雅思A类写作大作文是如何进行评分的（合集）

第一篇：雅思A类写作大作文是如何进行评分的

雅思A类写作大作文是如何进行评分的 作文一的评分标准如下：

1)对写作任务的反应

2)连贯性和结构层次

3)词汇

4)语法的多样性和准确性

两篇作文分别会由经过培训的、符合职业资格的考官进行评卷、打分。作文二比作文一的分数所占的比例要高，因此考生应给留有充足的时间完成作文二。从2007年7月1日开始，学术类写作成绩有整分和半分之分。

作文一

题目类型：

对考生的要求

在作文一中，题目中会给出一个或多个互相关联的图表、图解或表格，考生需对其中的事实或数据进行描述。题目也可以是一个机械图、装置图、或流程图，考生需对其运作方法进行解释。考生应该包含图中最重要以及最为相关的信息，一些次要的信息则可忽略。考试时间有多长？

考生在这一部分最好不要使用超过20分钟的时间。

这一部分考察的是什么技能？

这一部分考察的是考生在图表或表格中选择最重要和最相关的信息、并对这些信息进行清晰描述的能力，考官将对考生组织这些信息的能力以及语言使用的准确性进行评分。作文一的内容是学术性的，因此考生应该运用学术写作的文体。考生应保证字数至少达到150字，否则将会被扣分。字数多于150字不会被扣分，但考生应注意如果在作文一花费太长时间，则作文二的用时将会减少，而如果作文二达不到最低的字数要求也是要被扣分的。考生应注意作文二比作文一所占的分数比例要大，因此考生应保证有充足的时间完成作文二。作文一是如何进行评分的？

考官将从以下方面对作文进行评分：

是否完成了写作要求：考生能否有效地找到信息中关键的内容并对之进行描述和写作;连贯性和结构层次：考生能否将信息和要点进行组织，信息和要点之间的联系是否清晰;词汇来源：考生使用的词汇是否广泛、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求;

语法的多样性和准确性：考生使用的语法结构是否多样、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求。有什么需注意的方面？

考生需将作文写在答卷上;

字数如果达不到最低要求将被扣分;

文章内容如果偏题或者跑题将被扣分;

任何抄袭(如抄袭其他来源的内容)的作文将被重扣;

文章如果不完整、内容相互没有关联将被扣分(如在任何部分使用点句或笔记形式)。

第二篇：2013-11-16雅思A类写作大作文

环球雅思北京总校

2013年11月16日雅思A类大作文范文

——来自环球雅思慎浩老师

题目：Across recent world, only a few languages are increasing in use, while some（=287 words）

范文：

第一段：社会背景+正向观点+自己观点

社会背景（全球化+经济融合-----有效交流的基石-----互通有无 +多边贸易）+正向观点（某些语言蓬勃发展—优点＞缺点）+自己观点（某些语言普及-------国家间经济相互交流）

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of countries, as the corner stone of available communication between countries, further some languages instead of that of various ones outweigh its demerits.After thoughtful consideration, I am convinced that a few languages being are in service of 如今，伴随着全球化以及经济一体化，大多数国家认可与接受的某些语言，作为各国有效沟通的基石，促进多国的贸易以及互通有无。因此，一些人认为 一些语言蓬勃发展而不是各种语言的蓬勃发展的优点远超过其缺点。深思熟虑之后，我认为一些语言的普及和应用有利于国家之间经济的相互交流。

句子分析：

Nowadays, along with globalization and economic integration, further 状语：Along with : 伴随。。adv

主语： Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of 语法：Certain languages recognized and accepted by a sizeable percentage of ：Adj +N +done +介宾结构 = adj + N +adj +adv

as the corner stone of available communication between countries：插入语

作为国家之间有效交流的基石

谓语：Further vt 促进

宾语：Mutual exchange of needed products and multilateral trades

Mutual exchange of needed products n 互通有无

Multilateral tradesn 多边贸易

作为国家之间有效交流的基石

第二段：论点 +论据+例证+结论

论点（主语：支持观点：少数语言使用-----国家间的经济互补以及合作）+论据（没有语言作为有效媒介------无法正常进行---经济合作与交流）+例证（英语 –起不可替代作用 1 提升沟通效率 2 解决矛盾纠纷）+结论（普及某些语言优势明显）

On one hand, popularization and application of some languages facilitate economic complementation and between countries better.without languages as media to enhance effective communicating, economic cooperation and the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.From this point, the superiorities of popularizing some languages applied broadly are prominent.一方面，（论点）一些语言的普及和应用更好地促进国家间的经济的互补与合作。（论据）换句话说，没有促进有效沟通的语言作为媒介，国家间的经济合作与交流不能正常运行。（例证）例如，英语，作为最广泛使用的语言，被大多数国家使用对于极大地加强国家之间沟通的效率以及有效解决跨国企业之间矛盾与分歧起了不可替代的作用。（结论）从这个角度讲，普及一些广泛使用语言的优势是凸显的。

句子分析：

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries plays an irreplaceable role in terms of enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively.主语：

English, as the most widely used language, utilized by plentiful countries

N,同位语，done +prep +n =N, 同位语，adj + adv

谓语：

plays an irreplaceable role : 起了不可替代的作用

宾语：

Enhancing efficiency of communicating among countries greatly and tackling the conflicts and disputes among multinational corporations effectively

解析：adv 修饰 doing

极大地加强国家之间沟通的效率以及有效解决跨国企业之间矛盾与分歧

第三段

让步段（另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳）

（另一种观点：多元文化丧失+对此反驳观点：加快语言发展成为必然趋势 原因 1 多元文化融合规避不必要的纠纷与分歧）

On the other hand, a series of issues also arise out of only utilizing a few languages,such as forfeit of diverse cultures, which exerts irretrievable deficiency toward diverse development across the world.However, accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.另一方面，仅仅使用某些语言会引发一系列的问题，例如多元文化的丧失，对世界多元化的发展造成无法弥补的损失。然而，促进某些广泛使用的语言的发展成为不可逆转的趋势，鉴于各国多元化发展的更好的融合以及规避由过多的使用不同的语言引发的不必要的争论和分歧。

句子分析:

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used turns out to be the irreversible tendency, in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.主语：

Accelerating development of certain languages that are widely used

促进某些广泛使用的语言的发展

Doing + N +定语从句

谓语

Turn out to be vt 成为

宾语

the irreversible tendency 不可逆转的趋势

状语：

in the view of better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages.In the view of + better integration of diverse development of various countries and evading dispensable disputes and divergence evoked by more utilizing disparate languages

鉴于+各国多元化发展的更好的融合以及规避由过多的使用不同的语言引发的不必要的争论和分歧

第四段： 总结全文观点

（支持观点：促进语言发展符合社会发展趋势原因：社会经济更好的发展）On balance, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view/ that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.总而言之，在概括以上观点之后，我持有这样的观点认为促进符合当今社会发展趋势的某些语言体现出不可比拟的优越性，考虑到对于更好的促进经济以及社会发展的作用。

句子分析：

after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.状语：

after summarizing what is outlined above：介宾结构做状语

主语谓宾： I hold the point of view

宾语从句：

that furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society is mainly embodied in incomparable superiority, considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better.主语：

furthering development of certain languages to coincide with trend of development of the current society

谓语：is mainly embodied in 主要体现

宾语：incomparable superiority 不可替代优势

条件状语：Considering its role toward accelerating economic and social development better（更好的促进经济以及社会发展的作用）

第三篇：雅思写作全球化类

雅思写作全球化类范文Nowadays, we enjoy the same film, fashion, brands and TV program.Differences between countries have become less evident.Do you think the disadvantage of this outweigh the advantage?

Nowadays, people all over the world share the same Hollywood movies and fashion.When some people are cheering the colorful life which the cultural globalization brings, others raise doubts about it.To my mind, cultural globalization‟s disadvantages outweigh its advantages.On the one hand, cultural globalization has a lot of advantages.First of all, globalization is a vital process toward transferring knowledge and education throughout the world.Secondly, people can enjoy cultural achievements by artists all over the world, such as films, TV programs, music, opera etc.Finally, the exchange of culture could enhance mutual understanding, create goodwill and remove the hostility and prejudice between different nations.On the other hand, people who are against the cultural globalization have their own reasons.Firstly, the cultural globalization may extinguish cultural individuality and diversity of minor countries and minority groups.It is reported 90% of the world„s languages are not represented on the Internet;five main countries monopolize the world cultural industries trade and in the field of cinema, for instance, 88 countries out of 185 in the world have never had their own film production.Moreover, globalization erodes local languages and promotes „Global‟ English.A recent study published by the University of Hong Kong demonstrates that more than 80% of 6000 languages in the world are dying out because of globalization/ under threat of extinction.Last but not least, globalization has produced adverse effects on local cultural tradition and civilizations.Some people assert that the globalization actually is, to a large extent, Americanization and make it extremely difficult to maintain cultural integrity and religious identity.For example, Beijing Opera, one of most famous traditional arts of China, has gradually lost its attraction to young people.In my opinion, although the cultural globalization has some positive influences on our lives, we can not neglect the negative effect on local culture.2.Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten, discuss.Everything has tow sides in the world, and so has the process of globalization too.The effects of globalization for the world economy are diverted.We must acknowledge that the negative effects are from a different kind than the positive ones.Therefore the negative sides, like low payment in less developed countries are important to considerate.If we take the Euro zone for example, the economic-changes according to the globalization process are huge.Many companies have transferred their factories into cheaper production easier to compete at the world market.The results are rising unemployment rates in the “old industrial countries”.In regard to the other countries on the world market, like China, this job transfer is a big opportunity.But no one can deny that the consequences for the less developed countries with flourished economy, based on

availability of cheap employees are highly important: Globalization based on this fact brings environmental problems.Nevertheless there are also positive reasons for global effects.In general it is remarkable that there is a new tendency in “Thinking Global”.For instance people are willing to learn more languages and about other cultures.Countries formally known as undeveloped, like India, are getting chances to be the main leader in a certain field.All in all it can be said that the effects of globalization are huge.The understanding of economic processes has changed completely.It is important to think in bigger terms, not just about the own country.The positive things that this globalization process has brought must be sensible us for the negative sides.The all over aim should be a world in balance, but this will be a long way.(6.5分)Nowadays we can enjoy the same films, fashions, brands, advertisements and TV channels.The evident difference between countries is disappearing.To what extent do you think the disadvantages overweight the advantages of this?

Globalization creates conditions for widening international exchanges, strengthening mutual understanding between nations, expanding cultural, educational, and scientific cooperation between nations and countries, enjoying the cultural achievements of people around the world which encourages the process of modernization and the enrichment of national culture.However, these conditions also create the possible danger of diminishing the national culture with a negative impact on the pre123vation of national identity.Through globalization and an open door policy, erroneous concepts and a lowering of ethical standards, a selfish and individualistic lifestyle and harmful cultural products can easily be imported into the country.At present, modern information technology which in the main is controlled by US is hourly and intensively disseminating US ideology, way of life, culture and films across the world.Even US food is promoted so that some people consider globalization as global Americanization.During the process of economic globalization, inequality between developed and developing countries has been increasing and the gap between the rich and the poor has become wider, most of the result of globalization go to assist developed countries.Globalization does not pose equal interests and risks to all nations.With an overwhelming advantage compared to most of the developing countries in terms of finance and the level of science and technology, developed ca123alist countries control the situation of economic globalization.For these reasons, globalization is a fierce and complicated struggle in both cultural and ideological fields.We take the initiative in international economic integration but also have to take the initiative in fighting to keep our distinct culture resisting pro-foreign and cross-bred phenomena, and overcoming the psychology of preferring money over ethical values.

第四篇：雅思写作精选：传统文化类

雅思写作 雅思托福技巧 雅思写作-美联国际教育 雅思写作范文精选：传统文化类

2014-01-16 类别：雅思口语来源：enguo责编：meten

雅思写作通常是中国考生的弱项，只有通过在日常生活中多读些 雅思写作范文，了解雅思写作中的逻辑思维，才能得到更好的提高。

写作要求：With the fast pace of globalization, the whole world has

become a global village with combination of different cultures.What are the reasons for losing a variety of languages and cultures? Think of some solution to alleviate the problem.范文 1：

The progression of globalization is inevitable and undeniable.It has been widely noted that many of the world's languages and cultures are dying out.To seek the solution, we should take a closer look at the causes first.Most important of all is the objective reason.The essence of

globalization is commercialization and centralization.It is convenient in communication that some prevalent languages and cultures have its

predominance, which makes superior of the senior and inferiority of the junior.That leads to deterioration of some minors.These languages and cultures will be overlooked and devalued until they completely die out.As concave and convex sides of a nutshell, it has subjective reason.With the burgeoning of some VIPs, many migrants have swarmed into the

dreamlands due to economic drive and stimulation, meanwhile engaged in local culture perspective and discarding their native languages and cultures as a 'betrayal'.Hence this is a problem which must be solved as soon as possible.We should remind the world of versatility of the minor cultures through popular media such as music, artifacts or historical heritage, thus renovating the

music festivals artistic activities and museums.In addition, let more people, especially the young men, use their own language.Never tiring, never yielding, never finishing.We make the purpose, to prevent losing world's cultural and linguistic diversity.“This way a long,tapering, strip of bark can be peeled up to the length of the tree, leaving the tree to heal and continue to grow,” says the United Nations Environment Programme Report.范文 2：

With the pacing the world, globalization is no longer a myth.Nowadays, it is growing at a terrific speed.Each country has combined to be a global village.Languages and cultures are penetrating each other and we are losing a variety of them.There are several reasons for this phenomenon.The first reason can be seen is that the great flow of migration.Globalization has helped open the world's borders, permitting more and more people in small countries to immigrate to other big countries.As the need of working and living, they have to mix new culture with their own

culture and use the new language more often.Gradually, they lose their own custom.The development of technology and economy, however, is the most important factor.The high-tech products in developed countries possess a leading position in the international market due to the globalization.Almost all the people in the world are enjoying the benefits of these products are more multinational corporations are emerging.This is not only a high-tech penetration but also a cultural invasion.People begin to be interested in these developed countries in an earlier age.They learn the language and culture of these countries, which will aid them to find a good job in the multinational corporations.To alleviate the dilemma, the following suggestions should be taken into consideration.In each country, a variety of cultural festivals should be held at a regular time such as poem or music festivals.Through this way, the traditional culture will be kept from generation to generation.Government should pose the consciousness of preserving traditional culture for

inhabitants.In the final analysis, we should keep our own language and culture with the fast pace of globalization.

第五篇：雅思写作 环保类

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

如今，我们正在制造出越来越多的垃圾。你认为产生这种现象的原因是什么？政府怎样做才有助于减少垃圾的产生？

9分考官范文：in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, processed food.we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.(本段提出垃圾增多的两种原因：产品外包装与塑料购物袋的大量使用。)

than families did in the past.Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaged or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket,（本段论证原因1： 现代生活注重便利，从而导致产品外包装被大量使用）and throw it away.We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce.We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.（本段论证原因2： 塑料购物袋的大量使用）can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action.putting taxes on packaging, providing recycling services their waste.（这一段中给了解决方案：提高人们特别是孩子们的环保意识，对产品包装和塑料袋征收费用，对不循环使用废料的家庭与商家进行处罚等。）

With the political will, such measures reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.