第一篇：大学英语四六级作文
大学英语语法总结之四六级作文模板tanhongjun2009
大学英语四六级作文模板
Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/… of …has been brought into public attention.It`s shocking /…to notice that there are an increasing number of…, and it has exerted a good/great/bad influence on society.[叙述现象]
Obviously , It`s more difficult/…for sb to… ,and there are all sorts of reasons for this phenomenon/occurrence.First and formost ,some students claim that … it`s mainly because…
In the next place,some others maintain that…
Furthermore ,few people are more cautious about… they hold out that …
Mostimportantly , …[分析原因（正面）]
Others , however , hold a different view.they point out that …
Additionaly …[分析原因（反面）]
From my point of view , It`s of great importance for us to do sth.so that ,we should pay more attention to it , in order to gain some social experience.It`s because of the diffculties in doing sth that we should spare no effort to take measures to achieve this goal.Thus , I`am sure , it will bring about many benefits to us in the future/long run.[自我看法]
[ About 160 words] 常用句型:
A 组：好方/惯促进无知（常用长句表达）
① be a good way of doing sth
② Make it a good habit of doing sth
③ help promote understanding and communication between …and …
④ without knowing the meaning behind them , they just do sth for …
B组：知道谢序好难同重力（To 的短语）
① as is known to all②thanks to③ in order to
④ do good to⑤take trouble to / have difficulty in doing sth
⑥ agree to/with⑦is of great importance for sb to do sth
⑧ spare no effort to do sth
2010年6月22日 星期二
第二篇：大学英语四六级作文
大学英语四六级作文模板
A.现象描述+原因分析+个人观点B.现象描述+对比分析+个人观点C．现象描述+批判观点/支持的观点+个人观点D． 问题描述+问题分析+ 解决方式E、图表式作文写作模板
A.现象描述+原因分析+个人观点
原因分析模块一
Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注释：
1、XX的第一个优点
2、支持XX的做法
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二个优点
5、举例证明优点二
6、说明XX优点三的影响
原因分析模块二
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).原因分析模块三
For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The significance for
(6).Therefore,(7).注释：
1、人们针对XX的态度和举措
2、归纳现状
3、第一个原因
4、第二个原因
5、第三个原因
6、重申造成现状的最重要原因
原因分析模块四
These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since
(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注释：
1、提出论题
2、说明现状
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解决方法
B.现象描述+对比分析+个人观点
一．1.关于 X的利弊2.X的优点3．X的缺点4.我的观点
One of the controversial issues today is ____________.According to a recent survey, ___________________________.In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it.On the positive aspect, one of the most significant advantages is that ____________________(优点一).Moreover, _________________________________(优点二).Perhaps the primary advantage is that ___________________________.(优点三)On the negative aspect, for one thing, _________________________________.(缺点一)For another, ___________________________________.(缺点二)
As far as I’m concerned, the benefits of ___________(主题)greatly outweigh its drawbacks.We should make better use of ____________(主题)and bypass its negative effects.二．A.有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？B.有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
C．现象描述+批判观点/支持的观点+个人观点
1．一个错误观点。2.．我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
D． 问题描述+问题分析+ 解决方式
A．一个社会问题或者现象B．产生的原因 C．对社会和我们生活的影响 D．如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)E．前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this
problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。X has caused substantial impact on the
society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will...辩论式议论文模版
（一）Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that
观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that
观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,论据1.More importantly,论据2.Most important of all,论据3.In summary, 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
辩论式议论文模版
（二）People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that
观点1.While others point out that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,论据1.For another,论据2.Last but not the least,论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
辩论式议论文模板
（三）There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that
观点1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,论据1.Furthermore,论据2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is,论据3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
E、图表式作文写作模板描述图片内容+分析原因+总结结果
一．it is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of...(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are...(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,...(第一个原因).More importantly,...(第二个原因).Most important of all,...(第三个原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).二、As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…
As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…
All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…
The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%.….在这个城市的增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况。
论说文总论：
1）第一段
现状说明When it comes to, people’s opinions differ.Some hold the opinion that…, while others claim that…
图表描述In1990, it increased /decreased from …to…
By comparison with 1998, it decreased/ increased by
The figure has nearly doubled, compared with/ as against that of last year.It has increased /decreasedalmost twice/six times/ two and half times.compared with
2）第二段
原因列举There are many causes/reasons for this dramatic growth/decrease.One reason is… Another is… Perhaps the primary reason is…
驳斥Although it is widely accepted that…, I doubt/wonder whether the argument bears much analysis/ close examination
提出两个观点，正面论证，列举原因；正反论证，观点陈述
3）第三段
4）Judging from all evidence offered
There is little doubt/ no denying that further attention must be paid to the problem of …
考试应注意：
1.字迹清楚，段落明朗（clear）：字体不要太大，也不要太小，以行间距的三分之一到二分之一为合适；另外，大小要一致，不要忽大忽小；字母的倾斜方向要一致，不要东倒西歪；要抵着给出的虚线写，不能上窜下跳；总之，要给阅卷人清楚、工整的感觉。段落一般为三段，采用段首缩进式，即每段开头空4至8个字母的格，每段段首缩进的量要一致，要让阅卷人一目了然。
2.内容完整，紧扣提纲（complete）：一般来说，六级写作都会给出三点汉语提纲，考生应严格按照三点写成三段。不要有遗漏，也不要随意改变提纲要点的顺序。因为阅卷人要在30秒左右的时间打出分数，所以不希望看到与提纲严重背离的作文。
3.首保正确，再求闪光（correct）：
4.先总后分，连词用上（coherent）：
5.语言简练，论据得当（concise）：另外，要敢于表达自己的思想，不要一味地为了保证语
言正确而裹步不前，只说一些小学生的话。
6.检查。一般可以用一条斜线划掉错词，然后在其上方写出正确的7.三段式：平均每段四句话
8.提纲式作文，看把哪句话或哪两句话作为开头，内容等。
其它一些总结：
开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person.Some hold that….However, others believe that….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.Obviously,….If we want to do something… , it is essential that…
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
预示后果:
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.给出原因:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, ….就某事而言,…
It was obvious that… 很显然,….It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…
认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
转折词
递进 What is more, in addition, besides,总结 in conclusion, to a large extent（在很大程度上）,其它写得好的模板，看看有无借鉴之处:
一、which reveals____________（稍作评价）.In my perspective of view, ____________（表明个人观点）。
Apparently, ____________（将个人观点和图片内容相结合，得出观点。）For one thing, ____________（从社会角度论证）.For another thing, ____________（从个人角度说明）.For example, ____________（自己、朋友或他人，只要自己知道或听过的例子）.Last but not least, ____________（从反面角度谈论）.As a result, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________（建议或措施）.Only in this way can we____________（展望结果）.In conclusion，二、It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated。
So far as I’m concerned, I’d prefer earning the scholarship.This means I must study hard and be a top student, which has always been my goal.After all, the task of a student is to study.And in addition to solving my financial problems, getting the scholarship can also prove my ability and is good for my future.As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct.
第三篇：大学英语四六级作文
Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.。。能让我们的生活更美好，也就是说。。可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩
2）For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。
3）。。。, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.。。占据了某人大部分时间，使得某人没空想东想西（充实了某人生活）
4）What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校为学生省去了不少时间，这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上
5）Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一点一滴，这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野
6）For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge.Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说，抽空学习一门新技术很重要
7）The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable
position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧，这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力
8）By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验
There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …该是采纳…的 的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially.Obviously, clearly.比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列举
for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except(for), to illustrate.时间
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺序
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.解释
in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.让步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately.whereas原因
for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.结果
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.总结
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他
Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent（在很大程度上）, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…
The graph shows that… 图表显示…
As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…
From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…
All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%.….在这个城市的增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况。
第四篇：大学英语四六级作文
口头作文
1、真题回顾：
1）2004－6：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guideline:
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include:
（1）Some welcoming words
（2）The schedule for the day
（3）A description of the place the tourists will be visiting
(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.2）2005－1：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed to write A Campaign Speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
（1）你认为自己具备了什么条件（能力、性格、爱好等）可以
胜任学生会主席的工作，（2）如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？
2、经典范文：
1）2004－6：
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing!To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.I am your guide from China Travel Agency.Today I’m very glad to be your guide.It’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”.I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is the time schedule.First, the Great Wall is the major attraction in this morning.Second, having lunch nearby, we will go to visit the Summer Palace in the afternoon.This is a must!Last, after dining at Night in Beijing, it’s time to watch traditional Chinese performances.At 10 p.m., we will go back to Beijing Hotel.Next, I would like to introduce the Great Wall to you.It is called the Eighth Wonder in the world.Built 2000 years ago, the present relics are constructed in the Ming Dynasty.Hope you enjoy yourselves.2）2005－1：
Today I am very glad to run for the chairperson of the Student Union.I am junior in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.First, I am good at communicating and organizing.By the way, with my outstanding leadership, I have been elected president of our department several times.Second, I am warm-hearted and easygoing.Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate, my cheerful personality is well suited for the position.Last, my hobbies include sports and music.If I am elected, I will exert all my efforts.Firstly, I will organize suitable activities.Secondly, I will try to reach your demands as well.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend myself as an ideal candidate.I am sure you will make a wise decision in voting for me.I hope the above information will help you to know about myself.If any of you have any question/advice/recommendation for me/ need any further information, please feel free/do not hesitate to ask at any time.Thanks for your listening/attention.3）祝酒辞：
Mr.Vice President, our American friends, my colleagues, ladies and gentlemen,On behalf of all the members of our mission/delegation, I would like to express our sincere thanks to you for inviting us to such a marvelous Christmas party.We really enjoyed the delicious food and excellent wine.Also, the music was perfect.I enjoyed meeting and talking to you, and sharing the time together.As we say, well begun is half done.I hope we will be able to maintain this good relationship and make next year another great one together.Thank you again for the wonderful party.We had a great time.In closing, I would like to invite you to join me in a toast.To the health of Mr.Vice President, to all the ladies and gentlemen present here, cheers!
3、两大原则：
1）句子写作：
（1）句子原则：长短结合、以短句为主
（2）基本句型：
A.主谓：I succeed.B.主谓宾：I like Caicai.C.主系表：ZY is smart.D.主谓双宾：Wei Xiaobao gave Ake an English dictionary.E.主谓宾宾补：Tulongdao makes many people selfish.（3）长句写法：
A.并列句：and/or/but/while/whereas
B.从句：
a.定语从句：who/that/which/when/where
b.状语从句：when/where/if/because/though
c.名词性从句：主语、宾语、表语、同位语从句
The fact that a great many teachers are respected shows/indicates/suggests that we should repay them.What they fail to understand is that we should reciprocate out teachers.C.非谓语动词：
a.动名词：
b.分词：过去分词、现在分词
c.不定式：
d.独立主格：Time permitting, I will go to Beijing tomorrow.2）段落写作：
（1）Introduction：引言/起始/淘金段，3句
A.Thesis statement：中心思想，1句
B.Background information：背景信息，2句
a.Background背景
b.Facts事实
c.Others’ opinions反方观点
（2）Body：主体/拓展段，4句
A.Topic sentence：主题句，1句
B.Argument：论证，2句
a.Classification：分类
b.Exemplification：举例
Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).This story tells us that….c.Cause and effect：因果
d.Comparison and contrast：比较和对比
e.Definition and explanation：定义和事实
f.Statistics and facts：统计和事实
According to the recent survey/data/figure/statistics/study by the Chinese Academy of Social Science, …%(percent)….C.Summary：小结，1句
（3）Conclusion：结论段，3句
A.Topic sentence：主题句，1句
B.Argument：论证，1句
C.Summary：小结，1句
第五篇：大学英语四六级作文
大学英语四六级作文：如何写出高分句式
一、句子开头多样化英语(论坛)是一种句型结构灵活多变的语言。由于拘泥于传统语法框架，许多初学写作的人都喜欢用名词开头写句子。这样写倒是无可非议，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同样结构的句子，就显得呆板生硬，缺乏生气了。事实上，在英语写作中除名词可放在句子的开头外，许多其它词类及词组均可放在句子开头的位置。
例句：Women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society as time passes.上面这句话至少还有两种开头方式：
1.As time passes, women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society.2.To take a fuller part in society, women leave their homes as time passes.二、避免一个“I”写到底
初学英文写作的人的另一通病是一个“I”写到底，句首僵硬，缺乏变化。
试读下面这段文章：
One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little plot.I love it and take care of it well.I loved especially to grow peas.I was proud when we had them on our table.I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up.I would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury them.上面这一段共用了八个“I”。当然上文若出自一个幼童笔下，倒不乏天真纯朴的趣味。不妨改写如下：
According to my recollection, one thing in particular that made me feel grateful toward my mother was the day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she did let me have my own little plot.I love it and take care of it well, especially the growing of peas.Having them on the table made me proud.I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up and would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, killing them and burying them.改写后的段落仅有三个“I”，一看就出自成人手笔。
三、注意句子的紧凑性
1.当两个句子是围绕着同一主题的不同方面进行说明时，可以将两句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，从而使句子更加紧凑。这也就是省略结构所表达出的英文的紧凑性。需要注意的是两句中形成对应关系的something要完全一致才可以省略，而且与相同成分相关的短语（主要是动词短语中的介词）不可以省略。另外，如果表示比较结构的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短语修饰，后面的相同成分要由代词来置换，而不能直接将其省略。（如下面的例句三）
例句： They should acquire knowledge not only from books but also from the society.他们不仅要从书本中学习知识，还要从社会中汲取知识。
Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or we’ll be(responsible for the matter).或者赛丽对此事负责，或者由我们来承担责任。
The population of this country is three times as large as that of its neighbor.这个国家的人口是它邻国的三倍。（汉语可以说是它邻国的三倍，但英语一定要说是它邻国的人口的三倍，这也是英语较为汉语更为严密的一种表现）
2.条件句也是使句子紧凑的一种表达方式。这里我们介绍一下in which在条件句中的用法，它相当于条件句的引导词if，这时可译作“如果．．．那么．．．”或“当．．．时”。
例句：An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that concert.当另外一个乐团演奏A（乐曲）时，那麽演奏B（乐曲）的乐团就有充分的理由不去彩排了。
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