第一篇：英语作文的基本要求
英语作文的基本要求：
首先，一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题（stick or hold to the topic），这就是段落的统一性（unity）。其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅（smooth），这就是连贯性（coherence）。根据文章题目以及你所想要表示的意思下手，下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country.We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life.Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie.We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country.We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park.Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner.To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。再看一个例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit.I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program.In one year I lost eighty pounds.I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again.I bought two new suitcases last week.Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour.My mother was a premature baby.本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性
正象我们前面说得那样，一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样，虽然有推展句，但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待，给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil.Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task.Besides, it is more useful to work —— you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression.本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平静）Physical work又如何能改变这种情况？为什么它能起therapy的作用？读者得不到明确的答案。因此，要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words.Often writing is much clearer than a picture.It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法，必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释，整个段落内容空洞，简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话，就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段：
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words.Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things.If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming “Help”?
3、连贯性（coherence）
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内在的逻辑性，后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系；反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。
1）、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A．按时间先后排列（chronological arrangement）
We had a number of close calls that day.When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast;we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock.Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in;the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down.By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted.Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert.Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him.By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.本段从“rose”（起床）写起，然后是吃早餐（“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”），然后是“close to noon”，一直写到这一天结束（“By nine——”）。
B.按位置远近排列（spatial arrangement）。例如：
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes.It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away.Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure.Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows.Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four.Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light.Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically.All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.本段的写法是由远及近，从远处（“from a distance”）写起，然后“get closer”，再到（“ten feet away”），最后是“inside the pagoda”„„当然，按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要，也可以由近及远，由表及里等等。
C.按逻辑关系排列（logical arrangement）
a.按重要性顺序排列（arrangement in order of importance）
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective.If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance.But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on
your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word.And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking.In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.这一段谈的是表达能力，它的重要性与职业，身份有关，从“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”，最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement）
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path.This carelessness can take any number of forms.Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means.Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways.Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking.Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link.Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up.He may think that “sanguine” and “sanguinary” mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one.The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness，先给出一个general statement作为主题句，然后通过5个 ＂perhaps＂加以例证。
c.由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry.The two cats are only alike in breed.Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively.She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously.Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still.Prissy is a very proper cat.Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively.He was my shadow from morning till night.He expected me to constantly entertain him.Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was dec
第二篇：英语作文的基本要求
英语作文的基本要求
首先，一个段落必须有一个中心,即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题（stick or hold to the topic），这就是段落的统一性（unity）。其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅（smooth），这就是连贯性（coherence）。根据文章题目以及你所想要表示的意思下手，下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country.We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life.Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie.We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country.We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park.Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner.To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences(不相干的句子)，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。再看一个例子：My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit.I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program.In one year I lost eighty pounds.I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again.I bought two new suitcases last week.Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour.My mother was a premature baby.本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性
正象我们前面说得那样，一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样，虽然有推展句，但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待，给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil.Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task.Besides, it is more useful to work —— you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression.本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平静）Physical work又如何能改变这种情况？为什么它能起therapy的作用？读者得不到明确的答案。因此，要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words.Often writing is much clearer than a picture.It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法，必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释，整个段落内容空洞，简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话，就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段：It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words.Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things.If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming “Help”?
3、连贯性（coherence）
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内在的逻辑性，后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系；反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。
1）、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A．按时间先后排列（chronological arrangement）
We had a number of close calls that day.When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast;we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock.Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in;the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down.By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted.Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert.Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him.By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.本段从“rose”（起床）写起，然后是吃早餐（“not to miss
breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”），然后是“close to noon”，一直写到这一天结束（“By nine——”）。
B.按位置远近排列（spatial arrangement）。例如：
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes.It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away.Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure.Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows.Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four.Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light.Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically.All those windows let in a flood
第三篇：高考英语写作基本要求以及作文类型
高考英语写作基本要求以及作文类型
.一、考纲要求：
要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：
（1）准确使用语法和词汇；
（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。要求考生根据提示写一篇100词左右的英语作文。提示或图表、或图文皆有。
写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面：
1、文章的组织：包括叙述的顺序、各句之间的逻辑关系、过渡词的正确使用及格式的规范。叙述的顺序一般是由总体到具体或者按照时间顺序而定。为使文章主体突出、行文流畅，应注意上下文的逻辑关系的确定和过渡词的恰当使用，这对提高整篇文章的档次至关重要。
2、句子的结构：一般来说，高考书面表达的篇幅大约是10句，其中多数是简单句，少数复合句。建议使用十句作文法训练。
3、意义的表达：主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一定的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思是，考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。
4、词的正确使用：包括词性的正确使用、动词的各种变化形式的规范、名词的单复数的使用等。其中动词尤为重要，动词形式的错误比其他词类形式的错误的扣分要重。
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细，全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到详略得当。此外，100词左右的英语作文至少需80词，最多不能超过120词，少词或多词则要扣分。
二、作文类型
1、表达观点类
在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。
授课形式一：只用英语
优点：有助于提高听说能力等
缺憾：不易听懂等
结论：„„
授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用
优点：易于理解等
缺憾：英语氛围不浓等
结论：„„
注意：1.词数 100~120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)。
2.参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围
I prefer my English classes to be taught in...满分文(一)
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage.That will be good for us.However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong.Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes.It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.满分文(二)
I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time.I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.That’s why I prefer total English.However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says.Sometimes we need Chinese explanation.So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.2、演讲稿
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。（2009·天津）
1.说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；
2.说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；
3.预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意： 1.词数：不少于100词；2.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
范文
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.There are some important points every speaker should be aware of.Please listen to me carefully.First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes.Second, you should speak fluent English.At last, everyone should pronounce correctly.We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!
Thank you!
3利弊分析类
假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。
注意：1．词数：150左右2．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。3.要自拟结论。参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum;颐和园the Summer Palace
Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization（文明）.And it will be another place of interest for tourists.If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.Those who disagree think it more reasonable（合情合理）to keep the garden like this.The ruins will remind us of the past.We should never forget the history.Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden.Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city.What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.4.图表分析类
受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。
调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种
调查范围：湖北省的10
所中学
调查对象：高中生
调查人数：1,000
调查方式：访谈
调查结果：(见下图)
Reading Interests of
Senior Middle School Students，one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed.They were asked which they liked reading most among the four
categories of English articles，news，stories，popular science articles and articles about learning
methods.students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods.However，the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.5.漫画类（开放作文）
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain
to the judges how you understand it.“开放作文”的命题方式是让考生根据一幅图画，在描述图画信息之余，发挥自己的想象，展开简单的议论。
首先提醒同学：不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意！英语作文不看重你的思想厚度，而看重你的语言质量。开放作文有明显的套路可循。“开放作文”只要求你做两件事情，一件是描述图画（describe the following picture），另一件是阐述你对图画的看法（explain how you understand it）。相应地，你只需要写两个段落，一段是“描述段”，另一段是“议论段”。
一般分三段：第一段用来描述图画内容。第二段用来写这幅图画说明了什么问题。第三段总结问题。
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil.The
compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort.I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages.The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures.So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them..
第四篇：想象作文基本要求
想象作文基本要求：
1、想象作文是以对想象中的场景或事物的描述为主要内容的作文，是作者对超时空的种种奇思异想的记录。
2、文章有超时空大胆的想象。新式的事物想得新奇、有趣，令人神往或与众不同。习作要求：
1、想象要丰富，内容要具体，语句通顺。
2、要大胆想象，想象要新奇、有趣、超前、富有创造性。
3、可以拟一个合适的题目。
4、认真读一读，找出不足，学会修改自己的习作。
写好想象作文要注意以下两点：
1、想象是翅膀，生活是基础，成功的想象作文必须是现实生活为依据的，脱离现实生活的想象只是胡思乱想。
2、融入感情，想象合理。无论写人，还是记事，议论都离不开作者的感情，想象作文也不例外。离开感情的文章就会缺乏生气和真实感。
写法点睛：
这次习作可能是不少小朋友的最爱──想象作文哟！怎样才能写好以“未来的××”为题的想象作文呢？
一、既然是写未来的事物，一定要具有新颖性。根据自己感兴趣的内容来组织材料。如未来的鞋，可根据现在的鞋子具有的特点，加上想象，设计出音乐鞋等。
二、针对自己所写的内容，要做到重点突出，有详有略。要突出它的样子、优点、结构、使用方法，而这些又侧重于样子、结构和使用方法，这几点要详写。
三、想象的内容要充实具体，切忌说空话。习作力争做到有美好的幻想，有科学的设想，又有具体形象的情景。
思路点拨：
思路1──写一写未来的服装。未来的服装会不会在保暖性、透气性、舒适性等方面有大大的改观呢？一定是价廉物又美啊！
思路2──写一写未来的食物。如今常常听到食物遭污染、食物中的营养元素不足等相关报道，真让人失望。若是能吃上口感好又“绿色”、营养全面又健康的食物该多好呢！让我们穿越时空隧道去看看22世纪的人们都在吃些什么食物？动笔把你看到的都记下来！
思路3──写一写未来的住房。随着生活水平的提高，人们对住房的要求也越来越高，你对未来的房子又有哪些期待呢？写出来让我们也看看吧！
思路4──写一写未来的交通工具。如今的交通状况可真拥挤，咱们中国人口多，随着车辆数量的不断增多，马路可是越来越不够用啦！未来的交通工具会不会向空间发展呢？若是人类像红孩儿那样穿上“风火轮”就可以飞上天，去到想去的地方该多好！或是像机器猫那样插上“螺旋桨”就直升上天„„那多棒！
思路5──编一个反映未来生活的故事。人们利用未来最先进、最科学、最便利的生活用品、交通工具„„那样惬意的生活中又会发生哪些有趣的故事呢！请你展开奇思妙想，好好创编吧！
精彩开头：
1、我想发明一种„„
2、时间飞逝，转眼间20年过去了，我成了一个科学家。专门发明一些„„
3、最近，我设计了一个„„
4、转眼，5.12汶川大地震发生四年多了。每当想起那些被废墟埋葬的生命，我总是潸然泪下。将来，我一定要发明一种新型房屋„„
5、你坐过“海陆空”三用汽车吗？我想大家都想看看这车子吧。那就跟我来吧！
6、你想知道未来的钥匙是什么样的吗？今天我来介绍介绍。
7、我想在本世纪里，创造出一种特殊、方便、安全的„„
精彩结尾：
1、这就是未来的**！
2、朋友们，我设计的**还不错吧？
3、同学们，这样的**你喜欢吗？一定很想拥有吧？那就让我们刻苦钻研、勇于探索，让这一天早点到来吧!
4、你瞧，我设计的多用**方便吧？
5、可是，这只是我的幻想。从现在起，我一定要刻苦学习，争取将来发明出这样的**！大家等着我的好消息吧！
6、朋友们，你认为这些设想好吗？让我们一起来共同设计祖国的未来吧！
7、我想，随着科技的发展，不远的将来一定会有这样的**。
“叮铃铃”闹钟把我从梦中惊醒。虽然这只是我的想像，但是我相信随着我们大家的共同努力，祖国科技的不断发展，我的愿望一定会梦想成真。
未来的衣服
2409年，科技发达得很，人可以飞上天，动物呢也可以听懂人话„„呵！没想到吧，我也是一个非常有名的发明家，最有代表性的就是我发明的“未来的衣服”。这是一种高科技的服装，它不仅颜色五彩缤纷，它的功能也不少哦！（开篇点题。）
这种万能变身衣的最新产品十分轻便、灵活„„穿上万能变身衣，即使在寒冷的南极也不会感到寒冷；就算是在巨型烤箱里，也不会感到炎热。要问为什么，因为这件万能变身衣内部装有自动调节气温系统，无论身处多么寒冷、多么炎热的环境，都能保持一定的温度不变。衣服上的纽扣就是操作的按钮。如果是冬天，你就按白色按钮，它就会给你身上穿上一件羽绒服。下雨时，你就按蓝色按钮，它就会在你的头上伸出一把雨伞。如果你要去郊游玩耍，就可以按红键，它将自动放出好听的音乐„„（介绍万能变身衣的特点以及如何操作。）
如果你要参加舞会，只需要输入衣服的款式、颜色，万能变身衣内部的高性能电脑便会将输入的数据加以处理，然后发出超过光速的信号，只要0.0001秒你的衣服就会变成一身有绅士风度的燕尾服，或亮丽的节日盛装。（介绍它如何变成礼服。）
未来的汽车
现在的汽车有很多不方便的地方，所以我想设计一种新型汽车。
这种汽车使用的燃料是空气，廉价又环保。从此以后，你不再会为汽油涨价而忧心忡忡。他的车身是充气的，按一下充气按钮，他就能自动充气。你只要往车里一坐，就会有一种心旷神怡的感觉。开车时，你只要输入你想去的地方和速度，它就会自动到达指定地点。如果你想睡觉，就按一下变形按钮，车内就会变出一张床，供你休息。如果你饿了，它可以为你提供可口的饭菜„„
现在不是常出交通事故吗？坐上了这辆车，你就不必担心了，因为你的车是由电脑驾驶的，车技高超。再说，如果真的撞到了人，被撞者的感觉就像是倒在了沙发上一样，毫发无损。
这辆车能变成船，带你一览水上风光；也能变成飞机，带你翱翔蓝天；它还能变成潜艇，带你去龙宫探宝„„
这样一辆神奇的汽车，难道你不想拥有吗？
第五篇：小学生作文基本要求
小学生作文基本要求一、二年级：
1、对写话有兴趣，写自己想说的话，写想象中的事物的认识和感想。
2、在写话中乐于运用阅读和生活中学到的词语。
3、根据表达的需要，学习使用逗号、名号、问号、感叹号。
4、能简单写上一段生活熟悉的内容。
三、四年级：
1、留心周围事物，乐于书面表达，增强习作的自信心。
2、能不拘形式地写下见闻、感受和想象，注意表现自己觉得新奇有趣的、或印象最深、最受感动的内容。
3、愿意将自己的习作读给人听，与他人分享习作的快乐。
4、能用简短的书信便条进行书面交际。
5、尝试在习作中运用自己平时积累的语言材料，特别是有新鲜感的词句。
6、根据表达的需要，使用冒号、引号。
7、学习修改习作中有明显错误的词句。
8、课内习作每学年16次左右。
9、提倡作文回归生活，体现生活是作文的源泉。
10、语文教师至少在市级报刊上推荐发表本班学生习作2篇。
五、六年级：
1、懂得写作是为了自我表达和与人交流。
2、养成留心观察周围事物的习惯，有意识地丰富自己的见闻，珍视个人的独特感受，积累习作素材。
3、写简单的纪实作文和想象作文、实践作文，还作文回归生活，内容具体，感情真实。能根据习作内容表达需要，分段表述。
4、写读书笔记和常见应用文。
5、能根据表达需要，使用常用的标点符号。
6、修改自己的习作，并主动与他人交换修改，做到语句通顺行款正确，书写规范、整洁。
7、课内习作每学年16次左右。40分钟能完成不少于400字的习作。
8、语文教师至少在市级报刊上推荐发表本班学生习作3篇。
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