第一篇:历年高考个性化作个性化作文
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..。..小议个性化作文
湖州市和孚镇长超小学——张良英
一、什么是个性化
对人而言,个性指其比较具体的性格特征。但对文章来说,个性指一篇文章不同于其它文章的地方,这个“不同”表现在选择材料、组织材料、结构安排、表现角度、主题表达、语言特色等等各方面。作文的个性是作文的灵魂。一篇作文没有了个性,就像人一样失去了吸引力,不仅不能深深打动人心,给读者留下深刻的印象,反而会让人感到乏味与陈腐。只有饱含个性的作文才会以它独特的魅力吸引着读者,使之达到某种共鸣,发挥它应有的功能,这样的作文才具有一定的价值。
二、什么是个性化作文
什么是个性化作文呢?简单说,就是学生能独立写作,写真实的文章,写出的文章有所创新。就是学生根据自我需要,写自己想写的内容,选取自己喜欢的表达方式,不受过多的外部干扰。文中体现着强烈的“自我意识”,着力表现自己与众不同的“个性”;文中写的是“我”的观察,“我”的发现,“我”的感受、“我”的思想、“我”的情感等等,写出“我”的喜怒哀乐,写出“我”的独特经验和真切体会。同时重视独立思考,不落俗套。从而显现个性,敞开心扉,抒写性灵,写我的自得之见,抒我的自然之情,用我的自由之笔,显我的自在之趣。说出自己的真实感受和看法,不说假话,不生编乱造。让作文成为自己真实情感的载体。敢于打破旧条条旧框框,有自己的独到见解,有自己的独特思想;就是要善于捕捉生活中的闪光点并加以加工,善于采用新的表现方法,具有新的写作风格。也就是作文中要体现出作者特有的悟性。
三、为什么提倡个性化作文
(一)针对作文教学的现状
综观目前的小学作文教学,由于受应试教育干扰,刻意追求立意标准、格式标准、写法标准,学生的思想、思维受到了严重的束缚,想象力遭到了扼杀,个性的发展受到了压抑,翻开学生作文本,千人一面、千人一腔的克隆之作随处可见。具体表现为三个方面:
1内容:教师规定的内容和教材要求的内容,没话写;学生拥有的个性化内容没有机会写。
2写法:构思、表达上雷同,教师的教学模式单
一、指导过细,是导致学生作文千篇一律的主要原因。中心就是政治,脱离学生的认识,脱离学生的实际。3评价:教师统一尺度、评价主体单
一、评价理念落后——以“纠谬”为主,所谓“优点不找少不了,缺点不找不得了”。打开学生的作文本,只见画了一大堆红杠子,圈出一个个错别字和病句。这样,严重影响学生作文的积极性,使得许多学生讨厌作文、害怕作文。
(二)顺应学生发展的需要
写作是最具有个性的,因为学生的先天禀赋中蕴藏着个性,每个学生生活的环境不尽相同、观察事物的角度因人而异、获得的体验更是千差万别。学生个体的出生环境、成长过程、学习经历以至于他们的思想、情感、智力特征、思维方式等的不同,必然造成他们各自表达、交流的内容、情感、方式、欲望等的不同。教师的职责就是承认差异的存在,尊重差异,挖掘差异,选择合适的方式展示差异。给学生发展个性、培养情感的空间,学生才可能有兴趣、有意识地留心观察周围的人和事,喜欢作文,会写作文,并把独特的、富有个性的所见所闻及其心灵感受表达出来。
(三)落实课程标准要求的需要
写作是学生的个性化行为。学生写作的过程既是个性发展的过程,也是提高创新表达能力的过程。《语文课程标准》在各阶段的写作目标中,都强调学生在写作时要善于从自己的生活视野和感性经验中获得个性化的独特体验。
二、个性化作文之我见
1、个性化选材
(1)、课本资源探索
以课本为例子、为切入点,以学生为中心,向自己周围辐射,写出自己真实的生活,激发学生的写作冲动,鼓励他们注重平常积累,写出具有个性特色的作文来 可以改编文章,续编文章,对课文人物的不同看法,也可以结合实际写出自己不同的感受„„
课文是例子,生活是影子,每个人每天都在生活、学习,怎么会不有所感触,有所体会呢?
(2)、生活资料选取
每个人都有不同的家庭、生活、经历。以自己的生活为素材来创作怎么会千篇一律呢?
平时针对学生的兴趣爱好,将趣味相投的几个人成组,也可以是同村的学生一组,如小动物观察组、探索大自然的奥秘小分队等,共同来做自己喜欢的事,观察感兴趣的事物,每星期活动一次,将组里所得结果集体创作下来,每次轮流执笔,让每位学生得到锻炼。每月集中交流一次,吸取别人的长处,还培养了学生细心观察身边事物的习惯。
(3)、想象作文
尝试让学生进行想象作文,设想我们现在所不能见的,没有做的。学生在思维的空间中自由发挥,没有什么束缚,自然会有自己的东西创作出来。很多学生都喜欢畅想未来生活,描写未来世界先进的科技,舒适的生活,希奇古怪的事物,极大的丰富了学生的想象,写出了每个人不同的精彩世界。
这类作文可以结合课文内容来展开,如课文《日新月异的电视机》,你想发明什么样的电视机。学生就会结合实际生活需求展开想象,有的说想发明黑板电视机,老师就不用吃灰尘了,多懂得体贴老师的学生啊,他观察到老师满手粉笔灰,课堂中不经意扇灰动作而想到的;有的则说想发明送餐电视机,可以边看电视边享受美餐,不用在看到精彩处被叫去吃饭了。相信这位学生很爱看电视,虽然这种思想不是很健康,但它的确反映了学生为解决实际困难而所做的创造啊,科学家不正是这样产生的吗?想这样的文章还有很多,像《新型玻璃》、《未来的桥》等。当然教师还可以确定主题让学生想象,比方说《走进未来》,学生可以想象未来的生活,未来的环境,未来的能源等,一篇篇不同特色的文章展现在眼前。
(4)、童话故事
童话是最美好的故事,有作者丰富的想象,有生活点滴的折射,有人性美丽的反映。
这种训练随时都适合,教师随意出一个题目,如《小鸡和玉米棒》,学生就会编很多的小故事。亦可让学生自己出题,他们兴趣可大了,有《冬孩子的肚兜》、《森林里丁冬》„„俨然一位位小童话作家呢。
2、题目的个性化
长期以来,我们的作文教学都是采用“套式”命题,按既定的角度去思考,去作文,学生没有作文的实际需要,极大地挫伤了学生写作的积极性。作文题目要在“趣”字上下工夫,把题目命到学生的心坎上,学生才会童心闪烁,文采飞扬,焕发生命的活力。教材的作文题目比较普通,对此题无话可写,或写作范围较窄,我们可以更换题目,为学生设置有趣的习作练习。
让学生也参与到作文命题中来,或出一组有内在联系的题,让学生自由选择;或请学生依作文要求自拟题目,自由、快乐地作文,一些独特的见解也跃然纸上。如《我爱家乡的》,学生看到这个题目可能兴趣不大,我稍微改一下,换成《夸夸我的家乡》,学生积极性就提高了。又如《汗水换来的欢笑》,要求用这个题目,以参加过的一次劳动为内容,写一篇短文。这样内容比较单一,范围比较狭窄,我稍微放宽了要求,找到最近发展区,可以写通过你的努力得到了收获都可以说是汗水换来的欢笑,这样学生的思路拓开了,有写劳动中的收获,学习中的收获,学会了一件事的,帮亲戚做生意的,有写带小孩的经历的,内容就丰富多彩了。
3、语言的个性化
用个性化的语言写鲜活的作文,不是鼓励学生猎奇,也不是为了新奇而生造词语,只是要让学生平时多留心,做生活的有心人。正如老舍先生所说:“从生活中找语言,语言就有了根;从字面上找语言,语言便成了点缀。”可见,作文中语言来自于生活,我们应在日常生活中竖起耳朵倾听各种各样的声音,灵活地运用生动的口语,让所写的人和事更贴近生活
3、评价的个性化
评价不再是教师的专利,可以是自评他评,同桌评,朋友评,小组评、家长评。也可以是发展性评价(指优缺点,各人都发展)和全方面评价(语言锤炼,材料安排,构思新颖,个性特点)结合。
形式也可多样化:
1、面批形式,直接讲解
2、自批形式,找出特点
3、互批形式,取长补短
4、分组交流,展示特色
一篇文章经过反复的修改才能逐步完善。先自评,划出自己觉得满意的地方和有困难的地方,再同桌评,帮他找出有误之处和不恰当的地方,初步修改。接着小组评,小集体讨论优缺点,让他再一次完善。然后全班评,小组中拿出一篇有代表性的文章全班一起讨论,从各方面进行评价,包括语言的锤炼,结构的把握,材料的安排等,做最后的修改,然后定稿,誊抄到作文稿上。教师将学生的文章都订成册,编班级的作文集,在班级中传阅。让人人都得到锻炼的机会,让人人都有展示的机会,让人人都有学习别人的机会。
第二篇:历年高考优秀作文
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江苏卷
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·2008年高考作文江苏卷作文试题
·2007年高考作文江苏卷作文试题
·2005年高考作文江苏卷作文试题
·2010年江苏省高考满分作文:绿色生活(2)·2010年江苏省高考满分作文:绿色生活(4)·2010年江苏省高考满分作文:绿色生活(6)
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广东卷
·2010年广东省高考满分作文:与你为邻(1)·2010年广东省高考满分作文:与你为邻(3)·2010年广东省高考满分作文:与你为邻(5)
·2010年广东省高考满分作文:与你为邻(2)·2010年广东省高考满分作文:与你为邻(4)·2010年广东省高考满分作文:与你为邻(6)·2010年广东省高考满分作文:与你为邻(7)·广东2010年高考优秀作文:与你为邻 共建和谐
·广东2010年高考优秀作文:亲爱的农民工邻居
·2010年高考满分作文及点评(广东卷)·2009年广东省高考满分作文:如此常识 ·2009年广东省高考满分作文:知之 行之 思之
·2008年高考作文广东卷作文试题
·2008高考广东卷失误分析:不要轻易说“不” ·2007年高考作文广东卷作文试题
·广东2010年高考优秀作文:孟母三迁新传
·广东2010年高考优秀作文:给书本的一封信
·广东2010年高考优秀作文:我的精神邻居 魔术新闻
·2009年广东省高考满分作文:别拿常识不当干粮
·2008高考广东卷满分佳作:不要轻易说“不”
·2007年高考作文广东卷满分佳作:薪尽火传
浙江卷
·2010年浙江高考满分作文:角色转换之间(1)·2010年浙江高考满分作文:角色转换之间(3)·2009年浙江高考满分作文:脉脉乡情 ·2008年高考作文浙江卷作文试题
·2008年高考作文浙江卷满分佳作:触摸都市
·2007年高考作文浙江卷作文试题
·2010年浙江高考满分作文:角色转换之间(2)·2010年高考满分作文及点评(浙江卷)·2009年浙江高考满分作文:绿叶 情意 ·2008年高考作文浙江卷满分佳作:感受乡村魔术 ·2008年高考作文浙江卷失误分析:感受乡村
·2007年高考作文浙江卷满分佳作:感悟消逝
重庆卷
·2010年重庆高考满分作文:难度 ·2009年重庆高考满分作文:我与故事(1)·2009年重庆高考满分作文:我与故事(3)
·2008年高考作文重庆卷作文试题
·2008年高考作文重庆卷满分佳作:在自然中生活
·2010年高考满分作文及点评(重庆卷)·2009年重庆高考满分作文:我与故事(2)·2009年重庆高考优秀作文:我的故事 ·08高考作文重庆卷满分佳作:在自然中生活
·08高考作文重庆卷失误分析:在自然中生活
福建卷
·2010年福建省高考满分作文:何妨让思维转个弯 ·2010年福建省高考满分作文:偶然?必然!·2010年福建省高考满分作文:站对人生的舞台 ·2010年福建省高考满分作文:驭思 轻吟韵调
·2010年福建高考满分作文:我与真善美诗意栖居 ·2010福建高考满分作文:寻找硬币另一面的价值 ·2010年福建省高考满分作文:只待蓦然回首 ·2010年福建高考满分作文:尘封的梦 重拾未晚 ·2010年福建省高考满分作文:士运论 ·2009年福建高考满分作文: 这也是一种力量 ·2009年福建高考满分作文: 这也是一种爱
·09年福建省高考出现八篇满分作文
·2008年高考作文福建卷作文试题
·2008年高考福建卷满分佳作:我于咖啡中看见
·2010年高考满分作文及点评(福建卷)
·2009年福建高考满分作文: 这也是一种问题
·2009年福建高考满分作文: 这也是一种承诺
·2008年高考福建卷满分佳作:一蓑烟草任江平
·08年高考福建卷失误分析:表哥,你听我说
陕西卷
·2010年陕西高考满分作文:丹墨莲梅 ·2010年陕西高考满分作文:张爱玲的遗憾
·2009年陕西省高考满分作文:西安的无奈 ·2009年陕西省高考满分作文:弦音漾处羽扇摇
·2010年陕西高考满分作文:孙悟空的成才之道 ·2010年高考满分作文及点评(陕西卷)硬币魔术 ·2009陕西高考满分作文:让凝固的音乐流动起来 ·2009陕西满分作文:每个生命都有自己的形状
辽宁卷
·2009年辽宁省高考满分作文:明星代言
·2009年辽宁省高考满分作文:明星代言诚信最美
·2008年高考作文辽宁卷作文试题
·2009年辽宁省高考满分作文:沉默的大多数
·08高考作文辽宁卷满分佳作:沉默的大多数
·2007年高考作文辽宁卷作文试题 年 ·08年高考作文辽宁卷失误分析:请迷茫走开
·2007年高考作文辽宁卷满分佳作:我能
安徽卷
·2008年高考作文安徽卷作文试题
·2008年高考作文安徽卷满分佳作:带着感动出发
·2007年高考作文安徽卷作文试题
年 ·2008高考作文安徽卷失误分析:带着感动出发
·2007年高考安徽卷满分佳作:提篮春光看妈妈
山西卷
·2009年山西省高考满分作文:晋之殇 晋之商 ·2009年山西省高考满分作文:夜的最后一章
·2009年山西省高考满分作文:昭君行
·2009年山西省高考满分作文:与妻书 ·2009年山西省高考满分作文:残梦 云南卷
·2009年云南省高考满分作文:对话 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:发现与创新
·2009年云南省高考满分作文:圆与缺的哲学 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:把握成功的摇篮 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:开往春天的火车 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:写给祖**亲
·2009年云南省高考满分作文:刨新的光华 ·2009年云南高考满分作文:寻找生活中的咖啡豆 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:危中寻机 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:莫畏浮云遮望眼 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:睁开犀利的眼睛 ·2009年云南省高考满分作文:柳暗花明又一村
四川卷
·2010年四川高考满分作文:溯源 ·2010年高考满分作文及点评(四川卷)
·2009年高考四川卷作文范文:熟悉
·2008年高考作文四川满分佳作:地震兄妹
·2010年四川高考满分作文:点 线 面
·2008年高考作文四川卷作文试题 魔术表演 ·08四川卷失误分析:国殇之后 唯有坚强 年
上海卷
·2010年上海高考满分作文:我们自私的“智慧” ·2010年上海高考满分作文:善擒者亦善纵 ·2010上海高考满分作文:滋养文化的“活鱼” ·2010年高考满分作文及点评(上海卷)·2009年上海高考满分作文:传承与创新 ·2009高考上海优秀作文:特色是成功的催化剂
·2009高考上海优秀作文:和谐的统一
·2008年高考作文上海卷作文试题
·2007年高考作文上海卷作文试题
·2006年高考作文上海卷作文试题
·2010年上海高考满分作文:稚嫩的成年 ·2010年上海高考满分作文:舍小利以谋远 ·2010上海高考满分作文:放宽网眼 让学术长大
·2009年上海高考满分作文:和而不同的中国智慧
·2009高考上海优秀作文:独一无二
·2008年高考作文上海卷满分佳作:他们
·2007高考上海卷满分佳作:必须跨过这道坎
·06年作文上海卷满分佳作:我想握住你的手 年
湖北卷
·2010年湖北高考满分作文:多一点幻想 ·2010年高考满分作文及点评(湖北卷)
·2010年湖北高考满分作文:幻想的快乐 ·09高考湖北满分作文:站在黄花岗陵园的门口 ·09高考湖北优秀作文:站在文学的门口
·2009年湖北省高考优秀作文:站在十八岁的门口
·2009年湖北省高考优秀作文:站在老家的门口
·2009年湖北省高考优秀作文:站在文学的门口
·2008年高考作文湖北卷作文试题
·2008高考作文湖北卷失误分析:举手投足之间
·2006年高考作文湖北卷作文试题
·09高考湖北优秀作文:站在车站的门口
·2009湖北高考优秀作文:站在黄花岗陵园的门口 ·2009年湖北省高考优秀作文:站在老屋的门口魔术教学 ·2009年湖北省高考优秀作文:站在项脊轩的门口 ·2009年湖北省高考优秀作文:站在车站的门口 ·2008高考作文湖北卷满分佳作:举手投足之间
·06湖北卷满分佳作:减负中的“朝三暮四”
第三篇:《历年高考满分作文精选》
尽赏自然,尽得清欢
苏轼有言:“人间有味是清欢。”漫赏春光,流连山水,春有百花秋有月,夏有凉风冬有雪。何必局促一室之内?品味自然的滋味,亲近自然,投身明丽山水,如画风光尽享生命清欢。
怡情自然之乐,遍赏山水,自古已有文化渊源。东晋谢公隐于东山而不仕,会稽秀丽山水中,留下他潇然背影,如同凝成一支笛曲,悠然回响于林间。宋代雅士林逋亦曾言:“山水与我情相宜也。”文人墨客总有牵挂心中的山水情怀,山水为伴,生命在其中找到了文化共鸣与深长情谊。
亲近自然,感悟自然,从中获得的是心灵的洗礼与灵魂的丰盈。王摩诘隐居终南,行到水穷处便坐看云起,偶遇林叟便谈笑无期。与清风明月共修炼,与花草虫鸟悟菩 提。他在自然界的花开花落中,品味出生命的浩瀚博大,获得人生的彻悟,再无烦恼困顿,灵魂纯粹而明净。自然便是如此玄妙,看似无法渗透,实则身处其中,便 能获益无穷。喜马拉雅山下的不丹王国,一块藏传佛教深入人心的土地,人们深信自然有灵,皆与自然和睦而居,在这里只有纯净的山水滋养人心,人们接受明媚阳 光最无私的馈赠,脸上洋溢着安宁的笑容。自然,其实触手可及,每个人都能够对话自然,感悟自然的无限生机与平静安宁,灵魂自然受到洗礼,这正是自然最美好 的馈赠。
投身于自然,用心去感知,用心去触摸,身处其中,这本身更是一种积极的生命姿态,一种高致的精神美学。福楼拜曾写信致女友: “我拼命工作,按时看日出„„”惜时如金的世界大文豪竟将晨曦之降视若盛世,按时静赏。原来,当那晨光穿过天幕,仿佛朦胧如蛋壳白的天空,是一天中最新鲜 纯净的时刻。静坐窗前,那是自然对生命的致礼。正如王开玲曾说:“做精神明亮的人。”亲近自然,每一缕晨光的意义,代表着自然的张力与生机。感悟品味,生 命接收自然的赠予,岂不是一种积极的生命姿态,一种明亮乐观的精神美学?
现代社会的纷扰喧闹中,人们更应走近自然,投身自然,让自然之美洗去浮华与疲惫,诗意地栖居。王国维曾说:“入乎其内,故有生气;出乎其外,故有高致。”跳出世俗浮华,摆脱生活的烦恼与疲惫,投身自然,寻觅生命最纯粹的本色,最本真的格调,尽享尘世清欢。
春风飞扬,春意浩荡,又是一年春光明媚,岁月在春色中苏醒。愿亲近大自然,遍赏春光烂漫,生命芳香弥漫,清欢相伴。钻石有价,我心泰然
林徽因曾说:“真正的平静,不是远离车马喧嚣,而是在内心修篱种菊,即使如流往事,涛声依旧,放弃执念,便可寂静安然。”真正的平静正如此,面对钻石的天价,唯有放弃心中的杂念,泰然处之,方能收获价值。
心之泰然,是坦荡之果,唯有无视价值,方知价值可贵。
“一身正气,两袖清风,三餐温饱,四大皆空”,这是闲士隐者的追求,是清廉的表率。作为一代名臣的杨震虽无闲士隐者之志,但却有清官廉士之心,面对“暮夜无知”的诱惑,杨震头顶天,脚立地,严词拒绝了以金钱来换取仕途的虚假之人,并留下了“天知,地知,你知,我知,何为暮夜无知?”的千古忠言。真正的价值彰显于自身,面对金钱,手不曾抖,眼不曾眨,泰然视之,方显自身价值的可贵。
心之泰然,是慧硕之花,无所念想便无所犹豫,便也了无牵挂,使之花开绚丽。
经典之所以被奉为经典,就在于它的无需标榜,无人超越。1984年那经典名著《西游记》的拍摄,使人们记住了那一张张传神俏皮的脸,记住了那一 招招活灵活现的演绎,记住了那一次次翻上跃下的惊险传奇„„孙悟空的扮演者六小龄童回忆说,当时拍摄,每集工资一百多,钱虽少,却从未抱怨,只是用心投 入,没想到这部电视剧能大红大紫,家喻户晓。
成功往往源于没有在不应过分专注之事上分神,抛弃杂念,专心投入,收获的便是成功。
心之泰然,是成功之源,任他风雨飘摇,我自安之若素。
静水流深,不露不显,并不影响他滋润万物。抛却杂念,安然前行。唯有经受一季明媚春光的诱惑,才能破茧成蝶;否则,便要面对残酷的死亡。唯有 不去念想钻石的价值,钻石的价值才能倍增,关键在于自身是否经得起这一世的浮华。陶渊明甘愿荷衣担锄行于农耕田亩却不正视官场一眼,那是勇气;李白敢于高 唱“天子呼来不上船,自称臣是酒中仙”,仗剑行走天涯,那是勇气,是斜侧荣华富贵,只求一世洒脱的勇气。
钻石有价,唯有我心泰然,那一刻,才能闪出绝美光华,收获内心真正的无价。
平凡的幸福
每当火车飞驰伴随着汽笛声从他身边而过时,我想,那就是他的幸福。但他却用生命去守望着,他每天劳作在这山谷巨石中,享受这大自然的安抚;他挥手,向飞驰而过的列车致意,等待他的是那悠远的长鸣。这就是他想要的幸福与满足,一种简单而平凡的心灵慰藉。其实,幸福只是一种心态。你感受到幸福,生活便幸福无比,你感受到痛苦,生活便痛苦不堪。一个人不论高尚还是低俗,只要顺应自己的天性,找到自己真正喜欢做的事,并且一心把自己喜欢做的事做得尽善尽美,那他在这世界上就是无比幸福的,这样的一个人必将获得生活的充实和心灵的宁静。
我们的生命到底要如何去经营,每个人有每个人的不同生活方式。你所羡慕的人,并不一定有你快乐和幸福。可能他还在羡慕你在纷繁忙碌的尘世中,能得到那份充实和宁静。其实,平淡的生活有她特有的舒畅和美,她需要用心去品味,需要你发现在这平淡的生活中的满足,你才能听到那“汽笛长鸣”下的喜悦。
无独有偶,在北京有一位修钢笔的老人,在寸土寸金的王府井,有一间产权属于自己的铺面,但生意惨淡,每月收入仅2000多元。有人劝他:“你把铺面租出去,每月租金就有5000多元,自己省心省力,为什么非要自己经营呢?”老人说:“我也不是傻子,这一点明白账我能不知道吗?可我如今干的事,不仅是经营生意,也是在经营我自己。每月我少了3000元收入,并不影响我的生活质量,我若闲下来没事干或干我不喜欢的事,我就受不了。我这儿是全北京唯一专修钢笔的铺面了,喜欢钢笔的北京人差不多都知道我,我能为那么多的人服务。这不比我一个月多挣几千元更重要吗?我活了70多岁,知道我最需要啥。”
由此可见,幸福真的不需要太多的什么,幸福是一种感觉,当你能了解你生命中想要的是什么,幸福即会随之而来。能活出生活的真正滋味,能享受人生的真正乐趣,能领悟生活的真正意义,能实现人生的真正价值,进而才能够苦得其所,乐在其中。守望,属于我们的幸福离我们很近,尽管我们的门外就是繁华,尽管我们身边就是喧嚣,但我们还是会固守心中那片宁静,去满足自己最真实的愿望,享受最简单的幸福。在满足自己的同时,也奉献给别人快乐,这是一种坚定的平凡中的守望。
拒绝平庸
如果我仅能成为一只毛毛虫,那么我会选择蜕变,让自己的生命在蝶群中绽放光彩;如果我只能成为一粒沙,那么我会选择在蚌壳中接受磨练,成为耀眼珍珠中闪亮的一颗;如果我只能成为一棵树,那么我会选择成为胡杨,让自己在沙漠中接受风暴的洗礼,创造不平庸的一生。
我不去想磨练这个过程有多么艰难,是成功还是失败,这是我自己的选择。我不会后悔,追求完美人生,拒绝平庸。
“没有任何借口”这是西点军校的一贯宗旨。正因如此,西点军校为美国培育了三名总统,五位五星上将,三千七百名将军和众多商界精英。“如果你有系鞋带的能力,那么你便有上天摘星的机会,没有任何借口阻止你成功。”西点军校正是要求学员以自己最大的能力去完成任务,而不是去为完不成任务寻找借口。“拒绝平庸,追求完美”正是西点学子心中的目标。
我不会去为失败寻找任何借口,哪怕是看似正确的借口,我知道这只会让自己更加依赖,为下一次的失败找更多的理由。只有经历挫折的人生才会更加灿烂夺目,既然选择了拒绝平庸就不会因为通向成功路上的艰辛而停止脚步。
悠悠历史的车轮回转,我看到了那个男子在政治仕途中屡屡碰壁,最后他终于明白了自己的心,于是他选择了周游列国,选择了“面朝大海,春暖花开”的心境。庄子,他守候心灵的那轮明月,拒绝世俗,拒绝平庸,成为一棵守候心灵的树。“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山。”这便是陶潜渴望宁静生活的愿望。官场太复杂他无心从事,他也不甘于平庸,成为一个世俗的人。于是他选择了退隐,去寻找内心的那一片田园,拥有了旷达的心境。他们都是拒绝平庸的人,拒绝平庸做官,拒绝平庸生活,最终他们找到了内心的归属,他们的精神得以升华。
拒绝平庸意味着奋发向上,自强不息的进取精神。天行健,君子以自强不息。拒绝平庸,追求卓越。或有屈原“朝饮木兰之坠露兮,夕餐秋菊之落英”,或有班超弃笔从戎,纵横疆场,保家卫国。拒绝平庸是一种自强的品质,却更是刚正不落世俗的精神。
保尔拒绝平庸,成就了自己壮丽的生命;霍金拒绝平庸,成就了思维的自由翱翔;海伦拒绝平庸,让她感受到了别人无法感受的世界。拒绝平庸,追求完美人生,让我们精神自由飞翔,让我们的生活更加绚丽多彩。
未经沙漠 不懂自由
“我想要怒放的生命/就像飞翔在辽阔天空/就像穿行在无边的旷野/拥有挣脱一切的力量„„”心底里,偶尔会涌动起这样的歌声来,沙哑、愤怒、狂放。而我的身体却依旧拘束于繁琐日常事务中,只将“怒放”的声音化为轻言细语,与身边的家人朋友聊聊天,或是哼上几句细柔的歌词。
生命的本质是孤独的。如果将人生看作一次行旅,在最初出发时,我们常常轻狂自信,以为自己可以无拘无束、轻舞飞扬,乘坐最快的航行器,领略最多最美的风景;待到行至中途,几乎无可避免,要经历各种顿挫,从理想的破灭到情爱友谊的背叛,或是亲人的离别、同行者的分道,终有一日,你会猛然发现,自己是置身于荒蛮无边的沙漠之中,前路渺茫,难以辨清哪里才是该去的方向,身上不知何时已背负重重压力、种种责任,疲惫不堪,却已欲退而不能。
这样的时候,该怎么办?“人生在世不称意,明朝散发弄扁舟”,究竟只是一种消极逃避。逃不掉的人们,有时会任由迷惘与焦虑的情绪蔓延侵袭,甚至不堪重负,宁愿身体的自戕换取精神的自由解脱。
卢梭说:“人人生而自由,但又在无所不在的枷锁之中。”米兰·昆德拉则提醒我们“生命中不能承受”的,不是“重”而是“轻”。如此想来,每一个人原本就是“戴着镣铐的舞蹈者”。束缚我们的,或是名与利,或是理想与责任。是在枷锁中日渐僵化,还是保有灵魂的快乐自由,取决于我们自己的修炼和选择。
我认识一位罕见病患儿的妈妈。与人们想象的相反,在最初的绝望过后,她已很少愁眉苦脸,因为生活已化为一件件具体繁忙的事务,不幸与艰难见得多了,让她更懂得珍惜那一点一滴的收获与快乐。人生行旅该有很多风景。如果其间有漫漫长路须在沙漠中穿行,一样可以有幕天席地的快乐与放浪形骸的自在。不必汲汲追问命运的不公正安排,不必因负担与束缚而计较生命的自由与不自由。惟其身经沙漠,才懂得与人相处,也才懂得自由的可贵;惟其受困枷锁,生命的怒放才有真正的重量。
第四篇:历年高考英语作文万能
历年高考英语作文万能模板
一、书信
Begin:How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.End:With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、通知
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.Begin:All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.End:Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、议论文
1.正反观点式
First:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...(导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
Second:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)1
Third:However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
Last:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)オ
2.“A或者B”类:
First:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much better.Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.Second:There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
Third: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个B的优势)last: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出结论)オ
3.观点论述类:
First:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows.(过渡句,承上启下)Second:First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
Third:In conclusion, I believe that...(照应第1段,构成“总—分—总”结构)
4.“How to”类:
First:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
Second:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
Third:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本
方法)
四、图表作文
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题.The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点.This means that as(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一.After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化,the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化).The figures also tell us that图表细节二.Inthe column, we can see that accounts for(进一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(结论).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that(给出原因)./ It is high time that we(发出倡议).五、图画类:
First:Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...Second:As we all know,.../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.End:In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
第五篇:历年高考英语作文
历年高考英语作文范文30篇 A. 写人:
1.Our English Teacher Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970.She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years.She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class.She always encourages us to speak and read more English.She often says, “Practice makes perfect.” She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting.She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English plays.She is not only our teacher but also our friend.We all respect and love her.Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.2.My English Teacher Our English teacher, Mr.Wang, is a strongly built thirty-year-old man, who is often simply dressed.He has been teaching us English ever since he graduated from the English Department, Beijing Normal University in 1993.He devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often working late into the night preparing his lessons.He is capable of making his lessons lively and interesting, and all of us like his lessons.He is very strict with us but he shows us great concern.He offers us help whenever we need it.We all consider him not only as our good teacher but also as our close friend.We all respect and love him.B.写物: 3. Our school Our school is located at the centre of Beijing, It is one of the largest schools in the city with over 2,000 students and about 200 teachers.Our school subjects include politics, Chinese, English, maths, history, geography, physics, chemistry and biology and so on.Most of us pay great attention to the study of English, Chinese and maths because they are very important subjects in the university entrance exam.We take special interest in English.We have spent much time on it, but we still find it difficult to learn the language well.In the afternoon when class is over, we enjoy staying at school for about one hour for some physical exercises before leaving for home.4. My Home Village My home village is a small one.It's in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province.Small as it is, it's very beautiful.There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains.In spring, we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills.The kites fly very high.In summer, the trees are green and the grass is green, too.It is green everywhere on the hills.There are so many wild apple trees on the hills.The wild apples are nice to eat.In autumn, the corns under and around the hills are ripe.So we eat them almost every day.In winter, when it snows, all the ground is covered with snow.We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar.In my hometown the sky is blue, the air is clean, the water is sweet and the people are very friendly.I love my hometown!
5.Changes in Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past.But now we call long distance at home.And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information.But now we get the news by watching TV.Another big change is in my living conditions.When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture.But now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.In short, our life has become com
fortable and convenient.C.日记:
6.A Good Deed Oct.19th Tuesday Fine One afternoon, on my way home, I saw an accident: a car hit an old man!I shouted to the pedestrians for help, but no one stopped.When the car driver saw this, he quickly closed the window Of the car and drove away.“What shall I do? The old man needs help.” I thought.At that time, a truck stopped and out came the driver.“What's wrong with the old man, boy? What could I do?” the driver asked me.“Uncle, please help the old man.A car hit him and he is badly injured!”I said.“Well, don't worry.Let me take him to the hospital.'' the driver said.A few minutes later, the driver took the old man to the hospital and I telephoned the police station.I told the whole story to the police and I also told them the number of the car.The police said to me, ”Well done, boy!Leave it to us.He must be punished!“ Then I went to the hospital to see the old man.When I got home, it was 7:30.I think what I did was fight.D.书信:
(1)你堂兄建华在国外学习,你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业,不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。1.建议他回国。
2.你的理由是:学有所用,就业容易;照顾父母。注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.行文应连贯,内容应完整; 3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Jian Hua, I' m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.To Jian Hua Dear Jian Hua, I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.I' ve been thinking about the question you asked me.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China.It will be quite easy for you to find a good job.In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to employ people like you.For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old.Therefore, I think it's a good idea for you to return.So what are you waiting for? Best wishes;Ming Hua(2)2005年春季
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你叫李宏,你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生征寻为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请,写封信说明你申请的理由。(包括所具备的条件)。2005春季范文 Dear sir, I hear that our school will welcome some Canadian students to stay with us for or two weeks.Students who want to invite them to stay can take part in it.I want to try.First , my parents and I can speak English well.That benefits us to communicate with each other.Second, our house is big enough for he or she to stay.Furthermore , I live near the Huangpu River.It has a good view of Shanghai.Last but not least , in my home, he or she will enjoy much China culture.My grandpa and grandma are good at handwriting.My grandma also has a good skill in Chinese painting.I think our friendly will give him a both interesting and comfortable experience.Thank you for your reading during your busy work..I hope that you will agree with me.Yours sincerely, Li Hong(3)假如你是王华,18岁生日后,真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算,以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下: Dear Mum and Dad, How are you doing ? 范文 Dear Mum and Dad, How are you doing ? I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up.Whenever I am thinking of this, I can’t help feeling grateful to you.It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies.Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope, courage and confidence.And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.Dear Mum and Dad, I an now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams.I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student.Then, I will strive to be an independent youth.The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition.Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference.Best regards to you.Yours sincerely, Wang Hua(4)求职信
Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a secretary.I would like you to consider me for the position.My name is Li Min.I am twenty-three years old.I am studying business management in Xiamen University.I will graduate this summer.I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me do the office work very well.And I have learned English for ten years.In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department.My grades come out top in my department.What's more, I like office work very much and I also think that I can be competent for the job.If I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully Li Min E.说明文:
How People Spent Their Holidays As can be seen from the table, great changes took place in the ways that people spent their holidays over the period from the year 1990 to 1999.The proportion of traveling abroad and camping was increasing steadily, from 12% to 24% and from 10% to 36% separately, while that of staying at home and going to the seaside was decreasing year by year, from 38% to 31% and from 40% to 9% separately.Why were there changes? I think people can nowadays afford traveling.Also, people prefer to pursue a high-quality and colorful life.So we can see that people's living standard has been rising greatly.F.议论文
(1)最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为: 1.不应该收门票 2 公园是公众休闲的地方
3.如收门票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象 40%的同学认为: 1.应收门票,但票价不要太高 2.支付园林工人工资 3.购新花木 注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。2.词数:100左右。3.参考词汇:门票---entrance fee Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public.They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure.They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged.The city will not look so beautiful as it should have.Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control.Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees.For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks? Dear Editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.50% of the students disagree with the idea of entrance fees.In their opinion, parks are public places where all the people can have a rest and enjoy themselves.So if an entrance fee is charged, some people will surely be kept away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, gates and walls must be built.They think that it will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students agree with the idea of entrance fees, because the gardeners need to be paid and new plants and flowers need to be bought.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly, XXX Dear Editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.60% of the students oppose the idea of entrance fees.They believe everyone can go to parks for rest and fun because parks are public places.But an entrance fee may keep some people away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, it is necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students approve of the idea of entrance fees, because money is needed to pay the gardeners and to buy new plants and flowers.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,(2)Dear Headmaster, As the minister of students' life in the Student Union, I am writing to you to reflect something about our canteen.To our satisfaction, the canteen supplies us with various kinds of food.This gives us many choices.At the same time the price for the food is low and the food is tasty.And the surroundings for having a meal have been improved.The canteen has become clean.And when we are eating, we can watch TV.But something unsatisfactory exists, too.For example, the quantity of a helping is less than it should be.This is unfair.And in the canteen, the seats are not enough.Some students have to stand while eating.We hope that the school will consider adding more seats for us.Finally we hope that they can improve the quality of the food and their service.We will be very happy if our advice is taken.Yours respectfully,(3)On Money Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything.A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love.I don't think we should regard money as everything.Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life.What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers.This way, all of us can lead a happier lives.(4)假设今天你上网,点击进入”今日话题“网站.看到一则有关禁止学生在校园内使用手机的报道.网友们对此各抒己见.作为一名高中生,你对此颇感兴趣,就在该栏目下发帖,客观反映周围同学们对此的不同看法.并简单谈谈你的看法.(100字左右)以下为同学们的看法: 赞同: 便于联系, 有安全感, 功能(function)多样
不赞同: 便于联系非必需,因有IC卡电话, 玩游戏,发短信(e--massage), 耗时费钱 你的观点 Just now, I entered the website—”Topic for Today“.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of the cell-phone on campus in middle schools.One possible version: Just now, I entered the website--”Topic for Today“.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of cell-phones on campus in middle schools.In fact, more students now come to school with cell-phones.My schoolmates have different opinions.Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble.Besides, it is nice to enjoy various functions of different cell-phones.Others think differently.First, the cellphone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others.Second, many often play e-games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study.Worse is to come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life.But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school.(5)三班的学生进行了一场有关大学生是否应该打工的讨论。请你根据下面表中的提示 写一篇英语短文,介绍讨论的情况。一些同学认为 另一些同学认为
打工会影响大学生的学习;改变正确的人生观;甚至会使他们崇拜金钱 打工可以减轻父母的负担;同时使大学生获得社会经验;发展个人能力;丰富学习生活 注意:1.字数:100左右; 2.不必逐条翻译,可进行合理发挥。3.参考词汇:打工lake a part-time job 人生观life view 负担load The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether college students should take part-time jobs.Some students think it is advantage for college students to take part-time jobs.Because, by doing part-time jobs, they can earn money on their own so that they don’t need to ask their parents for money, and in this way, they reduce their parents’ load.Besides, taking part-time jobs can help them gain social experience, develop personal abilities and make their life enjoyable.One the other hand, some students have a disagreement.In their opinion, the students’ main task is to study, while taking part-time jobs has a bad effect on their study.And also, it may make college students change their life views and they may think too much of money.(6)面对中学生“出国热”,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题,根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。Advantages: 1.良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。2.拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。3.传播各民族间的不同文化。
Disadvantages: 1.年纪小,缺乏生活经验,自理能力差。2.情感孤独,思乡。3.生活学习费用高。
注意:1)第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数。2)词数100 左右。3)参考词汇:媒介,中间人 mediator Studying Abroad In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools abroad.First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.However, there are some disadvantages.Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience.Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick.Of course the costs are much.(7)On net bars With the development of the Internet, the net bar plays an important role in people's life.More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars.They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with ”Meimei“ on the net in the bar.Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students.It has become quite common to go there.They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies.It is a good thing.F.看图作文:
(1)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。注意:1.词数:100左右: 2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small flat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua 满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。Dear Bob, Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua 满分理由
本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dear Bob, How are you these days? I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you’ll like it.If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours, Li Hua 满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。(2)请看下面的这幅漫画,再联想实际生活,写一篇短文,词数120左右。题目:Don’t Waste Water Don't Waste Water A man is washing his clothes ,regardless of the notice above ”Save the Water Please." As we see ,water is the source of life.But there is very limited available water resources in our world.So we shouldn't waste it.Of course, we have to use it to drink, cook, wash, clean and etc.But we must remember not to use it extravagantly.If we didn't stop such wasteful habits, we would cut off the development of the world and the human life.E.其他:(1)Companionship of Books A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps: for there is a companionship of books as well as of men;and one should always live in the best company, whether it be of books or of men.A good book may be among the best of friends.It is the same today that it always was, and it will never change.It is the most patient and cheerful of companions.It does not turn its back upon us in times of trouble or distress.It always receives us with the same kindness, amusing and instructing us in youth, and comforting us in age.Books possess an extract having the fundamental properties of immortality.They are by far the most lasting products of human effort.Temples and statues decay, but books survive.Time is of no account with great thoughts, which are as fresh today as when they first passed through their author's minds ages ago.The only effect of time has been to sift out the bad products, for nothing in literature can long survive but what is really good.Books introduce us into the best society: they bring us into the presence of the greatest minds that have ever lived.We hear what they said and did.we see them as if they were really alive;we sympathize with them, enjoy with them, hurt with them;their experience becomes ours, and we feel as if we were, in a measure, actors with them in the scenes which they describe.The great and good do not die even in this world.Embalmed in books, their spirits walk abroad.The book is a living voice.It is an intellect to which one still listens.Hence we ever remain under the influence of the great men of old.The great intellects of the world are as much alive now as they were ages ago.(2)How to Keep Healthy Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That's why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon, there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.Getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drinking alcohol is also an important way to keep healthy.Smoking and drinking alcohol injure one's health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.Unfortunately few people follow this advice.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they greatly improve their health.(3)Children and Television Television has been changing the way people live for thirty years.It influences nearly every aspect of modern life.how people use leisure time, how news is reported, how information is learned, and how people think and feel.Children are particularly susceptible to the effects of television because their minds are growing, developing, and learning much faster than those of adults.Whereas television could be used as an educational tool for children, more often simple entertaining cartoons with little or no educational value are shown.Social scientists, teachers, and parents are troubled by the kinds of television programs children choose to watch.These groups of people are concerned about the media's impact on young.children.They are worried about the effects of televised violence on society as well as commercials for sugarcoated food.Most importantly, however, they feel television is one factor that causes declining math and reading scores among schoolchildren.Because of the excessive time spent in watching TV, children are spending less time readingand thinking independently.Experts are concerned about the view of the world that youngsters are learning from television.Parents, schools, and churches have traditionally been the social models and teachers for children.However, because television influences children's attitudes and behavior, its role in society is becoming increasingly more powerful--it is much more than a simple recreational activity.Exposure to excessive violence is another influence of television.According to several studies, televised violence may cause children to become more aggressive.Also, because so much violence is seen by children on television, they become more used to it as the only solution to difficult situations.Children who watch a great deal of violence on television may become apathetic toward actual aggression.One study has shown that, compared to a control group, fifth-graders who watched an aggressive television broadcast were slower to ask for adult help when a fight broke out among younger children.