

最后用最近写的一篇短文作为教育类话题的结束,短文基本概括了我在这个阶段对于好的教育标准的理解.There is no unanimous consensus yet on what constitutes a sound teaching methodology.However, in the new millennium, it is arguable that fine schooling, be it primary-level, secondary-level or tertiary-level, has four common characteristics:(1)Advantageous education encourages the student to think independently and critically, and empowers the student to evaluate the teacher's performance openly, as opposed to force-feeds students and renders them capable only of spitting back predigested ideas;(2)genuinely beneficial educational institutions aim to produce graduates with integrity.They not only inculcate knowledge, they instill moral values an principle as well;(3)Education should recognize the correlation and interaction between varied disciplines and adopts a multi-disciplinary curriculum;(4)In a healthy and stimulating educational environment, the imparting of theoretical knowledge is invariably synthesized with the cultivation of practical，employable skills;(5)Schools should not be segregated on any grounds, racial, gender or intellectual.二、Technology & media 类

科技类2/26 people today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face.What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole

开头段(不少于3+1句)The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes.And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online.This sweeping trend of going about everyday business in the virtual world has triggered a marked decline in face-to-face contact between people.Thus, it is essential that we identify the implication of this trend on both individuals and society as a whole.英文里表达”从事“一件事情 go about/ conduct/ perform 表示影响可以替换的单词: Implication /repercussions, impact, influence

主体段1(不少于1+6句)The impact of this phenomenon on individuals is profound.First, Individual efficiency in business transaction and banking will be greatly enhanced.And those who dread shopping are spared the chore of browsing around in shops.Secondly, the increasingly sedentary lifestyle will engender a higher incidence of ailment.More overweight people means more patients suffering from cardiovascular diseases such as vein hardening, diabetes and hypertension.Thirdly, the absence of face-to-face contact may induce distrust between business partners.An inherent sense of disbelief is apt to ruin a telecommunicated negotiation when negotiators can only see videos of each other transmitted via the Internet.表示”提高,增进“, enhance boost 要表达”产生“的意思,后面是好的结果,用bring about 后面是不好的结果用engender 后面是抽象名词比如心理活动,用 induce 破坏undermine, jeopardize, endanger, ruin, wreck ,havoc on, spoil, devastate

主体段2(不少于1+6句)This trend also has widespread repercussions on society as a whole.In the first place, the burgeoning e-commerce will, doubtless, boost corporate efficiency immeasurably.And higher efficiency means more earnings and less costs for businesses.In the second place, online fraud, be it banking or trading, retail or wholesale, is sure to abound in the cyberspace.We must search for practicable and effectual means of curbing it.In the third place, the proliferation of e-commerce may exacerbate man's overdependence on technology.And that can render our lives unspontaneous and our tempo of life too fast and furious.让…进一步恶化 aggravate exacerbate worsen

结尾段(不少于2句)In sum, there is no denying that the virtual world is exerting influence on our lives in various ways.It is a key that we take advantage of the upside of this trend and in the meantime mitigate its downside as much as possible.消极的影响 baneful influence/ pernicious influence 积极的影响 beneficial influence/ advantageous influence 深远的影响 profound influence

8分范文科技类

Many people work at home using modern technology today.Some people think only workers benefit from it, not the employers.To what extend do you agree or disagree 折衷式,四段式,大负小正

Progressions in telecommunications technology have enabled the practice of

telecommuting.Which means worker can conduct their assigned tasks without have to commute back and forth to work regularly.This emerging working pattern has profound implication on our work and life.Some assert that only workers, not the employers, can be beneficiaries of telecommuting.Personally, I think their view has both merit and demerit.Granted, telecommuting can bring about numerous benefits to the employees.To begin with, employees do not have to live with the constant fear that their boss may look over their shoulder, as their work is supervised from far away and in more laissez faire fashions.There is no need for them to get super well-groomed and they can ”slack off“ a bit when the work-induced stress is too intense to bear.Furthermore, telecommuting can spare workers the everyday chore of traveling back and forth to work.And this, in turn, helps them to cut down on costs of bus fare, fuel or extravagant work clothes.Yet on the other hand, it would be erroneous if we fail to acknowledge that employers can profit from telecommuting, too.In the first place, less constraint, less peer pressure at work, no office politics and more flexible schedules can boost employee morale and enhance productivity.Empirical evidence abounds in this respect that more occupational freedom can, more often than not, lead to stronger vocational motivation and more innovative ideas.In the second place, telecommuting is an economical option for the employer.A telecommuting work force can help business-owners substantially curtail the overhead costs, such as the costs of rent and utilities.Thirdly, the fact that workers can telecommute via the worldwide communications network allows employer to recruit

people from remote locations or even half way around the globe.This markedly augments the labor pool of businesses.To conclude, I concede that telecommuting can bring about a variety of boons to employees.However, it would be unjustifiable if we overlooked the advantages

telecommuting can spawn on the employers' side.On balance, I am convinced that we should strive to seek out the most effective approach to exploit this win-win situation.8分范文媒体类

媒体类 We can get knowledge from news.But some people think we should not trust the journalists.What do you think are the important qualities that a journalist should have 题目要求分析现象的一个方面, 写成5段式

开头段3+1: paraphrase the topic + thesis statement(转述题目+主旨句)转述题目(不少于3句)

In the information era, news plays a crucial role in our work, leisure as well as family life.It informs us about the current world affairs and affords us knowledge, entertainment and conversation pieces.On the other hand, the credibility of news and journalists is a highly controversial issue.Hence, it is essential that we determine the most important qualities of a trustworthy journalist.主体段第一段 1+3: topic sentence+3 supporting sentence(主题句+3句论证)

(主题句)First and foremost, a trustworthy journalist must be an individual with honesty and integrity.(论证主题句3句)In this day and age, there are a host of temptations to lure the reporter into fabricating stories, when confronted with such temptations, only professionals with high moral values can adhere to their code of ethics.Hence, the

courage to always pursue and expose the truths about newsworthy events is really crucial to a journalist.主体段第二段 1+3 topic sentence+3 supporting sentence(主题句+3句论证)

(主题句)Secondly, determination and tenacity distinguish fine journalists from mediocre ones.(论证主题句3句)In today's world, regarded as the conscience of society, a great many journalists find it increasingly difficult for them to come up with factual news stories.It is not unusual that a journalist receives severe warnings or even death threats from gang members or business tycoons when they set out to trace crimes and business scandals.Hence, it takes immense determination and perseverance to be a genuinely dependable journalist.主体段第三段 1+3 :topic sentence+3 supporting sentence(主题句+3句论证)

(主题句)Lastly, a trustworthy journalist must be able to present keen observations on the covered events.(论证主题句3句)To produce truly instructive coverage, a reporter must possess the capacity to analyze and synthesize the information he/she gathers.This requires penetrating insights and outstanding analytical skills.Only when an individual meets such requirements can he/she create in-depth coverage of events.结尾段2句

To conclude, to be a reliable source of information, a journalist must possess self-discipline, tenacity and insights.Otherwise, his professionalism would be questionable indeed.7分范文媒体类

媒体类 Some people contend that advertising only has positive impact on society.To what extend do you agree or disagree with their views 折衷式写法,四段式

开头段,(不少于4句)

Advertising has become one of the most pervasive industries in present-day society.Today, vast billboards have turned into an indispensable part of our cityscape.Moreover, the proliferation of TV commercial, website ad banner and flyer also exerts profound

influence on our lives.Some argue that advertising has only beneficial impact on our lives.Personally, I think their view has both merit and demerit.主体段1(小的方面,不少于5句)

Granted, advertising may carry some drawbacks.First and foremost, email spamming could fill up your email box in no time.And many of the junk emails would get your PC infected with viruses, worm or Trojan horses.Furthermore, today a considerable

proportion of advertisements may be fabricated.They convey misleading information that defrauds people of their money.表示利与弊的英文:Advantages and disadvantages / strengths and weaknesses/ the upside and downside/ pros and cons/ boons and banes.主体段2(大的方面,不少于7句)

However, the boons advertising can bring about to our lives far outweigh its

disadvantages.In the first place, advertisements get us well-informed about the latest products.They help us narrow down the choice on our shopping lists and make shopping more cost-effective and less time-consuming.In the second place, elaborate

advertisements can be a true art form.There can be no denying that genuinely creative ads can brighter up our lives immensely.Last but not least, non-profit advertising in the print as well as the electronic media can motivate people to contribute to our society.With the help of such ads, charities and environmental conservationists can raise enough funding for the poor and environmental preservation.结尾段(不少于三句)

In the final analysis, I concede that advertising does not come without some banes.However, the pro of advertising far outweigh its cons.On balance, I am convinced that we should do is to get this industry better-regulated and ensure that this industry can afford us even more blessing in years to come.Technology & media 词汇

10)尖端的技术 cutting-edged(adj)technology 信息爆炸 information explosion/ information overload 信息时代 the information age/ the information era 无联网被广泛的使用 the proliferation of the Internet 科技创新及发展 technological innovations/ inventions/ advances/ progressions(nouns)提高效率 augment/ enhance/ boost(vts)efficiency 提高生产效率 augment/ enhance/ boost(vts)productivity 减少人力的机器(计算机发明之前的技术)labor-saving machinery

11)取代人力的机器 labor-replacing machinery 自动化 automation(noun)/ automated(adj)生物技术 biotechnology 克隆cloning(noun)clone(verb)远程通讯

telecommunications(noun)太空探索(名词)space exploration 人的基因构成 one's genetic makeup/ one's DNA programming Media

12)实事current affairs 新闻界 the press 印刷媒体(如报纸,杂志)the print media 报道新闻的机构 news outlets 电子媒体 the electronic media 无处不在的 prevalent/ ubiquitous/ pervasive 充斥着… be awash with/ be inundated with / be saturated with something 审查 censor 删除 delete/eliminate/ excise(vts)过多的暴力与色情内容 excessive/ gratuitous violent and pornographic contents

13)有误导性的 misleading/ misrepresented/ distorted 诈骗性的 fraudulent 虚假的false/ bogus 报道非常详细的细节 report something in graphic detail 媒体炒作 media hype 夸大事实 exaggerate things/ sensationalize things/ blow things out of all

proportion(最后一个口语化说法,但作文也可用)客观公正的 objective and balanced 揭露 expose/reveal

14)侵犯隐私 violate/intrude on/ infringe on /someone ' s privacy 毁坏某人的名誉

tarnish/sully/smear/besmirch one's reputation 狗仔队 paparazzi(复数名词,不能加s)名人 a celebrity/ celebrities(plural)丑闻 scandals 掩盖(丑闻或罪行等)cover up/ gloss over/whitewash

15)不客观的,不公正的 biased/skewed/unobjective 如实描写 factual accounts 可信的reliable/trustworthy/dependable 及时的 up-to-date/ up-to-the-minute(后者比前者更及时)信息量大的 informative 娱乐性强的 entertaining 有新闻价值 newsworthy 道德准则 code of ethic 或者code of conduct

Technology & Media 模板

In present-day society, technology is advancing/ progressing by leaps and bounds in a host of arenas.在当代,科技在在众多的领域告诉的发展.In this day and age, technology is transforming/ revolutionizing the way we live, work, learn and play.在当代,科技正彻底的改变我们的生活,工作和学习的方式.Technology is like a two-edge sword—it has generated boons as well as banes to our lives.科技就像一把双刃剑,给我们的生活既带来了好处也带来了坏处.Progression in … technology have enabled us to … …科技的进步使我们可以… The media are the most pervasive industries in today's world and they have profound

impact on our lives.今天,媒体是传播最广泛的产业之一而且对我们的生活产生深远的影响.Since the advent of the information era, the media have assumed on increasingly pivotal role in our lives.随着信息时代的到来,媒体正扮演着一种越来越重要的角色.Technology & Media 名人名言

1.”The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people, but that people will begin to think like machines.“—Albert Einstein

2.”As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make really big differences in how people live and work.“—Sergey Brin

3.”He who controls the media, controls the minds“—Rupert Murdock

4.”Advances in computer technology and the Internet have changed the way America works, learns and communicates.The Internet has become an integral part of America's economic, political and social life.“—Bill Clinton

5.”The reason is not political or economic but technological—technologies that flowed directly from advances in basic science.“—Stephen Hawking

三、Tourism 类范文 International tourism has become the biggest industry in the world.Some people think it cause tension between people from different culture.Others thing it leads to understanding between countries.To what extend do you agree or disagree

International tourism has been consolidating its status as the foremost export industry in the world.A recent study conducted by the World Tourism Organization(WTO)reveal that international tourism accounted for approximately 11 percent of the world export of goods and services.Yet when it comes to whether this burgeoning industry is a blessing or a curse in terms of international relations, people hold divergent views.Some people argue that it promotes understanding between countries while others contend that it only breed discord.Personally, I think both their views have merit.Granted, international tourism makes for communication between the tourists and local communities.In the first place, it affords tourists opportunities to experience a foreign culture firsthand.Touring another country is a multi-sensory experience(tourists can see, hear, touch or even smell the exotic things at the destination spots)and it is much more interactive than just peering through a TV or PC screen at another culture.In the second place, the empirical knowledge gained during an overseas journey can help eliminate many of the stereotype tourists have been believing in about the host country.For

instance, a brief sojourn in Saudi Arabia can surely bring a Christian into the realization that not all Muslims are terrorists.On the contrary, most of them are nurturing parents and loving siblings who have strong religious convictions distinct from Christianity.In the third place, international tourism substantially boosts the economy of the recipient country.It generates employment opportunities in retail, hospitality and transportation sectors and augments the tax revenue of the local government.These economic boons can enhance the vitality of the local communities and help build trust between nations.Nonetheless, international tourism may also create tension between the tourists and

residents in tour destination.To begin with the influx of tourists may be an intrusion upon the lives of many local inhabitants.Tourism is a manifestation of the human desire for variety and for exploration.The majority of international tourists on guided tours value the local for mere photo opportunities and think of everything they see, such as indigenous costumes and accessories worn by the natives, in terms of souvenir potential.Moreover, tourists' sense of superiority, in extreme instances, engenders tourist vandalism and even sexual exploitation, which are utterly disruptive to the local community.Then, the co modification of indigenous heritage makes everything seem fake to the international tourists.Here in Asia it is not unusual that scared rituals are deprived of their spiritual dimensions and the aggressive local vendors leave the tourists apprehensive.Next, international backpackers can be very vulnerable to fraud, mugging or even terrorist attacks due to their unfamiliarity with the destination spots.Lastly, colossal touring populations between countries may severely undermine biodiversity and ecological equilibrium.It is manifest that the trail of non-biodegradable litter international tourists leave behind them and the colossal amounts of fossil fuel consumed in transportation constitute grave environmental hazards to tourist destinations and beyond.In the final analysis, I concede that international tourism produces opportunities for different nations to communicate and understand their common humanity.However, it may also result in conflict between countries.On balance, I am convinced that we should encourage mutual sympathy and respect between the tourists and the local denizens and in the meantime promote more culturally-sensitive sustainable tourism.Tourism类词汇

16)旅游景点 tourist attraction/ tourist spots/ places of interest 开阔眼界 push back/ expand one's vision/ horizons(注意 horizons 必须是复数)游客与当地人互动

Tourists can interact with the locals 促进文化交流 promote cultural communication 吸引 draw/ attract/ appeal to(vts)/ be a magnet for somebody 亲身体验(名词)

first-hand experience(noun)多种感观体验的(如听觉,触觉等)multi-sensory(adj)冲突 conflict(noun, vi+with)争端 discord/ dissension

17)把游客和当地人隔绝 seclude / isolate(vts)the tourists from the locals 商业化

commercialize/ commodify(vts)欺骗游客的手段 tourist traps 间接体验(比如通过电视或者互联网,名词)second-hand experience/ vicarious experience 文化遗产

cultural heritage 互联网不会让旅游业过时 The Internet will not render tourism obsolete.Tourism 模板

With international tourism booming, the issue of …has been thrown into sharp relief.随着旅游业的发展,…的问题成为了公众注意的焦点.In this day and age, the burgeoning international tourism has immensely boosted the

economic and cultural exchanges between countries the world over.在当代, 快速发展的旅游业促进了世界上不同国家之间的经济与文化交流.Tourism 名人名言

”The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.“-Saint Augustine ”As the traveler who has once been from home is wiser than he who never left his own doorstep, so a knowledge of one other culture should sharpen our ability to scrutinize more steadily, to appreciate lovingly, our own“—Margaret Meadquotes

四、Government 类

范文

政府类 Some people think scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government instead of private companies.To what extent do you agree or disagree The advancement of modern sciences has spawned a host of boons in our lives.It is no exaggeration that human life has been fundamentally revolutionized by the physical, chemical, biological, environmental or astronomical discoveries and creations over the past few decades.Yet when it comes to who should play the central role in conducting scientific research, people hold divergent views.Some contend that it is the government, rather than the private firms, who should carry out and regulate scientific research.Personally, I think their view has both merit and demerit.Grandly, the government has a crucial role to play in scientific research.First, corporations are, entities in constant pursuit of maximum profit at the lowest possible cost.As a

consequence, corporate scientific research, if left unfettered, often compromise ethics for the sake of shareholder wealth.Only the government has the regulatory and enforcement power to ensure that scientific research does not sacrifice public interests for private gains.Secondly, government coordination can help optimize the economic resources allocated to scientific research.Contemporary scientific research often requires colossal amounts of money and substantial researching manpower.Government supervision makes for effective collaboration and healthy competition between companies, warns the privates firms about the potential perils of ill-conceived projects and set priorities—in terms of societal interests.Nonetheless, it is manifest that corporate scientific research also holds many inherent advantages.To begin with, given the profit-pursuing nature of business, corporate

research typically has well-defined guidelines and objectives for every mission.Unlike government projects that have to weigh and balance competing interests, company research is almost always focused, well-scheduled, well-budgeted, and result-oriented.Secondly, due to the profitability of company research, corporate professionals performing scientific research mostly find themselves better rewarded financially than researchers working for government projects.And this fact, in turn, renders these professionals more motivated in their laboratories.Lastly, private firms are more meritocratic and less likely to be plagued with the bureaucracy characterizing many government agencies.Therefore, corporate research is often more efficient and more productive than its governmental counterpart.In the final analysis, I concede that government direction can crown scientific research with an ethical compass.Nevertheless, corporate companies hold definite advantages over the government in scientific research with respect to efficiency and productivity.On balance, I am convinced that it should be the private firms who perform scientific research whereas government scrutiny can ensure that these companies are aware of the ethical stakes involved and do not lose sight of the public interests while pursuing their goals.Government 类词汇

Government

18)当局 authorities 老百姓 citizens/ the citizenry(全体公民,不可数)规范,管理

regulate/administer/oversee(vts)实施implement 立法 legislate/make laws 严禁

strictly prohibit/ ban altogether 严格的法律 stringent laws/ legislation 监督

scrutiny(noun)/ scrutinize(vt)/ monitor(vt)

19)为…拨款 allocate money to something/ subsidize(vt)/ be a patron of / invest in/ finance(vt)/ fund(vt)dedicate money to something 预算budget 税收tax revenue 政府在某方面的开支 the government spending/ expenditure on something 削减curtail 增加augment 当务之急 priority 把…当成当务之急 give priority to something.责任

obligation/ responsibility

20)军备竞赛 arms race自卫 self-defense 国土安全 national security/ homeland security 缺乏远见的政策 short-sighted policy 扩张 expansion/ aggression 谋求霸权 seek/ pursue(vts)hegemony 恶性循环 a vicious circle 地区不稳定因素 destabilizing factor 规章制度 rules and regulations

21)太空竞赛 space race 武器 arms/ weapons/ armaments 下岗工人 lay-off workers/ downsize workers 失业 unemployment/ joblessness 基础设施infrastructure—比如 public transport system 公共交通系统,power grid 电网pipelines 石油和天然气管道

water supply and drainage system 给排水系统等, 民主与开放的政府 a democratic and progressive government

Government 类名人名言

1.”Millions of individual making their own decisions in the marketplace will always allocate resources better than any centralized government.“—Ronald Reagan

2.”The problem is not that people are taxed too little, but that the government spends too much.“—Ronald Reagan

3.”The will of the people is the only legitimate foundation of any government“—Thomas Jefferson

Government 类模板

How the government can optimize its finite financial resources has long been a controversial issue.政府如何优化配置有限的财政资源长期以来一直有争议.There are a multitude of competing claims on the government's limited budget.很多需要钱的领域都在争夺政府的有限预算.Whether the government should allocated money to … has sparked off a spirited controversy.政府是否应该投资…引起了激烈的争论.How the government should administer…has long been an issue open to debate.政府应该如何管理…一直都是有争议的话题.五、Animal 类

范文

Some people think animal experimentation should be stopped because it is cruel.Others think it is necessary for the development of science.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.Animals were friend of foes of humanity at different times of the human history.In modern times, experiments upon animals have long been a breeding ground for spirited debate.Some animal right activists argue that we should ban animal experiments altogether because putting animals through experimentation is unjustifiable on moral grounds.Yet some other people contend that the advancement of science necessitates animal testing.Personally, I believe both their views have merit and demerit.Granted, empirical evidence suggests that many animal experiments are performed

callously without any attention to the discomfort or pain that laboratory mammals endure.First and foremost, improper confinement of test animals such as locking them up in cramped cages is inhumane.It can gravely disrupt natural biological functions of the test animal.Further, the effects of vaccination and vivisection conducted on live mammals can be chilling.They may, in some case, even constitute sheer torture of live animals.However, from a more pragmatic perspective, evidence bounds that animal subjects are still an indispensable part at this point.In the first place, it is manifest that drug

experimentation on live mammals is far more effective than experimentation on bacteria or on other lower species in testing drug safety.Drugs that have severe potential side effects on Homo sapiens must be tested by pharmaceutical companies on live mammals first to ascertain their toxicity.In the second place, in space research, live animals are still the only practical alternative to humans in testing living creature reaction to outer-space experience on a flight not considered to be sufficiently safe for human astronauts.Lastly, lab research about the behavioral tendencies of chimpanzees, gorillas and other members of the primate group is also necessary.It produces outcomes consistently advancing anthropological and genetic studies.To conclude, I concede that experiments upon animals may induce suffering to the test animals.However, I am convinced that there are no feasible alternatives to this

methodology at the current stage of scientific development.On balance, I think that we should allow animals testing to be continued but at the same time we use techniques such as anesthetic to minimize the pain of the test animal.Animals 类词汇

Animals

22)动物权益保护主义者 animal rights activists 医学研究 medical research 残忍的cruel/ merciless/ inhuman/ callous/ brutal 活体解剖 vivisection 麻醉anaesthetic 减轻动物的痛苦 alleviate/ ease animals' pain 宠物是主人的伙伴 pets are companions of their masters 给主人心理安慰 afford their masters consolation and comfort 偷猎

poach(vi,vt)/poaching(noun)某一种事物是没有替代物的 there are no replacement/substitutes/alternatives(单数则去掉s)for something.Animal 类模板

Animals have been friends or foes of humanity at different times of human history.在人类历史的不同阶段,动物曾经是人类的朋友或者敌人.Animals are an integral part of the earth's ecosystem;therefore, animal welfare has long been an issue of intense debate.动物是生态系统的一个不可或缺的部分.因此,动物是否生存良好很久以来一直是引起激烈争议的话题.Animals 类名人名言

The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.—Gandhi

六、Language & culture 类

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语言类 some people think the advantages of the spread of English in the world outweigh its disadvantages.To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the contemporary world, the English language is prevalent in the international political, economic and cultural scenes.Apart from that, it has consolidated its status as the most-studied instrument of communication in hundreds of thousands of educational

institutions.The dominance of English has been a breeding ground for spirited debate not just within the linguistic academic, but also in the press as well as the general public.As I see it, the boons brought about by the spread of English far outweigh the banes.Granted, the proliferation of English does not come without drawbacks.First, it renders a host of indigenous languages obsolete.According to a study conducted by UNESCO，over 200 ethnic languages went extinct in 2004, primarily due to the linguistic assimilation of ethnic minorities into the English language.These languages had crystallized and conveyed unique indigenous traditions, rites, rituals and mores and their extinction

constituted an anthropological disaster.Secondly, the encroachments of English erode the cultural identity of other races.The prevalence of English has a chilling effect on the purity of other languages and it can aggravate the sense of cultural inferiority among the non-native speakers of English.However, the proliferation of English can generate even more benefits.To begin with, English as a global lingual Franca facilitates cross-cultural communication.Today, eight in every ten international conferences designate English as their chief working language;and ninety-eight percent leading scientific journals in the world are published in English or have an English version.Further, the extensive use of a common language has a unifying effect on people who do not speak the same mother tongue.Language barriers naturally engender a measure of distrust or alienation while a shared language makes for a sense of belonging and sympathy.Lastly, the expansion of English also enables people whose native tongue is not English to appreciate the English-speaking cultures more efficiently and more fully.It is manifest that many English-speaking cultures are among the richest and most dynamic cultures in the world.English learners have surely found themselves in an advantageous position in terms of life-enrichment as they can the English literature in the original language, can comprehend Hollywood blockbusters without having to read the minute subtitles and do not rely exclusively upon body language while touring English-speaking destinations anymore.In sum, I concede that the linguistic dominance of English has created some adverse effects on the world cultures.Nonetheless, its spread has produced even more blessings to our lives.On balance, I am convinced that we should sustain the extensive use of English as global language while at the same time do our utmost to honor and preserve other distinct languages and culture.Language & culture 类8分范文

Some people think that people who move to new countries should accept the new culture as their own, rather than live in separate minority groups and in different lifestyles.Do you agree or disagree

分析: cultural anthropology 是我中学时代最喜欢的领域,爱读Margaret Mead 和 Ruth Benedict, 也曾经想过像 Yo Yo Ma 那样去Harvard 学人类学.如果我们真正要了解一个民族,出了在那个国家生活20年,文化人类学应该是最有效的途径.这道题是典型的argumentation,采取折衷式观点(既要接受主流文化,又要保持自身文化特性)会更好写一些,而且让文章更具有critical thinking

高分关键词:acculturation 集体层面上的文化适应 transculturation 个人层面上的文化适应

Cultural diversity 文化多元化 national unity and cohesion 国家的凝聚力

disintegration(noun)瓦解 be culturally assimilated into(移民)成为其目的国文化的有机部分 Successive immigration waves in preceding centuries have rendered numerous countries multi-racial.Over the process, the issue of massive acculturation had been cast into sharp relief.Hence the intense controversy over immigrants' attitudes is toward the recipient culture.Some contend that immigrants should not just cloister themselves in separate minority, but accept the culture of their host countries as their own.Personally, I think this view has both merit and demerit.On the one hand, it is manifest that adjusting themselves to the local culture and mores is vital to the survival, self-sufficiency and success of the internationally-relocated.Fist and foremost, ready availability of the very kinds of food, shelter, clothing and transportation that they were once so used to in their home countries is largely non-existent in their

immigration destinations.Their dietary, dressing, dwelling and transportational preference must be substantially altered to fit into new material environments.Secondly, it is highly improbable that a new immigrant's academic excellence or occupational prowess can get recognized fully if his/her conduct and values are deemed ”foreign“ by his/her teachers, classmates, or supervisors and colleagues.Behavioral, linguistic and conceptual

adaptation to the mainstream culture of the host country ensures that he/she can grow

and prosper academically or professionally.In addition, immigrants' acculturation is key to the national unity and cohesion of their host countries.History has proven repeatedly that multi-racial countries consisting of ethno-centric groups clinging indiscriminately and insensibly to their own values and convictions could rarely avert the fate of disintegration.Yet on the other hand, there can exist disadvantages or perils if immigrants desert their own cultural identities altogether.In the first place, they would suffer severe identity crises if they abandon their own cultural characteristics, which help them validate and re-affirm themselves.And the dreadful sense of rootlessness, insecurity and disorientation, in turn, produces frustration about the transculturation process, depression or the undesired

eventual return to one's home country.In the second place, the voluntary abandonment of their native cultures erodes their affinity for their countries of origin.When attachment to the culture of their home countries is gone, their motherland would be little more than just a geographical proper name to them.Lastly, multi-ethnicity can serve to enrich a nation's culture immensely and total rejection of immigrants' native cultures only undermines the inherent cultural diversity of multi-ethnic nations.Consider the quintessential immigration country—the US, which is often dubbed”tossed salad“ for its marvelous cultural heterogeneity.What if Jewish Americans ceased to commemorate Hanukkah, Italian American restaurateurs removed pastas from their menus and Irish Americans were indifferent to the observance of Saint Patrick's Day

To conclude, I concede that it is in the best interests of the immigrants to get culturally assimilated into their host country.However, it would be a shame if they just turn their backs on their ancestral cultures.Thus, on balance, immigrants ought to make every effort to acclimatize themselves to their host culture;but nevertheless, they should also love, honor and cherish their own cultural backgrounds, which in large characterize themselves.Language & Culture 必备词汇

23)一种可以通用的语言(比如英语)a lingua franca /a universal language/ a global language 英语的广泛应用 the proliferation of English 英语的统治地位 the dominant role/ the ascendancy / the hegemony of English 方言 dialect/vernacular/the indigenous language 小语种将会消亡 Lesser-known language will become

extinct/obsolete 小语种的消亡 the extinction/ demise of lesser-known languages

24)文化遗产包括有形跟无形两种,有形的入历史遗迹,无形的入风俗,仪式,传统道德观念等 Cultural heritage can be divided into two groups, tangible cultural heritage, such as historic sites and intangible heritage, such as customs, rites, rituals and mores, etc.保护 preserve 祖先 forefathers/ ancestors 后代 descendants/posterity(后一个是不可数名词)少数民族 ethnic minorities

25)民族团结 the harmony between ethnic group/ race 文化融合 cultural integration and synthesis 相互影响 interaction 文化多元性 cultural diversity 丰富 enrich 狭隘的观念 insular/provincial/parochial mentality 贬低 deprecated/ denigrate/minimize the importance of /disparage/trivialize/discredit 某事不是一成不变的 something is not set/carved in stone

Language & Culture 模板

Today the cultural communication between different counties and regions has been intensified.今天国家和区域间的文化交流越来越密切.English is, doubtless, the predominant language in today's world and its ascendancy has aroused heated debate in the academia and general public alike.英语无疑是今天世界上影响最光的语言而它的绝对有事地位在学术界和普通公众中都引起了激烈的争论.Language & Culture 类名人名言

”To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.“—Charlemagne ”Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.“—Ruth Benedict

七、Development & Globalization 类

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发展类(建筑物)Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation 's history.However, some people think they should be destroyed to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this day and age, historic buildings still abound in many metropolises where new office complexes and residential developments proliferate.Whereas nearly everyone agrees in principle that historic buildings carry cultural, educational or artistic value, when it comes to the competing interests of preserving historic buildings and constructing new ones, people hold divergent views.Some assert that old buildings should be torn down to create ample room for new constructions.Personally, I think their view has both merit and demerit.Granted, the development of modern cities, both in population size and in functionality, necessitates the removal of certain existing structures whose history can often be traced back to centuries ago.In the first place, new constructions must be proposed and carried out to accommodate the markedly-increasing urban population.Given that almost all the present-day cities are already packed with places of residence, commerce and recreation and the land available for new housing developments is increasingly scarce, some historic buildings must be demolished to make room for more compact, high-rise constructions.Secondly, the fast-paced automated and digitized modern city life has rendered some unremarkable old buildings redundant.Even if we renovated or remodeled these old structures to meet the requirements of contemporary urban life that is best characterized by its dynamism and convenience, the utility of retrofitted old building s would still pale compared to that of the modern buildings tailored-made for modern functions.Nevertheless, there are other considerations that should be given precedence over the utilitarian value of historic buildings.First and foremost, some historic buildings uniquely represent specific historical events or figure.If such structures were all razed, accurate representation of the corresponding events and figures would be out of the question.Further, some historic buildings possess exceptional esthetic value and mere replication or documentation can by no means demonstrate the superior craftsmanship in them as

vividly.Additionally, many historic vernacular dwellings embody the distinctive lifestyle of ethnic minority groups.It would be an ethnological catastrophe if all these dwellings were knocked down for the sake of current urban needs.In the final analysis, I concede that the demolition of some historic buildings is inevitable in the process of urban development.However, it would be erroneous and imprudent if we fail to acknowledge that some old buildings are too significant historically, esthetically or ethnologically to dismantle.On balance, I am convinced that urban advancement and the preservation of significant historic buildings are not necessarily mutually exclusive and urban developers must not indiscriminately meet modern needs at the expense of the historic buildings that have notable historical, esthetic or ethnological value.发展类8分范文

发展类(城乡差距)In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities.Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years.But some others think everyone should be free to choose where they work.Discuss and give your own opinion.开头段至少写3+1

In this day and age, it can be generally observed that the disparity between cities and the country has been aggravated by relentless urbanization.With respect to educational and medical facilities, a yawning gap has emerged between those in cities and rural ones.This manifest chasm has prompted some to suggest that teachers and doctors fresh out of university work in the country for a few years.Yet many are opposed to this view on the grounds that it infringes upon individual freedom to choose where they work.Personally, I think both these two views have merit and demerit.主体段第一段1+4

Granted, assigning new teachers and doctors to the countryside may create certain

benefits.To begin with, this practice can help foster a strong sense of obligation in many teachers and doctors.They can experience first-hand how the rural residents are held

back by the out-molded teaching and medical facilities and this, in turn, can inspire a host of professionals to commit themselves to the alleviation of this disturbing situation.Moreover, the inferior living and working conditions in the country can temper many of these young professionals' soul.They are very likely to be more tenacious and

determined and hence more successful than their urban counterparts in later careers.主体段第二段1+6

However, there are even more drawbacks that this practice can engender.In the first

place, many young teachers and doctors will fell unmotivated or frustrated if they are sent to rural areas against their own will.They may have a hard time getting accustomed to the shabby housing and primitive facilities and slack off at work.In the second place, if new teachers and doctors are coerced to work in the countryside, a considerable proportion of them may find it daunting when it comes time for them to relocate to cities after a few years in the country.They will feel intense occupational stress when they cannot operate efficiently equipment much more advanced than the devices they are used to back in the country school or hospital.Last but not least, given the inferiority of new teachers and doctors will lead to unsatisfactory job performance in rural school and clinics.We really cannot expect fresh recruits to work wonders with outdated tools.结尾段

In the final analysis, I concede that sending teachers and doctors fresh out of college to the countryside may produce specific advantages.However, if we enforce this

indiscriminately, that will surely generate even more banes.On balance, I am convinced that we should optimize our workforce and honor the individual freedom in determining where they work.发展类(交通问题)Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree 转述题目,至少写3句

With the car ownership soaring in China, the issue of traffic accidents has been thrown into sharp relief.According to recent research conducted by China's ministry of

transportation, the annual incidence of traffic accidents is nearly three times as high as the corresponding figure a decade ago.Many people have been alarmed by this trend and assert that imposing stiffer punishment on the perpetrators is the only way to curb this disturbing phenomenon.Personally, I believe their view has both merit and demerit.其中主旨句模板词汇可以替换成:Personally, from my own perspective, in my view, as I see it, as far as I am concerned, speaking for myself

主体段第一段,1+4句, 主题句+2个二级论点+2句论证

(主题句)Granted, more severe penalty does carry certain advantages.(二级分论点1)First and foremost, it would be the most cost-effective way to deter those would be driving offenders.(论证分论点1)Heavy fines, long community service or even jail terms would render most of the aggressive drivers apprehensive about the violating the traffic law, even without extra government funding to upgrade traffic surveillance cameras or

augment traffic police force.(二级分论点2)Further, the effective of this hard line approach would be immediate.(论证二级分论点)Once the related regulatory decrees are released, we would be sure to witness a substantial decline of driving offenses overnight.主体段第二段,1+6句,主题句+3个二级分论点+3句论证

(主题句)However, there are also traffic hazards that we cannot address by merely

stiffening the punishment of aggressive or destructive driving conduct.(二级分论点1)To begin with, pedestrians who habitually jaywalk will not be discouraged by this move.(论证二级分论点1)pedestrians account for a considerable proportion of traffic-accident

culprits.;thus, pedestrian offenses such as jaywalking must be effectively checked as will.(二级分论点2)Secondly, if people who are regularly behind the wheel are not awakened to the horrific consequences traffic offenses may breed, they will take advantage of every loophole in sight.(论证二级分论点2)If people who are regularly abide by the traffic law solely out of fear for punishment, when a surveillance camera is out order or the traffic police fail to keep tabs on a specific section of a freeway, all hell will break loose.(二级分论点3)Lastly, strict punishment of disorderly conduct does not guarantee infallible detection of driving offenses.(论证二级分论点3)Without sophisticated traffic-offense detectors and a capable traffic police force, traffic laws, no matter how draconian, would be lax enough for hardened reckless drivers to disregard.结尾段,3句

In the final analysis, I concede that harsh penalty on driving offenders constitutes an

effective way to deter irresponsible driving behavior.However, the rampant driving offense cannot be curbed by stiffer punishment of driving offenders along.On balance, I am convinced that we must take a more integrated approach to this modern-day scourge.发展类常用词汇 Development

26)生活节奏加速 the tempo/pace of life has accelerated 疲劳 fatigue 导致人与人的疏远

create alienation between people 过于功利的 materialistic/ mercenary/

money-worshipping 追求最大限度利润 pursue maximum profit 交通堵塞 traffic jams/traffic congestions/grid block(最后一个是不可数名词)阻碍impede/ hinder/ hamper/obstruct/inhibit(vts)扶贫poverty alleviation 就业机会 job opportunity/ employment opportunity 贫穷的needy/ poverty-stricken/ impoverished/ deprived/ destitute/ indigent 富裕的 affluent/ wealthy/ well-off

27)撞车car wrecks/ car accidents 行人pedestrians 交通肇事者 traffic accident

perpetrators 违章横穿马路 jaywalk(可以记忆为:周杰伦走路――不走寻常路――美特斯邦威)监控摄像头 surveillance cameras

28)有特殊审美价值的老房子 old buildings of special aesthetic value(注意审美观的英文说法是 aesthetic values 复数)有历史特殊意义的老房子 buildings of historic significance 民居 vernacular dwellings 让城市更美观 beautify the cities/ better the cityscape 破旧的房子 decrepit/rundown/rickety/dilapidated 拆除tear down a building/demolish a building/raze a building/ knock down a building 高楼high-rise building 摩天楼skyscrapers 城市化 urbanization 城乡差距the disparity between the city and countryside 城市的 urban 乡村的 rural 搬迁 relocate(vi,vt)

29)在家上班(动词)telecommute 休闲leisure/recreation 精神上的享受 amusement and enjoyment 娱乐 entertainment/diversion 宽松的管理laissez-faire management 运营成本 operating costs/overhead costs 雇用 recruit 会导致效率降低的

counterproductive 劳动力资源 labor pool 抑郁症 depression 失眠 sleeplessness/ sleep-deprivation/insomnia 人口爆炸population explosion/population boom 控制人口

birth control/family planning 爱慕虚荣的 pretentious/ ostentatious 缺少运动的生活方式 sedentary lifestyle 营养过剩 over nourishment

发展类模板 The swift changes in …have thrown the issue of … into sharp focus/relief 某方面的快速变革让…成为公众注意的焦点.In present-day society, the tempo/pace of life has accelerated immensely.在当代,生活的节奏大大的加快了.In preceding centuries have rendered numerous countries+形容词… 过去的几个世纪的…让很多国家变成了…

发展类名人名言

”To create architecture is to put in order.To put what in order Function and objects.“—Le Corbusier

The architect must be a prophet…a prophet in the true sense of the term…if he can't-Le Corbusier

全球化类范文

It is clear that the differences between various countries are becoming less

evident.In this day and age, all over the world, people can see the same movies，fashions, brands and TV programs.To what extent do you think the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh its disadvantages

In this day and age, like a host of other developing countries, China is increasingly westernized and numerous Chinese cities are increasingly cosmopolitan.The breaking down of trade barriers has generated a plethora of foreign entertainment productions on the market.The sweeping trend of cultural homogenization, or more precisely, cultural westernization, has disturbed and alarmed many.Personally, I also believe that the disadvantages of cultural globalization far outweigh its advantages.Granted, global cultural homogeneity has immensely enriched the lives of the denizens in developing countries.Now Hollywood blockbusters typically get their first screening in China within a couple of days after their American premiere and youths in China can

download singles topping billboard charts from Internet without having to scout around in a CD store.Enhanced TV connectivity affords Chinese viewer chances to see primetime American TV shows.This ease of access to a multitude of foreign amusements has really brightened up the lives of many.However, the global cultural sameness can engender far more banes.In the first place, it severely undermines the cultural diversity in the world.Nowhere is the decline of cultural diversity more manifest than with the youngsters.Today, in Chinese metropolises, it is a common sight that twenty-something stroll down the billboard-lined sidewalks, sporting Nike sweatshirts and Adidas sneakers, with Motorola cell phones toted in their hands and Apple's iPod clipped on their belts.And it is equally commonplace that adolescents, whose hair is dyed yellow or purple, don their baggy outfits and bust moves to hip-pop music.All these seem just so pretentious for a culture that valued modesty, humility and moderation for over three thousand years.In the second place, indiscriminate embracing of the American popular culture diminishes the sense of pride and dignity of

developing-country peoples.Traditions, rites, rituals, mores and the language of culture are all unifying forces of a nation and the decline of them erodes the national identity and national pride of a country.Lastly, cultural westernization breeds massive unemployment in entertainment, publishing, and design industries of developing countries.The

inundation by foreign products drives local businesses out of the market and renders vast numbers of professionals jobless.To sum up, the on-going cultural globalization is far more detrimental than it is beneficial.It is , in essence, the process of the Western culture(primarily the American culture)

dominating, eroding and replacing the indigenous cultures in other geographical regions.Unless people in developing countries make a conscious effort to preserve and uphold their cultural identity, their fascinating cultural heritage will be jeopardized permanently.Globalization 类常用词汇

Globalization

35)(一个国家或者地区的)文化特性(national or regional)cultural identity 全球文化同一化过程(名词,即地区文化特征的消失)global cultural homogenization 文化同一性(或者叫文化均质性,名词)cultural homogeneity/cultural uniformity 全球化是一把双刃剑Globalization is a two-edge sword.地球村 the global village

Globalization 类模板

With the vast world gradually shrinking into a small global village, the issue of sweeping globalization has triggered heated debate.随着巨大的世界逐渐变成了一个很小的地球村, 席卷一切的全球化引发了激烈的争论.Globalization 类名人名言

”Globalization is not something we can hold off or turn off.It is the economic equivalent of a force of nature—like wind or water.“—Bill Clinton

”Arguing against globalizations is like arguing against the laws of gravity.“ Kofi Annan

八、Environmental Problems 类

环境类 what are the cause of water scarcity Present your own solutions to it.开头段3+1(不少于4句)

In present-day society, the human race is advancing at a staggering rate in a host of arena.Along with all the boons brought about by high-tech wonders have come some sufferings;and the lack of fresh water is manifest among them.Over two thirds of the nations

worldwide are afflicted with severe water shortage.(主旨句)Hence, it is crucial that we ascertain the cause of water scarcity and identify the effective remedies of this phenomenon.表示人类 the human race, man, humankind, humanity, human beings, humans 表示”领域“fields, areas, spheres, realms, arenas, 要表达”产生“的意思,后面是好的结果,用bring about 后面是不好的结果,用engender, 后面是抽象名词,用 induce

主体段1(不少于7句)(主题句)As I see it, the cause of the current water crisis are

manifold.(二级分论点)First and foremost, the population explosion is the root cause of the crisis.Over the past half century, the world population explosion has more than doubled and this growth rate is showing no sign of slowing down;therefore, household and

industrial consumption has been shooting up since the end of World War II.(二级分论点)Secondly, the deterioration of the Earth's ecosystem also contributes to this disturbing situation.The rampant practice of deforestation has engendered massive soil erosion and multitude of chemical works, sewage disposal and textile factories discharge their toxic waste into streams, rivers or lakes.(二级分论点)Thirdly, the overexploitation water resources also plays a pivotal role in water scarcity.Awareness of the significance of

water conservation is weak or non-existent on household, community and national levels.主体段2(不少于7句)Given the severity of the water crisis, we have no alternative but to take vigorous measures to address the situation.To begin with, controlling the drastic

increase of world population is paramount importance.It is imperative that other populous nations learned from China's success in curbing its population surge over the past two decades and introduce more effective birth control methods.Further, the concept of

sustainable development ought to be spread in the international community.Any form of over tapping natural resources must be strictly prohibited.Lastly, mankind must strive to find alternative source of fresh water.For instance, both glacial melt water and desalinated salt water hold huge potential as vast sources of water.结尾段(不少于2句)To summarize, causes of the shortage of fresh water are multiple.Birth-control measures, promotion of sustainable development and research about alternative water resources are all effective ways to alleviate this modern-day scourge.环境类8分范文

Today we have entered a ”throw-away society“ and are filling up our environment with plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of.What are the causes of this phenomenon and what measures do you recommend to solve this problem 题目要求分析现象的两个方面,写成4段式

开头段3+1: paraphrase the topic + thesis statement(转述题目+主旨句)转述题目(不少于3句)

In present-day society, plastic containers and utensils are pervasive in the city and the country alike.These plastics shopping bags, chopsticks, to-go boxes and mineral-water bottles, to name but a few, when not properly disposed of , engender a colossal amount of non-biodegradable refuse.It is manifest that we have embarked upon a ”throw-away“ era when plastic trash is dumped indiscriminately and irresponsibly.Hence, it is imperative that we identify the causes of this phenomenon and pinpoint the effective remedies.模板中可以替代的单词:Hence—thus, therefore;crucial-essential, vitally important, imperative;ascertain—determine, pinpoint, identify;solutions—remedies.主体段第一段:1+6:topic sentence+3subarguments+3supporting sentences(主题句+3 个二级论点+3句论证0

(主题句模板)From my own perspective, the causes of this phenomenon are manifold.(二级分论点1)To begin with, at present the majority of individuals who shop or eat out regularly are still poorly-informed, uninformed or misinformed about the baneful influence that non-biodegradable pollutants exert on the ecosystem, which is the chief culprit in the global-scale mishandling of the plastic waste.(论证二级分论点1)The primary component of such trash cannot decompose over the process of the next hundreds of years if no

major scientific breakthrough comes along in refuse treatment.(二级分论点2)Further, the proliferation of plastic shopping bags and eating utensils is largely engendered by the surging consumerism.(论证二级分论点2)Plastic containers and utensils are lighter in weight, cheaper(often free of charge)in price and water-resistant in performance, which makes them preferable in customers' eyes.(二级分论点3)Lastly, plastic bags and containers are also cost-effective since they are cheaper to manufacture, ship, and

store.(论证二级分论点3)These considerations also have prompted the good old cloth or paper bags to be supplanted by plastic bags and environmental affliction ensue.主题句模板中可以替换的单词:From my own perspective—in my view, as I see it, as far as I am concerned

主体段第二段1+6: topic sentence+3subarguments+3supporting sentences(主题句+3 个二级分论点+3句论证)

(主题句模板)Given the severity of this phenomenon, we have no alternative but to take immediate steps to address this situation.(二级分论点1)In the first place, we must do our utmost to enhance people's awareness of how persistent and devastating

non-biodegradable trash can be to our environment and our descendants.(论证二级分论点1)The government and the technologists should spare no effort in advocating the use of environmentally-friendly containers.(二级分论点2)In the second place, biochemical research must be launched here and now in pursuit of effective means of converting non-biodegradable refuse to biodegradable refuse.(论证二级分论点2)And the

government should allocate enough funding to such research on the corporate level.(二级分论点3)In the third place, retail stores and restaurants should strive to encourage their customer to reuse plastic packing items.(论证二级分论点3)A tax levied by the government on the use of plastic bags in businesses will, doubtless, help to curb this massive ”white pollution“.主题句模板中可以替换的单词:Given—considering;severity—scale;alternative—option;take immediate steps—take prompt steps;address—combat, tackle,机位resolve 结尾段2句,概括上文

Non-biodegradable refuse can devastate soil, water and the biota.We must start combating this environmental catastrophe before the entire ecosystem breaks down under the reign of the plastic debris.Environment 类常用词汇

Environment

30)生态平衡 ecological balance / ecological equilibrium 可持续发展 sustainable development 环保主义者 environmentalists/ conservationists 对环境无害的environmentally-friendly 节约使用 conserve(vt)保护preserve 再利用(动词)reuse/recycle 各国必须携手解决环境问题:Countries on this planet must join forces/ make a concerted effort /unite to combat/tackle/resolve/address environmental

problems.增强公众关于…的意识 raise/ elevate the public awareness of something 短缺 shortage/ scarcity/ dearth/ lack 给资源造成很大压力 put a strain on the already stretched resource 破坏自然资源 wreak havoc on natural resources 看法森林

deforestation 污染pollute/ contaminate 有毒的 poisonous/ toxic

31)增加农产品产量 boost crop yield 可再生资源 renewable resource 不可再生资源

non-renewable resource(包括金属metal, 矿产 minerals, 石油 petroleum, 天然气 natural gas, 煤coal等,后三种可以总称为fossil fuels)消耗(某种资源)consume/deplete 用尽 use up/ exhaust 严厉的措施 harsh action/ measures 生态系统 ecosystem/ ecological system 某一地区所有的生物的总称 the wildlife in a region/ the biota(=flora + fauna)of a region 生物多样性 biodiversity

32)污水effluent/sewage 排放discharge 温室效应 greenhouse effect /global warming 严重的severe /grave 白色污染产生的垃圾 non-biodegradable garbage / wastes that cannot decompose or break down/ inorganic trash 谴责而不是纵容 condemn rather than condone(vts)something 臭氧层ozone layer 肥沃的土壤 fertile soil 贫瘠的土壤

infertile soil 耕地 arable land/ farmland

Environment 类模板

The earth's ecosystem has been deteriorating at a staggering rate.地球的生态系统正以一种惊人的速度恶化.In this day and age, the impact man exerts on the environment is massive in scale.在当代, 人类对环境的影响式巨大的.Environment 类名人名言

”Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastate the forests.“—quoted in Newsweek

”Don't blow it—good planets are hard to find.“-quoted in Time magazine

九、Crime 类

犯罪类 There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquents.What are the cause of this phenomenon

只分析一个方面(产生原因),写成5段式

开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, the incidence of juvenile offenses has been growing at an alarming rate.Today, the sheer number of juvenile offenders has reached staggering proportions.A recent survey conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences revealed that one out of four crimes today was carried out by minors.Hence, it is imperative that we pinpoint the causes of this disturbing phenomenon.主体段1(不少于4句)In the first place, many instance of juvenile delinquency have been attributed to the violent or pornographic content of some TV shows and video games.Now we are facing a proliferation of blood and guts and nudity on TV, the computer and the Internet.Many youngsters, especially boys, get addicted to such scenes.Lacking the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong, they develop criminal tendencies.主体段2(不少于4句)In the second place, parental neglect and domestic violence play a pivotal role in the increase of youth crimes.Today there are an ever-growing number of dysfunctional families.The children raised in such families tend to be afflicted with constant fear.In the end, they develop a hatred for society and other individuals.主体段3(不少于4句)In the third place, there is a definite correlation between the increase of juvenile crime rate and the rise of adult crime rate in society.The more adult crimes, the higher the probability of youngsters falling prey to adult offenders.Many youths are tempted by evil adults into committing crimes.And some others are victims of adult offenses and become criminals themselves to get their revenge on society.英文表示”关系“correlations, relation, link 结尾段(不少于2句)In sum, many factors contribute to the surge of juvenile delinquency.It is crucial that we take vigorous measures to tackle these problems and ensure that the future or our nation—that is, the youngsters, have a more promising future ahead of them.Crime 类8分范文

Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.To what extent do you agree or disagree

一边倒写法=写完全同意或者完全不同意:五段式

开头段(不少于4句)

With the crime rate hovering at high level, the print media as well as the electronic media dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to detailed crime coverage.Whether the media should present detailed accounts of crimes has triggered spirited debate.Many assert that the news media should stop giving details of crimes.Speaking for myself, I totally agree with their views.表示同意可以替换成 approve of /wholeheartedly support/ cannot agree with their view more/ consent to/ am for

不同意可以替换成 disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to / object to/ disapprove of/ cannot go along with 主体段1(不少于4句)

In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage.The principal purpose of reporter covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or television ratings;much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated.It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime.主体段2(不少于4句)

In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials.Reporting crimes in graphic detail helps those who are in the process of plan some criminal act to perfect their plans.Drawing on the

well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime.And this may aggravate the already soaring crime rate.主体段3(不少于4句)

In the third place, detailed reports of heinous crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes.The reporters rarely consult the victims before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public.Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some base minds.Without the victims' consent, graphic accounts of crimes may become nightmares to them.结尾段(不少于2句)

In sum, detailed crime coverage in the media undermines our lives in several ways.I am convinced if such reports continue to go uncontrolled, it will exert even more baneful influence on individuals, communities and societies.Crime 类常用词汇

33)触犯法律 break/ violate/ flout/ disobey the law 犯罪 commit a crime 罪行offences/ crimes/ criminal acts 罪犯 criminal/ offender/ culprit /perpetrator 从犯 accomplice / accessory(noun)(后者指帮助犯罪单未直接参与的人)憎恨社会 resent society/ hold a grudge against society 囚犯 inmate/convicts 受害者 victim 心理创伤 trauma 牢房

cell 监禁 imprison / incarcerate(vts)someone 被绳之以法be brought to justice

34)宽容的 lenient 改造罪犯 reform/ rehabilitate criminals 执法部门 law enforcement agencies 重罪 heinous crime/ flagitious crime/ felony 轻罪 petty crime /

misdemeanor 初犯的人 first-time offender 惯犯 hardened criminals/ repeat criminals 再次犯罪revert to crime 守法的公民 law-abiding citizens 遵守法律 abide by/ comply with the law 无视… disregard 给某人造成心理创伤 traumatize someone 抓捕 track down/ hunt down/ capture 犯罪倾向 criminal tendency

Crime 类模板

Crime

With the incidence of crime hovering at high levels, many people have become disturbed and alarmed.随着犯罪率居高不下,很多人被困扰并变得警觉.The proliferation of criminal acts has rendered many citizens apprehensive and fearful.严重罪行的扩散让很多人变得恐惧害怕.Crime 类名人名言

”The solution to adult problems tomorrow depends in large measure upon how our children grow up today.“ Margaret Mead

”He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it.“—Roman philosopher Seneca

十、Woman & Families 类

女性与家庭类 Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.Do you agree or disagree 开头段3+1,转述题目+主旨句

Gender inequality was a highly controversial issue in the twentieth century.Today, five years into the new millennium, even in the most progressive countries there are still numerous arenas restricted to males only and the military is one of them.Some assert that this situation must be altered and women should be enabled to join the armed forces.Personally, I wholeheartedly support their view.其中主旨句模板词汇可以替换为:personally—from my own perspective, in my view, as I see it, as far as I am concerned, speaking for myself;wholeheartedly support—totally agree with, approve of, cannot agree with their view more, consent to, am for 如果完全反对可以吧wholeheartedly support 换成disagree with, am against, am opposed to, object to, disapprove of, cannot go along with 主体段第一段1+3,主题句+论证3句

In the first place, historically there were a host of valiant women soldiers whose feats really put their male counterparts to shame.(论证主题句3句)The world-renowned Joan of Arc and Mulan were the prime examples of how exceptionally ladies could perform in combat.Their extraordinary determination, courage and integrity have been admired by the servicemen and civilians alike throughout the past centuries.These shining examples illustrate all to well that women soldiers do have capacity and the resolve to excel in the military in times of war.主体段第二段1+3,主题句+论证3句

In the second place, female patriots should be granted the right to go to the front line when their motherland is embroiled in a war.(论证主题句3句)Gone are the days when women are considered to be second-rate citizens and today they are entitled to learn and to teach, to work and to supervise, to vote and to get voted.There is really no sense in denying them the right to stand up for their home country when war breaks out.Whether the government grants ladies the right to serve in the military demonstrates whether it interprets equal rights in a modern, enlightened sense.主体段第三段 1+3,主题句+论证3句

Last but not least, would-be servicewomen largely possess the capacity to operate modern weaponry.(论证主题句3句)Present-day weapons are bet characterized by extensive automation and digitization.Granted, physically women are on average not as strong as men.Nevertheless, it is an indisputable fact that most of them are endowed with the mental ability and the psychological soundness to operate the highly-automated arms that do not really require big biceps.结尾段2句

In sum, keeping military services out of bounds of women in the information era is

unwarranted.And I am convinced that the enlisted lady will face equally well as her male counterpart in combat and otherwise.Women & Family 类常用词汇

Woman 36)两性平等 gender equality 性别歧视 sexism/ gender discrimination 一个开明的社会

a progressive/ enlightened society 被家务事拖累 be tied down by household chores 生育孩子 child bearing(noun)抚养孩子 child rearing(noun)母性的本能 maternal instinct 家务 housework / household chores Family

37)老年人 elderly people/ senior citizens 家庭成员间的情感纽带 family bonds/ family ties 归属感 a sense of belonging 对…的依恋 an attachment to something/ an affinity for something 贫穷的家庭 deprived families 富裕的家庭 affluent families 单亲家庭

single-parent household 虐待 mistreat/ abuse 家庭暴力 domestic violence 毒品上瘾 addiction to drugs/ be addicted to drugs

Women & Families 类模板

Gone are the days when women were treat as second-rate citizens in any genuinely progressive country.女性被视为二等公民的时代早已经一去不复返了.It is generally accepted that families are the bedrock of any modern society.普遍认为, 家庭是现代社会的基石.Women & Families 类名人名言 ”The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joy in each other's life.“—Richard Bach

第三讲雅思作文图表题的规律

开头段转述题目常用句型

The line graph describes/ illustrates/ demonstrates/ summarizes/ outlines/ shows… 后面跟名词或者从句

开头段或者主体段引出数据或者趋势常用句型

According to/ As shown in/ As can be seen from… 后面跟图表的类型

It can be seen from …后面跟图表的类型… that It is manifest from…后面跟图表的类型… that

必备词汇表示上升的动词

Go up(went up)/rise(rose)/ grow(grew)/ increase(increased)/ ascend(ascended), 其中 rise和increase 也经常作名词, grow-growth 表示急剧上升的动词

Jump(jumped)/ surge(surged)/shoot up(shot up)/ soar(soared)其中surge也可以做名词

表示下降的动词

Decline/ fall/ drop/ sink/ dip/ decrease/ descend, 其中decline/ fall/ drop/ decrease也经常做名词

表示急剧下降的动词

Plummet/ plunge

表示速度快的形容词

Sharp/ dramatic/ drastic/ rapid/precipitous/steep 副词加-ly 表示幅度大的形容词

Marked/ substantial / significant, 副词加-ly 表示缓慢,逐渐的形容词

Gradual/ steady/ gentle / slow, 副词加-ly 表示小幅度的形容词

Modest/ moderate/ slight, 副词加-ly 表示波动的动词

Fluctuate, 不及物动词,名词fluctuation 表示稳定在一个水平上的动词

Level off at/ level out at/ hover at/ stabilize at/ reached a plateau at 表示达到最高的动词

Peak at/ reach the highest point at , peak 也可以做名词

表示达到最低的动词

Reach the bottom at/ the lowest point at/ bottom out at, bottom 也可以做名词

表示经历了某种变化的及物动词

Experience/ witness/ see

表示达到了多少数量的及物动词或词组

Reach/arrive at/ amount to / hit/ register/ stand at

表示占…(后面跟百分数或数字)的及物动词或词组 Account for/ represent / constitute / make up

表示数据由某几个部分组成的既无动词或者词组

A is composed of/comprise/ is made up of/ consists of B,C and D.注意和include 区别

表示对未来数字的预测的及物动词

Project/ predict / forecast 表示”分别“的副词

Respectively—in the 2004 Olympics, China and Russia won X and Y gold medals respectively.表示”大约“的副词或者词组

About, around, approximately, roughly, just over, just under 范文1 图略

The line graph illustrates how the number of people using a London underground station fluctuates over the course of 16 hours(6am to 10pm).As we can see from the graph, at 6am the number of people at the station stands at only 100.The number shoots up over the next two hours, peaking at 400 at 8am.Then the number descends drastically for two hours, bottoming out at 180 at 10am.The period between 10o'clock and 12o'clock witnesses a moderate growth in the number of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday.Numbers in the following two hours stabilize at just under 300 people.Then the number plummets to only 100 from 2pm to 4pm.Then the next two hours see a dramatic rise again, with 6pm registering 380 people.After 6pm, the number dips again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8pm.The period from 8pm to 10pm experiences a slight rise, but then the number of people declines again from 180 at 9pm to 135 at 10pm.This line graph clearly demonstrates that rush hours in the early morning and the early evening are periods when the station is used by the most people.范文2

The diagram illustrates in four stages the recovery of the forests in Yellowstone National Park after a devastating forest fire.In the first picture, while the old forests still exist, they drop bad wood to the soil under them, which renders the soil more fertile.Then lightning and fire strike, destroying the forests completely.And the growth of new forests starts right at this point.The second picture demonstrates that in the first 50 years after the devastating fire, saplings grow in build while descend in overall number.In the next two centuries, the young trees continue to thrive in Yellowstone, because of the fertile soil and the ample sunlight.Then, three hundred years after the fire, the number of trees decline to roughly the same as the old forests.These five pictures show us that it takes as long as three centuries for a destroyed forest

to fully recover.Further, they vividly explain to us the natural law of ”survival of the fittest".The number of trees that a region can support is not limitless, which means the forests on earth will not be an inexhaustible resource.祝大家都能取得雅思作文好成绩!

第二篇：环球雅思范文

“环球雅思寻找 ENGLISH GIRL , ENGLISH BOY 电视SHOW”是由环球天下教育集团及旗下环球雅思英语培训学校，针对义乌中学生英语沟通应用能力的一项英语赛事。环球雅思作为全球最大的连锁外语培训机构之一，被评为全国十大知名学校，荣膺搜狐网“十大教育品牌集团”，中国企业21“未来之星”教育机构，在中国英语教学和培训领域拥有丰富深厚的实践经验和成果，对大众青少和成人英语学习群体的学习理念、学习方法以及学习习惯具有广泛深刻的影响。

“环球雅思寻找 ENGLISH GIRL , ENGLISH BOY 电视SHOW”竞赛程序公开规范，与国内外权威英语教育服务和英语学术机构密切合作，采用国际权威英语能力测评工具，促进推广科学系统、学以致用的学习思路和学习理念。

“环球雅思寻找 ENGLISH GIRL , ENGLISH BOY 电视SHOW”立足于“实用、大众、创新”，致力于创建一个活跃互动平台——开拓英语学习思路、改善英语学习习惯、丰富英语学习途径、提升英语实战应用，同时树立沟通力强、能思善辩、开拓实干的学生榜样。

“环球雅思寻找 ENGLISH GIRL , ENGLISH BOY 电视SHOW”以开拓当代学生国际视野，提升当代学生跨文化交际素养、增强当代学生语言沟通竞争力为使命。环球天下教育科技集团，协同本项大赛合作机构，将为此使命坚持不懈地通力合作，在中国国际化建设进程中，为义乌中学生英语教育做出贡献

一、大赛流程

本届大赛分为海选、复赛和总决赛三个阶段。

二、大赛报名

报名条件：

以初一高一学生为主，包含热爱英语、希望提高自己英语应用能力的所有在校学生和适龄青年。

报名时间：2012年9月1日-9月30日

报名方式如下：

网络报名：登录yiwu.gedu.org填写报名资料表或现场报名。

电话报名：致电0579-85526400报名。

比赛时间及地点：

1、时间与地点：义乌中学、二中、三中、大成中学，绣湖中学、稠州中学、宾王中学七所校区内为现场海选赛区。

三、比赛流程：

1、初赛时间：2012-9-22开始

参赛内容：一分钟自我介绍+现场抽取的卡片朗读。（3个笑脸晋级，3个以下全部淘汰）

进入初赛的选手于三天后登录yiwu.gedu.org查询，并到新天地商厦三楼，晋级者到义乌环球雅思领取复赛参赛卡，评委：义乌地区知名英语教师，环球雅思名师

注意：先填写报名资料表，再参加选拔。

导师：范毓琦（Frank）各学校优秀教师。

2、复赛时间：2012-10-1（2012-9-22）

参赛内容：

A 命题演讲Experience is the best teacher（经验的重要性）（5个评委4-5个笑脸直接晋级；2-3个笑脸待定，进入下一轮比赛；1个笑脸淘汰）

B 即兴口语（话题已给出20项）（4个笑脸晋级，4个以下全部淘汰）（命题演讲每人计时2分钟；即兴口语时间为1分钟）

复赛后晋级选手于2012-10-2日登录义乌环球雅思官网YIWU.GEDU.ORG查询，并到新天地商厦三楼义乌环球雅思领取总决赛参赛卡。

评委：环球雅思名师+省内名师

3、总决赛时间：2012-10-13（2012-10-21）（颁奖典礼）每组比赛各8名选手参赛

前期评委亮相，参赛内容：a命题演讲b猜单词（以美加英澳的著名学校或著名景点及建筑图片的形式做为所选内容）c即兴口语话题

说明：A 命题演讲分演讲和提问两个环节，分别打分。My Definition of Success（成功的定义）

B 猜单词环节，两人一组，答对题目的总数的平均数为各自分数。

C 即兴口语环节单人比赛打分（话题已给出20项）。

（命题演讲每人计时2分钟；猜单词环节每组2-2.5分钟（视参赛人数而定））网络和现场投票累积选出单项奖。

三个环节总得分选出冠、亚、季获奖学生。

评选；冠亚季军和单项奖

导师：刘薇、吴慧冬、范毓琦、评委：刘薇、吴慧冬、范毓琦、外教和电视台、各学校代表

吴慧冬：剑桥名师，国际知名教育专家，人生及留学规划师，刘薇:口语天后，全球最大教育集团培生集团旗下北京环球雅思学校副校长

范毓琦：浙江省阅读、写作名师，义乌环球雅思副校长

4、颁奖：

2012-10-14（2012-10-22）

奖项设置：优秀奖、冠、亚、季军、最佳人气奖、最俱活力奖

评选出的优秀奖学生

参与奖免费体验环球雅思课程（价值500元）

优秀奖

（进入决赛的所有学生）大赛证书、环球雅思奖学金500元/人，全球最大教育集团培生教育集团，专业教学团队量生制定英语学习技巧全方位指导；价值元的礼品

网络人气奖：前三名可直接进入总决赛，前20名获得环球雅思奖学金500元/人，全球最大教育集团培生教育集团，专业教学团队量生制定英语学习技巧全方位指导；

季军（初中组一人，高中组一人）

奖杯及大赛证书、环球雅思奖学金1000元/人、世界500强实习、全球顶级名师吴慧冬老师，环球雅思留学规划院院长人生规划方案或留学规划方案一套；刘薇老师现场英语口语学习指导；义乌环球雅思副校长阅读及写作技巧指导

亚军（初中组一人，高中组一人）

奖杯及大赛证书、环球雅思奖学金2000元/人、世界500强实习、全球顶级名师吴慧冬老师，环球雅思留学规划院院长人生规划方案或留学规划方案一套；刘薇老师现场英语口语学习指导；义乌环球雅思副校长阅读及写作技巧指导

冠军（初中组一人，高中组一人）

奖杯及大赛证书、环球雅思奖学金3000元/人、世界500强实习、全球顶级名师吴慧冬老师，环球雅思留学规划院院长人生规划方案或留学规划方案一套；刘薇老师现场英语口语学习指导；义乌环球雅思副校长阅读及写作技巧指导港澳双人六日游最佳人气奖（初中组一人，高中组一人）

奖杯及大赛证书、环球雅思奖学金3000元/人、世界500强实习、全球顶级名师吴慧冬老师，环球雅思留学规划院院长人生规划方案或留学规划方案一套；刘薇老师现场英语口语学习指导；义乌环球雅思副校长阅读及写作技巧指导

最俱活力奖（初中组一人，高中组一人）

备注：

1、环球雅思奖学金为环球雅思课程抵金券，最终解释权归义乌环球雅思所有。

2、具体评分标准活动开始后作详细公布。

第三篇：环球雅思少儿英语

环球雅思少儿英语

一、项目前景：

随着全球经济一体化的进程，教育观念全球化的趋势也日益凸显，西方的文化教育正在寻找着新的切合点。英语早已经成为亿万人民最向往掌握的语言工具，每一位家长都希望自己的孩子从呀呀学语时就能开始学习英语，在中国拥有近数以亿计的英语学习者，人们学习英语的年龄已经从七十年代的高中生发展到了四五岁，幼儿园就上起培训学校。在业内，机构风生水起，英语培训逐渐呈现出多元化和细致化。

1、市场机会最好。儿童英语的早期培训是最高端的教育，其教学难度及重要性都是最高的。但现时的英语培训机构却往往把早期教育与低水平培训等同起来，从而使教学质量相当不理想。由于低水平重复竞争激烈，从而严重阻碍了该市场的良性发展，致使巨大的市场潜能难以得到充分的释放。这一现状表面上看是风险、是缺憾、是挑战，但对于富有前瞻性战略眼光的机构来说却是机遇、是动力、是财富。更为那些有志于在教育领域大展宏图的实力机构提供了广阔的市场发展空间。

2、统计数据表明：1.在全国中等收入的家庭中，年人均教育支出的52%要用于英语培训，而舞蹈艺术只占20%、奥林匹克占11%、其它总计占17%；2.在一个中等规模、经济发展一般的城市中3-6岁学前儿童有近3万人，7-12岁小学生约5万人，年人均业余教育支出约为3000元，其中90%以上家庭需要少儿英语培训；

因此，少儿英语培训市场是一个潜力极其巨大的市场。

二、英语教育现状

儿童英语教学是从小学英语教育的内容延展而来的，也就是我们常说的：一个老师、一本教材、一块黑板。单调的教学模式，填鸭式的教学内容，以应试为最终目的教学出发点，囊括了少儿英语教育模式的典型特征，几乎完全将英语语言教育带入了“哑语”的盲区，可悲地是，目前仍然有不少的教育机构在延承这种模式。

三、环球雅思学校介绍及教学优势

环球雅思创于1997年，2001年成立环球雅思学校，2006年9月获得软银赛富数亿投资组成环球天下教育科技集团Global Education & Technology Group, 拥有在56个城市从事外语培训的连锁学校、60所环球雅思少儿英语连锁学校环球天下教育集团每年培训学员超过30万，拥有教职员工近1万人，年营收数亿，名符其实的中国培训领军教育集团。

作为国内最大的连锁外语培训机构，被评为全国十大知名学校，连续多年荣膺中国最具影响力培训集团称号，为中国民办教育创新做出巨大贡献。2005年9月受到教育部部长和陈香梅科教文奖的表彰。2007-2008连续获得中国十大优秀特许品牌，首批通过ISO9001认证的教育机构。

环球青少儿英语是目前国内唯一一家与三大世界图书出版社进行合作的公司，2009年与麦克米伦携手共同引进Twist and Shout教材，标志着环球青少儿英语走向新的开始，环球青少儿英语” 为中国青少儿提供集少儿英语学习和智商、情商开发为一体的全方位学习解决方案。孩子在学习过程中，不仅全面提升了英语听说读写综合能力，同时培养了孩子行为、科学、逻辑、语言、情感和创新等“六大智慧”：

行为智慧：

培养孩子认知自己的意志行为、潜意识行为、娱乐消遣行为、运动动作无意识行为；科学智慧：

培养孩子的精确思维和模糊思维能力，帮助孩子建立从自然科学到科学技术的认知体系，培养孩子对科学认知的正确态度；

逻辑智慧：

培养孩子的概念思维、命题思维、推理思维、归纳思维和类比思维，全面提升孩子的逻辑思维能力；

语言智慧：

培养孩子语言组织、表达能力和主观能动性，实现第二母语学习的嵌入，使孩子具备双语思维和表现能力。

情感智慧：

培养孩子认识和妥善管理自身情绪，实现自我激励，具备认知他人情绪和人际关系管理的能力，全面开发孩子“情商”；

创新智慧：

培养孩子创造发明智慧，让孩子的无规律性思维转化为科学创新思维。让思想与行为同步，造就创新型人才

环球率先使用新型教学方法，并引进完善的教学体系:1.全球领先电子互动教学，全面开发少儿智能.2.美国青少儿同步课程，培育国际创造型人才.3.同步网络自学课堂，创造家庭、自主学习.4.计算机国际标准评测，实时追踪学习成效.5.国际著名出版社独家定制教学体系.

第四篇：杭州环球雅思培训中心雅思写作三大误区

杭州环球雅思培训中心雅思写作三大误区

在备考雅思作文部分时，考生都喜欢在临近考试的前面一点时间着手准备，准备的无外乎就是在考前背几个作文模板或者作文范文。其实这种考前临时加急复习的方法不会对雅思写作有实质性的提分效果。

杭州环球雅思培训中心专业致力于雅思考试培训事业，对于雅思考试的每一环节可以说是了如指掌，希望通过总结雅思写作的几大误区，烤鸭们可以从中获益。

误区一：言论偏激，另类思维

雅思写作中言之有物很重要，找出论证观点的例子和理由是整篇文章的支撑点。但是很多雅思考生在进行雅思写作的时候，经常会出现一些极端的观点，比如，在谈到养宠物是有利还是有弊时，一些考生甚至会以“养宠物好，因为宠物很好吃”作为理由，假使这想法是真实的，那么依据呢？支持这观点的依据和例子„„其实，在雅思考试中，理由并没有标准，只要能言之有物，言之有理，就是一个很好的观点。可很多考生只是据理自居，不能够给出事实依据，那么言论自然也就泛泛了，此外，再加上观点过于偏激，自然也就事倍功半了。

所以，考生们在写作文章时，要学会避免偏激，极端的言论，即使这些所谓大家心知肚明的事情，如果过于偏激还是不要写为妙。

那么在平时准备写作依据时，要记住有依据并非要指名道姓，“剑桥”后面的范文并没有几篇是特别具体的，那么什么样的依据算是例子呢?记住，只要是论点范围下的都算，比如，题目：出生后什么对人的个性和发展重要?分论点一：教育，那么论据可为胎教、幼儿教育、中学教育、大学教学、社会教育„„这些都算例子。但如果你的分论点是“幼儿教育”，那么如果在论据中着重论述“教育”，而不是“幼儿教育”下的诸如幼儿园师资、设施、课程设置之类的，则论据就被认为过于泛泛，而不具说服力了。

误区二：依赖模板，思维定式

对于写作基础差的考生在准备雅思写作时的第一反应就是模板!套用模板!背记模板!只单纯想靠模板得到高分。虽然雅思考官曾明确指出过，模板是可以接受的，但是没有任何创造性的生搬硬造却是不可取的，换言之，万能模板是不存在的。甚至有同学曾统计剑3-7中所有的写作范文里使用频率最高的词汇和句型并组织了一篇模板去参加考试，结果可想而知。

其实雅思写作考察的是一个学生的话题理解能力，语言组织和运用能力，我们要学会做语言的主人，而不是成为语言的奴隶，如果不能将将语言转化为我们的工具去抒发自己内心真实的想法，仅仅靠死套模板的说话，那么沟通也会变得举步维艰。因此，如果我们能够与考官坦诚相待时，相信也会赢得考官的信赖。

误区三：仅想投机取巧，努力学习太少

对于中国的教育，中国人向来比较重视应试，当然也喜欢在应试中掌握投机取巧的方法。为了达到目标，实现理想，如果有捷径谁不想去试试呢?但是对于写作来说，想要单纯的靠

投机取巧来达成高分，难!

在杭州环球雅思写作课程的课堂中，对于不同文章的结构，老师可以分析得淋漓尽致，对于写作的词汇、句型、段落，还有内容的讲解都可以做到有声有色，这些都是老师们研究的成果与心血，也是诸位考生在考试中可以投的可以取的“机”和“巧”，但是这个妙手又并不是完全可以复制。所以，当很多考生在参与培训后，却发现自己还是一如既往的无从下笔，这是为什么?是老师的原因吗?也许有些，但是更多的时候，我们是不是要问问自己，到底对于写作，我付出了多少?

如果自己课后不多去总结，不去练习，那么再多的经验技巧都等于白纸一张。所以，想要投机取巧还得肚子有货。

第五篇：5.0环球雅思写作笔记

议论文写作概述

1字数和时间要求

字数要求250以上，太短肯定会被扣分，所以，不管写得怎么样，先要满足字数要求。只要你写得对，写得好，字数越多越好，越能得高分。但由于时间限制，写300字就已经算写得很多了。但是，如果只是为了凑字数，把不相关的内容扯进文章里，而且语法错误很多，反而会被扣分，因此不如集中精力把要求的250字写好。写的时候要尽量写满。练习时，要用考试纸练习，对自己字的大小、疏密有大概的了解，知道写到哪里字数大概多少，在考试时就可以不用担心这方面，可以安心写文章了。我考前复印了大约20份，把104—122都写了一遍在上面，考试的时候很从容。

两篇一共60分钟，建议议论文用40分钟。在最开始练习的时候，可以不受时间的限制，两三个小时写完一篇也可以。但应不断提高速度，在考试前达到时间的要求。万一考试题目不在机经里也不用慌张了，因为有了平时练习的功底。也许没有预先写好并且背好的那么好，但至少也能达到六分。

2命题形式

（1）对立观点式

两个事物或两个观点，让你任选其一。在试题中占30%。如：

who should be responsible for children’s education, the school or the parents? give your opinion and tell the reasons.(2)

一个事物或一个观点，让你支持或反对。试题中常有do you agree or disagree的字样。在试题中占50%。如：

some people believe that children should engage in educational pursuits in their spare time, otherwise they are wasting their time.do you agree or disagree?

（3）论说式

描述一个现象，让你说明原因或给出解决方法等。占20%。如：

how should a student choose the future career ,whose opinions and what kind of information he/she considers in making the decision？ give the reasons.也可以分成两大类，即将第一和第二统称为辩论式，这两类写法基本上是相同的：五段论式、对称式等。建议用能用对称式的都用对称式。根据经验，相同水平的文章，对称式的分数普遍高于五段论式。（以后再说具体写法）

3写作格式

雅思作文不要求写标题。注意分段。

（1）传统式

每段的第一行向右缩进去一点，与写中文文章类似。

（2）现代式

每段的第一行不向右缩进，但段与段之间空一行。

建议用现代式，看起来更舒服，但千万不能忘了空行。

4评分标准

（1）审题

看文章是否切题，是否回答了题目所要求的问题。

（2）结构

分几段？先写什么,后写什么？

（3）内容

要说出理由支持观点，注意多读多背，多积累素材，这样在考试时就不怕没话说了。

（4）语言

首先要正确，没有语法错误。其次要优美。用词要多样化，如“重要”在文章三个地方出现，最好用不同的词表示：important, significant, vital, crucial等。平时多做这方面的练习，对扩展你的词汇量很有帮助。我就是这么做的，虽然没有背单词，可是还是积累了不少的单词，而且能够活学活用。对口语也有好处啊。另外，要使用复杂的词

句子方面。要写复杂的句子，即多写长句，应占全文的60%。另外注意句式多变，使用尽可能多的句式。

四方面，最重要的是结构和语言。

雅思写作并不考察考生的思想，并不是要知道考生对具体某一个社会问题有何种高明的见解，主要考的只是考生的语言技能。

总结一下，针对考试。

别忘了准备试卷纸，多复印几份。

准备写作模版，背下来。至少5个吧，五段论式，对称式，论说式，都要准备，以适应不同类型的题目。模版以后再说。

认真审题，千万注意题目具体要求。字体不要太大----显得没文化，也不要太小----看不清，而且写了很多，但看起来不多，很吃亏，保持每行大约10个字。字迹要工整，给考官个好印象。我的习惯是先写task 2,因为先写task 1心里不踏实，写不好。况且task 2的重要性高于task 1太多了，写不完很要命的。根据个人的习惯和爱好吧。不管怎样，抓紧时间，不要前松后紧，以免造成自己过于紧张

写作笔记（杨凡的）

TASK 2

一.概述

1.字数:250-3002.时间:35-40m

3.T:task 审题

O:organization

I: idea 思路

L: language

二.命题内容:

1.学生生活

2.家庭生活

3.科技与媒体

4.社会生活与社会问题

三.命题形式:

1.arguement(辩论式)50% 问A.B好不好

2.report(论说式)20% 问原因,解决办法

3.mixed(混合式)30% 有两个以上问号

四.写作格式

1.不写题目

2.分段

3.用铅笔写(B型或自动笔)一行8-10个字

PS: 注意大小写,注意标点,不要用缩写如don't,书写工整

ARGUEMENT

一,五段论式:

........Introduction................Reasons(2-3)................让步段.....................Conclusion.........<一>开头段:旗帜鲜明的说出自己的论点:

A> 引题

1)一般用3.4句介绍当前的形式和现象

not uncommom, be of no exception,spirited consolation 精神安慰

2)介绍双方观点some people argue(maintain, claim, suggest, hold, insisit)give priority to ,put the first place

3)提问 how can we solve the problem

4)结合使用

5)连续发问式(3,4个,语言要求高)

6)个人经历式(过去式,不要过长)

7)欲扬先抑式:先说对方观点的好处，不过用嘲讽的语气.8)名人名言及谚语式

B>说出观点 1-2句

1)直接说出 I think(believe hold)that

I would point out that

I cannot help thinking

It seems quite clear to me that

In my point,..........as far as i am concerned

From /in my point of view

As far as I am able to judge

As far as I tell

As I see it

The way I look at it is

2)用一个让步状语,先说出对方观点,再说自己的观点

Although, while, despite

3)先说一个观点,然后说出自己是否同意如果同意:

I absolutely/completely agree with /to it(the opinion/ point /solution /suggestion)

I could not agree more to...I would go alone with...I am for

I vote for

...is absolutely true

...is what I think

...is exactly /just how I see it

object:

I really cannot accept it

i wonder whether it can hold water /bear much analysis

4)引题已经说出双方观点,说明自己同意哪一个

5)在介绍双方观点是顺便说出自己的One....others....including me /like me, and that is also my opinion.<二>理由段 why?

主题句+支持句+(结尾句)

A>topic sentence(主题句)

1.一定要有,放在句首

2.意思明确,结构简单(pl 见笔记9)

3.主题句要有表示程度的连接词,但最好不要用firstly也不要每个主题句都有这些连接词

4.主题句不能太具体，也不能特别抽象

5.主题句不能包括恋歌不同含义的并列内容

B>supporting sentences(支持句)

1.每个理由段要写3-5句支持句.2.支持句应该大部分是复杂的句子.3.写支持句的三种思路:

1)并列论证(平行论证):几个小点

递进论证

2)事实论证:讲故事或具体的事物

3)对比论证:说两个对方不好,再说三个自己的好

4.五种论据

1)事实

3)统计数据

4)名人名言

5)假设 imagine, suppose if

5.写的连贯

1)用连接词(详见单词书201)

因果:because, as ,for ,since, lead to ,result in(from), contribute to consequently, hence ,so ,therefore, as a result ,as a consequence, accordingly

递进:furthermore, what's more , moreover, incidentally, meanwhile, besides, particularly.similarly at the same time , in addition,转折:but ,however, conversely ,anyway, despite

although ,though , likewise, nevertherless ,otherwise, after all, all the same(虽然,但是)at the same time(可是)not withstanding(虽然)on the contrary

PS: 连词:because ,as ,for ,since, even if , although when 主句.conj+从句

副词:主句,adv,主句

2)使用代词

3)关键词的重复要用同义词

C>conclusion sentence(optional)

1.改写本理由段主题句

2.引起下一理由段

PS:可以平均分配,但最好有所重点,把写的多的好的放在第一段,但也不要相差悬殊(6.5.4;6 4 4 7 5 4)

<三>让步段(optional)

1.内容:自己观点的不好，别人观点的好

2.目的:顶字,平衡而客观

3.选材避重就轻

4.在让步段的最后最好又回到自己的观点上来:

1)自己观点的不好都能解决

2)对方更大的不好

3)自己更大的好

<四>结尾段

1.重申观点

2,改写各理由段的主题句

3.结合现实,展望未来，提出解决问题的建议，提出希望,名人名言谚语,反问，类比.4.结合语言:句子sophisiticated, variety 用词correct

用词:

1.尽量用复杂的词

2.用词多样化

句子:1.少犯语法错误

2.多写复杂句(简单句,复合句,并列句)

3.句子多样化:1>复杂，简单都要用

2>复杂句子多样化

3>句子开头多样化

二.对称式

<一>四段式

........说出争论的问题不给出自己观点.............对方观点优缺点.............自己观点优缺点或赞成的原因...............给出自己观点.......A>好处:1.少数题目要求的(disscuss/ compare both views/ advantage and disadvantage / to what extent do you agree or disagree)

2.解决思路少的问题

3.比较新颖

B>不好:容易论述不清

C>解决措施: 1.最后说出自己观点后,再说几句自己观点的好处,或赞成这种观点的原因，或对双方观点惊醒比较(比较难)

2.在说自己不赞成观点时用一些不确定的词

seem/ may/ might/ be likely to do / be said to do /

it is said that perhaps /probably maybe possibly

3.先说不赞成的观点，再说赞成的观点

4.自己赞成的观点多说两句

<二>五段式

...........第四段说说双方观点的不好...........A>好处:少数题目要求(compare both views)

B>用对称式在最后一段说观点时,既可以站一头,也可以脚踩两只船,折中,最好站一头,指

第三条道路

REPORT

一.分类: why? reasons cause

what? factors

how ? solutions suggestions, recommendation

二.五段

.......引题,提出观点或引出下文............3个reasons/solutions/factors................结论(同五段论式).....三.mix题目

1.原则:有主有次不要遗漏

2.2个以上的report : why+how / what+whatreason+solution

开头+r(1-3)+S+(结尾)

3.一个report一个argument(pl17)

一定要以argument为主,不管在前在后，保持五段论式或对称式格式不变,另一个论说式的问号一定要处理，根据不同题目有的可放在开头因说，也可放在结论提出建议,也可在一个理由段中或单独用一个理由段来处理

4.2.3个问号都是argument的(少)

以最后一个为主

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