英语六级写作王长喜十二句作文法汇总(上)

第一篇：英语六级写作王长喜十二句作文法汇总(上)

英语六级写作:王长喜十二句作文法汇总（上）

Source: 恒星英语学习网Onion2010-12-10我要投稿论坛Favorite第一节：六级作文试题分析

一.六级作文试题分类

六级作文从试题角度可以分为现象解释型、对比选择型、问题解决型、观点论证型与应用文五种类型。

(一)现象解释型

此类作文在六级考试作文中最为常见。命题主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加以评论，其基本结构是：首先说明现状;其次阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因;最后做出分析，提出建议或总结观点。例如：1.现象解释六级真题(2003年6月)

(二)对比选择型

此类作文同样是六级考试中常见的类型，它的标志十分明显。作文题目要求较明确，富有针对性，即直接要求考试比较两种观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点，也就是做出选择。例如：(2000年6月，1999年6月)

(三)问题解决型

此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性;然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施;最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。如2000年1月真题。

(四)观点论证型

此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否认某一主张。如：1999年1月六级真题。

(五)应用文

应用文中的信函，也是六级作文设计的试题之一。在这类题型中，考生会读到一个特定的场景，试题要求考生按照这个场景给相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因、动机、目的和愿望等。文章所设及的内容多种多样，但大部分都与日常生活比较贴近。书信的类型可能变化万千，如邀请信、申请信、感谢信、道歉信等，但是万变不离其宗，只要掌握了英语书信的格式，并应用恰当的句式和语句，就一定能够写出好的文章来。

二.解决方案

1.建议考生分解作文观点，扩充内容。

2.建议考生在写作时只选择自己能够驾奴的句式和词语。

3.建议考生在文章中长短句搭配使用，用短句表达观点，长句推理分析。

4.建议考生选用作文模板，限定文章逻辑结构。

5.建议考生采用固定的句式，限定文章的字数。

第二节：写作技巧及作文结构安排

一.写作技巧。

1.根据文章大意判断作文题型。

2.各种题型的写作方法。

现象解释型：基本方法为：描述现象→分析原因→对现象做出预测或如何促进(限制)这种现象的进一步发展。

对比选择型：基本方法为：阐述一种观点或态度并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由;阐述第二种(相对或相反的)观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由;表明个人支持或反对以上观点或态度，并说明原因。

问题解决型：基本方法为：提出问题→分析问题→解决问题。

观点论证型：基本方法为：分析主题→得出结论→举例论证→得出结论(证明观点的正确性)。

应用文基本方法为：分析所给情景→选择写作方法。

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第一节：六级作文试题分析 一.六级作文试题分类 六级作文从试题角度可以分为现象解释型、对比选择型、问题解决型、观点论证型与应 用文五种类型。(一)现象解释型 此类作文在六级考试作文中最为常见。命题主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加 以评论，其基本结构是： 首先说明现状;其次阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因;最后做出分析，提出建议或总结观点。例如：1.现象解释六级真题(2003 年 6 月)(二)对比选择型 此类作文同样是六级考试中常见的类型，它的标志十分明显。作文题目要求较明确，富 有针对性，即直接要求考试比较两种观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点，也就是做出选择。例如：(2000 年 6 月，1999 年 6 月)(三)问题解决型 此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映 出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性;然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问 题的方案或应对措施;最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。如 2000 年 1 月真题。(四)观点论证型 此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明 自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否 认某一主张。如：1999 年 1 月六级真题。(五)应用文 应用文中的信函，也是六级作文设计的试题之一。在这类题型中，考生会读到一个特定 的场景，试题要求考生按照这个场景给相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的 原因、动机、目的和愿望等。文章所设及的内容多种多样，但大部分都与日常生活比较贴近。书信的类型可能变化万千，如邀请信、申请信、感谢信、道歉信等，但是万变不离其宗，只 要掌握了英语书信的格式，并应用恰当的句式和语句，就一定能够写出好的文章来。二.解决方案 1.建议考生分解作文观点，扩充内容。2.建议考生在写作时只选择自己能够驾奴的句式和词语。

3.建议考生在文章中长短句搭配使用，用短句表达观点，长句推理分析。4.建议考生选用作文模板，限定文章逻辑结构。5.建议考生采用固定的句式，限定文章的字数。相关推荐： 高分必备：2010 年 12 月英语六级作文预测 30 篇 新东方名师指导英语六级写作最后提分技巧 历年英语六级写作真题范文及高分策略汇总 第二节：写作技巧及作文结构安排

一.写作技巧。1.根据文章大意判断作文题型。2.各种题型的写作方法。现象解释型：基本方法为：描述现象→分析原因→对现象做出预测或如何促进(限制)这 种现象的进一步发展。对比选择型：基本方法为：阐述一种观点或态度并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由;阐 述第二种(相对或相反的)观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由;表明个人支持或反 对以上观点或态度，并说明原因。问题解决型：基本方法为：提出问题→分析问题→解决问题。观点论证型：基本方法为：分析主题→得出结论→举例论证→得出结论(证明观点的正 确性)。应用文基本方法为：分析所给情景→选择写作方法。3.三段式作文的结构安排 题型第一段

第二段第三段 现象解释型描述现象说明现象产生的原因表明个人态度或阐述个人做法 对比选择型表明一方或双方由的观点及理表明另一方的观点及理由，指出双方观点不足 之处及理由表明个人态度或阐述个人做法

问题解决型提出问题分析问题，给出解决方案表明个人态度或阐述个人做法 观点论证型提出论点例证论点得出结论或表明个人看法或做法 应用文描述事实阐述原因表明观点或提出建议 第三节：十二句作文法写作模板 一.现象解释型写作模板 现象解释型模板一 Topic sentence ①——has become a common part of people’s life.②And——has always aroused the greatest concern.③what impresses us most is ——.④The reasons——are varied.信息提示 1.空格内用概括性的词语填出最近出现的总体现象。2.空格内填题目要去讨论的具体现象 3.现象的具体表现 4.过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。5.Among the various reasons,——plays an important role.6.That

is to say,—— 7.What is more,—— 8.For example,—— 5.原因之一。6.具体说明原因一。原因二。8 举例说明原因二 9.When talking about——，——，10.On the one hand—— 11.On the other hand,—— 12.In brief,—— 9.空格一填作者要讨论的现象，空格二填作者的看法。10.支持看法的理 由一或说明看法的第一个方面。11.理由二或第二个方面。

12.总结。2003 年 9 月真题 Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life.And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively.The reasons for the phenomenon are varied.Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part.That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other types of books do.What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on relevant fields are highly demanding.For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa.When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books.On the one hand, in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major.On the other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons.In brief, college students should choose books according to their interests and needs.现象解释型模板二 1.We have witnessed —— 2.According to ——，——

3.And —— 4.Many reasons contribute to—— 1.空格内填最近出现的总体现象。2.空格一根据题目填 the chart,thereport 等，空格二内填现象的具体表现一。3.现象的具体表现

二 4.过度句，填现 象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。

5.To begin with ,——.6.More over,—— 7.In addition ,—— 8.As a result ,—— 5.原因之一。6.原因二。7.原因三。8.原因导致的结果。9.As to me,——，10.First of all,—— 11.Besides,—— 12.To conclude,—— 9.空格内填作者对现象的看法。10.支持看法的理由一。11.理由二。12.总结。We have witnessed that college students vary in reading preference.According to the table of the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, the circulation of popular fictions and general nonfictions accounts for 65.9% and 18.2% respectively.And the table shows that the circulation of science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books is 10.8%and 5.1% respectively.Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon.To begin with, popular fictions usually possess more appealing plot than ther types of books do, so many readers are attracted by popular fictions.Moreover, popular fictions and general nonfictions are easier to be understood.In addition, science and art books demand certain knowledge in special field of study.As a result, more students tend to choose popular fictions and general nonfictions.As to me, I’m in favor of books of science and technology.First of all, in order to deepen what I’m leaning, I need read more books relevant to my major and observe the new development in science and technology circles.Besides, there books can also broaden my vision.To conclude, college students should choose books according to their interests and needs.现象解释型模板三 1.——has been brought into focus.2.Nowdays,——.3.In addition, ——.4.Many reasons contribute to——(1)空格

内填最近出现的总体现象(2).空格内填现象的 具体表现一。(3).现象的具体表现二(4).过度句到分析原因。5.Generally speaking ,——.6.First of all,—— 7.More over,—— 8.Therefore ,—— 5.承上启下开始列举原因 6.原因之一。7 原因二。8 对原因一二进行总结。9.As far as I am concerned,——，10.As we known ,—— 11.Furthermore,—— 12.In a word,—— 9.空格内填作者对现象的看法。10.支持看法的理由一。11.理由二。

12.总结。此类型真题有 2002 年 6 月、1996 年 6 月。对比选择型作文模板 模板一

1.Different people have different views on— 2.Some people perfer,——.3.Others tend to, ——.4.As to me, I agree with /to ——(1)开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(2)表明一部分人的看法。(3)另一部分的看法。(4)作者的看法。

5.Of course,——.6.For example,—— 7.But,—— 8.The following reasons can account for my preference——(1)承认自己不赞同的看法有一 定的合理性。(2)举例说明支持第五句。(3)转折指出这种观点的不足。(4)启下句过度到下段 具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。9.The main reason is ——.10.A good example to illustrate is —— 11.Fur another,—— 12.From the foregoing,——9.支持观点的理由一。10.举例说明理由一。11.理由二。12.总结全文，从长远看来。2002 年 6 月真题：Is a test of spoken necessary?

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).Different people have different views on it.Some prefer to have such a test.Others tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English.As to me, I agree with the first statement.Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English.For example, if a candidate draws a topic which he of she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken English.But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English.The following reasons can account for my preference.The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awareness of the importance of spoken English.A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only stressed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability.For another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier.From the foregoing, I think a test of spoken English is of necessity.模板二(1999 年 6 月真题)1.There is no complete agreement among people as to —— 2.Some people consider,——.3.However, others think, ——.4.Some people may say —— 5.They hold this opinion because——.6.However, others believe,—— 7.They argue that,——

8.Personally,I am in favor of the—— 9.Firstly, ——.10.Secondly,—— 11.Most important of all —— 12.Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that ——(1)开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(2)表明一部分人的看法。(3)另一 部分的看法。(4)观点一的理由。(5)深入阐述观点一的理由。

(6)观点二的理由。(7)深入阐述 观点二的理由。(8)我的看法。(9)个人看法依据一。(10)个人看法依据二。(11)个人看法依 据三。(12)总结全文。模板三 1.When asked about ——,different people will offer different opinions.2.Some people take it for granted that——.3.In their opinion, ——.4.Besides —— 5.However, others hold——.6.They maitain—— 7.And—— 8.Weighing up these arguments, I am for—— 9.For one thing——.10.For anther,—— 11.For instance,——

12.Therefore, as stated above——(1)开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看

法。(2)提出观点一。(3)观点一的理由一。(4)观点一的理由二。(5)提出观点二。(6)观点二的理 由一。(7)观点二的理由二。(8)我的观点。(9)个人观点理由一。(10)个人观点理由二。(11)举 例说明。(12)综上所述再次强调自己的观点。Is a test of spoken necessary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).When talking about it, different people will offer different opinions.Some people take it for granted that college students should take a test of spoken English.In their opinion, it is good chance for them to test their spoken English.Besides, it also make them know the importance of the spoken English.However, others hold that a test of spoken English is unnecessary in the university and colleges.They maintain that college students’practice of spoken English is not for testing but for daily use.And they think it is hard to manage such a subjective test.Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first point of view.For one thing, spoken English is very important.For another, a test of spoken English can guide and supervise students to make conversation practice.For instance, when choosing books and other materials, students can pick them according to the bands of the test they want to take.Therefore, as stated above, the first point of view can hold water.观点论证型作文模板 模板一 1.It is true that——.2.However,——.3.I think——.4.—— can be listed as follow.5.First of all, —— 6.Secondly —— 7.For example—— 8.Thirdly,—— 9.A case in point is ——.10.It goes without saying that—— 11.There is no doubt that —— 12.In conclusion —— 1.提出普遍存在地观点。2.谈不同地观点。3.自己地观点，即文章地论点 4.过度句，转折到观点地论证，由题目选择具体的词。5.论证理由一 6.论证理由二。7.举例具体说明理由二。8.论证理由三。9.举例说明理由三。10.提出执行该观点时应注意的事项。11.得出结论。12.总结全文。It Pays to Be Honest It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc.I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only the whole society.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers.Thirdly, honesty can make our society.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the same and the individual.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.模板二 1.Some people believe that——.2.The truth is deep and profound.3.As we know,——.4.In addition,——.5.There are numerous examples —— 6.A case in point is——

7.There is close to suggest—— 8.For another example—— 9.Moreover,——.10.All mentioned above tell us—— 11.But one thing we have to notice is that —— 12.In a word, —— 1.直接提出本文的观点。2.进一步强度观点的正确性。3.论证理由一 4.论证理由二 5.承上启下。6.举例一具体论证。7.总结例一。8.举例二具体论证。9.举例三具体论证。

10.总结上下，重申论点。11.指出该论点应注意什么。12.总结全文。It Pays to Be Honest Some people believe that many dishonesties, such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc.ruin our normal life, and they maintain that being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to oneself.The truth is deep and profound.As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her.In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious.There are numerous examples supporting the argument.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.This is close to suggest that honesty can make our society more stable, and all people can live a peaceful life there.For another example, buyers usually like to make a deal with the dealers they trust.Moreover, the dealer, such as Tongrentang Herbal Medicine Shop which runs business honestly is more likely survive the fierce market competition.All mentioned above tell us that it is high time that we took action to fight against dishonesty.But one thing we have to notice is that sometimes we need white lies to comfort the patients who have suffered serious illness.In short, we should let the dishonesty have no place to stay in our society

第三篇：英语六级写作

It Necessary for a College Student to Own a Mobile Phone?

China is becoming a country with the biggest population of mobile phone subscribers and an increasing number of college students are joining the existing users.Statistics show that eight out of ten college students have got one.However, is it necessary for a college student to own a mobile phone?

In my opinion, there is nothing wrong for a college student to have a cell phone.With it, students will be better connected with friends and parents.What’s more, mobile phones play an important role in graduates’ job-hunting.Therefore, instead of banning the use mobile phones, schools should take measures to guide an appropriate use of them on campus.For example, students are required to switch off their phones in classsrooms and under no circumstances should they use a mobile phone during exams.In some public places, like libraries, a poster can be placed at the entrance to alert library users to switch their phones to vibration mode before they enter the library.I believe mobile phones can bring benefits to our students as long as we can make good use of them.Idle Young, Needy Old

This is an aged saying, but the truth in it is universal: if you do not work when you are young, you will live a miserable life when old.No one can deny it, for it is self-evident.The ancients realized this in the early time and the saying has passed on, but unfortunately, nowadays many people still turn a deaf ear to it.We can see from time to time teenagers engrossed in playing Internet games all night along, who do not care if these games do harm to both their body and their soul.More often than not, the harm becomes a hazard, and killings of the teenagers’ peers are not once in the press.Some of these kids were once excellent in their study, but do not have a good ending.There is another group of students, especially college students, who pay no attention to their majors and other knowledge, but only idle away, thinking that they have a lot of time in hand and the purpose to go to college is just to get a diploma without much effort.Such people must suffer hardship in the near future, let alone when they are old.We all should keep in mind “Idle young, needy old”, and exert our efforts to make our due contribution to society.A Poster

We, English Club, are recruiting new members.Those with a keen love for English may join us on the great trip of indulging in the world of English.English Club is a 20-years-old student-run organization in our school, which has enjoyed great popularity among students over so many years.It is established to provide an environment for students with common interest in English speaking, writing and other related English areas.Our activities center around improving our members’ English skills and promoting friendship and fun among our members.The Club is most famed its traditional activity-English Corner held every Thursday, where English lovers gather together, making friends, exchanging ideas and most importantly improving their spoken English.We also play classical English movies free of charge to our members, and put on English dramas acted by our members, just to name a few.Come and join us if you have an interest in English studies and want to have fun as well.Interested students please call 2233567 or send an email to English.And 100 RMB membership fee is needed.A Letter to the Local Government

Dear mayor,I’m writing to tell you a serious phenomenon near my campus: there are a big number of Internet cafes near the campus, most of open to teenagers.In those cafes, most school kids play Internet games or chat on QQ or MSN, or even visit some porn websites.Some underage Internet addicts turn to the visual world for fun and gradually are unwilling to face reality, which has a bad effect on their studies and health.As I know, the minors are not allowed in Internet cafes.In order to keep the under-18 crowd away from Internet cafes, identity cards are required to get in.However, many Internet cafes are not strict with the policy because of the profit motive.So many teenagers are still sneaking in, with the majority of the young people developing addiction there, In my opinion, there should be better supervision of Internet cafes.Those that open to teenagers should be severely punished—even shut down.Thank you for taking time from your tight schedule to read my words.I sincerely hope this letter may draw you attention to the seriousness of the problem.Earnestly Yours,Jane

On College Students’ Renting Houses off Campus

According to a recent survey, 18.7 percent of college students now live in their rented “homes” off campus instead of the assigned dormitories on campus.They say, in their own small kingdom, they are enjoying more freedom they deserve as grown-ups.It is estimated that another 4.8percent undergraduates are thinking of joining them.It is undeniable that many dormitories are far from being satisfactory—small, shabby, noisy, stuffy in summer and freezing in winter.But the merits of living on campus outweight its demerits: by sharing a room with others, one learn how to understand, compromise with and help each other as well as how to live a regular life.Through more communication, one is better informed and thus enjoys more opportunities.Besides, a lot of educational facilities are near at hand and the accommodation fee is much lower than the monthly rent.Sure, if you rent a well-furnished room, you may live more comfortably and enjoy more freedom, but you are often lonely and insecure for lack of companions, and sometimes you might abuse your freedom.So, move back to the dormitory.Maybe the conditions are not desirable, but it is real college life, and it is rewarding!

A Letter to A Laid-off Acquaintance

My dear aunt,I’m greatly surprised and sad to hear that you’re laid off.But please don’t worry too much.AII roads lead to Rome.I believe we will find a way out.I remember when I was a child, I had so many colorful and comfortable sweaters that I became my friends’ envy.Those were all your masterpieces.A survey I made recently in the city where I’m living now shows that unique hand-knitted things are much more welcome thanready-made clothes.Would you think about taking up knitting as your second career? I know all things are difficult before they are easy.We will meet some unexpected difficulties in the beginning.But I firmly believe that nothing is impossible to a willing heart.Maybe your products will turn out to be a name brand.My dear aunt, please do think about it.I’ll lend you a hand when you need my help.Take care and cheer up!

Your dearest niece

第四篇：英语六级写作

英语六级写作模板大全

来源：普特英语

第一部分、四六级作文：英文信函题型作文diy

写作步骤

要求考生根据提纲写一封英文书信，如2005年12月六级作文、2005年1月四六级作文、2004年6月四六级作文、2004年1月四级作文。对这类题型，通常分为5个步骤来写：第一、文章开头：称呼

第二段、寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：

寒暄句+主题句(注：寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)

第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落：

主题句+扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3

第四段、表明自己的观点，并结束书信主体段落

在最后要他谈自己的看法

第五段、寒暄句+落款

第二部分、英文信函题型作文diy写作范文练习

[实战演练]

directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus.you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:

假如你是李明，请你就本学校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应包括：食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评建议，也可以都有。

[diy写作模板：架构阶段]

第一段：称呼

dear mr.president,第二段：引出写信的目的主题句： this letter comes to you from ____.扩展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon

第三段：对学校食堂正面的看法

主题句：as you know, _____.but unfortunately, ______.扩展句：

1、___.(举例)as a result, _____.2、besides, ______.3、and what's more, _____.第四段：对学校食堂负面的看法

主题句：some people may argue that ____.扩展句：

1、for instance, ____ and ____.2、but in my opinon, ______.第五段：结尾，表明自己看法

结尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.扩展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.thanks.li ming

[diy写作模板：填充阶段]

第一段：称呼

dear mr.president,第二段：引出写信的目的主题句： this letter comes to you from one of your students.扩展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon

第三段：对学校食堂的看法

主题句：as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen.but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.扩展句：

1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be.(举例)as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.3、and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.第四段：别人对食堂看法

主题句：some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.扩展句：

1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.第五段：结尾，表明自己看法

结尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,扩展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.thanks.第三部分、范文

Dear Mr.president,This letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.As you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen.but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be.as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.

第五篇：大学英语六级写作

模版1some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.but other people take an opposite side.they firmly believe that 观点2.as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea.there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.first of all, 论据1.more importantly, 论据2.most important of all, 论据3.in summary, 总结观点.as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版2people hold different views about x.some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.for one thing, 论据1.for another, 论据2.last but not the least, 论据3.to conclude, 总结观点.as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版3there is no consensus of opinions among people about x（争论的焦点）。some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.the reasons are obvious.first of all, 论据1。furthermore, 论据2。among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.that is, 论据3。a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.1)We should take some effective measures.2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties.3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.11.表示结论1)In short，it can be said that...2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that...12.套语1)It’s well known to us that...2)As is known to us，...3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that...5)As aproverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way.)开篇1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6)Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7)Faced with..., quite a few people argue that...8)According to a recent survey,...9)With the rapid development of...,...八)结尾1)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4)In conclusion, it is imperative that...5)There is no easy method, but...might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must...7)In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10)Taking all these into account, we...11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...二、用于描写图表和数据

1.It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.2.There is an increase of 20% in total this year.3.It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995.4.It would be expected to increase 5 times.5.The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.6.It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.7.The total number was lowered by 10%.8.It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year.9.Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent.10.The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.11.It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with…

三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文

1.Everybody knows that…

2.It can be easily proved that…

3.It is true that…

4.No one can deny that

5.One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…

6.The chief reason is that…

7.We must recognize that…

8.There is on doubt that…

9.I am of the opinion that…

10.This can be expressed as follows;

11.To take …for an example…

12.We have reason to believe that

13.Now that we know that…

14.Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned…

15.The change in …largely results from the fact that

16.There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…

17.A number of factors could account for the development in…

18.Perhaps the primary reason is…

19.It is chiefly responsible of…

20.The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact…

21.Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that…

22.Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…

23.It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…

24.Different people observes it in different ways.四、用于文章的开头

1.As the proverb says…

2.It goes without saying tan…

3.Generally speaking…

4.It is quite clear than because…

5.It is often said that …

6.Many people often ask such question:“…？”

7.More and more people have come to realize…

8.There is no doubt that…

9.Some people believe that…

10.These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?

11.One great man said that…

12.Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention.13.In the past several years there has been…

14.Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…

15.Currently there is a widespread concern that…

16.Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…

17.There is a general discussion today about the issue of …

18.Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.五、用于文章的结尾

1.from this point of view…

2.in a word…

3.in conclusion…

4.on account of this we can find that…

5.the result is dependent on…

6.therefore, these findings reveal the following information:

7.thus, this is the reason why we must…

8.to sum up …

9.as far as…be concerned, I believe that…

10.It is obvious that…

11.There is little doubt that…

12.There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful

13.None of the solutions is quite satisfactory.The problem should be examined in a new way.14.It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on…

15.Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclustion that…

●过渡性句型：

1)this is true that...2)This is true, no doubt, but...3)...also...4)It is one thing to...;it is another to...●描写图表和数据的句型

1)...rank first(both)in...2)...in proportion to...3)A is by far the largest...4)As many as....5)The number is...times as much as that of...6)The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year.7)It accounts for 35% of...8)By comparison with..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to...9)...rise rapidly(slowly)10)...remain level...11)...reach...12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise/increase demand./income./population./prices./production./decrease/decline/reduction/fall/drop in

13)be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline(……在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降)

●图表作文中的过渡、概括句型：

1)As can be indicated in the table,...2)As we could find out later，...3)As is revealed in the table，...4)As the survey results show，...5)This table provides several important points of comparison

between，...6)The two graphs depict the same thing in...7)The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows:8)According to the figures given in the table,...9)This chart shows that...10)As is shown by the graph,...