英语六级写作万能文章结构[五篇模版]

第一篇：英语六级写作万能文章结构

英语六级写作万能文章结构

第1段：引语引用+简单评论段

1文章第一句话：直接引用引语

1.1.第一句的第一种写法： 名人名言

○1“.”Sb.once said.○2 Sb.once said，“.”

○3 I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb., who once said, “.”

我想你应该熟悉sb.说过的一句话，他曾经说过：“.”

1.2第一句的第二种写法： 俗语/常言/习语/成语/谚语○1 As the commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes，“.”

○2 I assume that you are familiar with saying, which is commonly-heard , “.”

我想你应该熟悉一句耳熟能详的俗语/常言习语/谚语，是这么说的：“.”

2文章第二句话：简化引语+表层评论

2.1用自己的语言说明、解释抽象和凝练的引语，保持原意的同时，使之简洁易懂；

本句根据题目引语内容，自由发挥

2.2对引语的表层含义进行评论：就引语的“事”说“事”，不要上升到人生哲理高度

It is obvious that …

文章第二句话写法真题举例：

(1.2.1)Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours.(1.2.2)It is obvious that a full preparation can help people enhance the efficiency of trees-chopping.[2011-12月CET6]

(1.2.1)Quitting smoking is so easy as long as you keep away from cigarettes.However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of cigarette and then give up their attempt to quit smoking.(1.2.2)It is obvious that no one can quit smoking with ease without strong will and determination.[2011-12月CET4]

第2段：意义阐述段

3.文章第三句话：由表及里，提炼挖掘引语的深层含义

3.1 The saying/proverb/ sb's remark aims at informing us of the significance of A.3.2 Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of A.4.文章第四句话： 强调A的重要性

4.1 There is no denying that we can not emphasize the importance of

A too much.4.2 why does A.play an indispensable role in our life/ work/ pursuit of success ?

5.文章第五句话： 论述A的重要性

5.1 A will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly.The more Communicative/Modest/ Honest /Cooperative/ Inclusive we are, the more likely we are to build harmonious relationships and master more resources which is advantageous to their success.两个衍生体：action & plan

Action will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly.The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.Making plan will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly.The more detailed plan we make , the more likely we are to make full use of time, enhance our work efficiency make full preparation for unexpected cases/

5.2 A is crucial for every individual.With its seemingly magic power, A can not only better accelerate individuals' development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world.[The consciousness of innovation/ Confidence/ Dream / Objective / Diligence]

5.3 Those who possess A are always admired and respected, because

A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and approach challenges.Those people appear to

possess a special charm, bringing to others hope, passion and surprise, and, thus winning others' favor and trust.[A strong will/ Persistence/ Perseverance/Optimism /Ppassion/ Enthusiasm/ Hope / Courage / Patience ]

6.文章第六句话：举例论述A的重要性

6.1 Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of A.However, I can think of no better illustration than the following one:

6.2 To further demonstrate the importance of A, I would like to take sb.as a case in point.举例公式：

Sb.,插入语, how could he/she do sth.without A ?

第三段：结合实际

7.文章第七句话：铭记A的重要性

7.1 In view of the importance of A, we should always keep firmly/bear in mind that A will exert a profound influence on our life/work/health/personality.7.2 From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of A.8.文章第八句话：采取具体行动，践行A的重要精神

8.1 Accordingly，we should foster the consciousness of A by doing sth.Develop the habit of A in our work/daily life.8.2 在日常生活/工作中，运用A来解决问题

Hence, what we must do is to to carry out a full investigation, set up a proper goal and draw up a detailed plan before we take actions.[2011-12月CET6]

Hence, when confronted with difficulties and setbacks, we need to grit our teeth and stick to the belief/faith that where there is a will, there is a way.[2011-12月CET4]

9.文章第九句话： 名人名言，呼应主题

“.”Sb.also once said.常用名言警句：

1.Living without an aim is like sailing without an aim.Alexander Dumas(Davy de La Pailleterie, French Writer)生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针.(法国作家大仲马.A.)

2.Genius only means hard-working all one's life.(Mendeleyer, Russian Chemist)天才只意味着终身不懈的努力.(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)

3.patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet.(Jean Jacques Rousseau , French thinker)忍耐是痛苦的,但它的果实是甜蜜的.(法国思想家卢梭.J.J.)

4.I am a slow walker, but I never walk backwards.(Abraham Lincoln , American president)

我走得慢，但我从不后退(美国总统林肯.A.)

5.Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly

ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.(Friedrich Schiller, German Dramatist and poet).只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人, 才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事.(德国剧作家, 诗人席勒.F.)

6.You have to believe in yourself.That's the secret of success.(Charles Chaplin , American actor)人你必须要对自己有信心，那是成功的秘诀(美国演员卓别林.C.)

7.Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money;it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort.(Franklin Roosevelt , American president)成功不仅仅在于拥有钱，还在于成就带来的喜悦，和努力带来的兴奋(美国总统罗斯福.F.)

8.None of us is as smart as all of us.Winston Churchill 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮~丘吉尔

第二篇：英语六级写作文章

2014.2.27英语六级写作文章

The Road to Happiness

If you look around at the men and women whom you can call happy, you will see that they all have certain things in common.The most important of these things is an activity which at most gradually builds up something that you are glad to see coming into existence.Women who take an instinctive pleasure in their children can get this kind of satisfaction out of bringing up a family.Artists and authors and men of science get happiness in this way if their own work seems good to them.But there are many humbler forms of the same kind of pleasure.Many men who spend their working life in the city devote their weekends to voluntary and unremunerated toil in their gardens, and when the spring comes, they experience all the joys of having created beauty.The whole subject of happiness has, in my opinion,been treated too solemnly.It had been thought that man cannot be happy without a theory of life or a religion.Perhaps those who have been rendered unhappy by a bad theory may need a better theory to help them to recovery, just as you may need a tonic when you have been ill.But when things are normal a man should be healthy without a tonic and happy without a theory.It is the simple things that really matter.If a man delights in his wife and children, has success in work, and finds pleasure in the alternation of day and night, spring and autumn, he will be happy whatever his philosophy may be.If, on the other hand, he finds his wife fateful, his children’s noise unendurable, and the office a nightmare;if in the daytime he longs for night, and at night sighs for the light of day, then what he needs is not a new philosophy but a new regimen —a different diet, or more exercise, or what not.Man is an animal, and his happiness depends on his physiology more than he likes to think.This is a humble conclusion, but I cannot make myself disbelieve it.Unhappy businessmen, I am convinced,would increase their happiness more by walking six miles every day than by any conceivable change of philosophy.英语六级写作练习

Relationship Between Major and Future Job工作和所学专业不相符现在很多人工作的具体内容和其在大学所学的专业知识相关性并不大。出现这种现象的原因。3 我的看法

题目分析：

被迫学习自己不喜欢的专业绝对是种痛苦，Chance对此略有体会。写作可先从所学专业和未来工作之间关系开始讨论，接着罗列出现该现象的原因，如盲目报考热门专业，未真正找到自身兴趣所在等等。最后，给出自己观点，本文最好采用正面观点：尽管专业不对口，自己也要适应。

引用

参考例文：

Relationship Between Major and Future Job

It’s a striking fact that there isn’t necesary relationship between one’s major and specific job duties for majority of people.Many people condemn this on outdated education system an some even complain that textbooks are useless.This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First of all , it’s a common sense that there alwasys exists a gap between theory and practice.This gap needs to be bridged by continuous exporation of similarities and differences between these two factors and accordingly corresponding modification.Secondly, due to the rapid development of technology, the knowledge from textbooks becomes behind the times soon.And it will lead to the disassociation between1

what one acquired in college education and what he does at work.From my point of view, when faced with the disassociation, one should adapt himself to working environment as soon as possible by adjusting his own information system.What’s more important, life-long learing is essential to one’s career success.Even after one reached the required levels from college education curriculum, pursuit of knowledge should never be ceased.Last but not the least, we should bear this firmly in mind that one’s ability is valued much more than one’s academic degree.不健康生活习惯

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Unhealthy Habits of College Students.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯，例如：晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏。。

2.这种不健康生活习惯的危害3.如何纠正

写作思路依然是反复强调的功能段落的写作思路：首段为负面现象描述(即提出问题)，二段为问题分析(危害)，尾段为建议措施。

It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among young people, especially college students.Typical examples include staying up late, being addicted to games, consuming in an inappropriate way.Thus, due attention should be paid to students’ daily habits.Apparently, these bad habits may generate negative impacts.To begin with, they may impair students’ physical health and psychological fitness.In addition, what worries many teachers is that they may also exert negative influences on students’ academic performance.To conclude, never can we turn a blind eye to these phenomena.In view of the seriousness of this issue, it is time that we took effective measure.Firstly, it is suggested that universities or colleges should cultivate students’ awareness of healthy living.Secondly, students themselves are well-advised to learn to regulate and control their own life appropriately.Only by doing so, can we hope to see the ideal scenes in which students enjoy their colorful and healthy life in Ivory Tower.请将下面这段话翻译成英文：

在人际关系上我们不能太浪漫主义。人是很有趣的，往往在接触一个人时首先看到的都是他或她的优点。这一点颇像是在餐馆里用餐的经验。开始吃头盘或冷碟的时候，印象很好。吃头两个主菜时，也是赞不绝口，愈吃愈趋于冷静，吃完了这顿筵席，缺点就都找出来了。参考翻译：

We should not be too romantic in the interperonal relations.People are interesting in this way.When they meet a person,what they are see at first is always the good points of his or hers,which is like dining in a restaurant.You will be not only favorably impressed with the first dish or cold dishes,but also profuse in praise of the first two main courses.However,the more you have,the more somber you become until the dinner ends up with all the flaws exposed.六级阅读

British universities, groaning under the burden of a huge increase in student numbers, are warning that the tradition of a free education is at risk.The universities have threatened to impose an admission fee on students to plug a gap in revenue if the government does not act to improve their finances and scrap some public spending cutbacks.The government responded to the universities’ threat by setting up the most fundamental review of higher education for a generation, under a non-party troubleshooter(调停人)，Sir Ron

Dearing.One in three school-leavers enters higher education, five times the number when the last review took place thirty years ago.Everyone agrees a system that is feeling the strain after rapid expansion needs a lot more money-but there is little hope of getting it from the taxpayer and not much scope for attracting more finance from business.Most colleges believe students should contribute to tuition costs, something that is common elsewhere in the world but would mark a revolutionary change in Britain.Universities want the government to introduce a loan scheme for tuition fees and have suspended their own threatened action for now.They await Dearing’s advice, hoping it will not be too late-some are already reported to be in financial difficulty.As the century nears its end, the whole concept of what a university should be is under the microscope.Experts ponder how much they can use computers instead of classrooms, talk of the need for lifelong learning and refer to students as “consumers.”

The Confederation(联盟)of British Industry, the key employers’ organization, wants even more expansion in higher education to help fight competition on world markets from booming Asian economies.But the government has doubts about more expansion.The Times newspaper egress, complaining that quality has suffered as student numbers soared, with close tutorial supervision giving way to “mass production methods more typical of European universities.”

21.The chief concern of British universities is ________.A)how to tackle their present financial difficulty

B)how to expand the enrollment to meet the needs of enterprises

C)how to improve their educational technology

D)how to put an end to the current tendency of quality deterioration

22.We can learn from the passage that in Britain ________.A)the government pays dearly for its financial policy

B)universities are mainly funded by businesses

C)higher education is provided free of charge

D)students are ready to accept loan schemes for tuition

23.What was the percentage of high school graduates admitted to universities in Britain thirty years ago?

A)20% or so.B)About 15%.C)Above 30%.D)Below 10%.24.It can be inferred from the passage that ________.A)the British government will be forced to increase its spending on higher education

B)British employers demand an expansion in enrollment at the expense of quality

C)the best way out for British universities is to follow their European counterparts

D)British students will probably have to pay for their higher education in the near future

25.Which of the following is the viewpoint of the Times newspaper?

A)Expansion in enrollment is bound to affect the quality of British higher education.B)British universities should expand their enrollment to meet the needs of industry.C)European universities can better meet the needs of the modern world.D)British universities should help fight competition on world markets.

第三篇：文章写作结构技巧

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文章写作结构技巧

申论考试中，文章写作是很多同学的短板。逻辑的混乱、语素的单

一、结构的不足都是影响大家文章得分的关键因素，今天，我们就来介绍一种议论文经典结构，简单易学又便于操作，清晰明了方便阅卷，那就是总—分—总。

总分总结构，是议论文写作最为经典的一种结构。所谓“总”就是文章的总起或总结，是文章的中心论点。“分”指的是分层叙述，即中心论点之下所设置的分论点。“总分总”的结构是先抛出文章的中心思想，再分层叙述，逐层深入，最后对文章加以总结。这是考场议论文写作最常用、最易掌握的结构方式。结构形式上有“总分“”分总”两种变式。相对于“分总”的结构方式，“总分总”的结构开始就将文章中心论点交代清楚，使阅卷人能在最短时间内了解文章最重要的信息。相对于“总分”的结构方式，“总分总”的结构在结尾处对文章整体内容加以收尾、总结，与开篇内容遥相呼应，使文章脉络互相贯通，每部分既各有特点又紧密联系，是考场中的首选。

比如下面一片范文：

展现新时代工人力量

“ 咱们工人有力量”，这句歌词曾经唱遍大江南北唱出了工人内心的自豪。随着时代的发展以及我国经济的转型升级，当代工人的处境和待遇发生了改变，面临种种困难，我们不禁要问：在新时代新的机遇和挑战面前，我们如何保障工人权利，展现新时代的工人力量？

把脉问诊，出现问题的原因很多：一是因为我国相关法律制度在保障工人权益方面还有缺陷，相关部门执行也不够彻底；二是在市场经济发展的背景下，一些观念和媒体的舆论引导让工人不受尊重，工人逐渐被边缘化，成了脏活累活的代言词；三是由于很多工人渴望接受教育但缺少受教育的机会，整体素质不高，缺乏创新能力。如何解决好上述原因，便成了如何展现新时代工人力量的关键。

展现新时代工人力量，我们应积极搭建合理的政策框架体系，完善相关法律。当前我国

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法律在保障工人权利方面还不够完善，工人的经济利益得不到有效保护，农民工甚至面临欠薪、讨薪难的问题。户籍制度的不成熟、不完善也产生了一系列的“归属”问题，相关保险和社会福利得不到有效落实。基于此，我国应积极构建工人保障制度，着重保护工人的经济利益，保证他们的生活水平不低于社会的平均水平。“五险一金”的制度切实落实到每个企业、每个工人，积极解决户籍问题，完善户籍制度，让每个工人有安全感、归属感，积极工作，努力创新。

展现新时代的工人力量，政府应加强对媒体舆论的引导，传递正能量，尊重工人。随着时代的转移和我国社会主义市场经济的蓬勃发展，工人这一群体似乎不像建国之初时为社会主义现代化建设作贡献时受人尊重。一提到工人，人们不再像以前那样有尊敬之情，农民工甚至成了苦、脏、累的代名词，很多大学生宁愿失业也不选择成为一线工人。基于此，政府应联合媒体加强舆论引导，在主流媒体上开辟专栏来报道优秀工人的优秀事迹，在全社会进行表彰，形成尊重工人和底层劳动者的良好风气。

展现新时代工人力量，应大力加强职业教育培训。很多工人由于所处环境和教育资源缺乏的原因，虽然自身想学习技术，提高自身素质却没有机会去实现。国家应大力发展技能培训，落实到基层，积极培养技术性人才，此举不仅仅是能提高工人整体素质，使其获得相应的社会地位，更是建设创新型国家保证国家整体竞争力的需要。

我们相信在全社会的共同努力和关注下，通过搭建合理的政策框架体系，加强对舆论的引导，大力加强职业教育培训，工人不会再面对权益得不到保障，不受尊重的窘境，努力提高自身素质，展现新时代工人力量，奏响新时代工人的最强音。

这是一篇典型的总分总结构议论文，开篇第一段开门见山提出中心论点，围绕如何发挥新时代工人的力量展开讨论，第二段通过分析原因作过渡，三四五段分别设置了三个并列的分论点，通过对分论点的论证来支撑总论点，第六段回应开篇作总结，这样的写法从考试的

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角度来讲，是最便捷易学的，在阅卷的过程中也可以为阅卷人提供便利，因此，推荐广大考生适当练习，合理使用。

第四篇：写作 合理安排文章结构

写作

合理安排文章结构

学习目标

1、了解合理安排文章结构的写作常识。

2、学会在写作前编列作文提纲。学习重点

1、掌握写作的方法和技巧。

2、合理安排文章的结构。课时安排

三课时（1、2课时指导写作，第三课时点评习作。）活动过程

一、安排文章结构的重要性

中心是文章的灵魂，材料是文章的血肉，结构是文章的骨骼。

二、安排文章结构应遵循的基本要求

1、完整性。

2、连贯性。

3、严密性。

4、灵活性。

三、指导学习如何合理安排文章的结构

1、文章的结构包含哪些内容？

2、安排文章的结构要注意哪几方面的内容？

（一）、开头和结尾

好的开头，能起引领作用：既可使文章顺利展开，又能吸引读者阅读下文。好的结尾，能帮助读者理解题旨，体会作者的情感。常见的开头方法：

1、开篇点题法”。或开门见山，落笔入题，或以提问入手，引起读者思考； 或概括总体，介绍内容；

2、“形象导入法” 或抒情起笔，渲染气氛； 或描绘环境，交代背景； 或制造悬念，引人入胜； 或回忆联想，引起下文； 或借用诗词，作为叙事的开端等 常见的结尾方法： 或总结全文，揭示主题； 或卒章显志，画龙点睛； 或抒发情怀，动人心弦； 或意在言外，发人深思； 或戛然而止，干净利落等。

（二）、层次和段落

层次：就是文章内容安排的先后次序。它是客观事物发展的阶段性和作者思维发展的进程在文章的反映。

段落：是文章内容、层次的外在表现，是文章的基本单位。分段，既能表现作者思路发展的脉络，又能帮助读者认识文章的层次结构，理解文章的内容。

安排层次常用的方法：

1、并列式

2、递进式

3、连贯式

4、总分式

（三）、过渡和照应

过渡：是指各段落、各层次间的连接和转换，通常用“过渡段”、“过渡句”或“过渡词语”来表示。

照应：就是文章前后内容的关照呼应。也就是要瞻前顾后，首尾圆合。文章在什么情况下需要过渡呢？

（1）内容转换时需要过渡。如，写记叙文，地点转换、时间转换或事件转换时，为了使读者跟上作者的思路，往往需要过渡；

（2）表达方式、表现方法变动时需要过渡。如，由记叙转为议论，或由议论转为叙述，由描写转为抒情，或由抒情转描写时需要过渡；记叙事件采用倒叙、插叙的交接处需要过渡。具体的照应方法有：

（1）正文与标题照应。有的文章在正文里多次照应标题，其目的是为了点明文章的主旨，突出中心；也有的是因为标题含义较深刻、含蓄，读者一下子了解不透，这就需要在文章中加以交代、照应。

（2）文章前后内容的照应。即在行为当中，根据主题的需要，围绕一个事件或一个问题，自然而然地加以照应。这种照应决不是重复，而是通过多次照应，使内容一层层深入，更加鲜明地表现主题。

（3）首尾照应。好多文章一般都是在开头交代写作动机，中间层层展开叙述主要内容，收尾小结全文。而在收束时常回应开头，前呼后应。

（四）、文章的详略安排：

（1）必须根据主题的需要，详写与略写，受主题的制约。凡与主题关系密切的，就要写得具体、细致，可以铺开，说得要充实；凡与主题无关或关系不大的，要略写，可以概括，甚至可以不写。

（2）要根据文章的体裁来考虑详略。

四、走好第一步：编写写作提纲

拟写写作提纲的好处：

有一个提纲，可以帮助我们树立全局观念，从整体出发，去检验每一个部分所占的地位，所起的作用，相互间是否有逻辑联系，每部分所占的篇幅与其在全局中的地位和作用是否相称，各个部分之间的比例是否恰当和谐，每一字、每一段、每一部分是否都是为全局所需要，是否都丝丝入扣，相互配合，都能为主题服务。

怎样列作文提纲：

1、审清题意，确定中心

2、围绕中心，选择材料

3、明确中心，安排顺序

4、突出中心，详略得当

作文提纲的一般格式：包括题目、中心、段落安排、注明详略四部分。提纲举例一：

1、题目：《我的母亲》

2、中心：回忆关于母亲的几个片段，表现母亲的可爱性格和能干的才具，表现了对旧社会被压抑和埋没的妇女命运的深切同情和深刻思考。

3、结构安排：

（一）交代母亲的姓氏和早逝。（略）

1、交代母亲的姓氏。

2、交代母亲的早

（二）回忆关于母亲的四个片段。（详）

3、元宵节的“巡阅”

4、涌流的泪珠。

5、丰富的内心世界。

6、劳碌的身影。

（三）交代母亲去世时的年轻。概括母亲的良好品质。（略）

7、交代母亲去世时的年轻。

8、概括母亲的良好品质。提纲举例二：

1、题目：我爱我的书包

2、中心：记叙妈妈对我的关心，抒发我对妈妈热爱的感情。

3、段落安排：

（1）看包。（略）倒叙开头，写书包的外形

（2）要包。（详）我没有书包，同学讥笑我。我缠着妈妈要书包。妈妈给我做了一个新书包。

（3）用包。（详）书包和我形影不离。书包给了我克服困难的勇气。我的学习成绩提高了。

（4）爱包。（略）结尾点题，表示决心。

五、实践演练

1、以“快乐的三人世界”为题，写一篇记叙文。

2、以：“------领我走进新天地”为题，写一篇记叙文。要求：写作前编列写作提纲。

3、思路点拨

文章的结构主要指文章的开头和结尾、层次和段落、过渡和照应。这就告诉学生，合理安排文章的结构，就要妥善安排好上述几方面的内容。而编列提纲，主要是对文章的结构进行合理的安排，这就犹如在砌房子施工之前先要画好设计图纸一样。先列提纲后动笔写作，这是一种良好的习惯，学生应自觉养成这习惯。

4、方法指津

第一题：“快乐的三人世界”着力表现的应该是“快乐”二字。构思的方法是：可以从几个侧面，全方位地反映“三人世界”的生活，也可以着重写一件事，围绕这件事来表现中心意思。文章应写出浓浓的家庭生活气氛。表现爸爸、妈妈、我三人之间和谐的关系以及三个人物的不同个性。

第二题：注意：“领”字。要写出（）对我的帮助，给我的教益；“新”字。要体现这种帮助，教益是前所未有过的。

5、写作要求

①选择适合的文章结构安排材料；

②注意段落层次的衔接，注意过渡和照应； ③完成一篇550字左右的记叙文。

四、例文评说 学生阅读后交流体会 例文一

快乐的三人世界

你想认识我的一家，想了解发生在我们家中快乐的事情吗？那就先请你看看这张“全家福”吧。瞧，坐在右边沙发上的那位戴着眼镜的笑眯眯的中年人，是我爸爸；坐在他身旁的那位脸上带着恬静笑容的中年妇女，便是我妈妈。那个手捧一簇鲜花，笑盈盈的小姑娘，不用说就是我了。你从这张“全家福”上看出了点什么？

一个字--“乐”。是啊，发生在我们家的趣事多着呢。我们怎么能不乐呢？你看看吧。

“嗯，真香啊！妈，您做什么好吃的啊？”我一进门，就冲着正在厨房里忙碌的妈妈大声嚷嚷。妈妈没顾得上和我搭话，爸爸却笑呵呵的接过话茬：“你的鼻子可真灵啊！”“那当然！人家的鼻子是世界第一流的，领导嗅觉新潮流！”我一边放下书包，一边笑呵呵地说。“哈哈！馋猫鼻子尖！”爸爸大笑起来。我向爸爸噘噘嘴，倏地钻进了厨房，不一会又笑盈盈地跑出来，大喊道：“据我观察，今晚的菜十分丰盛。”就在我整理书包拿出作业的时候，听见妈妈喊了一声：“开饭了！”我和爸爸立刻跑了出去。

嗬！明亮的灯光下，一桌鲜美的菜肴摆在面前。我的口水真的要流出来了。桌子中间放着一大碗鲜美的鱼汤，四周摆着各种时鲜菜蔬，像一朵大荷花盛开在餐桌上。一碗碗热气腾腾的大米饭端了上来，一家三口围着方桌坐下。爸爸拿起筷子招呼我们：“来，来，吃菜！”说着他夹起一块排骨送到我面前，我笑嘻嘻地递过碗，想去接，谁知那排骨一转，落到了妈妈的碗里。我一愣，继而大笑起来：“对！对！这一顿丰盛的晚餐是妈妈一个人‘制造’的，她是我们家的‘功臣’，这第一块排骨应该给妈妈吃！”妈妈微笑着也夹了一块排骨，递给爸爸，爸爸得意地伸过碗去，谁知那排骨在他面前一晃，落进了我的碗里。爸爸的脸上写满了失望，装着一副无可奈何的样子，说：“唉！看来只有我自己夹了。”爸爸的话音刚落，一块排骨掉进了他的碗里。原来是我夹了一块给他。“哈哈！”我们都开心地笑了。

这下，你知道我们的三人世界了吧。幸福快乐的三人世界何止我们一家，发生在我们三人世界中的趣事又何止这一件呢！我愿天下所有的家庭都像我们家一样快乐！

五、课堂练习

（片段写作，如写一写习作的开头或一件事的经过等，此步骤视实际教学时间选用）课后完成作文

六、作文评讲

第五篇：英语六级写作

英语六级写作模板大全

来源：普特英语

第一部分、四六级作文：英文信函题型作文diy

写作步骤

要求考生根据提纲写一封英文书信，如2005年12月六级作文、2005年1月四六级作文、2004年6月四六级作文、2004年1月四级作文。对这类题型，通常分为5个步骤来写：第一、文章开头：称呼

第二段、寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：

寒暄句+主题句(注：寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)

第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落：

主题句+扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3

第四段、表明自己的观点，并结束书信主体段落

在最后要他谈自己的看法

第五段、寒暄句+落款

第二部分、英文信函题型作文diy写作范文练习

[实战演练]

directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus.you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:

假如你是李明，请你就本学校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应包括：食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评建议，也可以都有。

[diy写作模板：架构阶段]

第一段：称呼

dear mr.president,第二段：引出写信的目的主题句： this letter comes to you from ____.扩展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon

第三段：对学校食堂正面的看法

主题句：as you know, _____.but unfortunately, ______.扩展句：

1、___.(举例)as a result, _____.2、besides, ______.3、and what's more, _____.第四段：对学校食堂负面的看法

主题句：some people may argue that ____.扩展句：

1、for instance, ____ and ____.2、but in my opinon, ______.第五段：结尾，表明自己看法

结尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.扩展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.thanks.li ming

[diy写作模板：填充阶段]

第一段：称呼

dear mr.president,第二段：引出写信的目的主题句： this letter comes to you from one of your students.扩展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon

第三段：对学校食堂的看法

主题句：as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen.but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.扩展句：

1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be.(举例)as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.3、and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.第四段：别人对食堂看法

主题句：some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.扩展句：

1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.第五段：结尾，表明自己看法

结尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,扩展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.thanks.第三部分、范文

Dear Mr.president,This letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.As you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen.but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be.as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.