第一篇：英语完成句子书面表达评分细则
根据汉语及英文提示完成句子评分细则：
1.每小题2分，与答案相符, 可给满分。
2.如有其它表述，符合试题要求，经商定后也可给满分；
3.如只答对关键词组或句型，与之相关的时态、语态、语气以及固定搭配等有误，可给1分；
4.关键词组或句型有误的不给分。
书面表达：
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为15分，按6个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，后根据该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.总词数少于试题要求所规定的，在本题总分得分中扣去1分；超过规定总词数的，不扣分；如果书写太差，格式、标点符号错误太多，以至于影响阅卷的，降低一个档次给分。
4.句子的整体结构、动词的时态、语态用法错误的每项各扣1分，不重复扣分；单词拼写、标点符号和大小写满4个扣1 分，不重复扣分。
5.评分时，应注意的主要内容有：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
英语试题参考答案及评分说明 第 1 页（共 3 页）
6.除所给范文外，其它可接受的正确表达均予给分。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
7.对完成了试题所规定的全部任务，语言得体、地道的书面表达，可给满分。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第一档：（13~15分）能写出全部或绝大部分内容要点；语句流畅，符合英语的表达习惯，行文连贯，具有较强的语言表达能力，基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，且可读性强；书写规范工整；全文允许1~2处由于使用较高级词汇或复杂句子结构所致的错误。
第二档：（10~12分）能写出大部分内容要点；语句较流畅，有少量语法和词汇的错误，但不影响理解，可读性较好。第三档：（7~9分）能写出大部分内容要点；语句基本通顺，有一些语法和词汇的错误，但就整体而言，初步达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档：（4~6分）能写出少量内容要点，漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容，影响了对写作内容的理解，但尚能达意；语句不通顺，语言有较多错误，只有少量句子表达正确。
第五档：（1~3分）基本或完全没写出内容要点，只写出少数单词、词组或短语；语法、词汇和单词拼写错误较多，不知所云。
第六档：（0分）未能传达给任何有关写作信息；写的内容均与所要求的内容无关；写的内容完全无法辨认。
第二篇：英语书面表达
Dear Andy,I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely, Li hua [名师点评]
本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。
第三篇：英语书面表达
2014年济宁市中考英语书面表达
假设你是李华，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营，根据夏令营之活动安排，你需要准备一份关于英语夏令营英语阅读方面的发言稿，具体要求如下：
1.对英语阅读重要性的认识；
2.个人开展英语阅读的情况（1-2点具体做法）及感悟；
3.将来的打算。
参考词汇：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.词数，100词左右；（开头已给出，不计入总词数；）
2.可根据具体要求及参考词汇适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名。
Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Thanks for your listening.
第四篇：英语书面表达
寒假作业Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today
A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic
We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基础写作：
上周六下午，你们宿舍几个同学去森林公园野炊，回来途中淋了雨。晚上李华头疼得厉害。你给她量体温，发现她发高烧。你马上带她去看医生。医生说她得了重感冒，要卧床休息三天。请你代她给刘老师写一张请假条说明情况，并帮她请假两天（周一、周二），因此她不能参加周二的羽毛球比赛了。
Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday
任务型写作
总结：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你认为制订目标很重要吗？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你认为制订目标后怎样才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.举例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基础写作
社会实践是学校教育的一个重要组成部分；书本知识有限；社会实践有诸多好处，能用所学的知识解决实际问题，获取经验，了解社会，端正学习态度，激励学习。
Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more
experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任务型写作
总结：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你对童年生活的认识 我认为从某种意义上来说，艰苦的环境可以激发一个人的潜能，为他的成功铺平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一个人在经历了磨难之后可以变得坚强，勇敢和忠实可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.总而言之，我认为温室里的花朵经受不起风暴的洗礼，艰苦的生活对孩子来说是有好处的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午
热爱社会工作，性格乐观，富有爱心和责任心；英语口语流利，具有相关的教学经验；工作时间：周六和周日，按每小时5元付费；这份工作给自己在经济和人际关系方面的好处；:表达自己做好工作的决心：把快乐和舒适带给自己工作的对象。
Dear Sir or Madam
I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours
Ling ming
就学校取消高三音乐课这一事件给校长写一封信
Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同学们对学校取消音乐课意见不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你对此决定赞成或反对？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons
汕头一模
1.为何与人合作：现代社会必备；可省时间和精力；更多互相学习的机会
2.与谁合作：A与喜欢的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B与不喜欢的人合作：学会容忍，学会挖
掘其优点
3.你的看法：倾听别人意见，不把你的观点强加给别人，有礼貌地指出别人的错误
Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!
失败是件坏事吗？
概括短文要点Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失败并非坏事，但从失败中站起来并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失败对胜利者是必修课，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你对失败的看法和态度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”
(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.广州一模
基础写作简介学校的植物园
1.概况：位于校园西南角，面积1000平方米 2.历史：20年的历史，2008年重建 3.特色：各种花卉、树木、药用植物 4.功能：美化校园、研究植物场所、休闲之地 5.其他：观赏至少许一小时
Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.读写任务就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评
(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?
概括要点：校长的做法、想法、结果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持该校长的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假设你是校长，你会如何处理违纪学生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?
I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模写一篇短文介绍大豆的生长过程
1.发芽的条件：水分充足，温度适宜，种子就开始发芽了 2.第一步：出现幼根，并朝下生长 3.第二步：幼苗出现，并朝上生长，直至变成绿色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝叶出现 5.第四步：数月后开花结果
Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.经济危机，大学生就业难
概括材料主要内容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…
Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.现状：经济危机影响全球，就业机会少，工人工资低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建议：树立正确的择业观，降低预期工资，先就业再择业，自己创业，开公司，展示自己的才华Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各种优惠政策，免除各种税费，提供一定数量的无息贷款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.
第五篇：江苏省2013高考英语二轮(完成句子+书面表达)专题训练(15)
江苏省2013高考英语二轮（完成句子+书面表达）专题训练（15）及
答案
完成句子+短文写作（95）
第一节：完成句子
阅读下列各小题，根据括号内的汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。
1._________________(掌握了些事实和数据), customers are better able to deal with
the often powerful arguments given by a salesman.(arm)
2.Had you come earlier, I _________________(有时间)to talk with you now.(have)
3.The exhibition halls for EXPO’, which will be a feast for the eyes,_________________(在修建中)in Shanghai.(construct)
4.“Can you tell me_________________(究竟在哪儿)you lost your money?” her mother
asked.(it)?英语
5._________________(当谈到)the super star, all the students in class will pick
themselves up at once.(come)?英语
6._________________(尽管她很虚弱), she managed to finish her work.(as)
7.Since he graduated from the university, he _________________(一直工作)in this
factory.(work)
8.It’s very surprising that Guo Jingmin’s novels _________________(竟然很畅销)
among the teenagers.(sell)
9.If it were not for the fact _________________(她生病了), she would attend
tonight’s Super Girls’ Voice.(be)
10.Our total income of 2009 was _________________(三倍)in 2000.(what)
2013高考英语书面表达分类模句【应用文】（1）
应用文
寻物招领
Lost
I was careless and lost a bag in the dinning-hall on the afternoon of this month.Inside were two textbooks, a dictionary and a key to my bike.Will the finder-1-
please send it either to the students of Class 1, Senior Two ?/Anyone who/whoever found it , please let me know.Many thanks.Wang Lei
Found
A handbag was found, inside which are a camera, a pair of glasses, some money and other things.The loser is expected to come identify it.Please telephone „.or get in touch with „.Please bring your identification card with you when you come.Will the finder please come to Class 7 Grade III？
Because of my carelessness, my school-bag was left on the playground.通知/海报/致辞
Ø May I have your attention, please ?
I have something important to tell you.I have got an announcement to make.I am told that a speech contest will be held at the “English Corner ”this summer vacation.I’m glad to have the honor to tell you some activities you’re going to have today.
The party is a good chance for us to practise our English.Everyone is welcome to attend the party.Please bring along your pens and notebooks.All the students are requested to attend the celebration of the Teachers’ Day to be held in the Grand Hall in the Main Building at 6:30 this evening,
Don’t miss the chance.Please get there on time.Please get everything ready.Don’t be late.That’s all.Thank you.A professor from Beijing University will give us a lecture on pollution.In the school hall at 8:00 tomorrow morning.There will be a lecture on pollution given by Professor Wang from Beijing University.
It will last from half past two to four o’clock.Please sign your name at the Service Desk before 9:00 a.m.Lunch will be served at the place of visit.(在参观的地方供应午餐)After the report, we’ll have a discussion.There will be a close basketball match between Class One and Class Two.
Please be there on time and give your opinion at the meeting.It would give us great pleasure to invite you to give us a talk in our school.Will you accept our invitation ?
(欢迎词)I’m greatly honored to extend, on behalf of all the teachers and students , our warm welcome to Professor David.I’m sure Professor David’s visit
will promote the friendly relationship between our two departments.All of us will benefit a lot from their visit.I’m sure he’ll give us much valuable advice in
our research.Finally I hope Professor David will enjoy his stay in China.（欢送词）I have the honor to speak on behalf of my classmates at this farewell party for Mrs.Smith.Mrs.smith came to our school from America in
September, 1999.In the past four years, she’s always been kind to us, patient with us and strict in her work.She gave such interesting and lively classes
that every one of us enjoyed them very much.Mrs.Smith.is leaving us for her hometown soon.Now please allow me to express our hearty thanks to her
successful work and wish her good health and a pleasant journey.How time flies!Two years have passed since Mr.Smith came to teach us English.When you return to your country, we all hope you will keep in touch with us.Thank you for giving us such a warm welcome.（告别词）First of all, allow me to thank all of you for your kind invitation.I’m greatly honored to have such a chance to visit your university.My visit is bothinteresting and memorable.I’m glad to say I gained a lot from my visit.I’ll treasure your friendship.I’d like to take advantage of this opportunity toexpress my pleasure and my greatest gratitude to you again.May our friendship last forever!
Thank you!
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第二节：写作
众所周知，温哥华(Vancouver)冬奥会于2010年2月12日开幕。中国选手申雪和赵宏博为中国代表团勇夺花样滑冰首枚金牌。请根据提示写一篇观后感, 准备发给校刊英语论坛。可适当发挥。
1.他们隐退了两年，都三十多岁了，经历了无数苦难、挫折、喜悦和幸福，圆了18年的梦想。
2.他们完美的表现使世人大饱眼福。我们真心为他们喝彩。
3.从他们的成功中，你学到了什么？
生词提示：pairs 花样滑冰双人滑；
要求：字数 100 左右。
参考答案***************************************************
1.Armed with facts and figures/numbers/data/statistics
2.would have time
(虚拟语气)(时态语态)
(强调结构)(非谓语动词)3.are being constructed 4.where（on earth）it was/is that
5.When it comes to(固定句式)
6.Weak as she was(倒装)
7.has been working(时态)
8.should sell well
9.that she is ill(情态动词+语态)(同位语从句)
10.three times what it was
tree times as much as what it was
tree times the amount of what is was 带倍数比较级结构)
作文：
One possible version:
As is known to all, Vancouver Winter Olympics opened on Feb 12.Chinese players Shen Xue and Zhao Hongbo won the first prize in pairs for China.Although they retired for two years and they are in their thirties, they eventually realized their dream, which they had been dreaming for eighteen years after experiencing a lot of sorrow, frustration, joy and happiness.Their wonderful performance was a feast for the world.We sincerely cheer for them.Wish them everlasting love and a bright future.From their success I learn that perseverance is a kind of quality and that is what it takes to do anything well.**********************************************************结束
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