第一篇:学习总结:英语四级写作常见问题
学习总结:英语四级写作常见问题
很多同学提到英语作文痛苦不已,每次提笔都很头痛。下面总结基础较差的同学易出现的问题进行总结,希望能帮忙更多的考生提前做好写作的复习准备工作。
多年教四级精讲班的阅读和写作部分过程中。布置过多次作业,收集学生写作案例,也进行了相应的批改。在批改的过程有,颇多感触,特成此文,与各位同学分享。
目前,到培训机构学习四级长期提高的同学,从总体上来看,可谓是英语学习的“重灾区”,他们显示出以下的特点:
1.基本的语法概念都有较大的问题,这些语法概念包括时态、词性、主语的性别、被动结构等;
2.基本词汇量极为有限,很难表达清楚自己的观点;
3.在英语写作的过程中,暴露出中文写作能力的不足,比如逻辑性、论证能力、描述能力等;
4.思路有时反而放得太开,不了解四六级考试作文部分真正的要求; 5.对英语国家文化层面的内容缺乏较基本的了解。同时,这批同学也有值得欣赏的亮点:
1.由于考试过关的压力,学习目的性很强,如果善于引导,可以较好的激发他们的学习热情;
2.该层次的学员性格相对要张扬一些,对时尚、流行的东西也更为敏感,如果调整得当,可以赢得轻松融洽的课堂气氛。
下面,我结合授课及作业批改过程中所做的收集,给各位同学提供一些例子:
一、基本语法层面的问题:
1.关于时态:时态是四级长期提高的同学们最普遍的难关,主要表现为:
a.无法保持时态在全文的一致:这一现象很普遍,往往是紧接的两句,而且是没有任何时间状语的情况之下,就出现了时态的不一致,例:I saw an English man.He have a big bag.b.时态的基本用法错误
I.现在进行时不加ing,例:Many people are learn English.II.一般现在时第三人称单数问题:It become(s)more and more useful./ some people thinks III.情态动词之后,动词反而不用原形:it can brings(去掉s,前面是can,这里用动词原形)us more challenge and experiences.c.过去式中不规则动词掌握得不好:Some people think Spoken English is even more important than writen(拼写错误:written)English.d.过去时的不恰当使用:Many people thought….while others thought… but I thought…同学们不了解think用过去时往往代表现在我们不这么认为; 2.关于被动态:很难体会好动词使用过程中ing与ed之间的区别:例: I am exciting about the news.test of speaking(而不是spoken)English, English spoken(而不是speaking)ability 3.关于词性:最普遍的问题是名词被滥用为动词或者形容词 a.benefit的用法问题很大:I think it is benefit to our English study.b.trouble与troublesome: When we have something trouble c.及物动词及不及物动词的混乱:I got enough ability to compete the chairman of Student Union./I will take place some lecture d.many people feel fear about pressures.4.关于句法:
e.动词原形不加变化,直接用作主语或宾语等句子成份:I think speak English and make friends are happy things./ Others spend it on entertainment, for example, go(ing)to a cinema, dance(ing), take(ing)part in sports, and so on.f.从句的用法混乱:I think students do he like things, ? I think when students do the things he likes g.主语与形容词:This will harmful…
h.不了解due to的用法:Due to they have to go to school from Monday to Friday ? Due to the fact that ….二、基本的词汇表达能力有限,辞不达意
同学们在写作的过程中,出于自己有限的词汇水平,想要表达的意思却说不清,最终的结果是生硬的将中文表达中的词汇翻成英语。举几个例子:
例一:学生想说明英语口语的重要性,I saw an English man.He have(保持时态一致,用had)a big bag.He looked for(这样说有可能产生读者的误解,He looked for a map 可以理解为“他在找一张地图”,建议改为“He was looking for a place on a map.”)a map.He got lost.例二:想说明“考试只是一种形式”,test is only a form, 同学并不了解,其实有“test is only a test”这样的用法。
例三:想说明口语的重要性。“在国外,我可以不会写英语,但不能不会说英语”,I can can’t write, but I can’t can’t speak.三、缺乏逻辑性、论证能力、描述能力等
有一次,我的作文题目是“A Campaign Speech”,为竞选学生会主席而进行演讲。有一位同学的作文比较有趣,他通篇说,如果我当选学生会主席,这将有助于提高我自己的组织能力、思维能力、交往能力,等等。我当时对他的作文的评价是:“设想你是一个学生,你会选一个只想着利用这个机会来提高自己的人作学生会主席吗?”
另一次,我布置的作文是“Is Pressure a Bad Thing”? 结果就有同学大谈How should we face the pressure,其实他的论述跳过了一步,先要论证pressure是否有积极的意义,然后才谈得上如何去面对它。
四、不了解四六级考试作文部分真正的要求
有两篇作文我印象比较深刻。我出的题目是“口语考试是否应该成为四六级考试的一部分”,要求从正、反两方面论述。结果一位同学交上来的作文,第一节,I think spoken English test is not necessary,然后洋洋洒洒写了一通,第二节,却又变成I think spoken English test is necessary,然后同样洋洋洒洒写了一些论点。他没有真正理解“正、反两方面论述”这个要求的含义,结果写了一篇自相矛盾的文章。
有一次我的题目是一个图表题,展示的是大学生1990、1995、2000这三年中,平均每周用在计算机上的时间。图表题的要求一般是第一小节描述变化趋势,即图表的数据分析,第二小节解释变化的原因,第三小节展望未来趋势或分析一些相关的问题。
结果这位同学非常辛苦地写了一篇很长的文字。第一小节,回顾1990年,当时家里也很穷,父母都舍不得坐比较贵的空调车之类,描述一番当时的贫困生活,自然,也就没有办法购置计算机了。第二小节,到了1995年,生活好转了,同时微软公司推出了“Windows”操作系统,计算机的使用也变得方便了,所以每小时的使用时间增加了。第三小节,到了2000年,Intel公司推出了“奔腾”芯片,计算机的速度大大提高,于是计算机的使用时间大大增加。
凭心而论,排除一些语法和用词的错误,这篇作文写得还是不错的。只是他有两个问题: 第一、在第一小节中,将个人的经历用于解释普遍的大学生1990年计算机使用时间较短这一现象,这是“以偏概全”;第二、这样分布三个小节的内容,比较冒险,因为原题中提示的三点,其实就是让我们在文章中自然形成相应三个小节,四六级写作考试是比较“八股文”的。
五、对英语国家文化层面的内容缺乏较基本的了解
一个常见的现象就是轻率地对英美国家的人士作结论性的描述,类似:Americans all like pressures。另外就是语言的夸大其辞。典型例子出自一位同学写的竞选学生会主席的演讲,When students have some troubles, they all come to me.I talk to them, then they feel happy, and I feel happy too,这简直是把自己描述成为“上帝”或者“邪教领袖”了。英语作文多多练习,多多犯错,才会更好成长。
第二篇:英语四级写作常见问题及应试技巧
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大学英语四级考试中,写作是考生要做的第一道题,足以看出它的重要性。四级写作是对大学生英语综合水平和应用能力的综合考察,是四级考试的重要组成部分。针对考生在四级作文中可能出现的问题,提出以下几点应试技巧和备考策略。
一、考生在写作当中经常出现的问题
1.基本词汇和语法不过关。
主要表现为对英语语法知识的掌握不牢靠及对基本词汇记忆不清。在语句中,会出现主谓不一致,单复数搞不清楚,时态与语态混乱等现象。除了句子上的语法与结构问题,整篇文章的布局与思路也不流畅,支离破碎,形不成一个完整的系统,让人看不懂你要说的是什么。
2.语言积累太少,不能写出相对复杂或优美的句子。
很多考生在写作中遇到的困难首先是无从下手,没有什么可写的。
考生在提笔想写出表达自己思想的句子时,往往遇到单词不会或句子结构搞不清而无法继续写下去。为了凑够字数,就只好胡乱拼凑。而且语句全是简单的主谓宾,没有从句及高级词汇和词组。这样会大大降低文章的档次。因此,考生在英语学习过程中,应高度重视词汇的学习和词组的积累,熟练掌握教学大纲中所要求的四级词汇。
3.考生写作中的文章布局问题
很多考生的写作方法是先想好中文再翻译成英文,这个在所难免。因为大家对汉语还是最熟悉的,喜欢用母语来表达我们的观点和意见。而且即使对专业学习英语的人来说,也很难达到在写作时完全用英文思考的状态。但是汉语跟英语在语法上有很大的区别,如果直接翻译过来,会出现很大问题,就是地道的汉式英语,读起来很不舒服。
二、英语四级考试写作应试技巧及备考策略
1.认真审题,准确立意
从历次大学英语四级考试中我们可以看到,四级写作是一种给题目、提示、及指导的短文写作,因此,紧紧围绕其题旨是至关重要的。考生在审题的过程应当认真审阅作文的说明要求和所给的材料,比如段首句、提纲、关键词、图表等,确定相应的体裁,明确自己的中心思想,从而明确作文的写作范围和侧重点。审题的目的主要是确定文章的主题思想,一篇文章只能有一个主题思想,要鲜明、深刻、有新意。另外,考生要善于分析给定的材料,总结材料包含的主要内容,是否含有引申义,这一点也很重要。
2.简单列出提纲
英语四级考试一般要求在30分钟内写出一篇120个词的短文,文章虽说并不是太长,但需要有论有据,有头有尾。为了防止时间不足导致质量降低甚至不能完成文章,写作时一定要安排好时间。为了在写作时有章可循,不跑题,建议最好用5分钟左右写下提纲和要点,这样做一是不至于无话可说,二是可以避免虎头蛇尾。大家只需确定每段要写什么,围绕主题展开,大致建立文章框架即可。
3.确立段落主题句
这其实是对提纲的细化。学生应用最精炼的语言概括出段落的主题句。段落主题句就是每段的中心思想,因此,主题句最好放在每段的段首,能让阅卷人一眼就能明了全段大意。同时,主题句结构要完整,表达意义要准确,有高度的概括性,且用词要精炼生动。
4.注意文章的逻辑性
无论是汉语文章还是英语文章,都要注重逻辑性,这样才能连贯合理。英语句子不像汉语句子,汉语不用连词也能表达完整的句子,但英语的句子之间必须用连词或关系词来连接。因此,考试在写作中,句子之间要用相应的连接词来体现文章的逻辑性。比如:表示举例或补充说明的关联词、表示时间或顺序的关联词、表示转折的关联词以及表示原因与结果的关联词等等,考生在平时的学习中要有意识的积累这类连接词。
5.文章修改
考生写完一篇文章后,若时间允许,要进行修改。考生可从以下几个方面入手修改。应该先从语篇结构上检查,这主要是检查文章的主题是否明确,篇章层次是否明显,段落衔接是否连贯,内容是否切题等。另一方面就是具体检查每个段落,这一步主要检查段落是否完善,中心是否突出,段内各句是否衔接紧凑等。最后就是做语法上的检查,包括用词是否恰当,标点是否正确,句子结构是否完整,语句是否通顺等。
最后,需要提醒广大考生的是,写作能力的提高不是一朝一夕可以办到的,它需要考生平时的刻苦训练,还要各个环节的密切配合。四级写作考察的是考生的英语综合水平,因此,考生在平时备考过程中要多练习,多总结,多积累。
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第三篇:2011年英语四级写作常见问题及解决方案
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“折戟沉沙铁为消,自将磨洗认前朝。”每次大学英语四级 考试,许多考生总会在这场“无硝烟的战斗”中饱受煎熬。他们总会存在这样一个问题,四级考试为什么这么难,什么原因导致自己总是通不过四级考试,又该如何 提高英语成绩,如何通过大学英语四级考试(CET-4)。特别是对于很多学艺术的同学而言,能否顺利通过四级考试将直接关系到他们的保研资格与前途。针对 以上问题,我特意写了这篇文章,通过教学与实践,对考生存在的问题以及解决方法作全面地解剖,希望对各位考生能够有所帮助。
四级考试从1987年以来已经走过了23个年头。2006年6月实行新四级考试,12月份开始全国将全面推行新四级考试。对于新四级考试,我们可以清楚地看到,虽然考试难度较之以前有所偏易,但是考试本身对于英语的全面考察却是加强了。来源:上考试大网校,考试轻松过关
新四级考试,题型分为写作、快速阅读、听力、基本阅读、选词填空、完型填空和汉译英。就我个人而言,写作、听力和阅读(快速阅读和基础阅读)是重点,因此考生对于这三部分的得分多少,将直接决定着其考试分数的高低。
下面就让我们依次来解析一下。
第一、写作。
(一)存在问题
1.不会写
所谓不会写指的是,当考试拿过一篇文章不知如何下手,不知如何提笔进行写作。笔者认为主要是存在以下两个原因:一是考生的确无话可说;二是心里虽然有话,但是拿捏不准该写哪句为妙。于是思前想后、犹豫不决,始终不敢提笔进行写作。
2.写不好
所谓写不好就是,拿过作文题,没有明确的写作思路,不按套路出牌;或是简单汉语逻辑思维写作,不符合英语写作标准,近而没有文采。原因在于:第一是平时没有养成良好的写作习惯;第二对于英语写作的句式特点以及整体文章结构框架不了解。
(二)解决办法
第一,首先必须熟悉英语四级写作具体要求。英语四级考试要求考生在30分钟内写出120字的文章。体材主要有议论文(分为“Topic题型”和 A&B又称“正反观点题”)应用文(主要是书信)、图表文等。针对不同的体裁,写作思路是不同的。比如,以议论文举例来说:
1.议论文写作思路
2.议论文分类:阐述主题型作文(Topic);正反观点型作文(A&B)
3.阐述主题型作文写作:(这类题型作文要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述)
4.正反观点型作文(A&B)(这类题型作文通常从正反两方面来分别论述,最后得出你自己的结论。采用论点加论据写作形式。)
第二,熟悉英语写作的几个重要概念。
1.英语文章段落结构特点
英语文章段落结构一般有三部分构成:主题句+扩展句+结尾句
(1)主题句:所谓主题句,就是英语文章段落的中心思想句。它是英语文章段落的灵魂,在英语文章段落中居于主导地位。我们都知道英语文章一般喜欢开门见山,所以主题句一般位于英语文章段落的句首。其他句子都要围绕它而展开。
(2)扩展句:所谓扩展句就是为主题句起解释说明或论证的句子。通常我们写扩展句所采用的方法是举例子(for example,for instance,such as,a case in point is that---)、列数据(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。
(3)结尾句:所谓结尾句就是总结句。英语写作也类似于汉语写作,最后再把自己本段落的写作目的陈述一下。但是在英语写作中结尾句毕竟还是少数。
因此我们通常看到英语的文章段落结构 60%-70%都是由主题句+扩展句构成。
2.主旨句
作为主旨句就是英语文章的中心思想句。英语文章一般首先用一句话概括一下作者的写作目的或意图,我们就把这句话称之为主旨句。没有受过写作训练的考生是不会写主旨句的。因此这样的文章就不能够称之为好的英语文章,自然也得不到阅卷人的青睐了。第三,学会遣词造句。
1.遣词:
(1)词汇等级
所谓词汇的等级就是,我们在写作的过程中,如果想出一个基本词汇来之后,能够在这个基本词汇的基础上把它在提升一下,也就是我们一般写作所提倡的用“难 词”。比如,我们一提到“重要的”,大多数同学首先会想到“important”这个单词,那么提升一下的话就可以想到它的如下同义 词:significant,vital,main,basilica,crucial,momentous etc
(2)词汇准确性
所谓词汇的准确性是指,我们在有一个词近而想到它的同义词之后,要结合语境选择恰当的用词。在这里必须指明的是,并不是词汇等级越高越好,必须还要考虑 到适合于不同的语境。比如,眼睛大,这个“大的”形容词,我们首先会想到big,近而想到great,large,huge,vast,titanic,enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的词就可以了呢?或者说用上enormous等词更能博得阅卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在这里很明显用后面的词来修饰眼睛是不 可以,只能用big,因为我们听过一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl,in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可爱的。
2.造句:
(1)词组
很多考生平时写作不太擅长用词组,对于他们而言 最习惯的就是想到汉语,然后对应汉语思维写出英语句子,这种写作只能是单词的罗列组合,谈不上什么技巧文采可言,因此,写出来的文章必然就是所谓平淡如流 水,没有英语的味道。如果我们能够在单词的基础上,进一步想到与之同义的词组,那么文章就会显得与众不同,更具有英语的味道。比如上面所说的“重要的”这 个单词,当我们想到important的时候,如果从语法角度再稍加考虑一下,我们会想到“be of importance”。因为,语法中规定:形容词等于of加这个形容词的名词形式。如果再提升一步,我们还学过一个常用的词组叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同学说自己的文章凑不够字数或是没有文采,那么采用词组进行写作是不是就可以解决以上问题了呢?
第四篇:英语四级写作万能
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1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______.It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.【外语教育&网】
4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while.Obviously,______,but why? 新东方英语四级:http://edu.21cn.com/kcnet1820/ 英语四级一对一咨询qq:1613508081
第五篇:四级英语写作
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(一)Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注释:
1、XX的第一个优点
2、支持XX的做法来源:恒星英语学习网
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二个优点
5、举例证明优点二
相应作文:The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).说明原因型模板
(二)In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).相应作文: The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.说明原因型模板
(三)For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The
significance for(6).Therefore,(7).注释:
1、人们针对XX的态度和举措
2、归纳现状
3、第一个原因
4、第二个原因
5、第三个原因
6、重申造成现状的最重要原因
相应作文:Pollution Most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason, I think, is(the reason of harmful substances into environment.for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however, they pollute air, water and land).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in the world.everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment).The significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.Therefore,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).说明原因型模块
(四)These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since
(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注释:
1、提出论题
2、说明现状
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解决方法
相应作文:Pollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more, since(the industrial revolution),it is natural that(a great number of factories have been
springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth.We should do something such as(planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.图表式作文写作模板
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of……(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are……(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,……(第一个原因).More importantly,……(第二个原因).Most important of all,……(第三个原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).提纲式作文写作模板
1、对立观点式
A.有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么?
B.有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2、批驳观点式
A.一个错误观点。
B.我不同意。Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3、社会问题(现象)式
A.一个社会问题或者现象
B.产生的原因
C.对社会和我们生活的影响
D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E.前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论
文的写法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
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(一)Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that
观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that
观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,论据1.More importantly,论据2.Most important of all,论据3.In summary, 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
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(二)People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that
观点1.While others point out that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,论据1.For another,论据2.Last but not the least,论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
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(三)There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that
观点1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,论据1.Furthermore,来源:恒星英语学习网
论据2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is,论据3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
展现问题篇
问题的常用词:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes
have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很
大改变。
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide
concern in the public.近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种观点都其可取之处。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.对于这种极具争议的话题,我们很难作出绝对的回答。People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗话说:不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则认为_________。There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue hat...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。Some people are of the opinion that..有些人认为_____________。Many people claim that...很多人认为_____________。A majority of 绝大多数 A large number of 很多人 Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages)有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。Those who argue for...say that...economic development of the cities.觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。Some people advocate that....有些人在坚持认为_________。They hold that...他们认为_________。People, who advocate that..., have their sound reasons(grounds)坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。Those who strongly approve of...have cogent reasons for it.强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...有人会认为___________。来源:恒星英语学习网 People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。But others hold the view that...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, come up with,set orth, put forward等。But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。But people who are..., on the other hand , maintain that...不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。
综合篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up
with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展,人们开始关注.....来源:恒星英语学习网
People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite
natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不
同的观点。
In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid
economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们
带来了很多问题。
......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the
present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“
_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题,这是无可厚非的。不过,问题是:”我们该如何抉择?"
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。