2014山东省实验中学二模书面表达参考[合集五篇]

第一篇：2014山东省实验中学二模书面表达参考

山东省实验中学2011级第二次模拟试题

第二节 写作(满分30分)

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Mike给你的电子邮件中说他已经收到了Yale University的录取通知书(offer)，并表示如有可能，他将学习工程学。请你用英语 给他回复，并包括以下内容：

1．表示祝贺；

2．向他介绍你感兴趣的大学及专业，并做出适当解释；

3．邀请他暑假到你的家乡游览。

注：字数120—150。

Dear Mike,I’m more than happy to hear that you have gained the offer to Yale University, where you are likely to learn your favorite major—engineering.Congratulations!

As for me, I want to study in Beijing University and major in English.First, English is my favorite subject.I can enjoy many beautiful English essays and learn something about English culture.Second, with the development of China, there are more and more foreign companies.As a result, those who major in English are badly needed in China nowadays.Last but not least, English is a universal language, which is of great significance in our daily life.Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past few years.Would you like to come here and experience Chinese culture during the summer vacation? I will show you around some places of interest and help you learn something about local customs.Looking forward to your early reply.Your sincerely,Li Hua

第二篇：2014山东省实验中学三模书面表达参考

山东省实验中学2011级第三次模拟试题

第二节 写作(满分30分)

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，学校安排你下周末作为导游代领外籍教师Mr.Smith进行一次近郊游。请你用英语给Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：

1、自我介绍

2、出游的时间、目的地等信息

3、需要提前做的准备工作

要求：1.120-150字。

2.可增加细节。

Dear Mr.Smith,Happy to write to you.First, let me introduce myself.I’m Li Hua, an ordinary student of Xinhua School.To my honor, I was asked to act as a tourist guide for you next weekend.According to the schedule, we’ll have a wonderful trip not far from the school.Since you are new here, it’s necessary for you to become familiar with the surroundings as soon as possible.We can meet at 8 o’clock on the morning of Saturday at the school gate.Remember not to carry too many things.Just a bottle of water, some pieces of bread or other kinds of food, a cap or a pair of sunglasses.Oh, you’d better wear a pair of sports shoes.Look forward to seeing you.I believe we’ll have a good time.Yours,Li Hua

第三篇：2014 潍坊二模书面表达阅卷总结

潍坊二模书面表达阅卷总结

要点一：建议他来中国 好词好句：

1.I subscribe to the view that you can come to China to get a job which is of great benefit to you.2.As far as I’m concerned, it’s a good choice for you to work in China.3.You asked for my advice about whether you come to China for a job or not.It’s my pleasure to give my suggestions as follows.典型错误：

1.You said you will come China to find a work.As far as I concerned, work in China is good.My advices are following.2.I suggest you to come to China.要点二：阐述理由 1）就业机会多 好词好句：

1.When it comes to working in China ,there is no doubt that you will have many alternatives.2.China is a large country where you won’t find it tough to get a job.典型错误：

1.China is easy to find a work.2.There have many works for you to chose.3.The chances to find a job is very large.2）专业受欢迎 好词好句：

1,You major in Internet is very popular.2.You have a good command of English ,which will help a lot in finding a job.3.What you are majoring in is popular in China, which will benefit you a lot.典型错误：

1.Your knowledge is popular with China.2.You learn English is good.3）不同的文化体验 好词好句：

1.In terms of developing yourself, you can experience different cultures ,which contributes to broaden your horizons and enrich your knowledge.2.What is more attractive is that you could enjoy a different culture in China.典型错误：

1.You can experienced different culture to rich you knowledge.2.China culture is differ from the England.要点三：承诺可提供帮助 好词好句：

1.What I’d like to tell you is that I’ll do all I can to help you when you are in trouble.2.Don’t hesitate to turn to me whenever you get into trouble.3.Whenever you have trouble in China ,I will spare no efforts to help you out.典型错误：

1.I promised to help you when you need.2.I will can try help you if you have trouble.总体评价 优点：多数作文，要点全，段落结构清晰,让人一看就明确本段写得是哪一个要点。缺点：1.部分作文，内容看似充实，但很多句子与题目主题没有太大的联系，特别是要点二阐述理由部分，为什么建议Mike来中国？原因就是与在英国工作相比，在中国工作所具有的的优势，而一些同学用大量篇幅描述中国，这使内容看似充实； 2.还有一些作文不分段，一段到底，较难辨别要点；

3.个别还用蓝色笔、铅笔，还有用胶带纸粘的，有用修正带的，有同一字母来回重复画的，这直接造成卷面差；

4.大小写混乱,特别是在单个的副词或短语之后的单词首字母大写。如：Now, You …，In my opinion, It …

分要点评价 要点一

好词好句：congratulations.Congratulate you on your graduation.The reasons why I advise you to come to China are as follows: 典型错误：as far as you/I concerned，I heard about you go to China.I writting you to … 要点二

好词好句：quantities of

There is no doubt that …

As time goes by, …

What’s more, moreover, furthermore, last but not least…

典型错误：at the first

The China is develop quickly.There are many chance/opportunity.You will welcome in China.You could have different culture experience.要点三

好词好句：in short I would appreciate it if you accept my advice.I will spare no effort to help you.典型错误：I sure I will help you.Looking forward your reply.学生优秀句子 信开头

1.I’m writing to give you some suggestions, which I hope might be of some help to you.2.I could express my happiness on hear that you intend to work in China.3.Hearing that you will graduate and decide to seek for a job in China, I feel very delighted.建议部分

1.In my opinion, it’s a good choice to work in China.2.Considering you are good at Chinese, I strongly recommend you to find a job in China.3.You may as well make the best of your qualifications to find a job here.原因部分 1.Not only will you enrich your knowledge but you will also experience a variety of cultures.2.There is no doubt that you have an advantage over others in terms of language and knowledge.3.There being more job opporunities here, you are more likely to find a suitable job.4.In addition, you will also have the chance to make the aquaintance of the Chinese culture.5.There is a wide range of jobs to choose from, so it’s not necessary for you do worry about what to do.帮助祝愿部分

1.If you have difficulty adjusting to the new surroundings, don’t hesitate to turn to me for help.2.I promise that I will offer help whenever necessary 3.I sincerely hope these suggestions will meet with your approval.4.All in all, it is beneficial for you to ry a new lifestyle.5.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.6.I can give you a hand whenever and wherever you geit into trouble.高三英语二轮模拟考试作文精彩句式 精彩句式

（一）要点一

1.What puzzled you most is whether you should come to China after your graduation.2.The reason for this is not far to seek.3.The reasons are as follows.4.My suggestion is that you should …

1.As far as I am concerned , It’s a wise decision for you to come to China to find a job.2.Knowing that you’ll gradute soon , I strongly recommend that you should come to China to find a job.(二)要点二

1.With the development of economy, there is no denying that there are a lot of challenges and chances in China, which is of great benefit for you to find a suitable job.1.Compared to England ,China has more opportunity to hunt for a job,which means that you can choose what ever you like.2.It’s what you major in that makes you stand out.(三)要点三

1.Taking all the factors above into consideration, working in China is really a good choice for you..2.Tough as it may be when you come to a foreign country, it is worthwhile to do it..1.I promise to do you a favour when you have difficulty in adapdting to the surroundings.2.Whenever you get into trouble, don’t hesitate to tell me.I will spare no efforts to help you.典型错误：

1.suggest 后的宾从没有用虚拟语气。

2.advise/advice 词性分不开，并且advice是不可数名词的特点没有掌握。3.look forward to doing 使用错误 4.chances 拼写错误，拼写成了changes 5.writing 拼写错误 6.major in 使用错误

一、问题：

1.词性不分：different与difference 2.名词混用：major与majority 3.介词省略：look forward to的to 4.固定词组误用：look forward to doing 用成look forward to do 5.首行未缩进

二、优美句子

要点一：1.As far as I am concerned , It’s a wise decision for you to come to China to find a job.2.Knowing that you’ll gradute soon , I strongly recommend that you should come to China to find a job.要点二：1.Compared to England ,China has more opportunity to hunt for a job,which means that you can choose what ever you like.2.It’s what you majir in that makes you stand out.要点三：1.I promise to do you a favour when you have difficulty in adapdting to the surroundings.2.Whenever you get into trouble, don’t hesitate to tell me.I will spare no efforts to help you.二轮阅卷总结

对于高三二轮的阅卷工作，汇报如下：

一、本次阅卷过程中发现的闪光点：

在本次阅卷过程中发现的学生的闪光点和亮点明显比以往要突出，主要体现在： 1.最突出的让人感到高兴的地方是，学生的书写相比以往有了极大的提高和改善，让人赏心悦目的好卷面比比皆是。2.相当一部分学生的书面表达的整体性和逻辑性有了改善和提高，也就是说，一篇文章看上去更像一篇文章了，让人感觉是一个整体，不再是语言点的罗列或堆砌，而且，行文逻辑更加流畅，部分学生的文章从整体上给人一种浑然天成的感觉。3.学生书面表达中的高级词汇有了体现，很多学生的文章中应用了高级词汇。4.学生对习语的使用更加熟练。

5.对于各种从句和非谓语动词结构等复杂语法的运用更加熟练。

二、仍需提高的方面：

1.对词性的掌握仍然存在着问题，并且这个现象具有普遍性，不仅仅是书面表达得分低的学生有这个现象，即便是得分比较高的同学也存在着这个现象。2.3.4.5.短语搭配尤其是介词的使用不成熟、不准确。对介词to与动词不定时to的辨析不够熟练。单复数使用比较随意。

部分文章中需要个人发挥的地方存在着两个极端，要么无从发挥，要么发挥太广太深从而导致词不达意，甚至是离题。

6.部分同学对题目要求理解不到位，从而导致部分语言点的落漏。7.部分书面表达对时态、语态和人称注意不够。8.大小写混乱。

9.有极个别的学生的书面表达不分段。10.有一个学生每一段全都是顶格写（只遇见了一个，但其书面表达文章写得不错）。11.尽管整体上书写比以往有了很大的提高，但是仍有个别学生的书写需要大力提高，尤其是部分写得比较好的同学的书写。

写作阅卷中发现的问题：

1.there be 句型的运用，出现there have sth.的问题以及多个谓语动词的出现； 2.没有段落的区分；

3.时态语态的问题，主谓一致的问题；

4.suggest,advise,advice的词性、用法不清；

5.书写较之前几次有了改善，但是卷面涂画问题仍需强调并加以改善。

我们学校的试卷和前几次相比，书写有了很大提高；学生普遍能用first of all,what’s more,last but not least等来表达层次，但是其他的连词少得可怜。好词靓句在学生的作文中几乎无迹可寻，都是一些朴素无华的词汇，能用对已是不错。所以还是借鉴其他学校的吧。

第四篇：博山区实验中学高三英语组书面表达

博山区实验中学高三英语组书面表达汇编

2006.5.11

1.济宁市2005—2006学高三第一次摸底考试

随着时代的发展，人们彼此间的问候方式发生了很大变化。请你根据下面列举出的三种方式，用英语写一篇100字左右的短文，以便刊登在某英文报Society专栏。文章开头已写好，不计入总词数。

1.邮寄贺卡、鲜花

2.发送电子贺卡

3.打电话或发手机短信

要求：1.分别说明上述方式及特点。

2.阐明个人喜好，并说明原因。

电子贺卡：e-card

Possible version:

The traditional way is to send greeting cards on festive occasions.It takes a bit longer, but the familiar handwriting itself makes a friend happy.Now, it is more popular to send flowers.Thanks to the Internet, we can send e-cards instead of paper ones.Most of the e-cards are beautifully designed and many have music and cartoons.And they can be sent and received almost the moment you click the button of “send”.Another way is to send mobile phone messages, which, in my opinion, is the most convenient and therefore my favourite way of greeting a friend.2.2006年青岛市高三第一次教学质量统一检测英语

假如你是已在青岛工作十几年的外国专家Abbas Kdaimy，2006年春节到来之际，你给China Daily写了一封100字左右的英语短信，内容如下：

1.在中国的“狗年”到来之际对青岛市政府和人民表达你最良好的祝愿；

2.感谢青岛市政府和人民十几年来在工作和生活等方面给你的关心、帮助和支持。Possible version:

Dear Editor,As Spring Festival is coming, it gives me great pleasure and honour to extend warm Spring Festival greetings and good wishes to the city government and all the citizens.In the year of Dog, I wish all your dreams come true, and your city continues its drive to sustainable development.I’ve lived and worked in your city for decades.I love the beautiful sea coastal city and wonderful people.I also appreciate your help and support to me—both in my work and daily life.I wish your city all the best and hope that your city had a future time of great happiness1

and prosperity for everyone.(106words)

3.假设你参加“My Future”为题的英语演讲会，请按下列要求写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的理想。（100词左右）

1.决心当一名中学教师，这是我儿时的梦想。

2.我认为和孩子打交道是一件快乐而又幸福的事，并非浪费时间。

3.目前我国教师缺编不够用，其主要原因是教师工作太辛苦，收入不高，想当

教师的人不多，可我决心献身教育事业。

Possible version:

We each are thinking about the future.What is mine？I’ve made up my mind to

become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprising? I began to have this dream when I was only a child.I love children.I don’t think it is a waste time to deal with them all the year around.On the contrary, to me it would mean happiness.As we all can see, teachers are badly needed in our country, but not many of us want to become teachers.The main reason for this is that teachers’ work is too had and they get too little.In spite of that, I’m determined to give all my life to the cause of education.4.有一批要到中国投资的外国企业家在我国某城市参观考察。假定你是接待人员，要向外宾们简要介绍这个城市的概况。请你用英语写一篇100-120词的发言稿，必须包括以下内容；

1.这是一座新兴的现代化城市，建于20世纪80年代初

2.海、陆、空交通便利，又有一条与首都北京相连的高速公路（freeway）

3.自然资源丰富，电力以及其他能源供应充足

4.公共秩序（the public order）良好，政府多方面支持外国投资者（investor）

注意：短文开头已经写出，不计如总词数。

Ladies and Gentlemen,Welcome to our city.Now let me introduce…

Possible version:

Ladies and Gentlemen,Welcome to our city.Now let me introduce our city to you.Our city is a newly-built modern city.It was set up in the early 1980s, but it has been developing rapidly.From here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air or by land.Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used.The areas around our city are rich in natural resources.And we have enough supplies of electricity and other forms of energy.The public order is very nice。Besides, the government of our country and our city support foreign investors in many aspects.We expect more and more foreign friends to come and invest in our city.That’s all.Thank you.5.假定你是李明──北京某中学高三学生。你于五月五日收到了居住在新加坡的笔友Mike寄来的一封信。请你仔细阅读他的来信并写一封回信。

注意：

1.回信的内容必须包括对方想要了解的全部情况；

2.词数在100左右；

3.信的开头语已给出，请接着往下写。

Dear Li Ming,Glad to hear from you last Friday.From your letter, I've learned a lot about Beijing.Great changes have taken place in Beijing during the past few years.It must be more beautiful than it used to be.I'm expecting to visit Beijing sometime in the near future.Now, I'm eager to know something about your school life, especially about what you usually do after class.I will be much delighted if you can satisfy my request.I'm looking forward to your letter.With best wishes.Yours ever,Mike NelsonDear Mike,I was very glad to________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,Li MingPossible version：

Dear Mike,I was very glad to receive your letter on May 5th.At your request, I'll tell something about my school life.In senior 3 at school, I have six subjects: Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and P.E.Now, I'm busy preparing for college entrance exams.School hours usually begin at 8:00 a.m.and end at 4:00 p.m.After class, we have sports, such as ball games and so on, or do some reading in the school library.Then I go home.This is my school life.It's spring now in Beijing.It's really very beautiful.Welcome to Beijing, Mike.I'll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter.I'm looking forward to it.With best regards.Yours truly,Li Ming

6.What is a good parent-children relationship?

Possible version：

A good parent-children relationship should be set up on the basis mutual understanding and

respect.Parents can not impose their ideas on their children.They should treat their children as independent individual.It is advisable for the parents to learn to listen to children's ideas and encourage them to think on their own rather than decide everything for the children.On the other hand, children should listen to their parents' advice for they're more experienced.Try to be understanding when there is disagreement with parents.Always keep one thing in min—whatever they do comes from their love for us.It is necessary children to exchange ideas with parents from time to time so that the gap between parents and children will be narrowed.7.阅读下面两则短讯，谈谈你对网吧(Internet Bar)现象的看法。（不要把短讯译成英文）。● 北京市关闭了许多网吧，但仍有学生周末一早乘车去郊区上网。

● 辽宁省锦州市6000余名学生举行集体签名仪式，保证远离网吧。

解析：题目要求根据所提供的两则短讯，谈一谈你对网吧的看法，可以从以下三个方面阐明自己的观点：1．网吧的社会作用。网吧已成为人们了解世界，互通信息的重要窗口。对社会的进步发展起着重要的作用。

２．网吧存在的问题。网吧也存在很多问题，如：火灾隐患，黄色网站对青少年造成极坏的影响等。

３．你对中学生泡网吧的看法。要对网吧进行限制；青少年学生要远离网吧。参考范文：

Internet Bars are popular today, especially among young people, for the net opens large windows to the outside world.But when people spend too much of their time in these bars, there come problems.Some kids are so lost playing games in the bars that they forget the time to go back home, and their health is harmed.To avoid checks by the police, the managers sometimes shut the doors and close many people in the small room.When there is fire or other danger, people can not find way out.I suggest Internet Bars be under strict supervision and young kids be guided to surf the web.Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.8.假如你是李平，到一家外企应聘求职。对方要求你用外语写篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。词数100字左右。

姓名 李平性别 男国籍 中国

出生地 山东淄博出生日期1976.5.10身体状况 健康家庭住址 和平路18号电话号码 8111091

毕业院校 南京大学毕业日期1998.8

英语熟练程度具有较强的听、说、读能力，能写各种信件计算机水平能熟练操作电脑。

兴趣爱好流行歌曲、桥牌、自行车旅行。

One possible version:

I am a healthy Chinese boy named Li Ping.I was born in Zibo, Shandong Province, China on May 10, 1976.My home address is No.8 Heping Road and the telephone number is 8111091.I graduated

from Nanjing University.I've learned English for ten years.Now I'm good at listening, speaking and reading.I can write all kinds of letters.I can use a computer freely, too.I am one of the best students in my class.I am fond of popular songs and bridge and interested in travelling by bike.9.最近，你校同学正在参加一场讨论。主题是：中国是否应大力发展小汽车？请你根据下表提供的信息，客观地介绍这两种意见。

60%的同学认为

1.应大力发展2.促进国家经济发展3.增加就业机会4.提高生活质量，方便，省时 40%的同学认为

1.应有限制地发展2.增加城市交通的拥挤，交通事故3.修路占用土地4.空气和噪音污染 One possible version:

We’ve had a discussion about whether China should make every effort to develop car industry.They believe this will speed up the development of the national economy.More workers will be employed.With cars the people’s life quality will be raised.They will save time and be more convenient in their life and work.On the other hand, 40% of them argue that China should control its car industry development.Otherwise, the city traffic will be even heavier and more traffic accidents will take place.At the same time, more land will be used for the new roads.What’s more air and noise pollution will become more serious.10.根据下面 中文提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

俗话说：不劳者，则无获。(No pains, no gains.)请你根据生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功都源于不断的追求和辛勤的劳动。

解读：定义解释类写作在近年的高考试题中有所涉及，2005年上海卷就是很好的例子。定义解释类写作通常包括阐述名言警句或对某个比较抽象，容易被误解的事物或概念进行解释，以利于他人的行动或取得他人的支持。这类题型通常是论说文。

样题分析：这是一篇开放式作文，写作时重点要紧扣“不劳者，则无获”这一主题，结合自己的亲身经历，从正反两个方面进行论证，最后得出”艰苦工作，不断进取，才是成功的法宝“这一结论。

写作步骤：

第一步：先给出要解释这一主题或名言，诠释起最通俗的意义，使隐含意义具体化，明朗化。第二步：引用事例进行阐述。所举事例要有说服力，能充分说明主题，做到“有血有肉“。第三步：概括总结。对文章所讨论的问题提出建设性意见，从高，更新的角度提出问题的重要性和深远意义。

No Pains, No gains

An old saying “No Pains, No gains.” reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must make their own efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.For example, the Chinese athletes’ excellent performance in 2004 Olympic Games in Athens is definitely the result of their hard training.If they didn’t work hard, even those with the best talents,can’t compare with others and win the championship in games.Another case in point is my own learning experience.I was not good at English when I started learning it.Sometimes the result of the exam was so dissatisfactory that I almost gave up.It was the old saying: “No Pains, No gains.” that brought back my confidence.Since then, I took every chance to practise my English.Now I have made great progress and English became my favourite subject.

第五篇：书面表达

中考英语书面表达的考点集汇、讲解和训练

【考点扫描】

书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：

1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；

2、看图作文；

3、根据汉语提示作文。

无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。【名师解难】 一.训练方法

1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。

2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。

3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、1 内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。二.应试策略

1.审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。

3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。

2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。

5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下 3 文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）时态、语态错误。5）标点错误。6）人称是否用错。三.注意事项

书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。【中考范例】

VII.书面表达（共1题，计10分）

假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。

要求：1.认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。2.词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。

1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。

2.圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：

1、收到对方的来信；

2、愿意和对方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；

4、自己的身份、特长和爱好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提纲：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基调：1.时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2.人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4.开头和结尾题目已经给出。

5、写全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。【满分演练】

（1）

华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。2．乘汽车去大约要花1个小时；也可以乘火车去。

3．登山便可领略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。注意：

1．字数：80词左右。2．请不要逐字翻译。（2）根据提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物—— 一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信（100个词左右）表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1.向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。

2.礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。

3.告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。

注意1.信的格式已经给出。

2.信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。（3）

根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了西安市动物园。那里的动物十分有趣，人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物时，就上前阻止并说……

请你用英文写一篇日记，记述今天的经历。（请注意日记格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．animal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。注意1.字数60~80。

2.所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。

假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根据中文提示和英文提示词语写一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美国中学生要来你们学校访问。请你写一篇有关西安的简介，以便和他们交流。

注意：1.字数100左右；

2.必须使用所给英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看图写话。

根据以上四幅图和提示词语，写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、语句通顺、符合逻辑的短文，开头已给出。要求：1.叙述要用第三人称。2.词数60~80个左右。3.要表达自己的看法或想法。

4.选用下列词语：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

请你参考图文提示，写一篇60~80词的短文。注意：1.语言规范，语意完整，内容丰富。2.表达符合图意，书写规范。3.给出自己的观点。4.文章的开头已给出。

参考词：pollute, turn off the tap(水龙头)，dry, save(节约 vt.), water resources(水资源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

请根据下面四幅图，写一篇70个单词左右的短文。文章开头已经给出，不算入总词汇数内。

参考词汇： on fire 着火firefighter n.消防员put out 灭火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看图写话。

要求：1.根据图画所提供的语境，写出意思连贯、语言流畅、语法准确、符合逻辑的短文。2.至少使用两种时态，70词以上。不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。

3.标题和第一句已给出，但不计入70词之内。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根据所给图画用英语写一篇约80词的短文。

(11)

假如你所在的学校要出一期英语壁报。你准备就自己经历的一件事写一篇英语短文向壁报投稿。下面五幅图记录了你上个星期六与老师和同学到南河边参加植树活动的全过程。请你就以下五幅图写一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文内容要包括所有图画中的主要内容 2.词数：70～90

3.生词提示： 桶bucket锄头hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。（词数：50~80，不包括已经给出的单词）

内容要点：

过去 现在 旧房 高楼 河水污浊 河水清澈 步行、骑自行车 乘公交车、小汽车 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【练习答案】

(1)参考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)参考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

(3)参考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)参考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)参考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)参考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)参考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)参考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)参考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

(10)参考答案：

Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）参考答案： 内容要点：

（1）上星期五老师告诉我们“明天去南河边植树”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六点半我就起床了。（3）我带着桶去学校，同学们带着桶、锄头在校门口等待。（4）到南河边，我们开始植树。（也可描写动场面。）（5）看着新种下的树，我们都很高兴。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）参考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶几边，我认出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一个才是妈妈的杯子呢？突然之间，我觉得，自己真得太不了解父母了。当妈妈为我倒水时，我却不知她的杯子是什么样的；当妈妈为我夹我喜欢吃的菜时，我却没想过他们是爱吃淡一点，还是浓一点。。。2009年到了，意味着过去一年的逝去和新的一年的到来。妈妈为我操劳了一整年，仔细想想，现在的我也应该为她做一点点事了。

于是，我决定先将茶沏好再找杯子。学着爸爸平时沏茶的顺序，我先从茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往烧水的壶里加入水放在电茶炉上烧，接着，我将爸爸已经掰好的普洱茶片拿了两片放在盖碗里，等了一会，水开了，我小心地将水注入盖碗，将盖盖上，把盖碗里第一遍的茶水滤掉，然后再次注水，盖上盖，焖一会才两手并用地将茶水倒入茶海里，因为第一次自己动手，盖碗的烫手是我所没想到的，手忙脚乱的我弄得茶几上一片片的水渍。重复几次这样的程序后，我先帮外婆倒了一杯茶，因为外婆特别喜欢喝茶。当外婆从厨房走出来的时候我已经把茶都给倒好了，这时，外婆才告诉我哪一个是妈妈的杯子。

妈妈起床了，我双手捧着水杯送到她的面前，就像捧着一颗温热的心。妈妈一愣，随即脸上露出了微笑，她一手接过水杯，伸出另一只手将我拉进了她的怀里，那手轻轻柔柔地在我的头上抚摸着，接着妈妈在我的脸上深深地亲了一口。虽然妈妈经常亲我，但这一刻的亲吻却最让我感到幸福。我抬起头对妈妈说：“妈妈快喝吧，要不茶要凉了。”妈妈仰起了脖子，张着嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了几大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的样子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我记得在我小学的时侯，就读过一首曹值的七步诗：“煮豆持作梗，辘毂以为汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那时只知其大意，只知道曹操的长子曹丕继位，他在一些奸臣的影响下，担心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之内作出一首诗来，否则处死；结果他的弟弟就在七步之内写出了流传至今的“七步诗”。当时这首诗对曹丕也是一种极大的潮讽。

几个世纪过去了，社会和生活都发生了极大的变化；应该说人的素质也应有所提高；一个人生活在世上，是离不开亲情、友情和爱情的；有人说：打架亲兄弟，上阵父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的团结并不是真对与他人打架斗殴，在生活上，21 事业上应是不可或缺的照应；俗话说“一根筷子容易断，十双筷子断就难”；可见，团结是一种力量，只有团结才有攻不破的堡垒。

然而，就在生活优越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因为一点小事，一点利益而你争我斗，反目成仇，甚而相残；我和我的朋友在聊天时有时聊及这个问题，有人这样评论：一个人生活在世上，如果不顾亲情，对兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顾，那他在这个社会上和任何人都不要谈“情”字，特别是友情。

树大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是难免发生的，但要看你怎样去对待，把金钱和利益看的太重，那麽，你就会值亲情于不顾；看淡名利，注重亲情才是做人的底线；争则不足，让则有余，在利益和金钱面前，我们何不礼让一点，做一个有道德、有素质、有亲情的人呢？

家和万事兴，团结是一种力量，让我们团结友爱，和睦共处，为个人的事业、为家庭的生活、为国家的兴盛而看重亲情、友情、爱情；把金钱和利益看淡一些吧！人过留名，雁去留声，希望在几十年之后，当你离开这个世界的时侯，留给后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父亲的生日,她要回家和父亲一起过生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父亲已经六十多岁了,为了子女的成长与幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.话说过来,人一辈子真的很不容易.人年老时非常希望能够和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一个电话甚至一个短信,父母也已经很知足了.我由于长期在外,很想念爸爸妈妈.想起过去,心里真的很辛酸,父母亲为了我们的成长真的付出了很多,然而他们现在又生活得怎么样呢?想起过去的一幕一幕,我心里很难受!我很希望做做子女的我们,踏踏实实地做好每一件事情,不让父母担忧,这是最基本的我们应当做的事情.22 谈到这里我不由自主地想起一部电影《我的兄弟姐妹》,这是一部关于亲情的影片,暂且不管故事的真实性,主要考究它的内涵.主人公齐思甜和哥哥齐忆苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齐天生活在一个不富裕却充满温馨和爱的家。然而在一个暴风雪的夜晚，他们的母亲旧病复发，咳得吐血了。父亲背她去医院，却出了意外，他们俩都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬进了四个孩子的家。性格刚强的哥哥无法忍受这个新家庭的种种，无奈地带着弟弟妹妹离开了家。他们开始四处奔波，寻找落脚之处。当实在没有能力照顾弟弟妹妹的时候，他把妹妹齐思甜送给一对正要出国的夫妇；把弟弟送给他的舅妈一家；又把小妹妹带到一对老人家中请他们收养。他自己和弟弟妹妹们便各奔东西……20年后，齐忆苦在北京当上了出租车司机；齐思甜出国受到良好的教育，成了音乐家；齐天成为东北大学学生；齐妙却当上了舞厅小姐。在北京的音乐会上，思甜蓦然回首的瞬间，音乐霎时凝固了。他们四人拥抱在一起，泪水顺着另一支悠扬的乐曲落下，听众的掌声久久不息……终于，他们有了一次永久的重逢。

齐思甜的父亲是一个音乐教师，他们一家人都生活在音乐的天堂里，这也为后来思甜成为音乐家打好了基础。父亲说：“人生路上有许多困难的事情，只要有音乐在，你的灵魂便不再寂寞。”这位父亲是伟大的，他乐观开朗，以身作则。尽管他和蔼可亲，但同时又是一个严厉的父亲。有一回，齐忆苦偷邻居家的鸡蛋，是为了满足妹妹小小的心愿。而他却因此挨了父亲的鞭子，还罚他站在雪地里很久。在父亲被分配到别的地方边劳动边教音乐时，他对这“莫须有的罪名”并没有悲愤倒下，而是瞒着家人当搬运工挨家挨户送木材，还干各种各样的粗活。他也没有一丝怨言，还对孩子说：“我没事。”懂事的孩子们也拿起了工具，帮父亲干活。他哼着小调，阳光幸福地洒在他们脸上。

可见,这位父亲是多么伟大，他以他的行动告诉了孩子们音乐的重要性及如何面对生活的苦难。

那么，又是一种什么样的力量，使后来的四个孩子重逢，使他们欢聚，使他们接受心灵的洗礼？

毋庸置疑，是亲情。

寒冷的冬天，四个孩子依偎在车站。他们在为下一餐饭而担心着。“哥，我饿。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹们的话刺痛了哥哥。他说：“只要我还有一口气，就不让你们受委屈。”事实上他也这么做了。如果不是亲情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘记，那一晚，父母临走时对他的嘱咐：“你是哥哥，要照顾好弟弟妹妹。”

生活改变了许多人和事，也改变了他们。但是，亲情是始终不渝的。最小的妹妹齐妙长大后竟成了舞厅小姐！她离开原来的家后，养父母去世得早，加上无人看管，就开始堕落下去了。她在20年后与齐思甜相遇时，大言不惭地对她说她满足于当前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回忆起以前的一点一滴，又不免伤感和懊悔。她发现自己对不起所有爱她的人，她的良心受到了谴责。于是，亲情的归来使她的精神方面的巨人复活了！她的灵魂才得以解放。

亲情给人以新生，亲情又犹如一支镇心剂。

亲情是心中的太阳，照耀着我们；亲情是温柔的春风，抚摸着我们；亲情如绵绵的春雨，滋润着我们。

亲情是雪，晶莹剔透；亲情也可以是雷，惊天撼地。

亲情可以是灯，温暖柔和；亲情也可以是微弱的烛光，不亮却很辉煌。不管怎么说，亲情一定是无价的宝藏。

没有了亲情，世界变得荒芜、凄凉；没有了亲情，生命则无法繁衍后代；没有了亲情，生活就单调枯燥；没有了亲情，人间也成了地狱。

亲情是沟通两代之间思想交流的桥梁，是一条连结两颗心的纽带。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，谁也不认得谁。但落在地下后，结成一体，结成冰，化成水，就永远也分不开了。”

“临行密密封，意恐迟迟归”，是亲情。“我在这头，母亲在那头”，也是亲情。

无价的亲情呵，愿我们在你的鼓舞下，驶向美好灿烂的明天。关于亲情的影片..我看这部影片时,心情很沉重,流泪了.我想,不论一个人的出身是多么卑微,只要我们能够记住亲情的鼓舞与期待,只要我们我们去刻苦努力,只要我们在心理上能够战胜自己,那么我们就是生活的强者!