考研英语大作文修改范例

第一篇：考研英语大作文修改范例

考研英语大作文修改范例

原文：

From this picture, we can see a farmer planting the corn, he works hard and then he could drink a drop of water.Life is also like this.Our life is just like drinking a cup of tea, you feel the bitterness, and then sweet after taste could be get after bitterness.Life is not always so smooth, you might come across frustration and sadness, failure and even disaster, but you must be brave and stick on your dream.If you worked hard on your dream and tried your best to make it come true, you must get the sweet after bitterness.Therefore, once you have a dream or when you do something, please don’t give up, stick it on and you would be successful after that.修改以后的文章：

As is vividly depicted in the picture, we can see a farmer planting the corn.He should work hard so that he could drink a drop of water.Life has something common with this phenomenon.Our life is just like drinking a cup of tea, you may feel the bitterness at the first sip, and then the sweetness.We should believe sweetness can be got after bitterness.Life is not always smooth;therefore, you may come across frustration and sadness, failure and even disaster.If you can hold out, stick to your dream and continue to strive for it, you will definitely get a bright future and an upgraded life.In addition, once you have a dream or feel like doing something important to you, please don’t give up when there are some difficulties or obstacles on your way to success.As the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” If you try to avoid the arduous course of realizing your ideal and make hardly any efforts, you will never enjoy the feeling of being successful.

第二篇：2012年最新新东方考研英语修改1

2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）2012、西医综合、数学全程辅导视频（50元/门），真题讲解，2010执业医师辅导视频，2011新东方英语四六级辅导视频，（25元/门）联系电话：***（入）

第三篇：英语作文修改

A Trip to the Zoo孩子的原稿：

Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo.I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos.That’s a interesting trip.I’ll never forget it.That’smy trip.修改后：

It was a sunny SundayAfter a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus.This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone.Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!

As soon as I got there,I was attracted at once.Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily.Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands.How naughty they were!What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers.They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy.Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world.we are family.I t came to my mind immiediatly.Anyway, I had an interesting trip today.It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.My favourite season

孩子的原稿：

There are four seasons in a year.And my favourite season is summer.Although it’s very hot.I still love it.Because I can swim in the sea.And lie in sun.That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer.That’svery intersting.So I love summer.That’s my favourite season.修改后

My favourite season

As is all know , there are four seasons.Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach… How comfortable!More importantlyI can eat delicious Icecream.Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside.And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father.In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness.

第四篇：2015考研规划—修改

2015年考研计划

一、考研专业：100701药物化学

二、考研科目：初试：201英语一；101政治理论；701药学类综合(仪器分析、基础药理学，各占50%)复试：天然药物化学（备注：一定要找清楚自己所报考学校仪器分析、基础药理学具体版本和主编人，避免复习时因版本错误而浪费时间）

三、复习计划：（一般分为三轮复习）

第一轮复习（基础阶段）：5月—7月

建议：该阶段主要以复习英语和综合为主。

第二轮复习：7月—10月

第三轮复习：冲刺阶段，11、12月 初试一般在1月初，考试要持续2天，进行3门考试。注：

1、报名9月在校生网上预报名，10月网上报名，11月现场确认，11月底缴费，电子银行转账2、11月底 专业课命题完毕3、12月，公共课命题完毕 考前两周——考试当天

1.政治、专业课从头到尾看3遍 2.英语，背四篇作文板块

（建议：该阶段就主要调整心态为主、保持一颗良好的心态非常重要。）学习资料

（一）、政治理论（考试大纲、大纲解析、真题解析、习题集、冲刺卷）

（二）、英语

单词：手机软件-沪江开心词场.资料-新东方 真题试卷：真题真练 新东方

（三）专业课：参考教材（参考2014年）

《仪器分析》，（《分析化学》教材第 5 版，第十章～第二十二章，李发美主编，全国高等医药教材建设研究会规划教材，人民卫生出版社，2003 年 7 月第 5 版）。《基础药理学》，（《药理学》全国普通高等教育中医药类精编教材，王乃平主编，上海科技出版社，2006 年 6 月第一版）。

关于每个阶段英语、政治相关推荐书目：（2014年考研某位同学提供：政治：78分英语：68分）

（1）第一轮复习： 英语是重点，推荐书目：黄皮书基础阅读150篇、黄皮书考研单词等。专业课开始看第一遍课本并做好笔记（重要）。

（2）第二轮复习：英语反复背诵考研真题长难句（新东方版）、做英语真题，推荐书目：黄皮书2005年起真题（试卷版）。政治开始打基础，看新东方强化班视频，并配套练习。推荐书目：新东方强化班讲义、红宝书配套习题库（徐之明）、肖秀荣1000题。专业课课本第二遍复习，结合真题（或学习指导）标记考试重点。

（3）第三轮复习：作文练习，推荐书目：黄皮书热点作文（一天两篇）。政治看红宝书（考纲，一般九月份出版）、新东方冲刺班视

频，并配套练习（重复客观题练习）。推荐书目：政治红宝书、新东方冲刺班讲义。专业课开始做真题，确定客观题答案，背诵主观题答案。

（4）冲刺复习：英语真题错题重做，做模拟题，推荐书目：新东方考研英语权威预测8套、最后冲刺5套。政治背诵主观题，推荐书目:新东方点睛班讲义、肖秀荣最后8套、任汝芬最后4套。

具体结合自己的情况，用什么书一定要选好，适合自己的才是最好的。

第五篇：2014考研英语作文

第一段结构： 万能句+图画描述句+过渡句+中心句 万能句：

1.There have been a heated discussion about a picture(a set of pictures)in the newspaper at present.2.It is universally acknowledged that 主题+is a hot topic discussed by people in all walks of lie and that is true not only in China,but also in other country.3.（正面或负面）At present 主题 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who are confronted for the problem.4.（精神类）At present 精神 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who lack the spirit.图画描述句：

As is depicted(illustrated/displayed/)，+ 一个主语+2个动作（使用分句）。

According to the vivid description in the picture, + 一个主语+2个动作（使用分句）。过渡句：(使用到装)Simple（Ridigulous/Funny）as the picture is ,it makes great significance.Simple（Ridigulous/Funny）as the picture is ,its meaning is far reaching.或者(图表类)Isolated as these figures seem to be,as a matter of fact,they are connected with each other closely.中心思想句：

第一种：As the caption in the picture reads,+(图画中文字说的主题)第二种：There is no doubt that +(正面)china is encountered with a serious opportunity of++现象.(负面)china is encountered with a serious problem of ++现象。（精神）精神is exetremly crucial to human beings.第二段 深层涵义阐释段

结构：中心思想句(如果写在第一段，这个可以省略)+预测趋势段+原因阐释段+科学论据+例证+虚拟语气 1.象征意义解释：

Symbolically,主语 is associated with……

某某可以和 某某联系起来。Stand for 象征 Refer to 指代

Be an excellent mataphor for sth.是……的完美比喻。2.科学论据法

According to a surver /an investigation /research/,+ 数据+ 定语从句

According to a surver /an investigation /research/, Money spent on pets by Frenchmen in the city of Paris is as much as one million dollars which can feed the Japanese for a whole year.3.例证法=引出句+例子+总结句 引出句：

大事：Our human history has been filled with a various of examples,with the following one being the foremost.以下面这个最重要。然后写例子。

小事：Among all the examples that I have heard,withnessed and experienced,the most impressive one is that ………….名人：The story of(人名)can best illustrate my perspective /point.总结句：In this case,we can see that 重申观点。4.虚拟语气法：Were it not for sth,主+ would+…… 5.因果论证法=引出句+解释原因 1.引出句

A great number of complex reasons give rise to /contribute to this phenomenon.或

I can think of no better reasons other than the following one.2.解释2个原因

The frist reason ,as far as I am concerned, is that …………

In addition/Moreover,We can’t have failed to have awareness of another potential reason that ……

6.预测趋势法：未来上升或下降

Giving all informations mentioned above a consideration,I can predict that there will be a sharp increase /decline in ……

考虑以上因素，我预测……将有一个上升/下降。

第三段：个人评价段=呼吁+措施+万能总结句 1.负面现象呼吁：

The situation being so urgent,It is high time that we took some effective steps to solve the problem.措施=法律+个人

On one hand,it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities.On the other,individuals should be educated to be cautious of dreadful consequence of the problem..万能总结句：

with a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes a matter of the past.伴随着法律和警觉的民众，问题迟早会解决。2.正面现象

The situation being so perfect,it is high time that we took this opportunity to develop our society and economy.措施: On one hand, it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities to put an end to promote the situation.On the other, individuals should be educated to be cautious of the beneficial consequence of the phenomenon.万能总结句：

With ……,we can’t have failed to witness a prosperous future.精神类：

There is no doubt that in do things,no matter great or slight,there are more or less some hardships and frustrations.用谚语结束：

Just as old Chinese proverb says,……is the key point to success.(the foundation of 基石/the shortcut to 捷径)

Having captured our attention,the picture vividly betrays the fact that [描述图片内容].Simple as it is,the drawing set us sinking in awfully.Accordingly,what this far-reaching picture depicts witnesses a common phenomenon in today's society:[图片所反映的现实（寓意）].It goes without saying that its symbolic message that [主旨句子],has gone beyond the picture itself.Why do we lay much emphasis upon this?Several points analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we head for.For one thing,[第一个理由].For another,[第二个理由].And above all,[第三个理由（这个理由可以写可以不写）].Consequently,no issue stands as critical to [A内容] as [B内容].{说明：no issue stands as critical to A as B.再没有比B对A更为关键的了。} Judging from what has been argued above,we have come to recognize that the harms arising from [写图片反映出的问题] has been,like the pandora's box,the crippling force of [写对什么的阻碍力].{说明：like the pandora's box 比喻一系列恶果之源} It is,therefore,imperative that effective steps should be made to [点主旨句子].On one hand,[措施一].On the other hand,[措施二].Only by undergoing these measures,can we [写通过措施达到的效果].Also,I do reckon that we human beings can solve this problem,and we will have a bright future.销售：

Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First，we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second，we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season‘s are，if anything，more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.订购：

Could you give us some idea about your price？

Full information as to prices，quality，quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However，we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信：

你参加了一个公司的面试，结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无，根本不顾及你的感受，请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。

1，说明来信目的 2，具体阐述投诉理由 3，期待的解决方式

Dear Sir or Madam，I，the undersigned，am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer，Mr Wang.First，when I was about to illuminating my deep thought，he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally，his

cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject，after all，I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration，what I really want is just an apology delivered from him，and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.