六级作文训练(十七)[大全]

第一篇：六级作文训练(十七)[大全]

在家办公

Working from Home

Certain companies, especially some small-scale businesses, start to encourage their staff to work from home or use home as their working base for at least part of the week nowadays.Some offer some forms of remote working support to their work-forces, such as equipping them with laptops and installing broadband, and others pay for the telephone bills for these workers.一些公司，特别是一些小型企业，开始鼓励他们的员工在家工作，或使用家庭为他们的工作基础，至少部分的周现在。有些提供远程工作的支持某种形式的工作力量，如配备笔记本电脑和安装宽带，和其他人为这些工人付电话费。

This work pattern is popular because it’s clear that there are a number of benefits for these companies.First, it helps retain employees, especially highly-qualified working parents with childcare responsibilities.Second, it brings higher productivity because the employees have fewer interruptions and less commuting time.Last but not least it offers savings on premises and other facilities.这种工作模式的流行是因为它很清楚，有许多这些公司的好处。首先，它有助于留住员工，特别是高度合格的工作的父母与孩子的责任。第二，它带来了更高的生产率，因为员工更少的中断和减少通勤时间。最后但并非最不重要的研究提供了前提和其他设施的储蓄。

However, there are some potential drawbacks.For one thing, there is difficulty of managing home workers and monitoring their performance and difficulty of maintaining staff development and upgrading skills.For another, it may create a sense of isolation among home workers and it can be harder to maintain team spirit.Therefore, enterprises should weigh the pros and cons before permitting their employees to work at home.然而，也有一些潜在的缺陷。一方面，有管理家庭工人和监测其性能和维护困难员工的发展和技术升级的困难。另一方面，它可以创造一种在家工作者分离可能会很难保持团队精神。因此，企业应权衡利弊之前允许员工在家工作。

第二篇：六级作文训练(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培养自我保护意识

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多关于性侵的事件媒体揭露和报道。我认为人们应该从这些事件中得到一些启示，比如，提高和加强自我保护意识教育，特别是对于儿童和学生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因这类事件伤害最大的是儿童和学生。因此，提高和加强自我保护意识是必须的。此外，加强防范危险的意识也是很重要的。如果他们能在事情发生前意识到某人或某事的潜在危险，他们就可以做一些准备来以避免和减少受伤率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我认为父母应该帮助他们的孩子从出生开始就培养自我保护意识，比如，设计一些情况来让他们应付。父母还应该教导孩子认识危险，如何避免和减少来自外界的危险。此外，孩子也需要培养优秀的观察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.总之，保护儿童需要家长和孩子他们自己的努力。

第三篇：六级作文训练(十一)

跳槽之我见

My View on Job-Hopping

Nowadays, many youth changes their jobs frequently which have aroused large focus by public.Some people think young people should stick to one job until they learn things.But others think if young people have higher salary or position, they could change their jobs as well as they like.In my opinion, I prefer the second one.如今，许多年轻人频繁更换工作已引起社会广大关注，一些人认为年轻人因专注在一份工作知道他们学习到东西，但另外一些人认为若年轻人有更高工资，职位的工作，只要他们愿意他们可以随意换工作。我赞同第二种观点。

Firstly, many students don’t know what kinds of job they really want after graduate, but if they practice and change constantly, they may find the favor one.Moreover, change means step forward.Of course, they will choose the one with high pay or high position.首先，很多学生毕业后不知道自己真正想做什么，但如果他们不断尝试和改变，他们马能会找到最喜欢的那份中作，另外，改变意味着进步，他们会选择工资，职位高的工作，是理所当然的。

Secondly, changing job means knowing more people.Youth could learn more skills from different bosses and colleagues, and make friends with ex-boss or workers;It must be huge relation recourse for their career.第二，更换工作可以认识更多的人，年轻人可以向不同的老板和同事学习，也可以跟前老板和同事做朋友，这为他们的事业提供了大量的人脉。

Thirdly, changing jobs could exercise youth’s ability, especially adaptability.When young people meet the new environment and new people, they need times to adapt all of it.If they experience more, they would make themselves become the member of the collective as soon as possible, which also advantage for their works.第三，改变工作可以锻炼年轻人的能力，尤其是适应力。当年轻人进入新环境，遇见新同事，他们需要时间去适应这一切，如果他们在这方面有经验，他们可以更快的成为集体一员，这对他们的工作也有利。

To sum up, it’s reasonable to change their jobs if youth have the chance.总之，如果年轻人改变工作是理所应当的，如果他们有机会的话。

第四篇：文言文翻译训练十七

文言文翻译训练十七

（一）卫人教子

卫人嫁其子而教之曰：“必私积聚。为人妇而出，常也；成其居，幸也。”其子因私积聚，其姑以为多私而出之，其子所以反者，倍其所以嫁。其父不自罪教子非也，而自知其益富。

今人臣之处官者皆是类也。

所以：用来„„的东西。倍：加倍，动词。罪：怪罪，归罪。类：类似，相似。

卫国有个人，当他的女儿出嫁时，教训她说：“一定要偷偷地多积攒私房，做人家的媳妇被遗弃回娘家，是常有的事。不被遗弃，夫妻能够白头偕老，这是侥幸的。”他的女儿到了婆家后，果然拚命积攒私房。婆婆嫌她私心太重，于是把她赶回娘家了。这个女儿带回的钱财比出嫁时带去的嫁妆还要多出一倍。她的父亲不归罪于自己教导女儿不正确，反而自以为他增加财富的办法很聪明。如今做官的人，都这样相似呀。

〔这则寓言揭露了那些贪官污吏惟利是图、寡廉鲜耻的丑恶面目和内心世界。它也告诫人们，要重视良好的教育环境。〕

（二）盲子坠溪

有盲子道涸溪，桥上失坠，两手攀木盾，兢兢握固，自分失手，必坠深渊。过者告曰：“毋怖，第放下即实地也。”盲子不信，握木盾号。久之力惫，失手坠地，乃自哂曰：“嘻！蚤知即实地，何久自苦耶！”

夫大道甚夷，沉空守寂，执一隅以自矜严者，视此省哉！

蚤：通“早”。夷：平坦。矜：同情。省：察看，反省。

有个瞎子，路过干涸的小河，不幸从桥上失足坠落。他两手攀着桥栏干，战战兢兢地紧握不放，自己料想：如果一松手，就必定掉进深潭。过桥的人告诉他说：“不要害怕，只管放开手，下面是干涸了的地面。”这个瞎子不相信，抱着栏杆大哭大叫，久而久之，精惫力尽了，便失手掉到地下，安然无恙，于是讥笑自己说：“咳！早知道下面是干涸了的平地，何必如此自讨苦吃呢！”

道路本来是平坦的，但陷入空想，抓住某点感受，就自恐命危的人，看到这个瞎子可以省悟了吧！

〔不要固执己见，作茧自缚，要善于听取别人正确意见，勇于探索创新。〕

（三）鲁丹散金

鲁丹三说中山之君而不受也，因散五十金事其左右。复见，未语，而君与之食。鲁丹出，而不反舍，遂去中山。其御曰：“反见，乃始善我，何故去之？”鲁丹曰：“夫以人言善我，必以人言罪我。”未出境，而公子恶之曰：“为赵来间中山。”君因索而罪之。

去：离开。以：因为，介词。恶：形作动，说坏话，中伤。间：离间。鲁丹多次劝说中山国的国君，而中山君不接受，鲁丹于是分送五十金给中山君左右的人。他再拜见中山君时，还没说话，中山君就赐给他酒食。鲁丹出来，不返回住处，就离开了中山国。为他驾车的人问：“一见面，国君就开始欣赏我们，为什么要离开呢？”鲁丹说：“因为别人的话而对我好，也一定会因为别人的话而治我罪。”鲁丹还未走出国境，中山国的公子就中伤他说：“鲁丹是为赵国刺探中山国的情报的。”中山国国君就下令搜捕他，治他的罪。

（四）弥子食桃

昔者弥子瑕见爱于卫君。卫国之法，窃驾君车者罪至刖。既而弥子之母病，人闻，往夜告之，弥子矫驾君车而出。君闻之而贤之曰：“孝哉，为母之故而犯刖罪！”与君游果园，弥子食桃而甘，不尽而奉君。君曰：“爱我哉，忘其口而念我！” 及弥子色衰而爱弛，得罪于君。君曰：“是尝矫驾吾车，又尝食我以其余桃。”故弥子之行未变于初也，前见贤而后获罪者，爱憎之至变也。故有爱于主，则知当而加亲；见憎于主，则罪当而加疏。故谏说之士不可不察爱憎之主而后说之矣。

见：表被动，相当于“被”。窃：偷偷地。矫：假传（命令）。贤：形作动，认为„„有道德。甘：形作动，觉得甜。及：等到。食：sì，给„„吃。

从前弥子瑕被卫国君主宠爱。按照卫国的法律,偷驾君车的人要判断足的罪。不久,弥子瑕的母亲病了,有人知道这件事，就连夜通知他，弥子瑕就诈称主的命令驾着君主的车子出去了。君主听到这件事反而赞美他说：“多孝顺啊，为了母亲的病竟愿犯下断足的惩罚！”弥子瑕和卫君到果园去玩，弥子瑕吃到一个甜桃子，没吃完就献给卫君。卫君说：“真爱我啊，自己不吃却想着我！” 等到弥子瑕容色衰退，卫君对他的宠爱也疏淡了，后来得罪了卫君。卫君说：“这个人曾经诈称我的命令驾我的车，还曾经把咬剩下的桃子给我吃。”弥子瑕的德行和当初一样没有改变，以前所以被认为孝顺而后来被治罪的原因，是由于卫君对他的爱憎有了极大的改变。所以说，被君主宠爱时就认为他聪明能干，愈加亲近。被君主憎恶了，就认为他罪有应得，就愈加疏远。因此，劝谏游说的人，不能不调查君主的爱憎态度之后再游说他。

（五）黄粱一梦

吕翁经邯郸道上，邸舍中，有少年卢生自叹贫困，言讫思睡，主方炊黄粱。翁探囊中一枕以授生，曰：“枕此即荣遇如意。”生枕之，梦自枕窍入，至一国，功名得意，身历富贵五十年，老病而卒。欠伸而寤，顾吕翁在傍，主人炊黄粱犹未熟。生谢曰：“先生以此窒吾之欲。”

讫：完毕。以：把，介词。窍：孔，洞。窒：阻塞。

吕翁经过邯郸的路上，在旅馆舍中，有个姓卢的年轻人叹息自己很贫穷困苦，说完想睡，店主人正煮黄粱。吕翁伸手从布袋里拿出一个枕头交给那姓卢的年轻人；说：“枕上这个枕头就可以得到美好的遭遇而使你样样满意了。”姓卢的年轻人枕着以后，梦见从自己枕头的小孔进到一个国家做官非常得意，亲身享受富贵五十年，年老生病而死。这时，伸伸懒腰，打个哈欠就醒了，回头看到吕翁还在身旁，店主人煮的黄粱还没有熟。姓卢的年轻人感谢吕翁说：“先生用个枕头堵住了我心中的私欲。”

（六）孟子曰：孔子登东山而小鲁，登泰山而小天下。故观于海者难为水，游于圣人之门者难为言。观水有术，必观其澜。日月有明，容光必照焉。小：形容词意动用法，认为„„小。术：方法。

孟子说：“孔子登上东山，就觉得鲁国太小了；登上了泰山就觉得天下也不算大了；所以，对于见到过海洋的人，别的水就很难被他看得起了；对于曾在圣人门下学习过的人，一般的议论就很难被他看重了。看水有方法，一定要看它的汹涌的波涛。日月都能发出光辉，哪怕一个小缝隙也一定照到。

文言文翻译训练十八

（一）守道不仕

干木，晋人也，守道不仕。魏文侯欲见，造其门，干木逾墙避之。文侯以客礼待之，出过其闾而轼。其仆曰：‘君何轼？’曰：‘段干木贤者也，不趣势利，怀

君子之道，隐处穷巷，声驰千里，吾安得勿轼！干木先乎德，寡人先乎势；干木富乎义，寡人富乎财。势不若德贵，财不若义高。’又请为相，不肯。后卑己固请见，与语，文侯立倦不敢息。

造：动词，后面带表示地点的宾语，意思是“往，到„„去”。轼：扶着轼敬礼。

其：代文侯。趣：同“趋”。先：名词意动用法，以„„为首要（重要）的事情。

富：形容词，多。

段干木是晋国人，坚持高尚理想

识所守，臣实不喻。”太宗深纳之。

以：介词，把。闻：使动用法，使„„知道。谢：谢罪，道歉。是：正确，对的。

罢：停止。喻：明白。

房玄龄和高士廉一起走路，遇上少府少监窦德素，问他说：“北门近来有什么建筑工程？”德素将这件事告诉了唐太宗。太宗对房玄龄、高士廉说：“你们只须管好南衙的事务就行了，我在北门建造一项小小的工程，又妨碍你们什么事呢？”房玄龄等人跪拜道歉。魏征进谏说：“我不理解陛下您（为什么）责备（房玄龄等人），也不理解房玄龄等人（为什么）道歉。（他们）既然担任大臣，就是陛下的得力助手，（陛下）有什么工程建筑，为什么不能让他们知道。（陛下您）责备他们向主管官员询问（的做法），（是）我所不能理解的。陛下所做的事情如果是对的，（大臣们）就应当帮助陛下完成它；所做的事情如果是不对的，（大臣们）就应当奏请（陛下）罢免它。这是辅助君主的正道。房玄龄等的询问既然没有罪，而陛下却责备他们，房玄龄等也不知道自己应当坚守职责，我实在不明白（这其中的原因）。”太宗很赞同他的话。

（三）赵襄主学御于王子期，俄而与子期逐；三易马而三后。襄主曰：“子之教我御，术未尽也！”对曰：“术已尽，用之则过也。凡御之所贵，马体安于车，人心调于马，而后可以进速致远。今君后则欲逮臣，先则恐逮于臣。夫诱道争远，非先则后也；而先后心皆在于臣，上何以调于马？此君之所以后也！”

御：驾车。易：更换。后：落后。致：到达。

赵襄主向王子于期学赶车，学了不久便与王子于期比赛；在比赛 中他换了三次马，结果每次都落在后面。赵襄主埋怨说：“你教我赶车，还留了一手呢。”王子于期回答说：“技术已经全教给您了，是您用的不对。赶车最要紧的是，要使马套在车上能舒适妥贴，赶车人的注意力要集中放在调理马上，然后才能赶得快，跑得远。在这次比赛中，您落在后面的时候就光相赶上我，跑在前面的时候又怕被我赶上去。其实引马上路去赛跑，不是领先就是落后；可是您无论领先还是落后，注意力都集中在我身上，哪里还顾得上调理马？这就是您落后的原因啊！”

（四）宋之丁氏，家无井而出溉汲，常一人居外。及其家穿井，告人曰：“吾穿井得一人。”有闻而传之者，曰：“丁氏穿井得一人。”国人道之，闻之于宋君。宋君令人问之于丁氏。丁氏对曰：“得一人之使，非得一人于井中也。”汲：打水。及：等到。国人：国都的人。于：被，介词。

宋国有一个姓丁的人，家里没有井就出去洗东西和取水，常常一个人住在外面。

等到他的家里打井时，他告诉别人说：“我打井得一人。”有的人听了他的话然后转述道：“丁氏打井得一人。”国人谈论这件事，宋国的国君听到了者件事。他就派人去问姓丁的。姓丁的回答说：“得一个人使用，不是在井里得到一个人。” 象这样听信传闻，不如不听。

（五）齐人有欲得金者，清旦被衣冠，往鬻金者之所，见人操金，攫而夺之。吏搏而束缚之，问曰：“人皆在焉，子攫人之金，何也？”对曰：“殊不见人，徒见金耳！”被：通“披”。鬻：卖。所：处所，地方。殊：完全。

齐国有个想得到金子的人，清早穿好衣服戴好帽子，前往卖金子的人聚集的场所，看见人拿着金子，就抢夺过来。衙役将他抓住并绑了起来，问道：“人们都在这里，您还抢别人的金子，为什么？”回答说：“完全看不见人，只看见金子啊！”

第五篇：精选六级作文

The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以这样理解：城市史人创造的，它不断地演进、演化和成长为一个有机系统。人是这个有机系统中最具活力和最富有创新能力的细胞。人的生活与城市的形态和发展密切互动。随着城市化进程的加速，城市的有机系统与地球大生物圈和资源体系之间相互作用也日益加深和扩大。人、城市和地球三个有机系统环环相扣，这种关系贯穿了城市发展的历程，三者也将日益融合成为一个不可分割的整体。

For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.为了更好地理解“城市，让生活更美好”，上海世博会还设有五个副主题分别是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市经济的繁荣”、“城市科技的创新”、“城市社区的重塑”、“城市和乡村的互动”。

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避错指导

本次作文在题材上，虽然仍然延续了我们所熟悉的校园类话题，但与社会背景有很大关系。刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会使环保减排这个主题成为焦点，在全世界都提倡可持续发展、和谐发展这一背景下的“绿色校园”，同时也是一个社会热点话题，这是我们审题时所必须考虑的。另外开篇时，切忌拖泥带水，应直截了当，使阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。

【生动的用词】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound长远的;sustainable可持续的;recyclable可循环的。

【丰富的短语】bring benefit to带来利益;play a crucial role in发挥关键作用;under the burden of在„„重负下;come true实现;call for要求。

【同义词转换】

作文表达除了准确，还要做到句式多变，词汇灵活多样。

1.realize → be aware of 意识到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我们最好意识到周围污染的严峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育学生意识到保护环境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引导

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.这有助于引导大学生的行为。

【话题备考锦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“绿色校园”绝不仅仅是一个绿色环境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建设“绿色校园”将会极大激励学生参与环境保护。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.为全面实施“绿色校园”，必须采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校园建设不仅对学生的身体发展很重要，而且对他们的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫无疑问，对于绿色校园应该给与更多的思考。

【话题词汇拓展】

devastation n.毁坏

disastrous a.损失惨重的 doom v.厄运，毁灭

existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的

messy a.肮脏的，凌乱的 participation n.分享，参与

preserve v.保存，保护

preventive a.预防性的 purify v.澄清，净化

stimulation n.激励，鼓舞

arouse consciousness 唤起意识 1.上图所示为某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年参加成人教育(或继续教育)的人数情况，请描述其变化;

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从社会发展及竞争能力方面加以说明)

3.请预测我国成人教育(继续教育)的前景

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中国传统节日受到冷遇，西方节日日益升温已成为趋势

2.形成这种现象的原因

3.你对这种现象的态度

【范文】

The Prevalence of Western Holidays

It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.据统计，在网上聊天交友、玩网络游戏是目前我国大学生上网的主要活动内容

2.专家认为，那些沉迷于聊天和游戏的大学生，不仅耗费了金钱、时间和精力，还影响了正常的学业和人际交往

3.我们应当如何看待大学生上网的问题

【范文】

What are College Students doing on the Internet?

Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的选择

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校园“考证族”的队伍不断壮大，很多学生忙于考区各种资格证书 大学生忙考证的利弊 你的观点

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好词佳句]

好词佳句总结：

fever 狂热可用指某种现象

vocational qualification 职业证照

work-related 与工作有关

credentials 学历资历等的资格

at the expense of以„„为牺牲

同学们注意下范文最后一句，使用该句式又稳妥，又能拿个不错的分数。

From my point of view, what matters most is„ not„

1)道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损 2)分析道路事故发生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故发生率

行文思路：

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。

高分范文：

Road Accidents

Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英语六级作文预测范文第二篇

1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前

2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题

3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。

【参考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

1)有些人会选择收入高但工作时间长的工作；有些人则宁愿选择收入低但工作时间却相对较短的工作

2)如果让你选择，你会选择哪种工作？理由是„

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的工作选择，提纲第2点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对工作的两种不同选择倾向：一些人即使需要工作更长的时间也会选择收入高的工作，一些人则宁愿拿低工资也会选择工作时间较短的工作；表明“我”会选择什么类型的工作，说明“我”这样选择的理由。

【参考范文】

My Choice for Job

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。

However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。

As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。

1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人

2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起了许多关注

3)你怎么看？为什么？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议的现象，提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述年轻人热衷选秀节目的现象，引出对其的争议；表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法，并说明“我”的理由。

【参考范文】

Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象

2)产生这一现象的原因

3)如何解决这一问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。

【参考范文】

College Students’Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠远的汽笛声中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和泪水交汇。这是挥别的一刻：向母亲、父亲、儿子、女儿、妻子、丈夫、恋人、老师、学生、朋友、同事、邻居„„；向5月12日14时28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、忧愁、欢喜„„那些美丽的温馨日子。

今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暂的告别。生命，并非仅仅是呼吸和心跳。生离死别，不是生命的边界。亲人们没有离去，一切都将延续。在废墟上嘹亮的婴儿啼哭声里，一个叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。

May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，让我们所有中华儿女永远记住这一天吧，我们的“国难日”，中华民族的历史本上，铭刻了太多的灾难，但这永远也难掩我们民族的辉煌，一次次的灾难，一次次的负重前行，那么就让我们掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干净所有的废墟，在曾经是家园的土地上，重建我们的家园，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。

Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往会变得相当脆弱，灾后重建，坚强就变得尤其重要，三分钟过后，我们要擦干眼泪，我们不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因为亲人会在天堂看着我们，痛不欲生、伤心欲绝不是他们想看到的，好地地活下去，是他们对我们的期望，想一想，那废墟中以已命换子命的母亲，“亲爱的宝贝，如果你能活下去，要记住，妈妈爱你”；想一想那为了救四个孩子而牺牲了的老师，我们的走了的这些亲人，用自己的生命给我们争来了活的机会，为了他们，我们也要活的更好。

We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。

对于我们所有中国人来说，都是一个终生难忘记的日子，因为今天，是我们的“国难日”，悲情汶川，举国志哀，我们用这样一种方式，来纪念那些在地震中逝去的亲人，我们用这样的一种方式，为他们招魂，在奔向天国的路上，希望他们能够一路走好，当他们回头遥望故土大地时，会看见成千上万的他们的同胞手足，在仰望苍穹为他们祈祷，所以他们不会孤独、不会寂寞。

1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的

2)阐述他们各自的考虑

3)表明你的看法

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。

[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。

[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。

[4]“因为缺钱”。

[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。

[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。

[7]“一般来说”。

[8]“选择”。

1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。

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1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大学生自主创业已经很普遍

2.大学生自主创业的好处

3.我的看法

范文：

Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)