第一篇：高考英语作文注意事项
高考英语作文注意事项
以下都是在课堂上学到的知识，指出一些高考英语作文中应注意的事项。希望有助于同学们减少错误，欢迎提出建议和指出错误。
1.字要写得好看（有加分哦）
2.字要规范，要怎样才算规范呢？由于老师改卷都是用电脑扫描的，因此看不到答题卡上的横线，所以要注意规范。举个例子，如字母y.g.p.q等占两格。j.f占三格所以字母下部要靠着横线拉长不然扫出来不好看。
3.写错了尽量用两条杆划掉，不要乱涂保持卷面整洁。
4.作文开头要空出4
小作文：
1第一个句子一定要正确，特别是语法方面。因为，老师改卷会给印象分，如果第一句写不好会影响后面的分数，所以好好练习吧。
2要求5个句子，千万不要多写或少写，要把题目中的中文句子分成5句，不要自己加几句或少写几句
3然后，尽量不要改动题目中给的中文句子的顺序
4不要乱用标点符号，有些同学喜欢写一个单词点一个点，这样也会影响，因为英语中的句号和中文的句号不一样。中文的句号是一个空心的小圈，英语中的句号是一个小黑点，如果一个单词一个点就不只5句了。。。
5每个句子都要注意动词和连接词的关系，一般有n个动词就有n-1个连接词（除非是一些可以省略的连接词）个字母的位置
大作文：
1第一个句子仍然很重要（理由同上）
2字数一定要写够，除了前面空三行写概括，后面一般写剩三行。字不要太小太密（因为即使字写够了剩下的多行也会有影响，老师改卷不会是慢慢数你有几个字的。。。）一般字数够了，没有什么语法上的错误且字不要太丑都有及格分了。
3大作文（除了概括部分）一般用三个句子表达完。当然这三个句子是长句，每个句子前面都要空出4个字母的位置。三个句子都按题目给的回答。
4前面的概括不限几句，当然能一句写完最好，这个也要注意字数，不要超过太多和缺太多，大概把三行写满，建议不要写四行。
5仍然要注意动词与连接词的关系。
6写作是要注意时态问题，这个在最开始审题时就该定下，可根据所给的题目判断。
高中英语作文写作的注意事项都有哪些?不管是语文还是英语其中的作文题很分数的很大的一部分，语文的作文大家都很熟悉，但是对于英语的作文相对来说就会有些困难，在数学了有点点成线，线线成面，面面成片这一说，在英语也是一样的词成句句成语语成文，通俗的就是作文是由每个单词组成的，那么在写作的时候应该注意哪些呢?
1、审题：审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。
2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架：审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。
3、扩展成文：根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。
4、检查修改：要检查复核，不要写完了事。
要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。
可归纳为：中心突出，主题明确;层次清楚，条理清晰;表达力强，传情达意;语句通顺，句型多变;过渡自然，衔接紧凑;标点正确，大小无误;字迹清楚，卷面整洁。
英语作文站英语分数很大的比例，因此对于学生来说写好作文就是拿高分数的开始。
注意事项用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。
1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。
2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而不愿使用熟悉的常用词，去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要实事求是地把握，避免不必要的失分。
3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名建筑师”，很多同学写成“Myambitionistodo/makeanarchitect”，“todo”表示“做”或者“干”，“tomake”表示“制作”，而“做一名建筑师”则表示“成为一名建筑师”应该用“be/becomeanarchitect”;又如“看书、看报”应用“readabook/newspaper”，而不是“seeabook/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，望文生义或一味生搬硬套只会闹出“我的理想是制作一名建筑师”的笑话。
4、有些同学因噎废食，因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞贫泛、言之无物，要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“nowthat”、“not„but”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。
1、认真审题立意
定文章之灵魂对命题作文必须认真审题，对自由作文必须立好意。文章要有明确的主题，必须具备4个条件：准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。
2、草拟提纲
打造文章之骨架审好题，立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句，还要从提示句的关键词出发，围绕关键词开拓思路，发挥联想，记录下联想到的东西，可以是句子或单词词组，可以是英语或汉语。
3、写出段落主题句
理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要，是作者思维的起点，切题的准绳，阐述的对象。看到段落主题句，读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头，可使文章结构更清晰，有说服力。
4、参照提纲
紧扣主题句，完成各段落，充文章之血肉有了段落主题句后，还需要顺着段落主题句的方向，参照提纲中的思路，从而完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣，为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法，和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。
5、注意
进行这一步骤还需注意三方面问题：
1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题，不跑题。
2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。
3)用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。增加文采小窍门: 如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思，第三、四步骤则是真正地“写”了，用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平，但也有些窍门是需要长时间累积的。
要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：
1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全，不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
第二篇：高考英语注意事项
高考英语注意事项
English.不定冠词却用a的单词
① a unit ②a useful/useless thing③ a university ④a uniform
a usual task a united form ⑦a European ⑧a
one-eyed man a one-way trip
二、熟词新意about
关于
prep．＆ adv．到处＝（美）aroundact
v.（戏）表演，扮演（角色），演出（戏）；行动，做事
act n.法令，条例act
行动
vi．起作用address
地址
致辞admit
承认
允许进入容纳age 年龄
年代agree with
同意
与……一致，协调，适合appreciate
v.欣赏
v.感激approach
接近；与…打交道
着手处理（问题等）arm
n.臂, 支架 v.以……装备，武装起来n.文章
物品an article ofatmosphere
大气
气氛；情绪attend
article（美）武器，武力出席，参加
看护，照料，服侍attend
出席
vt．＆vi．看护，治疗badly
坏
adv．迫切ball
球
舞会bank
（河、海、湖的）岸，堤
n.银行 bank account n.银行账户bar
条；（长方）块，棒，横木
（酒店的）买酒柜台；酒吧；（卖东西的）柜台be on fire
着火
对…充满热情book 书；本子
v.预定，定（房间、车票等）box
盒子，箱子
哨亭，大耳光branch
树枝；分枝
分公司，分店；支部branch
树枝
支流；分支机构break down
（机器等）坏了
（计划）失败，坚持不下去can
可能；能够
（美）罐头；罐子 ．做成罐头capital
首都，省会
大写case 箱；盒；容器
情况；病例；案件；真相chair
名词，椅子、主席（chairperson）
当动词用，是担任主席（to be a chairperson）chance
机会
n．可能性v．碰巧character
（汉）字，字体
品格charge
要求收费；索价
将(电池)充电 n.费用；价钱；控告come out
出来
①出版；②开花；③结果（如何）company
公司
有人作伴；伙伴；客人（均为不可数）conduct
引导，带领
指挥contribute
贡献
投稿；捐献countv.数, 认为；视为；看作 be counted as 被认为
Count vi.有价值；重要；有用count
数（数目）
vi．重要；vt．认为cover n.盖子；罩 v.覆盖，遮盖；掩盖
v．走完（一段路），够付（费用），看完（多少页书）；涉及；报导cricket
蟋蟀
板球cross
n.十字形的东西 vt.越过；穿过
a.脾气不好的，易怒的custom 习惯，习俗，风俗习惯
customs n.海关，关税date
n.日期；约会
n.枣
v追溯dear
a.亲爱的；贵的 int.（表示惊愕等）哎呀！唷！demonstrate 游行；示范
论证；说明depend
A．依靠 B．信赖
视情况而定desert
沙漠
vt．离开，抛弃n．应得的赏罚develop
发展
冲洗（胶卷）develop
发展；开发
A．染上 B．开发direct
直接的；直达的；直截了当的 指挥；指导
监督；管理；指挥（演奏）；导演（电影）do
做，制作
A．做 B．行doctor
doctor：名词，医生、大夫
当动词用，是指窜改、对……做手脚。draw
画
A．打平B．画drive
驾驶
A．使 B．精力easy
容易的adj．舒适的，安分的，轻松的eat one's words
收回前言，认错道歉（切勿望文生义，解为“食言”break one's words）engage
雇佣；使从事
订婚；约定exploit
开采，开发
利用；剥削express
表达；表示
n.快车，特快专递A．表达fair
a.公平的，合理的 a.(肤色)集市；庙会；展览会fair
公平
市场 白皙fall
vi.落（下），降落；
n.秋季A．掉下false
不正确的假的familiar
熟悉
adj．密切的，亲密fan
扇子
吹 ．迷 ．狂热者far from
离……远
远远不是fault
过错
缺点，毛病figure
n．数字；雕塑，人物
v．认为，想象fine
a.晴朗的；美好的；（身体）健康的罚金；细的；细小的fire
火；开火，开（枪，炮等），射击
解雇flat
a.平的 n.楼中一套房间； 公寓(常用复数)force
强迫，迫使
力量；军队空军foreign
外国的
不熟悉；和……格格不入free
自由的，空闲的免费的,没有，免交；远离（常与of连用）funny
a.有趣的，滑稽可笑的怪味的get through
接通（电话）
用完；（使）通过（考试、议案）give away
赠送
泄露（机密）；暴露（身份）；出卖（朋友）give out
散发（传单）等
宣布；被用完；运转失灵given
被给予
（＝considering）prep．考虑到go
去，离开
v．被放置；相配；变得更糟go out
出去
熄灭，公开，播放goal
（足球）球门
目标grade
年级
成绩，分数hang
悬挂，吊着；把……吊起
绞刑；上吊head
n.头；头脑(像)；才智；首脑；源头；标题 a.头部的；主要的；首席的v.率领；加标题；用头顶；出发；(船等)驶向heart
心；心脏
纸牌中的红桃hold
握；拿；举行
v．容纳hold on
别挂断；等一等
继续坚持做（难做之事）home
家
adj．本国的hot
a.热的 辛辣的；最新的；热烈的；脾气暴躁的if
如果
conj．即使；虽然in time
及时
迟早interest
n.兴趣，趣味
n．利益；利息；股份；同业者jam
果酱
vt．n．（使）塞进；（使）塞满；（使）堵塞，困境just
ad.刚才；恰好；不过；仅
a.公正的keep
保持，保留
vt．管理；经营，照顾；养活；饲养；售卖；遵守；庆祝key
钥匙，答案
n．＆adj．关键（的），关键性的人物kill 杀
vt．删掉，除掉，关掉，使笑／痛得要死，使难受之极；消磨land
土地
着陆,使……处于last
a.最近刚过去的；最后的 ad.最近刚过去；最后地 n.最后
v.持续last
最后的
adj．最不可能的v．延续，够用（多久）last
最后的最不可能的 过去的 持续late
已故的lead
领导，引导，通向
vt．致使n．铅lecture 演讲
n．＆v．训斥，教训（批评）lesson
课
n．教训（不悦的经历）let down
放下来
辜负，使失望let out
让出去
泄露（机密）；发出（声）；出租letter
信
字母lift
v.举起，抬起；
（云、烟等）消散
n.（英）电梯n．搭便车，鼓舞
adj．亮的，浅色的，轻的；v．点燃
adj．轻浮的，灵巧的v．开朗起来live
vi.生活；居住；活着
a.活的，活着的
light
实况，现场（直播）的long
长
盼望,长久march
三月
行军．前进master
主人
掌握．大师match n.比赛，竞赛
n.火柴
vt.使相配，使成对match
．火柴 比赛
匹配．配偶matter
麻烦事
有关系mean
意味着 ．打算
卑鄙的．标准meet
遇见，见到 会；集会
meet
遇见
满足 ．会议mine
我的矿minute
分钟
备忘录monitor
班长
监视mouse
鼠，耗子
（计算机）鼠标object
物体
宾语 ．反对observe 观察
遵守；庆祝（节日）operate
动手术
管理 ．经营order
命令
次序．订购park
公园
泊车part
部分
作用 ．分离 ．角色passage
文章等的一节，一段
通道； 走廊patient
adj耐心的病人place
A．放 B．搁置
名次 ．发（定单）plant
植物 ．种植
工厂play
玩
扮演 ．剧本point
v.指，指向；观点
n.点； 分数poor a.贫穷的；可怜的不好的,差的post
．邮寄邮政
岗位 ．柱 ．present
现场的；在场的礼物，赠品
呈现；描述；介绍；赠送promise
许诺
有希望的pupil
小学生
瞳仁race
种族 ．民族
赛跑raise
举起
饲养 ．引起reach
A．到达 B．达到
C．伸手去拿 D．手接触的范围reflect
反映；反射；表现
反省rest
A．休息 B．剩余
C．停止 D．依靠revolution
革命
巨变right n.权利
a.对，正确的 ad.正确地，恰恰，完全地 a.右，右边的right
A．正确的 B．正是
右边 D．权利ring
A．电话
B．戒指 C．圆圈 D．铃响rise
A．上升 B．起床
C．加工资run
跑步
A．开办 B．褪色
季节
赛季sentence
句子
判刑serve
C．追求season 服务
上菜sharp
锋利的尖锐的；敏感的；准时的spot
spot 斑点，点，污点，（皮肤上的）丘疹等。地点，场所，少量
vt.（不用于进行时）看见，注意到，发现spring
n.春天，春季
n.泉水，泉square
n.广场
a.平方的；方形的，宽而结实的（体格，肩膀）stage
舞台
阶段stamp
邮票
跺脚state
A．状态 B．州
C．陈述step
A．踩 B．步伐
C．措施story
故事
楼层study
学习
书房table
名词，桌子；
当动词用，是指开会时延期讨论提案等，也就是暂缓审议。take off
脱下
起飞；摘下，迅速流行，换下，终止，取消； 休假，休息，剪掉，切除（人体）；模仿tape
胶带
磁带tear
n.眼泪
v.扯破, 撕开vacant
空着的，未被占用的；（职位）空缺的；
（目光，表情等）无神的，呆滞的very
非常
恰是while
然而wind 风
蜿蜒曲折wing
翅膀
羽翼work out
计算出
锻炼
第三篇：高考英语作文五点注意事项
高考英语作文五点注意事项
高考英语，作文是分值大项，如何在考场上得到高分，小编提醒考生们注意下面5点。
(一)仔细审题，确定要点。
在开始写作前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲，列要点时，如果提示是图表，要认真审图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如事件发生的背景，人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等，如果有参考词汇，一定要用上。
(二)根据要点，先词组句。
近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高，高分文章要有较多的词汇，较高级的词汇用法。
比如：表达“丰富的”可以用rich, 但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。
再比如：“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子。
He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。
(三)确定时态及人称，内容连贯，结构紧凑。
高考书面表达评分标准明确规定，如人称错误要扣分，不同的文体一般都有基本时态。
日记通常记叙发生过的事情，多用一般过去时。
议论文多用一般现在时。
通知等文体通常用一般将来时。
每个句子写好之后，句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。
比如：
(1)表示承接、递进用语，besides(并且)、what's more(并且)，moreover(而且)，firstly, secondly, finally(最后)，from now on(从此)，after wards(后来)，to make things worse/ what's worse(使事情更为糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。
(2)表示转折关系用语。otherwise, though, despite, in spite of...(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(尽管)，all the same(尽管如此)。
(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of......for(因为)，owing to(由于)，thanks to(由于)，due to(由于)，so that(结果)。
(4)归纳总结用语。in short/in a word(简而言之)，on the whole(从总体看)，generally speaking(一般说来)，in my view(我的观点)，in conclusion(总之)。
(四)句式丰富，避免单词。
英语书面表达评分标准要求，“应使用较复杂结构”，这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型，也要有意识地使用复杂句型，这是文章的亮点。
如何使用复杂结构，小编认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)是有效途径。
例如：when he arrived in Beijing,he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)
改为：On arriving in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.Having arrived in Beijing.he gave me an e-mail.(使用了动名词，分别作状语。高级)
Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态，句子结构。高级)
例如：I won't believe what he says.(一般)
改为：No matter what he says, I won't believe.(让步状从句，高级)。
(五)注意书写，卷面整洁。
高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其是进行网上阅卷，如果书写较差，会影响到扫描质量，因此，考生在答卷时，一定要认真、清楚规范地书写，以保卷面整洁。
第四篇：2018届高考英语作文分类及写作注意事项
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
分类写作 一邀请信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.I'm now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it, if you can spare the time.我代表同学写信邀请您来参加，如果您能抽出时间的话。2.I sincerely invite you to watch the show because… 我诚挚地邀请您来看演出，因为…
3.You can reach me through my phone number 4476655 at your convenience.您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话，号码是 44876655。
〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2012全国II邀请外教参加生日聚会〗
假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：
1.时间：周五晚 8 点至 9 点 2.地点：学生俱乐部
3.内容：唱生日歌、吃蛋糕、玩游戏等 4.要求：备小礼物 满分佳作
Hi, Susan，We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.As scheduled, all the classmates in our class will gather at the Students' Centre at 8 pm this Friday evening to celebrate Xiaoming's birthday.○1We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it, which is to finish at 9, lasting an hour.As the party starts, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” for him.○2Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy, following which we'll sing songs and play some small games.○3What's more, as a surprise, we'll all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him, and it'll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts.○4As it's a surprise party, he will know nothing about it beforehand, and we do hope that you could manage to attend it.○5Looking forward to your coming.Yours
Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
二询问/回复信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.I am writing to ask for more formation about it.我写信来询问更多关于它的消息
2.There are some pieces of information that I'd like to share with you.有一些消息我想要和你分享。
3.The most significant thing you should keep in mind is that…
你需要记住的最重要的事情是
〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2014全国新课标卷：夏令营信息咨询〗
假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。
ENJOY A RELAXING STUDY BREAK IN BEAUTIFUL LANCASTER----------LANGUAGE CENTRE AND COLLEGE OF ARTS
UNIVERSITY OF LANCASTER
Languages * English * French * Spanish Arts * Politics * Sociology * History 3wk, 6wk and 12wk courses
***
Reasonable fees
***
Accommodation service 满分佳作
（一）Dear Sir / Madam，○1I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English courses.○2First, when will the course start and how many Class hours are there per week? Besides, | wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.○3 Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
三请求/求助信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.I would be very grateful if you could …
如果您能„„我将感激不尽
2.I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.如您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。
3.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.谢谢您的关注，待收到您尽早的回复。
4.If you need further information, do let me know.如您需要更多的信息，请告知我。
〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2013新课标I卷：请求帮助接机〗
假定你是李华。请你给笔友 Peter 写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11：30 满分佳作
（一）Dear Peter，How are you doing？○1I'm writing to tell you that my uncle LiMing is going to have a meeting in your city.○2Do you remember the Chinese painting I promised you last year? My uncle will bring it to you soon.| hope you will like it.○3I wonder if you could do me a favor.This is the first time that my uncle visits the US, so I hope you can meet him at the airport.He arrives at 11 ： 30 a · m · on August 6th and his flight number is CA 985.○4I would appreciate it if you could take him to his hotel.My uncle is tall.He will be wearing dark glasses and a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
四申请/求职信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.I sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considered.我真诚地希望我的申请会被考虑。
2.The ad is really very appealing to me, so I'm now writing to you in the hope of filling in the job vacancy.这则广告非常吸引我，所以我写信给您希望能够填补这个职位的空缺。3.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because…
我真的希望得到这次珍贵的机会，因为
〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2012全国I卷：申请参加夏令营〗
假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）； 3.希望获准。
满分佳作
（二）Dear Sir or Madam
○1The other day I happened to read your advertisement on the Internet, saying that you are holding a summer camp aimed at students from around the world, and I'm interested to participate in it.I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in China.As a teenager, I'm interested in making friends with kids of my age from around the world.Your camp will provide a good chance for to know a lot about other countries and tell them something about China.○2What's more, I can improve my English, communicating with people from other countries.○3 I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.○4Looking forward to your reply.Regards，Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
五建议信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.Almost perfect as it is, it should make more improvement in some area.尽管它近乎完美，它在一些方面需要改进。
2.And I've found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing, … For another thing, …
我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面，„另一方面，…
3.I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.我相信，有了老师和学生的共同努力，我们学校会在不久的将来成为一个更令人快乐的地方。〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2011全国II卷：读者给报刊建议〗
假定你是李华，你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报正值创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者； 2.赞赏该报有点
1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事；
3.提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。满分佳作
Dear Editor-in-Chief，Congratulation on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror！
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper.○1 I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.○2 First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.○3 Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.○4As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours, Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
六感谢/祝福信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.I'm writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for teaching me the English song.我写信来达对你教我英文歌的衷心感谢！
2.Without your help, the performance couldn't have been that successful.没有您的帮助，表演不会有那么成功。
3.I'd like to express my thanks for your hospitality and kindness when | was in America.我想感谢您对我在美国时的好客和友好。4.In addition, what has impressed me most is…
而且，最让我感动的是 〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2008全国I卷：生日祝贺/感谢照顾〗
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1.自我介绍；
2.祝贺苏琳生日； 3.感谢工作人员； 4.索取苏琳三岁生日昭
满分佳作
（二）Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!This is Li Hua, a student in China，○1I've been fond of pandas since my childhood.○2Since three years ago, when the panda Baiyun gave birth to a baby panda Sulin, I have been visiting your website to keep myself informed about how things are going for them.If Iremember clearly, she will turn three soon.○3I want to say happy birthday to her and express my thanks to you for your hard work, with which she has been brought up and has been living happily with her parents in the US.○4By the way, I wonder if I could have a photo taken of Sulin on her third birthday.Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
七投诉信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.Taking into account all three factors above, I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible.考虑到以上的三个因素，我要求公司要为我尽快换一个新的。2.But we are regretful to find that it cannot work normally.但是，我们很遗憾地发现它不能正常地工作。
3.Your prompt attention and early reply will be appreciated.感谢您即时的关注和及早的回复。
4.I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.我在等待一个合理的解释，并期待及早回复。
〖全真考场〗
〖模拟1：投诉服务态度〗
假如你是李华，昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇，回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时，该营业员对你的态度恶劣，对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信
满分佳作
Dear Manager，I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop, but when I got home and turned it on, it didn't work.So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem.To my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it.Generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop.I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop.I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.Sincerely yours, Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
八道歉信
〖好句朗诵〗
1.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.我十分抱歉没有时向信。
2.Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...无论如何，我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间
3.I'm awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity.对突然的改变我感到十分抱歉，对错过这个机会感到很可惜。
〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2013山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因
2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。
满分佳作 Dear Tom
○1 I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.○2 I was so occupied with the final exams.As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant.○3 Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.○4 And then | will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest.Finally, go to Ya'an to work as a volunteer.○5 There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.6 I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them.Best wishes.Yours sincerely，Li Hua / 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
九观点议论
〖2014 山东卷改编：我喜欢的英语谚语〗：
某英文报社组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语“征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括： 1.该谚语的含义；
2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。a)A friend in need is a friend indeed.b)Where there's a will, there‘s a way.参考词汇：谚语 proverb
满分佳作
（一）A Friend in Need Is a Friend Indeed ○1 A life without friends is a life without sunshine!Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.○2 Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence.Finally, decided to stop studying.After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently.○3 She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.○4 Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your heart, True friends always come to you when you need help.满分佳作
（二）Where There's a Will, There's a way
○1 Among all the instructive proverbs, the one Ilike most is ”Where there is a way, there is a way“, which tells us that we should stick to our dreams.For me the saying has special meaning.When I was in Junior Middle School , I was so poor in my studies that I nearly gave up.○2But my head-teacher was always there andgive me confidence every time I lost heart.He used to say, ”A little more effort and you will make it”○3 Thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid off and finally I became a top student.○4Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.As long as you keep trying, you'll make it./ 22
2018届高三英语备课组 高考英语好句朗诵+满分佳作赏析
十记叙描写
〖好句朗诵〗
1.With the economy developing rapidly,I'm glad to see our city is taking on a new look.随着经济的快速发展，我非常高兴地看到我们的城市呈现出新的面貌。2.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.过去的二十年左右，我们的生活发生了重大的变化。3.Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.尽管很累，我没有觉得这么开心。
〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2014全国大纲卷：十年后的我〗
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的想象完成短文。1.家庭： 2.工作； 3.业余生活。
满分佳作
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.○1I would like to give a general picture of my future life in ten years.○2 First of all, I will have a warm family where family members will love each other and care about each other.○3As for me, since being a teacher is my dream, I'm sure that this dream will come true then.I wish to teach foreign students traditional Chinese culture in a college at that time and I will certainly introduce China to the world.○4Time permitting，I expect to have more spare time to spend with my fiends so that we can have a better relationship.○5 Such will be my future life, the one I have been dreaming of./ 22
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十一说明介绍
〖好句朗诵〗
1.As the saying goes, when in Rome, do as the Romans do.俗话有说，入乡随俗。2.It takes over ten experts and professors four years to finish this dictionary.这本词典由十多位专家、教授花费四年时间编纂而成。〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2014天津卷改编：绐留学生介绍情况〗 假设你是晨光中学高二（1）班的班长李华，得知美国学生 Chris 作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请
你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件： 1.表示欢迎；
2.介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气、饮食）3.介绍本班情况。
参考词汇：交换生 exchange student（满分佳作）Dear Chris
I'm Li Hua monitor of Class One Grade Eleven.○1I ' m very excited about your coming to our school next term as an exchange student.○2 Firstly, I'd like to tell you about the weather in my city, which is often windy and cold in winter.So you should bring your warm clothes.Secondly, would you mind eating noodles? Because people here mainly live on wheat flour.However, don't worry about it.○3You will have no difficulty in finding western food.Thirdly, Iwant to introduce our class to you.○4The teachers in our school are not only experienced and knowledgeable, but also patient and understanding.Everyone in my class is active.I hope you will soon become a member of our Class.○5l'm looking forward to your coming.Yours Li Hua / 22
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十二发言/演讲稿
〖好句朗诵〗
1.Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club.今天，我非常高兴有机会来竞选英语俱乐部的副主席。
2.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.我们是带着真诚来创造一个和谐的气氛的。
3.I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.我相信在您的不懈努力，您在这里会有一个丰硕多彩的人生。〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖2013 天津卷改编：竞选演讲稿〗
假设你是某大学的学生李华，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。1.个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）： 2.工作设想：
3.表达竞选的愿望。
参考词汇：副主席 vice president 竞选 run for 满分佳作
（二）Good afternoon, my dear friends.My name is Li Hua.Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club.I feel qualified to take the job.○1 Not only have I gained a lot of experience from my job as monitor but I am also good at organizing activities.○2Looking in the future, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students if I am lucky enough to be the vice president.○3 For one thing, I will organize some campus activities, like “English Evening”, a platform where students can show their English.For another, I will organize more activities to enhance the interschool communication.○4 I sincerely hope YO u will give me a chance.Thank you./ 22
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十三地方介绍
〖好句朗诵〗
1.The street is to the south of Tian'anmen Square.这条街在天安门广场的南边。
2.It can date back to six hundred years and has a length of about 800 metre，along which lie 300 shops.它可以追溯到600年前，有800米长，两边有300家商店。
3.It's a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom a bathroom and a kitchen.这是一个25平方米的小公寓，有一个卧室、一个浴室和一个厨房。4.The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River.这座城市坐落在长江边上。〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
2009全国卷〖回信：介绍景点．〗
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
1.简况：长 800 余米、600 多年历史、300 余家商铺； 2.位置：天安门广场南面；
3.交通：公共汽车 17、69、59 等路，地铁2号线； 4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 满分佳作
（一）Dear Sarah，Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.Qianen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old.Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 shops.1 As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian'anmen Square, ○it's very convenient to get there by bus.You may take buses NO.11, 69 or 59！
2Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.○there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to the theaters and
3I'm sure you'll teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.○like it.Yours Li Hua / 22
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十四活动安排
〖好句朗诵〗
1.The following are our preliminary arrangements for your review and comments.以下是我们初步的安排，供您审阅和提建议。
2.Please feedback whether you're satisfied with this schedule, and we will make some changes if necessary.请反馈您是否满意这个安排，如果需要我们将会作出改变。
3.If there is anything I can do for you, I would be mere than glad to help.如果有我可以帮忙的，我将非常乐意。〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖 2004 全国 Il 卷：告知活动安排〗
假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy smith 将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给 Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下： ※上午：学校活动 ※下午：游览市区
※晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天 参考词汇：安排 arrange 满分佳作 Dear Andy, I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home y ○
2Now let me tell you what we parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.○have arranged for you.I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon show you around and take you to some places of 3 We'll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and interest.○meeting people.I'm sure we'll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other's 4l'm looking forward very much to meeting you soon.company.○Yours, Li Hua / 22
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十五报道/调整
〖好句朗诵〗
1.Recently, a survey has been done to find out „ 最近，进行了一次调查去了解···
2.One thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in HuBei Province were interviewed.湖北省10间学校的一千名中学生参与了调查。
3.The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most.调查发现超过一半的学生最喜欢读新闻。
4.The survey shows that half of the girls choose..., while 48 ％ of the boys … 调查发现一半的女生选...，而48%的男生...5.In order to celebrate the 90th birthday of our Party and enrich our lives, our school has organized a patriotic song concert recently.为了庆祝建党90周年，丰富大家的文化生活，我们学校最近举办了一次爱国歌曲演唱会。
〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖 2006 湖北卷改编：英语阅读调查〗 受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇 100 词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句己为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种 调查范围：湖北省的 10 所中学
调查对象：高中生调查人数： 1200调查方式：访谈 调查结果：（见下图）
选择各类英文文章人数的百分比
Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students
Recently, a survey has been one to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.1ln this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in ○Hubei Province were interview.They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.2The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most.○3 ○Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite.Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning 4However, the number of the students who enjoy reading popular science methods.○articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods./ 22
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十六启事
〖好句朗诵〗
1.Our school is looking for a native speaker of English to „ 我们学校正在找一位英语母语者来
2.If you are interested in the job information, please reply to me as soon as possible
如果你对工作信息感兴趣，请尽快回复我。
3.You can also write to ccc20091201@sina.com to inform me.你也可以发邮件到 CCC20091201 @sina.com 来通知我。4.The main responsibilities of the advisor include...顾问的主要职责包括...5.If you are interested, please call Li Hua at *** for an interview.如果您感兴趣，请致电*** 找李华安排面试。〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖 2010 全国 Il 卷：招聘信息〗
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Peter 表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1.教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等； 2.授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）；
3.工作量：每周 12 学时，任选三门课，担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)。满分佳作（一)Dear Peter, Now, here is
I remember you told me you were interested teaching in china.○some good news that I hope will appeal to you.You see, our school is looking for a native speak of English to teach some courses to the senior high school students，2The courses include who have at least three years of English learning experiences.○speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today, from which you are expected to choose three to teach.Once you are employed, you are expected to work 12 hours a week.Besides teaching you also have to work as an advisor to our Students' English Club or our school's English newspaper.3If you are interested in the job information, please reply to me as soon as possible.○Meanwhile, I'm always ready to help you with questions you might come up with.Yours, Li Hua / 22
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十七倡议
〖好句朗诵〗
1.As high school students, it's our duty to tell everyone around us to save water.作为高中生，告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。
2.Let's start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day, every hour and every minute.让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。〖模拟真题：提倡无偿献血〗 作文原题
假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血(donate blood for free)要点提示：
1.社会上对献血的错误认识； 2.指出献血的意义； 3.开展相关活动。
〖模拟真题：提倡献血〗 Boys and girls，Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be in short supply of blood.Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donor's health.But the truth is that when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally.As we know, donating blood is of great importance.Blood is important to patients, without which many can't survive.Among young people like us, donating blood is a social responsibility.We senior high school students, who have a better understanding of medical knowledge, should set a good example for other people.From now on, our school will hold a series of activities to explain the benefits of donating blood.Donate now and save a life!
The Students' Union / 22
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十八留言/请假条
〖好句朗诵〗
1.Since you were out,I have to leave this note to you.既然你出去了，我只好给你张便条了。
2.I am sorry that I can't attend the party to be held this Friday at your apartment.很抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举办的派对。3.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded.我想是否有可能把讲座录音。〖真题满分佳作赏析〗
〖 09 全国II卷：外出留言〗
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs.Wilson写一留言条，内容包括： 1, 外出购物 2, 替房东还书
3, Tracy 来电话留言:1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消）此事己告知 Susan 3）尽快回电
满分佳作 Mrs.Wilson I have taken I'm going out shopping and won't be back until about 5:00 pm.○At about 1 with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.○o'clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton She felt Coffee tomorrow morning as she had something important to attend to.○very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.注意事项
1.字迹工整、书写规范（这一点很重要，会为你赢得印象分，六月份改卷时期老师改卷任务重，天气炎热，字迹清晰工整会让阅卷老师心情好）最好。衡水体火了之后，很多学校都开始重视英文规范书写，可参考电子科大出版的《学习型字帖英语规范书写教程》里的写法指导和高考优秀范文格式。
2.字数写够。（老师看到字迹工整，字数够的作文，心里会马上把分数定位在18分，也就是及格分数，然后再读一遍作文，即使读的过程中发现有错误，最后的/ 22
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分数也不会比18分低很多）
3.作文题目中若给出了作文主要内容并用1.2.3.点或者用表格写了出来。写出的作文中一定要包括这题目中提到的所有的要点，因为在制定评分规则的时候会把总分平均分给这几个要点，如果文中没有提到某个要点，那么相应的这个要点的分就不能得，最后的得分自然也就低一些。
4.关于作文的具体内容。尽量使用有把握的单词和句子，稳中求胜。如遇到不会说的单词会句子，想办法换个说法把意思表达出来，切忌自己造新词或者乱搭配，这样会闹笑话，弄巧成拙。
5.学会分段，平时写作文大多数同学一段到底，作文最好分三段，这样会显得作文有条理，错落有致，并且看上去作文的字数要多一些。
6.要有时态和语态的意识。不能通篇全都是一个时态，或者根本没有时态，时态是英语最基本的语法，也是高考作文的一个重要评分标准。英语是一个惯用被动语态的语言，不妨在文中加入几个被动语态的句子，为作文增加光彩。
7.避免低级错误：每句话的首字母大写，人名、地名首字母大写；每段开头空出4个字符的位置；主谓一致（切忌出现I is, he are, they was等类似错误）；动词跟时态一致（如He like teaching us等）；名词单复数（名词数量大于1时，一定要用复数形式）；不定冠词（可数名词单数前一定要用a或者an）。/ 22
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8.多背范文，多记一些名言警句，并想办法合适得用到作文中去。记一些万能的开头结尾的公式。/ 22
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第五篇：英语作文注意事项
1.尤其在商业上，报章杂志或公文书信上，尽量不用难字(big word)或过时的字眼(old-fashioned word)例如：
Many people feel that moral education is the infrastructure of higher learning.(许多人认为道德教育是高等知识的基础)(如果用 foundation 或 basis 代替 infrastructure 就更明白)Three hundred acres of land is the parameter of our university，s expansion(growth).(三百英亩的土地是本大学发展的限度)(如果用limit代替parameter，会更简单易懂。)This news has been disseminated all over the U.S.(这消息已散布到全美各地)(如果用spread取代disseminated，不更简单？)(动词时态是：spread, spread, spread)The president of this college is not diminutive in size.(这大学的校长个子不小)(假如用small代替diminutive，不更明白吗？)I have to elucidate this document to my staff.(我要向我的员工解释这份文件)(如用explain代替elucidate，也许更明白。)Mr.A will endeavor to be a physician.(A 先生想尝试当个医生)(如果用try代替endeavor，会更浅白。)(Endeavour = endeavor)We hope to visualize world peace in the future.(我们希望将来看到世界和平)（如果用see代替visualize，也许更简单！）The charitable organization solicits for our annual donation.(慈善机构要求我们一年一度乐捐)（假如用 ask 代替 solicit，更浅白易懂。）(solicitation是名词)We don't know what may transpire when we have a new boss.(当新老板来后，我们不知会有什么发生。)(如果用happen代替transpire，也许更明白。)Please act as soon as possible on the aforementioned matter.(前面提过的事，请尽速办理。）(如果用 previous 代替古字 aforementioned 不是更明白？）
这就像美国大文豪马克吐温Mark Twain 也曾说过：「我不愿在字典里找长字或难字，我绝不用『metropolis』这个字，因为我同样可以用『city』这个字来代替」。罗斯福总统为了强调美国政府不会遗忘那些穷人，在一篇讲词里用了这么一句：「We are endeavoring to construct a more inclusive society.」后来被人批评咬文嚼字，卖弄文笔。如果用浅白易懂的字眼写成：「We are going to make this country in which no one is left out.」或「We are trying to make everyone equal.」也许更简单明白！
2.老外也主张不写噜苏或绚丽的字眼（flowery or wordy），句子应该越短越好，一句能用两个字，绝不多加一个。例如：
At this point in time, we should pull together for our goal.(现在我们应该为我们的目标团结一致）(如果说：Now, we should pull......更简单。因为 at this point in time = now)Despite the fact that my English is not very good, I am not discouraged.（虽然我的英语不好，但我不灰心。)(如果说：Although my English is not......就更简短。因为despite the fact that= although = Though）
I am of the opinion that Mr.Lee should resign from this position.(我想李先生应该辞职)(假如说：I think Mr.Lee should......不是更简单吗？因为I am of the opinion = I think)He quitted the job due to the fact that he was sick.(他由于生病而辞职)(若说：He quitted the job because he was sick.更简单。因为 due to the fact that = because）
In the majority of cases, he likes to ride bike to the office.（他通常喜欢骑单车到办公室)(如果说：Usually, he likes to ride......更简单。因为 in the majority of cases = usually）She shows a preference for tea rather than coffee.(她喜欢茶而不是咖啡)(若说：She prefers tea rather......更简短清楚，因为 show a preference for = prefer)I will bring the matter to the attention of Mr.Wang.(我要通知王先生)如果只说：I will tell Mr.Wang(about the matter).不是更简单吗？因为 bring the matter to the attention of = tell = inform)(句子最后面：「about the matter」可以省去);同理，也要避免意义的重复或用字的多余(redundant);例如： The consensus（of opinion）is that we have to act right away.（大家认为我们必须立即行动）(of opinion 可以省去，因为 consensus 的意思，就是大家的意见。）
The letter shows that the problem（continues to）remain unsolved.（他的信显示问题尚未解决）(continue to 是多余的字，因为 remain 已经有 continue 的含意。所以句子就成为：The letter shows that the problem remains unsolved.）
He has made his(final)conclusion in his speech.（他在演说里做出结论）(final 是多余的字，因为 conclusion 已经含有 final 的意思。）
He has had many years of(actual)experience in business。（他有多年经商的经验)(actual 也是多余的字，因为 experience 已有 actual 的意味）
We assembled(together)all the parts for our radio.（我们装好收音机的零件）(因为 assemble 本身就有 together 的意思，所以 together 是多余的）
Enclosed(herewith)please find the report of the meeting.（herewith 是多余的字，因为 enclosed 就有 herewith 的意思）(即：附上会议报告，请查收)写到这里，想起一位深受美国人民爱戴，一向主张不写长句、不噜苏的美国已故参议员Stephen Young，他每次受邀参加会议、演讲、宴会时，他的回信只有三个字「我会到」（I'll be there）......。也有人打趣的说：「讲演或写作的句子，就像穿迷你裙，愈短愈好。」（Like wearing mini-skirt, sentences in speech or writing should be the shorter, the better.）
此外还有：in reference to = about;draw to close = end;at an early date = soon等。
3.老外为了族群和谐相处，除不用歧视或偏见的字眼外，连男女性别，也要避免区别，以示「平等」。例如：
Mankind are considered the smartest animals in the world。（人类是世上最聪明的动物）= Man is the smartest animal......。(如果改为：Human beings are considered the smartest animals......就能包括男女。所以 mankind = man = human beings）(注意：mankind 后面动词要用多数，而 man 的后面动词，则用单数）
Manpower seems not strong enough in developing our economy here.(发展这里的经济，似乎缺乏人力资源。）(如果说：Labor power seems not strong enough...也就没有「男性主义」的感觉。可见 manpower = labor power = work force = human resources）
This small company hired a cleaning woman yesterday.（这个小公司昨天请来一名清洁女工）(如果说：This small company hired an office cleaner...也就没有男女之分了）
He(she)has been a committee chairman(chairwoman)since 1998.(自从1998年他就是委员会主席)(假如把chairman或chairwoman改为chairperson或chair，就没有男女之分。)(如指讨论会的主持人，也可称为 moderator 或 coordinator。)Many businessmen(businesswomen)feel their jobs are very stressful.（许多商人觉得工作压力很大）(如果把 businessmen(businesswomen)改为 business people 或 business executives 或 business managers 就可包括男女了）(凡是单数 man 或 woman，其多数都是 men 或 women。)Policemen(policewomen)should treat citizens with courtesy.（警察对人民应该有礼貌）(假如把 policemen 或 policewomen 改为 police officers 就可避免男女性别）
Congressmen(congresswomen)should speak up for their constitutes.（国会议员应该为其选民说话）(constitute = voter)（我们也可以把 congressmen 或 congresswomen 改为 members of congress 或 congressional representatives）
Stewardesses for international regions may get jet lag sometimes.（国际航线的空中小姐有时会有时差疲惫的现象）（如把 stewardess 改为 flight attendant，就能包括男女空中服务员。）同理，我们可以把 salesman 或 saleswoman 改为 salesperson；把 mailman 改为 mail carrier 或 postal worker；把 foreman 改为 supervisor 等等。
当然，一些带有种族偏见的字眼，甚至有侮辱的味道（insulting words 或 slur），也要尽量避免使用，以免闹出麻烦。例如： 对黑人不要用 Negro，更不能用 Nigger（用 Black 还可以），礼貌的说法是 Afro-American 或 African-American；
对白人不要用 Honky（这是黑人骂白人的用字），正确用法是 Caucasian，或 white people；
对犹太人不要用 Hymies，应该叫 Jewish 或 Jewish people； 对越南人不要用 Gook，要用 Vietnamese；
至于墨西哥人、西班牙人及中、南美洲人，包括 Puerto Rico，正确的用法多是 Hispanics 或 Latins，不过据说西班牙人为了维护自己的文化，倒喜欢别人称为 Spaniard。
还有黑白结婚的孩子，也不可称为 Oreo（Oreo 饼乾外面是巧克力，里面是白奶油）。
有偏见的老外，不叫华人为 Chinese，而叫 Chink 或 Chinaman（从前还叫「Yellow Peril」，即黄祸）。遇到这种事，怎么办呢？我建议：「君子不与小人斗」，最好是「不理」（ignore）或「走开」（walk away）。不过老外与你谈话时，如果使用这些不礼貌的字眼，那么你就可以说：「For your information,the word you just used is derogatory（或 inappropriate）to describe someone of my race.」（只想让你知道：你刚刚所用的字，来描写我的族群，是很不合适的）。691.Squirrel inquired an acquaintance and acquired the requirements.松鼠询问了一位熟人,得知了那些要求.692.A title is entitled to the retired worker who repaired the entire tire tirelessly.那个不倦地修理了整个轮胎的退休工人被授予了一个头衔.693.The hired admirer inspired his desire for the wire.雇佣钦佩者激发了他对铁丝的渴望.694.The firm fireman first overcame thirst desire.坚定的消防员首先克服口渴欲望。
695.The tiresome pirate sounded siren and let off fireworks.讨厌的海盗鸣汽笛放焰火.696.The adjective injected new meaning into the objected objective object.这个形容词给受到反对的客观物体注入了新的意义。
697.The projector is subject to rejection and may be ejected from the project.投影机有遭到否决的倾向并可能被逐出工程。
698.A day goes through daybreak, morning, noon, afternoon, evening and midnight.一天经过坲晓，上午，正文，下午，傍晚和午夜。
699.His affection for the defects is affected by the infectious perfect effect.他对缺点的钟爱受到具有感染力的完美效果的影响。
700.With a clatter, the flatterer shattered the chattering wattmeter in the chaos.当啷一声，马屁精在混乱中打碎了格格作响的瓦特表。
Directions：
Read the following text carefully and then translate the underlined segments into Chinese.Your translation should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET2.（10points）
It is not easy to talk about the role of the mass media in this overwhelmingly significant phase in European history.History and news become confused, and one's impressions tend to be a mixture of skepticism and optimism.（46）Television is one of the means by which these feelings are created and conveyed-and perhaps never before has it served to much to connect different peoples and nations as is the recent events in Europe.The Europe that is now forming cannot be anything other than its peoples, their cultures and national identities.With this in mind we can begin to analyze the European television scene.（47）In Europe, as elsewhere multi-media groups have been increasingly successful groups which bring together television, radio newspapers, magazines and publishing houses that work in relation to one another.One Italian example would be the Berlusconi group while abroad Maxwell and Murdoch come to mind.Clearly, only the biggest and most flexible television companies are going to be able to compete complete in such a rich and hotly-contested market.（48）This alone demonstrates that the television business is not an easy world to survive in a fact underlined by statistics that show that out of eighty European television networks no less than 50% took a loss in 1989.Moreover, the integration of the European community will oblige television companies to cooperate more closely in terms of both production and distribution.（49）Creating a “European identity” that respects the different cultures and traditions which go to make up the connecting fabric of the Old continent is no easy task and demands a strategic choice-that of producing programs in Europe for Europe.This entails reducing our dependence on the North American market, whose programs relate to experiences and cultural traditions which are different from our own.In order to achieve these objectives, we must concentrate more on co-productions, the exchange of news, documentary services and training.This also involves the agreements between European countries for the creation of a European bank will handle the finances necessary for production costs.（50）In dealing with a challenge on such a scale, it is no exaggeration to say “Unity we stand, divided we fall”-and if I had to choose a slogan it would be “Unity in our diversity.” A unity of objectives that nonetheless respect the varied peculiarities of each country.'
46.电视是引发和传递这些感受的手段之一——在欧洲近来发生的事件中，它把不同的民族和国家连到一起，其作用之大，前所未有。47.在欧洲，像在其他地方一样，传媒集团越来越成功：这些集团将相关的电视、广播、报纸、杂志和出版社组合在一起。
48.这一点就足以证明，要在电视行业里生存下来并非易事。统计数字尤其说明了这一事实，在80个欧洲电视网中，多达一半在1989年亏损。
49.不同的文化和传统把欧洲大陆编织成一体，要创造出一种尊重这些不同文化和传统的“欧洲品牌”绝非易事，需要人们做出战略性的选择。
50.在应对如此规模的挑战时，可以毫不夸张地说：“联合，我们就生存；分裂，我们就灭亡”。
2007年考研英语翻译核心词组学习笔记
special preserve 特殊权利
intellectual equipment 知识才能
everyday realities 日常现实
on a daily basis 每天
established conventions and special responsibilities 已有传统和特殊责任
a clear grasp/command of„ 对„的清晰领会
leagal learning 法律学习
link„to 把„同„联系起来
be parallel to 类似于
on a daily basis 每天
established conventions 既定惯例
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