第一篇:新材料作文“咫尺与天涯”的写作指导与例文。
新材料作文“咫尺与天涯”的写作指导与例文。
阅读下面的文字,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)
诗人顾城有句出名的诗:“你看云时,我觉得很近,你看我时,我觉得很远。”这里说的是人与人之间的隔膜。
成语中有“咫尺天涯”一词,意思是说虽然近在咫尺,却远如天涯。
海南省海边有一块石碑,上书“天涯海角”,那里就是人们常说的“天涯”,现在飞机几小时就到了。
美国在地球的那一边,似乎也是“天涯”,但卫星电视一下子将它拉到我们面前。这是现代科技的神威,它使我们生存空间的距离相对缩短了,难怪有地球村之说。
要求全面理解材料,但可以选择一个侧面、一个角度构思作文。自主确定立意,确定文体,确定标题;不要脱离材料的含意作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
审题提示
由材料我们可以进行发散性思维,如从美学角度写“距离产生美”,从交往角度写“距离可以保持一个人的独立个性”,从认知角度写“距离可以保证客观性”,从物理角度写“距离可以提供活动空间,保证安全”等,但结合材料聚合思维,则不能这样随意去写了,材料告诉我们距离的远近是相对的,有条件的:
一、二两则材料,从心理角度讲咫尺可以成为天涯,这是因为人与人之间心灵的隔膜;
三、四两则材料从科技角度讲天涯可以变为咫尺,这是因为科技进步的力量。写作时从这两个角度切入方为正点。至于文体选择,“你有这样的体会吗”,暗示你写记叙文,从心理或者科技角度写距离由远变近或由近变远的体会,“同意这样的观点吗”,则是要写议论文,同意不同意皆可,体现话题的开放性。如同意,则是因心灵隔膜,人与人之间咫尺如天涯,不同意可写只要人与人心灵沟通,“海内存知己,天涯若比邻”。
这些材料说明距离的远和近是相对的,有条件的。
一、二则材料从心理角度讲咫尺可以成为天涯,这是因为人与人之间心灵的隔膜;
三、四两则材料从科技角度讲天涯可以变为咫尺,这是因为科技进步的力量。写作时从这两个角度切入方为正点。
例文五篇
咫尺与天涯
高三(13)班
李林盛
近在咫尺,远在天涯,一些事物,看似在咫尺,却远在天涯;相反的一些事物看似在天涯,却近在咫尺。
在每年的高考中,很多人因一分而落榜,一分,虽说不多,但也取得关键性的作用。多一分,也许你可以超越千人,而少一分,亦可使人落后千人。就差一分,使你不能踏入大学大门,一分之差,虽说很近,但也由于这一分,使你远离了你理想的学校,使你与你理想的大学相隔天涯。
被称为“兵乓皇后”的邓亚萍,身高仅有1.55米,她曾被认为是不可造之材,数次被拒于省队和国家队大门之外,获得奥运会冠军对她来说,应该是非常遥远的距离,奥运会冠军,应是在她的天涯之外。对此,她非常刻苦的训练自己,在不断的磨砺自己当中,不断地使自己强大起来,因此,她获得了许多的世界冠军和奥运会冠军,所以,天涯的距离并不是不可以改变,只要你努力了,天涯之外也可以变为咫尺之内的距离。
中国的科技发展水平曾非常落后于西方国家。在鸦片战争、甲午战争和八国联军侵华战争中,中国都处于劣势之中,被列强欺压侮辱,原因在于中国的军事实力跟列强的相差太 1 大。后来,我国不断发展经济和军事实力,使中国的经济和军事实力于列强相匹敌,甚至超越了其他国家。可见,以前与列强实力相距甚远的国家,经过努力也可以拉近距离了。所以,天涯的距离可以拉近,拉近为咫尺的距离。
三国时期的刘备,他当初也只是一个编草鞋的普通人。当做皇帝的事情,对他来说,是触手而不可及的、是无法达到的。可以说这跟刘备是相隔天涯之远。但到了后来,刘备善于把握机遇,广招贤才猛将,最终建立了蜀国。可见,以前认为是不可能做到的事情,但通过了努力还是有可能达到的。
天涯虽远,但通过努力也可以拉近距离;咫尺虽近,但不好好把握,也可令你不能到达。
没有永远的天涯,也没有永远的咫尺,一切都需靠自己的努力。
评语:本文符合题意,且能够辩证地分析“咫尺与天涯”,所列举事例也较恰当。
(评分47分)
距离帮我们把爱永恒 高三(13)班
邹沁兰
我一直在寻找,寻找一种缩短距离的方法。或许是站在高楼上试图拉近与蓝天的距离;或许把脚伸入小溪想要靠近五彩斑斓的鱼儿;或许把水棒在手心想留住这份清爽。
在这个物欲横流的时代,人们更多关注的是物质的多少和钱财的多少,而把我们中国的传统美德抛之脑后,使得人与人之间只有利益关系,心与心的距离更加遥远。如果这样下去,那么世界将会变成什么样子呢?或许社会将会变成一个没有硝烟的战场——明争暗斗;或许人与人之间更加冷漠,没有感情可言;或许世界上充满“冷气压”,把每个人的心冻结。这时候你还能忽视距离吗?
虽然社会中有许多“冷气压”的现象,但也不缺少制造暖气的“火炉”。
茫茫人海,鳞次栉比的楼群,无意间听到的一个声音,或是偶然间瞥见的没有人注意到的情景,都让我停下匆忙的脚步,在灯火阑珊处,细心品味两颗心靠近时心灵感到的温暖。一个六七岁的小女孩小心翼翼地帮助老奶奶过马路,我看到了两颗心在向彼此靠近,我看到爱的光环在她们身旁。其实,心与心的距离,只需要一个动作或一句话语,就能让他们彼此靠近,那我们何妨不去尝试一下呢?
还记得那个托举生命的最美妈妈吴菊萍吗?一个年轻的母亲,在路过一栋10多层高的大楼时,用她最柔弱的双臂接住了从10层楼掉下来的一位两岁多的女孩,事后她说:“这是本能,是一个母亲都会做的事。”她的一句话,让世界为之触动,让心与心更加靠近,让距离帮我们把爱永恒。
相隔两地时,距离也许会把我们的心拉的更远,也许会让两颗心更加靠近。为什么这么说呢?当两个好朋友即将分开各奔前程时,他们往往会更加怀念对方。“海内存知己,天涯若比邻。”即使他们相隔两地,只要对方一封信,一个电话,都能感到对方好像从没有离开过自己,反而更加怀念和对方在一起的快乐时光,而让彼此更加靠近,这时就会觉得对方“远在天边,近在眼前”。这难道不是距离帮我们把爱永恒吗?
当我们离蓝天近一点时,更能感受到空气的清新;当我们离鱼儿近一点时,更能感受到鱼儿的自由欢乐;当我们把水捧在手心时,更能体会到水的清爽给我们内心带来的舒适。其实,距离从来都不是阻碍我们的绊脚石,而是能帮我们把爱心永恒的时光机。
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拉近心的距离 高三(16)班
宋佳佳
曾经在一张试卷上看到过这样一句话;拥抱真是一个奇怪的东西,明明靠得那么近,却远得看不见彼此的脸。我们生活在社会、经济、科技都高速发展的21世纪,从北京到广州不再需要好几天的时间;登上珠峰不再是可望不可及的事„„一切事情似乎都越来越近了,但是,人与人之间的心灵却好像渐行渐远,脱离了相知的轨道。
我们可以用真诚宽容的“磁铁”来粉饰我们的心灵,使每颗心都能渐渐被相互吸引。在与同学一起学习时,如果总能怀着一颗敬佩但又努力拼搏的心,我相信同学之间就不再存在猜疑嫉妒;与父母交流时,如果常常用一种尊敬和感激的心态来对待父母,我相信子女与父母的争吵与代沟就会少一些;在面对社会时,如果时常抱着憧憬与包容的态度时,我相信会减少很多社会**与不满。正是因为有这样那样的嫌隙,拉远了我们心与心的距离,那我们不妨让真诚宽容重新拉近心的距离,让心与心相伴。
我们可以用一股股的外来正能量,作为发动机的动力,拉近我们的心灵。在抗震救灾时,人民军队与自愿者们一起奋力抢救被困人员,这就是可贵的正能量释放的体现。在电视荧屏中,一幕幕的“最美司机”、“最美教师”、“最美妈妈”,是可贵的正能量;在音乐播放器中,一首首赞颂伟大人性的励志歌曲,是可贵的正能量。当心与心不能很顺利的拉近距离时,我们可以用这些正能量来拉动,当心与心固执不前时,我们可以用这些正能量来感化心灵。
我们不应当成为“隔膜制造器”,在心与心之间构造一张张的隔膜,增加拉近距离的阻碍。因为一些闲言细语,因为一些负面消息,因为一些未经证实的谣言,或者因为对方犯过一些小错误„„,因为这种种而否定他人,是不可取的。我也会因一面之词而拒绝拉近彼此心的距离,所以我时常告诫自己:要以宽容的心看问题,用真诚的心去与人相处。因为“以诚感人者,人亦诚而应”。
在经济快速发展的今天,许多东西都从“遥不可及”变得“举手可得”,我们的心也不能落后,要努力拉近心的距离,让心交心,让我们的世界真正达到了“海内存知己,天涯若比邻”的崇高境界。
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让隔阂消失在人们的大爱中 高三(16)班
李莉雅
时间似鸟翩翩过,世事如棋局局新。岁月的流逝并没有淡化余老对祖国的热枕,余老的乡愁超越了台湾海峡,毫不保留地诉说对大陆的爱。可见,虽台湾还未回归祖国,但台湾同胞对祖国的热爱没有隔阂,让两岸同胞的咫尺相连。
人与人之间的隔阂不是距离问题,而是人们心灵沟通的缺失。网上有句流传很广的话:世界上最遥远的距离不是不能相见,而是我们坐在一起,你却在玩手机。我们在家庭聚餐中经常是忙着玩手机,对爷爷奶奶的关爱较少,甚至出现老人摔杯离席而去的场面。现在很多年轻朋友回家后的漠然伤透了老人敏感的心灵。这难道不是我们生活中的悲凉吗?人近在咫尺,情却如隔天涯。原本没有的隔阂就是在与家人缺少交流的生活中产生,我们完全能将这隔阂去掉,我们常回家看看,和老人聊聊天,那也是为老人所称道的天伦之乐啊!
北大校长周其凤便是以身作则,在母亲90大寿时当众给母亲下跪忏悔,感动了全场的亲友。树欲静而风不止,子欲养而亲不待。我们不要存在亲情隔阂,长辈们给予我们的爱,厚重如山。隔阂的存在会让我们的人生充满不幸与遗憾;隔阂的消失能使我们发现周围身边的小确幸,发现生活中的美好。
国家之间的隔阂会给国民带来不幸,让国家濒于纷乱与战争。古往今来,有多少跨国界的杀戮都是因人为的隔阂而产生,犹太人几百万的生命让纳粹党轻易夺去,因为国民种族生存的隔阂伤害无辜的生命真的不值得。即使有隔阂,我们也因扬长避短,让隔阂的伤害降到最低。
譬如中日关系的曲折发展,也许两国的意识形态不同,会让中日两国人民间互抱成见,但是并不影响两国之间的经济合作。日本需要中国的市场,中国需要日本的先进技术来改造自身的技术。可见,隔阂是相对而言的,没有哪种隔阂是永远存在的,不论是人与人之间还是国与国之间的隔阂,都会被人们的大爱,随着时间、地点、条件而转移。
诗人顾城曾有一句诗:“你看云,我觉得很近;你看我,我觉得很远。”虽说是人们之间存在的隔阂,但只要我们放下对他人的成见,以平和欣赏的态度去和人交往,那么隔阂便会消失在人们的大爱中,细水长流。
(评分47分)
距离,产生美
高三(16)班
邱淑楠
一个世纪的距离,阻挡不了泰戈尔低声浅吟“世界上最美的距离„„”生存与死亡的距离,阻挡不了哈姆雷特搜寻在一千个读者眼中的身影。寂寞与繁华的距离,阻挡不了张爱玲轻轻褪去整个上海的光怪陆离。
“海内存知己,天涯若比邻。”当意气风发的王勃遭遇友人间无法避免的离别时豪迈如他,自然是一种乐观。弱冠之年,就可以辨出距离的意义,弥足珍贵。“我寄愁心与明月,随风直到夜郎西。”当遥闻王昌龄左迁龙标的李白不再年轻,岁月的刀在他的眉头刻下纹路,落寞的诗人们还可共瞻一轮明月,当离别的距离碰上真挚的友情,距离也只会让友情更加美丽,正像遥看草色。
距离,勾勒出恋人们的轮廓,让爱情更加甜蜜。心与心的距离,像是背靠背的距离,明明近在咫尺,却看不见彼此的身影。一晃五十多年过去,每当记起林徽因的点点滴滴,金岳霖先生还是百感交集。但凡了解两人故事的人,无不对二人彼此相知却无法相爱的结局唏嘘不已。理想及背景的差距,让有夫之妇的林徽因不敢越雷池半步,也让高洁的金岳霖秉承“君子之交淡如水”的态度不能求爱。距离,又是这段令人嫌恶的距离。然而,距离也让当局者做到了真正的“清”。这段感情距离,便成了人们心中的鹊桥,如牛郎织女一般,即便是天涯,亦是咫尺。
世界上最遥远的距离,莫过于人心与人心的距离。物欲横流的社会,每个人都在忙于升职加薪,忙于察言观色。只有在失意困厄时,方才想到朋友,更可悲的是,昨天还春风得意的你,今天就两手空空,这其中的落差竟是你“最亲密”的朋友一手导演的闹剧。现代科技拉近了人与人之间的距离,却怎么也拉不近人与人的心灵距离。
人,总是在这个世界上寻寻觅觅,想要得到自己想得到的东西。越是得不到,就越想要得到。因为有距离,因为很刺激。追求完美的东西,本来是一件美好的事情,但不能不择手段,不顾一切,否则就会成为一种病态,拿捏得当很重要。
不管世人如何庸俗,我还是相信距离产生美。
(评分50分)
第二篇:天涯不能咫尺优美散文
芙蓉花盛开,如粉红色的云团,停在树冠,温润柔和;每一朵芙蓉花又十分精致,纤纤巧巧的花蕊,轻柔地落在花正中,甚是可爱。早一批开的芙蓉花谢了,落了一地,行走的人往往要绕过去,保持它彻头彻尾的美丽。
我又忆起柳絮飘飞的情景。六月的柳树褪去了初春的鹅黄,在渐渐步入初夏的时候,越发妸娜多姿。千条柳丝如千缕秀发,在微微的风中摇曳,煞是迷人。若你看惯了柳丝,洁白的柳絮登场了:柳树突然变得大手笔,豪迈地向天空抛洒,那些柳絮在空中打旋、飞扬,被风吹着,寻找适合自己的沃土。植物的新陈代谢本是规律,却往往触动诗人的思绪,往往与漂泊无依、分散天涯联系起来,有了一些悲凉的意味。诗人偏执地喜欢悲凉,可能是在悲凉中,更容易让自己灵魂安静下来,不致于得意忘形抑或失魂落魄。
我在六月的时候往往悲伤,中考是六月、高考是六月,大学毕业是六月。六月的人很忙碌:忙升学、忙工作、忙给十多年的苦读找一个合理的说法;六月的人很浮躁:一件事情的结束往往意味着另一件事情的开始,你还没做好上高中、大学的准备,你还没做好走入社会的准备,两段时光仓促交汇,你有些心浮气躁;六月的人很伤怀:几年相聚的时光就这样无情地划上句号,你不想长大,可时光催促你,你不想分离,可学校催促你。再也不会和同桌约好谁上课睡觉谁下课买冰点、再也不会与同舍生交谈,真话出自肺腑、再也不会与暗恋的人擦肩而过、再也不会与邻班男生在篮球场上拼杀。你不能无挂无碍,岁月在强迫你长大。这是你用过的书桌、这是你在墙上的涂抹:你曾认为你的爱刻骨铭心,于是你把心上人名字镌刻,可如今她在哪里?她只是一个过客。你曾认为人要坚强向上地活着,于是教室里你第一个来,最后一个走,那门前的白玉兰记得。如今你虽毕业,却仍想再把过去的日子重新来过。
只有分离,才明白人生的重量,才珍惜下一次的相聚。毕业十年,我那相知相惜的同窗啊,你在哪里?是否如歌中所唱:散落在天涯。芙蓉花落、柳絮飘飞,我会忆起你;年终岁尾、良辰佳节,我会思念你。只是,你是否偶尔会想起多愁善感的我?
第三篇:写作指导与练习
写作指导与练习
---高三复习资料
要学会写以下文体
学会写问候卡、便条及简单信函(Greeting cards, notes and short messages)*写日记、书信与电子邮件
(Diaries, letters and emails)
*填写表格、申请表等(Application forms)
*根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告(Short passages and reports)*写故事类文章(stories)
(叙述发生在过去的各种事件的文章)
下面是写问候卡或写信有用的表达方式
Thanks:
Thanks a lot!
Thank you so much for your invitation!
Thanks for coming.Thank you for your suggestion.Thank you for your help.Thank you all the same.Hopes:
Hoping that you are well and happy.Hoping that you have a wonderful New Year!
Hoping you’ll enjoy the party.Hoping that you feel better.Hope that you pass your exams.Hope that you enjoy your new job.Hope that everything works out well.Wishes:
Have a nice weekend.With every good wish.Best wishes.All our good wishes.Wishing you success!
Wishing you a happy day!
Wishing you a very merry Christmas!
Farewell:
We’ll miss you.Take care.Hope to see you again soon.It has been wonderful to meet you.Thank you for being my friend.Until we meet again.I’ll always remember you.Congratulations:
Many congratulations!
Congratulations on winning the medal.Congratulations on your exam results.Congratulations on your achievements!
I congratulate you on your graduation.I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations on winning the football championship.May的正式用法:
Mayshe bring much happiness to your life.May you have a happy life!(祝你幸福)
May you be healthy and happy!(健康快乐)
May all your wishes come true!(心想事成)
II.常见的应用文:
1.问侯卡(greeting cards)
常用以may 开头的句子。
常用动词ing形式来表达想法、祝福、希望、感谢等。
有时以动词的命令式来表达信息。
2.便条(notes)
请假条
留言条
其他便条
Guess:what kinds of these notes are?
Dear Mr Chen,I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be in school today.I caught a cold when I swam in Kunming Lake yesterday.This morningI had a headache.After taking my temperature , my mother found that I had a high fever.She took me tosee a doctor.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I am writing to ask for two days' sick leave.Yours
Wang Zhigang
Feb 21st
Dear Wei Feng, You happened to be out.when I called you.I’ve got something to tell you.Wang ping,our old classmate, has just come from Shanghai on business.She plans to stay in Beijing for a week.I’d like to have a party for her with a few of our old classmates in my house at two o’clock this Saturday afternoon.It would be nice if you could come..Fang Qun
Passing on a message(转告电话)
3:15 pm,Friday
Dear Ying Liu,Our monitor has just rung me, saying that our sports meet will have to be put off till next Monday because of bad weather.He wants you to pass on the information to the other students in your group.III.如何写各种信件
英文书信(应用文)是历年高考的一个重点,根据不同的写作目的和书信内容,书信可分为:
1.邀请信(Letters of invitation)
2.回复信(Letters of reply)
3.感谢信(Letters of thanks)
4.自荐信(Letters of self-recommendation)5.致歉信(Letters of apology)
6.祝贺信(Letters of congratulations)
a.如何写自荐信?
注意:
英语国家书信习惯于开门见山,切忌绕弯子。
可以根据要点分段落进行表达。
切忌文不对题,胡乱发挥。
要求:
分段落表达意思;层次清楚,详略得当;
用必要的连接词使行文连贯,可读性强。
先学习以下文章,对你有何启示?
(Sample one)
Dear sir,Nowplease allow me to introduce myself to you.My name is Li Hua and I was born on the first of May in1982.Twenty –four years of age.I graduated from Beijing University.I am very fond of English.And I am quite fluent in English.And I can talk with English native speakers without any difficulty.I’m good at dancing and interested in secretarial work.Also, have studied bookkeeping, typewriting,computer and public relationship.I’m sure I can do my work well if I am accepted.Thank you.(题目要求:
假设你是李华,前去应聘,公司代表要求你用英语按表中内容做自我介绍 姓名:李华出生年月:1982年5月1日学历:大学
简介:毕业于北京大学,酷爱英语。英语听说能力强,能用英语流利交谈,学过速记,打字,电脑和公关。
其它:擅长舞蹈,对文秘工作有兴趣。)
Sample two :
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m a student from Xinhua Middle School.I’m glad to learn that you want afew part-time English reporters.I’m interested in this opportunity.I think I’m qualified for the job.As a student, I’ve read a lot and have knowledge in many fields.I like English and do well in both speaking and writing.Besides, I’m easy to get along with and enjoy working with others.I once worked as a reporter from school broadcasting station,so I’m sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I’m looking forward to your reply.(要求和要点:
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,得知某英文报招聘兼职记者,你有意应聘,请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信:
表示感兴趣
说明优势:知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历;
希望得到回复。
注意:1.字数:100左右
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯)
yours faithfully,Li Hua
Sample three:
Dear Sir or Madam,I am grateful to you for reading my letter of application.As the coming of the 2012 London Olypic Cames, it is my honor to apply for the position of a volunteer.I have been expecting this special event for a long time.I think I have the ability to be an excellent voluntee.First of all , I can serve all the guests from all over the world with hear and soul.Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so thatI can do the work well and spread the Chinese culture.What's more, I can speak fluent English ,which will play an important role in communciation during the 2012 London Olympic Games.I will value it and do whatever I can if I could be accetped to be a volunteer.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
(要求如下:假如伦敦奥运会组委会正在向全世界招聘奥运会志愿者,条件如下:
1.有热情为他人服务的思想
2.有丰富的文化知识,既能做好服务工作,也能传播文化;
3.有流利的英语表达能力和良好的沟通能力。
假如你叫李华,你想申请成为一名奥运会志愿者,请根据要求,写一份申请信。)Exercise:
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新兴外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信,包括以下要点:
1.年龄;
2.学习情况及英语水平
3.情趣和特长
4.性格特点
注意:词数100左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头、结束语已写好。Dear sir/Madame,I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.I 'm looking forward to your help.Sincerely yours,Li Hua
Answers:
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常用描写人物的形容词有:
tall/ short /big/ small/ ugly/ beautiful/ slim/broad/ deep/ white/ gray/ strong/weak/ honest/
brave/ calm/ careful/ clever/ cruel/ enthusiastic /faithful/ foolish/ friendly/ nice/ funny/ generous
/gentle/ /greedy/ helpful /impatient/ loyal/ reasonable /sensible /serious/ stubborn/talkative/timid /thoughtful /troublesome /wicked/witty
第四篇:新作文与结尾句
明星代言问题
On the Celebrity Spokesperson
Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media.This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items.This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized.Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides.Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns
raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior.In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public.To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.关于选秀节目
Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth.This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.There are a couple of reasons behind the tide.To start with, young folks need role models to learn from.So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs.This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences.Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves.Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.This is a divisive topic.On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains.As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies.食品安全问题
On the Food Security
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button across society.The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this
undesirable tide.First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem.More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never.Prompt and strict
measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend.The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.社会不文明现象
On Uncivilized Behaviors
We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth.All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of.Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our
weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves.We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them.There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend.To name only one: the lack of moral education.The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives.As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.感恩
On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude
On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable
phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college
students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere.I strongly
believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this
social headache.As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause.Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude.This kind of world is doomed to failure.Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart.Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one.My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.大学生使用信用卡现象
On Credit Card
At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and
shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders.Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests.Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides.On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments.On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents
1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________.In that case, ______________.2.Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA.For one thing, ______________.for another, ______________.3.My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.4.On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.5.As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.6.Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.7.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way can ______________ in the future.8.In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.9.But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages.For example, ______________, while ______________.Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.10.In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________.If ______________, it may be very useful.Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.11.Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________.As for the second idea, ______________.12.As a popular saying goes, ______________.In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________.I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________.So I am for the opinion that ______________.13.In my opinion, both sides are partly right.When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.14.Personally, I believe that ______________.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.15.In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.16.People are coming to realize the importance of ______________.They have begun to try their best to ______________.We believe that ______________.17.All in all, we cannot live without ______________.But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.18.Whatever you do, please remember the saying-______________.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.19.With the development of society, ______________.So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.20.It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________.However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.21.It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.22.It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.23.But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages.For example, ______________.Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.24.From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.25.We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.26.No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.27.We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.28.It is high time that ______________.Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately.29.In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________.Only in this way ______________.30.Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better.The most import is ______________.Another way is ______________.Still another one is ______________.31.Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be studied in depth.32.No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________.But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.33.It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.34.We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal.But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.35.But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way.Because I believe ______________.36.We all know the story of ______________.this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.37.My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society.There is no doubt that ______________.As an old saying goes, ______________.38.If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.39.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe ______________.40.From the graph it is evident that ______________.41.From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________.And I believe that ______________.42.Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.43.For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.44.Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.45.Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.46.Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.47.In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.48.After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.49.My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.50.Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.51.From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference.Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.52.On the one hand, it has helped china ______________.On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.53.In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways.One way to tackle this question is ______________.Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.54.As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.55.For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.56.As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________.What’s more, ______________.57.If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________.For me, ______________.
第五篇:社会调查报告写作指导与最新
社会调查报告写作指导与最新范文
调查报告是对某项工作、某个事件、某个问题,经过深入细致的调查后,将调查中收集到的材料加以系统整理,分析研究,以书面形式向组织和领导汇报调查情况的一种文书。其特点是具有写实性、针对性、逻辑性。
根据调查报告的要求,对我校学生调查报告格式做如下要求:
一、标题要求
标题可以有两种写法。
一种是规范化的标题格式,基本格式为“××关于××××的调查报告”、“关于××××的调查报告”、“××××调查”等。
另一种是自由式标题,包括陈述式、提问式和正副题结合使用三种。陈述式如《东北师范大学毕业生就业情况调查》,提问式如《为什么大学毕业生择业倾向沿海和京津地区》,正副标题结合式,正题陈述调查报告的主要结论或提出中心问题,副题标明调查的对象、范围、问题,如《高校发展重在学科建设――××××大学学科建设实践调查》等。
二、列出调查的主要内容,格式如下:
调查时间:
调查地点:
调查对象:
调查方法:
调 查 人:
调查分工:(以小组形式调查的要求,小组人数不得超过3人)
三、报告正文。
正文一般分前言、主体、结尾三部分。
1.前言。有几种写法:第一种是写明调查的起因或目的、时间和地点、对象或范围、经过与方法,以及人员组成等调查本身的情况,从中引出中心问题或基本结论来;第二种是写明调查对象的历史背景、大致发展经过、现实状况、主要成绩、突出问题等基本情况,进而提出中心问题或主要观点来;第三种是开门见山,直接概括出调查的结果,如肯定做法、指出
问题、提示影响、说明中心内容等。前言起到画龙点睛的作用,要精练概括,直切主题。
2.主体。这是调查报告最主要的部分,这部分详述调查研究的基本情况、做法、经验,以及分析调查研究所得材料中得出的各种具体认识、观点和基本结论。
3.结尾。结尾的写法也比较多,可以提出解决问题的方法、对策或下一步改进工作的建议;或总结全文的主要观点,进一步深化主题;或提出问题,引发人们的进一步思考;或展望前景,发出鼓舞和号召。
1.关于大学生暑期生活调查报告
----------------大二暑期社会调查
炎炎夏日,烈日当头。暑假刚刚开始,七月初我参与了这次“关于大学生暑期生活”调查,调查的主要目的是了解当代大学生如何利用这短暂的时间去充实丰富自己。调查的方式为问卷调查及网上资料调查。
暑假,对于很多学生来说是一个放松身心,提高自身修养的大好时机。能够把握这短暂的两个月时间真正去学点什么,做点什么应该是我们当代大学生所考虑的。
跨进了21世纪,又是个新的开始,当代大学生是新一代的代表,是祖国的未来,我们必须坚持马列主义/毛泽东思想,必须在它的指导下阔步前进。作为新世纪的大学生,就应当肩负起历史赋予我们的重任,做一个合格的大学生。充分发挥我们的才能,壮大我们的国家,使中国走进强国之列,这就是我们21世纪大学生的伟大使命。合理支配暑假时间,充分利用把握机遇,通过调查了解到当代大学生暑期生活分为四类:一参加社会实践兼职打工。二埋头苦学,参加各类培训班。三出行旅游度假观光。四在家“无聊”一族。
社会实践,兼职打工 :
中国社会调查事务所的调查结果显示,现代大学生打工的主要目的是:有35%的大学生是为了增加收入;有36%的大学生是想自食其力;有29%的大学生认为要锻炼自己的能力,对报酬无所谓。随着社会的变革和思想观念的转变,大学生打工的形式开始变得异常丰富起来 22%的大学生选择网络公司;4%的大学生选择暑期教师;19%的大学生选择市场调研员;13%的大学生选择营销策划员;16%的大学生选择做志愿者;9%的大学生选择做促销;5%的大学生选择到快餐厅做钟点工;12%的大学生选择其它。社会实践是大学生接触社会,了解社会的一条重要途径。到企事业单位实习的大学生也为数不少,这样既可锻炼自己,提高专业水平,又可开阔视野,接触社会,为日后工作积累社会经验。暑假兼职打工赚钱是许多学生的选择。“流自己的汗,吃自己的饭;自己多吃点苦,父母少花点钱。”这是时下不少大学生“打工族”秉承的至理名言。传统的家教、推销翻译到现在的网吧管理员、市场调研员、快餐店钟点工、导游,甚至是一些大胆另类的选择,如替网络公司试玩游戏等都成为现在大学生打工时所选择的职业。有的大学生在暑假里建立起了自己的网上商店,或者是在自己学校附近建立起了自己的摊点,为自己打工。尽管大学生“打工族”具备“初生牛犊不怕虎”的勇气和自信,但他们也同样有着缺乏经验和辨别能力有限的“先天不足”。正因为如此,大学生因打工而上当受骗的事件才层出不穷,有的甚至被骗入传销组织而走上违法犯罪的道路。不少专家也纷纷呼吁,大学生打工要谨防陷阱,社会也应该关注和加强对大学生打工的规范和管理。
埋头苦读,继续深造:
近年来,社会竞争越来越激烈,加入WTO后就业形势越来越严峻,“知识就是力量”越来越激励着那些有志学子,“专升本”、“出国”、“考研”成为很多大学生的选择,继续深造以满足未来社会对人才的更高要求,暑假则成为这些大学生备战的“黄金时期”。参加各类培训班早已经成为一道亮丽的风景线,各类形形色色的招生广告在校园内随处可见,暑假报名参加英语、电脑培训班的大学生,大都是为了在原有基础上“更上一层楼”。将来社会需要的是复合型人才,掌握多种专业知识,取得多个文凭、证书更有利于找到理想的工作。此外,也有不少大学生趁暑假报名参加汽车培训,为了将来更方便找工作,即使找工作时用不上,也对自己有好处。此外,不少大学生到图书馆、书店“充电”,摄取精神食粮,完善自己的知识结构和技能等。这些大学生如果能够劳逸结合,在用功学习的同时放松自己的心情,“两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书”已经与时代不相吻合,暑假是一个充电的好机会,也是一个了解社会的良机。
外出旅游,饱览风光:
旅游,从个人活动、群体行为发展到当今的现代旅游业,已经成为涉及旅游资源、旅游设施、旅游服务、旅游活动等的社会生活方式.大学生到大自然中去接受美的熏陶,包揽祖国山河风光,使生活张弛相济、劳逸结合,使人脑得到精神保健、生命获得和谐运动,现在已经成为一种时尚潮流。部分大学生利用暑期欣赏名山大川,不仅丰富了阅历,增长了经
验,从外出经历中体会人生,感触社会,同时也能体验到出门在外的不易出行旅游,度假观光,与同伴相互照顾,增进了解,培养提高了与人交流的能力。
“无聊”一族 :
在放假前早已经制定了周密的暑假计划,但是回到家后睡觉、看电视、上网、看小说成了部分大学生在假期的主要活动,没有暑假盼暑假,暑假到了又觉地无聊,短暂的两个月就像流水一样一去不复返。
通过对暑假生活调查,我们不由得感到欣喜,我们可以从中领略到当代大学生积极向上的风貌,同时也感悟到大学生们独特的思想意识和价值取向。暑假成为很多大学生学习的新阵地,展现青春风采,施展一技之长的好机会。总之,大部分大学生能够根据自己的实际情况,度过一个健康有意义的暑假。