领悟英语写作要点

第一篇：领悟英语写作要点

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领悟英语写作要点

1.副词短语的使用，如(b):

(a)Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.(b)Because of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools.2.把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如：

(1)Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.(2)Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?

3.必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。例如：

(1)Jackie enjoys the company of ladies.He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity, and he likes their silence.(2)...the land stretched out without names.Nameless headlands split the surf;nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.4.尽量用主动语态，因此(b)比(a)好：(a)A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.(b)A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.5.适当时候，可用倒装句和平行句，如：(1)Seven dwarfs lived here in the center of the dark forest.Here, in the center of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs.(2)Severity breeds fear;roughness breeds hatred.(3)Honesty recommends that I speak;self-interest demands that I remain silent.

第二篇：英语写作要点

英语写作重点

一、英语大作文（满分15分）

大纲所列的题型一共有4种，分别是图表分析、现象分析、看图说话、正反观点。其中06、07年考察的是图表分析，08年是现象分析，09年是正反观点，10年和11年考察的都是图表分析。看图说话历年还未考察过，也要复习。

（1）图表分析：第一段描述图表，第二段分析原因或影响（按照题目要求），第三段预测或建议（按照题目要求,一般来说，反映的是正面现象，写预测，负面现象写建议）。其中每一段的模板参照讲义P81-P85页），其中P79页和P80页的两篇范文是重点。

（2）现象分析：第一段描述现象，第二段分析原因或影响（按照题目要求），第三段预测或建议（按照题目要求,一般来说，反映的是社会正面现象，写预测，负面现象写建议）。现象描述第一段的模板参见讲义P95页，第二段和第三段的模板同图表分析，但需注意把其中的changes替换成phenomenon。

（3）看图说话：第一段描述图画，第二段阐述寓意（即跟社会现实相结合），第三段多为建议（因为一般来说漫画反映的是负面现象，适合写建议）。

第一段及第二段模板参见讲义P96-97页，第三段模板同图表分析建议段。

（4）正反观点：第一段观点综述，第二段分析正反两种观点，第三段自己的观点。模板参见讲义P109-P110页。

综上，也就是说第（1）、（2）、（3）种作文模板除了第一段模板不同，第二、三段模板基本相同，第（4）种作文独立为一个模板。自己需要发挥的部分呢，最好是把讲义P114页的18大功能句型，以及范文里面的万能废话记住会很有帮助。每次模考的写作范文是记忆重点，因为模考的作文是紧扣今年的社会热点，带押题的性质。

二、英语小作文

大纲所列的题型一共有五种：信件（下面包含10中以上不同信件）、便签、备忘录、告示、摘要写作。从2010增加小作文开始，都是考察信件。信件为复习重点，其余几种参见书上范文看看格式即可。

信件的格式参考P153页范文。

信件一般写3段，第一段：开门见山说明目的，第二段：具体信息，第三段：感谢/道歉/期待/联系方式（根据信件类型的不同灵活选择其中的一种或几种）

其中，开头说明目的以及结尾的感谢、道歉、期待、联系方式的写法有模板，也就是P153页-P168页这些范文的结尾几句，范文中用黑体字标出来的都是模板。为了避免所有同学雷同，所以我没法每一中信件给一个模板。

第三篇：英语日记格式-英语日记格式 英语日记写作格式及要点

英语日记格式-英语日记格式 英语日记写作格式及要点

家长千万别觉得，让孩子写英文日记是很难的事情，刚开始学英语，可以从一句话日记写起，孩子在思索的过程中，其实就在培养孩子用英语去思考问题的习惯，每天坚持下去，不仅能提高你们对语言的运用能力，同时更能不断促进和复习巩固所学的英语知识，从而进一步提高孩子的写作水平。

日记是人们对日常生活的记录，即用来记述自己一天生活的所见、所闻、所问、所思、所感。英语日记格式

sunday may 21，xx sunny

going on a picnic

today was sunday.the weather was fine and warm.the sky was very clear and blue.my classmates and i were very happy，because we went out for a picnic at nanshan hill.we went to nanshan hill by bike with fruits，eggs，meat，vegetables，knives and some other things.about one and a half hours later，we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill.there were many beautiful flowers and green trees.birds sang their sweet songs.how pleased we were!then we were busy with the picnic.some of us were getting water，some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook，others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.at about 13 o”clock，our lunch was ready.we all sat around on the green grass，singing，talking，eating and drinking.at about 16：00 we began packing for our return.what a nice time we were having!

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第四篇：小学英语日记写作格式及要点[推荐]

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today was sunday.the weather was fine and warm.the sky was very clear and blue.my classmates and i were very happy，because we went out for a picnic at nanshan hill.we went to nanshan hill by bike with fruits，eggs，meat，vegetables，knives and some other things.about one and a half hours later，we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill.there were many beautiful flowers and green trees.birds sang their sweet songs.how pleased we were!then we were busy with the picnic.some of us were getting water，some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook，others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.at about 13 o"clock，our lunch was ready.we all sat around on the green grass，singing，talking，eating and drinking.at about 16：00 we began packing for our return.what a nice time we were having!

[点评] 小作者能用准确、地道的语言，简练的语句非常生动地描写出了野炊的场面。

这篇文章条理清楚，尤其是“ some …

第五篇：小学英语日记写作格式及要点

小学英语日记写作格式及要点

日记是人们对日常生活的记录，即用来记述自己一天生活的所见、所闻、所问、所思、所感。英语日记格式通常由两部分构成，即书端和正文。下面就是英文日记格式各部分的书写格式示意图：

Date(日期)Weather(天气)

Title(标题)

The body of the diary(日记正文)

那么，小学生写英语日记还应注意哪些问题呢?

1.注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置。

日期和星期要写在正文的左上角，其顺序多是“星期 + 月、日、年”，也有把星期放在后面的，如“ 2003 年 11 月 22 日，星期一”可写为“ Monday November 22，2003 或 November 22，2003 Monday ”。天气情况应写在正文的右上角，如： Fine，Rainy，Cloudy，Windy 等。

2.关于标题的书写。

在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小标题，也可以不写标题。

3.关于正文的书写。

正文是关于一天生活的记载，也是日记的主题。在书写正文时要做到： 1)要选择当天感受最深刻、最有意义的事件来描述，不要写成简单的流水帐;2)日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写;3)日记多是在当天晚上来记述当天发生过的事情，因为动词时态常使用过去时，但使用时必须灵活掌握，如景物描写、议论某事、对话引语等要使用现在时态;4)日记应以时间发生的先后顺序来展开，并且要简明扼要，条理清楚，写出真实感。

[精彩举例]

Sunday May 21，2003 Sunny

Going on a Picnic

Today was Sunday.The weather was fine and warm.The sky was very clear and blue.My classmates and I were very happy，because we went out for a picnic at Nanshan Hill.We went to Nanshan Hill by bike with fruits，eggs，meat，vegetables，knives and some other things.About one and a half hours later，we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill.There were many beautiful flowers and green trees.Birds sang their sweet songs.How pleased we were!Then we were busy with the picnic.Some of us were getting water，some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook，others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch.At about 13 o"clock，our lunch was ready.We all sat around on the green grass，singing，talking，eating and drinking.At about 16：00 we began packing for our return.What a nice time we were having!

[点到为止]

小作者能用准确、地道的语言，简练的语句非常生动地描写出了野炊的场面。这篇文章条理清楚，尤其是“ some … some …，others …”句型，以及 singing，eating 等现在分词作伴随状语的运用，使这篇日记增色不少。本文结尾使用了一个感叹句，更加反映出小作者对这次野炊的真实情感。

[展厅发布会]

同学们平时都有用中文写日记的习惯吧。在学过 Lesson 78 之后，再根据我们今天“作文展厅”的讲解，希望你们每天能把中文日记改用英文来书写。因为，每天坚持写英语日记不仅能提高你们对语言的运用能力，同时更能不断促进和复习巩固所学的英语知识，从而进一步提高你们的写作水平。