四级作文 私人书信和原因分析句型

第一篇：四级作文 私人书信和原因分析句型

四级作文 私人书信和原因分析模板句型

基础好的同学就直接改写提纲来写私人书信就行了。因为私人书信写作比较任意，模板不好确定。基础不好的同学，就把提纲中规定的东西都写到第二段，一三段按照我写的，模板化。

第一段 客套话+写作目的It is great to hear from you again.Nothing could have given me greater pleasure than to get news of you.You have no idea how happy I was to receive your letter.As to/with reference to /with regard to/as regards … ,引出写作目的第三段 问候语+期待回信

nothing could have given me greater pleasure than to get news of you

in answer to your kind letter last time, i am writing the letter to tell you that

you have no idea how happy i was to receive your letter

I look forward to hearing from you at your earlist concenience.Please bring my best wished to your family.I wish you good health and lots of happiness.I wish every success for your career/study in the future

原因分析

A a host of elements can account for the phenomenon/situation;

B Why do I hold the point? There exist several factors accounting for/contributing to my outlook.C There exist an ocean of elements why I hold the belief, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.D among countless factors which contribute to … ,there exist three conspicuous(明显的)aspects as follows.E The first role that should be emphasized is that… …, another equally essential factor is that… …, what is also worth noticing fact is that … ….书信作文范文

投诉信

Dear Mr.President:

I am sophomore from the Department of Low.I’m writing the letter in purpose of complaining about the food and service in the canteen or campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, Price and service in the canteen.First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them.Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of

competition be introduced between the old and the new.Besides, both the canteens should be

subject to the students’ supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above be solved as soon as possible.求学信

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am a Chinese student who wish to study at your prestigious/esteemed university.My plan is to start my course next term , and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.First , what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university ? I alreaday had a bachelor’s degree from BeiJing Vniversity , but I wonder if there are any further academic

requirements.Second , how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self –supporting.I would be interested to here if there are any scholarships available for international students.Third , what is the situation as regards a commodation ?

I look forward to your reply.and to attend your esteemed institution.Yours Sincerely

LiMing

邀请信

Dear WangCai:

I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr old fish’s wedding

ceremong with Miss Micky Mouse to be held in ZhouJi Hotel on April 2009

If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1.We look forword to the pleasure of your company.Yours Sincerely

LiMing

感谢信变体

September 10th is the day that every student should bear in mind.It is the time to express our congratulations to our teachers ,who have devoted most of their time and energy to us。

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude;I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by taxi.If it had not been for my teachers’ timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was his quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.I will repay my teacher’s kindness with my unselfish help to others.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like my teacher, this would be a much nicer place.

第二篇：大学英语四级作文万能句型-书信

书信

Dear Sir or Madam，Mr.Mrs.Miss.Ms.Yours sincerely, yours truthfully，Love，Yours affectionately, 书信作文常用套句

1：The time flies, we haven’t seen each other for a long time.All the things here are going on pretty well, I just miss you so much!时间过得很快，我们已经很久没见了。这里一切都好，就是很想你。2：It is so great to hear from you again.能再次收到你的来信我很开心。3：Long time no see!好久不见。

4：I trust that everything is going smoothly for you.我相信你那里一切都好。

5：It is a great pleasure for me to have this wonderful chance to put pen to paper and send greetings to you.很高兴我有这样的机会提笔给你写信，寄给你我的问候和祝福。

中间部分：

Give advice:

In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following action:

在下认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。

I hope you will not find it too forward for me to suggest that you…

请原谅我的直接，不过，希望你能___________。

In my experience, it seems that _______ would make sense in your situation.从我的经验来看，针对你的情况，似乎________会有帮助。

At the risk of overstepping my boundaries, allow me to suggest that you____。

请原谅我的冒昧，不过我建议你_____________。

Gratitude

I truly appreciate your kindness.我很欣赏你的仁慈。

I am grateful to you for…

非常感谢你_________________。

I appreciate it more than I can say.我对你表示万分感谢。

I can never thank you enough.万分感谢。

I wish there were a better word than “ thanks “ to express my appreciation for your generous help.其实，对你的帮助岂能用“谢谢”儿子可以表达的。

It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.你对我如此慷慨，真是对您感激不尽。

Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality.非常感谢你的仁慈和好客。

Now we have arrived back home safe and sound.现在我已经安全到家。

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for…

我打从心底谢谢你（真诚地感谢你）。

Thank you again for your kindness.谢谢你的好意。

Apology

Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology.请接受我最诚挚、最深刻的道歉。

I apologize most sincerely for…

我诚挚地对___________向你道歉。

I am truly sorry to have done…

我对________向你表示道歉。

Please forgive me…

请原谅我曾__________。

I owe you an apology…

我为______向你道歉。

I regret to inform you that I am unable to do..很遗憾地告诉你，我没法___________。

I am so sorry to have put you through so much trouble…

很抱歉给你带来这么多麻烦，__________。

Invitation

The honor of your presence is requested…

若你能出席________，我（们）将感到万分荣幸。

It’s a pleasure for me to invite you to…

我很荣幸地邀请你参加__________。

We sincerely hope that you make it.我们真诚地希望你能参加。

We would be honored to have you there with us…

如果您能参加我们的__________，我们将不甚荣幸。

I will cover all the expense involved.我将负担所有的费用。

Sympathy

I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and I want to extend to you my unwavering support.我能想象你所经历的一切，而且，我想告诉你，我会永远支持你。

Complain

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction withat…

我写这封信是想告诉你们我对________不是很满意。

I very much regret to have to inform you that…

很遗憾地通知你，__________。

I would like to draw the attention of the authorities concerned to the …

我想就_____________问题引起有关部门的重视。

I feel something ought to be done about…

我觉得________方面还可以作一些努力（需要改进）。

I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.我希望以上问题（情况）能尽快解决（改进）。

Your effort to provide good services will be highly appreciated by all.我们会很感激您作出的一切努力。

We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.我们真的希望你们能对损失作出补偿。

Inquiry

I would like to request some information about…

我想对_______问题向您咨询。

My first question is… 我的问题就是__________。

I am greatly concerned about… 我对_________较为关注。

Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.我是否需要再寄其他资料给你，请及时告知。

Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.能否针对上述的问题寄些相关的小册子给我。

结尾部分：

Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.我想再次对你表示感谢。

I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.我希望待尽快给我回复。

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.谢谢你关心（关注），我期待你的回复。

图表作文

图表作文常用句型

As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…

The graph shows that… 图表显示…

As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…

From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…

All these data clearly prove the fact that…

所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…

The increase of ….In the city has reached to 20%...在这个城市的增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.

第三篇：四级常用句型

一)比较

1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B，but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that...but it would be foolish to claim that...5.For all the disadvantages，it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else，it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However，the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently，it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think...，but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is，it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A...，but the chief faults are...二)原因

1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute tothe phenomenon.2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4.The factors that contribute to this situation include...5.The change in...largely results from the fact that...6.We may blame...，but the real causes are...7.Part of the explanations for it is that...One of the most common factorsis that...Another contributing factoris...Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that...三)后果

1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is...3.It will exercise a profound influence upon...4.Its consequence can be so great that...四)批驳

1)It is true that...，but one vital point is being left out.2)There is a grain of truth in these statements，but they ignore a more important fact.3)Some people say...，but it does not hold water.4)Many of us have been under the illusion that...5)A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6)It makes no sense to argue for...7)Too much stress placed on...may lead to...8)Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that...9)Contrary to what is widely accepted，I maintain that...五)举例

1)A good case in point is...2)As an illustration，we may take...3)Such examples might be given easily.4)...is often cited as an example.六)证明

1)No one can deny the fact that...2)The idea is hardly supported by facts.3)Unfortunately，none of the available data shows...4)Recent studies indicate that...5)There is sufficient evidence to show that...6)According to statistics proved by...，it can be seen that...七)开篇 1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6)Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...8)According to a recent survey，...9)With the rapid development of...，...八)结尾

1)From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that...2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4)In conclusion，it is imperative that...5)There is no easy method，but...might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem，we must...7)In summary，if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue，more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned，the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10)Taking all these into account，we...11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative，one thing is certain/clear...英语作文四六级开头公式

1.开头万能公式一：

名人名言：有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？经典句型：A proverb says, “ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2.开头万能公式二：

数字统计原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：

Honesty

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：A recent statistics shows that …

二结尾万能公式：

1.结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2.结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英语模板：发表问题

问题的常用词：question, problem, issue

Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。

Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。

Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。

The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。

At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前，一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实，两种观点都其可取之处。

People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。

People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。

The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。

When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...说到______，有人认为________，而另一些人则认为__________。

Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗话说，""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。

To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.对于这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。

There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...万事万物都有其两面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。

When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。

There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue that...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前，_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______，他们认为_______，不过，另一方面，赞同_______的人则认为_________。

Some people are of the opinion that..有些人认为_____________。

第四篇：英文书信作文常用句型

英文书信作文常用句型

感谢信(A Letter of Thanks)

1.Thank you so much for …….2.I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for……

3.I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for……

4.I’m grateful to you for ……

5.I truly appreciate your ……

6.Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.道歉信(A Letter of Apology)

1.I would like to express my apology for……

2.Excuse me for……

3.Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for……

4.I’m terribly sorry to tell you that……

5.Will you be good enough to excuse me for……

6.I am writing to apologize to you for ……

7.Would you mind if I change the appointment time.(你是否介意如果我更改约会时间)

8.To make up my thoughtless behavior, I……(我想……以弥补……)

9.I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration.询问信(A Letter of Inquiry)

1.I amwriting to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning……(我写信是希望得到……的信息)

2.I amwriting to you in the hope that I may obtain some materials about……

3.I would be grateful if you inform me ……

4.I should be obliged if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects.(若能获悉……，将不胜感激)

5.I am writing to seek for your assistance in……(我写信是要请求您的帮助)

6.I would appreciate it if you could provide us with ……

(如果您能为我们提供……,我将不胜感激)

7.The questions I need answering are listed below.(下列是我想咨询的问题)

8.Will you please send me the relevant information and application forms

(您能给我寄相关的资料和申请表吗？)

9.Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.(我是否需要再寄其他资料给你，请及时告知。)

10.Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.(能否针对上述的问题寄些相关的小册子给我。)

11.I am eagerly awaiting your reply to this matter.12.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated1

13.I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.(感谢您在这件事上的慷慨相助)

14.I am looking forward to a favourable reply at your earliest convenience(期盼回复)投诉信(A Letter of Complaint)

1.Much to my regret,I am writing to make a complaint about/against……

2.I am completely disappointed /upset to find……

3.I am writing to inform you of my unhappy experience

4.I would like to draw your attention to……(我希望你们能注意……)

5.I would very much appreciate it if you would……(如能……,我将不胜感激)

6.I should be very obliged if you would look into this matter as soon as possible.(如果您能尽快调查此事，我将不胜感激)

7.To improve the situation/ solve the above problem ,it is advisable for you to take the following measures:……(为了解决以上问题,建议您采取以下措施)

8.I am looking forward to an early reply.9.I would like to see a prompt settlement of the issue.(期待此事的尽快解决)

10.We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.(我们真的希望你们能对损失作出补偿。)

建议信(A Letter of Suggestion)

1.I am writing to express my views concerning……

2.You have asked me for my advice about……,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.(对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条建议)

3.I would like to suggest that ……

4.I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning……

5.It’s my great honor to recommend ……,a worthy candidate for…….(我很荣幸地推荐……作为候选人)

6.Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks.(请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。)

7.Thank you for your attention.(就你对此事的关注不胜感激)

邀请信(A Letter of Invitation)

1.I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on ……(我代表我系全体学生邀请您为我们就……进行讲座)

2.I am writing on behalf of all the members of our club to extend to you our formal invitation to visit ……

3.We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on……

4.The honor of your presence is requested...（若你能出席……，我（们）将感到万分荣幸。）

5.It's a pleasure for me to invite you to...（我很荣幸地邀请你参加……）。

6.Please kindly confirm that you will be able to attend the meeting by advising us of

your time and we can arrange for you to be met.7.I will cover all the expense involved.（我将负担所有的费用。）

拒绝信（A Letter of refusal）

1.many thanks for your letter dated 10th October ,inviting me to …….I amsorry to tell you that I shall not ……because……

2.I am terribly sorry to say that I am unable to ……

3.Thank you for inviting me to the meeting,I 'd like to go very much,but it is pity that I am so busy with my work for the moment and I cannot go.4.I am much touched by your kind invitation but I do not see any chance of my being able to be there in the near future.5.Thank you for your interest to pursue a career with our company.We were impressed that you chose our company to enhance your career potential.While we were convinced that you could make a contribution to our company, we have not identified a suitable position that fits your experience and qualifications.Your application will be retained for our future consideration.申请信（A Letter of Application）

1.I amwriting to you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of ……which you advertised in Yesterday’s China Daily.(我写信想表达我对你们在昨日中国日报上刊登广告中所说职位的浓厚兴趣)

2.In reply to your advertisement in……,I beg to apply for the post of……in your company.3.I would like to apply for the position of……(我想申请……)

4.I would like to apply for the scholarship(奖学金)that your school may be offering.the membership of your club(会员资格)

5.I am very glad to avail myself of the chance to recommend myself to you.my name is …….I’m studying in……,majoring in……(非常荣幸利用这个机会向你推荐我自己)

6.I graduated from……university in ……,majoring in……

7.I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job.(我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作)

8.The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interested me.(贵公司目前从事的这种工作特别让我感兴趣)

9.It seems to me that this experience,together with my education,has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of ……in a firm such as yours.(对我来说，这些经验加上我的学历，使我具备了担任贵公司……一职的条件)

10.Would you please send me the necessary application form and any further details about……

11.I am available for an interview at any time.(随时恭候面试)

12.I request an interview,and assure you that if appointed,I will do my best to give you

satisfaction.(恳请惠予面试之荣。如蒙录用，本人必竭尽全力，为公司服务，以符厚望。)

13.Should this application meet with your favorable consideration,I will do my utmost to justify the confidence you repose in me.（对此申请，贵公司如惠予考虑，本人必竭尽全力，为公司效劳）

回信开头：

1.Thank you for your letter of November 29,telling me that……

2.It’s good to hear from you and know that……

3.Thank you for the information about……

4.I’m sorry that it has taken me so long to replyin answering……

5.I’m very delighted to receive your letter dated November 29,but sorry to hear ……

6.Thanks very much for your kind invitation.I feel quite honored that someone noticed me.I'd be delighted to accept the invitation.[示例]

June 18th, 2009 Dear Sir or Madam，I'm a Chinese student who will graduate from college in the coming July and wishes to study for M.A.degree in your university.my plan is to start mycourse next term and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with the information below.First, what are the qualifications neededfor studying as a postgraduate student in your university? I'm going to take bachelor's degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if they'reany furtheracademic requirements.Do I need to take the GRE test? Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I wonder if there are any scholarships available for the international students.Third, what about the accommodation? I would prefera single room, which is more conducive to studying.But if single rooms are expensive, I would be willing to share.,I'm looking forward to your early reply, and to attending your prestigious institution.Sincerely yours,Li Ming

第五篇：英语四级作文书信

2002年1月份四级作文范文KK版

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

分析：这篇作文为典型的信件应用文，中文提示部分指出可以写成表扬，也可以写成批评建议，也可以兼而有之。这里建议大家在写作时以批评建议为主，加上少部分的赞扬来写作，因为对于食堂服务这种大众经常诟病的话题写批评建议更加有话可说。因此这篇文章可以当成投诉建议信来处理。

文章格式：正文三段式。但是请注意英文信件的格式，首先在信件左上角写上收信人是谁，这篇文章的收信人是校长，所以写Dear Mr.President。如果当你不知道收信人是谁的时候，可以写Dear Sir or Madam，或者写成To whom it may concern。在正文结束之后，请在右下角写上落款Yours sincerely，Li Ming（注意要写成两行）正文部分：

第一段：信件作文的第一段可以写成2句。第一句表明身份，说明自己是谁，第二句说明自己的写信目的。

第二段：提出你认为的餐厅不好的地方和好的地方。在写作时可以就食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等方面构思。第三段：希望对方重视你提出的问题，并且期待对方回信。Dear Mr.President，My name is Li Ming and I major in Economics.I venture to write this letter because I am not content with the canteen service on campus.(注：这里是学生写给校长可以用I venture to write this letter，口气比较谦卑，也可以直接使用I am wrting to来表示写作目的)Although the canteen workers are very patient and always friendly，students are complaining about the unsatisdying service of it.(注：此句为二段主题句)To begiin with, the quality of the dishes should be improved due to the fact that all the dishes available are the same all the year round.What is more, the price is always too high so we hope that the canteen can provide us with not only deletable but also cheaper food.Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood.I suggest that there should be some soft

music to help us relax.These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of many other students.We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to hearing from you.sincerely，Liming

Yours