影评：《末日之战》B级理念的A级胜利

第一篇：影评：《末日之战》B级理念的A级胜利

末日之战：B级理念的A级胜利

1、把《末日之战》简单归类为B级僵尸片不准确，它是僵尸电影开山鼻祖《活死

人之夜》的后来者，步《28天之后》的病毒传播后尘，有一点点《传染病》的政治倾向，《我是传奇》的末世感，涉及家庭、动作、战争科幻等多种题材，最牛叉的当然是它的前辈们想不都不敢想的2亿美刀投资，最终成为一部用B级理念打造的A级大片，一边死守PG13呼吁家长孩子都去看一边声称迎合了B级片粉丝口味，咋一看烂片无疑，但是

...2、关于《末日之战》的独特之处，一部烧钱的僵尸大片是片种复杂多元并进的好莱坞也从未尝试过的，本片填补了这一制作空白，它的如意算盘是用B级精神赢得暑期档A级战场的胜利，改变目前僵尸片的生存环境。A级预算的票房压力往往会制约电影的剧情走向和创意，《末日之战》在这一点上做的不过不失但已经很不容易。World War Z，影片设定第三次世界大战是全球人类与其他物种无休止的战争，通常只局限于小城小镇的僵尸入侵被扩大到全球危机，看那些蚂蚁般的僵尸像极了蜂拥在仅剩的一点点资源上的人类，本片不但将僵尸片格局扩大了数倍，同时遵照原著的批判性，讽刺了向来妄自尊大地球统治者。

3、关于《末日之战》的2亿美刀花在了哪里的问题，看过电影之后为其中的一些花销感到肉疼，在片场皮特是老大，他想怎样就怎样。成千上万僵尸叠罗汉爬飞机奔大街，为CGI烧钱是必要的，特效营造的震撼场面带来身临其境的压迫感在之前的僵尸片中从未体验过。但剧组为了跟实景拍摄地较真转战好几个国家和军事基地，派拉蒙为一部僵尸片给各国交通局捐钱，好莱坞其他五大和狮门他们估计快笑抽了。事实证明皮特用实景代替绿幕这一反其道而行的脑残行为有他的道理，人家的视效跟游戏一样虚假的百八十万小电影完全不在一个档次。

4、关于病毒和僵尸，电影格局大并不代表能够深入挖掘病毒的真正源头和僵尸的麻麻到底是谁，比如《末日之战》中皮特跑了那么多国家去寻找传染源，查来查去到片末还是以临时性疾病草率收场，想来追溯僵尸并给它们一个合理的有嚼劲的开场白并不是一部2小时的电影能完成的任务，倒是本片的僵尸在体能灵活度方面有了大改观，不怕阳光，行动迅猛，弹跳高手，抽搐和咬牙切齿更加狰狞，被咬之后12秒转化完毕，僵尸不再是无脑无方向感只有挨打份儿的瞪眼龅牙仔，运动健将般的身体素质令僵尸前辈们自行惭秽，同时带来悲惨至极的末世感，达成了不靠血腥来吓人进而吸引合家观影的目的。

5、传统B级片粉丝或许不会接受《末日之战》，自古僵尸片就属恐怖片范畴，满片场泼番茄汁和慎人造型是标配，剧情也比暑期档大片稍微高明些，重口味阿宅的需求并非巨额投资和CGI可以满足。导演马克·福斯特运用大量手持摄影，看僵尸第一次进攻费城时险些被晃吐，A级制作不多见的质朴写实风可算做是导演和皮特向B级片粉丝示好。但示好仅此而已，为对2亿投资负责和全球市场顺利过审，《末日之战》传承了B级理念，B级味儿却要适可而止。事实上灾难片的固有套路本片一个都不少，大

战前的征兆如堵车、警察怒吼、远处传来尖叫声等等；关键时刻一个看似平凡的硬汉挺身而出去拯救世界，而且他必须是米国人；病源爆发源头设定在莫斯科...

第二篇：《末日之战》：史诗级僵尸片的尴尬

《末日之战》：史诗级僵尸片的尴尬

1.7亿美元投资成本砸僵尸题材电影，在以中低成本为主流趋势的僵尸类型片中，《僵尸世界大战》可谓前无古人，丰厚的资本投入带来了更多的僵尸，更大的格局，这既是高投入带来的福利，但是这也必将成为限制本片提升的一个重大包覆，因为如此庞大的投入，第一考虑的必将是怎么样更好的收回成本获得收益，商业因素也将更强的深入电影的肌理，为了获得更大的观影群体，《僵尸世界大战》放弃了僵尸片标配的大量血浆和各种重口镜头，最终为讨好市场，温温吞吞的拿了个PG-13的分级，对于一部硬核的僵尸片来说，没拿个R以上的评级，如何面对江东父老。《僵尸世界大战》实在是太正经了，虽有庞大僵尸军团的人海战术，但还是少了些许群众喜闻乐见的恶趣味，不过“正经”最终也成为了本片最大的特色之一，在僵尸片越来越血浆化、恶搞化和闯关化之时，有人一本正经、正襟危坐的拍僵尸片，也算是一种“新意”吧。

以僵尸规模和格局跨度来说，《僵尸世界大战》可以算得上是史诗级别的僵尸大片，看过预告片的人会被其震撼一把，但是看完正片你会发现，此片最爆棚的镜头其实已经全部塞入预告片里了，你要更强的刺激，恐怕在平庸的正片难寻踪迹了。总体而言《僵尸世界大战》的故事平淡流俗，无非又是个不死主角寻找解药的故事，剧情本身过于的苍白无力，过多的巧合让影片缺乏足够的说服力，而此片叙事采用的双线模式也弱的惊人，影片主线以布莱德皮特饰演的父亲寻找解药为主干，另一线以安全地带里男主角的妻女为主线，穿插着推进故事，但是影片妻女的主线实在是弱的惊人，不仅没有起到什么促进剧情发展的作用，连存在感都难以感知，而导演对妻女主线的不重视也完全可以反映在布莱德皮特妻子身上---一个塞在僵尸堆里都是路人的妻子。

影片最精彩的段落在耶路撒冷大混乱和僵尸航班两段，其中耶路撒冷段落中僵尸的规模和速度让人咂舌，完全赶超惊变

28系列，快速的节奏和混乱恐慌的场面将影片推向高潮，而接踵而来的僵尸航班段落也相当的出彩，将耶路撒冷大混乱带来的紧张和提心吊胆延续了下去，但是在此之后，影片开始节奏放缓，布莱德皮特坠机未死之后拖着被碎片贯穿的身体神速找到了医学实验基地，满血复活之后非常巧的在成百上千试管中随意找出一个，猛扎一针，异常神奇的找到了解药，最终在大批铺面而来的僵尸流中潇洒横穿而过，这个经典的镜头几乎可以与当年《僵尸肖恩》中众人假扮僵尸混入僵尸群的镜头相媲美。至此影片在没有什么突破性情节的情况下，走向了一个无高潮的平淡结尾，总结性的流俗背景陈词为续集埋下了伏笔，这个结尾完全是为续集做准备的，但是能否拥有续集，最终也只能由票房来决定了。这样的略潦草平淡的结尾无疑会让对此片怀着期待的观众略感失望，虎头熊腰狗尾的结构实在是让人存在一定的落差。

布拉德皮特扮演的角色在一路的闯关寻药过程之中缺乏足够的性格塑造，而作为其性格填补辅助线的妻女第二线也丧失了其本该有的作用，最终布拉德皮特饰演的此角沦为了一个辨识度很小的平庸角色，着实让人失望，那么昂贵的布拉德皮特没有塑造出足够有层次的角色，实乃对于此片高昂成本的一种变相浪费，所以除了此片正襟危坐的正经态度、接近春运规模的庞大专业僵尸群众、出色的配乐、还有少数几个精彩的段落，此片再难寻找出一些可以让此片成为僵尸片经典的亮点出来，对于这样一部罕有的高投入的大制作僵尸电影，不得不说是一种遗憾，如果续集有望，希望导演能考虑下角色塑造和剧情架构的合理调整。

第三篇：B级应用文

B级应用文范文

1.告诉对方你将参加PETS四级考试。2.请对方帮忙购买口语教材。3.邀请对方来访。Dear Li Hua: It’s long time we haven’t seen each other.I miss you very much.How’s everything going on with you? I am busy preparing for PETS 4.I would appreciate if you could help me buy PETS 4 English oral textbook which was issued by the Beijing Press, because the books were sold out here.Drop in when you are free.I often think of those happy days we spent together when we were at University.Please let me know as soon as possible once you get the book.My best wishes.Yours truly，Wang Lei

2)选择一个你想旅游的地点，并安排旅行计划。你应包括下列内容： 1.说明你想旅游的地点；

2.说明你为什么选择这个地点； 3.描述你的旅行计划。Dear Amy, I plan to make a journey to Jiuzhaigou in Si Chuan province.It’s a beautiful place with fresh air, beautiful natural scenery like waterfall, lake and high mountains.Because many films and TV series have been made here, it is very famous.What’s more, I am very busy and exhausted this year, so I want to go for a relaxation.I plan to stay there for a week and travel with a tour group.I believe I will enjoy myself there.Best regards!

Yours ever

Tim

3)你的朋友邀请你参加他/她的生日聚会，告诉对方你不能接受他/她的邀请。你应包括下列内容：

1.告诉对方你不能接受他/她的邀请； 2.对对方的邀请表示感谢；

3.说明无法接受邀请的原因。Dear Lisa: Congratulations on your coming birthday.Thanks for your invitation, but I am sorry that I am afraid I am not able to attend your birthday party.You know, our company will hold an important meeting in our Paris branch to talk about the recent trouble appearing in business.I am the one who needs to make a presentation.I am terribly sorry for that.Anyway, I hope everything goes well in your birthday party.Remember to show me the pictures taken in the party when I come back from business trip.Best regards!

Yours ever

Susan

4)写一封信给Robert，信众包括如下内容：

1、了解对方近来的情况。

2、通知对方同学将在元旦举行聚会。

3、请对方参加。Dear Robert: I haven’t got your email for a long time.Are you still working for that IT company? How about your work? I’m writing to you to tell you that the English Department of Shanghai University takes pleasure in inviting the graduates to its New Year’s Evening Party, which will be held at the Assembly Hall on Saturday evening, December 31st, 2005.The party begins at 7 p.m.I think it’s a good chance for us to get together, would you please email me whether you will go to the party? Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishes

Jean

5)写一封信给你的同学们，并邀请其参加同学聚会：

1、了解对方（毕业后）近来的情况。

2、通知对方同学将在五一(元旦)举行聚会。

3、请对方参加。

A Get-together on May 1st

April 15, 2007 Dear Wang Hong: How is everything getting along with you? It is almost one year since we graduated from university.I miss you very much.What have you been doing all these days? I have been a middle school teacher in my hometown since graduation.Teaching always keeps me busy, but I like my students and I love teaching, you know.So everything is fine here.There will be a former classmates’ getting together during this May Day holiday at my school.You are my best friend.I never forget those happy days we spent together.I hope you can come to my school when the time is due and you are free.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua

5)写一封email给你的朋友Robert，包含以下内容： 1.告诉对方你将参加英语四级考试。2.询问对方如何做准备。3.请对方建议一些参考书。Dear Robert: I’d like to tell you that your tips for study are really very helpful to me and I have made rapid progress in my English study.So I’m going to take CET-4 next term.I know that you passed it last year.Would you tell me how I can get prepared for it and what should I pay attention to? I don’t want to fail it.I think you must have much experience in it, so could you recommend me some books for practice? Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishes

Jean

6).说明：请以总经理秘书（general secretary）的名义通知客户，公司因为开发新业务将迁至新地址，并为因此带来的不便表示歉意。同时借此机会感谢客户多年来的支持，表达期望长期合作的愿望。

具体信息如下：

迁址时间：2011年6月19日

公司新址：中山路17号中信大厦2022室

公司新电话，传真：025-83321145；025-83326542

Announcement of Removal Dear Sir or Madam, Due to the development of new business, our company will move to Room 2022 Zhongxin Building No.17 Zhongshan Road from June 19, 2011.Our new telephone and fax numbers are 025-83321145 and 025-83326542 respectively.We are very sorry for the inconvenience brought to you.We would also like to take this chance to thank you for your continued support over the years and hope that we can keep on working together in the future.Yours faithfully, Clare Tao General Secretary

7)南京大学外语系主任Clara Turner给院长写了一封备忘录，内容如下：我系急需两台电脑，以加强校际之间的联系，我们希望您能考虑下列事宜，并尽快予以解决：

1.请与有关部门确定购买电脑的时间。2.安排安装场所。3.安排管理人员。

Memo To: President of Nanjing University From: Clara Turner, Dean of the Foreign Language Department Date: June 20, 2011 Subject：Our department is badly in need of two computers to promote the inter-university contacts.I hope that you will think of the following and solve them as soon as possible.1.Please decide the purchasing time with the department concerned.2.Please fix up the installation place.3.Please arrange for managing personnel.8）假如你叫李丽，刚毕业于东北师范大学中文系，24岁。你从6月20日《中国日报》获悉一公司需要秘书，你想谋此职位。你精于速记，打字（80词/分）。

June 20, 2011 Dear Sir, Please allow me to apply for the position of secretary, which you advertised in China Daily on July 5.I graduated from Northeast Normal University after four-year study and my major is Chinese.I am just over twenty-four years of age.I have been striving to make myself proficient in shorthand and typewriting, and have attained a speed of eighty words per minute in typing.I believe that I can meet the needs of your company.I would appreciate an opportunity to meet with you.Thank you for your consideration and courtesy.Yours sincerely，Li Li

9)Your name is Wang Ying.You’re required to write a letter to a customer John Adams in Guangzhou to inform him that your General Manage Mr.Wang will pay him a visit next week.出访日期：2011年6月19日，星期一。

航班号：CA3597;起飞/到达时间：9：00/10：50。

访问意图：和John Adams 讨论明年的采购计划并询问对方时间是否合适。

Dear Mr.Adams, Thank you for long term support to our company.Please be informed that our General Manager Mr.Wang is planning to visit your office on Jun.19, 2011, Monday.His flight No.is CA3579 which takes off from Nanjing at 9:00 a.m.and arrives in Guangzhou at 10:50.He is expecting to discuss with you about your purchasing plan for next year.If the visiting time is inconvenient for you, please let me know as early as possible.With best regards，Sincerely yours，Wang Ying 10)1.事宜：关于计算机的用途以及如何利用Internet进行学习的讲座。2.讲座人：武汉大学计算机系申蓝教授。3.时间：6月26号，星期六，下午2：00。4.地点：图书馆208室。

5.参加对象：计算机爱好者。6.组织者：学生会。7.通知时间：6月19日

Notice To help students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Shen Lan from the Computer Department of Wuhan University to give us a lecture on Saturday, June 26th.He will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet.The lecture begins at 2:00 p.m.in Room 208 of the Library Building.Any computer lover is welcome to attend the lecture.Please on time.The Students’ Union

19th,June

11)道歉信

说明：假如你是Sharon，因为要准备一个重要的考试，无法于本周三前往Lily家参加她的生日派对。请给Lily写一封致歉信，解释不能去的原因，向她表达诚挚的歉意并祝她生日快乐。

Dear Mary, There is an urgent business trip to Shenzhen that I have to go on June 19.Please reserve an air ticket for me that day.The arriving time would preferably be in the morning or at least before 4 p.m.on that day.Thank you!

12)备忘录 说明：假如你是公司销售部的秘书Jennifer，正在为新来的部门经理Harry准备一场欢迎仪式。欢迎仪式将于2011年6月19日晚上7点，在格林宾馆举行。请写一则备忘录通知部门全体同事。通知时间为2011年6月19日。

MEMO Date : June 19, 2011 To : Staff of Sales Department From : Jennifer, secretary of Sales Department Subject : Welcome party for new manager Harry Harry is appointed as our new Manager of Sales Department.We would like to hold a welcome party for him.All staff of Sales Department are suggested to attend.The party will be held in Green hotel at 7 p.m.tomorrow night.Please make sure you will come on time.12)传真

说明：你是公司总经理助理Andy，现在要发一份传真给Hilton，问他下周一的工业展览会准备工作如何，因为会议很重要，所以希望尽快了解最新的情况。你的传真号是68886342，Hilton的传真号是68886438。日期是2011年6月19日。

Words for reference: 总经理助理：assistant general manager 工业展览会：Industrial Exhibition

To : Hilton Fax No.: 68886438 Page :1 From : Andy Date : June 19, 2011 Ref No.: 68886342 Subject : The preparation of Industrial Exhibition Note: If the fax transmission fails, please inform us immediately.Dear Hilton, I am writing to inquire about the progress of the preparation work for the Industrial Exhibition on next Monday.This exhibition is known of great importance, so a rapid update of information is really necessary.Looking forward to your early reply.Best regards，Andy

Assistant General Manager

13)求职信 说明：请以郭芳的名义拟出一份给星星旅行社的求职信，希望能在该公司谋得导游一职。请注意书信的格式。写信日期为2011年6月20日。内容：

1、郭芳，24岁，毕业于南京旅游职业学院，主修旅游管理专业

2、精通英语和历史

3、有两年的工作经验

4、随信附上个人履历，期待回复 Words for reference: 旅行社：Travel Agency 旅游管理：tourist management 履历：resume 云南工商学院：Yunnan College of Business

June 20th,2011 Dear Sir or Madam: I have read the announcement about the vacancies of guides in Star Travel Agency, and I would like to submit my application.I am 24 years old and have graduated from Yunnan College of Business and Hospitality, majoring in tourist management.I’m proficient in English and history.With two years of experience in the field, I believe that I would be an excellent candidate for the position.I enclose my resume and look forward to hearing from you.Yours truly, Guo Fang

第四篇：B级作文

英语B级作文参考请以学生会的名义写一份通知，包括以下内容：

（1）11月28日晚上7点学生活动中心将会有一个讲座

（2）讲座邀请到著名的王教授来给广大同学做关于面试方面的内容

（3）欢迎广大同学前来参加，免费入场

（4）发通知时间11月20日

Notice

There will be a lecture at 7 p.m.on November 28, in Students’

Center.Famous Professor Wang is going to give us a speech on job

interview.The lecture is free and all the students are welcome.Students’ Union

Nov.20, 2006王小明毕业于湖北大学，专业是国际贸易，学习能力强，英语听说流利，请以他的名义

给ABC这家出口贸易公司的陈经理写一封求职信，请他考虑她的面试请求。写信时间是

2006年10月12日。

October 12, 2006

Dear Mr.Chen,I’m writing this letter to apply for a position in your company.I’m Wang Xiaoming and graduated from HubeiUniversity.My

major(专业)is International Trade.I’m good at study and have a

good command of English listening and speaking.I’ll appreciate（感

激）if you can consider giving me a chance of interview.(Hope to

hear from you soon).Yours faithfully

Wang Xiaoming请以学生会的名义给外语系的黄教授写一封邀请函，邀请他出席9月1日下午3点学生

会在演讲大厅举行的英语演讲比赛。演讲的内容是关于暑期兼职的经验。写信时间：8月

25日。

August 25, 2006Dear Professor Huang,We’d like to invite you attend the English Speech Contest which

will be held in the Speech Hall at 3 p.m.Sept.1st.The topic of the

speech is about the experience of part-time job in summer vocation.We look forward to your presence.Yours sincerel

Students’ Union4 请以John的名义给房东Mr.Smith写一封投诉信，内容包括：

（1）他所租住的房子的门铃再次出现故障

（2）该门铃上星期已经坏过一次，请人修理后不到一周时间再次出现问题

（3）请房东再派人来修理或者更换，否则本月的房租将会推迟交纳。

（4）写信时间为2006年8月15日。

August 15, 2006Dear Mr.Smith,The doorbell of the house I rent goes wrong again.There was

something wrong with it last week but it didn’t work after the repair.Please send someone to repair it or change it for me or I won’t give

you rent of the house for this month on time.Hope to hear from you

soon.Yours sincerelyJohn请以Phoebe的名义给假日饭店的经理写一封信，包括以下内容；

（1）你上周末在该饭店进餐时不慎丢失了一个红色手提包，回家后才发现

（2）手提包里有一些零钱，两本书，个人身份证等东西

（3）请经理代为寻找，如有找到，请把包寄回到广州市东风路86号，联系电话81235644，写信时间为2006年6月9日。

June 9, 2006

Dear Manager of Holiday Hotel,I lost a red handbag when I had dinner in your hotel last weekend.But I didn’t know it until I came home.There are some change, two

books, my ID card and etc in it.Would you please try to find it for me?

If you can get it, please send it to No.86 Dongfeng Road, Guangzhou

or you can contact me at 81235644.Yours sincerely

Phoebe你应邀到一位好友家吃晚饭。事后给朋友写信表示谢意。你的信应包括下列内容：

（1）表达谢意；

（2）表达想回请的意愿；

（3）期待朋友的光临。

Dear Ann,Thank you so much for the wonderful dinner last night!I had a

really good time in your home.You are an amazing cook.I am already longing for another get-together.Will you be free

next Saturday evening? I wonder if you could come and have dinner

with us.I will also invite our friends Joe and Kate.I'm sure they will

be pleased to meet you.I am looking forward to your joining us next Saturday evening.All the best,enny请帮ABC公司写信告知他们的客户Mr.Brown关于广告收费的问题，该客户开拓市场的广告每周五次，每次时间1分钟，每次收费5万元人民币。希望双方以后有机会合作。写

信时间2006年3月9日。

March 9, 2006

Dear Mr.Brown,I’m writing to tell you about the charge of your company’s ad..The

marketing ad.we made for your company will be on TV five times a

week and lasts for one minute each time.And the charge for each

time is 50,000 RMB.I hope we have chance to cooperate in the future.Yours sincerely

ABC Company以Lily的名义给小王写一张电话留言条，转告他老师打电话来通知明天下午的足球比赛

取消，改在下周二同一时间举行。明天下午请到实验楼参加计算机操作考试。

Xiao Wang,Your teacher called to say that the football match tomorrow

afternoon was cancelled and it would be held at the same time next

Tuesday.You are required to take part in the computer operation

exam in the Experiment

Building tomorrow afternoon.Lily9 以Tom的名义给他的秘书Mary写一份备忘录，请她通知各部门经理明天下午3点到5

楼会议厅参加关于WTO协议内容的紧急会议。时间4月5日。

Memo

From: Tom

To Mary

Date: April 5

Subject: Meeting on WTO agreement

Please inform the manager of each department to take part in an

urgent meeting on WTO agreement at 3 tomorrow afternoon in the

Meeting Hall on the 5th floor.请以Susan的名义给你的同学David留言，告诉他爸爸今天刚从家里来到学校看他，现

在住在学校宾馆3504房，回来后请打3564125电话给他，如果没人接的话请直接到宾馆房

间等候。

David,Your father came to see you from home today.He is now living

in Room 3504 of the College Hotel.Please call him at 356412 when

you come back.Please wait for him in his room if no one answers the

call.Susan11 以Dick的名义给你部门陈经理写封道歉信；

（1）为早上没能按时参加部门的紧急会议道歉

（2）迟到的原因是由于路上发生交通事故造成交通堵塞

（3）保证以后不再发生同样的事情

（4）时间2006年3月12日

March 12, 2006

Dear Mr.Chen,I’m writing to apologize/say sorry for my not being on time for the

urgent department meeting this morning.I was late because the

traffic accident caused traffic jam I promise it won’t happen again.Please forgive me.Yours sincerely

Dick请帮王小姐写份失物招领启事

（1）2月3日下午在学校操场上捡一个黑色钱包及一件外套

（2）请失主尽快打84567897联系认领

（3）时间是2006年2月4日

Found

February 4, 2006

A black wallet and a coat were found on the school’s playground in the afternoon of February 3.The owner can call Miss Wang at 84657879 as soon as possible.下面是几种常考作文类型的基本句型，牢记这些基本句型，对写作大有好处。通知

1．The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening，August 15.2．The party will be held in th garden of the Main Building.3．We are to visit the museum after lunch.4．The meeting starts at 6 p.m.5． The American guests are aboutto leave at 5 in the afternoon.感谢信与道歉信

1.Thank you very much for your help.2.It was good of you to invite me to take part in the activity.3.Please accept my sincere appreciation.4.Please accept my since reapologies.5.I have to offer you an apology for not coming to your party.6.I regret that my carelessness has caused you too much inconvenience.便条

1．I shall feel obliged if you will favor me with a call at your earliestconvenience.2．Upon receiving this note, pleasecome to my office.3．Mr.Li stands in urgent need of your help.4．Your note with an admission ticket enclosed is much appreciated.5．Hoping that the matter will bedealt with as soon as possible.求职信

1.I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire anexperienced electrician.2.I am writing to inquire opportunities for computer programmersin your company.3.At school, I won a scholarship and the first prize in speech contest.4.I work hard and I can get along well with others.I’m good at Englishand especially my spoken English isvery good.5.I would welcome the opportunity for a personal interview with you

at personal interview with you at yourconvenience.邀请函及复函

1．It would be an honor to me if

you would accept our invitation.2．Will you do us a favor by joiningour party?

3．We sincerely hope you can attend.4．Please let us know if you’re available.5．Thank you for your very kind invitation.I should love to come, andI am looking forward to it very much.6．I regret that I have another arrangement at this time and will notbe able to attend.7．I am sorry that I shall not be able to join you because I am badlysick.

第五篇：B级作文及答案

备忘录

说明：以销售部培训经理的名义，写一份2006年6月19日发布的备忘录。包括以下内容： 收信人：所有销售部员工

发信人：Jim Green(销售部经理)内容：为了提高销售部员工的水平，要求所有销售部门员工参加一期销售培训课程。课程主要包括外语知识、销售规划、外贸函电写作等。课程从2006年6月26日开始，为期一周。地点为公司培训中心。希望员工按时参加。

Words for reference：销售规划sales program 培训中心training center

Date: June 19, 2006 To: All staff in Sales Department From: Jim Green(sales manager)Subject: Course on sales training

In order to improve our competence, we decide that all staff in our department are required to take a course on sales training.The trainings mainly concerns with skills in foreign languages, sales program and business letter writing.The course will begin on June 26, 2006 at our training center, lasting for a week.It will be appreciated if everyone can attend it on time.【难点分析】

备忘录是一种正式的专业文件。它结构清晰、阅读方便、传递迅速，经常为公司或团体使用。大多数备忘录的特点是简明扼要，但它们同时也应具备优秀应用文的其他写作原则：面向你的读者，表达清楚且准确。备忘录通常用于提醒、督促收信人，或就某个问题提出自己的意见或看法。在业务上．它一般用来补充正式文件的不足。备忘录简洁短小．各部分题目虽然看上去有些唐突，但它们可以使读者对事情有个大致了解并快速做出反应。一般用于公司内部的备忘录的常用格式为： Date(日期)：__________ To(收信人)：__________ From(发信人)：__________ Subject(事由)：____________________ ____________________________________________________________(正文部分)就本文而言，除了要掌握备忘录的格式．在内容方面要注意涵盖说明中所有表达要点，一般包括who，what, when, where和why这5个要素。

便条

收信人：Lilv 发信人：Mary 发信日期：2006年4月18日 内容：Mary给Lily留便条告知她们的人事经理Mr．Steward将因公在上海逗留5天。要Lily帮忙订一张4月20日从北京到上海的机票送到Mr．Steward办公室。同时向假日酒店电话预订一间带洗澡间的单人房．日期从4月20到24日。

April 18, 2006 Lily: Our Personnel Manager Mr.Steward will be in Shanghai on business for five days.Please reserve a plane ticket from Beijing to Shanghai on April 20 for Mr.Steward and then send it to his office, and call to hook a single room in Holiday Hotel, with bath, from April 20 to April 24 inclusive.Thank you very much.【难点分析】

便条是一种简单的书信。虽然内容简单。但却有其独特的风格。主要目的是为了尽快把最新的信息、通知、要求或者活动的时间、地点转告给对方。常见的便条有收条、欠条、留言和请假条等。便条可以有题目，也可以省略题目。便条开篇需有称呼语，但称呼可以比较随便。日期部分可写在便条的右上角。日期的签署通常只需写星期几或星期几的上午、下午，也可只写上午或下午或具体时间。只写日期也可以。便条结尾须署上留条人的姓名，位置在正文的右下角。便条的形式和内容都很简洁，故可以用几句话概括，正文语言要尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言。便条虽简单，但务必突出中心，更要注明活动的时间及地点。便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素：1．Date(便条日期)；2．Salutation(称呼)；3．Body(正文)；4．Signature(署名)

邀请函

说明：请按照下述要求，写一封邀请函。发信人：Harold 收信人：Jimmy 内容：

1．邀请Jimmy来参加家里举办的一个小型舞会以庆祝20周年结婚纪念日； 2．只准备邀请几位老朋友，希望Jimmy能携妻子Emma参加； 3．时间定在下周六，6月10日晚上7点；

4．知道他们很忙，但希望他们能设法来参加，并热切盼望其到来。写信日期：2006年6月1日

Words for reference：结婚纪念wedding anniversary 盼望look forward to

Dear Jimmy, My wife and I are going to have a small dancing party to celebrate our 20th wedding anniversary at home.We are going to invite some old friends and hope you and Emma can come.The time is next Saturday, June 10 at 7:00.I know you have been very busy recently, but I do hope you can manage it.We are looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.Yours affectionately, Harold

大学入学申请表

说明：请按照下面的中文提示，以中国学生王小明(男)的身份填写下列XXX大学入学申请表格。具体信息如下：

出生日期：1975年8月20日 联系地址：广州市中山路710号 联系电话：020—61006571 个人情况说明：本人毕业院校和目前就职情况，所要申请的专业，个人学习兴趣以及希望对方提供的信息等。Application Form Family name: __________ First name: __________ Date of Birth: __________ Nationality: __________ Sex: __________ Telephone number: __________ Address: Please write about your educational background and work experience, the university and the major you want to apply and the information you want to know.(about 50 words)Application Form Family name: Wang

First name: Xiaoming Date of Birth: August 20, 1975 Nationality: Chinese Sex: Male Telephone number: 020-61006571 Address: 710 Zhongshan Road, Guangzhou City Please write about your educational background and work experience, the university and the major you want to apply and the information you want to know.(about 50 words)

I graduated from Beijing Normal University.And I am currently an English teacher at Guangzhou University.I request admission into the Department of English Language and Literature at your University.It is my long-time desire to pursue comparative study of Chinese and Western literature.And I shall appreciate it if I can get more information about the financial aid.【难点分析】

本文要求填写一份出国留学申请表格。前半部分比较简单，只要将题目中的信息一一对应地翻译出来即可。难点在于对教育背景、个人工作经历以及所需要进一步获取的信息的写作。对此，考生可以按照自己的真实情况来写，也可以虚构．但是注意必须包含文章所要求的要点。对于这一部分的写作，考生要尽量使用简单句和自己熟悉的表达方式，同时要有适当的句式变化。

会议议程安排

说明：请按照下列提示，以总经理秘书孙玉的身份填写一份会议议程安排。会议时间：2006年12月10日下午3点 会议地点：公司多功能会议厅

参与者：总经理王明销售部经理李飞生产部经理刘力采购部经理张华 会议记录：孙玉 会议议程：

1．宣读、确认并签署了上次会议记录 2．总经理听取了各部门工作汇报

3．总经理宣布了公司的假期时间：7月5日-7月16日 4．无进一步问题讨论，会议于下午4点结束

Words for reference：多功能multifunctional采购purchase听取汇报hear the report from．

Time:__________ Place:__________ of the company Participants: 1.____________________ 2.Li Fei, sales manager 3.Liu Li, production manager 4.____________________ 5.Sun Yu, minutes keeper Agenda: 1.____________________ 2.____________________ 3.____________________ 4.____________________

参考范文

Minutes Time: 3:00 p.m.on December 10, 2006 Place: multifunctional meeting room of the company Participants: 1.Wang Ming, general manager 2.Li Fei, sales manager 3.Liu Li, production manager 4.Zhang Hua, purchase manager 5.Sun Yu, minutes keeper Agenda: 1.The minutes of the last meeting were read, confirmed and signed.2.The general manager heard the working report from the department managers.3.The general manager announced the dates of the company's holidays:5th to 16th July.4.No further business.The meeting ended at 4:00 p.m.【难点分析】

本文要求填制一份会议记录。会议记录一般包括会议时间、地点、出席人、缺席人、会议议程等等。就本题目而言，中文表达均已给出，考生只要将其合理地表达成英文即可。注意时间和地点的表达方式，另外还有个别单词或词组的翻译．如“听取汇报”为hear the report from…。

超市问卷调查表

说明：假定你是一名大学生，叫李玉(女)，月收入在500元以下。于2006年7月5日去超市购物，临走时填了一份问卷调查表。内容如下：

1．每月大概光临该超市3次 2．对超市的总体管理感到满意

3．认为超市工作人员的服务态度很好 4．建议：

A．超市的购物环境有待改善，因为播放的音乐过于吵闹。B．建议增加收银机，节约顾客等待时间。C．鉴于学生支出有限．建议超市能对学生给予更大折扣。Words for reference：收银机the cash register支出expenditure Questionnaire To improve the quality of our service, we would be grateful if you'd complete the following questionnaire.Name:__________Sex:__________ Profession:__________Month salary:__________ Date of filling in:__________ How often would you come to our supermarket for shopping? Are you satisfied with our overall administration? What do you think of our supermarket service? Have you any other comments to help us to improve our service?

参考范文 Questionnaire To improve the quality of our service, we would be grateful if you'd complete the following questionnaire.Name: Li Yu Sex: female Profession: college student Month salary: less than 500RMB Date of filling in: July 5, 2006 How often would you come to our supermarket for shopping? 3 times per month.Are you satisfied with our overall administration? Yes.What do you think of our supermarket service? Good.Have you any other comments to help us to improve our service? 1.I think the shopping environment need to be improved because the music here is too noisy.2.It is advisable to increase the number of the cash registers in order to save the consumers’ time.3.I hope more discount can be given to students for they have limited expenditure.【难点分析】

本文是一份问卷调查表。前半部分需要将题目中提供的信息一一对应填入表格。难点在建议部分，得分的要点是要对题目中的建议表达清楚、准确，符合英文的表达习惯，另外注意表达建议时语气的恰当性，要诚恳但不夸张。