高中英语写作难点调查及启示

第一篇：高中英语写作难点调查及启示

高中英语写作难点调查及启示

应玉璐 浙江师范大学

摘要：本文先结合国内外研究探讨写作在英语学习中的地位，阐述新课标的要求，以及分析不同范畴的写作难点；然后开展问卷调查，对调查结果进行定量分析，以找出高中英语写作的现存难点；最后，为师生提高英语写作提出了一些可行的方法。

关键词：写作；写作难点；高中

一、引言

写作是英语四项语言技能之一,也是最难的一项。Tribble 强调学生应“写中学”而不是“学着写”(Wang, Mochu 2)。然而,我国高中英语的写作状况却不容乐观。写作是一项输出的活动，能够反应语言的输入好坏(Gu, Yuhong 2)，尽管研究众多，却很少有关注英语写作难点，涉及中国高中英语写作教学的就更少了

二、文献综述

（一）写作的作用

写作在英语学习中起着重要的作用。王初明教授的《外语写长法》(2005)认为写作是一项综合语言技能，可以提高外语能力。根据其对于写作和词汇记忆方面的研究，王初明认为在写作中运用过的单词更易被学生记住（Yao, 2005）。

（二）写作难点分析

高 中生英语写作中存在的问题综述如下。语言知识层面，包括词汇、句式和语法等。词汇方面：词形误用，词义误用，搭配失误，临时造词。句式方面：汉语句式，汉 语词序，句式混淆，词语堆砌。语法方面：思维定势，知识负迁移，细节遗忘。篇章结构方面：忽略关联词和忽视主题句，致使语句杂乱无序，行文不流畅，语境主 题思想不突出。高中生英语写作难点调查

3.1 研究问题

1.高中生英语写作的难点有哪些？

2.有哪些办法来提高其英语写作水平?

3.2 研究对象

75名来自浙江省东阳中学的高二学生参与调查，他们的英语水平不一。

3.3 数据收集

数据收集采用以问卷调查的形式，参考《大学生英语写作难点》(王文宇,俞希

32)。

3.3 结果讨论

高中生在词汇，语法，内容和语篇组织有困难。其中，词汇和语法是最大的困难。学生的词汇量有限，写作时单词量没有变化，习惯中式英语，用中文逐字翻译。英语写作难中占主导地位的困难是语法困难（Peng,2003）。学生倾向简单句，习惯中文思维，错句病句连篇，作文只停留在字面意思上，只根据题目纲要机械翻译。大部分学生不知道要写什么，怎么写。

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第二篇：高中英语写作教学的启示

高中英语写作教学的启示

1.全国高考英语书面表达题命题方向预测

（1）进一步体现高中英语新课改理念，引导考生观察生活，关注社会

《普通高中英语课程标准（实验）》提出了我国高中英语课程改革的要求，也为高考英语语言测试提供了依据。其中关于学生语言技能目标八级的写作要求是：能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。笔者认为，2012年全国高考英语书面表达题命制的基本方向是：进一步体现高中英语新课改的方向，引导考生观察生活、关注社会、注重语言基础和语言能力运用、注重语言及选材的时代性、注重语言隐含的情感态度及文化意识。

（2）凸显发散性、开放性的设题理念

近年来，高考英语命题专家都在不断总结经验，探索在应用文、记叙文和论说文这些体裁中，简化提示语言，找到短文写作题开放性与限制性之间的结合点。这种写作题型要求考生在给出的特定情景下按照特定的要求，开放式地发表评论、抒发情感，让考生有最大限度的发挥，突显了议论文的特点，对考生的语言组织能力和创新能力提出了更高的要求。

发散性、开放性的短文写作题能培养学生的想象能力和发散思维能力，能更加真实地考查考生实际运用语言的能力，能有效地拉开考生的成绩档次，有利于高校选拔人才。笔者相信，发散性、开放性的设题理念是高考英语书面表达题命制的主流方向。

当然，这种书面表达题型要写出高质量的文章，会有一定的难度，不可避免地会出现考生偏题、漏要点等问题，这也给试卷评阅工作增加了不少难度。

2.高考英语书面表达题备考方略

写作的过程是对语言的认知过程，写作能力在很大程度上反映了考生的英语认知水平。高中英语教师在高考复习中，要立足基础，不断加强考生短文写作基本功的训练，提高他们的语言组织能力和创新能力。

（1）培养能力，加强英语短文写作基本功的训练

高考是一种终结性评价，高考命题的指导思想是知识立意与能力立意相统一。《普通高中英语课程标准（实验）》强调：终结性评价要注重考查学生综合语言运用能力。从本质上说，知识属于认识的范畴，而能力属于实践活动的领域。知识与能力是相互依存并相互促进的，两者都是学习的结果。能力的形成和发展离不开知识的积累，知识的积累又会更好地促进能力的形成和发展。

高考英语书面表达旨在考查考生综合运用语言的能力，包括用英语获取信息、处理信息、分析问题和解决问题的能力，以及用英语进行思维和表达的能力和跨文化交际的能力。

学生的短文写作是一个创造性的过程，也是一个解决问题的过程。教师应让考生清楚高考英语短文写作对自身能力的要求，加强短文写作基本功的训练，培养他们快速捕捉话题和情景要点的能力。高考英语书面表达的基本功主要体现在以下几个方面：

一是卷面整洁、书写工整、文理通顺、前后连贯、有点有面、层次分明、有条不紊；

二是能在限定的时间内，准确、快速地捕捉短文写作的话题要点，不偏题，不漏要点；

三是能熟练地运用自己所学的词语、句型结构和修辞手段去遣词造句，努力做到长、短句交替运用，开头和结尾相互呼应；

四是能在句与句之间使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连接词或句子，使文章上下衔接自然、流畅。

（2）立足基础，处理好阅读与写作的关系

阅读和写作都是建立在语篇的基础上的，阅读可以为写作积累材料和写作经验。在高中英语教学中，教师应立足基础，帮助学生尽量扩大阅读量，并注重精读与泛读的结合，有计划地阅读各种体裁与题材的语言材料，尤其要涉猎交际功能强、实用性强、有时代感的应用文、说明文。

通过学习、借鉴、模仿、操练、强化、巩固等潜移默化的阅读环节，考生就能较好地掌握词汇、语法、固定句式、固定搭配、习惯用语等方面的基础知识，构建稳固、丰富的英语写作语料库，提高短文写作技巧与语言组织、运用能力。

教师还应注意的是，对考生英语短文写作的基础知识一定要反复抓，抓反复。浮光掠影、浅尝辄止、知其然而不知其所以然、似懂非懂、一知半解都是高考备考的大忌。

（3）总结经验，掌握英语短文写作的答题要求和答题方法

首先，考生要认真审题，读懂题目所给信息，搞清楚具体的要求和内容，然后迅速启动信息储存，激活有关背景知识，尽快进入角色和写作状态。在写作过程中，考生应组织好有效的构思，确定好内容要点，并在信息整合的过程中尽可能地优化信息，不在一些无关紧要的方面“流连忘返”。

其次，考生要在优化信息和构思立意、初步确定要点内容的基础上，列出写作提纲，统筹安排布局；要注意短文写作的有关文体格式，考虑好先写什么，后写什么。每年高考都有些考生短文写作时自我感觉良好，走出考场“兴冲冲”，查分后却“灰溜溜”。其主要原因就是在这个环节上考生主次不分，没有把写作要点条理化和有序化，没有重视思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性。

最后，考生要认真检查，修改润色。不少考生常常会有意或无意地忽视这个环节。其原因一是没有预留足够的认真检查，修改润色的时间；二是没能抓住这个环节的重点。考生要排除不会有错的心理定势的干扰，对优化的信息要点进行再检验，对写好的文章逐句进行查漏补缺，检查一下要点是否遗漏，标点、大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求，并对个别行文错误和用词不当的地方稍作修改。

书面表达是另一个训练的重点，先抓基础词汇、基本写作句型，在此基础上，灵活运用“五步法”，具体说来包括：一审、二提、三联、四查、五写。另多看往年的高考试卷，了解高考写作的类型，“最后能背5~8篇不同的范文

第三篇：高中英语写作

一、图表作文框架

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in 作文题目的议题 the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two the good one due reasons accounting for _____.On the other hand, hand, ______.On to the fact that ______ is ________._______.to that In addition, _______ is Maybe there But are it some responsible for other reasons show ________.the is generally believed reasons are commonly above mentioned convincing.As far as I am concerned, am sure I hold the point of is both view that _______.I sound and my opinion well-grounded.二、书信作文模板

Your address

Month，Date，year

Receiver's address

Dear …，I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.…… I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours，XXX

三、话题作文

Nowadays，there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides，_____.The third one is _____.To sum up，the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing，_____.For another thing，_____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.四、对比观点作文

(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1.有一些人认为。。

2.另一些人认为。。

3.我的看法。。

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持 A 的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由 三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持 B 的理由 一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一).For example, they think ② 1

-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)

五、阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2.分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).六、解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1.问题现状 2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明 A 的 现状).Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).七、说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利 弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生 表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状 2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A 的优点之一).Besides-------------------(A 的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A 的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A 的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测).)

八、现象说明文 Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly_____________ _____________.As

result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For a one thing_____________________,for another________ ____.In Conclusion____________________.一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)关于 A 的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于 A 的议论。给 A 一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了 科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而 言，我们可以这样描述 A… A 能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃 至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。认真分析后我们可以看到，A 对社会/世界 /健康的不利有 很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A 的出现直接损害了(这里 加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡)。(举 例)。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了 一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于 A 所产生微小利益，却促成了许 多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。事实上，A 的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A 所带 来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A 的产生来源 于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利 益，而从未从整个全局和人类整

体的利益出发去认识和分析 它。这使得 A 始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的 角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视 A。而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须 从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予 A 高度的重 视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更 多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向 辉煌的明天。One object or phenomenon(negative significance inclination.)A has attracted extensive attention of the society.Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly.Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…….A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world.It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly.The essence of these wrong actions is:(1)to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others’ long-term and overall interest;(2)to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.Situating under the shadow of A, individuals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests.However, the result may turn out to be loss of really important and valuable resource or ability.We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production.Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem.We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively elimin.九、议论文的框架

(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作 文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, this matter.however, Some differ in their opinions on people hold the idea that ___观点二 _______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一 _______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.firmly support It the As far as I am concerned, I view that __观点一或二______.is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一 ______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __ 讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题

___.(3)答题性议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文 It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语 _____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..ate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.十、实用性写作(申请信)

Your address（自己的地址，由小到大）Month, Date, year（书信时间）Receiver's address（收信人地址，由小到大）Dear..., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,

第四篇：高中英语写作

高中英语写作模板

模板一：直陈观点，以例佐证

观点：More haste, less speed.Before moving to the next step, one needs a practical consideration on what he has already achieved.（欲速则不达）preparation.in one day, it takes one years’ practice to have a good command of the language.If we do not learn from spelling correct words and writing acceptable sentences, we are never able to write a good composition.And without practicing oral English a lot, we can never speak English fluently.If we don’t read and listen a lot and do a lot of efficient exercises, we can not pass English tests.In short, we should have a good foundation if we want to make great achievements in our studies and work or in other things as well.观点:欲速则不达。移动到下一个步骤之前,需要一个实际的考虑他已经实现了欲速则不达。

从我的观点来看,我们应做的每一步一步来。人们经常失败没有充分的准备。

比如把英语学习。正如罗马不是一天造成的,它需要一个多年的实践,有良好的语言。如果我们不学习拼写正确的单词和句子写接受,我们将无法再写一篇好的文章。练习口语,而很多,我们永远不能流利地说英语。如果我们不读,听了不少,但做大量的练习,我们不能通过英语测试。

简而言之,我们应该有一个好的基础,如果我们想让伟大的成就在我们的学习和工作,或者在其他事情。

模板二：呈现看法，分说原由

观点：Honesty is the best policy.（诚实为上）

It is true that most of us value honesty highly.Personally I agree that honesty is the best policy.As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her.In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious(和谐的).There are a lot of examples to support the argument.consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are Singapore is a trustworthy society and has a very low criminal rate.There is no doubt that being honest is of benefit to both the state and the individual.We should have the spirit of honesty.这是真的,我们当中的大多数人的价值诚实。就我个人而言,我认为诚实是上策。

正如我们所知道的,如果一个人诚实,别人会非常尊重他或她,并愿意广交朋友,与他或她。此外,诚实,可以使人们的生活更轻松、更和谐(和谐的)。有很多例子来支持这个论点。举例来说,消费者不会害怕被索要如果经销商是诚实的。再比如,新加坡是一个值得信赖的社会,有一个很低的犯罪率。

毫无疑问,诚信双赢的国家和个人。我们应该本着诚信。

模板三：先抑后扬，肯定观点

现象：Should the students have the sense of competition?（是否应该培养学生的竞争意识）will do harm to the relationship between people.Besides, don’t want to try hard to succeed so that they can find an excuse of their failure.From my point of view, we should try to encourage students to have the sense of competition because there exists great competition in our modern world.Having the sense of it will certainly be important for students to develop after they leave school.However, we should guide our students to have a correct sense of it, getting them to know that they only have opponents but not enemies.We should also teach our students not to be afraid of failure because everyone may meet it more or less.Instead, try to face to and overcome it.有两种相反的意见的竞争。有些人认为小,相信它会伤害到人与人之间的关系。除此之外,一些人不想努力成功,以便他们能找到他们的失败的借口。

从我的观点来看,我们应该鼓励学生有强烈的竞争,因为存在着巨大的竞争在现代世界。在这个意义上,这肯定会是重要的,因为学生离开学校后。

然而,我们应该引导学生有一个正确的感觉,让他们知道他们的对手,但不是敌人只。我们也应该教我们的学生不要害怕失败,因为大家都可以见到这或多或少。相反,试着去面对和克服它。

模板四：先扬后抑，否定观点

现象：Can “lucky numbers” bring good luck?（吉祥数字能带来好运吗？）lucky numbers that they even spend a lot of money to buy lucky numbers.Many other people hold different ideas about lucky numbers.numbers at all.Numbers and luck are two different things.So far as I’m concerned, I agree with the latter.Obviously, such belief is only a kind of superstition.Perhaps it holds true for some cases, but often it does not.Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our luck is in our own hands.Therefore, everyone can have good luck only if he tries his best.Let’s always remember

在一些人眼里,幸运数字能给他们带来好运。他们认为这样高的幸运数字,他们甚至花很多钱去买幸运数字。

很多人持有不同看法幸运数字。他们认为没有幸运数字。编号和运气是两回事。到目前为止我个人而言,我赞同后者。显然,这种信仰只是一种迷信。也许对有些案例,但是经常,它不适合你。数字都无法带来好运的人,我们的运气是掌握在我们自己手里。

因此,每个人都能有好的运气,只有当他试着自己的最佳状态。让我们永远记住”的机会只有做好准备”和“一分耕耘,一分收获。”

模板五：确定主题，分步解说

主题：Reduce waste on campus（减少校园浪费）It is certain that the problem of waste is becoming more and more serious on campus and it’s time for us to reduce it.For one reason, we have already wasted a lot of precious resources such as water and electricity.For another, our waste adds our parents and the society a burden.electricity as much as possible.we should not spend too much money.we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes or dishes.教师是确信无疑的废物问题变得越来越严重的校园和它的时候,我们必须把价钱降低。因为某种原因,我们已经浪费很多宝贵的资源,例如水和电力。对另一些人来说,我们的浪

费我们的父母和社会增加负担。然而,有些人还不知道怎样才能降低校园浪费。这里有一些建议。

首先,我们应该关灯,当我们离开宿舍或教室,以便节省电能当做很多当做可能的。其次,我们不应该花太多钱。第三,我们应该停止浪费水,当我们洗澡,或干净的面孔,或洗衣服或盘子。

事实上,有不同的解决方法,根据不同的情况。因此,我坚信,我们能够减少浪费在校园。

模板六：（名谚开篇，烘托观点）

观点：Failure is the mother of success.（失败是成功之母）

People often say,the painter, the doctor and the scientist have failed time and again before they succeed in the end.helpful experiences from them and learn little by little what is the right way to our goal.It seems that failures are the steps in the mountain paths leading up to the peak where success lies.You have to climb the steps in order to reach the top.We should all take a positive attitude to failures and keep on working hard so as to meet with the final success in our studies and careers.人们常说:“失败是成功之母。”几乎没有任何成功赢得了没有失败。一个画家可以把许多失败才使图纸满意。医生可能会尝试了很多次才找到有效的治疗一种怪病。科学家可能使数以百计的实验之前,他得到了他所需要的数据。换句话说,画家,医生和科学家都失败了一次又一次地之前,他们成功。

从上面的例子中,我们可以得出这样的结论:失败是很常见的。我们可以得到一些有益的经验,学一点一点什么是合适的方式,是我们的目标。看来,失败是一步一步的山路上山顶那里成功的谎言。你必须爬的步骤以达到顶峰。

我们都应该采取积极的态度去失败,继续努力,以满足最终成功的在学习和职业。模板七：实证调研，数据为先

现象：Cell phones in China（手机在中国）

number of cell phones was 85,260,000;in 2002, the number was 180,000,000;in 2003, 206,600,000;in 2004, 269,000,000;while in 2005, the number went up to 315,000,000.From these numbers, we can see the increasing use of cell phones.There are many reasons for this development.Firstly, cell phones are very convenient to be carried everywhere.Secondly, cell phones can make us get news, play games, listen to music and chat through sending short messages.Thirdly, the drop of price, including the phone price and the communication price, has made it possible for an average person to buy one and make more use of it.作为一项调查显示,手机在中国的普及程度越来越高。在2001年,这个数字手机是85,260,000;2002年,这个数字是18万元;2003年,206,600,000;2004年,26万9千人、在2005年,这个数字上升到31.5万只。从这些数字,我们可以看到越来越多的手机。

这其中有很多理由发展。首先,手机是非常方便携带。其次,手机能使我们得到消息,玩游戏,听音乐,发短信聊天。第三,价格下跌的价格,包括电话沟通的价格,已使得平均每人买一个,让更多的使用它。

模板八： 正反观点，各圆己见

话题：Wealth or health, which is the more important?（金钱与健康哪一个更重要?）Some think that wealth means everything.In their eyes, they can have everything done with enough money.Some of them take risky chances to make money only with the result that they get neither wealth nor health.Actually, health is more important than wealth.Health is the foundation of one’s success If one gets sick, it is nearly impossible for him to do his work well.On the other hand, a person suffering from illness, in fact, cannot get any wealth: has to spend a lot of money on the medical treatment;enjoy his wealth.Health is the source of energy and it’s the starting point where everything begins.Therefore, you should exercise every day with proper diet, forming good living habits and trying to avoid any minor disease.一些人认为财富意味着一切。在他们眼中,他们就可以得到每件事,有足够的钱。他们中的一些人采取冒险的机会赚钱以致他们既不卫生。财富,实际上,健康比财富更重要。健康的身体是事业成功的基础。如果一个生病,这几乎是不可能的,他要做自己的工作。另一方面,一个身患疾病,事实上,找不到任何的财富:首先,我来治好他的病,他不得不花大量的钱在医疗;可是对另一位妈妈来说,如果他病了,所以他不能真正享受他的财富。

所以,如果你想变得富有,保持身体健康。健康是能量的来源和它的出发点都开始了。因此,你应该每天锻炼身体以适当的饮食,形成良好的生活习惯,尽量避免任何次要的疾病。

附：常用英语谚语：

1.Time flies.--------------时间过得真快。

2.Kill two birds with one stone.--------------一举两得。

3.Where there is a will, there is a way.--------------世上无难事,只怕有心人。

4.Don’t put the cart before the horse.--------------不要本末倒置。

5.The early bird catches the worm.--------------早起的鸟儿有虫吃。

6.Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.--------------世上无难事,只怕有心人。

7.A fox may grow gray, but never good.--------------江山易改,本性难移。

8.You cannot eat your cake and have it.--------------鱼与熊掌,不可得兼。

第五篇：高中英语写作

高中英语写作

作文能力不强一直是同学们比较普遍的问题。其实归结起来，一共有四类症状，深入地剖析这些症状，就能找到作文偏科的根本原因，同时写作时适当地套用一些模板，给写作能力不好的同学好好进补。症状一文体格式混乱

【表现】 读了作文要求之后，提笔就写——明明要求写一封表达建议的书信，结果写成了议论文；或者明明要求写说明文，偏偏写成了记叙文；或者总算文体没有弄错，结果写通知误用日记的格式，写书信又误用通知的格式。

【症结】平时缺乏作文文体方面的针对性训练，对英语作文的几种常用文体及其相应的写作格式不熟悉，拿到写作材料习惯性地对写作要求一扫而过，提笔就写自己最熟悉的格式。

【突破之道】明确文体和对应格式

常用文体有记叙文、说明文、议论文还有应用文等。近几年的高考书面表达多以应用文为主，提供的形式多以图画、提纲、表格出现，书写的格式大都是书信、通知。所以，同学们应该掌握书信的称呼、开头、正文、结尾、签名等方面，另外，口头通知和书面通知的不同要清楚。总之，同学们应根据写作提示分析材料，明确写作文体和其相应的格式。

症状二 时态人称混乱

【表现】 作文时，时态和人称运用混乱——时态方面，要么整篇文章都是一种时态（以一般现在时、一般过去时居多），要么就是一段甚至一句话中出现三种以上的时态；人称方面，要么文章开头是第一人称，写到文中甚至文末就成了第二、第三人称，要么前面是单数人称，写着写着就变成复数人称。

【症结】 英语基础知识不牢固，对英语中时态和人称所代表的含义及其运用掌握不足，因此无法根据文体来选择正确的时态和人称而滥用或者混用。

【突破之道】 明确时态和人称

同学们要根据选好的文体和写作内容确定时态和人称。一般来说，记人叙事多用一般过去时；发布通知多用一般将来时和祈使句式；发表议论大多用带有情态动词的一般现在时；人物介绍、现状说明常用一般现在时和现在完成时。定准时态后接下来一定要知道各时态的构成及用法要点，但要记住，写作时时态并不唯一，要依据表达内容而选定正确的时态。人称方面则要注意前后统一，避免出现前后人称属性或者单复数不一致的情况。

症状三 词汇运用混乱

【表现】 经常出现乱用词语的现象，同时使用一些较难的、较长的、用法不熟悉的单词，或者明明用一些简单的词汇就能够很清楚地表达意思，偏偏要选择一些难度较大的、不常用的表达方式。

【症结】 写作时对文章的脉络把握不足就匆匆下笔，对其中所需的词汇和常用表达方式理解记忆不牢固。平时练习时，习惯性地忽略一些形式简单但用途较广泛的基本词汇和表达方式，喜欢选择复杂的词汇和表达方式。

【突破之道】确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构

应该根据文章体裁和内容逐个确定写作要点。对于图画和图表可在草稿纸上用中文列出并理清要点，然后选词造句，要注意语言的准确得当，力求用最简洁的话表达准确的意思。同时，平时写作要多进行发散思维，例如，是用ｖｅｒｙｓｏｒｒｙ还是ｔｅｒｒｉｂｌｙｓｏｒｒｙ，是ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｅｄ还ａｓｔｏｎｉｓｈｅｄ。同学们应学会尽可能避免使用较高级的语法结构和词汇，如非谓语动词、复合句等，以免造成过失性失分.症状四语序句序混乱

【表现】 作文的语序、句序混乱，通常这里写一点，跳过去又另起一点，这样造成要么文章洋洋洒洒一大篇却全是废话，没有中心和重点，什么都没有表达清楚；要么通篇没有适当的过渡词、句，整篇文章一“逗”到底，密密麻麻让人找不着北。

【症结】平时练习时不注意表达的连贯性，想到哪里就写到哪里，写作之前没有列提纲的习惯，不去深入

思索怎样表达才能达到最好的效果，从而造成整篇文章逻辑思维混乱，层次不清晰。

【突破之道】 整理成篇 行文连贯

同学们应该根据写作内容列好简要提纲，分清文章的层次，确定详略，写好的单句要重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词或句子使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。另外，该分段时要分段，这样文章才能中心突出，一目了然，整篇作文才能如行云流水般整齐划一

高中英语作文万用模板-图标作文

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.高中英语作文万用模板-书信作文模板

Your address

Month, Date, year

Receiver's address

Dear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.„„

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,高中英语作文万用模板-话题作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.高中英语作文万用模板-对比观点作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more,_____。Moreover,______.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.Secondly(besides),______.Thirdly(finally),_____.From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为40％的同学认为

1．不应该收门票1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2公园是公众休闲的地方2．支付园林工人工资

3如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象3．购新花木