第一篇:今2011年专业英语四级作文十大热点话题预测
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一、低碳与环保
构思点拨 图片中一个小男孩,早已进入甜蜜的梦乡,电视却依然在播放,这时候妈妈走过来帮 他关了电视,还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然,直观看来,这幅图是在告诉我们要 节约用电。但是,我们如果从更宏观,更深层次的角度去思考,这幅图正是在告诉我们一 个流行的生活理念:低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的 内容和结构可如下: 第一段:描述图画;第二段:列举现象,分析影响;第三段:建议措施,展望未来。思维拓展 环保话题,例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系,从低碳的角度入手展开写作。高分范文 As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。佳作妙译 如上图生动地展示,一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉,电视还开着。这时候妈妈走 过来帮他关了电视,责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视,实际上并 不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费,这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活” 的理念。低碳生活是指,减少碳,尤其是二氧化碳的排放,以保护环境,实现可持续发展。根据统计数据,如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时,则每个月可以减少 4.17 千克 的碳排放量。作为对地球负责任的管理者,我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式,从日常 生活中的每个细节开始。我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展,牺牲长期的环境 健康的做法,转向发展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助 我们实现社会发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐。名师点评 ① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡,也可以表达为 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这类副词的加入,使得描述更生动活泼,而不是单调的主谓宾。② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。该句主干结构是:A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。这个句型的含义是:一件事情正在发生(正在睡觉),突然发生了另一件事(妈妈来关电 视)。“with the television on”: with 引导的伴随结构,即 A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以写成伴随状语 A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”,这句是 妈妈关电视的伴随动作,一边关电视,一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。
图画描述这句,写得越精彩越好,这句是先入为主的句子,也是阅卷老师重点看的句 子。③ are used to doing:习惯于做某事,使用短语表达,地道准确。④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:这是 2005 年真题阅读中的原 句,的文章里面的句型,引用的标准到位。一般而言,环保类话题,都可以用这句话,引出第三段的个人评论。历年真题是一座巨大的宝库,我们一定要充分利用,举一反三。
二、网络的利与弊
思路点拨 本图中,一个女孩正在因一个问题感到困惑,“10 牛的水是否产生 10 牛的浮力?”。于是她上网求助于网友,网友的答案更是五花八门,说对说错的都有。女孩更加困惑。由 此可见,这幅图反应了这样一个现实:网络文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以这样设计: 第一段:描述图画;第二段:网络的利+举例,网络的弊+举例;第三段:提出建议措 施——取其精华,去其糟粕。思路拓展 所有利弊型的文章,均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如,城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。高分范文 Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。佳作妙译 佳作妙译 如图所示,图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题,来自于网友的答案差异太大了,以 至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显,人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一 种时尚。这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面,因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如,通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标,我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面,由于因特网上有海量的信息,很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能 会把错误的信息误认为是正确的,其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也 可能会给人们带来负面影响。总之,一方面,充分利用因特网来提高效率,节约时间,这很重要。另一方面,应该 采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据,以免被误导。只有这样,网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。名师点评 ① so„ that 句型:如此„„以至于„„。② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是 2004 年真题 阅读第一篇中的句型。③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是 2003 年真题 阅读第一篇中的句型。可见,充分了解真题阅读,对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work: 倒装句。倒装句的写法(部分倒装): 原句:The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。only 放在句首,把情态动词 can 和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。
三、醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任
思路点拨 图画中一个已经喝得烂醉如泥的司机,车顶上还驮着一瓶巨大的啤酒,汽车却依然在 路上飞驰。虽然这幅图有点夸张,但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题:醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述: 第一段:描述图画;第二段:分两个分论点进行论述:提高安全意识、提高社会责任 感;第三段:建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展 实际上,本文的内容和行文思路,不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车,还适用于所有关于安全事 故和社会责任的图片话题。例如,火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的 话题,都可以参考此文。高分范文 高分范文 What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。佳作妙译 这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊!在这幅图中,烂醉如泥的司机正在马路上飞 速行驶,车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。这幅图所传达的意义,对我们国家的每一位成员,都具 有现实和警醒的意义。这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐释。一方面,安全意识应该是我首要重视的问题。生命是一次单程旅行:你不能经历两次生命。所以我 们应该敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而宣告任何一条生命的结束是残忍的、不人道的。另一方面,作为这个社会负责任的一员,我们每个人都应该去承担社会责任。我们不仅仅是为了自己活着,我们也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。无论是声称司 机的、还是受害者的生命不重要,都是不负责任的。因为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨 大的悲痛和沉重的生活负担。简言之,官方应该制定立法措施严厉地惩罚醉酒驾车的司机,例如吊销驾照或进行监 禁。立法措施势在必行。此外,电视、收音机、网站等大众传媒应该共同努力来提高公民 的安全意识和责任感,以降低交通事故的发生率。名师点评 ① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻,相当于汉语 中的烂醉如泥。用语非常形象生动,一个酩酊大醉的司机形象跃然纸上!② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice:非常富有哲理性,语言优美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏,语言简洁、有力、到位。③ DUI: 醉酒驾车,也可以写成:drunk driving。④ leaving„:动词的 ing 形式作伴随状语。句型经典。
四、大学生就业:放低姿态、平常心做人 大学生就业:放低姿态、思路点拨 在画中,一位正在找工作的年轻女孩,毫不犹豫地拒绝了一份服务岗位的工作,不屑 一顾地说:“伺候人的工作我不干”。这幅图表明,很多年轻人找工作时,眼光过高,不 切实际,没有用平常心对待就业问题。实际上,可以先就业后择业。所以这篇图画作文可 以这样创作: 第一段:描述图画;第二段:两个角度分析这种现象的原因:志存高远,不愿意从底 层做起;好逸恶劳;第三段:建议措施:教育年轻人要脚踏实地;根除好逸恶劳的思想。思维拓展关于平常心态做人、脚踏实地的话题还可以有很多,例如城市选择问题、院校报考问 题、专业选择问题、股市问题,均可以从这个角度出发,进行展开论述。高分范文 As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。佳作妙译 正如上面的漫画所示,这个找工作的女孩毫不犹豫地拒绝了一个服务岗位,她还抱怨 一直找不到工作。同时她还纳闷为什么在如今找个有前途的工作这么难。这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见,尤其在校园里更加明显。一方面,很多求职者不 愿意从事秘书或助理等工作,他们认为这些是卑微且无足轻重的。他们有更大的抱负,想 直接登上成功的顶峰。可是他们没有意识到理想抱负是需要一步一步实现的。另一方面,很多失业者和毕业生都想少劳多得,想得到一份轻松舒适而且薪水不菲的工作。这种“好 逸恶劳”的生活态度对个人和社会的发展都是很不利的。我们不应看不起服务业,第三产 业,因为它确实为我们提供了很多工作机会和职位。因此,采取一些必要措施来改善这种情况已经是当务之急。一方面,应该发起一场教 育运动来普及这种“千里之行,始于足下”的理念和脚踏实地的生活态度。另一方面,要 把懒惰的思想从青少年的思想中根除。只有这样人们才能更好地实现自己的人生价值,才 能让失业率大幅下降,才能实现社会和谐。名师点评 ① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴随状语。② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 这个句子 充当了整个句子的宾语,叫做宾语从句。特殊疑问词 why, what, when 等引导的宾语从句必须使用正常的陈述语序,不得使用 主谓倒装的形式。例如,这句就不能写成:why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society?finding a promising job 是主语。is 是系动词。再如:I don’t know what his name is。绝对不能写成:I don’t know what is his name。③ 2008 年真题阅读选项中的句子。原句为:Political compromises are easily found throughout the U.S.history。稍加改动,变成了一个个性化的句子引入第二段内容的模板,虽然没有华丽的辞藻,但是非常精彩和纯正。
④ be conscious that: 意识到,that 后边必须接完整的主谓宾结构。这个表达等同于 be aware that,可以进行同意替换。此外:be conscious of 和 be aware of 在意思上也等同于这两者,表示意识到。但是:be conscious of 和 be aware of 后边要接单词或者短语,一般不能加句子。⑤ the third industry: 第三产业,是 service industry(服务业)的同位语。同位语其实一般都是废话,等同于前面的词。巧妙地使用同位语,可以把单调的句子变得错落有致、抑扬顿挫。it does provide us with: does 在句中表强调,翻译成“确实”。⑥ Only in this way can„ realize„ and can„ be„ and thus can„ be„:排 比句,短促有力,气势强大,使得对未来的展望显得信心十足!普通的被考生用烂了的这个句型:Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society,被本文的作者巧妙地改写成了一个精彩的排比句。这样的作文,怎么能不得高分呢!
五、节约资源
思路点拨
本图描述的场景是一副令人喜闻乐见的图画,图画中,一只可爱的小猪造型的储蓄罐,正在接住自来水里滴下来的水滴,像存钱一样,存储水滴。实际上,它储存的不是水,它 储存的是幸福。我们可以看出,人们有了节水意识。但是,从正在滴水的水龙头看,还是 有人忽略了节约用水这一问题。因此,本文可以这样写作: 第一段:描述图画;第二段:分析有些人浪费水的心理,并阐述水资源的宝贵;第三 段:建议措施。思维拓展 实际上,积极正面的图片写作,和揭示负面现象的文章没有什么本质上的区别,只要 我们笔锋一转,就能把它继续按照原来的套路写。本文也可以从低碳、环保的角度出发进行写作。高分范文 Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。佳作妙译 水资源一度被误认为是一种无限的可再生资源,实际上,水资源是非常有限且宝贵的。有幸的是现在公众开始关注这一问题了。如图所示,一只可爱的快乐小猪存钱罐积攒着水 龙头里流出的每一滴水,就像存钱一样。然而,水资源短缺问题仍然威胁着全人类的生存和发展。浪费水的现象在日常生活中
仍然随处可见。例如,经常有粗心大意者忘记关水龙头。更有甚者认为自己缴了水费就有 权浪费,与他人无关。事实上,水资源不仅在生活中必不可少,在工农业生产中也是不可 或缺的。水资源是全人类共同的财富,很难想象当没有水的时候世界会是什么样子。虽然越来越多的人已经认识到了这种紧迫性,但是仍然要采取进一步的措施。从宏观 层面上讲,全世界应该共同努力反对浪费水。从微观层面上讲,要进行广泛的宣传活动。比如在电视台播出关于如何节水的节目。节约用水就是存储幸福,只有节约用水才能为子 孙后代存储更好的生活。名师点评 ① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 来自于 2005 年阅读真题,原句是这样的:Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。历年真题是一座巨大的宝库,广大考生一定要学会充分利用这宝贵的资源!② 第二段开头,用了一个转折词,也就是“起承转合”中的所谓的“转”,把这篇作 文改造成了一篇社会问题型作文,也就是大家最擅长写的作文。③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒装句,表语提前,句子倒装。倒装句写法: 第一步:写正常原句:Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。第二步:表语 precious 提前。第三步:主谓倒置,变成 So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。普通的 so„ that„ 句型,也能被化腐朽为神奇,成为钻石加分句型!④ indispensable: 不可或缺的,替换 important 的一个很好的词汇。顺便讲一个英译汉的技巧:大家可以看到,在译文中,这句话被翻译两次:必不可少、不可或缺。因为原文中出现了:not only„ but also,所以这个单词被拆开翻译成了两个近义词,以使行文更加通顺。⑤ what the world would be like:注意宾语从句必须用陈述语序。⑥ become aware of: 意识到。意思和用法都等同于 be conscious of。后边接词语。⑦ 非常重要:一般而言,历年真题中谈到的正面话题,或者人生哲理类的文章,有可 能题目要求会变成: Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should(1)describe the drawing briefly,(2)explain its intended meaning, and then(3)support your view with an example/examples。
也就是第三段并非发表个人评论(建议措施),而是举例,这时候就需要我们去调整一 下文章的叙述方法。这种情况下,我们可以把结尾段调整为: Examples of people’s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life.On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day.In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。这样的话,结尾段就从建议措施,变成了论证文章的示例。
六、面对人生与社会:乐观与豁达 面对人生与社会:
思路点拨 图画中的一只小绵羊,正呆在一块大石头的阴影下面。但是它乐观、豁达地认为,有 阴影,那么就说明有阳光。这幅图无疑向我们传达了一种健康的人生哲学:乐观生活、达 观处世。由于这是一篇人生哲理类文章,所以文章安排可以相对自由一些: 第一段:描述图画;第二段:利用正反举例论证悲观与乐观的差距+总结句;第三段: 倡导一种乐观生活、达观处世的人生态度和人生哲学。思维拓展 本文也可以从世界观、人生观的角度入手。相反,如果是一幅表明悲观厌世的图片,我们也可以采取同样的手法进行处理。高分范文 As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④ 佳作妙译上面的漫画清楚地表现出这只山羊不顾阴影的威胁仍然保持乐观,因为它相信有阴影 的地方就一定有阳光。图片中反映的问题是积极的和富有启发性的。我认为作者要表达的意义是要提醒我们保持乐观心态的重要性。如果漫画中的山羊终 日悲观地生活在阴影中,它将永远无法获得舒适和幸福的生活。类似的例子千千万,但是 我认为下面的例子就足够有说服力。如果这里有半杯水,悲观的人会抱怨只剩下半杯了,而乐观的人在庆幸还有半杯可以喝。显然,面对同样的生活,他们会有不同的感受。毫无疑问,乐观者拥有更高的幸福指数,而悲观者永远也体会不到。因此我们必须以 积极的态度面对生活。而且乐观的情绪能强烈地感染他人,这就意味着如果我们以乐观的 视角面对周围的朋友们,他们也会同样地乐观。于是,乐观和幸福的气氛自然而然地就建 立起来了。因此,让我们把著名诗人雪莱的名句铭记在心吧:冬天来了,春天还会远么? 名师点评 ① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 这句话读起来是不是很熟悉? 没错,它正是仿写了我们非常熟悉的谚语“Where there is a will, there is a way”: 有志者,事竟成。作者将这句话仿写得惟妙惟肖,可见作者对语言驾驭是何等的娴熟。② while: 表示两种现象的对比、反差,常翻译成“而”。③ perceptions and feelings:近义词叠加。近义词叠加也是一种向阅卷老师展示自己语言能力和词汇量的一种极为有效的手段。
翻译:只翻译出一种意思即可。即,这两个词合译为:感受。④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?” 全文的点睛之笔,堪称经典。首先:keep sth.in mind 这个词组用得很地道。其次:引用了雪莱的诗歌,表现出了深厚的文化底蕴。第三:the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者 为前者的同位语。同位语的介入,使句子结构错落有致,层次分明,朗朗上口。第四:著名诗句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓尽致地诠释 了乐观的生活态度。实际上,历年真题的阅读中又何曾没有出现过这种模仿呢?广大考生可以去查阅 2007 年 text 3 中的最后一句:The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。⑤ 非常重要: 本题题目要求最后一段也可能会变成: support your view with an example/examples。这时候,我们可以把文章的结尾改写为: Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world.How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them.She has set an excellent example for us。
七、商业行贿
构思点拨 上图表现的是在“尚方宝剑”严惩的威严下,一位从事商业贿赂的人落荒而逃。不言 而喻,这幅图反映的是当今一种比较猖獗的社会现象:商业贿赂。深层次来讲,就是道德 问题、责任问题。本文的内容和结构安排如下: 第一段:描述图画;第二段:从两个角度分析影响+分析动机;第三段:建议措施。思维拓展 此类文章可以展开的角度有:金钱观,商业道德建设、职业道德建设,公平竞争。相 似的图片比比皆是。高分范文 There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”,showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。佳作妙译 毫无疑问这幅漫画生动地描述了现代社会一种负面的但是却十分猖獗的现象:商业贿 赂。由于惧怕严厉的惩罚,这个人背着一大堆贿赂用的钱落荒而逃。漫画的寓意是十分现 实并发人深思的。上图的寓意可以理解为详细阐述了在金钱冲击下职业道德的沦陷。一方面,商业贿赂 对全社会造成恶劣的、毁灭性的影响。首先在贿赂行为中表现出的道德缺陷和人性弱点会 破坏和污染职业道德的氛围,不良分子也会效仿。其次,行贿者将破坏公平竞争,诚信经 营的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面,商业贿赂行为大多是被利益驱动的,这说明这些人 对金钱没有正确的态度。没有金钱的确是万万不能的,但对待金钱,无疑需要取之有道,用之有度。为了彻底根除贿赂这种道德败坏的行为,应该采取严厉的惩罚措施。另外,应该在公 众中逐渐普及正确的金钱观。只有这样,我们才能拥有公平、健全的社会环境。名师点评 ① money used as bribery: 过去分词作定语=定语从句。写过去分词做定语的步骤: 第一步:写成定语从句:money which is used as bribery; 第二步:省略引导词“which”和 be 动词“is”变成 money used as bribery。这样,一个定语从句就变成了过去分词做定语。② damaging and destructive:近义词叠用,押韵:头韵 ③ revealed in the action of bribery: 过去分词作定语,修饰前面的 moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness,写法参考本文点评第① 条。④ It is true that money is indispensable: It 作形式主语,真正的主语是 that 从句。⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of„: 为了„„。作目的状语。
八、城市交通
思路点拨 此图片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的场景。图片中,车一辆接着一辆地堵在街上,各种抱 怨声不断。毫无疑问,这幅图反映的是城市交通的压力问题。同时,汽车过多就意味着尾 气排放过多,所以这幅图同时又反映了环保和低碳问题。第一段:描述图画;第二段:分析交通堵塞给人和环境带来的影响;第三段:建议措 施。思维拓展 建议措施部分,还可以从如下角度提出: 呼吁政府:投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。倡导低碳出行:步行、骑自行车。倡导理智选择城市:人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面影响。高分范文 How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。佳作妙译 交通状况真是一团糟!这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。实际上,交通堵 塞严重到了一定程度,与其说这是一条拥挤的街道,还不如说这是一个停车场。焦急的乘 客等不到数量稀少的公交车,而私家车却到处都是。虽然这幅图有点夸张,但是当今这种现象并不罕见。私家车的增多必然产生大城市交 通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便,也会对环境造成负面影响。一方 面,一旦发生堵车,原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长,除了等没有别的办法,大量的宝 贵时间被浪费在路上。另一方面,汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放,这和低碳生活的理念相违背。因此,应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一,通过提高税费限制私家车 拥有率(保有量)。第二,应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具,以便我们 拥有更顺畅的交通。名师点评 ① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B 的结 构,通过字面可以理解成:更多的是 A 而不是 B。翻译的时候,往往翻译成:与其说是 B,不如说是 A。反过来,当我们想用英语表达“与其„„不如„„”的时候,我们可以采用这个结构。实际上,这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。2000 年 Text 3 中的选项: 如 Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随,翻译成“随 着”。③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中 emitted by cars 是过去分词短语作后置 定语。相当于定语从句:gas which is emitted by cars(被汽车排放的尾气)。写法:请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中 levied on the sales of private cars(针对私家车被征的税),为过去分词做定语。写法:请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。
九、科技与生活
思路点拨 图中描述的是武广高铁的开通,给城际交通带来了极大便利。表面上看,它反映的是 城市与城市之间距离被“缩短”的问题,但是更深层次来讲,是科技带来了这一切,所以 这幅图可以有两个切入点:城际交通、科技改变生活。本文作者选取了第二个角度为主要 论述视角。第一段:图画描述;第二段:两个角度论述科学技术是第一生产力;第三段:提出建 议、展望未来。思维拓展 科技的话题,实际上是映射热点问题:上海世博。世博的主题“城市让生活更美好”,其中一个侧面就是城市与科技。可以反映“科技”主题的图片有很多,如现代通讯、网络等。高分范文 As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。佳作妙译 如上图所示,一位旅客从广州踏上了去往武汉的高速铁路。2009 年,武广高铁正式建 成通车,将两地之间的行程从 12 小时缩短到 3 小时,极大地方便了两地的交通。难怪这幅 漫画上写道“有了武广高铁,每个城市都在家门口”。科技是第一生产力,在国民经济发展中扮演着重要角色。一方面,科技的进步促进了 经济社会的快速进步。高速铁路就是鲜活的例子。首先这条铁路成为地区经济发展新的引 擎。其次铁路吸引了大量游客,这些城市的旅游业随之繁荣起来。再次这条铁路很大程度 上缓解了现有线路的运输压力。另一方面,随着科技的发展,高速铁路,视频电话,视频 会议等应用会越来越多,世界将变得越来越小。中国政府一直很重视科技的发展,通过 2008 北京奥运会和 2010 上海世博两件盛事,科技成功地重塑了中国在世界舞台上的国际形象。因此青少年要怀着“城市,让生活更美 好”的信念,积极投身到对科技文化知识的学习上。名师点评 ① reducing„, bringing„: 并列的两个现在分词短语作状语。② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科学技术是第一 生产力。这是任何一篇与科技相关的文章都可以用的万能句型。③ a new engine: 一个新的引擎,这是一个形象的比喻,把科技对经济发展的动力表 达得非常具体、形象。涉及到科技、发展、环境等题目时,不可避免的就需要用到发展这个词,本文中 “发 展”,多次出现,作者采用了多样化的词汇: “development(n。)”,“progress(n。)”,“flourish(v。)”,“boom(v./n.)”,“advance”。这类词汇还有: “prosperous(adj。)”,“improve(v。)”等。
近义词的多种替换方式,使得文章在统一中富于变化。广大考生可以把这些词汇积累 下来,应用到自己的写作中去,也能起到妙笔生花的效果。④ 如果题目要求最后一段举例,则我们可以把文章的结尾改成例子:如手机、因特网 等是如何提高了生活效率的。
十、弘扬民族文化
思路点拨 图片中共有三个内容:陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊猫、麻将牌。这三种形象都是典型的中国元 素。正如图片的名称“欧洲的‘中国热’”所说,一种学习中国传统文化和汉语语言的热 潮正在欧洲悄然兴起。毫无疑问,本图的主题是:弘扬中国文化,以及中国国际形象、国 际地位的上升。全文行思路可如下: 第一段:分别描述图画中体现出的中国元素;第二段:分析外国人对中华文化的兴趣 提升的原因+举例;第三段:对待民族文化的正确态度。思维拓展 保护文物、文明遗产、名胜古迹的图片也可以从捍卫和弘扬民族文化的角度入手加以 分析论证。高分范文 In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”,referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。Toward this kind of “China craze”,we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。佳作妙译 这幅图中我们可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶,这是中国自古以来的典型产品。瓶身上画着 一只正在练习中国功夫的熊猫,熊猫和功夫同样是中国文化的代表。此外,花瓶中长出的 “麻将”也是典型的中国元素。这幅漫画的主要目的是反映“中国热”的现象,即国外对中国元素尤其是中华文化的 一种追捧和热情。国外对中国元素兴趣上升的这种现象是有原因的。首先,过去的几十年 中,中国在经济、科技等各个领域都取得了显著的进步,中国的综合国力已经大幅提升。另一方面,由于这些进步,中国以崭新的形象出现在世人面前,在全世界越来越有吸引力。几乎每天都有很多关于中国及其周边正在发生的新闻报道。截止到 2010 年,已经有 26 个 欧洲国家建立了 72 所孔子学院来传播中国语言和文化。对于这种“中国热”的现象我们应该持有正确的态度。一方面我们应该为外国人的 “中国热”感到自豪,这源于中国声望的提高。另一方面,弘扬优秀的中国传统文化和捍 卫祖国的形象,是每一位中国公民的责任。名师点评 ① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在练中国功夫的熊猫。其中 playing Kung Fu 是后 置定语修饰 panda。现在分词作后置定语的写法: 第一步:写出定语从句:a panda that is playing Kung Fu; 第二步:把引导词“that”和 be 动词“is”一起省略; ② passion and enthusiasm:近义词叠加,加强语气和气势。③ attractive and appealing:近义词叠加,加强语气和气势。④ reported and broadcasted:近义词叠加,加强语气和气势。
⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established„ culture”是 Confucius Institutes(孔子 学院)的后置定语。写法:请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。U4998P352DT20101228121801.jpg(29.81 KB)1
第二篇:2012年专业英语四级作文十大热点话题预测
一、低碳与环保
构思点拨:低碳生活,本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文内容和结构可如下:第一段:描述图画;第二段:列举现象,分析影响;第三段:建议措施,展望未来。思维拓展:环保话题,例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系,从低碳的角度入手展开写作。
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
名师点评;① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡,也可以表达为 A boy is fast asleep。“② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。“with the television on”,with 引导的伴随结构,即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。③ are used to doing:习惯于做
某事,使用短语表达,地道准确。
二、网络的利与弊 思路点拨:一个现实:网络文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以这样设计:第一段:描述图画;第二段:网络的利+举例,网络的弊+举例;第三段:提出建议措施——取其精华,去其糟粕。思路拓展:所有利弊型的文章,均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如,城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。
高分范文
Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。
In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
三、醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任
思路点拨:
图画有点夸张,但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题:醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述:第一段:描述图画;第二段:分两个分论点进行论述:提高安全意识、提高社会责任感;第三段:建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展:实际上,本文的内容和行文思路,不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车,还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。例如,火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题,都可以参考此文。
高分范文
What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。
The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。
In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。
名师点评:① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻,相当于汉语中的烂醉如泥。② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice:非常富有哲理性,语言优美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏,语言简洁、有力、到位。③ DUI: 醉酒驾车,也可以写成:drunk driving。④ leaving„:动词的ing形式作伴随状语。句型经典。
四、大学生就业:放低姿态、平常心做人
思路点拨: 一位正在找工作的年轻女孩,毫不犹豫地拒绝了一份服务岗位的工作,不屑一顾地说:“伺候人的工作我不干”。很多年轻人找工作时,眼光过高,不切实际,没有用平常心对待就业问题。实际上,可以先就业后择业。所以这篇图画作文可以这样创作:第一段:描述图画;第二段:两个角度分析这种现象的原因:志存高远,不愿意从底层做起;好逸恶劳;第三段:建议措施:教育年轻人要脚踏实地;根除好逸恶劳的思想。思维拓展:关于平常心态做人、脚踏实地的话题还可以有很多,例如城市选择问题、院校报考问题、专业选择问题、股市问题,均可以从这个角度出发,进行展开论述。
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。
Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。
④ be conscious that: 意识到,that后边必须接完整的主谓宾结构。这个表达等同于be aware that,可以进行同意替换。此外:be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于这两者,表示意识到。但是:be conscious of 和be aware of后边要接单词或者短语,一般不能加句子。⑤ the third industry: 第三产业,是service industry(服务业)的同位语。巧妙地使用同位语,可以把单调的句子变得错落有致、抑扬顿挫。it does provide us with: does在句中表强调,翻译成“确实”。⑥ Only in this way can„ realize„ and can„ be„ and thus can„ be„:排比句,短促有力,气势强大,使得对未来的展望显得信心十足!这个句型:Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society,五、节约资源 思路点拨:本图描述的场景是一副令人喜闻乐见的图画,图画中,一只可爱的小猪造型的储蓄罐,正在接住自来水里滴下来的水滴,像存钱一样,存储水滴。实际上,它储存的不是水,它储存的是幸福。我们可以看出,人们有了节水意识。但是,从正在滴水的水龙头看,还是有人忽略了节约用水这一问题。因此,本文可以这样写作:第一段:描述图画;第二段分析有些人浪费水的心理,并阐述水资源的宝贵;第三段:建议措施。思维拓展:实际上,积极正面的图片写作,和揭示负面现象的文章没有什么本质上的区别,只要我们笔锋一转,就能把它继续按照原来的套路写。本文也可以从低碳、环保的角度出发进行写作。高分范文
Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。
However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。
Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
六、面对人生与社会:乐观与豁达
思路点拨:它乐观、豁达地认为,有阴影,那么就说明有阳光。向我们传达了一种健康的人生哲学:乐观生活、达观处世。这是一篇人生哲理类文章,所以文章安排可以相对自由一些:第一段:描述图画;第二段:利用正反举例论证悲观与乐观的差距+总结句;第三段:倡导一种乐观生活、达观处世的人生态度和人生哲学。本文也可以从世界观、人生观的角度入手。相反,如果是一幅表明悲观厌世的图片,我们也可以采取同样的手法进行处理。
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As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings
③ toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”
④
名师点评:① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 这句话正是仿写了我们非常熟悉的谚语“Where there is a will, there is a way”:有
志者,事竟成。
③ perceptions and feelings:近义词叠加。这两个词合译为:感受。
④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far
behind?”
全文的点睛之笔,堪称经典。首先:keep sth.in mind 这个词组用得很地
道。
其次:引用了雪莱的诗歌,表现出了深厚的文化底蕴。第三:the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者为前者的同位语。
同位语的介入,使句子结构错落有致,层次分明,朗朗上口。第四:著名诗句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓尽致地诠释了乐观的生活态度。
七、商业行贿
构思点拨:商业贿赂。深层次来讲,就是道德问题、责任问题。本文的内容和结构安排如下:第一段:描述图画;第二段:从两个角度分析影响+分析动机;第三段:建议措施。思维拓展此类文章可以展开的角度有:金钱观,商业道德建设、职业道德建设,公平竞争。相似的图片比比皆是。
高分范文
There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。
The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”,showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。
To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and
sound social environment。
八、城市交通
思路点拨:城市交通的压力问题。同时,汽车过多就意味着尾气排放过多,所以这幅图同时又反映了环保和低碳问题。第一段:描述图画;第二段:分析交通堵塞给人和环境带来的影响;第三段:建议措施。思维拓展建议措施部分,还可以从如下角度提出:呼吁政府:投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。倡导低碳出行:步行、骑自行车。倡导理智选择城市:人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面
影响。
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How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。
Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。
Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can
have a smooth transportation。
名师点评: it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构,通过字面可以理解成:更多的是A而不是B。翻译的时候,往往翻译成:与其说是B,不如说是A。反过来,表达“与其„„不如„„”
九、科技与生活
思路点拨:表面上看,它反映的是城市与城市之间距离被“缩短”的问题,但是更深层次来讲,是科技带来了这一切,所以这幅图可以有两个切入点:城际交通、科技改变生活。本文作者选取了第二个角度为主要论述视角。第一段:图画描述;第二段:两个角度论述科学技术是第一生产力;第三段:提出建议、展望未来。思维拓展 科技的话题,实际上是映射热点问题:上海世博。世博的主题“城市让生活更美好”,其中一个侧面就是城市与科技。可以反映“科技”主题的图片有很多,如现代通讯、网络等。
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。
Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。
It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。
名师点评:② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科学技术是第一生产力。③ a new engine: 一个新的引擎,这是一个形象的比喻,把科技对经济发展的动力表达得非常具体、形象。本文中 “发展”,多次出现,作者采用了多样化的词汇: “development(n。)”,“progress(n。)”,“flourish(v。)”,“boom(v./n.)”,“advance”。这类词汇还有:
“prosperous(adj。)”,“improve(v。)”等。
十、弘扬民族文化 思路点拨: 图片中共有三个内容:陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊猫、麻将牌。这三种形象都是典型的中国元素。正如图片的名称“欧洲的‘中国热’”所说,一种学习中国传统文化和汉语语言的热潮正在欧洲悄然兴起。毫无疑问,本图的主题是:弘扬中国文化,以及中国国际形象、国际地位的上升。全文行思路可如下:第一段:分别描述图画中体现出的中国元素;第二段:分析外国人对中华文化的兴趣提升的原因+举例;第三段:对待民族文化的正确态度。思维拓展:保护文物、文明遗产、名胜古迹的图片也可以从捍卫和弘扬民族文化的角度入手加以分析论证。
高分范文
In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。
It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”,referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。
Toward this kind of “China craze”,we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our
motherland。
第三篇:四级预测作文最新(推荐)
预测作文1 You should start your essay with a briefdescription ofthe phenomenon ofstudying abroad,and then explain the reasonsfor choosing to shdy overseas.
写作导航
1.根据图表描述近几年出国留学的总体趋势,指出发展过程中的主要信息,2.阐述人们选择出国留学的主要原因,3.得出结论:出国留学是有益的,但提醒大家,出国留学未必适合所有人,人们应该根据自身的能力和条件做出选择。
范文与译文
Studying Abroad
The past several years have witnessed a drastic increase in the number of Chinese students who choose to study abroad.As is illustrated by the column chart,the number ofstudents studying overseas has more than doubled from 2008 to 2013,climbing from 180,000 to around 410,000.
There are a variety of reasons for studying overseas.First,students can enrich their knowledge and enlarge their horizons by being exposed to entirely new ideas and cultures.Second,an overseas living experience allows a real-life use of a foreign language,so it can improve the efficiency in acquiring second-language skills.Last but not least,many people hold the idea that all overseas diploma from top universities in the world Can provide more competitive advantages for their future careers than a diploma obtained at home.
Generally speaking,studying abroad is valuable in one’s personal development. However,people should also be aware that it may not necessarily pay off due to the high financial COSffi and the potential challenges of adapting to a new culture.
出国留学
过去几年见证了中国学生选择出国留学在人数上的急剧增长。如柱状图所示,出国留学人数从2008年的18万增加到2013年的41万,增长了一倍多。
选择出国留学的原因有很多。首先,通过接触新的思想和文化,学生可以增长知识,拓宽视野。其次,国外生活经历可以使外语在实际生活得以使用,从而提高掌握外语技能的效率。最后但并非最不重要的是,很多人认为,同在国内院校获得的文凭相比,从国外顶尖院校获得的文凭能给自己未来的职业发展带来更多竞争优势。
总的来说,出国留学对于个人发展是很重要的。但是,人们也应该意识到,由于较高的经济开支和适应新的文化带来的潜在的挑战,出国留学未必一定带来好的结果。
预测作文2 You should start with a briefdescription ofthe picture,and then express your views on whether we should help those in need.
写作导航
1.简要描述图片:人们对跌倒的老人袖手旁观,并指出这是一种不良的社会现象;
2.从原因出发阐述了自己的观点;
3.提出建议和号召:我们在提高自身安全意识的同时,还是要坚持和发扬乐于助人这一传统美德。
范文与译文
Should We Help Others in Need?
The picture illustrates what we are often sorry to see in modem society:an old man is lying on the ground,while the passers-by are all hesitating over whether to offer help or not,fearing that it may incur unwanted trouble.
From my perspective,there are two reasons that may account for this phenomenon:on one hand,it is reported that some people wim evil intentions adopt this method to blackmail those friendly and helpful people.So people now are more risk-conscious and wary of such deceits.On the other hand,due to the increasing pressures from modern life and the well.accepted concept that time is money,people tend to care more about themselves than others,not to mention helping a stranger.
However,as we all know,being accommodating has always been seen as a virtue in Chinese culture.We should stick to and carry on this fine tradition.Of coursc,we should also look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.
我们应该帮助有困难的人吗?
这张图片描述了在现代社会我们很遗憾地经常看到的一种现象:一名老人躺在地上,而路人都在犹豫是否提供帮助,因为他们担心这会带来不必要的麻烦。
在我看来,有两个原因能解释这种现象:在一方面,有报道说具有不良意图的一些人用这种办法来敲诈那些友善的、乐于助人的人。所以人们现在更具有风险意识,对这种骗局更加警觉。在另一方面,由于日益增长的现代生活压力和被普遍接受的“时间就是金钱”的观念,人们更关心自己,不太关心别人,更不要提帮助陌生人了。
但是,总所周知,在中国文化中,乐于助人一直被看作是一种美德。我们应该坚持并发扬这一优良传统。当然,我们也应该小心提防潜在的危险,以防被骗。
预测作文3 You should start with a briefdescription ofthe picture,and then express your views on whether we should help those in need.
写作导航
1.简要描述图片:人们对跌倒的老人袖手旁观,并指出这是一种不良的社会现象;
2.从原因出发阐述了自己的观点;
3.提出建议和号召:我们在提高自身安全意识的同时,还是要坚持和发扬乐于助人这一传统美德。
范文与译文
Should We Help Others in Need?
The picture illustrates what we are often sorry to see in modem society:an old man is lying on the ground,while the passers-by are all hesitating over whether to offer help or not,fearing that it may incur unwanted trouble.
From my perspective,there are two reasons that may account for this phenomenon:on one hand,it is reported that some people wim evil intentions adopt this method to blackmail those friendly and helpful people.So people now are more risk-conscious and wary of such deceits.On the other hand,due to the increasing pressures from modern life and the well.accepted concept that time is money,people tend to care more about themselves than others,not to mention helping a stranger.
However,as we all know,being accommodating has always been seen as a virtue in Chinese culture.We should stick to and carry on this fine tradition.Of coursc,we should also look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.
我们应该帮助有困难的人吗?
这张图片描述了在现代社会我们很遗憾地经常看到的一种现象:一名老人躺在地上,而路人都在犹豫是否提供帮助,因为他们担心这会带来不必要的麻烦。
在我看来,有两个原因能解释这种现象:在一方面,有报道说具有不良意图的一些人用这种办法来敲诈那些友善的、乐于助人的人。所以人们现在更具有风险意识,对这种骗局更加警觉。在另一方面,由于日益增长的现代生活压力和被普遍接受的“时间就是金钱”的观念,人们更关心自己,不太关心别人,更不要提帮助陌生人了。
但是,总所周知,在中国文化中,乐于助人一直被看作是一种美德。我们应该坚持并发扬这一优良传统。当然,我们也应该小心提防潜在的危险,以防被骗。
预测作文4 You should write an email inreply to a friend"s inquiry about whether you are going to work or continue your study after graduation.You shouM also explain the reasons behind your choice.
写作导航
1.回应对方来信,提出自己的观点,即会选择继续深造;
2.从就业形势和知识的重要性两方面阐述了做出该选择的原因,并指出会通过参加实践活动来保持与时俱进;
3.进行总结;
4.按照书信格式表达感谢和祝愿。
A Letter of Reply
Dear Li Ming,I’m very glad to hear from you.Concerning my plan after graduation,I will probably continue my study as a postgraduate.
I have the following reasons.First of all,a higher degree and beaer educational background will give me an edge on the fierce competition of job-hunting because the fact that millions of college students enter the job market annually makes it difficult for US to find the job we want.Besides,as far as I am concemed,knowledge is,undoubtedly,an invaluable treasure of human being,and we should make full use of our youth to learn as much knowledge as possible.of course.staying in the Ivory Tower doesn’t suggest that l will be cut off from society;instead.I will get involved in social and practical activities in my spare time.
Taking all aspects into account.I choose to further my study and get a master’s degree.
Many thanks for your concern.Best wishes!
Your sincerely,Wang Lang 预测作文5 You should start your essay with a briefdescription of the picture and then express your views on the problem oftrust crisis.
写作导航
1.简要描述图片,指出人们之问缺少信任是一种不良社会现象,会产生严重后果;
2.从政府、社会机构(媒体和学校)和个人三个层面出发阐述了解决办法;
3.进行总结,建议人们从个人做起,谨小慎微,提高诚信意识。
范文与译文
Trust Crisis
The picture vividly depicts the trust crisis in modern society:the customer doubts about the quality of a bargain,while the seller worries that the bill is counterfeit.This is a worrying social problem,which makes people always suspicious about others,and then affects social harmony.
To get to the root of this problem,we should call on the efforts from all sides to recognize the value of honesty and credibility in the tide of commodity economy.For one thing,the government should enact strict laws and regulations to punish frauds.For another,the mass media and education institutes should play a positive role in restoring mutual trust.
Finally,individuals should improve their own moral standards,and develop a sense ofresponsibility for others.
In short,being honest and credible is SO valuable a virtue that it should be the last thing that can be cast away.Everyone should watch out his behaviors and eradicate immediately the seed ofdishonesty once it is sowed in the mind.
预测作文6 信任危机
这张图片生动地描述了现代社会的信任危机:顾客怀疑特价商品的质量,而卖家担心收到的是伪钞。这是一个令人堪忧的社会问题,它让人们总是怀疑别人,并进而影响社会和谐。
要从根本上解决这个问题,我们应该号召各方共同努力来认识到诚信在商品经济浪潮中的价值。首先,政府应该制定严格的法律规定来惩治欺诈行为。其次,媒体和教育机构应该在重建相互信任上发挥积极作用。最后,个人应该提高他们的道德标准,培养对他人的责任感。
简言之,诚信是一项重要美德,不应该被丢弃。每个人应该注意自己的行为,一旦脑子里有了欺骗的想法,就应该马上根除。
预测作文7 Youngsters’ Worship
1.大学生现在过分崇拜大明星
2.分析产生这一现象的原因
3.我的看法
【范文】Youngsters’ Worship
Nowadays, star-worshiping is popular among teenagers, especially many university students.Why? When it comes to the symptoms of worshiping a star, the main factor I’d like to mention is imitation.With a blind love for their idols, teenagers firmly believe that their choices are the best.As a result, the stars’ clothes, hairstyles and hobbies, as well as their behaviors in public, are closely observed or followed, though, to some extent, they may be considered improper or even ridiculous.In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing.However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”.As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists.As students, we should learn from them.Only in this way can we become useful persons in the future.On Pursuing Fashion
1.现今,越来越多的大学生追求时尚
2.这种现象产生的不良影响
3.我的看法 【范文】
On Pursuing Fashion
Nowadays, more and more undergraduates are pursuing fashion.Some of them even cut down the expenditure on books and meals to satisfy their desire for fashionable items.The blind following of fashion has had a great influence on college students.First of all, the pursuit of fashion has made many college students get lost.Some of them even fail to focus on their study.Secondly, it is a costly hobby to follow the tide, which will impose great financial burden on their parents.As far as I am concerned, college students should cherish ambitions rather than become slaves of fashion.As for them, the main task on campus is not to pursue fashion but to study.All in all, undergraduates should adopt a more reasonable attitude towards the pursuit of fashion.预测作文8 Green Consumption
1.绿色消费的概念在中国日渐流行
2.中国推行绿色消费还存在许多困难
3.如何解决这个问题
【范文】Green Consumption
The conception of green consumption has gradually become popular in China.More and more green foods are making their appearance on the market and more and more people are becoming conscious of environmental protection.However, there still exist quite a few difficulties in the further promotion of green consumption.On the one hand, many people are still not quite clear of the advantages of green foods.On the other hand, due to high profits, many fake green foods are found in the market.Moreover, many consumers don’t want to pay extra money for green foods.There may be several ways to solve these problems.Firstly, the government should supervise the good quality strictly to protect consumers’ interests.Secondly, the conception of green consumption should be further promoted and emphasized.Thirdly, the government should work together with manufacturers to make the price more reasonable.
第四篇:四级作文预测
占位
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)很多大学里“占座”现象十分普遍
2)这种现象会带来哪些影响
3)你 对此的看法
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的影响,提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生在教室和图书馆“占座”的现象;说明这种现象带来的 不良影响;阐述“我”对“占座”现象的看法。
Reserving a Seat
We often see there is a table cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating the seat is taken.This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities.Strangely enough, most of students seem to take this for granted, and few will protest it.Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects.On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests.Sometimes even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.On the other hand, reserving a seat violates the rule of fairness.No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you even though many others are eager for that seat.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.流行病
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Epidemics.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)流行病在我们的生活中随处可见
2)流行病会带来哪些危害
3)对此我们应采取哪些措施
Epidemics
Epidemics are rampant throughout the whole human history, and they have caused the most devastating impacts on us.Each year, numerous epidemics break out on earth and they have such characteristics as fast spreading and infectious.Epidemics are harmful in many ways.For one thing, it will make people and animals seriously ill or dead, which is a great loss to the country.For example, the outbreak of SARS once killed lots of people and brought great economic loss to the whole country.For another, there is no cure for many kinds of epidemic diseases.Once we are infected by one of them, it is difficult to be cured.To avoid the outbreak of some kind of epidemics as possible as we can, we should first change some unhealthy habits or customs.For example, meals served individually should be encouraged, which would reduce the possibility of the spread of germs.On the other hand, the government should learn how to deal with emergencies when an epidemic broke out.I believe as long as we treat and prevent epidemics in the right way, we will finally conquer them.新东方:2011年12月英语四级作文预测4篇(1)
一、Computers in Students’ Dorms
1).现在大学生宿舍几乎人手一台电脑
2).有些人认为会促进学生的学习,有些人认为会影响学生的学习
3).你的看法
首段现象描述:
On many dorms, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for one college student to possess a PC or a notebook.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate college students to use computers in their life and study.Taking a look around, we can find a great many students and dorms like this.利弊分析(支持方观点+反方观点)
A number of individuals prefer or favor the phenomenon “One student, One PC”.In their eyes, studying with the help of computers will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because rich information on the Internet will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Even so, others hold a different view that using computers may carry some risks.First, buying PC calls for plenty of money;however, the quality of learning is not always as satisfactory as expected.Then, what worries many teachers is that students’ academic learning may be affected negatively by a variety of computer games.我的看法(或建议)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from the popularity of computers far outweigh the disadvantages.Without this machine, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to acquire the knowledge beyond their campuses.Therefore, students are advisable to use the PC in a sensible way.新东方:2011年12月英语四级作文预测4篇(2)
二、Oversea Study at an Early Age
1.很多低龄学生出国留学
2.低龄学生出国留学的利弊
3.我的看法
首段现象描述:
In contemporary society, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for young students to pursue their oversea study at an early age.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate their kids to prepare from primary school.Taking a look around, we can find a great many parents and children like this.利弊分析(支持方观点+方法观点)
A number of individuals prefer or favor studying abroad at an early age.In their eyes, this new experience will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because advanced education in developed nations will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Even so, others hold a different view that this practice may carry some risks.First, studying abroad as children calls for plenty of money;however, the quality of learning is not always as satisfactory as expected.Then, what worries many teachers is that students’ Chinese culture learning may be affected negatively by their living environment in foreign nations.我的看法(或建议)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from this phenomenon far outweigh the disadvantages.Without this experience, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to acquire the knowledge beyond their nations.However, students are advisable to put the same emphasis on Chinese learning and oversea studying.新东方:2011年12月英语四级作文预测4篇(3)
三、Campaign for Student Leaders
1.很多大学生参加竞选学生干部
2.对此,人们看法不一
3.我的看法
首段现象描述:
On many campuses, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for college students to participate in the campaigns for student-leaders.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate college students to take these chances to gain a favorable position in job-hunting.Taking a look around, we can find a great many students like this.利弊分析(支持方观点+方法观点)
A number of individuals prefer or favor students’ participation in associations as leaders.In their eyes, these wide opportunities will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because various activities will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Even so, others hold a different view that this campaign may carry some risks.First, preparing and participation calls for plenty of time, energy, even money;however, the result of campaign is not always as satisfactory as expected.Then, what worries many teachers is that students’ academic learning may be affected negatively by too many extra-curriculum activities in associations.我的看法(或建议)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from this activity far outweigh the disadvantages.Without it, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to cultivate their ability, especially leadership.Therefore, after mastering their professional knowledge, students are advisable to take part in a sensible way.新东方:2011年12月英语四级作文预测4篇(4)
四、My Opinion on Campus Lectures
1.大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩
2.听讲座的益处
3.你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论
首段现象描述:
On many campuses, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for college to hold various lectures.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate college students to attend these lectures to gain a favorable position in academic learning.Taking a look around, we can find a great many lectures like this: lectures about job-hunting, cet-46 and so on.利分析(支持方观点)
A number of individuals prefer or favor these lectures.In their eyes, these wide opportunities will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because lectures by famous professors will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Then, holding lectures calls for less time, energy, and money;however, the result of learning is always as satisfactory.Then, what excites many teachers is that students’ academic learning may be affected positively by much extra-curriculum information.我的看法(或建议)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from this activity far outweigh our expectation.Without them, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to cultivate their ability and acquire knowledge.Therefore, , students are advisable to attend these lectures.
第五篇:四级作文预测
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)现 在有一些大学生沉迷于网络游戏,家长和学校对此忧心忡忡 2)但 有人认为网络游戏并不是一无是处 3)你 对此的看法是…… 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出对于某问题的一种反面看法,提纲第2点指出对于该问题的正面看法,提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”对该问题的看法,由此可判断本文 应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出大学生沉迷于网络游戏的问题,阐述家长和老师对该问题的否 定态度和他们的担忧;指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度,并阐述网络游戏的好处;表明“我”对网络游戏的看法。
Online Games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students.Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games.But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected.This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful.They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly.Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science.More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way.When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once.But if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.预测作文2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Machine Translation and Human Translation.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)现 在诸多的电子辞典及相关翻译软件被开发出来,人们不再需要翻阅厚重的字典 2)有 人认为以后机器翻译会完全取代人工翻译 3)你 是否同意这种观点,为什么? 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种新兴事物,提纲第2点针对该事物提出一种有争议的观点,提纲第3点要 求表明“我”是否同意这种观点,由此可判断本 文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述电子辞典和翻译软件的使用现状,引出机器翻译会代替人工翻 译的观点;表明“我”对这一观点的态度并说明理由;总 结“我”的观点,提出建议。Machine Translation and Human Translation In recent years, all kinds of electronic dictionaries and translation software have been developed.With the development of technology, these electronic dictionaries and software can help us translate not only words and phrases but even sentences and paragraphs.So some people come to the conclusion that machine translation will replace traditional human translation.However, I couldn’t agree with this argument.Admittedly, translation machines and software bring much convenience for our study and our work.With them, we needn’t bother to leaf through the heavy dictionaries.However, machine translation has its disadvantages.First, generally speaking, translation software only can give direct translation, which is sometimes not in accordance with the original articles in logic and meaning.Second, some people depend on electronic dictionaries and software too much, which is unfavorable to their improvement in language ability.Considering the above-mentioned, I think that machine translation cannot replace human translation, but it is a good complementary to human translation.Therefore, we should combine machine translation with human translation efficiently.预测作文4 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)据调查显示,现在大学生每月的花销越来越高,很多大学生花钱如流水,根本没有节俭的概念
2)分 析产生这一现象的原因 3)我 的看法 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出校园内的一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象 解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生花钱没有节制的现象;分析导致大学生这种消费习惯的 原因;阐述“我”对大学生消费观的看法。Extravagant Spending on College Campus According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise.Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their mind.They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society.This extravagant spending is mainly caused by the following factors.First of all, nowadays most of students are the only children of their families.They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money.Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children.Thirdly, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tends to need more money.Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices.The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.预测作文5 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)各 大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动 2)这 些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处 3)参 加社会实践活动应该注意些什么 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处,提纲第3点要 求指出注意事项,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践活动给大学 生带来的好处;指出大学生参加社会实践时应该注意些什么。Social Practice of College Students Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities.During the holidays, more and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike.It’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s college education.Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus.Moreover, in social practice activities, students can apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems.So their practical skills are improved greatly.Besides, social practice helps strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.However, social practice may bring some problems.For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study.Therefore, we should try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.预测作文6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Skipping Classes on College Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)大 学里逃课现象时有发生 2)分 析学生逃课的原因 3)如 何减少逃课现象
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因,提纲第3点要 求说明如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生的逃课现象;分析大学生逃课的主要原因;说明应该如 何减少逃课现象。Skipping Classes on College Campus In colleges and universities, the phenomenon of students’ skipping classes is not unusual.There are often some students who skip those classes for feeling unwell or other private reasons.Besides, still some students don’t go to class without any reason but for they don’t want to.There are two main reasons for college students’ skipping classes.First, compared with in middle school, students have more freedom in college.It depends more on one student’s consciousness whether he will attend the class.So those students lacking self-discipline begin to skip classes.Second, some teachers’ lectures could not attract students’ interests so that some students would rather skip classes to study what they are interested in.For whatever reasons, skipping classes does bring negative effects on students’ study.Therefore, it is necessary to take some effective measures to reduce this phenomenon.On the one hand, the school and teachers should make students realize the negative effects of skipping classes and enhance their consciousness of attending the class.On the other hand, teachers have to improve their teaching quality to attract students’ interests in the courses.Only in this way can the phenomenon of skipping classes be reduced as soon as possible.预测作文7 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Continuing Education.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)上 图为某城市1992—2007年参加继续教育的人数情况,请描述其中的变化 2)分 析导致该变化的原因 3)谈 谈你对继续教育的看法 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要 求描述图表中反应的变化,提纲第2点要求分析该变化产生的原因,提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象 解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:根据图表中的数据描述1992—2007年继续教育参加人数增加的现象;分析导致参加继续教育的人数增加的原因;阐述“我”对继续教育的看法。
A Boom in Continuing Education From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 1992 to 2007 in X city.In 1992 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing education, but in 1995 the number grew to 60 thousand, and in 2000 140, and by 2007, the number has reached 210 thousand.It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity.The following reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education.Firstly, during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough.So they turn to continuing education to gain more knowledge and skills.Moreover, as the science and technology in China are developing very fast, adults after graduation have to refresh themselves.In addition, in modern society, those without bachelor’s degrees or above are less competitive.As far as I am concerned, the boom in continuing education is a necessity.It provides those on-the-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge.As our society develops, more and more people will receive continuing education in the future.预测作文8 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Make Full Use of Reference Books.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1)参 考书泛滥已成为师生共同关注的问题 2)参 考书泛滥带来了哪些影响
3)作 为大学生,应该如何正确选择和使用参考书 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提 出一个问题,提纲第2点要求分析该问题带来的影响,提纲第3点要 求说明如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述参考书泛滥的现象;分析参考书泛滥带来的不良影响;从大学 生的角度说明应该如何正确选择和使用参考书。How to Make Full Use of Reference Books Nowadays reference books have become a problem of great concern for both teachers and students.There are many kinds of reference books available in the book market.A smarter use of these books is certainly beneficial, but the misuse and overuse of them may cause a lot of problems.First of all, teaching reference books might make the students less attentive in class.Armed with reference books, many students may think that they know what the teacher is going to talk about.So they may not listen to the teacher in class at all.Secondly, some students rely on the reference books too much, which is unfavorable to the improvement of their ability to work out the solutions for themselves.Thirdly, there are some reference books with many mistakes, which might mislead students.Considering the above-mentioned, we should be careful in selecting and using references books.Firstly, we should check the contents of the book carefully but not only pay attention to the brand of publishing house.In addition, we can turn to the recommendation of teachers and students around us.Besides, reference books are just an assistant, so we shouldn’t rely on them too much.Only in this way can we make full use of reference books.预测作文9 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Will Network Classroom Replace Traditional Classroom? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)网 络课堂教学的兴起,使传统的课堂教学受到了前所未有的挑战 2)网 络课堂教学模式会完全取代传统课堂教学模式吗? 3)你 的看法,理由是…… 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种新兴事物,提纲第2点针对该事物提出一个有争议的观点,提纲第3点要 求表明“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比 选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述网络课堂对传统课堂的挑战;提出关于网络课堂是否会取代传 统课堂的两种不同观点并说明理由;表明“我”的态度并说明理由。Will Network Classrooms Replace Traditional Classrooms? With the popularization of the Internet, network classrooms are gaining more and more popularity.As a new teaching pattern, network classrooms have become an effective complement to traditional classrooms.So some people propose one question: will network classrooms replace traditional classrooms? As to this question, the opinions vary from one to another.Some people think it quite possible for network classrooms to take the place of traditional classrooms.First, network classrooms needn’t have face-to-face communication and are not limited by time and place, which facilitate both teachers and students.Secondly, network classrooms release teachers from repeating the same contents since the video or audio material can be played time and again.However, many people have opposite standpoints.They say that with online courses, students lack direct communications with teachers and their confusion cannot be solved instantly.In addition, the computer system cannot be guaranteed to work stably all the time.Personally, both network classrooms and traditional classrooms are necessary for students.If traditional teaching patterns and the modern ones like network classrooms can be combined together, more fruitful education is sure to be realized.预测作文10 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Witness of a Theft Incident.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)描 述你在公共场所目睹的一次扒窃事件 2)谴 责这种不文明的现象 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要 求描述一次事件的经过,提纲第2点要求对事件进行评论,由此可判断本文应为记叙文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:交待事件背景;描述扒窃事件的经过和最后结果;谴责这种不文明 的现象,提出解决建议。A Witness of a Theft Incident
Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home.The thief was so rampant that it left me a very deep impression.It was in the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station.A woman took her purse out and paid for the ticket.Then she put her purse back into her bag and turned to leave, when a mid-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”.She didn’t feel unusual and went into the station.Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man.To our surprise, the thief seems not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down.Maybe he was searching for the next target.At that time some persons, including me, witnessed the process.But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman.This incident makes me ashamed and leaves me a deep thought.The pickpocket has posed a great threat to residents’ and visitors’ property safety.Undoubtedly, it is an urgent thing to take action to prevent pickpocket.However, it cannot depend on the police only.Instead, it needs our common efforts.We can not shut our eyes and mouths to the pickpocket any more.It should be kept in our minds that our forces are far beyond those thieves.预测作文11
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Why People Migrate to Another Country? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese): 1)近年来越来越多的人移居到国外 2)分 析其原因 3)“我”的看法
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要 求描述近年来社会上出现的一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析出现这种现象的原因,提纲第3点则要求阐述“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述近年来越来越多的人移居到国外的现象;分析其产生的原因; 阐述“我”的观点。Why People Migrate to Another Country? Many people choose to live in a foreign country, which has aroused great concern.Nowadays, more and more people, especially plenty of intellectuals, migrate to some developed countries, such as America, England and Canada.In addition, there are still many people studying and working in foreign countries struggling for “green cards”.There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.Among all these factors, pursuing high-quality life plays a critical role.Moreover, most of them migrate to some foreign countries with a view to making their children receive good education there.Besides, some people just want to experience a different culture they like.All these above factors contribute to their choice to migrate to another country.As far as I am concerned, though I enjoy various cultures all over the world, I won’t migrate to another country.For one thing, I don’t like to live far from my friends and relatives.For another, I can’t bear to speak and listen to a foreign language from day to night.In a word, everyone has his right to decide where to live, and everyone’s choice should be respected.预测作文12
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic “Mute English” among Chinese Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese):
1)中 国有很多学生无法用英语进行交流,由此出现“哑巴英语”的现象 2)造 成“哑巴英语”的原因 3)提 供一些可行的解决方法 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要 求阐述目前学生遇到的一个问题,提纲第2点要求说明原因,提纲第3点要求 提供解决方法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:阐述中国大多数学生口语很差的现状;造成“哑巴英语”的原因;提供一些可行的解决办 法。“Mute English” among Chinese Students
Nowadays, oral English is quite a serious problem among Chinese students.Most of the students have studied English for a long time, but they can’t communicate well with other people in English.In addition, there are still many other students who can understand every word of a article, but fail to read them out fluently and correctly.Many reasons contribute to this problem.Among these reasons, examination-oriented education system plays a vital role.What’s more, most of the students are too shy and nervous to speak in public.I think it is high time that we paid more attention to this “Mute English”.Above all, students should read after the tape recorder or MP3 to practise the pronunciation.Moreover, they should talk as much as possible with the foreigners and not be afraid of losing face.In addition, students should enrich vocabulary and pay attention to the differences between spoken language and written language.Only through these ways can Chinese students avoid “Mute English” and speak a fluent English.预测作文13
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese): 1)大 学生应对挫折的能力差,学校应当加强挫折教育 2)开 展挫折教育刻不容缓
Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students
College students should be guided correctly to face frustrations in life, which has been generally accepted.Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities.The truth of it is deep and profound.Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration.This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay.For another example, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations.Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons.Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students.But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education.To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.预测作文14
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加,校园安全问题备受关注 2)对 此我们应该采取哪些措施 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要 求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题,提纲第2点要求提供解决办法,由此可判断本文应为 问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:阐述“目前 校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题,校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。Campus Security
Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously.Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away.A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying.In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?
On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness.Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately.On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible.Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus.In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus.Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.(总结观点段)预测作文15
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Epidemics.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)流 行病在我们的生活中随处可见 2)流 行病会带来哪些危害 3)对 此我们应采取哪些措施 Epidemics
Epidemics are rampant throughout the whole human history, and they have caused the most devastating impacts on us.Each year, numerous epidemics break out on earth and they have such characteristics as fast spreading and infectious.Epidemics are harmful in many ways.For one thing, it will make people and animals seriously ill or dead, which is a great loss to the country.For example, the outbreak of SARS once killed lots of people and brought great economic loss to the whole country.For another, there is no cure for many kinds of epidemic diseases.Once we are infected by one of them, it is difficult to be cured.To avoid the outbreak of some kind of epidemics as possible as we can, we should first change some unhealthy habits or customs.For example, meals served individually should be encouraged, which would reduce the possibility of the spread of germs.On the other hand, the government should learn how to deal with emergencies when an epidemic broke out.I believe as long as we treat and prevent epidemics in the right way, we will finally conquer them.预测作文16
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Face to Face Communication Better than Other Types of Communication? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)如今人们之间的交流方式越来越多(如:写信,MSN,手机等),你个人认为面对面交流是否优于这些交流方式 2)论 证你的观点 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要 求阐述一种观点,提纲第2点要求论证这个观点,由此可判断本文应为观点论证型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:关于面对面交流是否优于如写信和打电话等其他交流方式给出你的 观点;通过举例论证此观点;重申观点,总结全文。Is Face to Face Communication Better than Other Types of Communication?
Nowadays, with the development of technology, many modern forms of communication, such as phone calls and email, have stepped into our life.Facing with these, the traditional way of communication — face-to-face communication, seems to be left behind the times.But in fact, this is not actually true.For me, noting can parallel with face-to-face communication.The following reasons can account for my opinion.For one thing, face-to-face communication allows us to make an interactive conversation.For example, we can clear away the misunderstanding in time.Because a person’s tone of voice or facial expression often reflects his mood, while in other kinds of communication it’s hard for us to perceive the subtle changes of one’s emotion.For another, face-to-face communication can deepen the interpersonal relationship.For instance, trust and respect between businesses partners can be established even with a firm handshake.In a word, face-to-face communication improves the relationship among people and it is the best kind of communication.All the other types are merely the complement of it.预测作文17
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Appeal.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline given below: 在过去几年中,我们已经目睹了人类活动引起的各种灾害。作为一位大学生,请写一封倡议书,呼吁大家 关注这些自然灾害并保护环境,内容应包括:
1)举 出人类活动引发的灾害的实例 2)指 出一些必要的防范措施 3)号 召大家行动起来拯救地球 【思路点拨】
本题要求写一封倡议书。根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:点明写信的目的:呼吁大家关注人类活动对地球造成的危害,陈述灾害的具体表现;为了拯救地球,我们应当采取哪些措施;号召大家行动起来拯救地球。
A Letter of Appeal June 13, 2008 Dear friends,I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay attention to the present disasters caused by human activities.As some of you may know, over the past years, floods, droughts, landslides, and dust storms have frequented our planet.Not long ago, tsunami swept the Southeast Asia, which caused enormous damage.All these have sounded an alarm to human beings.So it is high time that we join efforts to save our planet.Above all, a task of top priority for us is to plant trees as many as possible, especially in the arid areas.At the same time, we should stop deforesting in large amount.And we can save our planet through many other ways, such as saving water and using recycled paper.So don’t hesitate to act out these measures.Even a small action is meaningful to our planet.Please join us in the action of protecting our planet.If you are willing to do something to save our planet, please start from the little thing right around you.Thank you!
Sincerely yours,Li Ming 预测作文18 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Smoking in Public Places be Banned? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1)公 共场合是否应该禁止吸烟,说出你的观点 2)论 证你的观点 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要 求阐述一种观点,提纲第2点要求论证这个观点,由此可判断本文应为观点论证型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:关于公共场合是否应该吸烟给出你的观点;通过举例论证此观点; 重申观点,总结全文。
Should Smoking in Public Places be Banned? Nowadays many countries in the world have passed laws to ban smoking in public places.Some smokers claim that their rights are infringed if smoking is forbidden in public places.However, most non-smokers regard the ban as good news.As far as I’m concerned, smoking should be banned in all the public places such as restaurants, theaters and public squares.On the one hand, smoking is harmful both for smokers themselves and others.It is reported that every year smoking causes millions of death around the world.On the other hand, smoking pollutes the air.Just imagine that you sit in a restaurant full of smoke, how can you enjoy your meal there? Besides, smoking is bad for the elevation of a country’s image in the world.I believe if smoking is banned in all the public places, most of us will breathe in more fresh and clean air.And the health condition of all the people will be greatly improved.预测作文19 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Commercialization of Campus Music.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)近年来校园音乐逐渐走向商业化,由企业发起主办的大学生音乐节、校园歌手大赛层出不穷
2)导致这种现象的原因是什么 3)这 种现象可能带来的影响 【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析导致这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要 求说明该现象可能带来的影响,由此可推知本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述近年来企业热衷于举办大学生音乐节、校园歌手大赛的现象; 分析导致这种现象的原因;说明该现象可能带来的影响。
Commercialization of Campus Music In recent years, campus music has been commercialized gradually.More and more enterprises are interested in being the sponsors of college music festivals or award competitions of campus singers.Campus singers and songs are not confined to college campus any more but being pushed to the market gradually.The following factors can account for this phenomenon.On the one hand, some enterprises’ paying more attention to campus music is out of their sense of commitment to the society.They want to set healthy enterprise images before the public.On the other hand, nowadays entertainment marketing is very popular.Enterprises want to utilize entertainment activities to improve their notability and influence.College students, as the focus of the whole society, are a good choice for these enterprises.Of course, these musical activities have brought more chances for campus singers to show their talents to the public.Besides, campus songs have gotten more wide spreading.However, commercialization of campus music to some extent reduces its uniqueness.Induced by fame and wealth, some campus singers try to cater to the tastes of the public and lost their own styles gradually.Therefore, in order to make campus music develop more healthily, both the sponsors of music activities and our campus singers should pay more attention on music itself but not profits.预测作文20 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)很 多大学里“占座”现象十分普遍 2)这 种现象会带来哪些影响 3)你 对此的看法 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的影响,提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生在教室和图书馆“占座”的现象;说明这种现象带来的 不良影响;阐述“我”对“占座”现象的看法。
Reserving a Seat We often see there is a table cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating the seat is taken.This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities.Strangely enough, most of students seem to take this for granted, and few will protest it.Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects.On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests.Sometimes even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.On the other hand, reserving a seat violates the rule of fairness.No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you even though many others are eager for that seat.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.