2011考研英语作文五大辅导班权威预测(最详尽最终版)[精选5篇]

第一篇：2011考研英语作文五大辅导班权威预测(最详尽最终版)

2011年考研英语作文十大热点预测

这几乎是市面上最好最难得的权威预测 绝对超值！

一、低碳与环保

低碳与环保

构思点拨

图片中一个小男孩，早已进入甜蜜的梦乡，电视却依然在播放，这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然，直观看来，这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用电。但是，我们如果从更宏观，更深层次的角度去思考，这幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和结构可如下：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：列举现象，分析影响；第三段：建议措施，展望未来。

思维拓展

环保话题，例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系，从低碳的角度入手展开写作。

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。

佳作妙译

如上图生动地展示，一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉，电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。

这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视，实际上并不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费，这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，减少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保护环境，实现可持续发展。根据统计数据，如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时，则每个月可以减少4.17千克的碳排放量。

作为对地球负责任的管理者，我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式，从日常生活中的每个细节开始。我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展，牺牲长期的环境健康的做法，转向发展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现社会发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐。

名师点评

① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表达为 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这类副词的加入，使得描述更生动活泼，而不是单调的主谓宾。

② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。

该句主干结构是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。

这个句型的含义是：一件事情正在发生(正在睡觉)，突然发生了另一件事(妈妈来关电视)。

“with the television on”： with 引导的伴随结构，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，这句是妈妈关电视的伴随动作，一边关电视，一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。

图画描述这句，写得越精彩越好，这句是先入为主的句子，也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。

③ are used to doing:习惯于做某事，使用短语表达，地道准确。

④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:这是2005年真题阅读中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的标准到位。

一般而言，环保类话题，都可以用这句话，引出第三段的个人评论。

历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，我们一定要充分利用，举一反三。

二、网络的利与弊

到底听谁的？

思路点拨

本图中，一个女孩正在因一个问题感到困惑，“10牛的水是否产生10牛的浮力？”。于是她上网求助于网友，网友的答案更是五花八门，说对说错的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可见，这幅图反应了这样一个现实：网络文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以这样设计：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：网络的利+举例，网络的弊+举例；第三段：提出建议措施——取其精华，去其糟粕。

思路拓展

所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如，城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。

高分范文

Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。

佳作妙译

如图所示，图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题，来自于网友的答案差异太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显，人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时尚。

这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面，因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如，通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标，我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面，由于因特网上有海量的信息，很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能会把错误的信息误认为是正确的，其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也可能会给人们带来负面影响。

总之，一方面，充分利用因特网来提高效率，节约时间，这很重要。另一方面，应该采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据，以免被误导。只有这样，网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。

名师点评

① so„ that 句型：如此„„以至于„„。

② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是2004年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。

③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是2003年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。可见，充分了解真题阅读，对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。

④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒装句。

倒装句的写法(部分倒装)：

原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。

only放在句首，把情态动词can和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。

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三、醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任

醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任

思路点拨

图画中一个已经喝得烂醉如泥的司机，车顶上还驮着一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽车却依然在路上飞驰。虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题：醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：分两个分论点进行论述：提高安全意识、提高社会责任感；第三段：建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展

实际上，本文的内容和行文思路，不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。

例如，火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题，都可以参考此文。

只需要把第一段中间那句图画描述替换掉即可。

参考下图片：

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高分范文

What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。

The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。

In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。

佳作妙译

这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊！在这幅图中，烂醉如泥的司机正在马路上飞速行驶，车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。这幅图所传达的意义，对我们国家的每一位成员，都具有现实和警醒的意义。

这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐释。一方面，安全意识应该是我首要重视的问题。生命是一次单程旅行：你不能经历两次生命。所以我们应该敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而宣告任何一条生命的结束是残忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作为这个社会负责任的一员，我们每个人都应该去承担社会责任。我们不仅仅是为了自己活着，我们也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。无论是声称司机的、还是受害者的生命不重要，都是不负责任的。因为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活负担。

简言之，官方应该制定立法措施严厉地惩罚醉酒驾车的司机，例如吊销驾照或进行监禁。立法措施势在必行。此外，电视、收音机、网站等大众传媒应该共同努力来提高公民的安全意识和责任感，以降低交通事故的发生率。

名师点评

① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻，相当于汉语中的烂醉如泥。用语非常形象生动，一个酩酊大醉的司机形象跃然纸上！

② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，语言优美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，语言简洁、有力、到位。

③ DUI: 醉酒驾车，也可以写成：drunk driving。

④ leaving„:动词的ing形式作伴随状语。句型经典。

四、大学生就业：放低姿态、平常心做人

大学生就业

思路点拨

在画中，一位正在找工作的年轻女孩，毫不犹豫地拒绝了一份服务岗位的工作，不屑一顾地说：“伺候人的工作我不干”。这幅图表明，很多年轻人找工作时，眼光过高，不切实际，没有用平常心对待就业问题。实际上，可以先就业后择业。所以这篇图画作文可以这样创作：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：两个角度分析这种现象的原因：志存高远，不愿意从底层做起；好逸恶劳；第三段：建议措施：教育年轻人要脚踏实地；根除好逸恶劳的思想。

思维拓展

关于平常心态做人、脚踏实地的话题还可以有很多，例如城市选择问题、院校报考问题、专业选择问题、股市问题，均可以从这个角度出发，进行展开论述。请参考下图：

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高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。

Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。

佳作妙译

正如上面的漫画所示，这个找工作的女孩毫不犹豫地拒绝了一个服务岗位，她还抱怨一直找不到工作。同时她还纳闷为什么在如今找个有前途的工作这么难。

这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见，尤其在校园里更加明显。一方面，很多求职者不愿意从事秘书或助理等工作，他们认为这些是卑微且无足轻重的。他们有更大的抱负，想直接登上成功的顶峰。可是他们没有意识到理想抱负是需要一步一步实现的。另一方面，很多失业者和毕业生都想少劳多得，想得到一份轻松舒适而且薪水不菲的工作。这种“好逸恶劳”的生活态度对个人和社会的发展都是很不利的。我们不应看不起服务业，第三产业，因为它确实为我们提供了很多工作机会和职位。

因此，采取一些必要措施来改善这种情况已经是当务之急。一方面，应该发起一场教育运动来普及这种“千里之行，始于足下”的理念和脚踏实地的生活态度。另一方面，要把懒惰的思想从青少年的思想中根除。只有这样人们才能更好地实现自己的人生价值，才能让失业率大幅下降，才能实现社会和谐。

名师点评

① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴随状语。

② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 这个句子充当了整个句子的宾语，叫做宾语从句。

特殊疑问词why, what, when等引导的宾语从句必须使用正常的陈述语序，不得使用主谓倒装的形式。

例如，这句就不能写成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society？finding a promising job是主语。is是系动词。

再如：I don’t know what his name is。

绝对不能写成：I don’t know what is his name。

③ 2008年真题阅读选项中的句子。

原句为：Political compromises are easily found throughout the U.S.history。

稍加改动，变成了一个个性化的句子引入第二段内容的模板，虽然没有华丽的辞藻，但是非常精彩和纯正。

④ be conscious that: 意识到，that后边必须接完整的主谓宾结构。

这个表达等同于be aware that，可以进行同意替换。

此外：be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于这两者，表示意识到。

但是：be conscious of 和be aware of后边要接单词或者短语，一般不能加句子。

⑤ the third industry: 第三产业，是service industry(服务业)的同位语。

同位语其实一般都是废话，等同于前面的词。

巧妙地使用同位语，可以把单调的句子变得错落有致、抑扬顿挫。

it does provide us with: does在句中表强调，翻译成“确实”。

⑥ Only in this way can„ realize„ and can„ be„ and thus can„ be„：排比句，短促有力，气势强大，使得对未来的展望显得信心十足！

普通的被考生用烂了的这个句型：Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，被本文的作者巧妙地改写成了一个精彩的排比句。

这样的作文，怎么能不得高分呢！

五、节约资源

储蓄水滴，储蓄幸福

思路点拨

本图描述的场景是一副令人喜闻乐见的图画，图画中，一只可爱的小猪造型的储蓄罐，正在接住自来水里滴下来的水滴，像存钱一样，存储水滴。实际上，它储存的不是水，它储存的是幸福。我们可以看出，人们有了节水意识。但是，从正在滴水的水龙头看，还是有人忽略了节约用水这一问题。因此，本文可以这样写作：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：分析有些人浪费水的心理，并阐述水资源的宝贵；第三段：建议措施。

思维拓展

实际上，积极正面的图片写作，和揭示负面现象的文章没有什么本质上的区别，只要我们笔锋一转，就能把它继续按照原来的套路写。

本文也可以从低碳、环保的角度出发进行写作。

关于节约能源的话题，都可以按照这个行文思路和语言模式进行展开。

参考下图：

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高分范文

Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。

Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

佳作妙译

水资源一度被误认为是一种无限的可再生资源，实际上，水资源是非常有限且宝贵的。有幸的是现在公众开始关注这一问题了。如图所示，一只可爱的快乐小猪存钱罐积攒着水龙头里流出的每一滴水，就像存钱一样。

然而，水资源短缺问题仍然威胁着全人类的生存和发展。浪费水的现象在日常生活中仍然随处可见。例如，经常有粗心大意者忘记关水龙头。更有甚者认为自己缴了水费就有权浪费，与他人无关。事实上，水资源不仅在生活中必不可少，在工农业生产中也是不可或缺的。水资源是全人类共同的财富，很难想象当没有水的时候世界会是什么样子。

虽然越来越多的人已经认识到了这种紧迫性，但是仍然要采取进一步的措施。从宏观层面上讲，全世界应该共同努力反对浪费水。从微观层面上讲，要进行广泛的宣传活动。比如在电视台播出关于如何节水的节目。节约用水就是存储幸福，只有节约用水才能为子孙后代存储更好的生活。

名师点评

① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 来自于2005年阅读真题，原句是这样的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。

历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，广大考生一定要学会充分利用这宝贵的资源！

② 第二段开头，用了一个转折词，也就是“起承转合”中的所谓的“转”，把这篇作文改造成了一篇社会问题型作文，也就是大家最擅长写的作文。

③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒装句，表语提前，句子倒装。

倒装句写法：

第一步：写正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。

第二步：表语precious提前。

第三步：主谓倒置，变成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。

普通的so„ that„ 句型，也能被化腐朽为神奇，成为钻石加分句型！

④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替换important的一个很好的词汇。

顺便讲一个英译汉的技巧：大家可以看到，在译文中，这句话被翻译两次：必不可少、不可或缺。

因为原文中出现了：not only„ but also，所以这个单词被拆开翻译成了两个近义词，以使行文更加通顺。

⑤ what the world would be like：注意宾语从句必须用陈述语序。

⑥ become aware of: 意识到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后边接词语。

⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，历年真题中谈到的正面话题，或者人生哲理类的文章，有可能题目要求会变成：

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should

(1)describe the drawing briefly，(2)explain its intended meaning, and then

(3)support your view with an example/examples。

也就是第三段并非发表个人评论(建议措施)，而是举例，这时候就需要我们去调整一下文章的叙述方法。

这种情况下，我们可以把结尾段调整为：

Examples of people’s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life.On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day.In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

这样的话，结尾段就从建议措施，变成了论证文章的示例。

可见，随机应变，对写好考研作文也很重要。

六、面对人生与社会：乐观与豁达

乐观与豁达

思路点拨

图画中的一只小绵羊，正呆在一块大石头的阴影下面。但是它乐观、豁达地认为，有阴影，那么就说明有阳光。这幅图无疑向我们传达了一种健康的人生哲学：乐观生活、达观处世。由于这是一篇人生哲理类文章，所以文章安排可以相对自由一些：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：利用正反举例论证悲观与乐观的差距+总结句；第三段：倡导一种乐观生活、达观处世的人生态度和人生哲学。思维拓展

本文也可以从世界观、人生观的角度入手。

相反，如果是一幅表明悲观厌世的图片，我们也可以采取同样的手法进行处理。

高分范文

As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。

As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。

There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④

佳作妙译

上面的漫画清楚地表现出这只山羊不顾阴影的威胁仍然保持乐观，因为它相信有阴影的地方就一定有阳光。图片中反映的问题是积极的和富有启发性的。

我认为作者要表达的意义是要提醒我们保持乐观心态的重要性。如果漫画中的山羊终日悲观地生活在阴影中，它将永远无法获得舒适和幸福的生活。类似的例子千千万，但是我认为下面的例子就足够有说服力。如果这里有半杯水，悲观的人会抱怨只剩下半杯了，而乐观的人在庆幸还有半杯可以喝。显然，面对同样的生活，他们会有不同的感受。

毫无疑问，乐观者拥有更高的幸福指数，而悲观者永远也体会不到。因此我们必须以积极的态度面对生活。而且乐观的情绪能强烈地感染他人，这就意味着如果我们以乐观的视角面对周围的朋友们，他们也会同样地乐观。于是，乐观和幸福的气氛自然而然地就建立起来了。因此，让我们把著名诗人雪莱的名句铭记在心吧：冬天来了，春天还会远么？

名师点评

① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 这句话读起来是不是很熟悉？

没错，它正是仿写了我们非常熟悉的谚语“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。

作者将这句话仿写得惟妙惟肖，可见作者对语言驾驭是何等的娴熟。

② while: 表示两种现象的对比、反差，常翻译成“而”。

③ perceptions and feelings:近义词叠加。

近义词叠加也是一种向阅卷老师展示自己语言能力和词汇量的一种极为有效的手段。

翻译：只翻译出一种意思即可。即，这两个词合译为：感受。

④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”

全文的点睛之笔，堪称经典。

首先：keep sth.in mind 这个词组用得很地道。

其次：引用了雪莱的诗歌，表现出了深厚的文化底蕴。

第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者为前者的同位语。

同位语的介入，使句子结构错落有致，层次分明，朗朗上口。

第四：著名诗句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓尽致地诠释了乐观的生活态度。

实际上，历年真题的阅读中又何曾没有出现过这种模仿呢？广大考生可以去查阅2007年text 3中的最后一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。

⑤ 非常重要： 本题题目要求最后一段也可能会变成：

support your view with an example/examples。

这时候，我们可以把文章的结尾改写为：

Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world.How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them.She has set an excellent example for us。

七、商业行贿

商业行贿

构思点拨

上图表现的是在“尚方宝剑”严惩的威严下，一位从事商业贿赂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻，这幅图反映的是当今一种比较猖獗的社会现象：商业贿赂。深层次来讲，就是道德问题、责任问题。本文的内容和结构安排如下：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：从两个角度分析影响+分析动机；第三段：建议措施。

思维拓展

此类文章可以展开的角度有：金钱观，商业道德建设、职业道德建设，公平竞争。相似的图片比比皆是。请参考下图：

参考图片

高分范文

There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。

The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”，showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。

To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。

佳作妙译

毫无疑问这幅漫画生动地描述了现代社会一种负面的但是却十分猖獗的现象：商业贿赂。由于惧怕严厉的惩罚，这个人背着一大堆贿赂用的钱落荒而逃。漫画的寓意是十分现实并发人深思的。

上图的寓意可以理解为详细阐述了在金钱冲击下职业道德的沦陷。一方面，商业贿赂对全社会造成恶劣的、毁灭性的影响。首先在贿赂行为中表现出的道德缺陷和人性弱点会破坏和污染职业道德的氛围，不良分子也会效仿。其次，行贿者将破坏公平竞争，诚信经营的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面，商业贿赂行为大多是被利益驱动的，这说明这些人对金钱没有正确的态度。没有金钱的确是万万不能的，但对待金钱，无疑需要取之有道，用之有度。

为了彻底根除贿赂这种道德败坏的行为，应该采取严厉的惩罚措施。另外，应该在公众中逐渐普及正确的金钱观。只有这样，我们才能拥有公平、健全的社会环境。

名师点评

① money used as bribery: 过去分词作定语=定语从句。

写过去分词做定语的步骤：

第一步：写成定语从句：money which is used as bribery；

第二步：省略引导词“which”和be动词“is”变成money used as bribery。

这样，一个定语从句就变成了过去分词做定语。

② damaging and destructive:近义词叠用，押韵：头韵

③ revealed in the action of bribery: 过去分词作定语，修饰前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness，写法参考本文点评第① 条。

④ It is true that money is indispensable: It作形式主语，真正的主语是that从句。

⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of„: 为了„„。作目的状语。

八、城市交通

城市交通

思路点拨

此图片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的场景。图片中，车一辆接着一辆地堵在街上，各种抱怨声不断。毫无疑问，这幅图反映的是城市交通的压力问题。同时，汽车过多就意味着尾气排放过多，所以这幅图同时又反映了环保和低碳问题。

第一段：描述图画；第二段：分析交通堵塞给人和环境带来的影响；第三段：建议措施。

思维拓展

建议措施部分，还可以从如下角度提出：

呼吁政府：投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。

倡导低碳出行：步行、骑自行车。

倡导理智选择城市：人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面影响。

高分范文

How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。

佳作妙译

交通状况真是一团糟！这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。实际上，交通堵塞严重到了一定程度，与其说这是一条拥挤的街道，还不如说这是一个停车场。焦急的乘客等不到数量稀少的公交车，而私家车却到处都是。

虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是当今这种现象并不罕见。私家车的增多必然产生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便，也会对环境造成负面影响。一方面，一旦发生堵车，原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长，除了等没有别的办法，大量的宝贵时间被浪费在路上。另一方面，汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放，这和低碳生活的理念相违背。

因此，应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一，通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率(保有量)。第二，应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具，以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。

名师点评

① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构，通过字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。

翻译的时候，往往翻译成：与其说是B，不如说是A。

反过来，当我们想用英语表达“与其„„不如„„”的时候，我们可以采用这个结构。

实际上，这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。如2000年Text 3中的选项：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。

② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随，翻译成“随着”。

③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是过去分词短语作后置定语。

相当于定语从句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽车排放的尾气)。

写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中levied on the sales of private cars(针对私家车被征的税)，为过去分词做定语。写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

九、科技与生活

科技与生活

思路点拨

图中描述的是武广高铁的开通，给城际交通带来了极大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市与城市之间距离被“缩短”的问题，但是更深层次来讲，是科技带来了这一切，所以这幅图可以有两个切入点：城际交通、科技改变生活。本文作者选取了第二个角度为主要论述视角。

第一段：图画描述；第二段：两个角度论述科学技术是第一生产力；第三段：提出建议、展望未来。

思维拓展

科技的话题，实际上是映射热点问题：上海世博。

世博的主题“城市让生活更美好”，其中一个侧面就是城市与科技。

可以反映“科技”主题的图片有很多，如现代通讯、网络等。

例如下图，表面上看是反对迷信，深层含义实际上就是崇尚科学。

崇尚科学

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。

Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。

It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。

佳作妙译

如上图所示，一位旅客从广州踏上了去往武汉的高速铁路。2009年，武广高铁正式建成通车，将两地之间的行程从12小时缩短到3小时，极大地方便了两地的交通。难怪这幅漫画上写道“有了武广高铁，每个城市都在家门口”。

科技是第一生产力，在国民经济发展中扮演着重要角色。一方面，科技的进步促进了经济社会的快速进步。高速铁路就是鲜活的例子。首先这条铁路成为地区经济发展新的引擎。其次铁路吸引了大量游客，这些城市的旅游业随之繁荣起来。再次这条铁路很大程度上缓解了现有线路的运输压力。另一方面，随着科技的发展，高速铁路，视频电话，视频会议等应用会越来越多，世界将变得越来越小。

中国政府一直很重视科技的发展，通过2008北京奥运会和2010上海世博两件盛事，科技成功地重塑了中国在世界舞台上的国际形象。因此青少年要怀着“城市，让生活更美好”的信念，积极投身到对科技文化知识的学习上。

名师点评

① reducing„, bringing„: 并列的两个现在分词短语作状语。

② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科学技术是第一生产力。这是任何一篇与科技相关的文章都可以用的万能句型。

③ a new engine: 一个新的引擎，这是一个形象的比喻，把科技对经济发展的动力表达得非常具体、形象。

涉及到科技、发展、环境等题目时，不可避免的就需要用到发展这个词，本文中 “发展”，多次出现，作者采用了多样化的词汇： “development(n。)”，“progress(n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v./n.)”，“advance”。

这类词汇还有： “prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。

近义词的多种替换方式，使得文章在统一中富于变化。广大考生可以把这些词汇积累下来，应用到自己的写作中去，也能起到妙笔生花的效果。

④ 如果题目要求最后一段举例，则我们可以把文章的结尾改成例子：如手机、因特网等是如何提高了生活效率的。

十、弘扬民族文化

弘扬民族文化

思路点拨

图片中共有三个内容：陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊猫、麻将牌。这三种形象都是典型的中国元素。正如图片的名称“欧洲的‘中国热’”所说，一种学习中国传统文化和汉语语言的热潮正在欧洲悄然兴起。毫无疑问，本图的主题是：弘扬中国文化，以及中国国际形象、国际地位的上升。全文行思路可如下：

第一段：分别描述图画中体现出的中国元素；第二段：分析外国人对中华文化的兴趣提升的原因+举例；第三段：对待民族文化的正确态度。

思维拓展

保护文物、文明遗产、名胜古迹的图片也可以从捍卫和弘扬民族文化的角度入手加以分析论证。参考下图：

参考图片

高分范文

In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。

It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”，referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。

Toward this kind of “China craze”，we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。

佳作妙译

这幅图中我们可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶，这是中国自古以来的典型产品。瓶身上画着一只正在练习中国功夫的熊猫，熊猫和功夫同样是中国文化的代表。此外，花瓶中长出的“麻将”也是典型的中国元素。

这幅漫画的主要目的是反映“中国热”的现象，即国外对中国元素尤其是中华文化的一种追捧和热情。国外对中国元素兴趣上升的这种现象是有原因的。首先，过去的几十年中，中国在经济、科技等各个领域都取得了显著的进步，中国的综合国力已经大幅提升。另一方面，由于这些进步，中国以崭新的形象出现在世人面前，在全世界越来越有吸引力。几乎每天都有很多关于中国及其周边正在发生的新闻报道。截止到2010年，已经有26个欧洲国家建立了72所孔子学院来传播中国语言和文化。

对于这种“中国热”的现象我们应该持有正确的态度。一方面我们应该为外国人的“中国热”感到自豪，这源于中国声望的提高。另一方面，弘扬优秀的中国传统文化和捍卫祖国的形象，是每一位中国公民的责任。

名师点评

① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在练中国功夫的熊猫。其中playing Kung Fu 是后置定语修饰panda。

现在分词作后置定语的写法：

第一步：写出定语从句：a panda that is playing Kung Fu；

第二步：把引导词“that”和be动词“is”一起省略；

② passion and enthusiasm:近义词叠加，加强语气和气势。

③ attractive and appealing:近义词叠加，加强语气和气势。

④ reported and broadcasted:近义词叠加，加强语气和气势。

⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established„ culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子学院)的后置定语。写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

第二篇：新东方考研英语作文2011权威预测

最新2011新东方考研英语作文权威预测

（一）2011年小作文写作前瞻

纵观往年考研小作文（应用文）命题，个人认为规律性非常明显。大纲规定的应用文类型，也就那么几种，几乎是一年考一种。我们来看看真题：

2004年大纲第一次增加小作文，所考的第一篇作文来自于2005年1月的辞职信。当年这篇作文令很多业界所谓的预测大师们感到非常意外，因为按照常理，大学生写的第一封职业类邮件应该是求职信，考研学子大多数都是应届生，还没学会写求职信就先写辞职信，总感觉不大厚道。结果，不厚道的事情就是发生了，随之而来的就是网上所罗列的大量预测模板彻底失效，甚至当年有人叫嚣绝对不可能考辞职信；

紧接着2006年，考了咨询信，如何向希望工程捐款，此封信考的很常规，只需在考前做过适当准备即可；

2007年，考查的是主动建议信，再次把考生放在了非常主动的地位上，没人问你意见，你自己跳出来对母校的大学图书馆管理提建议。这封邮件再次使网络上以及很多培训机构的预测失效，因为他们为同学们准备的范文多半是类似于你有一个同学，要去美国读书，写信问你到底是读历史还是计算机。实质上，这属于回复建议信，它的文章开头多半是In respond to your question about whether to „ , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主动建议信的开头却截然不同，因为是主动，所以收信人多半会感觉比较突然，因此需要写信人在开头稍作自我介绍，并不是介绍自己的姓名，而是稍微说明下自己主动提建议的初衷是为对方好，首先取得对方的理解，这才是一封主动建议信所必须具备的，基于此，开头往往会设计为，As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人，I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to as follows.因此，如果不能准确使用，则后果会很严重，从第一句话就会暴露你根本没有审题，得分也就可想而知；

2008年考察的非常巧妙，杂交了两种类型的邮件：道歉加失物归还。出国旅行，把国外朋友借给你听的CD机一不小心带回国了。这封邮件再次使很多死板的失物招领信或寻物启事信模板无用武之地；

2009年，倡议信，倡议大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋，这封信比较常规；

到了最近一次2010年，很多同学都在惊讶于怎么考了一篇招聘通知，难道邮件时代就此终结？我认为，实则不然。首先，通知和邮件的格式并无实质差别，考研小作文的注意力从来就不应该是放在格式上；其次，2009年上课我反复给大家讲过求职信怎么写，尤其是得分的关键---第二段，你必须说明自己适合这份工作，因此我给大家设计了三大自证理由，英文（证书）水准，著名企业实习经验，适合团队协作的性格等，而学习主动性稍微强一些的同学只要动点脑筋，就会发现其实只要把这三点反过来，变成招聘要求，这篇通知就会迎刃而解。这就是为什么当年考完试当天就有很多同学自信的跟我说考得不错的原因，因为他们愿意思考，临门一脚还得靠大家自己！

好了，分析了这么多，也就是为了预测未来。综上所述，小作文考察的特点主要有：第一，希望把学生放在一个主动的地位上，比如辞职，主动建议等，都把大家放在了主动方，而这恰恰与很多同学平时训练应用文时喜欢把自己放在被动方的思维相悖，也是大家为什么感觉总押不到题的根源。第二，考研的考察方向依旧是以邮件为主，换句话说，只要把邮件写好了，即使考别的应用文类型，那也不怕！因此，经过对2011年考研新大纲的考量，本人有七成把握今年考研会考订购信（或出售信，一正一反，都要会写）和投诉信（或回复投诉信）。

（二）2011年考研英语大作文命题方向前瞻

考研英语大作文的命题范围虽每年千奇百变，但基于中国国情的基本事实和命题规律却从来没有改变过，因

此命题的方向把握相对就不是太难的事，具体来说，从宏观角度符合以下两点：

（1）高举和谐社会大旗（Harmonious Society）

从1998年考研英语大作文命题至今，考题基本锁定和谐社会的大旗，反复变换切入点，而命题方式，除了1999年的图表题之外，已经基本锁定在图画题，这个规律已经延续11年未变，具体来看，1998年的诚信（credit）话题，1999年以及2000年连续两年的人与自然和谐共处的话题（nature），2001年爱心话题（love），2002年的世界文化融合话题（culture）,2003年的个人、企业独立成长话题（self-independence）,2004年的人生奋斗无止境话题（it ends today but starts tomorrow）,2005年的抚养老人话题（to respect elders）,2006年的偶像崇拜话题（idol worship），2007年的自信话题（confidence），2008年的残疾人合作奋斗自强不息话题（never give up）,2009年的网络对于人类交流亲疏远近之影响（interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era）以及2010年再次重现的中西文化大融合话题。从这些历年真题中无不察觉出命题者的良苦用心，即完善人格，关注生活，关心他人，最终实现人与人的和谐，个人自身的和谐以及人与自然的和谐。一旦把握此命题思路，在平时的训练时就能真正做到有的放矢，例如，一些阴暗的，过于政治化的话题，就不会成为应试范围，而尚未考察过的一些和谐话题，例如社会责任（responsibility），乐观心态（optimism）亦或平心做人、脚踏实地（to try to grasp your aspiration step by step）等，就应该在平时适当进行练习，这样在走进考场那一刻才能真正实现胸有成足，写作时的素材才会有信手拈来的感觉。

（2）影射当年热点话题（hot spot）

2008年1月19日下午，正值08年考研第一天，我的手机从当天的研究生入学英语考试结束之时起就一直响到当天晚上21时许，大多数是来自学员和同事的祝贺以及感谢，说我押中了08年的考研大作文题。其实，对于押题这个字眼，我内心从来都是不太感冒的，因为一个好的考研者，英文复习的重心绝对不应该放在押题中，一个好的师者，也不应给学员传达押题这样的信息，而是应该帮助学员实实在在找到方向，真正提高写作水平。但押终归押到了，虽有些许惊诧，但也很欣慰的发现，自己一直以来对于考研命题的思路探析没有出错，起码与命题组的专家们算是有些契合了！其实用心观察的人都会发现，近些年尤其是近5年来考研的命题，除了把握和谐社会这个大方向不变之外，影射当年热点就是另一个最直接有效切中命题的捷径。让我们来看看吧，2003年1月考研，正值中国加入WTO第一年，实为2002年经济界的一个热点话题，因此图画选择了“温室里的花朵经不起风雨”，影射中国企业成长继而引申到个人成长都需要自主独立；2005年1月考研，“养老足球赛”，大家查阅2004年全年BBC评选的中国大事记，把当年命名为中国的“司法聚焦年”，因此赡养父母这个小的切入点影射的实为中国当年的人际全局面貌；2006年1月考研，“偶像崇拜话题”，更是明显不过，2005年全年的超级女声几乎撼动了整个中国娱乐界；2007年1月的“自信话题”，漫画中一个守门员，一个射手，正在面临点球大战前的心理波动，回应的的正是2006年沸腾全球的德国世界杯；再到2008年1月，充分显示了命题者的智慧，中国正式进入奥运年，奥运所体现的一切精神就是永不放弃，自强不息，但如果直接选择一幅漫画就是关于奥运，又太过明显，因此，我当时在2007年5月17号的一次考研讲座现场就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望，即奥运这个热点过于强大，所以不可能避开，那怎么隐藏？？所以只能选择打“擦边球”，通过残奥，影射残疾人不屈不挠奋斗之话题，因为每一个观看过哪怕任何一场残疾人运动会的人都会为这个特殊群体的精神所震撼，果不其然，最终的结果如我所料！因此，我们可以大胆的推测，即将到来的11年考研，这个大规律依旧有很大的可能得到延续。

（三）2011年考研英语预测

以下六大话题搜集，是在充分研究2011年全年大事记的前提下，严格遵守以上两大命题思路所作出的预测，具体的范文会陆续在我的元旦押题班中发布，请大家引起足够重视！

1.漫画“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射国际对于中国认识的前后变化。

2.漫画“相互推卸责任”---影射食品安全事件中的社会责任感和道德感缺失。

3.漫画“股市大跌”---影射投机心态不可有，脚踏实地才是出路。

4.漫画“地震中用自己身躯保护学生的好老师”---影射灾难事件中人性的光辉。关于灾难，此命题切入点还有可能为保持乐观心态。

5.漫画“把我整成**明星的样子”---影射整容现象以及山寨现象

最后，衷心祝愿所有参加2011年的考研的学子都能经过自己的努力获得成功，其实，准备考研的过程所懂得的诸多宝贵品质，本身就是一笔巨大的财富。

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附件一：2011年考研英语大作文权威预测一

范文演示：Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete

and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件二：2011年考研英语大作文权威预测二

重点推荐: the lack of responsibility

范文演示：When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.附件三：2011年考研英语大作文权威预测三

背景介绍：山寨现象

“山寨”一词源于广东话，是“小型、小规模”甚至有点“地下工厂”的意思，其主要特点为仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今，网络上各种各样的东西都有山寨版，山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”，山寨版“鸟巢”，山寨版的《红楼梦》甚至火过新版《红楼梦》。

从2003年开始出现山寨手机到各种山寨产品，“山寨”一词从经济行为逐渐演变为一种社会文化现象。如今“山寨相机”、“山寨电影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等诸多带有模仿性质的“山寨现象”层出不穷，形成了独有的“山寨文化”。

KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”（山寨）

MODEL ESSAY:

As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”

特别提醒：2011年必背小作文三篇

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Could you give us some idea about your price?

Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信：

你参加了一个公司的面试，结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无，根本不顾及你的感受，请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。

1，说明来信目的

2，具体阐述投诉理由

3，期待的解决方式

点评：这是一封典型的combination（合体式）作文，它既涉及找工作面试用语，又涉及投诉信，代表了考研应用文命题的典型思路。

MODEL ESSAY:

Dear Sir or Madam，I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours，Li Ming

第三篇：考研英语辅导班的预测作文材料(带翻译)

作文

Book Knowledge vs.Experience

Knowledge can be acquired from many sources.These include books, teachers and practical experience, and each has its own advantages.The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life.We can study all the places in the world and learn from people we will never meet in our lifetime, just by reading about them in books.We can also develop our analytical skills and learn how to view and interpret the world around us in different ways.Furthermore, we can learn from the past by reading books.In this way, we won’t repeat the mistakes of others and can build on their achievements.Practical experience, on the other hand, can give us more useful knowledge.It is said that one learns best by doing, and I believe that this is true, whether one is successful or not.In fact, I think making mistakes is the best way to learn.Moreover, if one wants to make new advances, it is necessary to act.Innovations do not come about through reading but through experimentation.Finally, one can apply the skills and insights gained through the study of books to practical experience, making an already meaningful experience more meaningful.However, unless it is applied to real experiences, book knowledge remains theoretical and, in the end, is useless.That is why I believe that knowledge gained from practical experience is more important than that acquired from books.The Influence of Television and Movies

There is no doubt that watching television and movies can influence the way that people behave.Moreover, it seems that people are spending more and more time watching some sort of visual entertainment, whether it is television, a video tape or a DVD.Therefore, the effects of visual media cannot be ignored.One obvious effect of the these media is that watching them induces people to buy certain products.television advertising is widespread and, nowadays, even movie theaters permit advertisements.Another way TV and the movies affect people is that they give people either a broader view of the world or a distorted one, depending on what type of program they watch.Those who watch news and educational program can learn many new things while those who watch primarily entertainment shows may come to believe that most people in the world possess great wealth and good looks.It may make them become dissatisfied with their own lives.Finally, perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children, who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see on TV or in the movies.With the every-increasing popularity of video entertainment, society must pay attention to these effects.Television and movies, while entertaining and informative, cannot take the place of real experience.Living Longer

In the past it was not uncommon for a man to die at forty, having lived a full life.But now we consider a

lifespan of forty years to be very short.It is not unusual for people to live into their eighties and nineties, and some even reach 100.What’s more, people are living long, healthy lives and are active well into their “golden years”.Mankind’s longevity is due mainly to advances in science and technology.Medical breakthroughs have eradicated many fatal diseases that were once common.Perhaps more importantly, better general health means that people are less likely to contract infections in the first place.Better health also helps people prevent slowly debilitating conditions, such as heart disease, which can take their lives at an early age.And as civilization has advanced, our living environment and sources of food have become more sanitary.Furthermore, work is now safer and not as taxing on the human body.We do not wear out after just a few years of very hard work.There are many reasons why people are now living longer than ever before.But what is more important is that they are living better as they live longer.It is my opinion that we have scientific and technological development to thank for this progress.The Media and Famous People

In almost every form of media, including television, newspapers and magazines, a great deal of attention is paid to the personal lives of celebrities.It seems that the public cannot get enough of this kind of news.However, I believe that the media have a responsibility to present a balanced view of the world, as well as respect the lives of public figures.Therefore, I believe that the media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people.For people who are fascinated with the lives of public figures there are some forms of media devoted exclusively to this topic.They can satisfy their curiosity by buying fan magazines and watching TV shows devoted to entertainment news.The general media should present all types of information because people have different interests.Furthermore, the practice of dwelling on the private lives of celebrities can lead people to pay more attention to these matters than they otherwise would.Perhaps most importantly, the media should respect the privacy of every individual, including public figures.They may have chosen to be in the public eye, but that does not give the public the right to know everything about them.Moreover, many stories about celebrities are untrue;they are only gossip reported to increase sales of magazines and other media.They are unfair to the famous and mislead the public.For all of these reasons, I believe that the media should pay more attention to matters other than the private lives of public figures.In this way, they can appeal to a wider audience and encourage people to develop other interests.In my opinion, the media currently pay too much attention to the private lives of public figures.Human Activity and the Earth

There is no doubt that human activity has an effect on the planet.We see the evidence of mankind’s endeavors all around us.While some of man’s accomplishments, such as the building of transportation

systems and the consistent supply of potable water, have made Earth a better place for people to live, they have not come without cost.Overall, it seems that human activity harms the Earth more than it benefits it.For example, the transportation systems that benefit mankind also create pollution and use up valuable energy resources.While we cannot do without transportation these days, we cannot ignore the fact that it has an adverse effect on the planet.Furthermore, those advances that benefit people do not benefit al the life on Earth.Deforestation endangers many animals, and mankind’s great thirst for water and other resources leads to the extinction of many plant forms.In addition, accomplishments such as the supply of potable water to a community are only response to problems that mankind created in the past.It was man that made the water unfit to drink in the first place.Finally, the damage that human activity causes will eventually have a negative effect on people.They will also suffer the effects of pollution and diminishing natural resources.In conclusion, it seems apparent that man’s activity benefits primarily himself, not the Earth.Moreover, those benefits are only short-term advantages, and man will also suffer the negative effects of his activity in the future.The Earth does not have an inexhaustible supply of resources, so every effort should be made to conserve resources and limit the impact of human activity on the planet.

第四篇：2011英语作文权威预测

2011英语作文权威预测

话题写作

（一)有关“志愿者”话题

例1：假设你是健康俱乐部的一位志愿者，根据以下要点，写一篇短文，帮助广大市民更好地了解和预防H1N1流感：(1)该流感已在许多国家爆发，病例每天持续增多；

(2)该流感与其他季节性流感传播方式一样，通过咳嗽、喷嚏等在人群中传播；

(3)建议：不随便当众咳嗽、打喷嚏，经常洗手，生病时在家休息„„

As we know, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many countries.An increasing number of cases are being reported every day。

It’s thought that H1N1 flu spreads in the same way that regular seasonal influenza viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sick with the virus。

Faced with this severe disease, here are some everyday measures we should take to stay healthy.First, cover your nose and mouth with a tissue when you cough or sneeze.Wash your hands often with soap and water, especially after you cough or sneeze.Avoid touching your eyes, nose or mouth.Germs spread that way.If you get sick, stay home from work or school and limit contact with others to keep from infecting them。

Finally, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadly disease, which is curable.So, don’t be nervous and just keep calm as usual。

例2：

你所在的城市即将举办国际贸易博览会。有关部门现向全社会招聘志愿者。要求：

(1)具有为国际友人服务的热情；

(2)掌握丰富的文化知识，既是服务人员，也是文化的使者；

(3)具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。

假如你叫李华，请根据以上要求，写一封想作博览会志愿者的申请信。

要求：字迹工整，100词左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

生词：国际贸易博览会 the International Trade Exposition

Dear Sir or Madam：

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I’d like very much to be a volunteer。

All our citizens are hosts for this special event.Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world.Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture.What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it.I can express myself fluently and clearly in English。

To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer.I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one。

Yours，Li Hua

(二)有关“信心与希望”话题

例：

1、生活中困难不可避免，面对困难需要信心„

2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用„

3、你对困难的态度„

It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties.When we are 1

faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence.With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster.Accordingly, some people give up, some persist.In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges.On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner.And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

（三）有关“诚实、诚信”话题

例：

1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信的现象„

2、举一例说明(如，有毒奶粉、冒名顶替上大学、考试作弊等)„

3、讲求诚信的意义„

Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids.What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest.However, there’re lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself.Take the case of fake milk powder for example.After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health.To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished

for all the serious consequences in the end.Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get.Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you.In a sense, if life is a longjourney, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.Let’s pick up our “backpack”—honesty, and start the wonderful journey

(四)有关“跨文化”话题

例：假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他写一封短信：

1、春节在中国人中的地位

2、春节前，人们„„

3、春节期间，人们„„

参考词汇：对联couplet

爆竹firecracker Dear John, How time flies!Four moths have passed since we saw each other last time.I cannot helpbut miss you.You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival.Now I would like to tell yousomething about it.The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.It is the most important and enjoyable one.A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household.They are said to frighten away the ghosts.On that day, people are dressed up.Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival.People after a year’s hard work begin to relax and visit one another.Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives.Families get together.They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show.Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival.Best wishes，Yours, Li Hua 五)有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题

例1： 根据下面提示，写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。

(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。

(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。

(3)提出自己的看法。

注意：单词数120个左右。

Wealth and Happiness

Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them.It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor.They work hard and overcome many difficulties.After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。

But some people believe wealth can’t bring them happiness.For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him.And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing.What a terrible result!

In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society.If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life.But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth.Remember： money is not everything。

例2：

最近，你班同学展开了一场讨论，主题是：Wealth & Health。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇100词左右的文章，介绍一下你们讨论的情况。

一些人认为财富更重要

一些人认为健康更重要

1.没有钱万万不行

2.想办法多挣钱

1.健康是本钱

2.要爱惜身体

个人看法：更看重健康。身体不好，钱再多也无济于事。

Wealth & Health

Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing.In order to accumulate more money they can do anything.However, other people regard health as more important.Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more.Everybody wants to live a happy life.So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless.In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy.So, just do our best to keep healthy.六)有关“教育、校园类”话题

例1：你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法。请描述下列各图，适当增加细节使文章连贯，并谈谈你的看法。

Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three.They both work hard and but they have different learning methods.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher.As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework.So he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep.However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning.She listens attentively and tries to catch 3

everything that the teacher says in class.Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her to go to bed early.In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.例2：假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用

英文作一简短的告别演讲：

1、对三年高中生活的怀念；

2、对老师的感谢；

3、对母校的祝福。

My teachers and fellow students，In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school.How time flies!Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words.The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart.Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly.But it is not the end.It just means that we’re going to begin a new journey.Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers.Thank you!例3：假如你是李华，是华文中学的学生会主席，为了丰富同学们的业余生活，提高同学们的英语水平，学生会组织了一个English club，请你写封邀请信，邀请同学们参加，内容应包括：

1.English club设立的目的2.English club 要开展的活动

3.邀请大家参加 English club

注意：开头、结尾已给出；

字数80-120;

auditorium 礼堂

Boys and girls，I’m the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you.To enrich our life on campus and improve our English, we, Student Union, set up an English club.Obviously, besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us.It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding.There goes the plan.It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening.Apart from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening;yet, the specific topics haven’t been settled.If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.I’ll highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club.You will never regret joining us.So, just do it.Student Union

例4：目前，有不少中学生不做家务，一些父母认为：中学生学习负担重，首要任务是学习。再者，中学生也不知道怎样做家务。请你就此用英文给一家报社写一篇短文，阐述你的观点和看法。

注意：

1.词数：100左右；

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Nowadays, some students don’t help their parents do housework at home.Some parents love their children too much and don’t let them work at home.On one hand, they think that 4

their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only.On the other hand, they think their children don’t know how to do the housework.However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home.First, that can develop their love for work.Next, that can help them understand their parents better.Last and the most important, that can help them cultivate their ability to live.七)有关“环境友好型、资源节约型社会”话题

例1：近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：

有人建议

你的建议

1。不浪费粮食和纸张

2。尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋

3。毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用？

注意：

1。不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；

2。词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数；

3。参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks

Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school.Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get.Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc.All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.例2：假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看法写出来。

所谓的生态游

欣赏风景，享受新鲜空气

有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾

真正的生态游

享受自然，同时也是一种责任

要保护自然，保护野生动物

带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水

Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency.All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air.But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing..Some even tried to catch the birds they saw.What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there.The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.I don’t think this is a true eco-travel.A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well.As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it.And we should also try to protect wildlife.A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory;leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.八)有关“文明礼仪”话题

例1：

请根据下列提示用英语在校园网站上报道该校即将举行的一次主题演讲活动。

主题：文明校园，我的责任

时间：本周六上午

地点：学校操场

演讲者：各年级演讲前两名获胜者

出席人员：全体师生

主要内容：不乱扔废弃物，保持校园清洁；

爱护花草、树木，让校园充满绿色；

不追逐打闹，文明举止；

关爱他人，让校园充满爱。

参考词汇：文明civilize

There will be a speech on our school playground this Saturday afternoon, whose theme is “To civilize schoolyard is my responsibility”.All the teachers and students are required to attend.In the activity, the first two winners in each grade will give such valuable advice as follows: we should not litter anywhere in order to keep our campus clean;we should love flowers, grass and trees so that everyone can enjoy the greenness;we should behave well instead of running after one another, quarreling and fighting noisily;we should care for others so that our school will be full of love.We believe our school will become more and more beautiful and peaceful.例2：

假设你是李明，最近你校的一份英语报纸正在校园出现的“涂鸦”现象开展讨论。请你根据以下要点写一封信给报纸编辑，发表你的看法。

(1)“涂鸦”丑陋难看。

(2)公共建筑物不是表达观点、感情的地方。

(3)禁止“涂鸦”。

参考词汇：graffiti 涂鸦，(在墙上的)乱涂乱写

vandalism 对公共财物的有意破坏

Dear Editor，Recently graffiti has become more noticeable in my college.I feel quite annoyed at them, especially when some of my classmates praise them as a kind of so-called art.Confronted with this impolite phenomenon, I can’t help asking myself: what is wrong with today’s teenagers?

In my opinion, graffiti is a form of vandalism.They are a mess and are ugly to look at.Meanwhile, walls are public places, and they should not be used to express personal views and feelings.I really think vandalism should be stopped, and those who refuse to stop this bad practice should be punished.We should clear away these ugly expressions and drawings so that our college may return to its true self--a clean, quiet place for study, teaching and research.Yours，Li Ming

(九)有关“网络”话题

例1：报纸和网站是当今两大主要媒体。请根据下表内容，以 “Newspapers and Websites” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍这两种媒体的优缺点。

报

纸

1.传统媒体，天天更新，信息可靠

2.携带方便，随时随地可以阅读

3.仅有文字和图片 网

站

1.新兴媒体，信息更新速度快

2.依赖于电脑及互联网

3.包含文字、图片、音频和视频

注意：

1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可以适当发挥；

2.词数：100-120

3.参考词汇：更新update；音频audio；视频video Newspapers and Websites

Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information.But they’re different in some ways.Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information.They can be carried and read almost anywhere you like.So many people like reading them.But they can only contain texts and photos.On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people.Websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting.What’s more, they are updated from time to time.So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers.But it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.例2：目前，一些诸如GG, MM, Xia Mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行，并且出现在家庭作业报告，甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以 “Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited(禁止)？”为题，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你自己的看法。

一些同学认为

网络语言生动、时尚

网络语言充满幽默与智慧

使网上聊天更快捷

另一些同学认为

网络语言缺乏思想性

没有被大部分人理解、接受

过多使用使人不解，甚至误解？ 你的看法

注意：

1.短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

2.词数：100左右

3.参考词汇：生动的vivid；智慧intelligence Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited?

At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”，has become popular among the teenagers.There are different opinions on Internet Slang.Some students think Internet Slang is vivid, fashionable and full of humor and intelligence.Besides, it makes chatting on the Internet quicker.However, some other students think Internet Slang lacks depth of thought and is too simple.Also, it is hard to understand and not accepted by most people.The words sometimes might make people confused, even resulting in misunderstanding.Every coin has two sides.In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we don’t know the Internet Slang, we seem to fall behind the times.It will be OK as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.例3：假如你是李华，最近你对本班的60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查，结果见下表。请你用英语给某报社写一篇报道，反映你调查的内容，以引起公众的关注。

注意：

1.报道应包括图表中的所有内容；

2.叙述中要适当增加个人观点，对学生上网情况进行评论，并提出建议；

3.词数：100左右；

4.参考词汇：做调查make a survey

Dear editor，I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in our class about their purpose(s)of getting on the Internet.The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it.What boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like them.Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet.Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends.As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.十)有关“人与事件”话题

例1：

The Most Unforgettable Person I Ever knew

(1)我生活中最难以忘怀的人是„„

(2)为什么他(或她)一直在我心中

(3)结论

In my life I have met many people who are really worth my recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever knew is my Chinese language teacher.What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities.First of all, I was attracted by his lively wit.I remember we always long for his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke loud laughs.Second, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer--an awakening of a passion for learning.He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of Chinese and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Finally, I was deeply impressed by the respect he showed for us, for he treated us like friends rather than students.Although it is nearly 10 years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.例2：

A Lesson from My Parents

Parents are your first teachers.Write a short essay to describe one of instructive lessons you once learned from your parents, including：

(1)描述一件有教育意义的事情；

(2)它对你的影响。

A distance of 500 miles separates my college from my hometown, an old city, where my parents have been living, but my heart has never been away for a single step, because the lesson from them will be a gift of lifetime.When I was still 15, the laid-offs, or rather untimely retirements, of both my Mum and dad, arrived by far earlier than ever expected.Moreover, it could be hardly imagined how much their careers meant to them other than earning money.Nevertheless, it would be not long before they managed to get over such a blow.They thus underwent all kinds of odd jobs they could run into, be they dirty or painstaking.That way with sufficient money for my tuition fee and living expenses I went through my three academic years.Now one of them is getting weaker and both older, but the lesson that God only helps those who help themselves they taught me will endure in my mind despite the passage of time.With the development of science, human life has changed tremendously.People living in the 18th or 19th centuries 8

would never imagine the advanced household appliances we are now able to enjoy.Every aspect of our lives, for instance, in the field of medicine or agriculture has witnessed great improvements through the application of science.随着科学的发展，人类的生活发生了巨大的变化。18世纪和19世纪的人无法想象我们现在所享用的家用器具。我们生活的各个方面，比如医药、农业，都经历了科学所带来的改善。

However, many people complained that science has also brought disasters to human life.Some evil scientists have used their knowledge to do some illegal things.They may use science for the creation of weapons to destroy thousands of lives in wars.They might also use their knowledge to produce drugs to make a lot of money for themselves.然而，也有人抱怨科学带给人类许多灾难。有些邪恶的科学家利用他们的知识做一些非法之事。他们用科学知识制造武器在战争中摧毁成千上百的生命；他们用其知识制造毒品赚取钱财。

Generally speaking, science has provided us with many valuable things.But if used wrongly, it can also lead to harm.We should try to keep science under control and put it to the best use of mankind.总的来说，科学为我们带来许多有价值的东西。但是一旦被错误地使用，它也能导致伤害。我们应该使之置于我们控制之下，使其为人类发挥出最大作用

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Directions：

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay , you should

1)describe the pictures briefly，2)interpret the meaning , and

3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.范文：

The simple but educational photovividly depicts that an elderly mother received a telephone call, which successfully attracts our attention.After a closer watch, we can find that the so-called “celebrating Mother’s Day” is something so formal because her

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children tell her to prepare the dinner for them.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.Filial piety has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture for thousands of years.Respectingour parents is the first priority.However, ridiculous as it is, the phenomenon in the picture is not infrequent in today’s society.For one thing, enormous economic development brings not only wealth, but also public’s obsession for material possessions.They only care about individual gain and loss, which undermine the once sacred bond between parents and children.For another, people seem to be fond of boasting of how they abide by traditions through holding grand meals for their parents.As a matter of fact, some even compete about the extravagance of the event.I argue that those who behave as the picture miss the essence and profound values of our traditions.Filial piety should not be expressed by means of superficial “performance”, but by ways of children’s genuine care and love for their parents.Thinking about how parents took care of us when we were babies in cradles, we should realize that they all need due attention when aging.Piety is the foundation of all virtues.中外文化交流

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay, you should

1)describe the picture briefly，2)interpret its meaning, and

3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.范文：

As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, two foreigners humbly ask if they can be the students of the Confucius, which successfully captures our eyes.If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that they are very interested in traditional Chinese culture.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more enlightening.http://kaoyan.wendu.com/

The reason why increasingly more foreigners begin to learn Chinese culture is varied.To begin with, the long history and effulgent culture of the Chinese nation contribute to the improvement of human beings, which account to the current enthusiasm of Chinese in the world.What is more, due to the practice of reforming and opening-up policy,our national strengthhas improved the comprehensive national power.So more and more countries, international organizations and people become interested in Chinese culture and come into contact with China.Then studying Chinese is the only road for them to understand China better.According to the above analysis, it is my view that national culture is a priceless spiritual treasure that should be preserved and cherished.Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our society colorful and vigorous.坚定信念(Ⅰ)

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay, you should

1)describe the picture briefly，2)interpret its meaning, and

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3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET.范文：

As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, the elderly man in the picture makes every effort to remove the mountain with an unbreakable faith that only by continuous endeavor can people achieve what they want, which successfully captures our eyes.And the other man with two extremely heavy burdens of ideals on his shoulders assists the elderly to remove the mountains.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more enlightening.Theoretically, several reasons may cause the phenomenon conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance.On the top of the list is that both of them adhere to their primal ideals and beliefs, that is, people should never forget why they started, and their mission can be accomplished.This founding aspiration is what inspires them to advance.In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore.It is universally admitted that people with great determination and courage will succeed eventually, especially when they encounter difficulties.According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend.Of all the steps, mass media tend to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.坚定信念(Ⅱ)

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay, you should

1)describe the picture briefly，2)interpret its meaning, and

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You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET.范文：

Here are two pictures, interesting and provoking.In the first picture, the man, at the very beginning, makes every effort to dig diamonds with an unbreakable faith that only by continuous endeavor can people achieve what they want.By contrast, the second picture describes that, one year later, he doesn’t persist in his initial unswerving faith, and abandons his original ideas completely.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the problem conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance.On the top of the list is that he does not adhere to his primal ideals and beliefs, that is, people should never forget why they started, and their mission can be accomplished.This founding aspiration is what inspires them to advance.In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore.It is universally admitted that the last leg of a journey marks the halfway point and our initial motivation will inspire us to finish the last leg.According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend.Of all the steps, mass media tend to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.