大学英语四级考试-写作篇

第一篇：大学英语四级考试-写作篇

大学英语四级考试——写作篇

（一）2004年初教育部高教司组织制定并在全国部分高校开始试点《大学英语课程教学要求（试行）》，《教学要求》规定，大学英语课程的教学目标是：培养学生的英语综合应用能力，特别是听说能力，使他们在今后工作和社会交往中能用英语有效地进行口头和书面的信息交流。在《大学英语四、六级考试改革方案（试行）》中，写作能力测试部分（Writing）比例为15%，其中题材包括议论文、说明文、应用文等。

 命题趋势

从题型上看，2000年之前，四级作文主要考议论文，从2000年起作文命题指导思想开始变化，开始考更能体现考生实力的记叙文、描写文以及书信演讲类应用文。自2000年1月至2006年6月十三次考试中除2006年1月“Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?”2003年1月“It Pays to Be Honest”及2000年6月“Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?”外，其他九次皆为 说明文、记叙描写文或应用文。最后这两类文章是考查考生英语表达基本功的最佳方式，因此近年来成为出现频率最高的题型。

从题材上看，四级考试作文命题贴近大学生的学习和课余生活，反映社会变化、发展和进步。在平常的训练中，论说文重点准备关于大学校园生活的话题，如学习生活、社会工作、兼职打工等；应用文重点在咨询信、投诉信、介绍信、请求信、建议信、道歉信、邀请信等私人和公务信函以及开幕词等致辞的写法。

 题材类型

四级考试作文出题形式包含有图表类以及非图表类两大形式，其中非图表类有：

（1）观点论述题——提出明确个人观点，并对已经提出的观点提供充分、符合逻辑的论据。常用句型表达有：

In my opinion„„I ' m of the opinion that„„I think„„I argue for(against)„„I have three main reasons for my opinion„„

（2）不同物比较题——将两物进行比较（compare）或对照(contrast),比较两物/两观点的相同点，对照两个方面的相异点。常用表达有：

Similarly„„on the contrary„„in contrast„„contrary to„„prefer A to B„„

Compare with A„„B has the following advantages„„I like A more for the following reasons„„

（3）不同观点比较题 ——常用表达有：

Different people have different opinions„„some people insist that„，while others maintain„„

（4）信件

2002年6月的四级作文考了图表题。进行此类作文时，考生切忌堆砌数据，而应对图表进行准确地概括和描述后用更多的篇幅来揭示图表的含义或分析其现象的原因。

 写作要求

《大学英语教学要求》规定，四级写作的要求为：“能完成一般性写作任务；能描述个人经理、观感、情感和发生的事件等；能写常见的应用文；能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120个词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯；能掌握基本的写作技能。”英语四六级作文有四个基本考点：

1、切题-----所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目

要求，并在内容上没有偏差。

2、表达清楚、条理清晰------考查学生掌握文章结构，明确文章主题观点，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。

3、文字通顺，连贯性较好----考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。

4、基本无语言错误----考查学生对言基本功的掌握，包括语法与拼写两部分。

考生在写作中，应当做到：注重语法、评写以及标点的正确使用，用词恰当；遵循文章的特定文体格式，使体裁符合试题要求；合理组织文章结构，以实现内容的统一和连贯；根据写作目的和特定读者，选择恰当的语言。

 出题热点

综观写作题材的选择，我们可以发现，出题热点还是比较集中。以下是常见文章题材内容：

1、方便------发明，计算机，网络，快餐，新科技

Key words: convenience;convenient;bring us much convenience2、效率-------相对时间内量最大

Key words: efficient;efficiency;save/waste time3、节省和浪费-----针对大学生生活习惯

Key words: diligent;economical;thrifty;save space;metro/subway/tube;

costly;time-consuming;lavish;

selfish;selfishness;conservative;isolated;improve;enrich4、心理精神健康------体育运动，生活习惯，室内/室外运动

Key words: independence;dependant；cooperation;team spirit;compete;

creation;creative;tolerance;tolerant;

physical;psychological;mental;healthy;mentally unhealthy;

sociable;popular;party animal5、娱乐-----新发明

Key words:recreation;entertainment;relaxation;

amusement park;leisure time;kill the time;

pleasure, autonomous, tired6、环境

Key words:environment;pollution;poisonous;contaminated;separated wastes;recycle7、身体健康

Key words: disease;energetic;dynamic8、风险

Key words:risk;hazard;danger;threaten9、经验-----------谚语，抽象话题

Key words:social;sophisticated;skillful10、人道、正义、公平

Key words:humane;fair;justice;fair;help;love

大学英语四级考试——写作篇

（二）命题作文按照要求，体裁基本可以分为观点论证、利弊选择、现象解释、途径点评以及应用文写作这五类。各类体裁按照评分标准，各有其写作技巧，考生在平时的训练过程中应多注意培养针对不同体裁文章的写作技巧和思路。

1． 观点论证型

观点论证型作文要求考生根据题目给出的论点，按照所给提纲的结构要求对其进行论证，然后表明自己的立场和观点，通过摆事实、讲道理的方式论述事理，发表意见，确立或否定某一主张。

审题思路考生拿到作文题后首先应确立论证的主题、写作结构以及材料选择与组织。写作步骤

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 表明观点，提出论点； 论证观点，以事实和数据为依据例证论点； 得出结论或表明个人看法和做法。

基本模式

 第一部分：总结描述，用一两句话概括、描述当今社会存在的某种观点，并做

 简单的扩展——主题句+扩展句 第二部分：列出论据，说明观点成立的理由——主题句+举例 第三部分：表明自己的观点并结束全文。结尾部分一定要总结自己的观点。类型范例

Nowadays, „„is a common thing / has become more and more popular.For example, „„.There are different attitudes towards it.Some people believe that„„ / some people have the idea that „„;while other people view differently, they contend that„„.And some others„„.In my opinion / As far as I am concerned / From my point of view, I prefer„„.Personally speaking, I would rather„„.As long as / With the development of„„, we’ll certainly that„„ in the end.2． 利弊选择型

利弊选择型作文要求考生能对一个论题的正反两个方面加以阐述分析，进一步作出选择，推导出自己认为合理的解决该问题的模式。

审题思路考生拿到作文题后首先应该确立协作主题、写作结构以及材料选择与组织。写作步骤

 主题：分析问题事实存在是否有讨论的必要性

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 开头段：点明主题，指出争论焦点 中心段1：阐述提纲中列举的一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明 结构：主题句+理由/举例1+理由/举例2+理由/举例3 中心段2：阐述提纲中列举的另一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明

结构：主题句+理由/举例1+理由/举例2+理由/举例3

 结论段：表明自己的观点，结束全文

类型范例

These days we often hear that„„.It is common that„„.People hold different views about„„.Some people believe / have the idea that „„.They say that„„.They point out that„„.For example„„.But on the contrary, other people disagree with them.They firmly believe that„„.They argue that„„.In my own opinion, the former / latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, „„.For another, „„.Last but not the least, „„.3． 现象解释型

现象解释型作文要明确描述社会生活中存在的一种现象，要求考生根据自己的思考说明该现象所反映的社会问题，并且解释该现象存在或发生的原因。

表述类型现象解释型作文有两种表述类型，其中包括文字描述型和图表说明型。考生拿到作文题，应就给出信息确立写作主题、结构以及材料的选择和组织。

写作步骤1 文字描述型可以将文章分为三段，指出现象；解释原因；分析优劣褒贬，最后明确主旨，并且给出建议。

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 第一部分：描述现象，引起话题； 第二部分：对现象进行细致分析，结实现象发生或变化的原因； 第三部分：针对现象做出评论，表明自己的态度、观点或做法以及如何在日常

生活中有效发挥该现象的优势或避免不利的方面。

解释、描述句型

（1）Everybody knows that„

（2）It is true that„

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（6）One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is„ The chief reason is that„ To take„for an example„ Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned„

（7）There are several causes for this significant growth in„：First„Secondly„

Finally„

（8）Different people observes it in different ways.写作步骤2 图表说明型是现象解释性作文的变体。在此类作文中，题目提供的主题信息由图表来呈现，表现某一现象的细节、变化或发展趋势，要求考生对所给信息进行分析，然后描述，说明现象存在和变化的原因，预测发展趋势，并且在此过程中阐述个人看法。

 第一部分：描述图表中数据的主要趋势，对数据进行分析比较，总结归纳图表 内容所呈现的主要特征； 第二部分：对现象和变化进行细致的分析，解释现象发生或变化的原因；

 第三部分：针对现象和变化做出结论。

图表、描述句型

（1）It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.（2）There is an increase of 20% in total this year.（3）The table shows that it is decreased twice than that of the year 1996.（4）Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent.（5）The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.（6）It has decreased almost two and half times, compare with„

类型范例

From the chart / graph / table / figure, we can clearly see that„„.Obviously that„„.In

my mind, there are three reasons can explain this phenomenon.To begin with / The main reason is„„.What is more / In addition that„„.Thirdly / Lastly / Apart from that„„.As a result / In short„„.Considering all these„„.For one thing„„.For another„„.In conclusion / In brief / To sum up„„.4． 途径点评型

途径方法型作文通过给出提示性文字或图表提出（或反映）社会生活中存在的某一现实问题，要求考生指出问题的危害性或解决该问题的紧迫性。然后对问题进行分析，提出解决方案或应对措施，最后表明考生自己的态度和做法。

审题思路了解途径方法类作文的特征，按照下列思路进行写作：首先概述现状，提出问题；其次分析和解决问题；最后总结全文或提出建议。

写作步骤

 明确所要讨论的主题

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 开头段：阐述为什么要讨论该主题，其重要性以及作用 中心段1：分析主题讨论问题的原因

 中心段2：讨论解决问题所必须的条件或具备的因素

 结论段：得出结论，重申问题的重要性

或者从各个方面提出解决该问题的建议和方法

类型范例

With the improvement of„„, there are„„.For example, „„.So it is high time„„.The reasons are: First / At first / To begin with„„.Secondly / The second / In addition / Furthermore / Besides, „„.Lastly / Finally / Last but not least„„.But how to„„？In my opinion, I think / as far as I am concerned„„.On the one hand„„.On the other hand„„.Therefore, I believe„„.

第二篇：大学英语四级考试写作篇3,4

大学英语四级考试写作篇

（三）——书信

2000年开始，四级作文的命题趋势由议论文写作，逐渐倾向于更能体现实用意义，体现考生实力的记叙文、描写文，以及书信、演讲类应用文写作。应用文是考查考生英语表达基本功的最佳方式之一。在类型上包含有咨询、投诉、介绍、请求、建议、道歉、邀请、感谢等私人信件和公务信函，以及开幕、欢迎、等致辞内容。此外，便签、通知和广告的写法也属于应用文范畴。

信函，作为出现频率较高的作文试题，是大学英语四级考试取得好成绩的重要准备项目。在这类题型中，考生被给定某个特定场景，要求在理解的基础上给相关人士写一封短信，在信中明确表达写信的原因、动机、目的和愿望等。信件内容多种多样，都源于日常生活，只要掌握英语书信的基本格式，掌握其写作语言，就能在应试中写出高质量的文章，得到高分。[审题思路] 在写书信时，除了信首的称呼和信尾的签名、落款之外，信的主要内容体现在信的主体部分。一般来说，信的主体包括以下三个部分：

简短的问候，自我介绍，引出话题，提出写信的目的。

就上面所提及的问题，运用举例、比较、因果等手段进行展开阐释。

总结补充，提出解决问题的方案或对问题的解决表示期盼。并以简单的结束语收尾。[写作模式] 书信类的作文可以是商业信函(business letter)，也可以是私人信函(personal letter)，遇到题目时要能迅速作出判断，以便进一步确定选词、造句、行文的风格。商业信函，一般格式严整、语言正式，写作时要注意其固定的客套语言和行文模式。类型有：咨询信、申请信、推荐信、邀请信、投诉信等以及与之相应的回复信件。私人信函，是熟人见联络感情的方式，语言较为随意，格式上也有很多省略。信件的主要内容包括以下几点： 称呼(Addressing)写信的目的及自我介绍(Purpose of the Letter & Self-introduction)背景情况介绍(Background Information)解释情况、说明问题(Explanation Analysis)希望与要求(Need & Demand)结束语(Closing Remarks)签名(Signature)[常见格式] 书信作为应用文体，具有不同于一般作文的特殊格式，但是大体上也可以固定为“三段式”。一封完整的书信包括信首、正文和信尾三个部分，而正文部分就可以按照三段式的方法展开内容叙述。

信首：信首要求给出写信人的地址及写信的日期。地址在上，日期在下，位于首页右上角。地址写法按照从“小”到“大”的顺序，即：门牌号-路名-城市-省-国家。该部分内容可按照要求灵活增减。

正文：正文可以套用“三段式”模式。

简短问候，自我介绍，引出话题，提出写信目的。阐释问题，运用举例、比较、因果等手段展开。

总结补充，提出解决方案或表示期待问题的解决。并以简单的结束语收尾。信尾：结尾谦称，并署名。例文：

117B Washington Ave

Charlottesville, 22903

U.S.A

April 24, 2004 The Manager, Central Hotel, Brighton England Dear Sir/Madam，I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who stayed at your hotel last year and warmly recommended you to me.I expect to arrive in Brighton on June 9th and would like a single room with a private bath.I shall be staying for five days and would like to have all my meals at your hotel.Would you please let me know whether there is a room available and how much my stay will cost?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours very truly，Jack Smith

信首

写信人的地址日期 收信人姓名地址 称呼 正文 引出话题 展开阐释 内容完整 条理清楚 文字连贯 表示期盼 信尾 结尾谦称 署名

[常用词句] 书信开头称呼与结尾：

开头

结尾

Name unknown Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear Professor, Dear President，Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Very sincerely yours，Name known

Dear Mr.Jenkins, Dear Ms.Smith, Dear Dr.Write，Yours, Yours sincerely, Yours cordially，Friends

Dear Sue, Dear Michael, Dear Mary，Best regards, Best wishes, Lovingly youres，Certificate or introduction

To whom it may concern，Sincerely yours，书信开头部分，应尽量做到开门见山表达意见，与汉语开场白的寒暄方式不同。常用的表达句型有：

My purpose of writing this letter is to… I am writing to…

You will be very glad to hear that… The reason that I write this letter is to… I was surprised to learn that…

I am sorry it has taken me so long to reply to your letter but… I would like to inquire about… I apologize for…

I wish to apply for a position with your company.书信结束语主要是进一步明确写信人的要求，希望对方重视自己的意见、建议、请求或者致歉，尽快回复信件。结束语应与正文内容首尾呼应，使信件显得更完整，不能省略。常用表达句型有：

I am looking forward to your reply.Please be kind enough to take my request into your consideration.Please accept my apologies once again.Thank you for your attention to this matter.If you need any help, do not hesitate to contact us.I do hope you will…

书信主体因信件类型不同，内容各不相同，主要是介绍背景、反映问题、解释说明事件、表示感谢等。可以按照段落写作来布局，注意以下几个方面： 条理清楚，多用序数词来表达层次，如first, second等；

使用适当连接词，表明句子间关系，如therefore, however等； 信息明确、简洁，切忌空话、大话，不要过分谦恭或客气；

题目要求的要点不可遗漏，可适当增补一些理由、原因来丰富主体内容。（韩巍巍）

大学英语四级写作篇

（四）——谚语的使用 语言源于生活，源于劳动人民在生活和劳作中约定俗成的交流习惯，谚语更是从中提炼出来的精华，寓意深刻，富有哲理和智慧。谚语的主要特点是言简意赅，用日常生活中的具体事例来说明带有普遍意义的道理。不论是中文还是英文都有着数以万计的谚语，在英语写作中，正确使用谚语对提高写作水平有着很大的帮助，为所创作的文章起到画龙点精的作用。尤其是在四级英语临场考试中，谚语的使用能够使作文语言流畅，生动活泼，处处闪现亮彩。恰到好处的谚语不仅能体现考生扎实的英语语言功底，丰富的英文知识，灵活的语言表达能力，而且更容易使作文从众多同题文章中脱颖而出，获得写作高分。标题

谚语在作文中出现的位置比较灵活，可根据具体情景的需要加以设计。除四级考试给定试题以外，如要求自行拟订题目，英语谚语短句是很好的选择。谚语用句短小精悍、音韵和谐、琅琅上口，并且语义直白，寓意深刻，让人一目了然。例如一些简洁的谚语短句，都可以用来作为文章标题：

While there is life, there is hope.留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。Great hopes make great man.伟大的理想造就伟大的人。God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。In doing we learn.实践长才干。

Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。

Better late than never.迟做总比不做好；晚来总比不来好。Lifeless, faultless.只有死人才不犯错误。

A bold attempt is half success.勇敢的尝试是成功的一半。Never say die.永不言败。

Never judge from appearances.不可以貌取人。Promise is debt.一诺千金。论证

行文中，谚语可以作为论点，出现在起首句位置，总领论据；也可以在阐明论点的过程中作为论据，支持立论，使论点有出处，论据强而有力，引经据典说服力强。其中包括传统训言警句、名人名言，以及对中文格言的翻译使用。[经典谚语] Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.脑中有知识，胜过手中有金钱。Storms make trees take deeper roots.风暴使树木深深扎根。

Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.心之所愿，无所不成。

Good company on the road is the shortest cut.行路有良伴就是捷径。Misfortunes never come alone/single.祸不单行。Misfortunes tell us what fortune is.不经灾祸不知福。

It's never too late to mend.过而能改，善莫大焉；亡羊补牢，犹未晚也。Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.无热情成就不了伟业。Actions speak louder than words.行动比语言更响亮。

One today is worth two tomorrows.一个今天胜似两个明天。

Knowing something of everything and everything of something.通百艺而专一长。Good advice is beyond all price.忠告是无价宝。[名人名言] Genius is one per cent inspiration and ninety-nine per cent perspiration.天才是一分灵感加九十九分血汗。—— Edison爱迪生

Human pride is human weakness.骄傲乃人类之弱点。—— M.B.Eddy 艾迪

It is better to be faithful than famous.守信用胜过有名气。—— T.Roosevelt 罗斯福

If winter comes, can spring be far behind？冬天来了,春天还会远吗？——P.B.Shelley 雪莱

Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。—— F.Bacon 培根

Life is like a box of chocolate.生活就像一盒巧克力。——《阿甘正传》

Money is a good servant and a bad master.金钱是善仆,也是恶主。——F.Bacon 培根 Speech is silver, but silence is gold.雄辩是银,沉默是金。—— T.Carlyle 卡莱尔 [中文格言] When in Rome, do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。

（Explanation: conform to the manners and customs of those amongst whom you live.）

What you lose on the swings you get back on the roundabouts.失之东隅，收之桑榆。（Explanation: a rough way of starting a law of average;if you have bad luck on one day you have good on another;if one venture results in loss try a fresh one---it may succeed.）What are the odds so long as you are happy.知足者常乐。

（Explanation: what does anything else matter if a person is happy.）Entertain an angel unawares.有眼不识泰山。

（Explanation: to receive a great personage as a guest without knowing his merits.）Every dog has his day.是人皆有出头日。（Explanation: fortune comes to each in turn.）

Every potter praises his own pot.王婆买瓜，自卖自夸。（Explanation: people are loath to refer to defects in their possessions or their family members.）连接词

连接词写中文作文时,我们想引用俗语谚语时,一般都有“所谓”； “古语有云”； “曾听过一句话” ；“有一谚语是这样说的....”等说法，以此来做自然衔接。转折词（transitional words）扮演的重要角色是：承先启后，使句子紧凑，段落相吸，对文章结构，有良性作用。如果没有采用转折词的习惯，就会使文句松散，上下文七零八乱，应试中应注意避免。常见句型有：

Just as the saying goes...As the proverb goes...As the old saying goes...A saying goes like this...除了句型衔接转折以外，很多常用字词能在句与句之间、段与段之间起到点睛作用。主要转折词归类分列如下，在应试文中可加以参考，多多安插使用。表示“尤有进者”：again;also;then;besides;further;furthermore;moreover;next;in addition, etc.例如：Jason teaches diligently.Besides, he writes a lot.English is a useful language.For one thing, it is an official language in the UN.Then, it is widely used in business, science and technology.表示“反意见”：but;however;still;yet;after all;for all that;in spite of;on the contrary;on the other hand, etc.例如：Jim is intelligent but lazy.Singapore is not a big country.On the contrary, it is very small.表示“因果关系”：therefore;so;hence;thus;accordingly;consequently;as a result, etc.例如：Some people are over-ambitious.As a result, they are usually unhappy.Tom did not work hard;hence, he failed.表示“比较”：likewise;similarly;in a like manner, etc.例如：You cannot writes without a pen.Likewise, you cannot cook without rice.No one is allowed to speak Mandarin in an English class.Similarly, no one is allowed to speak English in a Mandarin class.表示“举例示范”：for example;in other words;for instance;that is, etc.例如：There are some common errors in his composition.For instance, it is wrong to use “he” to replace “the queen”.表示“结束”：to sum up;in brief;in short;on the whole;to conclude, etc.例如：Some say Singapore is a nice place to live in.Others say it is not so nice.It is too competitive.In short, some like Singapore;some do not.常用谚语

另外，在行文写作中，注意使用一些常用谚语，可以使笔法自然，简洁明了。更加符合英文表达方式和习惯。考生们在平时要多积累类似的语句，熟练掌握，以便应试时游刃有余地恰当选用。常用的英语谚语如下： in everyone’s mouth.脍炙人口 to kick against the pricks 螳臂挡车

to give the last measure of devotion 鞠躬尽瘁 to suffer for one’s wisdom 聪明反被聪明误 to convert defeat into victory 转败为胜 beyond one’s grasp 鞭长莫及

to be severe with oneself and lenient with others 严以责己宽以待人 a heart of steel 铁石心肠

to be guided by destiny 听天由命 to harp on the same string 旧调重弹

It’s a matter of time.这是迟早的问题。You can count on me.你可以信得过我。He see things not people.他论事不论人。We sang the same songs.我们志同道合。

Man proposes and god disposes.谋事在人成事在天。Pride goes before a fall.骄者必败。

I'm trying to make ends meet.我尽力要使收支平衡。

If you wish to be the best man, you must suffer the bitterest of the bitter.吃得苦中苦, 方为人上人。

Self-trust is the first secret of success.自信心是成功的首要关键。

The secret of success is constancy of purpose.成功的秘绝在于目标坚定有恒。（文英）

第三篇：大学英语四级写作优秀篇

大学英语四级写作优秀范文

The university’s branch campuses in suburban areasIn recent years more and more universities have built up their branch campuses in suburban areas.Now it is very difficult to find a university without a branch campus.Maybe no one can tell clearly when the first branch campus came out。

But the reasons behind this phenomenon are obvious.Among these reasons, the enrollment expansion of universities plays a very vital role.As more and more freshmen are remitted to universities, the original facilities, including classrooms, apartments, dining houses, laboratories and the like, are not enough any more.What’s more, the land in the suburb is relatively low in price, which is affordable for most universities.Besides, the quiet environment in suburban areas is more suitable for students to study。

As a college student, I think, it is necessary and beneficial for many universities to build up a branch campus.However the building of branch campuses brings some problems.For one thing, the students in some branch campuses cannot enjoy good enough facilities and the teachers due to limited resources.For another it leads to less direct communications among teachers and students.Therefore the university should take a full account before it decides to build up a branch campus。How should college students relieve pressure?

Today’s college students face many pressures, mainly from parents’ expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition.Although pressure, to some extent, can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative affect.Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence.More seriously it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors。

Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn how to relieve pressure.First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves, so it’s to make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages.Second, we should set a clear aim of struggle.The aim can give us motivation and make us become active.Third, attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure.Finally, if you find pressure is nearly beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance。

As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment.In order to reduce upset, I ask my parents to help me analyze my advantages and disadvantages and produce more practical job objection.So my employment pressure has been relieved greatly.Now I become very confident in my future, and I do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation。

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands.From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they are inclined to buy famous brands.Moreover, many students from poor families begin to follow this consumption trend as well.This phenomenon has aroused wide attention。

The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.They expect others to admire their high class and good taste.What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which has a great attraction to young college students.Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit。

As far as I am concerned, it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.After all, most of famous brands are far beyond their consumption ability.Besides, it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands。

1.科学技术是社会发展所不可缺少的2.社会科学和自然科学相互渗透

3.现代大学生需要广博的知识

We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge

范文：本文来源:考试大网

Knowledge is power, especially scientific and technological knowledge.Science and technology are the motive power of the social development.Without them human society could never have developed from primitive society to modern society.Therefore, to conquer and transform nature, we must master scientific knowledge.However, social knowledge is also essential.Without it we can not understand society and don＇t know the law of the social development.As a result we are unable to tovern society.Therefore, besides scientific knowledge we need to master social science, philosophy, politics, history, aesthetics, etc, so that we can know society from all perspectives and form a correct world outlook.To meet new challenges in he 21st century, we university students should lose no time to acquire as much knowledge as possible so that we will become qualified successors of the socialist cause.

第四篇：冲刺大学英语四级——写作篇

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2014年英语四级写作十大必备范文汇总：http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQ6Ajq6

十大四级作文题材预测：http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTjzvE3

第五篇：大学英语四级考试写作指南

大学英语四级考试写作指南:现象阐释型

本文作者： 赵子凌

这类写作类型是以当下比较流行的社会现象为话题展开的写作。一般题目即为现象，要求考生对现象进行较为详尽的阐释，包括分析该现象产生的原因或可能带来的后果，并要求考生谈谈自己对于该现象的看法或建议。

基本解题思路：描述现象，分析原因，自己对这个现象的看法。但有时提纲结构会稍加变化，第二部分要求分析后果而不是原因，写作时以具体提纲为准。

以2007年12月四级写作真题为例：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What Electives to Choose.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1.各大学开设了多种多样的选修课

2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课 3.以你自己为例„„

审题

根据题目中所给的中英文提示，可知话题是大学生非常熟悉的“选修课的选择”。因此考生在写的时候可以结合自己的实际情况进行分析，这样易于下手。中文提纲中的三个句子分别对应article的三个段落，可以作为各段落的主题句。

扩展提纲

1.开门见山地指出“各个大学开设了多种多样的选修课”这一现象。

2.阐述不同学生选择选修课的不同原因，如有的同学是出于兴趣，有的是为以后求职做准备。3.谈谈自己选择选修课时的考虑并解释。

范文

Nowadays, colleges offer a wide range of elective courses for undergraduates.Students from different departments may sit in the same classroom and study a subject that may have nothing to do with their majors.There is no doubt that elective courses are welcomed by students, but the reasons for each student to make his/her own choice differ.Some students choose a course merely out of their personal interest in a certain field, while others may take the utility of the course into consideration and expect to put what they have learnt into practice after graduation.Some students are inclined to choose courses they are familiar with in order to get a good score in the exam, while others do not care about the exam and choose a course in a little known field.Personally, I’d like to learn from elective courses some knowledge useful for my future job.Elective courses can provide a chance to learn about other professions and give me broader usability.If I can prove my training in business but also have courses in science, I may just win a job over those who strictly majored in business with no other interests.(195 words)老师评：这篇文章感觉只是一篇中规守距的短文，主要问题是没有按四六级作文三段结构来写，表达不够多样性。选修课在英文中可以表达为：electives, elective courses, optional, optional courses;专业可以用majors, departments, programs;

练习题

2011年6月四级写作真题 Online Shopping 1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3.我的建议

四级作文高分秘诀

一.写得对

首先要保证审题正确，以免跑题。提纲式作文是四级作文中很常见的一种题型，建议考生在读题过程中将提纲中的关键词划出来，从而明确方向。

二.写得多

写作文最怕的是言之无物，干瘪无味。考生常见的问题是观点确定后无法展开论证。针对这个问题，建议考生在平时广泛地阅读报刊杂志，有效扩充自己的文化背景知识，有意识地积累名人轶事等素材。这与死记硬背范文有明显区别。

三.写出彩

要想四级作文出彩。一个小窍门就是注意所用语言的多样性。因为四级作文的篇幅不长，所以尽量不要让同一个单词反复出现。为了避免单词的重复使用，我们可以使用近义词或者同义的短语。如“主要的原因”：main reasons。Main可以替换为primary, essential, crucial，indispensable，fundamental。丰富多变的用词是article的最大亮点。

在句式方面，要避免单一的简单句型，可以适当加入倒装句、强调句、插入语等句式，做到句式多样化，为article加分。

作文评分知多少？

四级作文满分15分，阅卷老师从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判，就总的印象给出奖励分：按五个标准给分，一般不会低于2分，但其他分，如3、4、6、7、15分也是会有的。报道分和翻译合并在一起，计算机自动加权处理为总分710分的20%（142分），但我看到的最好成绩是130多分。标准如下：

2分 — 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或有多处严重错误。5分 — 基本切题。思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分 — 基本切题。部分思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误颇多，包括一些严重错误。11分 — 切题。思想清楚，文字连贯，有少量语言错误。

14分 — 切题。思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，语言仅有个别小错。

(注：“严重语言错误”包括句子结构错误、时态语态错误和用词错误，严重影响作者意思的表达。)

一般来说，离要求词数每少10个扣一分（按一行算）。总词数超过要求一般不会扣分，但这并不意味着词数越多越好，建议控制在150-180词左右。明显笔误不扣分。